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Shmiklak

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Shmiklak 2016-01-07T07:15:52+00:00

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KatouMegumi

923 posts

Joined May 2014

KatouMegumi 2016-01-07T08:10:25+00:00

General

* Добавь тэги: Enjoykin, Enjoyker, Youtube
* Киаи раздели, больно длинные
* Я наверное придираюсь, но комбо цвета слишком яркие, попробуй эти. Вот цвета в HEX: #fefba7, #ffa478, #f75b99, #59d181
* Немнoго бэкграунд не в тему. Попробуй сделать скриншот из видео и его поставить.
* Если меняешь бг, то и комбо цвета новые не забудь

Beginner

00:00:550 (1,2,1,2,1,1,1,2) - Ближе их, изи же. Не издевайся над новичками.
* Как же мало хитсёрклов от 00:14:165 (1) до 00:21:780 (2)

Advanced

00:00:550(1,2,1,2,1,1,1) - как и на бегиннере

Shmiklak

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Shmiklak 2016-01-07T08:18:07+00:00

fizzn1 wrote:
General
* Добавь тэги: Enjoykin, Enjoyker, Youtube
* Киаи раздели, больно длинные
* Я наверное придираюсь, но комбо цвета слишком яркие, попробуй эти. Вот цвета в HEX: #fefba7, #ffa478, #f75b99, #59d181
* Немнoго бэкграунд не в тему. Попробуй сделать скриншот из видео и его поставить.
* Если меняешь бг, то и комбо цвета новые не забудь
Beginner
00:00:550 (1,2,1,2,1,1,1,2) - Ближе их, изи же. Не издевайся над новичками.
* Как же мало хитсёрклов от 00:14:165 (1) до 00:21:780 (2)
Advanced
00:00:550(1,2,1,2,1,1,1) - как и на бегиннере

Пасиб :З

Rilene

2,105 posts

Joined April 2014

Rilene 2016-01-07T11:08:44+00:00

Random mod but feel free to request more mod once you got more mod.
AESTHETIC MODDING QUEUE
____________________________________________

Beginner

00:09:780 (1) - Remove New Combo?
00:20:857 (1,2) - This plays ok but looks strange, maybe space them out by tiny bit?
00:24:550 (1,2) - Same as above.
00:26:857 (2,3) - The blanket is not perfect.
00:45:780 (3,1) - Try space them out by a tiny bit and make a better blanket.
00:50:857 (2,3) - Same as above.

Advanced

00:15:319 - The pattern is so repetitive here, if you can... Maybe try add more like repeat sliders or triple hitcircles?
00:25:473 (3) - Maybe reduce them the length by 1/2 beat? It feels kinda strange to ignore the strong beat.
00:44:857 - The pattern is so repetitive here, if you can... Maybe try add more like repeat sliders or triple hitcircles? Copy pasted from above.
00:54:088 (1,2,3) - Looks aesthetically pleasing but feels weird to play

Good luck on getting ranked!

Namki

1,281 posts

Joined November 2014

Namki 2016-01-07T11:12:24+00:00

ок

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Shmiklak

Elite Storyboarder

3,218 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Shmiklak 2016-01-07T12:11:20+00:00

Rilene wrote:
Random mod but feel free to request more mod once you got more mod.
AESTHETIC MODDING QUEUE
____________________________________________

Beginner

00:09:780 (1) - Remove New Combo?
00:20:857 (1,2) - This plays ok but looks strange, maybe space them out by tiny bit?
00:24:550 (1,2) - Same as above.
00:26:857 (2,3) - The blanket is not perfect.
00:45:780 (3,1) - Try space them out by a tiny bit and make a better blanket.
00:50:857 (2,3) - Same as above.

Advanced

00:15:319 - The pattern is so repetitive here, if you can... Maybe try add more like repeat sliders or triple hitcircles?
00:25:473 (3) - Maybe reduce them the length by 1/2 beat? It feels kinda strange to ignore the strong beat.
00:44:857 - The pattern is so repetitive here, if you can... Maybe try add more like repeat sliders or triple hitcircles? Copy pasted from above.
00:54:088 (1,2,3) - Looks aesthetically pleasing but feels weird to play

Good luck on getting ranked!

Ty :3

Shmiklak

Elite Storyboarder

3,218 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Shmiklak 2016-01-07T12:11:46+00:00

Namki wrote:

ок

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176,148,36088,2,0,P|176:185|175:222,1,75
100,272,36550,2,0,P|99:234|100:197,1,75
352,100,37473,6,0,P|347:217|352:272,1,150
173,297,38396,2,0,P|170:222|175:147,1,150
352,100,39319,6,0,P|389:104|448:100,1,75
484,172,39780,2,0,P|480:208|484:247,1,75
412,300,40242,2,0,P|376:296|337:300,1,75
68,276,41165,6,0,L|68:116,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,84,41857,2,0,P|48:52|136:88,1,150
216,120,42550,2,0,P|208:176|228:284,1,150,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,43126,12,0,44396,0:0:0:0:
320,152,44857,6,0,L|320:77,1,75
400,188,45319,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,280,45550,2,0,P|212:272|128:280,1,150
64,204,46242,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,88,46703,6,0,L|332:88,1,75
352,100,47050,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,112,47165,1,8,0:0:0:0:
468,180,47396,5,0,0:0:0:0:
364,192,47626,2,0,P|368:264|364:356,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,256,48550,6,0,P|169:181|173:106,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,32,49242,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,120,49473,2,0,P|301:160|312:212,1,75
372,328,49934,2,0,P|376:290|369:254,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,292,50396,6,0,L|116:292,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,212,51088,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,164,51319,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,88,51550,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,92,51780,2,0,P|200:112|220:156,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,176,52242,6,0,L|312:251,1,75
208,340,52703,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,248,52934,2,0,P|98:171|92:72,1,150
184,40,53626,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,128,54088,6,0,P|380:199|376:280,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,312,54665,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,344,54780,2,0,P|308:339|264:344,1,75
172,308,55242,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,260,55473,2,0,P|34:263|-4:260,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,164,55934,6,0,L|44:44,2,112.5,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,57780,12,0,59626,0:0:0:0:

Uploaded :3

6th

616 posts

Joined December 2014

6th 2016-01-08T13:48:57+00:00

SPOILER

[Beginner]
Increase DS to avoid overlaps

[Advanced]
00:19:934 (3,4) - CTRL+H
00:27:319 (3,4) - Move it a little bit up
00:28:242 (1) - This should start at 00:28:011 - doesn't it ?
00:43:011 (1,2,1,2) - Flow is like squared, it is awkard
00:45:780 (3,4) - CTRL+H
00:55:242 - I advise using that https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4292692 or repeating the last slider

[Namki's Hard]
Increase AR to 8
Increase OD/HP drain
I suggest remapping the first kiai, spacing is too high at many moments :/
00:30:088 (1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4292727
00:34:473 (2) - Move it to the right
00:38:396 (2) - CTRL+H
00:41:165 (1) - Move it down ?
00:45:319 (2,3) - spacing
00:51:550 (4) - ^
00:52:242 (1) - CTRL+G ?
00:55:473 (5) - I suggest adding a circle instead of repeating it

Namki

1,281 posts

Joined November 2014

Namki 2016-01-08T14:22:03+00:00

6th wrote:
SPOILER
[Beginner]
[Namki's Hard]
Increase AR to 8 ar=7
Increase OD/HP drain increased
I suggest remapping the first kiai, spacing is too high at many moments :/
00:30:088 (1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4292727 I'll fix blankets later
00:34:473 (2) - Move it to the right fine
00:38:396 (2) - CTRL+H ye
00:41:165 (1) - Move it down? ok
00:45:319 (2,3) - spacing I won't shange spacing, cuz those jumps is quite easy, btw I used same spacing 00:15:780 (2,3) - here.
00:51:550 (4) - ^ ^this is jump pattern, why not use them?
00:52:242 (1) - CTRL+G? It doesn't matter, both is good
00:55:473 (5) - I suggest adding a circle instead of repeating it okay

Thanks~
diff

Shmiklak

Elite Storyboarder

3,218 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Shmiklak 2016-01-08T14:23:33+00:00

6th wrote:
SPOILER
[Beginner]
Increase DS to avoid overlaps

[Advanced]
00:19:934 (3,4) - CTRL+H
00:27:319 (3,4) - Move it a little bit up
00:28:242 (1) - This should start at 00:28:011 - doesn't it ?
00:43:011 (1,2,1,2) - Flow is like squared, it is awkard
00:45:780 (3,4) - CTRL+H
00:55:242 - I advise using that https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4292692 or repeating the last slider

[Namki's Hard]
Increase AR to 8
Increase OD/HP drain
I suggest remapping the first kiai, spacing is too high at many moments :/
00:30:088 (1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4292727
00:34:473 (2) - Move it to the right
00:38:396 (2) - CTRL+H
00:41:165 (1) - Move it down ?
00:45:319 (2,3) - spacing
00:51:550 (4) - ^
00:52:242 (1) - CTRL+G ?
00:55:473 (5) - I suggest adding a circle instead of repeating it

Thank you :3

TheMefisto

403 posts

Joined August 2014

TheMefisto 2016-01-08T20:38:40+00:00

Совсем слабый мод здесь о/

Beginner

OD +1, HP +1
00:17:626 (2) - x:91, y:138 и 00:18:088 (3) - х:42, у:225 (ну и изогнуть чуть-чуть можно, чтобы флоу на следующий слайдер плавно шло)
00:23:164 (2,3) - Ну и бланкеты не совсем бланкеты тут. Не буду заострять внимание, но можно же ровнее ._.

Advanced

00:55:242 (2) - Может, лучше передвинуть слайдер на 1 тик дальше? Вот начать его отсюда 00:55:473 -

Namki's Hard

Ничего :^)

Удачи!

wajinshu

1,579 posts

Joined April 2015

wajinshu 2016-01-08T20:45:33+00:00

IRC

2016-01-07 13:06 wajinshu: а так не
2016-01-07 13:07 wajinshu: не занята
2016-01-07 13:07 shmiklak: помодишь?)
2016-01-07 13:07 wajinshu: что
2016-01-07 13:07 shmiklak: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/873789 Shia LaBeouf - Just Do It!]
2016-01-07 13:07 shmiklak: это
2016-01-07 13:07 shmiklak: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/873789 Shia LaBeouf - Just Do It! [Advanced]]
2016-01-07 13:07 shmiklak: :D
2016-01-07 13:07 wajinshu: так
2016-01-07 13:07 wajinshu: че
2016-01-07 13:08 wajinshu: модить
2016-01-07 13:08 shmiklak: то что я кинул
2016-01-07 13:08 wajinshu: ору
2016-01-07 13:08 shmiklak: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/873789 Shia LaBeouf - Just Do It!]
2016-01-07 13:08 shmiklak: вот еще раз кидаю
2016-01-07 13:09 wajinshu: 00:14:165
2016-01-07 13:10 wajinshu: бля
2016-01-07 13:10 wajinshu: ну лан
2016-01-07 13:10 wajinshu: убери гринтик
2016-01-07 13:10 shmiklak: ой да точно
2016-01-07 13:10 wajinshu: поставь превью на тик
2016-01-07 13:10 shmiklak: я забыл его убрать
2016-01-07 13:10 shmiklak: там слайдер был
2016-01-07 13:10 wajinshu: и это заетки норм поставь на тики
2016-01-07 13:10 wajinshu: заметки
2016-01-07 13:11 shmiklak: ой нах надо
2016-01-07 13:11 wajinshu: 00:17:165 (1) - некрасивый
2016-01-07 13:11 shmiklak: это в какой диффе то?
2016-01-07 13:11 wajinshu: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/873789 Shia LaBeouf - Just Do It! [Advanced]]
2016-01-07 13:11 wajinshu: \:D/
2016-01-07 13:11 shmiklak: ок  :D
2016-01-07 13:12 wajinshu: 00:26:396 (1,2) - че за фигня либо делай прямой либо такой как второй
2016-01-07 13:12 shmiklak: да действительно)
2016-01-07 13:12 shmiklak: чем я думал)
2016-01-07 13:13 wajinshu: 00:28:242 (1) - зачем здесь спиннер ритм ведь всеравно не меняется лучше замапай
2016-01-07 13:13 shmiklak: там было замапано
2016-01-07 13:13 shmiklak: я не знаю честно
2016-01-07 13:13 shmiklak: мапать иль нет
2016-01-07 13:14 wajinshu: мапай
2016-01-07 13:14 shmiklak: просто хочу что бы был хотя бы один спиннер
2016-01-07 13:14 wajinshu: 00:45:780 (3) - он не секас ;w;
2016-01-07 13:14 shmiklak: тогда найди куда его прилепить
2016-01-07 13:14 wajinshu: ок
2016-01-07 13:14 shmiklak: а помоему очень даже секас
2016-01-07 13:15 wajinshu: эсли бы это бы хард я бы поставила после этого 00:13:242 (2) - там где гринтик начинался 
2016-01-07 13:16 wajinshu: а так
2016-01-07 13:16 wajinshu: не
2016-01-07 13:18 wajinshu: 00:49:934 (4) - 134 274
2016-01-07 13:19 shmiklak: ok
2016-01-07 13:19 wajinshu: мне не нравки твой желтый цвет комбо
2016-01-07 13:19 wajinshu: слишком
2016-01-07 13:19 wajinshu: ярко
2016-01-07 13:19 wajinshu: и это
2016-01-07 13:20 wajinshu: widescreen
2016-01-07 13:20 shmiklak: поменяю потом
2016-01-07 13:20 shmiklak: че с ним?
2016-01-07 13:20 wajinshu: сними
2016-01-07 13:20 shmiklak: нах надо?
2016-01-07 13:20 wajinshu: так ведь только для сб
2016-01-07 13:20 wajinshu: оно
2016-01-07 13:20 shmiklak: пусть стоит
2016-01-07 13:20 shmiklak: оно не кому не мешает
2016-01-07 13:21 shmiklak: пока БН не скажет не уберу :-Р
2016-01-07 13:21 wajinshu: ну ок. у меня больше ничего такого не видно
2016-01-07 13:21 wajinshu: ну кароч все

Shmiklak

Elite Storyboarder

3,218 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Shmiklak 2016-01-09T05:58:27+00:00

TheMefisto wrote:
Совсем слабый мод здесь о/

Beginner
OD +1, HP +1
00:17:626 (2) - x:91, y:138 и 00:18:088 (3) - х:42, у:225 (ну и изогнуть чуть-чуть можно, чтобы флоу на следующий слайдер плавно шло)
00:23:164 (2,3) - Ну и бланкеты не совсем бланкеты тут. Не буду заострять внимание, но можно же ровнее ._.

Advanced
00:55:242 (2) - Может, лучше передвинуть слайдер на 1 тик дальше? Вот начать его отсюда 00:55:473 -

Namki's Hard

Ничего :^)

Удачи!

пасиб я все сделал

Prismetical

274 posts

Joined October 2015

Prismetical 2016-01-09T06:17:40+00:00

Heya!

Beginner

- you can call it Easy
00:01:473 - if you call it Easy you can map this then (maybe you can space it better when the circle is there)
00:00:550 (1,2,1,2,1,1,1,2) - this is totally weird, so first we have white and red tick, then we have two white ticks after another, just because this isn't spaced or possible to space this is unreadable, you need to make it consistent
00:07:934 (1,1,1,2) - inconsitency in combo
00:30:088 - map that break, do something like that: (PS: remove the spinner then)

00:20:857 (1) - reverse and put a circle, remove 00:21:780 (2) -
00:55:934 - spinner here then?

Advanced

- you can call it Normal
00:04:242 (1,2) - rotate -> selection centre -> 70°
00:07:934 (1,1,1,2) - again the inconsistency of white and red ticks, no spacing so the player has no idea
00:17:165 - I would do this:

00:46:703 (1,2,3,4) - same here as above
00:30:088 - you can easily map the voice here, example:

00:44:396 (2) - move it, that it looks better with the slider

00:56:050 - spinner

Hard

00:09:780 (1) - fix, I want this to be symmetrical
- oh please, distance snap that thing... and map it like a Hard, without your weird spacing this would be the lost Easy+ diff
00:56:050 - spinner

Much luck!

Shmiklak

Elite Storyboarder

3,218 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Shmiklak 2016-01-09T06:31:15+00:00

Prismetical wrote:
Heya!

Beginner
- you can call it Easy
00:01:473 - if you call it Easy you can map this then (maybe you can space it better when the circle is there)
00:00:550 (1,2,1,2,1,1,1,2) - this is totally weird, so first we have white and red tick, then we have two white ticks after another, just because this isn't spaced or possible to space this is unreadable, you need to make it consistent
00:07:934 (1,1,1,2) - inconsitency in combo
00:30:088 - map that break, do something like that: (PS: remove the spinner then)

00:20:857 (1) - reverse and put a circle, remove 00:21:780 (2) -
00:55:934 - spinner here then?

Advanced
- you can call it Normal
00:04:242 (1,2) - rotate -> selection centre -> 70°
00:07:934 (1,1,1,2) - again the inconsistency of white and red ticks, no spacing so the player has no idea
00:17:165 - I would do this:

00:46:703 (1,2,3,4) - same here as above
00:30:088 - you can easily map the voice here, example:

00:44:396 (2) - move it, that it looks better with the slider

00:56:050 - spinner

Hard
00:09:780 (1) - fix, I want this to be symmetrical
- oh please, distance snap that thing... and map it like a Hard, without your weird spacing this would be the lost Easy+ diff
00:56:050 - spinner

Much luck!

Ty :3

Namki

1,281 posts

Joined November 2014

Namki 2016-01-09T13:38:23+00:00

Prismetical wrote:
Hard
00:09:780 (1) - fix, I want this to be symmetrical I don't want
- oh please, distance snap that thing... and map it like a Hard, without your weird spacing this would be the lost Easy+ diff what thing?
00:56:050 - spinner nah

Ambu5h

153 posts

Joined February 2015

Ambu5h 2016-01-11T12:50:54+00:00

Prisme's Hard

00:05:626 (1,2) - just a suggestion; how about copy 00:04:242 (2,3) - and then ctrl+h, ctrl+g and new combo? it doesnt really change anything, just makes here a bit simmeetry
00:09:780 - here how about just 3/4 reversal slider? http://puu.sh/mrEFh/d5c353862d.jpg
00:13:242 - i suggest here smth like this http://puu.sh/mrF5k/aaae6a94a8.jpg 1 is a spinner if anything
00:17:165 - i think here should be slider like this http://puu.sh/mrFez/60bc321e29.jpg
00:31:011 (4,5) - i personally think you should swap them on time scale
00:35:145 - shia says "over" here and it cant be emphasized just by a single note, so maybe 1/2 slider?
00:39:068 - i think you should add note here
00:41:145 - 00:44:376 - i think its better to map this part folowing the rhythm but not voice, also better start spinner here 00:43:914 -
00:53:145 (4,5) - swap them on time scale

you can use more hitsounds i think, not just whistles sometimes

overall diff is good, well mapped

Message to Shmiklak

попробуй поставить офсет 530, по-моему ноты немного отстают от музыки

если сделаешь, не забудь реснапнуть все зеленые таймсекции

Shmiklak

Elite Storyboarder

3,218 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Shmiklak 2016-01-11T12:58:18+00:00

freebird42 wrote:
Prisme's Hard

00:05:626 (1,2) - just a suggestion; how about copy 00:04:242 (2,3) - and then ctrl+h, ctrl+g and new combo? it doesnt really change anything, just makes here a bit simmeetry
00:09:780 - here how about just 3/4 reversal slider? http://puu.sh/mrEFh/d5c353862d.jpg
00:13:242 - i suggest here smth like this http://puu.sh/mrF5k/aaae6a94a8.jpg 1 is a spinner if anything
00:17:165 - i think here should be slider like this http://puu.sh/mrFez/60bc321e29.jpg
00:31:011 (4,5) - i personally think you should swap them on time scale
00:35:145 - shia says "over" here and it cant be emphasized just by a single note, so maybe 1/2 slider?
00:39:068 - i think you should add note here
00:41:145 - 00:44:376 - i think its better to map this part folowing the rhythm but not voice, also better start spinner here 00:43:914 -
00:53:145 (4,5) - swap them on time scale

you can use more hitsounds i think, not just whistles sometimes

overall diff is good, well mapped

Message to Shmiklak

попробуй поставить офсет 530, по-моему ноты немного отстают от музыки

если сделаешь, не забудь реснапнуть все зеленые таймсекции

Да действительно насчет оффсета. Спасибо.
Message to Prismetical
Please change offset to 530

EDITED: I mistaked

Last edited by Shmiklak 2016-01-11T14:51:11+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Founntain

256 posts

Joined October 2014

Founntain 2016-01-11T13:08:04+00:00

General:

Beginner- Nothing Special
But Maybe Changing the patterns on the Beginning. To Spaced.

Advanced - Try to change the Layout of The map on the Begining it looks a bit Spaced. Place the notes more in the cencter.
Put The Distance Snap on 1.2x or 1.3x

Beginner:

It Looks a bit like a 2009 map with the Straight Sliders... Maybe chaning it a bit

Advanced:

00:05:626 - Maybe put here a Note because it sounds go to the following note you can make a Slider aswell
00:10:473 - Put a Slider for the POOOOOIIIIINNNTT

00:12:550 - Start Slider there and end it on 00:13:242 -
00:16:011 - You must Put here a Note Because it sounds in My Opinion a bit Wierd without it.
00:19:703 - Same as Above
00:23:396 - Same Again
00:26:857 (2) - Maybe delete the Slider and put 2 Notes there
00:28:242 (1) - Let the Spinner Start here 00:28:011 -

00:30:203 - Start Mapping here its and Advanced Dif (Its Over Normal) and i think you CAN DO something good here "JUST DO IT"
00:45:550 - JUST place a Note there.
00:49:242 - Same
00:52:934 - Same Again

Conclusion:

Good Map so far Maybe put Some Harder Difs in the Set.
and Good Luck

Shmiklak

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3,218 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Shmiklak 2016-01-11T13:26:44+00:00

Fluttershy552 wrote:
General:

Beginner- Nothing Special
But Maybe Changing the patterns on the Beginning. To Spaced.

Advanced - Try to change the Layout of The map on the Begining it looks a bit Spaced. Place the notes more in the cencter.
Put The Distance Snap on 1.2x or 1.3x

Beginner:

It Looks a bit like a 2009 map with the Straight Sliders... Maybe chaning it a bit

Advanced:

00:05:626 - Maybe put here a Note because it sounds go to the following note you can make a Slider aswell
00:10:473 - Put a Slider for the POOOOOIIIIINNNTT
00:12:550 - Start Slider there and end it on 00:13:242 -
00:16:011 - You must Put here a Note Because it sounds in My Opinion a bit Wierd without it.
00:19:703 - Same as Above
00:23:396 - Same Again
00:26:857 (2) - Maybe delete the Slider and put 2 Notes there
00:28:242 (1) - Let the Spinner Start here 00:28:011 -

00:30:203 - Start Mapping here its and Advanced Dif (Its Over Normal) and i think you CAN DO something good here "JUST DO IT"
00:45:550 - JUST place a Note there.
00:49:242 - Same
00:52:934 - Same Again

Conclusion:

Good Map so far Maybe put Some Harder Difs in the Set.
and Good Luck

I have one question. When you downloaded it? Nearly most part of your mod was made before D:

Founntain

256 posts

Joined October 2014

Founntain 2016-01-11T13:35:53+00:00

shmiklak wrote:
I have one question. When you downloaded it? Nearly most part of your mod was made before D:

Lol i updated it to last version : P

Shmiklak

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Topic Starter

Shmiklak 2016-01-11T14:52:09+00:00

Mods, mods, we need more mods

Froskya

1,232 posts

Joined April 2014

Froskya 2016-01-11T21:17:20+00:00

Ентак, на м4м, все равно делать нечего

General
Во всех диффах переместите превью на 00:14:837
В БГ можно убрать нижнюю левую белую надпись: зачем она? Если хочешь, вставь ее как сториборд перед началом карты, или же в конце
А с кем Collab Advanced то? В диффе непонятно где-чье. Подпишите в названии карты и сделайте сториборд с указыванием моментов, где вы маппили

Easy

00:09:760 (1) - NC убери
00:18:068 (3) - изогни, чтобы конец плавно переходил к след. слайдеру
00:49:453 (2,1) - ^
00:23:145 (2) - на х:192 у:312
00:25:453 (2,1) - паттерн для изи не подходящий. Сделай переход по движению слайдера
00:45:760 (3) - ^
00:47:606 (2,1) - ^
00:48:530 (1,2) - ^
00:52:222 (1,2) - ^
00:26:837 (2) - х:360 у:336
00:50:837 (2) - x:64 y:208

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00:09:760 (1) - NC убери
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