eLy wrote:

Cassu2 wrote:

Ohai, I had made a 5.10 star map of this song and noticed this mapset needs GDs. I think my difficulty would make a nice addition to this mapset as Another.

Here, you can download and check the standalone map: http://puu.sh/f3mjR/7673c5fe88.osz (hitsounding on it is not complete)

SD
Another → 5.10×
Another → 4.3~4.65○

Are they able to lower SD ... ?

No, sorry. Oh well. I'll just upload it as my own map then. Sorry to bother you. Great map, by the way!

amazing. really

AuThisH wrote:

amazing. really

wow ! thaaanks ><

amazing song, amazing map, hope it gets ranked ^-^

P3NGU1NZ wrote:

amazing song, amazing map, hope it gets ranked ^-^

thanks ~

nice song

Ductice's diff is completely overmapped for it's star rating.

Extra:

01:33:543 (1,2,3) - These three should probably be lined up more neatly.
01:59:600 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Consider breaking the combos (and spacing) in this stream up more naturally.
02:02:857 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - If there has to be a change of pace in the middle of this stream, it should probably be on 9 and not 8.
02:08:343 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Likewise here, consider changing pace on an even beat (uneven combo number) like it's done here: 02:13:828 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12)
02:23:514 (4,5) - This gap is quite large, considering these are 1/4 notes.
02:40:743 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This stream should probably also be more organic.
Otherwise I love this map to death. Get it ranked.

Another:

00:46:571 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Consider spacing this so the rhythm is more intuitive.
01:50:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Consider having more combos in the slow part here.
Also, the last post is probably right, the sheer speed and complexity of this map probably means having the circles clustered this close together makes it harder and not easier. A more appropriate star rating would be achieved by a little larger spacing throughout. But I suppose, to distance this diff from the extra, it's can be argued that it's fine.

Hyper:

This needs to be comboed up before I can do any reasonable modding.

Normal:

02:24:971 (2,3) - Error here

Easy:

00:52:743 (1,1) - Time between slider and next object is very short


Over all I love it. Please, keep working on it.

You revived it!~

GOGO RANKED

great song, fun map.

Man this map is so unbeliavably addictive,

but the new hitsoudns suck so much

I've had default hitsounds (using Azer's ones) and it sounded so fucking cool and soothing.
I am saddened I have to ignore hitsounds for this map.

This map is really good. One of the things I would change about it is the combos. You should add because the numbers go up to 20-30 and it would be nice if it wasn't that high.

Random modding~

[Easy]

1. 02:37:999 (3) - object end not snapped
   
2. 00:04:743 (3) - object too close to previous
   
3. 00:55:143 (2,3) - could maybe blanket the tail of 00:55:143 (2) - ?
   
4. 01:08:857 (1) - move the tail down to avoid the overlap with 01:07:486 (3) -
   
5. 02:33:886 (1,2) - can you avoid the overlap here?

[Normal]

1. 00:14:857 (6,7) - too close to previous object
   
2. 00:14:857 (6) - NC?
   
3. 00:17:257 (11,12) - ^
   
4. 00:19:143 (9) - ^
   
5. 01:26:000 (2,1) - create better blanket?
   
6. 01:27:714 (3,1) - ^

[Hyper]

1. 00:07:486 (7) - NC
   
2. 00:29:428 (8) - NC
   
3. 01:00:628 (10) - NC
   
4. 01:03:371 (10) - NC
   
5. 01:08:857 (12) - NC
   
6. 01:11:600 (10) - NC
   
7. 01:14:343 (9) - NC

[Another]

1. 00:58:400 (7) - try this rhythm http://puu.sh/jhZyQ/13561614d0.jpg this feels a lot better to play. you leave out notes here 00:58:743 and here 00:59:000 and you could map them ~
   
2. 01:02:428 (8) - move this to 01:02:343 there's a drum beat here and this feels strange on a blue tic. you could also add another 1/4 slider like this http://puu.sh/jhZRe/43c0089f52.jpg
   
3. 01:03:971 01:04:228 01:04:486. add notes here? I think a whole stream feels better to play
   
4. 01:07:914 (6) - same as I mentioned earlier move it back a tic and add another 1/4 slider
   
5. 01:20:343 (6) - same as mentioned back at 00:58:400 http://puu.sh/ji0a1/da4d416c8b.jpg
   
6. 01:21:200 (3) - extend this to the next blue tic and have 01:21:457 (4) - start at 01:21:286 so it catches the drum beat you miss here
   
7. 01:24:371 (5) - same as before here move it back a tic and add 1/4 slider
   
8. 01:29:857 (6) - ^^
   
9. 02:09:800 02:10:057 02:10:314 add notes at these
   
10. 02:10:571 (7) - if you do the above add NC here, not add NC here anyway~
    
11. 02:13:743 (6) - you know about this by now ww
    
12. 02:30:200 (5) - :3 ^
    
13. 02:35:686 (6) - ;w; ^^

[Extra]

1. 02:12:457 (3,4) - this stack under the tail feels really strange to me, maybe not stack them?
   
2. 02:31:657 (3,4) - same here
   
3. 02:41:428 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make this stream look nicer?

really nice set, call me back when the Hyper is finished and I'll recheck~ sorry for NC spam on Hyper w

plz rank it,i love this song,its a nice song XD

i can give you 2 kudosus. Do you want it?

awesome map. really fun to play.

GO RANKED!

Humblest wish and petition to bring back the kick sliders and short streams to Extra that were replaced by the back and forth sliders.

I literally just began crying irl because the back and forth sliders killed jumping and the fast flow the streams that I enjoyed most in this map. This first time ever I've bothered to bleed in forum about beatmap changes but THIS map was literally one of the best (if not the best) and most enjoyable map I have played in my 3 year time in Osu! until those were changed TT^TT

Pretty Pliz... <3

HeXGaruDo wrote:

Humblest wish and petition to bring back the kick sliders and short streams to Extra that were replaced by the back and forth sliders.

I literally just began crying irl because the back and forth sliders killed jumping and the fast flow the streams that I enjoyed most in this map. This first time ever I've bothered to bleed in forum about beatmap changes but THIS map was literally one of the best (if not the best) and most enjoyable map I have played in my 3 year time in Osu! until those were changed TT^TT

Pretty Pliz... <3

i don't think so ( '-' )

thank you for your honest opinion !

GOGO RANKED!

nice beatmap

IT'S BACK!

I wanna mod this after my exam if you don't mind
have a star~

Echoy wrote:

I wanna mod this after my exam if you don't mind
have a star~

ok! thanks Echoy

hi　　from twitter


[General]

1. AudioLeadIn: 1500~1700
2. 全diffの「Widescreen Support」 と 「Letterbox during breaks」 のチェック外し
3. コンボカラーの設定

[Normal]

1. CSがHardと一緒なのが気になりました。　一番下のdiffだしCS3にしてもいいんじゃないかな？
2. 00:03:028 (1) - 音小さいし始点のwhistle消してもいいんじゃない？
3. 00:08:514 (1) - ^
4. 00:08:171 (3) - whistle 追加
5. 00:21:028 (1) - Normalにしてはスピンが短いかな？　00:19:828 (4) - このスライダーのリバースを削除して、スピンの開始を00:20:686 - にすれば音にも合ってるし良い感じ
6. 00:41:600 (1) - ^ 00:41:086 (3) - このスライダーを単発にするか・・・？
7. 00:52:571 (1) - ^ 00:52:057 (3) - ^

[Hard]

1. 最初のwhistleはNormalと一緒

[Hyper]

1. 最初のwhistleはNormalと一緒
2. 00:54:457 (1) - unsnapped　というか全く音合ってないから普通に1/4にして
   
3. 02:22:228 (1,2,3,4) - これ別に5連打でもいいかもね？　意図的に置いてるならそのままでいいです
4. 02:44:171 (1,2,3,4) - ^

[Another]

1. 最初のwhistleはNormalと一緒
2. 00:00:800 - 00:06:286 - note置いてくれたほうが俺は好き
3. 00:13:314 - 00:16:057 - 00:18:800 - 00:35:257 - 00:48:971 - 00:51:714 - ^
4. 00:52:486 (1) - スピンの終わり Heavenは00:54:114 - ここだし合わせない？
5. 00:54:457 (1,2) - 音に合ってないから普通に1/4で作って (edit画面右下のPlaybackl Rateを25%にして聴いたらよくわかると思う)
   
6. 00:59:943 - 01:05:428 - 01:08:686 - 01:10:914 - 01:21:886 - 01:27:371 - 01:30:628 - 01:32:857 - note置いて詰めたほうがいいと思います。 Hyperではここにも音がありますし、Extraは大体連打なのでnoteを置いたほうがバランス的によくなるんじゃないかな？

[Extra]

1. 最初のwhistleはNormalと一緒
2. 00:00:286 (1,2,3,4) - 音取りを00:05:943 (1,2,3) - ここと統一しませんか？
   
3. 00:23:943 - この辺りから曲調変わってるしnote置いてもいいと思います　あと00:29:428 (2) - ここ音取ってたのでパターン化できます
4. 00:52:486 (1) - スピンの終わり Heavenは00:54:114 - ここだし合わせない？
5. 00:54:457 (1,2,3) - unsnapped　音に合ってないから普通に1/4で作って
   
6. 00:59:600 (2) - 赤丸のところのSamplesetをNormalに変更
   
7. 01:05:086 (2) - ^
8. 01:02:686 (3) - SamplesetをNormalにしてwhistleを追加　(00:57:200 (3) - と統一)

[Heaven]

1. 音量上げない？ 全部25%じゃない？
2. 00:22:228 (1) - 始点のSamplesetをNormal AdditionsをSoftに
3. 00:23:943 (3) - SamplesetをNormal
4. 00:27:714 (5) - 始点のSamplesetをNormal AdditionsをSoftに
5. 00:33:200 (7) - ^
6. 00:34:571 (6) - 終点のSamplesetをNormal AdditionsをSoftに
7. 00:36:628 (5) - 始点clap
8. 00:38:686 (5) - 始点のSamplesetをNormal AdditionsをSoftに
9. 00:40:057 (5) - 終点のSamplesetをNormal
10. 00:41:943 (2) - 終点のSamplesetをNormal
11. 00:44:171 (7) - 始点のSamplesetをNormal AdditionsをSoftに
12. 00:54:800 (5) - しつこいけどこれ1/2スライダーにして　
13. 00:59:771 (3) - SamplesetをNormal
14. 01:02:686 (5) - SamplesetをNormalにしてwhistleを追加
15. 01:05:257 (3) - SamplesetをNormal
16. 02:16:571 (3) - whistleを追加
17. 02:44:000 (3) - unsnapped

ヒットサウンドはパターン化させたつもりです
大したこと書けなかったけどがんばってね

This is only for the Another difficulty

00:56:514 (1,2) - The way I understand this first chorus is you switch between 1.6 distance snap spacing to 2.0 depending on the type of pattern. This remains pretty consistent throughout the chorus except it changes sometimes to be over 2.0, less than 1.6, or something similar to that. These two notes are a tiny bit over 2.0

00:57:543 (4) - Same thing as above, spacing slightly over 2.0
00:59:257 (1,2) - ^^
01:02:000 (1) - ^^
01:04:743 (1) - ^^
01:07:486 (1) - ^^
01:08:171 (3) - ^^

00:58:571 (3,4,5,6,7) - A lot shorter than 1.6 which you've been doing previously 00:55:828 (3) and in the future 01:01:314 (3)

01:08:514 (4) - jump is quite far, maybe slightly smaller would be better
01:30:457 (4) - ^^

01:24:628 (3,4) - this is quite a bit more space than what you did last time at 01:20:514 (3,4) If you notice the first time you did it the distance between them was 2.17x, but the newest one has a distance between the sliders of 2.42x. Choosing one and repeating it is probably better than having both

01:13:314 (2) - Consider making this 2.0 (like you did at 01:11:943 (2)) since it's quite hard to hit the notes this fast at this difficulty level
01:14:686 (2) - ^^

01:33:886 (2) - You don't have to make this 2.0 (since it's a repeated phrase, can be faster and more dramatic), but you might want to make the distance slightly smaller than what you have currently
01:34:228 (3) - ^^
01:35:257 (2) - ^^
01:35:600 (3) - ^^
01:36:628 (2) - ^^
01:36:971 (3) - ^^

02:03:028 (7,1) - This is shorter than the last time you did this jump (02:01:657 (3,1)) which was at around 1.6 distance snap (1.72x the first time you did it, 1.32x now).

02:04:400 (7) - Slightly over 2.0 distance snap (it's 2.23x at the moment)
02:07:143 (7) - ^^
02:11:257 (7) - ^^

02:11:257 (7,1) - jump is 1.35x instead of 1.6
02:14:171 (9,1) - jump is 1.93x, which is very different from what you did last time (02:12:800 (9,1) was 1.27x)
02:15:543 (9,1) - ^^
02:16:914 (9,1) - ^^

02:16:400 (6,7) - You've been doing these jumps around 1.6 distance for a while, so changing it to 1.46x feels weird
02:27:371 (6,7) - ^^
02:26:000 (6,7) - You've been doing this pattern at 1.6 distance so changing for a while so changing it to 2.95x feels weird
02:32:857 (6,7) - ^^

02:40:743 (1,2,3) - While you can go faster for this segment, 3.20x+ distance for those repeated sliders at streaming tempo is a bit much

ちらみ

[Heaven]

1. 00:04:743 (6) - slider自体作りなおすか中点消してまた置いてみて。
   中点を別の所に移動するとわかると思うけど昔の仕様のsliderになってるから作りなおした方がうまくblanket出来ると思う
2. 00:18:114 (5) - 00:18:628 - に明確な音ないように聞こえるから00:18:628 (6) - 消しちゃって00:18:114 (5) - をReverseでも合いそう。
3. 00:26:343 (7) - NCほしい。
   他部分がいい感じに区切られてるからここも区切っていいんじゃないかなって
4. 02:03:371 (9) - 自分ならNCつけるかな。。
   前のStreamと重なってて若干見にくいのとspacingも変わってるし付けてもよさそう？後半見てたらどっちでも良いと思えてきたので、。のでウーンといった感じ。
5. 02:14:171 (7,8,9) - 音的にspacing変わる部分って02:14:257 (8,9) - の方が合いそうじゃない・・・？
   02:15:628 (8,9) - がそうだから・・・っﾈ

support （ ＾ω＾）っ☆

litoluna wrote:

ちらみ

[Heaven]

1. 00:04:743 (6) - slider自体作りなおすか中点消してまた置いてみて。
   中点を別の所に移動するとわかると思うけど昔の仕様のsliderになってるから作りなおした方がうまくblanket出来ると思う
2. 00:18:114 (5) - 00:18:628 - に明確な音ないように聞こえるから00:18:628 (6) - 消しちゃって00:18:114 (5) - をReverseでも合いそう。
3. 00:26:343 (7) - NCほしい。
   他部分がいい感じに区切られてるからここも区切っていいんじゃないかなって
4. 02:03:371 (9) - 自分ならNCつけるかな。。
   前のStreamと重なってて若干見にくいのとspacingも変わってるし付けてもよさそう？後半見てたらどっちでも良いと思えてきたので、。のでウーンといった感じ。
5. 02:14:171 (7,8,9) - 音的にspacing変わる部分って02:14:257 (8,9) - の方が合いそうじゃない・・・？
   02:15:628 (8,9) - がそうだから・・・っﾈ

all change !
りとるなちゃんマジ天使、modありがとう ！

Asahina Momoko wrote:

support （ ＾ω＾）っ☆

お星様支援ありがと～（ ＾ω＾）！

Skie1134 wrote:

This is only for the Another difficulty

00:56:514 (1,2) - The way I understand this first chorus is you switch between 1.6 distance snap spacing to 2.0 depending on the type of pattern. This remains pretty consistent throughout the chorus except it changes sometimes to be over 2.0, less than 1.6, or something similar to that. These two notes are a tiny bit over 2.0

00:57:543 (4) - Same thing as above, spacing slightly over 2.0
00:59:257 (1,2) - ^^
01:02:000 (1) - ^^
01:04:743 (1) - ^^
01:07:486 (1) - ^^
01:08:171 (3) - ^^

00:58:571 (3,4,5,6,7) - A lot shorter than 1.6 which you've been doing previously 00:55:828 (3) and in the future 01:01:314 (3)

01:08:514 (4) - jump is quite far, maybe slightly smaller would be better
01:30:457 (4) - ^^

01:24:628 (3,4) - this is quite a bit more space than what you did last time at 01:20:514 (3,4) If you notice the first time you did it the distance between them was 2.17x, but the newest one has a distance between the sliders of 2.42x. Choosing one and repeating it is probably better than having both

01:13:314 (2) - Consider making this 2.0 (like you did at 01:11:943 (2)) since it's quite hard to hit the notes this fast at this difficulty level
01:14:686 (2) - ^^

01:33:886 (2) - You don't have to make this 2.0 (since it's a repeated phrase, can be faster and more dramatic), but you might want to make the distance slightly smaller than what you have currently
01:34:228 (3) - ^^
01:35:257 (2) - ^^
01:35:600 (3) - ^^
01:36:628 (2) - ^^
01:36:971 (3) - ^^

02:03:028 (7,1) - This is shorter than the last time you did this jump (02:01:657 (3,1)) which was at around 1.6 distance snap (1.72x the first time you did it, 1.32x now).

02:04:400 (7) - Slightly over 2.0 distance snap (it's 2.23x at the moment)
02:07:143 (7) - ^^
02:11:257 (7) - ^^

02:11:257 (7,1) - jump is 1.35x instead of 1.6
02:14:171 (9,1) - jump is 1.93x, which is very different from what you did last time (02:12:800 (9,1) was 1.27x)
02:15:543 (9,1) - ^^
02:16:914 (9,1) - ^^

02:16:400 (6,7) - You've been doing these jumps around 1.6 distance for a while, so changing it to 1.46x feels weird
02:27:371 (6,7) - ^^
02:26:000 (6,7) - You've been doing this pattern at 1.6 distance so changing for a while so changing it to 2.95x feels weird
02:32:857 (6,7) - ^^

02:40:743 (1,2,3) - While you can go faster for this segment, 3.20x+ distance for those repeated sliders at streaming tempo is a bit much

almost fixed! thank you for modding ^^

go rank it, I liked it alot.

Homura- wrote:

hi　　from twitter


[General]

1. AudioLeadIn: 1500~1700
2. 全diffの「Widescreen Support」 と 「Letterbox during breaks」 のチェック外し
3. コンボカラーの設定

[Normal]

1. CSがHardと一緒なのが気になりました。　一番下のdiffだしCS3にしてもいいんじゃないかな？
2. 00:03:028 (1) - 音小さいし始点のwhistle消してもいいんじゃない？
3. 00:08:514 (1) - ^
4. 00:08:171 (3) - whistle 追加
5. 00:21:028 (1) - Normalにしてはスピンが短いかな？　00:19:828 (4) - このスライダーのリバースを削除して、スピンの開始を00:20:686 - にすれば音にも合ってるし良い感じ
6. 00:41:600 (1) - ^ 00:41:086 (3) - このスライダーを単発にするか・・・？
7. 00:52:571 (1) - ^ 00:52:057 (3) - ^

[Hard]

1. 最初のwhistleはNormalと一緒

[Hyper]

1. 最初のwhistleはNormalと一緒
2. 00:54:457 (1) - unsnapped　というか全く音合ってないから普通に1/4にして
   
3. 02:22:228 (1,2,3,4) - これ別に5連打でもいいかもね？　意図的に置いてるならそのままでいいです
4. 02:44:171 (1,2,3,4) - ^

[Another]

1. 最初のwhistleはNormalと一緒
2. 00:00:800 - 00:06:286 - note置いてくれたほうが俺は好き
3. 00:13:314 - 00:16:057 - 00:18:800 - 00:35:257 - 00:48:971 - 00:51:714 - ^
4. 00:52:486 (1) - スピンの終わり Heavenは00:54:114 - ここだし合わせない？
5. 00:54:457 (1,2) - 音に合ってないから普通に1/4で作って (edit画面右下のPlaybackl Rateを25%にして聴いたらよくわかると思う)
   
6. 00:59:943 - 01:05:428 - 01:08:686 - 01:10:914 - 01:21:886 - 01:27:371 - 01:30:628 - 01:32:857 - note置いて詰めたほうがいいと思います。 Hyperではここにも音がありますし、Extraは大体連打なのでnoteを置いたほうがバランス的によくなるんじゃないかな？

[Extra]

1. 最初のwhistleはNormalと一緒
2. 00:00:286 (1,2,3,4) - 音取りを00:05:943 (1,2,3) - ここと統一しませんか？
   
3. 00:23:943 - この辺りから曲調変わってるしnote置いてもいいと思います　あと00:29:428 (2) - ここ音取ってたのでパターン化できます
4. 00:52:486 (1) - スピンの終わり Heavenは00:54:114 - ここだし合わせない？
5. 00:54:457 (1,2,3) - unsnapped　音に合ってないから普通に1/4で作って
   
6. 00:59:600 (2) - 赤丸のところのSamplesetをNormalに変更
   
7. 01:05:086 (2) - ^
8. 01:02:686 (3) - SamplesetをNormalにしてwhistleを追加　(00:57:200 (3) - と統一)

[Heaven]

1. 音量上げない？ 全部25%じゃない？
2. 00:22:228 (1) - 始点のSamplesetをNormal AdditionsをSoftに
3. 00:23:943 (3) - SamplesetをNormal
4. 00:27:714 (5) - 始点のSamplesetをNormal AdditionsをSoftに
5. 00:33:200 (7) - ^
6. 00:34:571 (6) - 終点のSamplesetをNormal AdditionsをSoftに
7. 00:36:628 (5) - 始点clap
8. 00:38:686 (5) - 始点のSamplesetをNormal AdditionsをSoftに
9. 00:40:057 (5) - 終点のSamplesetをNormal
10. 00:41:943 (2) - 終点のSamplesetをNormal
11. 00:44:171 (7) - 始点のSamplesetをNormal AdditionsをSoftに
12. 00:54:800 (5) - しつこいけどこれ1/2スライダーにして　
13. 00:59:771 (3) - SamplesetをNormal
14. 01:02:686 (5) - SamplesetをNormalにしてwhistleを追加
15. 01:05:257 (3) - SamplesetをNormal
16. 02:16:571 (3) - whistleを追加Hy
17. 02:44:000 (3) - unsnapped

ヒットサウンドはパターン化させたつもりです
大したこと書けなかったけどがんばってね

Hyperの5連打以外は変えました！
サビ前のスライダーなんか伸びちゃってたの気がつかなかった・・・modありがとう！

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sukiNathan wrote:

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[Heaven]

1. したかったらAR9.2とかにもできるよ
2. ExtraOD8にしてHeavenを8.5とか9にしてもいいかもね
3. 00:04:228 (3) - Overmapping. 音ある？remove noteじゃない？
4. 00:04:400 (4,5) - 単発2個も使って拾うような音でもないしスライダーに変更したほうがいいと思う
5. 00:15:200 (3) - Overmapping
6. 00:38:171 - add note 置く場所わからんかったらきいて
7. 00:56:171 (9) - 流れ的に多分こう、画像見ていいなって思ったらあわせて
   
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8. 01:01:486 (1) - remove Nc. 新たなNcいらんでしょ
9. 01:04:228 (1) - 上と同じ
10. 01:06:971 (1) - 上と同じ
11. 01:09:714 (1) - 上と同じ
12. 01:11:600 (13,1) - 画像の用にNc入れ替えて
    
13. 01:12:886 (1) - remove Nc 01:12:971 (2) - ここからNcうって
14. 01:13:914 (1) - remove Nc　Ncうつならここから 01:14:000 (2) -
15. 01:14:686 (1) - Ncいらん
16. 01:21:886 (1) - 上と同じ
17. 01:23:257 (1) - 上と同じ
18. 01:24:457 (1) - 上と同じ
19. 01:25:828 (1) - 上と同じ
20. 01:28:743 (1) - ＾
21. 01:29:943 (1) - ＾　あとはじぶんでなおして
22. 01:58:228 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - ここのNcは2個ずつか4個ずつです
    
    
23. 02:00:286 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - もし曲げるなら画像みたいな感じで 02:00:628 (1) - ここから曲げましょう。言ってる意味わからんかもしれんけど画像見て気に入ったら変えて
    
    img

    
24. 02:14:343 (1,2,3,4) - 上と同じで曲げる場所が違う
    
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25. 02:15:714 (1,2,3,4,1) - 上と同じ、わからんかったら聞いて
26. 02:39:714 (1,2,3,4) - 上と同じ、わからんかったら聞いて
27. 02:41:343 (1,2) - ここも上と同じだしNc間違ってる

Heavenだけもう少し頑張ろう！

Satellite wrote:

[Heaven]

1. したかったらAR9.2とかにもできるよ
2. ExtraOD8にしてHeavenを8.5とか9にしてもいいかもね
3. 00:04:228 (3) - Overmapping. 音ある？remove noteじゃない？
4. 00:04:400 (4,5) - 単発2個も使って拾うような音でもないしスライダーに変更したほうがいいと思う
5. 00:15:200 (3) - Overmapping
6. 00:38:171 - add note 置く場所わからんかったらきいて
7. 00:56:171 (9) - 流れ的に多分こう、画像見ていいなって思ったらあわせて
   
   img

   
8. 01:01:486 (1) - remove Nc. 新たなNcいらんでしょ
9. 01:04:228 (1) - 上と同じ
10. 01:06:971 (1) - 上と同じ
11. 01:09:714 (1) - 上と同じ
12. 01:11:600 (13,1) - 画像の用にNc入れ替えて
    
13. 01:12:886 (1) - remove Nc 01:12:971 (2) - ここからNcうって
14. 01:13:914 (1) - remove Nc　Ncうつならここから 01:14:000 (2) -
15. 01:14:686 (1) - Ncいらん
16. 01:21:886 (1) - 上と同じ
17. 01:23:257 (1) - 上と同じ
18. 01:24:457 (1) - 上と同じ
19. 01:25:828 (1) - 上と同じ
20. 01:28:743 (1) - ＾
21. 01:29:943 (1) - ＾　あとはじぶんでなおして
22. 01:58:228 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - ここのNcは2個ずつか4個ずつです
    
    
23. 02:00:286 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - もし曲げるなら画像みたいな感じで 02:00:628 (1) - ここから曲げましょう。言ってる意味わからんかもしれんけど画像見て気に入ったら変えて
    
    img

    
24. 02:14:343 (1,2,3,4) - 上と同じで曲げる場所が違う
    
    img

    
25. 02:15:714 (1,2,3,4,1) - 上と同じ、わからんかったら聞いて
26. 02:39:714 (1,2,3,4) - 上と同じ、わからんかったら聞いて
27. 02:41:343 (1,2) - ここも上と同じだしNc間違ってる

Heavenだけもう少し頑張ろう！

あってるか分からないけど一応全部変えました！

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