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Yuaru - Asu no Yozora Shoukaihan

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Akitoshi
2,684 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
Akitoshi

KASUM1 wrote:

my boy is ready for full mapset
:)
Mateo
8 posts
Joined January 2014
Mateo
http://i.imgur.com/G9hVqKp.jpg Better quality background :^)
Rishe
Rishe
Nice map :)
Akitoshi
2,684 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
Akitoshi

Megumi Kato wrote:

Nice map :)
Thank you ♥
Manny-
4 posts
Joined October 2014
Manny-
Very fun map to play :D
Akitoshi
2,684 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
Akitoshi

Manny- wrote:

Very fun map to play :D
Thanks :D
Linada
994 posts
Joined November 2014
Linada
o/
Akitoshi
2,684 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
Akitoshi

Linada wrote:

o/
\o
Darson
187 posts
Joined June 2014
Darson
Here's a star for Yuaru, absolutely amazing vocals :D
Akitoshi
2,684 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
Akitoshi

Reclaimer wrote:

Here's a star for Yuaru, absolutely amazing vocals :D
Oh my god, Thanks for your star ♥
NucleaRaven
201 posts
Joined March 2015
NucleaRaven
[Sky Arrow]

  1. literally the only thing i think could be improved is the stream starting from 00:29:940 (1) as its a little boring. Maybe make it a little more accelerated as i can barely notice any difference from start to end (even with hr). - However this is completely up to you to change and it is still fine as it is.
Other than that (and maybe even including that) the map is pretty much perfect imo.
Akitoshi
2,684 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
Akitoshi

NucleaRaven wrote:

[Sky Arrow]

  1. literally the only thing i think could be improved is the stream starting from 00:29:940 (1) as its a little boring. Maybe make it a little more accelerated as i can barely notice any difference from start to end (even with hr). - However this is completely up to you to change and it is still fine as it is.
Other than that (and maybe even including that) the map is pretty much perfect imo.
uhmmm, I will explain with that small-distanced stream at first part. For the vocal, yes it's still pretty weak at 00:29:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and getting strong after this. As you can see the stream distance is increasing little by little based on the vocal itself.

thanks for pointing out that. kds I don't know if they'll deny it but it's still helpful to me so ye.
Kalibe
2,060 posts
Joined October 2013
Kalibe
\o/ Happy New Year Aki !!!

Feel free to call me in-game whenever i am and i'll mod ASAP !

:3
Akitoshi
2,684 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
Akitoshi

Kalibe wrote:

\o/ Happy New Year Aki !!!

Feel free to call me in-game whenever i am and i'll mod ASAP !

:3
ALLAHU AKBAR Happy New Year! :)
maybe gonna ask m4m to you when I managed to catch you in-game :D
Kalibe
2,060 posts
Joined October 2013
Kalibe
M4M~ Allahu.
  1. Wot . You should remove one of these BG lol.
  2. Change Audio Lead-In on all diffs to 1500~2000 just to be safe.
  3. Unused .osb file in your map folder. Please, delete it lol.
Easy :
  1. Uncheck Widescreen.
  2. 00:55:237 (3) - How about.. avoid this blanket and make more comfortable flow? 180|260 is c o o l.
  3. 02:05:616 (4,1) - Spacing issue? Well, AIbot don't show this, but it is noticeable.
  4. 02:29:940 (1,2,3) - Imo this flow is weird.. I recommend to do smth like this buddy.
Normal :
  1. Uncheck Widescreen.
  2. Just perfect. Really, i don't find a huge deal issue, only nazi minors lel. Wow.
Hard :
  1. Uncheck Widescreen.
  2. 00:47:129 (2,3,4,5) - I'm not a fan of square flow. I think hard players too. Suggest you change a bit this pattern to more like a tadah
Insane
  1. Uncheck Widescreen.
  2. 00:34:805 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
  3. 02:12:751 (2,3) - Nazi | Fix blanket.
  4. 02:51:183 (1) - The wave of slider isn't cool to play tho. Make this.... idk.. straight or less curve ?
This mapset is good, really good.

Ok, that's all. I'll mod Linada's diff via IRC lel and i can't mod Extra.. so.. gud lock !
Akitoshi
2,684 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
Akitoshi

Kalibe wrote:

M4M~ Allahu.
  1. Wot . You should remove one of these BG lol. look at very right-bottom corner in these picture to see the difference :^)
  2. Change Audio Lead-In on all diffs to 1500~2000 just to be safe. ah. yes yes. but 600~1000 is enough since of offset is 1400
  3. Unused .osb file in your map folder. Please, delete it lol.wat I don't have any .osb lmao
Easy :
  1. Uncheck Widescreen.
  2. 00:55:237 (3) - How about.. avoid this blanket and make more comfortable flow? 180|260 is c o o l. did 253|296 for linear pattern
  3. 02:05:616 (4,1) - Spacing issue? Well, AIbot don't show this, but it is noticeable. I fixed the blanket instead lmao. btw There's no spacing issue with the difference distance of x0.01 xd
  4. 02:29:940 (1,2,3) - Imo this flow is weird.. I recommend to do smth like this buddy. sure
Normal :
  1. Uncheck Widescreen. OH MY GOD HAHAHAHAHA
  2. Just perfect. Really, i don't find a huge deal issue, only nazi minors lel. Wow. wao
Hard :
  1. Uncheck Widescreen. xd
  2. 00:47:129 (2,3,4,5) - I'm not a fan of square flow. I think hard players too. Suggest you change a bit this pattern to more like a tadahMy Hard is always DS-Based atm, I need some "spice" to make it harder :^)
Insane
  1. Uncheck Widescreen. xd
  2. 00:34:805 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). re-snapped
  3. 02:12:751 (2,3) - Nazi | Fix blanket. it was copypasta purpose but ok, I moved a bit
  4. 02:51:183 (1) - The wave of slider isn't cool to play tho. Make this.... idk.. straight or less curve ? it's fine as is.
This mapset is good, really good.

Ok, that's all. I'll mod Linada's diff via IRC lel and i can't mod Extra.. so.. gud lock !
Thanks Kalibe :)
Kalibe
2,060 posts
Joined October 2013
Kalibe
  1. Unused .osb file in your map folder. Please, delete it lol.wat I don't have any .osb lmao you sure?
Oh, okay then :3
Last edited by Kalibe , edited 2 times in total.
Akitoshi
2,684 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
Akitoshi

Kalibe wrote:

  1. Unused .osb file in your map folder. Please, delete it lol.wat I don't have any .osb lmao you sure?
yes I'm sure.
Kalibe
2,060 posts
Joined October 2013
Kalibe
IRC wwww | don't kudo it
18:26 Kalibe: wwww
18:26 Linada: www
18:26 *Kalibe is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/854616 Yuaru - Asu no Yozora Shoukaihan]
18:26 *Kalibe is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/854616 Yuaru - Asu no Yozora Shoukaihan [Linada's Insane]]
18:27 Kalibe: AIbot?
18:28 Linada: redling
18:28 Linada: i'm here
18:28 Kalibe: ok so let's do dis
18:29 Linada: aibot say no problems
18:29 Kalibe: ye
18:29 Kalibe: 00:02:454 (5) -
18:29 Kalibe: Still don't get it why you put here circle xD
18:30 Linada: idk to follow vocals xD
18:30 Linada: but i'll do what i did later, 3/4 slider instead
18:31 Kalibe: 00:03:508 (2,3) -
18:32 Kalibe: http://puu.sh/mjqOO/40c1b9c753.jpg
18:32 Kalibe: Maybe?
18:33 Kalibe: 00:02:859 (6,1) - Switch NC
18:33 Kalibe: 00:03:832 (5,1) - ^
18:33 Kalibe: 00:05:129 (6,1) - ^
18:34 Linada: i mapped this before i learned how to
18:34 Linada: lmao
18:34 Kalibe: lol
18:34 Kalibe: 00:07:724 (5,1) -
18:34 Kalibe: you know
18:35 Kalibe: 00:09:021 (8,1) -
18:36 Kalibe: 00:10:481 (1) - add nc
18:36 Kalibe: 00:11:291 (1) - ??
18:36 Kalibe: NC to vocal or wot?
18:36 Linada: shhh
18:36 Kalibe: owo
18:37 Linada: man
18:37 Linada: i think
18:37 Linada: instead
18:37 Linada: i'll re-do NC myself
18:37 Linada: then i send you
18:37 Kalibe: ou kay
18:38 Kalibe: 00:18:345 (7) - little overmapped, vocal isn't emphasis triple
18:39 Kalibe: 00:20:372 (1,2) - Wot
18:39 Kalibe: Skystar rhythm xD
18:39 Linada: idk, i think it fit really well owo
18:39 Linada: long vocal
18:39 Kalibe: oh, okay then
18:40 Linada: yay my road to be skystar's is going well
18:40 Linada: o/
18:43 Kalibe: 00:37:886 (2) - This slider sounds off
18:43 Kalibe: bcs is on da red beat
18:43 Kalibe: Should do ctrl G rhythm
18:45 Kalibe: 00:44:859 (5,7) - Stack (5) on (7) end for tidyness
18:45 Linada: slider fixed
18:46 Kalibe: 00:45:183 (7,1) - Suupper crazy jump as a normal Insane
18:46 Kalibe: really
18:47 Linada: it's still a 5,1 stars
18:47 Kalibe: but this jump is like 5.8
18:48 Linada: since there are 3 sliders as jumps
18:48 Linada: they are "easier"
18:48 Linada: i fc them fine
18:48 Kalibe: 00:48:589 (5,6) - ??
18:50 Linada: yea i think (6) i'll change into 2 circles
18:53 Kalibe: 01:16:156 (1,2,1) - 5 Circles fits better with beats imo
18:55 Kalibe: 01:57:670 (1,2,3,4) -
18:56 Kalibe: http://puu.sh/mjsid/19e62b684f.jpg
18:56 Kalibe: Better for me
18:57 Linada: yep :D
18:58 Linada: finished NC and all
18:58 Linada: want .osu ?
18:59 Kalibe: Maybe
18:59 Kalibe: ye
18:59 Kalibe: give me
18:59 Kalibe: 02:52:481 (1) - Maybe curve this a little? .w.
19:00 Linada: i want this to be parrallel but maybe
19:00 Linada: http://puu.sh/mjsAB/94315ee067.osu
19:01 Kalibe: 00:09:021 (8,1) - Swap
19:01 Linada: btw, fixed 01:43:643 (1,2) -
19:02 Linada: wat i don't have the one you gave me, you took the new .osu ?
19:02 Kalibe: yup
19:03 Kalibe: oh
19:04 Kalibe: 00:18:102 (6) - NC
19:04 Kalibe: 00:19:075 (1,3) - Swap
19:04 Kalibe: 00:25:886 (5) -
19:06 Linada: 01:03:508 (4) - fixed this
19:07 Kalibe: 01:27:021 (4) -
19:08 Kalibe: Omg rly
19:08 Kalibe: i must go again
19:08 Linada: wat ? xD
19:08 Kalibe: xD
19:08 Linada: xD
19:08 Kalibe: ok i'll just post in forum
Linada
994 posts
Joined November 2014
Linada
btw i have random .osb too

wwww
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 34318
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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[Metadata]
Title:Asu no Yozora Shoukaihan
TitleUnicode:アスノヨゾラ哨戒班
Artist:Yuaru
ArtistUnicode:ゆある
Creator:[-AKiTOSHi-]
Version:Linada's Insane
Source:
Tags:歌い手 Utaite Tomorrow's Night Sky Patrol Team 歌ってみた Linada
BeatmapID:854616
BeatmapSetID:384772

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3.8
OverallDifficulty:8
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SliderMultiplier:1.8
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Akitoshi
2,684 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
Akitoshi
SPOILER
updated >:3
Lakx
15 posts
Joined January 2011
Lakx
Good luck bruh <3
Akitoshi
2,684 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
Akitoshi

Lakx wrote:

Good luck bruh <3
Thanks ♥
Auxent
Auxent
hi.

general:
- 01:00:913 - put a new timing point (red) at this time. downbeats and stuff are quite inconsistent so this should be able to fix the problem.
- 01:27:021 - ^ (if you are going to apply the suggestion from above, then don't forget to add also this)
- same goes here at: 02:42:102 - ; 02:03:183 - ;

easy:
- 00:45:345 - I feel like missing something here. My suggestion is to put a note here or extend the slider from this point to where it ends now (00:46:156 - )
- 01:36:102 (3) - i don't quite like the fact that the slider ends on downbeat. downbeat should be clickable at this point. (but i guess in the easiest diff it doesn't matter that much)

normal:
- 01:00:751 (5,1) - you should avoid stacks like these.

hard:
- 00:06:102 (4,1) - put the (4) as a 1/2 slider. for better emphasis of music and better gameplay.
- 00:16:481 (9,1) - same here ^ (i'm not going to write every single note, i guess you are smart enough to figure out, which notes need this) - if so, you can put it in a pattern like this 00:49:724 (2,3,1) - . (slider, circle, slider)

i've checked other diffs too and they seems fine to me.
sorry for small mod, good luck
Akitoshi
2,684 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
Akitoshi

Auxent wrote:

hi.

general:
- 01:00:913 - put a new timing point (red) at this time. downbeats and stuff are quite inconsistent so this should be able to fix the problem.
- 01:27:021 - ^ (if you are going to apply the suggestion from above, then don't forget to add also this)
- same goes here at: 02:42:102 - ; 02:03:183 - ; I see, I looked at Orangestar which is ranked one lol

easy:
- 00:45:345 - I feel like missing something here. My suggestion is to put a note here or extend the slider from this point to where it ends now (00:46:156 - ) extended
- 01:36:102 (3) - i don't quite like the fact that the slider ends on downbeat. downbeat should be clickable at this point. (but i guess in the easiest diff it doesn't matter that much) I'll keep this for now but I'll consider eet

normal:
- 01:00:751 (5,1) - you should avoid stacks like these. yes, we should only "Avoid" and not "Don't" so ye I'll keep this way since it's not the unrankable issue

hard:
- 00:06:102 (4,1) - put the (4) as a 1/2 slider. for better emphasis of music and better gameplay. emphasis of vocal, but lemme see if other modders will slap me here
- 00:16:481 (9,1) - same here ^ (i'm not going to write every single note, i guess you are smart enough to figure out, which notes need this) - if so, you can put it in a pattern like this 00:49:724 (2,3,1) - . (slider, circle, slider) same as above.

i've checked other diffs too and they seems fine to me.
sorry for small mod, good luck
thanks~ every mod helps me ♥ :D
Janpai
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Joined March 2015
Janpai
Great mappu~ take my star (^3^)
Akitoshi
2,684 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
Akitoshi

Jana Marie wrote:

Great mappu~ take my star (^3^)
Thanks <3
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
Checked this out because Yuaru is <3
Might give a real mod later on, but just a few things to chew on:

Tick rate 2 fits this song best.
You don't need the red lines at 1:16 and 1:27. Get rid of 'em.
I really wish you didn't use soft-hitnormal so much. You can't really hear it at all against the song and considering how streamy the upper level map is, it really lacks in feedback to the player.
Akitoshi
2,684 posts
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Topic Starter
Akitoshi

Garven wrote:

Checked this out because Yuaru is <3 omgggg Garven ♥
Might give a real mod later on, but just a few things to chew on:

Tick rate 2 fits this song best. I see.
You don't need the red lines at 1:16 and 1:27. Get rid of 'em. I set these since Orangestar's one (which is ranked already) has red ticks there as well
I really wish you didn't use soft-hitnormal so much. You can't really hear it at all against the song and considering how streamy the upper level map is, it really lacks in feedback to the player. uhmm, is it needed to add some another custom soft-hitnormal or increase the volume itself?
Thanks for checking my beatmap ♥
Kroytz
703 posts
Joined February 2013
Kroytz
Sky Arrow
00:29:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I'd HIGHLY recommend changing this stream up. And tbh, the stream could start at the downbeat here 00:32:535 (1) - where it makes most sense to have a crazy stream. But please design the stream better than having it go around in a circle. please please please

00:29:777 (8) - Here's an example rhythm I modified for that first half of the stream because it's like, not necessary at all http://puu.sh/msycc/4a7f8d8874.jpg

01:37:237 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I can't really comment on this without saying to change a lot of the streams to be less aggressive. The sound in the background is very small and repetitive so there's no need to go high DS on the streams, best to keep it close together or use a lot more repeat sliders. I wanna say best bet is to ignore that background beat.

01:49:318 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - stream design here can be improved. It just goes round and around. Using more kicks could help lead you to other sections in the editor and create more design. Try more linear streams or something : s

01:54:508 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this one is a little bit better than the others but the loop at the end could be more circular than the squished up thing it is currently.

02:12:102 (4) - should be spaced more because clap/high vocal needs emphasis

02:21:831 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I don't see this pattern being so necessary when the music doesn't shift much from your previous rhythm choices. I'd suggest using more sliders to keep the map more consistent with previous parts and future parts.

02:47:778 (2) - I like how you did these ending streams, these feel more fitting. I'd change 02:47:778 (2) - stream to be more circular instead of it having that weird straightness out of nowhere.

02:51:994 (3) - kick slider because circle feels odd amidst all the 1/4s

If you need help creating interesting stream patterns I am willing to help too ^^

Linada's Insane
General: With High SV moments, I highly suggest spacing things more out and not falling back to your overlapping methods.
CS to 4 or 4.1 because using a bigger CS for a more difficult map makes no sense lol.

00:05:129 (1) - I think it'd be interesting to have something like this to emphasize the vocal a little bit more: http://puu.sh/msyTq/663750014c.jpg

00:15:345 (5,1) - I'd say the same over here but doing it more than once loses the uniqueness of it. Maybe try a blanket or something to emphasize vocal?

00:34:481 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - I don't like how for a full 3 seconds all the attention in this start of the kiai is spent in such a small playfield: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4318520 Consider trying to not overlap so much and focus on using more space >> It happens a little more throughout the kiai too...

01:50:859 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - seems a little unfair to ignore the background beats here when its rhythmically the same. Imo, I don't think it's necessary to map those beats so harshly when the music itself is quite calm.

02:05:940 (6) - space out a little?

02:07:724 (7) - this might play better as a slider

02:08:859 (2,1) - these overlaps so trigger

02:10:805 (1) - Seeing how high SV you're using, throughout this kiai, consider spacing more of your notes because it becomes a little uncomfortable to have high SV with low DS. high sv with high ds is more pleasant to play and look at without having so many overlaps and tight spacing.

02:19:075 (2) - not a nice looking overlap with the repeat slider there : <

02:23:940 (1) - no slider?

02:42:427 (7) - NC and remove the NC on 02:42:913 (1) -

02:44:210 (1) - remove NC

02:52:156 (1) - remove NC


Insane
00:29:940 (1) - I mentioned this in the other difficulties as well but for an Insane, surely this should be toned down immensely.. as well as starting on 00:32:535 (1) -

01:37:237 (1) - same goes here with the needingness of adding streams to a quiet part of the song.

01:56:697 (1,2,3) - It feels more comfortable playing the music like this instead. You couldve (according to your logic) continued this with streams but it sounds and feels better when that 1/4 background beat is ignored for the calmness of the song and mapping calmly as you did here.

02:29:940 (3) - might be too close to (2)

02:32:210 (2,3) - this looks better

This diff looks alright but I'd rather see more patterns than continuous flowing go on because after a while, it starts to get 'stale' in a way.

It's a nice song ;o
Akitoshi
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Topic Starter
Akitoshi

Kroytz wrote:

Sky Arrow
00:29:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I'd HIGHLY recommend changing this stream up. And tbh, the stream could start at the downbeat here 00:32:535 (1) - where it makes most sense to have a crazy stream. But please design the stream better than having it go around in a circle. please please please pattern maybe fixed, but I disagree the starting stream suggestion due to instruments. I used the DS changes on every strength of the vocal. I added green lines in all of my diffs instead for more specific at stream or the hitsound itself

00:29:777 (8) - Here's an example rhythm I modified for that first half of the stream because it's like, not necessary at all I prefer my current stack copypastahttp://puu.sh/msycc/4a7f8d8874.jpg

01:37:237 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I can't really comment on this without saying to change a lot of the streams to be less aggressive. The sound in the background is very small and repetitive so there's no need to go high DS on the streams, best to keep it close together or use a lot more repeat sliders. I wanna say best bet is to ignore that background beat. nej. I will use this part as all x1 DS circles.

01:49:318 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - stream design here can be improved. It just goes round and around. Using more kicks could help lead you to other sections in the editor and c :) reate more design. Try more linear streams or something : s I'm not the fan of kicks btw, I will consider it to change the pattern, but I don't want to kick.

01:54:508 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this one is a little bit better than the others but the loop at the end could be more circular than the squished up thing it is currently. ehh it's fine as is

02:12:102 (4) - should be spaced more because clap/high vocal needs emphasis ok

02:21:831 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I don't see this pattern being so necessary when the music doesn't shift much from your previous rhythm choices. I'd suggest using more sliders to keep the map more consistent with previous parts and future parts. Sky Arrow~♫ I really want to jump this part as for my diffname

02:47:778 (2) - I like how you did these ending streams, these feel more fitting. I'd change 02:47:778 (2) - stream to be more circular instead of it having that weird straightness out of nowhere. nej. I used reverse here for next 02:48:102 (1) -

02:51:994 (3) - kick slider because circle feels odd amidst all the 1/4s ok

If you need help creating interesting stream patterns I am willing to help too ^^ I map Flow > Fun. Sorry ;w;


Insane
00:29:940 (1) - I mentioned this in the other difficulties as well but for an Insane, surely this should be toned down immensely.. as well as starting on 00:32:535 (1) - It fits with this imo

01:37:237 (1) - same goes here with the needingness of adding streams to a quiet part of the song. ehh you can hear the instrument ;w;

01:56:697 (1,2,3) - It feels more comfortable playing the music like this instead. You couldve (according to your logic) continued this with streams but it sounds and feels better when that 1/4 background beat is ignored for the calmness of the song and mapping calmly as you did here. My logic was I'll add 1/1 slider if there's the long vocal that fits with that. as you see at 01:42:427 (1,1,1,7,1,1,1,3,1,1,1,1,2,1,3) - there's all based on vocals to avoid some extreme-related issue.

02:29:940 (3) - might be too close to (2) nahhh I stacked that with 02:28:966 (5) - and it's near enough imo

02:32:210 (2,3) - this looks better

This diff looks alright but I'd rather see more patterns than continuous flowing go on because after a while, it starts to get 'stale' in a way.

It's a nice song ;o
Thanks for the mod :D
I will fix the stream issue if my reasons aren't valid.
Linada
994 posts
Joined November 2014
Linada

Kroytz wrote:

Linada's Insane
General: With High SV moments, I highly suggest spacing things more out and not falling back to your overlapping methods.
CS to 4 or 4.1 because using a bigger CS for a more difficult map makes no sense lol. i don't see any reason to change this, i like it that way

00:05:129 (1) - I think it'd be interesting to have something like this to emphasize the vocal a little bit more: http://puu.sh/msyTq/663750014c.jpg i like your idea but i prefer to keep mine

00:15:345 (5,1) - I'd say the same over here but doing it more than once loses the uniqueness of it. Maybe try a blanket or something to emphasize vocal? ^

00:34:481 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - I don't like how for a full 3 seconds all the attention in this start of the kiai is spent in such a small playfield: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4318520 Consider trying to not overlap so much and focus on using more space >> It happens a little more throughout the kiai too...
isn't it already fine ?
01:50:859 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - seems a little unfair to ignore the background beats here when its rhythmically the same. Imo, I don't think it's necessary to map those beats so harshly when the music itself is quite calm. yea fixed

02:05:940 (6) - space out a little? yep

02:07:724 (7) - this might play better as a slider i want to fully emphasize vocal here

02:08:859 (2,1) - these overlaps so trigger tried ctrl g first slider, might help ?

02:10:805 (1) - Seeing how high SV you're using, throughout this kiai, consider spacing more of your notes because it becomes a little uncomfortable to have high SV with low DS. high sv with high ds is more pleasant to play and look at without having so many overlaps and tight spacing. yea, you're right

02:19:075 (2) - not a nice looking overlap with the repeat slider there : < yea but idk how to change D:

02:23:940 (1) - no slider? no reason to do that

02:42:427 (7) - NC and remove the NC on 02:42:913 (1) -

02:44:210 (1) - remove NC

02:52:156 (1) - remove NC
Thanks for the mod !
pantsu
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TitleUnicode:アスノヨゾラ哨戒班
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Version:Linada's Insane
Source:
Tags:歌い手 Utaite Tomorrow's Night Sky Patrol Team 歌ってみた Linada
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Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
Here's the actual mod. Please don't kusodu.

[General]
Remove the two inherited timing sections in the middle. They set the metronome incorrectly. If you listen to the part with the vocals, it's the exact same background music playing but now the metronome is 1/2 beat off.

[Easy]
I kind of wish your beginning was a little bit less filled with hit objects. That way there's a much better contrast from before the additional instruments kick in at 00:11:778 -
Even something simpler like hitting only circles instead of sliders, or doing everything more of a 2/1 rhythm instead of 1/1s in there.
The entire beatmap feels like it's 1/2 beat off. :( That you rely on having everything on the white tick really makes everything feel slightly off-time - this is especially apparent with key cymbal crashes like 00:45:345 - Considering you have everything spaced very tightly together, I think if you had a visual gap between notes you could pull off using different rhythms fairly safely.
Take 00:35:129 (1) - for example:
Instead of just following along your metronome beats, you could try something that helps accentuate the vocals and the chord changes much more accurately without adding difficulty

Also at points like 00:55:724 - I'd much prefer to have some sort of hit object at the beginning of a crash like that instead of a spinner. A spinner doesn't really have a start point that can be felt by players - it's all in the end. Starting a spinner with a hit object to have that crashing cymbal, then rolling into a spin really helps charge the player's energy to rip through to the end!
01:17:129 - Move this break back to the default position please.

[Normal]
Kind of the same sentiment with the intro from the Easy - make it more different so that there's a better feeling of change as the instrumentation builds up.
00:27:345 (1) - Big stretches of just playing the metronome is kind of boring. You have a much more dynamic rhythm going on with the vocal that you can play with to keep things a bit more interesting!
01:17:129 - Move this break back to the default position
Yeah, the majority of this map feels like you're just playing the metronome the entire time. It makes for a fairly unremarkable experience.

[Hard]
OD +1 at least
I'm not a fan of the unsnapped slider ends like 00:06:102 (4) - tbh - especially in a Hard level map. I'd reserve those for Insane and up.
00:40:156 (1) - I don't understand the slider shape here. Most of these hard kinks at least lead to the next hit object, but this one doesn't.
01:17:129 - Move break back to the default position please
01:42:264 (4,5,1) - I'm not really understanding why you're using these 1/4 stacks during this section. They seem to be randomly placed and not really following anything in the song that I can tell. Can you explain them?

So I was interrupted. I'll finish this mod later, sorry.
ChristieBell
124 posts
Joined August 2013
ChristieBell
mod
2016-01-14 18:04 fdfdfdf: 00:31:886
2016-01-14 18:04 fdfdfdf: ここを
2016-01-14 18:05 fdfdfdf: 円ぽくしたらもっとやりやすくなりそう
2016-01-14 18:05 Akitoshi: ほほう
2016-01-14 18:05 fdfdfdf: なんていうのかな
2016-01-14 18:05 fdfdfdf: ちょっとまってね
2016-01-14 18:07 fdfdfdf: https://gyazo.com/32320b5830ad743260cc1c3952db335f
2016-01-14 18:07 fdfdfdf: konnna
2016-01-14 18:07 fdfdfdf: 感じ
2016-01-14 18:07 Akitoshi: ニャルホド
2016-01-14 18:07 Akitoshi: いま丁度変えたよ
2016-01-14 18:07 fdfdfdf: はやいｗ
2016-01-14 18:08 Akitoshi: スライダーからCTRL + Fすれば結構楽に作れるよｗ
2016-01-14 18:08 Akitoshi: CTRL + Shift + F*
2016-01-14 18:09 fdfdfdf: 初しり
2016-01-14 18:10 Akitoshi: こんな難易度作ったのまだ5-6回目だからどうすればいいか分かりませんでしたｗ
2016-01-14 18:10 fdfdfdf: いい感じだよ
2016-01-14 18:10 fdfdfdf: あと
2016-01-14 18:10 fdfdfdf: https://gyazo.com/976799f048b3c3eec8a33d06a3900a5c
2016-01-14 18:11 fdfdfdf: ここは流れのままに行った方がいいかな
2016-01-14 18:11 fdfdfdf: 急に曲がるとaimしにくいかな
2016-01-14 18:11 fdfdfdf: 6.7.8
2016-01-14 18:11 Akitoshi: うん
2016-01-14 18:11 Akitoshi: もう直してある
2016-01-14 18:12 fdfdfdf: はやいなー
2016-01-14 18:12 Akitoshi: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4331655
2016-01-14 18:12 fdfdfdf: いいね！
2016-01-14 18:12 Akitoshi: さすが三桁
2016-01-14 18:12 Akitoshi: アドバイスが分かりやすいｗ
2016-01-14 18:13 fdfdfdf: そんなeditでアドバイスできないけどねｗ
2016-01-14 18:13 fdfdfdf: 01:50:129
2016-01-14 18:14 fdfdfdf: ここの6を
2016-01-14 18:14 fdfdfdf: もう少し←
2016-01-14 18:14 fdfdfdf: ｘ36くらいにするといいよ
2016-01-14 18:15 fdfdfdf: 01:57:426
2016-01-14 18:15 fdfdfdf: x80 y 320
2016-01-14 18:15 Akitoshi: うぃっす
2016-01-14 18:15 fdfdfdf: 01:57:507
2016-01-14 18:15 fdfdfdf: x108
2016-01-14 18:16 fdfdfdf: y356
2016-01-14 18:16 fdfdfdf: 連打すこし修正したらすごいいい譜面！
2016-01-14 18:17 Akitoshi: DSにたよりまくってるからなー
2016-01-14 18:17 Akitoshi: かなり適当な置き方になってしもうたｗ
2016-01-14 18:18 fdfdfdf: やりやすいと思うよｗ
2016-01-14 18:19 fdfdfdf: 個人的に3連打とか2連打を重ねておいてくれる譜面好き
2016-01-14 18:20 Akitoshi: そうだ, /savelogしてforumに張っておいて
2016-01-14 18:21 Akitoshi: テストだけじゃなくmodまでしてもらって申し訳ない
2016-01-14 18:22 fdfdfdf: 少し書いただけだけどねｗ
2016-01-14 18:22 fdfdfdf: しかも勝手にｗ
2016-01-14 18:23 Akitoshi: けど助かったよ
Akitoshi
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Akitoshi

fdfdfdf wrote:

mod
2016-01-14 18:04 fdfdfdf: 00:31:886
2016-01-14 18:04 fdfdfdf: ここを
2016-01-14 18:05 fdfdfdf: 円ぽくしたらもっとやりやすくなりそう
2016-01-14 18:05 Akitoshi: ほほう
2016-01-14 18:05 fdfdfdf: なんていうのかな
2016-01-14 18:05 fdfdfdf: ちょっとまってね
2016-01-14 18:07 fdfdfdf: https://gyazo.com/32320b5830ad743260cc1c3952db335f
2016-01-14 18:07 fdfdfdf: konnna
2016-01-14 18:07 fdfdfdf: 感じ
2016-01-14 18:07 Akitoshi: ニャルホド
2016-01-14 18:07 Akitoshi: いま丁度変えたよ
2016-01-14 18:07 fdfdfdf: はやいｗ
2016-01-14 18:08 Akitoshi: スライダーからCTRL + Fすれば結構楽に作れるよｗ
2016-01-14 18:08 Akitoshi: CTRL + Shift + F*
2016-01-14 18:09 fdfdfdf: 初しり
2016-01-14 18:10 Akitoshi: こんな難易度作ったのまだ5-6回目だからどうすればいいか分かりませんでしたｗ
2016-01-14 18:10 fdfdfdf: いい感じだよ
2016-01-14 18:10 fdfdfdf: あと
2016-01-14 18:10 fdfdfdf: https://gyazo.com/976799f048b3c3eec8a33d06a3900a5c
2016-01-14 18:11 fdfdfdf: ここは流れのままに行った方がいいかな
2016-01-14 18:11 fdfdfdf: 急に曲がるとaimしにくいかな
2016-01-14 18:11 fdfdfdf: 6.7.8
2016-01-14 18:11 Akitoshi: うん
2016-01-14 18:11 Akitoshi: もう直してある
2016-01-14 18:12 fdfdfdf: はやいなー
2016-01-14 18:12 Akitoshi: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4331655
2016-01-14 18:12 fdfdfdf: いいね！
2016-01-14 18:12 Akitoshi: さすが三桁
2016-01-14 18:12 Akitoshi: アドバイスが分かりやすいｗ
2016-01-14 18:13 fdfdfdf: そんなeditでアドバイスできないけどねｗ
2016-01-14 18:13 fdfdfdf: 01:50:129
2016-01-14 18:14 fdfdfdf: ここの6を
2016-01-14 18:14 fdfdfdf: もう少し←
2016-01-14 18:14 fdfdfdf: ｘ36くらいにするといいよ
2016-01-14 18:15 fdfdfdf: 01:57:426
2016-01-14 18:15 fdfdfdf: x80 y 320
2016-01-14 18:15 Akitoshi: うぃっす
2016-01-14 18:15 fdfdfdf: 01:57:507
2016-01-14 18:15 fdfdfdf: x108
2016-01-14 18:16 fdfdfdf: y356
2016-01-14 18:16 fdfdfdf: 連打すこし修正したらすごいいい譜面！
2016-01-14 18:17 Akitoshi: DSにたよりまくってるからなー
2016-01-14 18:17 Akitoshi: かなり適当な置き方になってしもうたｗ
2016-01-14 18:18 fdfdfdf: やりやすいと思うよｗ
2016-01-14 18:19 fdfdfdf: 個人的に3連打とか2連打を重ねておいてくれる譜面好き
2016-01-14 18:20 Akitoshi: そうだ, /savelogしてforumに張っておいて
2016-01-14 18:21 Akitoshi: テストだけじゃなくmodまでしてもらって申し訳ない
2016-01-14 18:22 fdfdfdf: 少し書いただけだけどねｗ
2016-01-14 18:22 fdfdfdf: しかも勝手にｗ
2016-01-14 18:23 Akitoshi: けど助かったよ
ありがとう！ :)

Agreed, fixed
No change yet since I'm confused. but I'll consider it to change soon
I wanted to do something as my part but changed by your suggestions
I prefer my current one

Garven wrote:

Here's the actual mod. Please don't kusodu.

[General]
Remove the two inherited timing sections in the middle. They set the metronome incorrectly. If you listen to the part with the vocals, it's the exact same background music playing but now the metronome is 1/2 beat off. uhmmm I see. Removed. (but this one have red ticks https://osu.ppy.sh/b/549280 . It isn't be issued in future?

[Easy]
I kind of wish your beginning was a little bit less filled with hit objects. That way there's a much better contrast from before the additional instruments kick in at 00:11:778 - I'm not fan of 2/1 gaps so I used sliders instead :( I wanted to do your suggestion but it cause huge missing beat with my current mapping skill ;3
Even something simpler like hitting only circles instead of sliders, or doing everything more of a 2/1 rhythm instead of 1/1s in there.
The entire beatmap feels like it's 1/2 beat off. :( That you rely on having everything on the white tick really makes everything feel slightly off-time - this is especially apparent with key cymbal crashes like 00:45:345 - Considering you have everything spaced very tightly together, I think if you had a visual gap between notes you could pull off using different rhythms fairly safely. I trimmed the 00:44:859 (3) - so the tail can finish off in the right timing.
Take 00:35:129 (1) - for example:
Instead of just following along your metronome beats, you could try something that helps accentuate the vocals and the chord changes much more accurately without adding difficulty
I will experiment myself before I'll dive in that one.
Also at points like 00:55:724 - I'd much prefer to have some sort of hit object at the beginning of a crash like that instead of a spinner. A spinner doesn't really have a start point that can be felt by players - it's all in the end. Starting a spinner with a hit object to have that crashing cymbal, then rolling into a spin really helps charge the player's energy to rip through to the end! oh. I see.
01:17:129 - Move this break back to the default position please. Wanted to emphasize the echo of cymbals but ok ;3

[Normal]
Kind of the same sentiment with the intro from the Easy - make it more different so that there's a better feeling of change as the instrumentation builds up.
00:27:345 (1) - Big stretches of just playing the metronome is kind of boring. You have a much more dynamic rhythm going on with the vocal that you can play with to keep things a bit more interesting! I think this part can be boring since it's still pretty calm.
01:17:129 - Move this break back to the default position
Yeah, the majority of this map feels like you're just playing the metronome the entire time. It makes for a fairly unremarkable experience. ;3

[Hard]
OD +1 at least OD6 is enough for hard lol
I'm not a fan of the unsnapped slider ends like 00:06:102 (4) - tbh - especially in a Hard level map. I'd reserve those for Insane and up. trimmed
00:40:156 (1) - I don't understand the slider shape here. Most of these hard kinks at least lead to the next hit object, but this one doesn't. I put this how yuaru cuts her vocal ;3
01:17:129 - Move break back to the default position please
01:42:264 (4,5,1) - I'm not really understanding why you're using these 1/4 stacks during this section. They seem to be randomly placed and not really following anything in the song that I can tell. Can you explain them? auto stack. yes it applied to 01:47:454 (4,5,1) - as well. If you meant why I put triple is to emphasize each finish in next white tick.

So I was interrupted. I'll finish this mod later, sorry.
Thank you for notice my map ;w;
domSaur
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domSaur
Hype, Compatriota.
Akitoshi
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Akitoshi

domSaur wrote:

Hype, Compatriota.
wat
Asagi
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Asagi
Imma drop a mod after Garven is done with his mod
Akitoshi
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Akitoshi

Asagi wrote:

Imma drop a mod after Garven is done with his mod
omgggg thanks in advance ♥
Garven
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Garven
Just doing a new reply because there was such a big gap. Sorry I'm slow. q:

[Easy]
00:37:724 (1) - So parts like this are still a bit off (1/2) and coule benefit from a shortened slider leading into more 1/1 rhythms.

01:11:291 - There are many more points like this - please find them and make your hit objects actually land on the chord changes. Otherwise it just feels and sounds way off.

[Normal]
So the beginning still makes me confused while playing. You start by following the vocals, but then you switch to the metronome while the vocal is doing offbeats and it just leaves me wondering what you're trying to follow in the song. Mainly looking at 00:02:697 (4,5) - or 00:07:562 (3,4) -

[Hard]
The OD is way low compared to the AR. Raise it by 1 at least.
00:16:481 (9) - There are more than just that one I pointed out if you're willing to trim them. I usually only point one out as an example when there are many more. Make sure that when you make a change that it fits with the rest of your map, otherwise stuff like this will remain and look weird.
00:40:156 (1) - Maybe make the shape like this then?
SPOILER
01:42:264 (4,5,1) - If you're trying to emphasize something, you want to emphasize it at the time that the sound actually happens, not before it. The way it is right now, it feels like you're trying to emphasize some drum track that isn't there leading into a new phrase. It would also double the vocal change if you had the 1/4s at 01:42:427 - instead.
Then you have ones like 01:50:210 (3,4,1) - where even the finish use doesn't make any sense or 01:52:805 (1) - where there's nothing at all. Please at least keep the pattern use consistent through sections.
01:58:481 - Return break to default position

[Insane]
OD +1 at least please. Too low compared to the AR.
00:24:102 (5) - Not really understanding why you're using an unsnapped slider end here.
00:25:886 (4,1,2,3) - What are you trying to follow at this point? The emphasis points are all over the place and I'm just confused.
00:43:399 (3,4,1) - I found these to flow better with sharper curves.
SPOILER
01:01:399 (2,3,4) - This spacing felt really linear and underwhelming compared to your normal patterns and flow.
01:17:129 - Move back to default break position
01:37:237 (1,2,3,4) - This grouping of 1/4s feels really awkward and doesn't fit how you use them for the rest of this section. I recommend you rethink them.
02:28:805 (4) - This flows better stacked with 02:29:129 (1) -

Aaaa I'll finish this some day. q:
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