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書いてないとこは直しました~Homura- wrote:
TS3で脅されました・・・
[General]
- Title 「Snow Halation ~ENDLESS Snow Parade Remix~」 なのかな・・・? でも動画見ると - だしなぁ・・・
わかんないからこのままいくぞい- BGのサイズが1365×768だったので 1366×768の画像を持ってきました よかったら使って http://puu.sh/lRD7O.jpg
使わせてもらいます!
[Easy]
- 00:57:427 (3) - add whistle?
- 01:33:251 (2) - 音取りここと一緒にしない? 01:44:545 (2,3) -
- 01:39:604 (2,1) - ここもDS1.0でいいんじゃない?
- 01:51:957 (1) - スライダー消して01:52:310 - にサークル置くのもアリかなと思った
[Normal]
- AR4.5か5にしませんか? Hardとの差が気になりました
- 00:45:251 (1,2,3,4) - 窮屈な気がします 次スピンだし配置し直しませんか?
- 00:46:751 (1) - ちょっとNormalにしてはスピン短いような? 00:46:663 - ここからスピンにする?
- 00:53:722 (4,5) - 細かいけど ちょっとずらしてDS1.0に合わせて
- 01:03:604 (1) - どちらかの画像の音取りにしませんか? 歌に合わせる感じです
- 01:25:310 (5,1) - ここもDS1.0
- 01:29:722 (2,3) - ^
- 01:37:486 (1,2) - ^ (画像貼るのめんどくさくなった)
- 01:39:957 (5,1) - ^
- 01:55:486 (3,1) - ^
- 01:56:369 - サークル置いてもいいかも?
[Hard]
- しらん
[Insane]
- 00:38:898 (3,4) - もうちょっと近くてもいいんじゃない?
- 00:41:016 (1) - なんか余計な気がする 00:40:839 - ここの音が強いし サークル消してもいいかも?
- 01:53:545 (2,3) - 今の音取りも好きだけど Hardと同じ音取りもアリ?
上2diff得に言えることなかったです がんばってください
all fix~Baraatje123 wrote:
Merry Christmas!
[General]
Easy and Normal have a green line at the start of the map, which is useless, as it's 1.00, and has the same values as the red line. It's not important, but consider removing it (so automod doesn't give notifications )
[Easy]
00:42:427 (1) - This slider has a custom slidertick, as opposed to the others, consider adding 2 green lines around the slider tick to make it a normal one
01:51:251 (3) - It's generally a bad idea to end a slider on a strong sound, consider reversing the previous slider, and add a circle at the downbeat, when you change this, also look out for the overlap (01:51:251 (3,2) - )
4 circles, lol
[Normal]
00:45:957 (2,3) - It's generally a bad idea to end a slider on a strong sound, consider removing reverse on slider (2), and add a circle at the downbeat
00:56:545 (4,1) - Be careful with the overlaps!
Good diff, but needs more polishing, as in blankets, and imperfect stacks
[Hard]
00:40:839 (3,4,1) - This flow is quite awkward
00:59:016 (4,5,1) - Because of the stack, this jump plays weirdly, and makes it really hard, as there is no leniency now, with 1 circle you can move over it, but with a stack you need to stay in place
02:01:486 (1,2) - Distance is quite confusing here
Hmm, this is the first time I've seen a hard with so many jumps! It is cool, but there are soo many overlaps which whould be removed
[Insane]
02:02:192 (1,2,3) - Feels a bit undermapped, as the vocals are 1/2, not 1/1
I like this set
Get a few more mods, and it should be fine, you can call me then
wow OK!!!!
fixed everything! thanks for mod! http://puu.sh/m7Q4j.tarBaraatje123 wrote:
Merry Christmas!
[Sonodaumi]
Seriously? SonodaUmi? lol
01:10:663 (1,2) - Feels a bit slow, as it's all really spaced, try 1.5 spacing
01:39:780 (2) - Is there a need for a 1/4 slider? I don't hear anything at the blue tick, a 1/2 circle (with jump) would be better imo
I like this set
Get a few more mods, and it should be fine, you can call me then
すべて修正しました~Satellite wrote:
support for xmas
[General][Easy]
- soft-finishのdelayだけ少し気になる
dq怖いのでsoftfinish消しといた[Normal]
- 01:51:604 (3,1) - Nc入れ替えが好ましいかも
[Hard]
- Easyと比較して結構つめてる感じがあったので、こちらのNormalはそのままでEasyの 01:30:074 - こういった箇所にadd noteしてもいいかもしれません、がそのままで通るのであればそのままでもgoodです
[Insane]
- 00:38:898 (5,6,1) - 56でジャンプになってますが、どうせ話すなら61で話したほうが自然だと思います
- 00:58:045 (1,1) - やっぱ違和感すっごいしこっちのほうがよくない?
looks good! merry christmas ! =w=