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thanks for the mod ~OhItsAPumbloom wrote:
For all of the sliders in the beginning, starting with 00:07:353 (2) - , there song has a little 4 note burst, and the slider only goes twice. Not that it needs to totally follow the song, but maybe try doubling the slider a few times, and maybe switching it to 4 regular notes so the sliders don't get too repetitive. i asked a friend if it was repetitive but they said it was fine so ill just leave it for now but im most likely going to change it later \O/
For a positive I really love 00:57:126 (3) - . Its a totally fitting way to start the chorus. thank you >w<
The only other thing that stood out to me was that I feel 01:07:742 (5) - 01:07:937 (6) - and 01:08:132 (7) - should be space a tad bit further apart. Again at 02:10:080 (6) - . fixed ~
And obviously finish the map. That piano part has a lot of potential. Also I love the BG. Fits the song.
8/10
phew, that was a lot xDKaivu wrote:
GeneralAaaa, are you sure you don't want to map the rest? It seems like a weird place to end the map!! ;A; BUT GOOD JOB OTHERWISE! <3EasyUse distance snap! This is an Easy diff, so it's important that your hitobjects flow at a steady pace for new players!! went over w distance snap on >W<
00:00:778 (1,2) - Fix blanket! fixed ~
00:03:894 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:19:479 (1,2) - ^ (It's just a tiiiny bit off) ^
00:36:622 (2,3) - Avoid overlaps in Easy diff! ^
00:53:765 (5,6) - Fix blanket! ^
01:03:115 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:09:349 (1,2) - ^ ^Sakura00:00:778 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I would really suggest using distance snap here! Makes it a little nicer to read, and you wouldn't have to change the placement of the hitobjects much. fixed
00:12:466 (9) - Generally you'd want to avoid sliders that repeat more than once if they're this length. Try this:
ahh i tried it but couldnt really fit the note after the repeating slider :w;
00:45:193 (2) - Make this like 00:44:414 (1) - ! It'll look better! fixed ~
00:53:570 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - The music at this part seems to emphasize individual notes. I'd suggest remapping this section to better accent the music. (And also, I would add a new combo on the big white tick instead of on the hitcircle before it.) ^
00:56:492 (1) - The chorus doesn't really pack much of a punch because your slider ends on the big white tick! I'd remove this and remap this part so that you have a hitobject that starts on the big white tick. Try either of these:^
00:58:050 (4,5,6) - Blanket is a little off!^
00:58:829 (7,8) - That being said, if you blanket this around 00:58:440 (5,6) - , it would probably look nice. ;D Then you could blanket 00:59:414 (9,1) - around that!^
01:03:115 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is overmapping! D: This song in general isn't really a streamy song. There's nothing in the music during this part that should be mapped with a stream... :< Same goes for 01:09:349 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 01:15:583 (1,2,3,4) - 02:02:336 (2,3,4,5) - 02:05:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 02:11:687 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 02:14:803 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:10:128 (10,11) - Fix blanket... Or, if this wasn't meant to be a blanket, it would look nicer if you did make it a blanket! ^
01:12:076 (7,8) - I would suggest changing this so you have a hitobject starting on the big white tick!^
01:12:661 (8,9) - Fix blanket (that is, if you're not remapping this part).^
01:20:842 (4,1) - I think the spinner works better if it started where your kiai ends. So change the slider to a hitcircle and move the spinner to the white tick!(But the spinner should still end on the big white tick too, so it should be a little longer than you have it here!)^
01:44:609 (4,5,1) - Fix blanket.^
01:47:531 (2) - Would look better if you used the same slider as 01:46:752 (1) - !^
01:58:829 (1,2,3) - Same deal as the previous chorus.^
02:23:375 (9,1) - Move slider to the white tick (and make sure it still ends where it does now). theres.. no .. slider..
kudos are kudos :')OhItsAPumbloom wrote:
I feel bad that I got more kudos for that much effort
I MEANT "SPINNER," SORRY LOLMaphi wrote:
02:23:375 (9,1) - Move slider to the white tick (and make sure it still ends where it does now). theres.. no .. slider..
alright then ~Kaivu wrote:
I MEANT "SPINNER," SORRY LOLMaphi wrote:
02:23:375 (9,1) - Move slider to the white tick (and make sure it still ends where it does now). theres.. no .. slider..fixed
Also, I forgot to mention in my mod. >< Streams do work in certain places in the song, just not where you had them before (imo). So you could do that if you wanted. :>
Mollon wrote:
easy
00:08:570 (2) - use two single tap or a slider.it sound a bit weird now. fixed
00:30:388 (2) - 1/4 rhythm is not allowed in easy. ^
00:37:401 (3) - make it two single tap would be better. i think its fine
highly recommended not use green line to change sv in easy.
01:45:193 (6) - reverse more than once is not allowed in easy. fixed
02:08:570 (1) - ^ ^
02:11:687 (1) - the shape here is not so readable to newbies. ^
02:21:037 (1) - ^ ^
some place in this diff sounds weird because the rhythm is not united like 00:43:635 (3) - dont change the meter so offen.its just a easy diff. use 1/1 or 2/1 instead. alright ;w; ill go over it later ><
sakura
00:18:115 (2) - its 1/6 here not 1/4 i think its fine
00:24:933 (1,2,3,4,5) - distance here would be the same to be neatly ^
00:53:765 (2,3) - cause the sound here,make the distance bigger?fixed !
thanks for the mod ~Term Akatski wrote:
from my queue :3
Easy
00:09:349 (3,1) - do not overlap on easy difficulty, its very confusing for new players fixed
00:21:037 (2,1) - ^ ^
00:38:959 (1,2) - fix blanket ^
00:53:765 (5,6) - fix blanket ^
00:56:881 (1) - too confusing since the difficulty is easy, if your gonna put one of those sliders make sure there is a hole in the loop and its a long slider ^
01:59:219 (1) - ^ ^
02:11:687 (1) - ^ ^
Sakura
00:00:778 - 00:06:816 - use 1/3 beat snap divisor ( 00:01:037 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - and 00:04:187 (2,3,4,5) needs to be on 1/3 snap divisor) fixed
00:09:544 - make a triplet here ^
00:18:894 - add a note here i think its fine ;w;
00:22:011 - make a triplet here ^
00:28:245 - make a triplet here ^
00:35:063 (1,2) - change into hit circles ^
01:41:687 (6,1) - might as well blanket this part fixed
02:12:466 (8,1) - fix blanket ^
02:14:998 (10,11) - fix blanket ^
done :3