You might want to add something to the tags related to the song it is remixing.
Jibber's Easy
Normal mod:
00:09:995 (1) - please change the curve's shape so that it does not hit the hp bar because hitting the hp makes these sliders look bad
00:53:195 (1) - ^
01:50:795 (1) - ^
02:00:395 (1,2,3) - to prevent the overlap with the red combo, flip this combo over vertically
Combo mod:
00:31:895 (2) - new combo to be consistent with 00:26:795 (1)?
00:36:695 (2) - ^
Normal
Normal mod:
01:03:995 (1,2) - it would look a lot better if 2 did not hit the ho bar, so please rearrange these 2 notes
01:29:195 (1,2,3,4,5) - rearrange this combo so 1 does not hit the hp bar
01:47:645 (4,5) - rearrange these 2 notes so neither of them hit the hp bar
01:50:045 (4,5) - ^
Timing section mod:
00:19:595 - move back a quarter note for the volume change
01:17:195 - ^
Taiko Oni You might want to add some combos in case taiko co-op ever comes back, but fine besides that (not going to contribute to the debate deciding if the map fits the song)
Pokie's Hard
Normal mod:
01:02:795 (1,2,3,4) - the changing spacing is disorienting here
01:09:395 (5) - this slow down just felt random to me
Lunatic:
Normal mod:
00:19:595 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - y do you use a 2 stacked notes then 2 spread out note pattern. It did not fit with the music for me
This mapset sadly annoyed me quite a bit. The easier diffs suffer a lot from aesthetics that can be improved. On the other hand, the harder diffs had some patterns that made me wonder how they fit the music. There was not too much technically wrong, and I am slightly exaggerating how big the problems were. As a result, I will award you a reluctant star.