from queue
sorry late -/\- im busy before

every "?" lines just an opinon
better maping = read this t/152263

[General]

you can add in Tags :
- Yamada-kun to 7-nin no Majo (Romanised Title)
- yuka (help lyric&composer)

Source

[Kantan]

00:04:388 (3,4) - d d is boring if make k k k k
00:14:138 - delete, to hard for beginner
00:14:888 - k , better sound
00:27:638 - d ?
01:01:388 - delete, to hard for beginner
01:08:888 - d ?
01:17:888 - delete, to hard for beginner

[Futsuu]

00:08:513 - delete for spacing, weird for beginner meet ddd
00:23:888 - d, low sound
00:26:888 - ^
00:32:138 - ^
00:40:388 (61,62,63) - ctrl+G
00:43:388 - d
00:59:138 (102,103) - ctrl+G ?
01:01:388 - delete, this weird . and 01:02:138 - move 01:01:763 -
01:08:888 - d

[Muzukashi]

00:05:199 - ctrl+G ,better sound
00:05:888 - following up^, this sound same 00:04:763 - so change d
00:16:950 - d
00:18:075 - ^
00:38:513 (95,96) - ctrl+G , this following vocal right ? sounds better with this
00:39:263 - delete or change d
00:53:513 - add d, here not silence
00:59:138 (161,162,163) - ctrl+G, better sound
01:19:575 - delete "?"

sorry not much but hope helpfull
Good Luck ~

[R] wrote:

from queue
sorry late -/\- im busy before

every "?" lines just an opinon
better maping = read this t/152263 Already read this

[General]

you can add in Tags :
- Yamada-kun to 7-nin no Majo (Romanised Title) Done
- yuka (help lyric&composer)

Done

Source

[Kantan]

00:04:388 (3,4) - d d is boring if make k k k k Well, it's a Kantan, so I think this is fine, and it'll conflict with the other difficulties.
00:14:138 - delete, to hard for beginner Done
00:14:888 - k , better sound I think it's fine the way it is.
00:27:638 - d ? Same pitch as previous hit to me. Also, it'll keep it simpler.
01:01:388 - delete, to hard for beginner Deleted hit at 01:00:638 instead.
01:08:888 - d ? No change.
01:17:888 - delete, to hard for beginner

Deleted hit at 01:17:138 instead.

[Futsuu]

00:08:513 - delete for spacing, weird for beginner meet ddd Done
00:23:888 - d, low sound Makes sense, but I'd like to keep most of the hits consistent throughout all difficulties, where the k makes more sense.
00:26:888 - ^ ^
00:32:138 - ^ ^
00:40:388 (61,62,63) - ctrl+G Done
00:43:388 - d I think the pitch of the vocals is higher than the previous hit, no change.
00:59:138 (102,103) - ctrl+G ? Done, did the same in the Muzukashii.
01:01:388 - delete, this weird . and 01:02:138 - move 01:01:763 - It is weird, but the way you do it seems weirder to me. If I arranged the hits to match the vocals perfectly, It'd be too hard so I decided that the rhythm I have now is the best.
01:08:888 - d

The pitch of the vocals on this hit is higher than ones coming. No change.

[Muzukashi]

00:05:199 - ctrl+G ,better sound Done
00:05:888 - following up^, this sound same 00:04:763 - so change d I don't think so. No change.
00:16:950 - d There's a faint cymbal sound that would be suitable for a k in this section. No change.
00:18:075 - ^ ^
00:38:513 (95,96) - ctrl+G , this following vocal right ? sounds better with this Done, did the same thing with hits 92/93.
00:39:263 - delete or change d Deleted
00:53:513 - add d, here not silence From what I learned from mapping, it's better to have more rests, especially after the hard part of a song, so I decided not to.
00:59:138 (161,162,163) - ctrl+G, better sound ctrl + G for hits 161/162. Done.
01:19:575 - delete "?"

Same thing with the thing regarding rests.

sorry not much but hope helpfull
Good Luck ~

Thanks for your mod~

Hi ^w^, from my queue~

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)

[ Kantan]

00:32:138 - Change to d for the pattern in this part.
00:56:138 - Ctrl G is better.

[ Futsuu]

00:14:888 - Change to k because to follow the pattern.

[ Muzukashii]

00:13:013 - Change to k because for the rhythm in this part.
00:46:200 - Change to k.

[ Oni]

Is fine for me.

[ Inner Oni]

Nice.

Nice Beatmap! I hope my mod has been helpful you :3, Good luck~ ~

game rock wrote:

Hi ^w^, from my queue~

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)

[ Kantan]

00:32:138 - Change to d for the pattern in this part. The pitch is higher on this hit than the previous hit imo.
00:56:138 - Ctrl G is better. Done

[ Futsuu]

00:14:888 - Change to k because to follow the pattern. I think it sounds better as a d.

[ Muzukashii]

00:13:013 - Change to k because for the rhythm in this part. Done
00:46:200 - Change to k. Done in both Futsuu and Muzukashii

[ Oni]

Is fine for me.

[ Inner Oni]

Nice.

Nice Beatmap! I hope my mod has been helpful you :3, Good luck~ ~

Thanks for your mod

Hi=~=

From my Queues!

(I love this artist~!!)





Finish~ Good luck

EdamaMe411 wrote:

Hi=~=

From my Queues!

(I love this artist~!!)

General

Why Approach rate is 10?wwww lol I'll change it but doesn't matter
you need to change 5~6

Kantan

00:28:388 (26) - d......Considering the flow of your map ever,you should follow vocal pitch!! Done, changed 00:26:888 (24) as well.

00:46:388 (45) - K,,,,To separate because changing music image Sure.


Almost Good

Futsuu

00:08:888 (10,11,12) - NO BIG Tripletin Futsuu. Please center Big note delete!!! Done but tbh I think it's fine -.-'

00:28:388 (43) - d ,,,,same reason in kantan Matched with Kantan.

00:33:638 (48,49) - a little Irregular pattern,,,Why don't you 00:33:825 (49) - delete and 00:33:638 (48) - Big note? I think it's fine the way it is, no change.

00:46:388 (71) - K,,,,,same reason in kantan Done for all diffs except for Inner Oni.

01:04:200 (113) - move to 01:03:825 - ,,,In order to claim 01:04:388 (114) - Done

01:07:388 (120,121,122) - add Big? I see what you're getting at, but in tester mode, I liked it without finishers.

01:12:450 (132) - move to 01:12:075 - Done

01:21:075 (151) - deltele. above same reason Done

Muzu

if you follow vocal in intro,00:07:013 (12) - delete No change; matching more towards the instrumentals near the end of the beginning section.

00:08:513 (16) - k and 00:08:700 (17) - delete,,,,a little noisy against music Done
00:13:200 (31) - move to 00:12:825 - I think it's fine the way it is.

00:14:138 (35) - move to 00:14:325 - and 00:14:513 (36) - d,,,,,,follow piano(interesting note pattern ) Done

00:16:200 (41) - move to 00:15:450 - ^ Hmm will consider but for now no change.
01:02:513 (168) - delete......please make rest point~ Done

01:08:138 (190) - 01:08:888 (192) - add Big? Done, unlike Futsuu, because there's no hits in between in that diff.

01:13:950 (210) - move to 01:14:138 - ,,,you need not to follow back music in this point Either way, it's following the instrumentals, so I think it should be fine.

inner Oni

00:03:263 (6) - delete!!!! Done
00:04:013 (7) - delete!!,,,,Because so much note is not necessary Did a lot of note removing and fixes, and fixed some difficulty curves with the Oni as a result of that.

etc----------

This music is quiet song. so you need not to put a lot of notes,,make more rest point,and you should Strength in this beatmap!

Finish~ Good luck

Thanks for your mod

Hi, Newyams, from my queue

So, diff's looks good
It's finished. Good luck on rank

From my mod queue

Muzukashii
00:11:513 (26,27) - Ctrl+G
00:14:325 (35,36) - Ctrl+G
01:17:325 (221) - Turn this to Kat?

Oni
00:04:763 (8) - Turn this to Don?
00:49:388 (176) - Turn this to Kat?

Inner Oni
00:02:513 (4) - Turn this to Don?
00:04:388 (7,10) - Turn this to Don?
00:08:888 (24,25) - Turn this to large Kat?
00:42:638 (181) - Turn this to Kat?

That's all I found, nice map , good luck on getting ranked.

Skeuddy wrote:

Hi, Newyams, from my queue

Kantan

• All ok

Futsuu

1. 00:56:888 (94,96) - Swap I think it's fine the way it is. Hit 96 sounds like the same pitch as the next, and hit 94 was more matched to the high pitched instrumentals. No change.
   Other good

Muzukashii

1. 00:18:638 (48) - k Done for all diffs.
2. 00:55:200 - Some note Added k.
3. 00:57:450 - ^ The vocals aren't the loudest thing here, so I think it's fine as is. No change.
4. 01:09:263 (193) - Delete Hmm, I feel it breaks the flow a bit too much. No change.
5. 00:56:513 (149,150) - Swap

No change, matched to the instrumentals here.

Oni

1. 00:21:263 (80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88) - This idk, this part's very subjective.
2. 00:38:701 (133) - Delete This'll make the rhythm inconsistent if I do that, no change.
3. 01:02:888 (244,245) - Swap Same thing in Muzukashii.
4. 01:16:013 (313) to 01:16:575

Done, changed a bit more stuff around as well.

Inner Oni

1. 00:39:919 (166) to 00:39:731 No change, I'd like to keep it consistent with these back to back triplets.
2. 01:18:450 (402,403) - Swap

Sure, why not? Done for Oni as well.
So, diff's looks good
It's finished. Good luck on rank

Thanks for your mod

Sirade wrote:

From my mod queue

Muzukashii
00:11:513 (26,27) - Ctrl+G Didn't do this, but made me realize some other changes.
00:14:325 (35,36) - Ctrl+G I think the pitch goes down from here, no change.
01:17:325 (221) - Turn this to Kat? I think the pitch of the vocals goes down here as well. No change.

Oni
00:04:763 (8) - Turn this to Don? I think it's fine as is.
00:49:388 (176) - Turn this to Kat? Done

Inner Oni
00:02:513 (4) - Turn this to Don? Same as Oni
00:04:388 (7,10) - Turn this to Don? I'd like to keep this section mainly k's since it's quiet.
00:08:888 (24,25) - Turn this to large Kat? This is fine with D's since they sound the same.
00:42:638 (181) - Turn this to Kat? I matched to the instrumentals here, no change.

That's all I found, nice map , good luck on getting ranked.

Sorry for many denies
Thanks for your mod

Not even surprised it got rejected lol
Mod From TNA queue:

Nwolf wrote:

1. mimimemeMIMI - CANDY MAGIC
   
   1. The patterns do not follow the song well enough.
   2. Oni and Inner Oni are too similar to each other

Note: Not all changes are listed.
Patterns
This suggestion wasn't very specific but I tried the best I can to make better patterns, especially in the easier diffs (I guess this was mainly a problem with the Futsuu and Inner Oni).
List of Changes:

Oni (After Inner Oni deletion changes)

00:01:388 (1,2,3,4,5) - Changed to k d k d k (space represents 1/2 rest), same with Muzukashii where present.

00:04:763 (8,9) - Ctrl + G these two hits to match vocals.

00:10:763 (30,31) - ^ to match instrumentals.

00:12:638 (37) - Changed to d.

00:13:013 (40) - Changed to k.

00:17:700 (64) - Moved to 00:18:825 to match instrumentals.

00:19:200 (70) - Deleted, there wasn't much of a sound here.

00:26:888 (97,98,99) - Switched colours. I forgot to when I changed the previous set xD

00:45:263 (169) - Changed to k to match Muzukashii.

00:57:263 (228,229,230,231) - Switched the colours of all these hits to match the vocals.

01:09:263 (294) - Changed to d.

01:09:356 (295) - Deleted.

01:09:544 (297) - ^

Muzukashii

00:10:763 - Made a rhythm : k d d k to match instrumentals (a space is a 1/4 rest)

00:49:388 (129,130,131,132) - Changed colours to match vocal pitch.

00:45:825 - Added a d,

01:11:138 (206,207,208,209) - Switched the colours of these hits to match vocal pitch.

01:12:075 (210) - Changed to d, since vocals pitch are the same through the next two hits as well.

Futsuu

00:12:263 (15) - Changed to d.

00:23:888 (39) - ^

00:55:013 (92,93) - Ctrl + G

01:01:013 - Did some rearranging around here.

Oni and Inner Oni similarities
I considered deleting the Inner Oni before this was mentioned, but I wasn't sure.
List of changes as a result of this, Inner Oni to Futsuu for easier reasoning:

DELETED Inner Oni. To compensate for the deletion, made the Oni fairly harder and the Muzukashii and Futsuu slightly harder to compensate for the difficulty gaps.

Oni

00:21:075 - Added a d to match instrumentals. This might make it too long without a rest break. idk.

00:21:638 (99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107) - Copy pasted this stream from the Inner Oni to Oni, to match instrumentals.

00:33:356 - Added a k to match Inner Oni and match instrumentals.

00:38:325 - Added a d to match instrumentals.

00:38:794 - ^

00:39:825 - ^

00:40:013 - Added a k to match instrumentals.

00:40:013 - Added a d.

00:40:950 - Added a k.

00:41:138 (150) - Changed to d. I decided to match more towards the instrumentals now that the Inner Oni is gone.

00:51:638 (227,228,229,230,231,232,233,234,235) - Copy pasted this stream from Inner Oni to Oni.

00:53:794 - Added a d.

00:56:794 (226) - Added a k.

01:03:263 (302,303,304,305,306,307,308,309,310,311) - Copy pasted 1/3 stream from Inner Oni to Oni.

01:08:513 (290) - Added a d.

01:10:106 - Added a k.

01:15:450 (328) - Added a d.

Muzukashii

00:12:825 - Added a d.

00:21:731 (61) - ^ To make a triplet for a better difficulty curve for stream in Oni.

00:22:013 - Made a kkk triplet from for better difficulty curve for stream in Oni.

00:40:013 - Added k.

00:46:106 - Added a d to make triplet for a better difficulty curve.

Futsuu

00:22:200 - Added a d

This might need a bit more mods now.

I am back here, just to see my Mod in page 1. lol so ngeh, dem ^ that pozt.

Hey, From my queue. Late af but I had alot come up.

GENERAL

Not too certain on this point, but I question the use of the Timing points at the end of the map, Sure the timing does change there but there are no notes there on any difficulty, it just creates bar lines moving at different speeds behind the spinner at the end.

KANTAN

Not a whole lot to say here. the map is so slow that most of the note placement is irrelevant just because it's timed properly. However if you could I'd like to see the sliders removed. Hitting the ticks on the sliders is simply too fast for something this slow, so get rid of them if you can.

FUTSUU

00:50:888 - (83,84) Don't like the overlap having both of these as large reds causes, probably insignificant but it'd look nicer in reading and really not change the play ability at all if the first of the two was a small red.

01:12:075 - (131,132) Not really liking this pattern because it's the only break in consistency in the entire map.

MUZUKASHI

00:57:638 - (159 - 163) This is really irritating in game, The pattern would be nicer if it were either (r,b,r,r,b) or (r,b,b,r,r) Rather than what it is right now. This single red tap on 162 is pretty well only in this pattern in the song.

01:19:388 - (234 - 241) The emphasis on this pattern is weird to me. Frankly I don't wee why you couldn't just do it in sets of threes (b,r,r) and instead want to have three doubles.

ONI

I'm at a bit of a loss as to what to point at, But this diff just doesn't seem to fit at all, Listening to the song, Much of it is just over-mapped and the patterns are based on what you like as a pattern rather than what's in the song. Frankly with a song like this that's on the gentle side I'm not sure an Oni diff is really suitable at all.

Well that's it. I tried, Don't have nearly the experience in modding Taiko as I do in other modes but I hope some of what I said can be useful to you. GL with the mapset.

TheOnlyLeon wrote:

Hey, From my queue. Late af but I had alot come up. That's fine, I'm usually late af on my mods too.

GENERAL

Not too certain on this point, but I question the use of the Timing points at the end of the map, Sure the timing does change there but there are no notes there on any difficulty, it just creates bar lines moving at different speeds behind the spinner at the end. Well, there is a spinner. Also, my friend was the one that pointed this out to me, saying that the ranked standard mapset has these. Plus, it doesn't really affect anything.

KANTAN

Not a whole lot to say here. the map is so slow that most of the note placement is irrelevant just because it's timed properly. However if you could I'd like to see the sliders removed. Hitting the ticks on the sliders is simply too fast for something this slow, so get rid of them if you can. I can't really do that :/ The slider tick rate is at its lowest.

FUTSUU

00:50:888 - (83,84) Don't like the overlap having both of these as large reds causes, probably insignificant but it'd look nicer in reading and really not change the play ability at all if the first of the two was a small red. Here, the D's are focused on the very emphasized instrumentals; it's very different from the previous pair. This is analogous in standard to having a bigger jump here than the last pair of 2.

01:12:075 - (131,132) Not really liking this pattern because it's the only break in consistency in the entire map. Hmm, I can see what you're saying, but there's nothing really good that I can make that would fit a good Futsuu difficulty range.

MUZUKASHI

00:57:638 - (159 - 163) This is really irritating in game, The pattern would be nicer if it were either (r,b,r,r,b) or (r,b,b,r,r) Rather than what it is right now. This single red tap on 162 is pretty well only in this pattern in the song. I changed it to kdddk.

01:19:388 - (234 - 241) The emphasis on this pattern is weird to me. Frankly I don't wee why you couldn't just do it in sets of threes (b,r,r) and instead want to have three doubles. Except for hit 234, I'm matching it entirely on vocals. I did however change one spot, thanks

ONI

I'm at a bit of a loss as to what to point at, But this diff just doesn't seem to fit at all, Listening to the song, Much of it is just over-mapped and the patterns are based on what you like as a pattern rather than what's in the song. Frankly with a song like this that's on the gentle side I'm not sure an Oni diff is really suitable at all. First of all, this mapset used to have an Inner Oni difficulty Second, Taiko is a mode where adding hits where there's no instrumentals present, it just kinda fits. You can see this in numerous Taiko Onis and Inner Onis, especially around the 4-5 star level (as maps get harder, overmapping usually matches the song). Standard mapping is mapped relatively on a 1/2 basis, other rhythms and streams present only where there's actual instrumentals. Taiko is a gamemode named after an instrument and it's mapping style is just like that; it's as if it was a whole new instrument in the song.

Well that's it. I tried, Don't have nearly the experience in modding Taiko as I do in other modes but I hope some of what I said can be useful to you. GL with the mapset. Hopefully you've read my reply. It's great that you're learning how to mod (play and map too maybe) Taiko. I've explained some things about Taiko mapping, especially in the hardest difficulty about it. When it comes to modding, you should also gain experience by playing the mode as well. It's definitely challenging to transfer modding and mapping perspectives from a standard standpoint (that's a mouthful to say: 'standard standpoint') to a more Taiko standpoint. No matter how you respond in any mods, I think in cases like this, it's important to keep an open-minded mindset to modding modes you're not used to. Keep trying, and you'll come to understand more things about Taiko and it's quirks and differences from standard. Ok I'll stop now. I sound like an English teacher lol

Sorry for replying so late. I didn't check up on this map for a while. Thanks for the mod

Hello from my Queue @.<

[ Kantan]

1. 00:33:638 (31) - Finish
   
2. 00:50:888 (49) - k
   
3. 01:02:888 (62) - k

[ Futsuu]

1. 01:06:638 (118,119) - d k

[ Muzukashii]

1. 01:18:638 (233) - Finish (High!)

Can't do your Bitmap is perfect to moding XD...


Short so I'm sorry.... T.T

BeoMu wrote:

Hello from my Queue @.<

[ Kantan]

1. 00:33:638 (31) - Finish That actually sounds pretty nice Did for all diffs thx~
   
2. 00:50:888 (49) - k Sure why not. Done
   
3. 01:02:888 (62) - k Done

[ Futsuu]

1. 01:06:638 (118,119) - d k Um... I edited some other stuff in this diff and I can't really figure out what ur suggesting lol x.x But I do want to keep this rhythm as is

[ Muzukashii]

1. 01:18:638 (233) - Finish (High!) I'd like to keep this as a regular hit, since consistency might be an issue.

Can't do your Bitmap is perfect to moding XD... That's ok if it was short. I just needed a couple of more mods. Also, it helped me with lots of other things, even in the Oni


Short so I'm sorry.... T.T

Thanks for your mod~

Hi, mod request from my queue.

[Kantan]

1. 00:35:513 (33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40) - There is much 1/1. Why don't you change rhythm?

[Muzu]

1. 00:32:888 (83) - change to d? When I considered a vocal sound.

[Oni]

1. 00:53:513 (209) - change to k? I think is better.

That's all. Good luck.

SKSalt wrote:

Hi, mod request from my queue.

[Kantan]

1. 00:35:513 (33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40) - There is much 1/1. Why don't you change rhythm? I didn't even realize that my consistency was bad there -_- Changed.

[Muzu]

1. 00:32:888 (83) - change to d? When I considered a vocal sound. I guess it's true that the vocals do go down, but this is much different to the previous d k d, with the difference of pitch that is much larger. No change.

[Oni]

1. 00:53:513 (209) - change to k? I think is better. Hmmm... I think the k sound is a bit too loud there if I had this hit as a k. No change, but will keep in mind.

That's all. Good luck.

Thanks for your mod

hi from my mod Q ;3

[Kantan]

1. HD is toooo low....change to 7
2. OD too,change to 3
3. 01:20:138 - add d?　 not satisfactory now

[Futsuu]

1. SVmultiplier,change to x1.0 in all.It should't be used in futsuu.
2. HD change to 6
3. OD4
4. I have no knowledge about Futsuu. I think this is ok ;w;

[Muzukashii]

1. SVmultiplier,change to x1.0 in all.It should't be used in Muzukashii.
2. 00:52:763 (145) - move to 00:53:700 ?
3. 00:58:763 (167) - delete? for break

[Oni]

1. 00:35:325 (120,121,122) - change to kkk?

Nice map ;3 GL!

ManP wrote:

hi from my mod Q ;3

[Kantan]

1. HD is toooo low....change to 7 Will do, just that this is an old map
2. OD too,change to 3 Same as above, changed.
3. 01:20:138 - add d?　 not satisfactory now Sure, why not

[Futsuu]

1. SVmultiplier,change to x1.0 in all.It should't be used in futsuu. Ok, changed
2. HD change to 6 Done
3. OD4 Done
4. I have no knowledge about Futsuu. I think this is ok ;w;

[Muzukashii]

1. SVmultiplier,change to x1.0 in all.It should't be used in Muzukashii. I think leaving it as is is fine imo, since it's a very easy SV change but will keep in mind.
2. 00:52:763 (145) - move to 00:53:700 ? I'm guessing you're matching with the violin here, but I personally prefer just keeping it matched to mainly the beat. No change.
3. 00:58:763 (167) - delete? for break Done

[Oni]

1. 00:35:325 (120,121,122) - change to kkk? I changed it to kkd instead.

Nice map ;3 GL!

Thanks for your mod

Hello.
For M4M.






Pretty nice mapset. Good luck getting it ranked.

Jaltzu wrote:

Hello.
For M4M.

General

Do those 3 timing points at the end have any meaning? Especially since there's only 1 spinner overlapping them all.
Yeah I know about it. Aerous told me that I should, and I don't see any harm in adding them.

Kantan

00:15:638 (13) - k You're contrasting with the previous hit, while I'm contrasting with the next. Works either way, but I'd prefer to keep it. No change.

Futsuu

01:01:575 (110,111) - dk I like kd better. No change.

Muzukashii

Maybe HP 5? Done
00:13:388 (34) - k I want to contrast with the previous hit. No change.
00:15:638 (41) - k Done, changed hit 40 to d.
00:27:638 (75) - ↑ The pitch goes down slightly, so no change.
01:01:575 (174,175) - dk Same thing as before.

Oni

00:27:638 (99) - k I think d would match better. No change.
00:50:325 - Add d Hmmm I'd like to strictly match to the vocals here. No change.
01:00:263 (248,249,250) - kdk Done, but change to kdd, not kdk.
? 01:01:388 (255) - Maybe delete? Done
01:05:419 - Add d. Follows the same rhythm as 00:53:325 (208,209,210) I see the consistency issue, but I think there's an instrument (idk what it is) that isn't present, and that was the instrument that made me put in the ddd. No change.
01:08:700 and 01:08:794 - Add d I actually used to have this, but I decided that this is the highest point of the song, so I want to keep it strictly to the vocals. No change.


01:13:575 - Add d I don't really hear an instrument hear. No change.
01:20:794 - Add k I want a clean three finishers in a row, so I can't add this No change.

Pretty nice mapset. Good luck getting it ranked.

Thanks for your mod. Will have your map modded soon

Hihi ~ from your M4M queue

ahh , it's my first taiko mod , maybe it will be quite immature , but let me take a try lool


Good luck ~~

Xinchii wrote:

Hihi ~ from your M4M queue

ahh , it's my first taiko mod , maybe it will be quite immature , but let me take a try lool That's ok It's about the learning process

[Kantan]

1. Seems good

[Futsuu]

1. 00:10:388 (13) - cheack this slider ? I guess it stop at a awkward timing.. Oh, oops. I changed the SV in a previous mod and forgot to change the length of the slider. Done.
2. 01:13:388 (138) - ^ Done.

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:34:950 (89) - k ? like Oni diff did , also symmetry with 00:36:450 (94) - I see what you're thinking, but in the Muzukashii, this hit is matched to the vocals (which is going down) while in the Oni it is a k because that is where the instrumentals are present. No change.
2. 00:37:950 - , 00:38:325 - I think these point's durm sound are more obvious.
   maybe delete 00:38:138 (99) - and add these point Done at 00:37:950, but it might be too hard if I added it at 00:38:325. I chose not to do your idea because it would be kind of similar to the Oni, and I'm matching more to the vocals.

[Oni]

1. 00:01:763 (2) - , 00:04:763 (8) - I think this part is really soft and gentle , just feel note are too much currently in my view
   suggest you can delete these 2 note and keep the pare like Muzu diff
   like you did at 00:22:388 - 00:32:888 - part (they're similar feeling I think) Hahahaha, I guess you could say that I originally had an Inner Oni where there was hit every 1/1 so I think this is ok XD Also, I think the beginning is a bit louder in terms of the overall feel. idk :/
2. 00;34:763 (118) - delete ? I think that the instrumentals here is a bit to loud to ignore. No change.
3. 00:36:263 (126) - ^ ^
4. 00:47:888 (182) - k ? I think the pitch is lower here. No change.
5. 00:57:450 (232) - d ? guess this pitch will better fit with I'd like to use a k here to distinguish a difference with the next pattern. No change.
6. 01:07:294 - add a note here ? the durm sound is clear Done.

Good luck ~~

Thanks for your mod

Hi, here comes a taiko mod as requested in TNA queue.

• [General]

1. Tags: add "Takao Yuki" (the vocalist)
2. 01:22:200 (1) - the spinner is a bit loud atm. Consider lowering the volume like this for all diffs ?
3. You may add green lines at the following timing points in all diffs for a better view:
   01:23:138 - 1.6x
   01:23:738 - 1.63x
   01:24:350 - 1.82x

• [Kantan]
  
  SV 1.4 is recommended since the song BPM is not high.

1. 00:16:388 (14) - consider adding finish here for the strong cymbal sound ?
2. 00:19:388 (17) - 00:34:388 (32) - 00:40:388 (39) - 00:44:888 (44) - 00:49:388 (49) - same as ^
3. 00:49:763 - adding d here would result in a better spread with Futsuu
4. 00:54:263 - add d and 00:54:638 - add k ? Similar to ^ , you should use more 1/1 notes in the kiai.
5. 01:00:263 - add k and 01:00:638 - add d ? ^
6. 01:06:263 and 01:06:638 - same as 00:54:263 -
7. 01:10:388 (71) - same as 00:16:388 (14) -
8. 01:11:513 - same as 00:49:763 -
9. 01:13:013 (75) - move to 01:12:638 - and change to k ? This would fit the vocal in a way better.
10. 01:18:263 - maybe add k for the powerful vocal ?
11. 01:20:513 - add d and change 01:20:138 (81) - to k for the spread ?
12. 01:21:263 - you may end the kiai here to make it consistent with other difficulties.
13. 01:21:638 - moving this note to 01:21:638 - would be more intuitive for beginners imo.

• [Futsuu]

1. 00:16:200 (24) - move to 00:15:825 - and 00:16:388 (25,26,27,28,29) - add finish ? This would help emphasize the song imo.
2. 00:19:388 (31) - same as Kantan
3. From 00:23:888 to 00:28:388 - try to increase note density like this to improve the spread from Kantan to Muzukashii: (cursor at 00:26:138 - )
4. 00:31:763 - similar to ^ , you may add d here.
5. 00:34:388 (51) - same as Kantan
6. 00:34:950 (52) and 00:36:450 (55) - k would accompany the higher-pitched vocal there.
7. 00:38:513 (59,60) - swapping these notes to d k would accompany the pitch increase well.
8. 00:40:388 (62) - 00:44:888 (71) - 00:49:388 (81) - same as Kantan
9. 00:45:450 - same as 00:31:763 -
10. From 00:51:638 to 00:52:013 - I think you should add 1/2 d d k to reduce the difficulty gap with Muzukashii.
11. 00:52:950 (88) - d would be better as vocal pitch is the same as 00:53:138 (89) -
12. 00:55:950 - try to add k here in order to cohere with the note at 00:52:950 -
13. 01:09:450 (127) - same as 00:52:950 (88) -
14. 01:10:388 (130) - same as Kantan
15. 01:11:138 (131) - k would work better as it has the same pitch as 01:11:700 (133) -

• [Muzukashii]

1. 00:01:388 - try to set SV as 1.0x here. It is not recommended to use SV changes in lower difficulties.
2. 00:10:388 (23) - I think you may have missed the finish here ?
3. 00:16:388 (44,46,47,49,50) - same as Futsuu
4. 00:19:388 (53) - 00:40:388 (106) - 00:44:888 (120) - 00:49:388 (133) - same as Kantan
5. 00:45:919 - you should add d here for a better spread with Oni.
6. 00:58:200 (166) - maybe k as you did in Futsuu ?
7. 00:59:700 - same as 00:45:919 -
8. 01:10:388 (207) - same as Kantan. Then you may delete 01:10:575 (208) - for a smoother flow.
9. 01:13:388 (220) - same as 00:10:388 (23) -
10. 01:16:763 (230) - k would fit the vocal well as its pitch is the same as 01:16:388 (228,232) -

• [Oni]

1. 00:01:388 - I think 0.9x would be enough for the slowdown. 0.75x is a bit abrupt comparing with the upcoming song pace imo.
2. 00:10:388 (29) - same as Muzukashii
3. 00:16:388 (57,60,63,65,67) - same as Futsuu
4. 00:18:825 (68) - you may change this note to d and add d at 00:18:919 - afterwards if you change ^ for a better flow.
5. 00:18:263 - add d for the noticeable beat there ?
6. 00:19:388 (71) - same as Kantan
7. 00:28:950 - add d and 00:29:513 - add k to follow the vocal ? I found that you have exactly the same pattern as Muzukashii from 00:22:388 to 00:32:888 -
8. 00:41:325 (152) - move to 00:41:700 and 00:42:075 (155) - move to 00:42:263 - ? This would flow in a way smoother.
9. 00:49:388 (189) - same as Kantan
10. 00:53:513 (211) - k and delete 00:53:794 (213) - ? It seems too hard compared to the 2/1 break in Muzukashii.
11. 00:55:950 (224,225) - swapping these notes to k d could match the pitch drop nicely.
12. 00:58:763 (240,242) - same as ^ . Then you may move 00:59:419 (244) - to 00:59:044 - and change 00:59:513 (245) - to k for variation.
13. 01:09:263 (293) - maybe k as you did in Muzukashii ?
14. 01:10:388 (300) - same as Kantan
15. 01:16:763 (332) - same as Muzukashii
16. 01:17:419 - add d here to make this part slightly harder than Muzukashii ?

You may call me back after that~

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hi, here comes a taiko mod as requested in TNA queue.

• [General]

1. Tags: add "Takao Yuki" (the vocalist) Done.
2. 01:22:200 (1) - the spinner is a bit loud atm. Consider lowering the volume like this for all diffs ? Done
3. You may add green lines at the following timing points in all diffs for a better view: Done.
   01:23:138 - 1.6x
   01:23:738 - 1.63x
   01:24:350 - 1.82x

• [Kantan]
  
  SV 1.4 is recommended since the song BPM is not high. Done

1. 00:16:388 (14) - consider adding finish here for the strong cymbal sound ? Sounds good.
2. 00:19:388 (17) - 00:34:388 (32) - 00:40:388 (39) - 00:44:888 (44) - 00:49:388 (49) - same as ^ Done for hit 17 and 32.For the other three, I wanted to focus more on the vocals. Also, I felt that although similar, it wasn't to be as emphasized as places like hit 14 and 17, where it's almost like the highest point of the instrumentals with all that's happening with the cymbal sounds between hits 14 and 17, or where hit 32 where it is like a transition from a quiet to a medium loud section.
3. 00:49:763 - adding d here would result in a better spread with Futsuu Done.
4. 00:54:263 - add d and 00:54:638 - add k ? Similar to ^ , you should use more 1/1 notes in the kiai. Done. Will add more 1/1 in more of my Kantans from now on
5. 01:00:263 - add k and 01:00:638 - add d ? ^ Yep, thought of that looking at the previous suggestion. Done.
6. 01:06:263 and 01:06:638 - same as 00:54:263 - Done.
7. 01:10:388 (71) - same as 00:16:388 (14) - I'd like to keep this without a finisher because it isn't as loud as the previous two hits here which have finisher. With a finisher, the contrasting effect isn't as great imo. No change.
8. 01:11:513 - same as 00:49:763 - Done.
9. 01:13:013 (75) - move to 01:12:638 - and change to k ? This would fit the vocal in a way better. Done.
10. 01:18:263 - maybe add k for the powerful vocal ? Sure.
11. 01:20:513 - add d and change 01:20:138 (81) - to k for the spread ? Done.
12. 01:21:263 - you may end the kiai here to make it consistent with other difficulties. Oh oops. Didn't notice that
13. 01:21:638 - moving this note to 01:21:638 - would be more intuitive for beginners imo. Sure.

• [Futsuu]

1. 00:16:200 (24) - move to 00:15:825 - and 00:16:388 (25,26,27,28,29) - add finish ? This would help emphasize the song imo. Ok, done.
2. 00:19:388 (31) - same as Kantan Done.
3. From 00:23:888 to 00:28:388 - try to increase note density like this to improve the spread from Kantan to Muzukashii: (cursor at 00:26:138 - ) Done.
4. 00:31:763 - similar to ^ , you may add d here. I'd like to keep this strictly to the vocals. No change.
5. 00:34:388 (51) - same as Kantan Done.
6. 00:34:950 (52) and 00:36:450 (55) - k would accompany the higher-pitched vocal there. Done.
7. 00:38:513 (59,60) - swapping these notes to d k would accompany the pitch increase well. Done.
8. 00:40:388 (62) - 00:44:888 (71) - 00:49:388 (81) - same as Kantan As said before, no change.
9. 00:45:450 - same as 00:31:763 - I think it's fine the way it is; adding a hit here sounds kind of weird imo. Maybe it does need some difficulty tweaking, this would make the hit placement inconsistent with the Muzukashii. Perhaps adding a hit at 00:46:200 would be better? idk.
10. From 00:51:638 to 00:52:013 - I think you should add 1/2 d d k to reduce the difficulty gap with Muzukashii. Ok, done.
11. 00:52:950 (88) - d would be better as vocal pitch is the same as 00:53:138 (89) - Done.
12. 00:55:950 - try to add k here in order to cohere with the note at 00:52:950 - Added a k.
13. 01:09:450 (127) - same as 00:52:950 (88) - Done.
14. 01:10:388 (130) - same as Kantan As said before, no change.
15. 01:11:138 (131) - k would work better as it has the same pitch as 01:11:700 (133) -

Done.

• [Muzukashii]

1. 00:01:388 - try to set SV as 1.0x here. It is not recommended to use SV changes in lower difficulties. Ok, will keep in mind from now on.
2. 00:10:388 (23) - I think you may have missed the finish here ? lol that's just me being an inexperienced mapper. Done.
3. 00:16:388 (44,46,47,49,50) - same as Futsuu Done
4. 00:19:388 (53) - 00:40:388 (106) - 00:44:888 (120) - 00:49:388 (133) - same as Kantan Done for hit 53. No changes for the others, as explained before.
5. 00:45:919 - you should add d here for a better spread with Oni. Done.
6. 00:58:200 (166) - maybe k as you did in Futsuu ? Done
7. 00:59:700 - same as 00:45:919 - Done
8. 01:10:388 (207) - same as Kantan. Then you may delete 01:10:575 (208) - for a smoother flow. As said before in Kantan, No change.
9. 01:13:388 (220) - same as 00:10:388 (23) - Done
10. 01:16:763 (230) - k would fit the vocal well as its pitch is the same as 01:16:388 (228,232) -

Originally had it like this, but I felt it got to be too repetitive in the Oni. Changed back.

• [Oni]

1. 00:01:388 - I think 0.9x would be enough for the slowdown. 0.75x is a bit abrupt comparing with the upcoming song pace imo. Ok, sure.
2. 00:10:388 (29) - same as Muzukashii Done.
3. 00:16:388 (57,60,63,65,67) - same as Futsuu Done.
4. 00:18:825 (68) - you may change this note to d and add d at 00:18:919 - afterwards if you change ^ for a better flow. Done.
5. 00:18:263 - add d for the noticeable beat there ? Done.
6. 00:19:388 (71) - same as Kantan Done.
7. 00:28:950 - add d and 00:29:513 - add k to follow the vocal ? I found that you have exactly the same pattern as Muzukashii from 00:22:388 to 00:32:888 - Yeah, noticed that as I was applying the mods for the Futsuu. Done.
8. 00:41:325 (152) - move to 00:41:700 and 00:42:075 (155) - move to 00:42:263 - ? This would flow in a way smoother. Done.
9. 00:49:388 (189) - same as Kantan Again, no change.
10. 00:53:513 (211) - k and delete 00:53:794 (213) - ? It seems too hard compared to the 2/1 break in Muzukashii. Done.
11. 00:55:950 (224,225) - swapping these notes to k d could match the pitch drop nicely. Done.
12. 00:58:763 (240,242) - same as ^ . Then you may move 00:59:419 (244) - to 00:59:044 - and change 00:59:513 (245) - to k for variation. Done.
13. 01:09:263 (293) - maybe k as you did in Muzukashii ? Done.
14. 01:10:388 (300) - same as Kantan Again, no change.
15. 01:16:763 (332) - same as Muzukashii Done
16. 01:17:419 - add d here to make this part slightly harder than Muzukashii ?

Done.

You may call me back after that~

Thanks for the very thorough mod (as expected from a BN)

A quick recheck here. (no kd)

[General]

It seems that you didn't apply point 2 and 3 of the previous mod properly in all diffs (and Kantan is lacking the 50% green line).

• [Futsuu]

1. 00:38:513 (61,62) - I think you may have forgotten to change this to d k ?
2. 00:45:825 - you may add d at this point instead for the spread with Muzukashii.

• [Oni]

1. 00:18:919 - add d here ? Refer to the previous mod.
2. 00:58:763 (241,242) - k d ? ^

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

A quick recheck here. (no kd)

[General]

It seems that you didn't apply point 2 and 3 of the previous mod properly in all diffs (and Kantan is lacking the 50% green line). I swear I did all this lol
Fixed anyhow.

• [Futsuu]

1. 00:38:513 (61,62) - I think you may have forgotten to change this to d k ? I swear I remember doing this as well -_-
2. 00:45:825 - you may add d at this point instead for the spread with Muzukashii. Oh yeah, I forgot to mention about what I thought about that one in the PM. Sorry about that. Fixed, since this was different from the original mod.

• [Oni]

1. 00:18:919 - add d here ? Refer to the previous mod. Done.
2. 00:58:763 (241,242) - k d ? ^ Done.

Ok, hopefully this time I didn't miss anything. Thanks for the recheck

With the adjustment of difficulty spread and some pattern refinements, the set looks fine now.

Bubbled~

Hi ( ・∀・)ﾉ
Spread is fine , adjustment the dense looks good. But I’m not sure about the making some colors.
I suggest you to improve the each single diff.

And, if you cant understand the my english, I will explain you again in Japanese.


Good Luck (¦3[___]

JUDYDANNY wrote:

Hi ( ・∀・)ﾉ
Spread is fine , adjustment the dense looks good. But I’m not sure about the making some colors.
I suggest you to improve the each single diff.

And, if you cant understand the my english, I will explain you again in Japanese.

Symbol meaning

　

1. >> Normal suggestion.
   Big text >> Strong suggestion.
   >> Questionable imo.
   >>> Needs to improve some. (Rhythm is not good , plays or sounds weird)
   No comment >>simple (you can notice easily: just hits on drums or simple beats) , or already explained on the other place.

[Kantan]

• 
  00:17:888 (15,16,17) - k k D? too much the “k” sounds on the 8/1 barlines, (00:13:388 - , 00:16:388 - , 00:19:388 - , 00:22:388 -) Making a gap between to 00:22:388 – sounds better to fix the sounds pressure. Done the first part, but I don't really understand the second part of this suggestion. Will ask via PM.

1. 00:31:388 (28,29,30) – recommend to change the color …like kkd, followed to pitch down. 00:32:888 – any kinds of sounds is lower than00:31:388 -. Done.
   
2. 01:21:638 – remove ? drums playing finished , not same as 01:12:638 -. I think this is more kind to play as Kantan plater. I was trying to match the vocals, and the gap between the last hit and spinner seems very odd - odder than the one that it currently has. No change.
   
3. No need to touch such a style on Kantan. lol

[Futsuu]

1. 00:51:825 – remove , returning the sounds pressure as usual. Nardo suggested I had this, for difficult curve purposes. No change. I'll ask what sounds pressure is in the PM as well.
2. 00:14:888 - , 00:16:013 – change to k? we can listen to the pitch is up very easily. Did for the second hit, not the first; the first hit doesn't change in pitch in the instrumentals imo.
   
   00:19:013 (30,31,32) – kDd? idk, but recommend to change to the sounds pressure same as Kantan. Done.
   
3. 00:22:200 – move to 00:21:825 – and 00:22:013 – change to k? same as above. Done.
   
4. 00:23:888 (39,40,41) – kdk? Reflection with 00:25:388 (42,43,44,45) – d-dkd. This sounds exactly the same as 00:25:388 (42,43,44,45), so I think it'd be better to keep it consistent. No change.
   
5. 00:30:638 – add d? maybe sounds smoother to avoid the far gap between to 00:23:888 (1,2,3) - , 00:26:888 (1,2,3) -. Done.
   
6. 00:31:388 (48,49,50) – kkd same as Kantan. Done.
7. 00:46:013 – k? same as 14:888. Done.
   
8. 01:08:888 – maybe remove the finisher is better to me. not strong and 01:08:138 – this finisher is special case. For avoided to be confused.

If you could better explain why this shouldn't be emphasized in a way that I agree with, I'll change it. It'll be inconsistent with the rest of the difficulties if I changed this in only the Futsuu and Muzukashii.

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:10:200 – remove, high dense from begins the 1/2 playing imo. I want to keep this rhythm if I can, since it matches the instrumentals so well. You didn't
   
2. 00:19:013 (51,52,53) – kkD ? same as lower diffs. Done.
   00:26:138 – change to d , or 00:23:138 – k ? perfect matching as 00:23:138 -. Changed to d.
3. 00:29:138 (77) – change to d? same as lower diffs. I think it was already a d? idk :/
   
   00:34:950 – k? inconsistency the colors with…. E.g. 00:36:450 - , 00:38:138 - , 00:41:513 -. I think the reason for these differences was because I was matching to the vocals. No change.
   
4. 00:47:700 (129) – k? making a emphasized for different sounds between to 00:47:700 (129,130) -. Done.
   
5. 00:51:450 – remove, no need to add imo , same as Futsuu. Again, about the difficulty curve. No change.
   
6. 01:00:638 – change to k? same as Futsuu. I'd like to keep this as is; the pitch is well matched here imo.
   
7. 01:08:888 – same as Futsuu. Again, as said before. No change.

[Oni]

1. 00:09:638 – k? Kind to lead in the difference sound the piano. I like it how it is because it contrasts well with the next hit imo. No change.
2. 00:10:388 – D?, overemphasized to violin and vocal mixing. As a result of playing, I feel to lack of low-tone bass sounds (d) around here. Done.
   
3. 00:11:138 - d? nothing the link to after parts with violins.( 00:14:138 - ). Done.
   
4. 00:19:013 – k? , difference sound with other 1/4 dd. Done.
   
5. 00:19:388 – D? same as other diffs and making a gap sounds from 19:013 Done.
   
   00:23:138 - , 00:26:138 – same as Muzukashii. Done.
   
6. 00:30:450 – add note? Same as 00:28:950 -. Sure, done.
   
7. 00:32:888 (111,112) – dk? Same as other diffs. Done.
   
8. 00:34:763 – remove….? Done.
   
9. 00:36:263 - ^? Done.
   
10. 00:39:263 - k? avoid to make the too similer pattern 00:37:388 (134,135,136,137,138,139,140,141) - , 00:38:888 (141,142,143,144,145,146,147,148,149) -. Done.
    
11. 00:44:138 – remove? or move to 00:45:075 – instead of fixing the quantity hit sounds? imo , but this is not high priority. Yeah, I think I'll just keep this.
    
12. 00:47:700 – k? same as muzukashii. Done.
    
13. 00:51:731 – remove or 00:51:544 – add d? Anyway, I feel to imcomplete what kind of sounds to follow. I personally am satisfied with the way this stream is right now. No change.
    
14. 00:55:763 (225,226) – kd? reflection with 00:57:263 (234,235,236) – and consistency with 00:52:763 -.
    Changed the first hit to k.
15. 00:56:513 – k...? idk why put on d. on purpose? I put k's at the end of triplets mainly when there's vocals. If that's ok for a style x.x
    
16. 01:00:638 – change to k and01:00:919 - move to 01:00:544 - ? Sure. Changed.
    
17. 01:19:575 – recommend to change to d, plays better to kind. Low-tone bass begins is Emphasized to more clear to sounds up to 01:20:700 -. Done.
18. and 01:19:388 – change to k? if you hope. Done.

Good Luck (¦3[___]

Thanks for your mod Helps me become a better modder too Will PM you regarding some stuff and will PM Nardo after that for a rebubble check.

Almost ranked

Talked with Creator , wants Nardo to recheck the changes things.

I can wait ,Rebubbled.

Uh, Nardo's userpage says that Nardo's currently on an AFK period rip :/
Gotta wait until December

Can't wait for Nardo, will PM him

brb

TNA 3rd (?) mod

[>Muzukashii<]

00:15:825 - Add a note, otherwise the spread becomes a bit improper as there is a note in Futsuu

[>Oni<]
00:52:294 (206) - Remove and make 207 a Finisher to keep finisher consistency through diffs?
00:56:700 (230,231,232) - If you decided to go for melody, ddk or dkk would fit much better the ascending tone
01:03:263 (262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269,270,271) - quality 2k15 mapping kddkddk for SR up niice


that's all lol no kudosu call me

Raiden wrote:

Can't wait for Nardo, will PM him

brb rip Nardo's afk until December 16.

TNA 3rd (?) mod

[>Muzukashii<]

00:15:825 - Add a note, otherwise the spread becomes a bit improper as there is a note in Futsuu Done.

[>Oni<]
00:52:294 (206) - Remove and make 207 a Finisher to keep finisher consistency through diffs? Idk if it's just me being too used to this rhythm, but I just feel like this hit's gotta be there.
00:56:700 (230,231,232) - If you decided to go for melody, ddk or dkk would fit much better the ascending tone Changed to dkk.
01:03:263 (262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269,270,271) - quality 2k15 mapping kddkddk for SR up niice Yeaaa boi XD


that's all lol no kudosu call me

Thanks

Talked to Nardo, no need to rebubble as they were only minor changes.

*click* qualify.exe *click*

Enjoy your first qualified map

Raiden wrote:

Enjoy your first qualified map

Finally *-*/ Gratz newyams :'3

Yay ^-^

Thanks to all who helped me get this qualified Took 7 months but I got there

Congratz~ ヾ(๑>◡<)ﾉ"

gratz

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Gratz

Disqualified!

Main concern is the kiai section of the Muzukashii difficulty. The rhythm is very inconsistent and just not up to par with the rest of the difficulty/map. See that section of this post for details.

Please consider everything in my post before getting this re-qualified!

[Oni]
While I'm here I just want to point out a small thing that bugged me in the kiai.

00:56:325 (227,228,229,230,231,232) - This would work so much better as ddk kkd. The dkk is just so out of place it really threw me off. This is just a suggestion but, see how you like ddk kkd instead of it and decide from there.

[Muzukashii]
This difficulty starts off great. Then suddenly the rhythm gets really inconsistent at the kiai. I understand you are following the vocal but, this can be done while keeping a solid rhythm, instead of JUST the vocal.

00:52:763 (148) - Delete this note, then add a kat note here 00:53:513 -. After that, change 00:53:888 (151) - to a don note. This rhythm stil reflects the vocals while keeping the rhythm consistent. Also it gives a short break between the dense 1/2 patterns you have used. (Not a bad idea for a muzukashii) Following this for the next few measures will improve this section of the map. (I'll show you how in the following mod)
00:55:763 (159) - Like the previous measure delete this note then swap the color of 00:56:513 (162,163) - .
00:57:450 - I would add a don note here to fill up the vocal going on in the music, and for consistency.
00:58:950 - Add a kat note here. Same as previous measures.
01:00:263 (174) - Unrelated to the rhythm changes i'm proposing. I would make this a kat, fits the vocal a little better.

Moving on to the next section of the kiai the music changes a little bit and some parts can be changed to better reflect it.

01:01:013 (176,177,178,179) - This just flat out doesn't work. The vocal is working against the beat. Mapping just the vocal is making your core rhythm suffer. I would suggest the following instead.
01:01:200 (177) - Take this note and move it to 01:00:825. Then, take 01:01:575 (178) - and move it to 01:01:388 and change it to a don. (finisher would be a nice touch for this note too) Finally, change 01:02:138 (180) - to a kat.

Now just a few more minor changes to the last section and we're done.

01:04:763 (191) - Delete this note. Following the previous part of the kiai, but also making a small break in this long string of notes stating at 00:58:950.
01:05:888 (195) - Change this note to a kat, then change 01:06:451 (197) - to a don note.

The rest of the kiai is generally fine. Nothing I could really complain about.

Also, if you are confused by any part of this mod, here is a .osu of the kiai with all the changes I am proposing. http://puu.sh/lXjVD/a125222ae4.osu

PM me in-game or on the forum if you have any questions.

MMzz wrote:

Disqualified!

Main concern is the kiai section of the Muzukashii difficulty. The rhythm is very inconsistent and just not up to par with the rest of the difficulty/map. See that section of this post for details.

Please consider everything in my post before getting this re-qualified!

[Oni]
While I'm here I just want to point out a small thing that bugged me in the kiai.

00:56:325 (227,228,229,230,231,232) - This would work so much better as ddk kkd. The dkk is just so out of place it really threw me off. This is just a suggestion but, see how you like ddk kkd instead of it and decide from there.

[Muzukashii]
This difficulty starts off great. Then suddenly the rhythm gets really inconsistent at the kiai. I understand you are following the vocal but, this can be done while keeping a solid rhythm, instead of JUST the vocal.

00:52:763 (148) - Delete this note, then add a kat note here 00:53:513 -. After that, change 00:53:888 (151) - to a don note. This rhythm stil reflects the vocals while keeping the rhythm consistent. Also it gives a short break between the dense 1/2 patterns you have used. (Not a bad idea for a muzukashii) Following this for the next few measures will improve this section of the map. (I'll show you how in the following mod)
00:55:763 (159) - Like the previous measure delete this note then swap the color of 00:56:513 (162,163) - .
00:57:450 - I would add a don note here to fill up the vocal going on in the music, and for consistency.
00:58:950 - Add a kat note here. Same as previous measures.
01:00:263 (174) - Unrelated to the rhythm changes i'm proposing. I would make this a kat, fits the vocal a little better.

Moving on to the next section of the kiai the music changes a little bit and some parts can be changed to better reflect it.

01:01:013 (176,177,178,179) - This just flat out doesn't work. The vocal is working against the beat. Mapping just the vocal is making your core rhythm suffer. I would suggest the following instead.
01:01:200 (177) - Take this note and move it to 01:00:825. Then, take 01:01:575 (178) - and move it to 01:01:388 and change it to a don. (finisher would be a nice touch for this note too) Finally, change 01:02:138 (180) - to a kat.

Now just a few more minor changes to the last section and we're done.

01:04:763 (191) - Delete this note. Following the previous part of the kiai, but also making a small break in this long string of notes stating at 00:58:950.
01:05:888 (195) - Change this note to a kat, then change 01:06:451 (197) - to a don note.

The rest of the kiai is generally fine. Nothing I could really complain about.

Also, if you are confused by any part of this mod, here is a .osu of the kiai with all the changes I am proposing. http://puu.sh/lXjVD/a125222ae4.osu

PM me in-game or on the forum if you have any questions.

Done all, except for ones that I have to ask about.

Happened to just check this lol xD Thanks

Re-bubbled!

wow repot mmzz for dq subjective reasons omg gomg

Re-qualified!

Thanks Raiden and MM

Quick re-qualify is quick

Good job !

Congrats again! :3