1. Collab Hard (3.12 stars, 150 notes)
2. Collab Insane (4.27 stars, 193 notes)
3. Easy (1.54 stars, 67 notes)
4. Normal (2.17 stars, 108 notes)

TT Mouse wrote:

Source: あたしンち

TAG: ATASHIn'CHI 私の家

官网跪了没办法

射~

1. 噫，你的BG的size好奇葩，1228x768是什么？改到1366x768吧。现在的BG在游戏里看起来很残废，下面一排字被剪掉了一半。

1. 你这Difficulty setting会被dq的：https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/4464398，见Easy dq reason
2. 00:33:496 (5,6,7) - 什么音效都没有？改摸的时候忘记加了吧

1. 00:21:083 (5) - NC
2. 00:23:841 (5) - ^ (Collab diff的NC bug，你统一一下咯）
3. 00:13:842 (11) - 00:55:391 (12) - 00:57:977 (11) - NC长度居然有两位数，看起来好丑啊

1. OD只给7，根本没pp
2. 00:22:635 (2,3) - 这个overlap丑。这里主要是因为叠的面积不够，看起来像是不小心擦上去的。
3. 00:48:323 (5,2) - ^
4. 00:43:495 (2,4) - ^。一般给overlap喜欢顺着滑条的方向给，稍微歪一点也可以。这个overlap的样子特别像乱摆。
5. 00:35:823 (4) - yoooooooooo。仔细听发现是unsnap的。首先这本身是一个三连，你特意忽略掉了第一个音本身也无可厚非，毕竟100%下不太听得到，但是蓝线起本身就是一个很不好的行为，何况是unsnap的。事实上，你把这个三连（从00:35:737 - 到00:35:910 - 的三个1/4）往前移1/12就是比较完美的snap了。当然，这建立在你的Timing是对的前提下。不过你确定要map这三个音么

T-Mac wrote:

这tm什么j8歌啊

[Collab Insane]

00:16:428 (4,5,1) - 这样的flow打起来有点不爽也

00:19:359 (1) - 这滑条前半部分1.5x后半部分1.0x的？

00:24:703 (4,5,6) - 感觉音效有点缺失

00:34:186 (5,6) - ctrl+G？

[Collab Hard]

cs4挺好

00:08:842 (2,3) - 建议严格的按X轴对称来

00:12:808 (6,7,8,9) - 间距对准

00:55:219 (10,11,12) - 这个三连前后听上去都漏了个1/4啊

00:57:977 (11) - NC？


你是怎么找到这么难听的歌然后开坑的？我找的 打死你

1. shouldn't the bpm be 174 ? I think 174 bpm with offset 393 is fine now
2. widescreen in easy and normal

1. 00:12:117 (3) - nc ? it make the spacing here a bit easier to read , without nc 1/2 spacing here looks like previous 1/1 spacing which can make player confused
2. 00:13:668 (5) - similiar ^^^
3. 00:17:289 (3,4,5,6) - try this ? lol I think flow better https://gyazo.com/5ce787f187c775ed971e0ede12cbd09d
4. 00:17:979 (7,1) - can have more spacing for better emphasis at (1) imo , try move (1) to around x104 y136 ?
5. 00:19:358 (1,1) - I think 1/4 spacing here is too much or idk if this intention or not but it's looks like you trying to do 1/2 slider then it get fk bt sv change here
6. 00:41:599 (6,1) - can have more spacing for better emphasis at (1) imo , try move (1) to around x432 y192 ?
7. 00:53:496 (3) - similiar to 00:12:117 (3) -
8. 00:56:255 (3) - nc ? so it make spacinga bit easier to read

1. 00:12:118 (3,4,5) - I think reverse slider work nice here and a bit more fit for hard diff
2. 00:12:808 (1,2,3,4) - reverse slider + a circle would make rhythm sound great here imo
3. 00:56:253 (3,4,5) - same as 00:12:118 (3,4,5) -
4. 00:56:943 (1,2,3,4) - same as 00:12:808 (1,2,3,4) -
   
   I think this diff need a bit jumps so it will make spread from insane to hard a bit better , currently without jumps in hard ,spread is not that good imo
   stuff like this work good for jumps imo 00:20:049 (2,3) - ,00:22:117 (5,1) - ,00:23:497 (4,1) - ,00:30:393 (5,1) - , 00:42:806 (4,1) - ,00:44:875 (3,4) - , and might be more so ya I recommend adding some jumps here would be good cus your insane is really jumpy

1. 00:08:842 (2) - whistle at head ? sound good
2. 00:14:187 (1,2) - might be a bit overlap too much which can make player a bit confuse imo , try move (2) to around x480 y72 ?
3. 00:15:911 - drum here sound pretty noticeable imo leaving it empty would sound weird imo , try this rhythm ? https://gyazo.com/6b42e510e6f8428d87b11d3f1892a817
4. 00:37:461 (4) - whistlw at head ?
5. 00:38:323 (6) - whistle like 00:43:840 (6) - ?
6. 00:38:496 (7) - whistlw at head ?
7. 00:39:013 (1) - finish?
8. 00:42:978 (4) -whistlw at head ?
9. 00:44:013 (7) - ^
10. 00:47:978 (3) - whistle?
    
    can hitsound more clickable thing like circle or slider head but w/e

1. copy paste hitsound things kk
2. 00:21:083 (4) - curve this the another way ? for better flow here 00:20:738 (3,4,5) - https://gyazo.com/3e54004c17501ad635cb4ce80a44276c
3. 00:34:186 (2,3) - at this range of bpm I think 1/2 spacing might not be good for beginner who new to this game so try this rhythm instead ? https://gyazo.com/58676086e20978e1a634c44c2cfb3b1d
4. 00:35:392 (4,1) - would be better to use 1.2x spacing since (1) already appeared when (4) appear so without consistent spacing it will make beginner confusing here
5. 00:57:805 (4,1) - yea 1/2 spacing is too hard for beginner imo try this rhythm instead https://gyazo.com/5ff90d940863149943011a07489ab618

CelsiusLK wrote:

m4m icon4icon as requested lol lol

my map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/383242

general

1. shouldn't the bpm be 174 ? I think 174 bpm with offset 393 is fine now kept, 174 will cause some little unsnan in the end of the song.
2. widescreen in easy and normal done

insane

1. 00:12:117 (3) - nc ? it make the spacing here a bit easier to read , without nc 1/2 spacing here looks like previous 1/1 spacing which can make player confused yea, added, and other issue of nc all be fixed
2. 00:13:668 (5) - similiar ^^^
3. 00:17:289 (3,4,5,6) - try this ? lol I think flow better changed placinghttps://gyazo.com/5ce787f187c775ed971e0ede12cbd09d
4. 00:17:979 (7,1) - can have more spacing for better emphasis at (1) imo , try move (1) to around x104 y136 ? moved further
5. 00:19:358 (1,1) - I think 1/4 spacing here is too much or idk if this intention or not but it's looks like you trying to do 1/2 slider then it get fk bt sv change here it's 1/2 now
6. 00:41:599 (6,1) - can have more spacing for better emphasis at (1) imo , try move (1) to around x432 y192 ?moved further
7. 00:53:496 (3) - similiar to 00:12:117 (3) -added nc
8. 00:56:255 (3) - nc ? so it make spacinga bit easier to read

^

hard

1. 00:12:118 (3,4,5) - I think reverse slider work nice here and a bit more fit for hard diffyea, done
2. 00:12:808 (1,2,3,4) - reverse slider + a circle would make rhythm sound great here imo^
3. 00:56:253 (3,4,5) - same as 00:12:118 (3,4,5) -^
4. 00:56:943 (1,2,3,4) - same as 00:12:808 (1,2,3,4) - ^
   
   I think this diff need a bit jumps so it will make spread from insane to hard a bit better , currently without jumps in hard ,spread is not that good imo
   stuff like this work good for jumps imo 00:20:049 (2,3) - ,00:22:117 (5,1) - ,00:23:497 (4,1) - ,00:30:393 (5,1) - , 00:42:806 (4,1) - ,00:44:875 (3,4) - , and might be more so ya I recommend adding some jumps here would be good cus your insane is really jumpy

added several little jumps

normal

1. 00:08:842 (2) - whistle at head ? sound goodadded
2. 00:14:187 (1,2) - might be a bit overlap too much which can make player a bit confuse imo , try move (2) to around x480 y72 ?you are right, changed placing here
3. 00:15:911 - drum here sound pretty noticeable imo leaving it empty would sound weird imo , try this rhythm ? changed to another way, to follow the drum herehttps://gyazo.com/6b42e510e6f8428d87b11d3f1892a817
4. 00:37:461 (4) - whistlw at head ?done
5. 00:38:323 (6) - whistle like 00:43:840 (6) - ?^
6. 00:38:496 (7) - whistlw at head ?^
7. 00:39:013 (1) - finish?^
8. 00:42:978 (4) -whistlw at head ?^
9. 00:44:013 (7) - ^ ^
10. 00:47:978 (3) - whistle? ^
    
    can hitsound more clickable thing like circle or slider head but w/e

easy

1. copy paste hitsound things kk
2. 00:21:083 (4) - curve this the another way ? for better flow here 00:20:738 (3,4,5) - changed curve and placing herehttps://gyazo.com/3e54004c17501ad635cb4ce80a44276c
3. 00:34:186 (2,3) - at this range of bpm I think 1/2 spacing might not be good for beginner who new to this game so try this rhythm instead ?https://gyazo.com/58676086e20978e1a634c44c2cfb3b1d changed to the rhythm you suggested
4. 00:35:392 (4,1) - would be better to use 1.2x spacing since (1) already appeared when (4) appear so without consistent spacing it will make beginner confusing herebaka, there was no 4 before you wrote previous suggestion, anyway i put there under ds lol
5. 00:57:805 (4,1) - yea 1/2 spacing is too hard for beginner imo try this rhythm instead https://gyazo.com/5ff90d940863149943011a07489ab618

use 1/2 slider instead earlier rhythm here

yea might wanna do something about hard diff little jumps are fun

call me back after that

EvilElvis wrote:

oh so my mod isn't really needed now
Good luck with ranking then!