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Hamazu Masashi - Cocoon de Chocobo

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Topic Starter
Mianki
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 16. tammikuuta 2011 at 16:15:06

Artist: Masashi Hamauzu
Title: Cocoon de Chocobo
Source: Final Fantasy XIII
Tags: Mukku OST
BPM: 128
Filesize: 2841kb
Play Time: 02:16
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,92 stars, 118 notes)
  2. Hard (4,79 stars, 370 notes)
  3. Mukku's Insane (5 stars, 458 notes)
  4. Normal (3,77 stars, 178 notes)
Download: Masashi Hamauzu - Cocoon de Chocobo
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Chocobo theme from Final Fantasy XIII
Haneii
~General~
Put Final Fantasy 13 OST under source and nothing in tags
Delete .osb file then full submission

~Easy~
00:57:811 (5) - Spacing
00:58:046 (6) - ^
01:17:733 (11) - 1 down grid
01:43:515 (4) - bring it down 1 grid so it’s aligned with 3

~Hard~
01:16:327(8) - looks a bit weird to me, maybe align with 7?
02:30:390 (1) - move up 1 grid to right
02:37:890 - remove kiai time

cute map
~Twinkle twinkle little star~
Topic Starter
Mianki

Haneii wrote:

~General~ Fixed
Put Final Fantasy 13 OST under source and nothing in tags
Delete .osb file then full submission

~Easy~ Fixed
00:57:811 (5) - Spacing
00:58:046 (6) - ^
01:17:733 (11) - 1 down grid
01:43:515 (4) - bring it down 1 grid so it’s aligned with 3

~Hard~ Fixed
01:16:327(8) - looks a bit weird to me, maybe align with 7?
02:30:390 (1) - move up 1 grid to right
02:37:890 - remove kiai time
roflninja
Hi,
notes felt a tad early, might just be me though

[easy]
fine for me
almost feels like a normal
00:42:108 (6) - new combo?

[hard]
also fine for me

could find much
nice map ;)
Tatsuo
Hai, here's my mod~~

[Overall]
Try and keep your easy difficulty combos at ~6
You need to tone down your easy difficulty, since it is sitting over 3 stars. You need to have a difficulty under three stars to get this ranked. Either tone it down, or rename it normal and make a really easy, easy difficulty.

[Easy]
00:23:593 (3) - Too many rebounds for new players. Consider changing this.
00:42:108 (6) - New combo. Getting a bit high in combos for an easy difficulty. I'll stop mentioning this, and put a comment about it under [Overall]

[Hard]
00:52:890 through 01:03:671 - This feels more like an insane difficulty right here. Just my opinion.
02:19:140 (stream) - You could map this better. Be creative.

Nothing seriously wrong with this mapset.
You can have a star
*star*
Topic Starter
Mianki
Both fixed
Yuji Tokaji
Hello,

[Easy]

- 00:42:577(x) : Add circle ?

[Normal]

Good !

[Hard]

- 00:28:866(x) : Add circle ?
- 00:29:100(x) : ^
- 00:32:265(8) : New combo ?


Pretty map !
Get my star !
Topic Starter
Mianki

Slanox wrote:

[Easy]

- 00:42:577(x) : Add circle ? Didn't add

[Normal]

Good !

[Hard]

- 00:28:866(x) : Add circle ? Added
- 00:29:100(x) : ^ Didn't
- 00:32:265(8) : New combo ? Put new combo few circles ahead of this one
Astom
Hi~
In blue suggestions, In red maybe important

[General]
-chocobo.jpeg resize it to 1024x768 or 800x600 or look for a better BG (remember full submit)

Nice~ Star
Mukku
Nonii tuli tehtyä offline tilassa valmiiksi kun tää netti mikä nyt on ollu pari päivää on ihan surkea. Sen verran kuitenki toimii että pääsin tänne tuomaan tän

Saat korjailla ite modaukset kun olen lähössä lomalle tuossa parin päivän päästä. Viikon taidan viipyä.



Jaha. Jos on OD 9 jääny siihen diffiin niin voit vaihtaa kasiin jos se näyttäis paremmalta. Ei ollu tarkotus olla 9.

Download: Hamazu Masashi - Cocoon de Chocobo (Mianki) [Mukku's Insane].osu
Topic Starter
Mianki

Astom wrote:

Hi~

[General]
-chocobo.jpeg resize it to 1024x768 or 800x600 or look for a better BG (remember full submit) Fixed

Nice~ Star
Kert
[General]
Delete .osb, please. Because of that, I have no BG while playing the map :#
You can add Square Enix to tags :3

[Easy]
01:42:108 (2) - maybe 1 down?

[Normal]
Fine

[Hard]
00:38:358 (1) - 1 right?

[Mukku's Insane]
Also fine.

Star
Topic Starter
Mianki

CracK wrote:

[General]
Delete .osb, please. Because of that, I have no BG while playing the map :#
You can add Square Enix to tags :3

[Easy]
01:42:108 (2) - maybe 1 down? Fixed

[Normal]
Fine

[Hard]
00:38:358 (1) - 1 right? FIxed

[Mukku's Insane]
Also fine.

Star
DerekMcD
Nice song, you'll get a hoshi (star)!!!
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
there's an unused .osb file in your folder, delete it and full-submit again.
offset:+13
when you want to add whistle on slider's beats, don't want to save time, just choose the slider and press W... this will change the sound of sliderslider, add hitsounds on every beats plz.
don't use the same green line to start (or end) kiai and change the hitsounds sample (or volume). add one more timing point before kiai to change hitsounds. example:00:30:390

[Easy]
00:52:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing is different from before... and any reason to repeat the same shape (in fact same notes?)...?
01:00:390 (2,3,4,5) - here's some to nazi...5 is not align with (3)

[Normal]
00:54:765 (5) - new combo here... and why you like this shape so much..
01:11:640 (5) - new combo

[Hard]
HP Drain Rate-1
00:39:530 (5) - move it left a bit
00:52:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ...
01:52:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - it's more than a Hard imo.. make them closer?
02:03:671 (2,3,4,5,6) - strange shape
02:19:140 (6) - the streams... orz... well new combo on this one.

[Mukku's Insane]
01:04:140 - 01:17:265 - no hitsounds..?
02:17:265 (11) - new combo here since this is too long ...
not sure about thouse streams... a little overmapped imo, but not a big deal
Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. Source: Final Fantasy XIII
  2. Tags: Mukku OST
[Normal]:
  1. 01:15:390 (6) - new combo
  2. 01:44:452 (7) - 1 grid down
[Hard]:
  1. 02:27:343 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - the OD is a bit low, so this pattern is not easily readable, players may have to go to Edit :S
[Insane]:
  1. 00:55:468 (4) - 1 grid up
  2. 01:46:093 (7) - new combo
  3. 02:17:265 (11) - ^
  4. 02:32:499 (7) - ^
  5. 02:36:952 (1) - not easy to find out which direction would the ball go, so add a SB arrow if possible.
star~
Topic Starter
Mianki

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
there's an unused .osb file in your folder, delete it and full-submit again. Fixed
offset:+13 Fixed
when you want to add whistle on slider's beats, don't want to save time, just choose the slider and press W... this will change the sound of sliderslider, add hitsounds on every beats plz.
don't use the same green line to start (or end) kiai and change the hitsounds sample (or volume). add one more timing point before kiai to change hitsounds. example:00:30:390 Got it

[Easy]
00:52:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing is different from before... and any reason to repeat the same shape (in fact same notes?)...? Wanted there small jumps, like in other diffs. Changed the pattern
01:00:390 (2,3,4,5) - here's some to nazi...5 is not align with (3)Fixed

[Normal]
00:54:765 (5) - new combo here... and why you like this shape so much.. Fixed and I like it beacuse it's "old fashioned" :D. You can see that pattern in the older maps.
01:11:640 (5) - new combo

[Hard]
HP Drain Rate-1 Fixed
00:39:530 (5) - move it left a bit Fixed
00:52:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ... Just jumps
01:52:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - it's more than a Hard imo.. make them closer? Made them closer
02:03:671 (2,3,4,5,6) - strange shape Made it a circle shape
02:19:140 (6) - the streams... orz... well new combo on this one. Fixed

[Mukku's Insane]
01:04:140 - 01:17:265 - no hitsounds..? Dunno if Mukku forgot to put there hitsounds or is it on purpose. I'll ask him, when he comes back from vacation
02:17:265 (11) - new combo here since this is too long ...
not sure about thouse streams... a little overmapped imo, but not a big deal

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]: Fixed
  1. Source: Final Fantasy XIII
  2. Tags: Mukku OST
[Normal]: Fixed
  1. 01:15:390 (6) - new combo
  2. 01:44:452 (7) - 1 grid down
[Hard]:
  1. 02:27:343 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - the OD is a bit low, so this pattern is not easily readable, players may have to go to Edit :S Changed it


[Insane]:
  1. 00:55:468 (4) - 1 grid up Fixed
  2. 01:46:093 (7) - new combo Fixed
  3. 02:17:265 (11) - ^ Fixed
  4. 02:32:499 (7) - ^ Fixed
  5. 02:36:952 (1) - not easy to find out which direction would the ball go, so add a SB arrow if possible. Don't know how to do that :(

star~
Musty
Hi :)
Mukku's Hard :

[00:23:599](4,5) Bad Spacing Arrange this

xD and Good map

STAR~
Topic Starter
Mianki

Sweyax wrote:

Hi :)
Mukku's Hard :

[00:23:599](4,5) Bad Spacing Arrange this Put new combo to 5 so it looks like a jump

xD and Good map

STAR~
Lanttu
Download: Masashi Hamauzu - Cocoon de Chocobo (Mianki) [Mukku's Insane].osu

Siinä olis jonkunnäkönen nuoli ja storyboard-homma, sanokaa vaan jos ette tykkää niin muokkaan kyllä. o/


Mukku
I'm back!

Changed some things around. Fixed the missing hitsounds also.

Download: Masashi Hamauzu - Cocoon de Chocobo (Mianki) [Mukku's Insane].osu
Sakura
[osz File Scan!]
Empty .osb file.
Incoherent mapping, make all diffs have the same length

[Mukku's Insane]
02:36:965 (1) - Even with the arrow i dont think this is fine, people cant be expected to look at the arrow while they are still hitting notes on the side of the screen

[Hard]
02:32:512 (1) - This spinner feels out of place.

[Normal]
This diff is too short

[Easy]
This diff is too short
00:56:653 (1) - Anti-Jump?

If you ever decide to finish those diffs, PM me and i'll remod, for now, no star
Shiro
Major issues in the map : change them.
Minor issue in the map : you don't have to follow them exactly, but if you don't, explain why.
Suggestions : those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
If there's one red line in the whole mod post, or three blue lines, I won't star the map.

Easy:
00:55:246 (5,6,7) - Don't space them out like that, especially if you change the distance snapping right after.
02:01:809 (7) - Place it at the center of the screen.
02:15:403 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Can you modify this pattern so that the last note is in the center of the screen ?

You should map the rest of the map, too.

Normal:
00:52:903 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I think you shouldn't introduce those "jumps" when the distance snapping changes back to 0,7x right after.

Hard:
I really don't like the streams, I think they don't fit the song, but there are too many to remove them.

Insane:
00:43:996 (3,4,5,6,7) - Either stack them all, either don't stack any note.
This difficulty is overmapped.
Mukku

Sakura301 wrote:

[Mukku's Insane]
02:36:965 (1) - Even with the arrow i dont think this is fine, people cant be expected to look at the arrow while they are still hitting notes on the side of the screen Then how did all the other maps with storyboard arrow warnings get ranked? I am puzzled. No changes.

Odaril wrote:

Insane:
00:43:996 (3,4,5,6,7) - Either stack them all, either don't stack any note. Okay, moved it.
This difficulty is overmapped. Okay. o-o
Download: Masashi Hamauzu - Cocoon de Chocobo (Mianki) [Mukku's Insane].osu
Topic Starter
Mianki

Sakura301 wrote:

[osz File Scan!]
Empty .osb file.
Incoherent mapping, make all diffs have the same length Not going to lenghten Normal and Easy, because there are lots of maps in which easier difficulties are shorter

[Hard]
02:32:512 (1) - This spinner feels out of place. Replaced with a slider

[Normal]
This diff is too short

[Easy]
This diff is too short
00:56:653 (1) - Anti-Jump? Fixed

Odaril wrote:

Easy:
00:55:246 (5,6,7) - Don't space them out like that, especially if you change the distance snapping right after. Fixed
02:01:809 (7) - Place it at the center of the screen. Nah
02:15:403 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Can you modify this pattern so that the last note is in the center of the screen ? Did that[/color]
You should map the rest of the map, too. Not gonna do that

Normal:
00:52:903 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I think you shouldn't introduce those "jumps" when the distance snapping changes back to 0,7x right after. Removed jumps

Hard:
I really don't like the streams, I think they don't fit the song, but there are too many to remove them.
Backstep
Little sound mod. ;)

[Insane]
01:42:121 (3) add whistle.
01:43:059 (5) start slider add whistle.
01:43:996 (3) ^
01:44:934 (8) whistle.
01:45:871 (6) ^
01:46:809 (7) ^
02:18:684 (9) clap.
02:19:621 (2) start slider add clap.
02:21:496 (3) ^

Star+
Leorda
Hej!

[General]
1) arrow.png have an uneeded space, you have to cut it down
2) Delete osb

[Easy]
00:27:590 (3) - Make symetric?
00:28:996 (1) - I am not sure this, as AIMod said, this spinner is too short for easy diff, IMO
00:54:778 (4) - New combo, very long for easy diff after this
00:57:121 (2) - Remove whistle?
00:58:059 (4) - ^
00:58:996 (x) - Add note with clap?
01:58:528 (4) - New combo, very long for easy diff after this

[Normal]
Circle Size +1?

00:15:403 (1) - Make symetric?
00:27:590 (3) - ^
00:32:043 (x) - Add note?
01:02:746 (2) - Remove whistle?

[Hard]
00:23:371 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Please double-check this spacing, I saw the spacing is error, please check it

[Mukku's Insane]
Fine~

Good song
STAR
ouranhshc
Mukku's Insane
01:01:223 (6) - spacing
01:43:996 (3) - line up with (2)
02:28:528 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - is this supposed to be a sqaure

Normal
00:30:871 (T) - kiai?
01:14:465 (5) - line up with (2)
Topic Starter
Mianki
All fixed, but I read the new rules about that every difficulty has to be the same lenght. So will be moving this to WIP
Neethime
Pink words:You have to fix these,they are mistakes.
Black words:Just suggestions.

[Easy]
00:18:215 (5) - use whistle instead of finish?
00:25:715 (4) - ^
01:56:653 - Add something here?
02:16:809 (4) - Clap and whistle on same note don't feel too good for me here,remove one of them?

[Normal]
00:16:809 (3) - remove whistle
00:17:278 (4) - whistle on start
00:18:684 (7) - use whistle instead of finish?
00:21:965 (7) - use whistle instead of clap?
01:36:028 (3,4,1) - Clap and whistle on same note don't feel too good for me here,remove one of them?
02:12:121 (2) - ^
02:18:918 (2) - 2 grid left,2 grid up

[Hard]
01:16:809 (9) - new combo
01:52:903 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - orz...maybe a bit too hard.
02:04:153 (6) - 1 grid right
02:16:340 (4) - new combo

[Mukku's Insane]
01:50:090 (7) - new combo
01:59:465 (7) - ^
02:15:403 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - xoooxooox x=whistle o=none
02:25:715 (2) - whistle
Dotsu
Hi~~

My suggestions:

[Easy]

  • Resnap these Time Points:
    00:30:390
    00:45:624
    01:49:140

    etc..(Also in other diffs)

    00:44:465 (4): Whistle
    01:10:715 (4,5,1): Distance
[Normal]

  • 01:56:184 (3): Remove Clap at the end of this slider
[Hard]

  • 01:17:395: Spinner starts here
    01:56:184 (3): Remove Clap at the end of this slider
    01:59:465 (1): Remove Clap at the beginning of this slider
[Mukku's Insane]

  • 01:03:684 (8): Finish
    01:46:692 (6): Delete this Circle
    01:56:653 (1): Add finish at the beginning of this slider
    02:36:379: Move this arrow a little earlier
Good map~~

*STAR*
Topic Starter
Mianki

Neethime wrote:

Pink words:You have to fix these,they are mistakes.
Black words:Just suggestions.

[Easy]
00:18:215 (5) - use whistle instead of finish? Done
00:25:715 (4) - ^ Done
01:56:653 - Add something here? Done
02:16:809 (4) - Clap and whistle on same note don't feel too good for me here,remove one of them? Done

[Normal]
00:16:809 (3) - remove whistle Done
00:17:278 (4) - whistle on start Done
00:18:684 (7) - use whistle instead of finish? Done
00:21:965 (7) - use whistle instead of clap? Done
01:36:028 (3,4,1) - Clap and whistle on same note don't feel too good for me here,remove one of them? Done
02:12:121 (2) - ^ Done
02:18:918 (2) - 2 grid left,2 grid up Resnapped the whole combo

[Hard]
01:16:809 (9) - new combo Done
01:52:903 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - orz...maybe a bit too hard. Fixed
02:04:153 (6) - 1 grid right Doesn't look good if I move it.
02:16:340 (4) - new combo Done

[Mukku's Insane]
01:50:090 (7) - new combo Done
01:59:465 (7) - ^ Done
02:15:403 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - xoooxooox x=whistle o=none Done
02:25:715 (2) - whistle Done

impossiblexu wrote:

Hi~~

My suggestions:

[Easy]

  • Resnap these Time Points: [color=#FF00FF]Got it, won't resnap the ones that take place in breaks, 'cause they don't matter that much :D[/color]
    00:30:390
    00:45:624
    01:49:140

    etc..(Also in other diffs)

    00:44:465 (4): Whistle Fixed
    01:10:715 (4,5,1): Distance Fixed
[Normal]

  • 01:56:184 (3): Remove Clap at the end of this slider Fixed
[Hard]

  • 01:17:395: Spinner starts here Moved it to the red tick
    01:56:184 (3): Remove Clap at the end of this slider Fixed
    01:59:465 (1): Remove Clap at the beginning of this slider Fixed
[Mukku's Insane]

  • 01:03:684 (8): Finish Sounds good enough :P
    01:46:692 (6): Delete this Circle Didn't delete that, but fixed (7)
    01:56:653 (1): Add finish at the beginning of this slider Nah
    02:36:379: Move this arrow a little earlier Good enough where it is
Good map~~

*STAR*
Aakiha
Easy:
00:26:653 (1,2,3) - "1" covers the end of slider "3" maybe its hard to read for an "Easy".
Normal:
00:44:465 (6) - add finish at the end of this slider?
02:21:028 (1) - add a normal-finish in the end of spinner?

Hard:
00:22:903 (1,2) - spacing ,it is a little far,I thinks it's ok to a hard dif but still looks not so good.
02:31:340 (6,7) - ^

nice dif~

Insane:
02:18:332 (6) - remove this note?

fun dif.gj Mukku ^^

That's all. Nice map:)
Topic Starter
Mianki

Aakiha wrote:

Easy:
00:26:653 (1,2,3) - "1" covers the end of slider "3" maybe its hard to read for an "Easy". Fixed
Normal:
00:44:465 (6) - add finish at the end of this slider? Fixed
02:21:028 (1) - add a normal-finish in the end of spinner? Added soft finish :P

Hard:
00:22:903 (1,2) - spacing ,it is a little far,I thinks it's ok to a hard dif but still looks not so good. Fixed
02:31:340 (6,7) - ^ Fixed

nice dif~

Insane:
02:18:332 (6) - remove this note? Don't think so :P

fun dif.gj Mukku ^^

That's all. Nice map:)
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