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dBu music - Higan Kikou ~ Titanic of Stygian

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Lily Bread
1,228 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Lily Bread
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年1月16日 at 20:47:23

Artist: dBu music
Title: Higan Kikou ~ Titanic of Stygian
Source: 東方Project
Tags: mollon Touhou zun 小野塚小町 Onozuka Komachi 大弾奏結界 総集篇纂組曲 ～The Suite～ 上海アリス幻樂団 alice
BPM: 155
Filesize: 3421kb
Play Time: 01:42
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (3.07 stars, 253 notes)
  2. Lunatic (4.01 stars, 340 notes)
  3. Mollon's Easy (1.17 stars, 77 notes)
  4. Normal (1.73 stars, 141 notes)
Download: dBu music - Higan Kikou ~ Titanic of Stygian
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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[Mollon's Easy] by Mollon
other diffs by Lily Bread
thanks for their mod, star and help
Mollon
Hollow Wings
T-Mac
Electoz
Momizi
Wishmaker980
FCL
XiaofengTiger
pieguyn
Vert
09kami
Pata-Mon
YaegakiErika
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Rizia
Satellite
Last edited by Lily Bread , edited 38 times in total.
Mollon
86 posts
Joined February 2013
Mollon
1st~ 加油加油=w= 做完了来帮忙摸呀
Hollow Wings
1,514 posts
Joined July 2010
Hollow Wings
很久没看到对称图了，gj
Lily Bread
1,228 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Lily Bread

Hollow Wings wrote:

很久没看到对称图了，gj
姐姐，不就是你让我试一下对称的嘛！
EncoreW
833 posts
Joined June 2013
EncoreW
音效听上去有点少的样子

[Lunatic]

不严格的对称，但是在一般情况下是应该要对称的

00:15:646 (4) - 00:17:195 (3,4) - 00:24:549 (3,6) - 00:32:872 (3) - 00:34:614 (1) - 00:36:162 (1) - 00:41:195 (2) - 00:41:582 (3) - 00:42:743 (2) - 00:43:130 (3) - 00:47:775 (5,6) - 00:49:324 (3) - 01:05:582 (1) - 01:07:517 (6) -

建议进歌的文件夹里面去手动改坐标

00:22:614 (5,6,7) - 这地方感觉可以用1/2折返滑条而不是三个圈

00:33:453 (1,2,3) - 这地方的节奏听上去不是太好

00:51:646 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 这个串因为堆叠的关系会偏左上开始影响对称的严格程度所以建议放到Y轴

01:39:259 (4,5,6) - 很明显不够好看，应该把01:40:033 (6) - 往右，一个直滑条和两个弯滑条的间距应该是一样的

01:41:582 (1) - 建议这个点地方放个圈，1/4之后放转盘

[Hard]

不严格的对称

00:00:549 (1,2) - 严格的对称的话这两个滑条的 slidertick是应该和坐标轴重合的

00:33:453 (2) - 00:45:453 (1,2,3) -

建议一组对称的滑条一个NC，00:07:517 (3,4) - 这两个最好也能对称

00:09:840 (1,2,3) - 00:16:420 (2,3) - 00:24:549 (3,4,1) - DS，没必要突然变一下

00:42:162 (4,1) - blanket

00:47:001 (1,2,3) - 直接转120度，不要手动拉

01:06:743 (4) - NC更应该在这里而不是01:07:130 (1) - ，听节奏就知道了

01:41:582 (1) - Lunatic^

横平竖直感觉有点多，打起来像是11年的图

[Normal]

不严格的对称

00:05:195 (1,2) - 00:59:388 (1,2,3) -

00:51:646 (2,3) - blanket

01:01:711 (4) - 接着对称下去啊



做对称不要偷懒，要像我CP一样用功
Lily Bread
1,228 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Lily Bread

T-Mac wrote:

音效听上去有点少的样子

[Lunatic]

不严格的对称，但是在一般情况下是应该要对称的

00:15:646 (4) - 00:17:195 (3,4) - 00:24:549 (3,6) - 00:32:872 (3) - 00:34:614 (1) - 00:36:162 (1) - 00:41:195 (2) - 00:41:582 (3) - 00:42:743 (2) - 00:43:130 (3) - 00:47:775 (5,6) - 00:49:324 (3) - 01:05:582 (1) - 01:07:517 (6) -

建议进歌的文件夹里面去手动改坐标
//手动改坐标吗..我试试看

00:22:614 (5,6,7) - 这地方感觉可以用1/2折返滑条而不是三个圈
//没必要

00:33:453 (1,2,3) - 这地方的节奏听上去不是太好
//再看看吧

00:51:646 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 这个串因为堆叠的关系会偏左上开始影响对称的严格程度所以建议放到Y轴
//诶没必要吧？

01:39:259 (4,5,6) - 很明显不够好看，应该把01:40:033 (6) - 往右，一个直滑条和两个弯滑条的间距应该是一样的
//这个可以

01:41:582 (1) - 建议这个点地方放个圈，1/4之后放转盘
//不喜欢这种


[Hard]

不严格的对称

00:00:549 (1,2) - 严格的对称的话这两个滑条的 slidertick是应该和坐标轴重合的
//其实这个hard我没在做对称...

00:33:453 (2) - 00:45:453 (1,2,3) -

建议一组对称的滑条一个NC，00:07:517 (3,4) - 这两个最好也能对称
//呜呜果然没人看得出来这两个滑条是在模仿BG的镰刀吗..谁来教我拉滑条...

00:09:840 (1,2,3) - 00:16:420 (2,3) - 00:24:549 (3,4,1) - DS，没必要突然变一下
//感觉没问题

00:42:162 (4,1) - blanket

00:47:001 (1,2,3) - 直接转120度，不要手动拉
//这个我确实是转的..不过不是120度

01:06:743 (4) - NC更应该在这里而不是01:07:130 (1) - ，听节奏就知道了
//NC乱了 我重新整一下

01:41:582 (1) - Lunatic^

横平竖直感觉有点多，打起来像是11年的图
//不会吧，我挺喜欢的，作为一个hard player来说

[Normal]

不严格的对称

00:05:195 (1,2) - 00:59:388 (1,2,3) -

00:51:646 (2,3) - blanket

01:01:711 (4) - 接着对称下去啊
//这里很明显转折了...


做对称不要偷懒，要像我CP一样用功
//其实我还不懂怎么偷懒..
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Electoz
1,886 posts
Joined May 2015
Electoz
Hi, from my modding queue~

[General]

  1. I don't understand why there are so many unused inherited points. I need some explanation here(for my knowledge ofc.)
[Easy]

  1. Hi mollon you still owe me a mod from your queue like decades ago lol.
  2. Just in case if you think AImod isn't drunk > http://puu.sh/lHmAF/91d5ba4bb7.jpg
  3. 00:50:098 (1) - I would put sth else here rather than a spinner
[Normal]

  1. 00:27:646 (7,8,1) - The flow here seems very edgy imo.
  2. 00:37:711 (1) - How about curve this a bit more to become symmetrical with 00:39:066 (3) ?
[Hard]

  1. 00:16:808 (1) - Just a suggestion here, but I think putting 3 circles here might emphasizes the song better.
  2. 01:41:195 (4) - This clap comes out of nowhere, feels weird imo.
Hope my mod is useful, sry if my mod didn't help much
Good luck.
Lily Bread
1,228 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Lily Bread
/*
black = accepted.
red = no.
*/

Electoz wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue~

[General]

  1. I don't understand why there are so many unused inherited points. I need some explanation here(for my knowledge ofc.)
// i used Hitsound Copier, so there are many unused inherited points. i will delete them.

[Normal]

  1. 00:27:646 (7,8,1) - The flow here seems very edgy imo.
    //fixed
  2. 00:37:711 (1) - How about curve this a bit more to become symmetrical with 00:39:066 (3) ?
    //nah
[Hard]

  1. 00:16:808 (1) - Just a suggestion here, but I think putting 3 circles here might emphasizes the song better.
    //i use 3 circles in kiai parts.
  2. 01:41:195 (4) - This clap comes out of nowhere, feels weird imo.
    //what?
Hope my mod is useful, sry if my mod didn't help much
Good luck.
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thanks for mod!
*/
Mollon
86 posts
Joined February 2013
Mollon

Electoz wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue~

[Easy]

  1. Hi mollon you still owe me a mod from your queue like decades ago lol.
  2. Just in case if you think AImod isn't drunk > http://puu.sh/lHmAF/91d5ba4bb7.jpg
  3. 00:50:098 (1) - I would put sth else here rather than a spinner
Hope my mod is useful, sry if my mod didn't help much
Good luck.
i feel so sorry for the late mod,and now i finished it....
in fact there are no note at the points AIMod pointed out and i've check the distance,its ok.i think AIMod is drunk hhhhhh
i prefer the spinner the same with 01:02:485..and if others point out the same place i'll take it into consideration~

thanks for your mod!
Momizi
275 posts
Joined June 2013
Momizi
我过来完成任务了，自己的queue跪着也要摸完;W
[Lunatic]
00:06:356 (2,3,4) - 这几个和之前的00:01:711 (2,3,4) - 不是对称的，索性复制粘贴然后旋转ctrl+R 180°
00:12:162 (1,2) - ctrl+G 位置对换可能比较好
00:37:711 (1,2,3,4) - 这样子的排列怎么样https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4088332
感觉后半段开始就不是那么对称（

低难度看不出什么东西，感觉摸不出来什么了。。射一发跑路了
Lily Bread
1,228 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Lily Bread

Momizi wrote:

我过来完成任务了，自己的queue跪着也要摸完;W
[Lunatic]
00:06:356 (2,3,4) - 这几个和之前的00:01:711 (2,3,4) - 不是对称的，索性复制粘贴然后旋转ctrl+R 180°

00:12:162 (1,2) - ctrl+G 位置对换可能比较好
//改了

00:37:711 (1,2,3,4) - 这样子的排列怎么样https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4088332
感觉后半段开始就不是那么对称（

低难度看不出什么东西，感觉摸不出来什么了。。射一发跑路了
/*
另外两个没什么意义..先放着
thanks for mod!
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Wishmaker980
238 posts
Joined October 2013
Wishmaker980
Hello! From My Queue~

LUNATIC

00:03:066 - Missing Sound
00:03:259 - ^
00:07:711 - ^
00:07:904 - ^
00:29:195 (2,3) - Ctrl + G

I cant say much about this map,seems like everything is alright lol

Good luck with your map!
Lily Bread
1,228 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Lily Bread

Wishmaker980 wrote:

Hello! From My Queue~

LUNATIC

00:03:066 - Missing Sound
00:03:259 - ^
00:07:711 - ^
00:07:904 - ^
//i will consider about these

00:29:195 (2,3) - Ctrl + G
//keep, because DS

I cant say much about this map,seems like everything is alright lol

Good luck with your map!
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thanks for mod!
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FCL
1,478 posts
Joined July 2014
FCL
  • [Easy]
  1. 00:00:549 (1,2,1,2) - don't like this, idk why. Probably it's looks a bit boring and also overlaps looks not good
  2. 00:17:969 (4) - a bit weird. Suggest to rotate it at 90 degrees relativity 00:16:807 (3) - and move on 145 92
  3. 00:22:614 (4,1) - maybe try to do blanket here?
  4. 00:37:711 (1) - parallel relativity 00:36:162 (3) - pls
  5. 01:28:807 (1) - stack with end of 01:26:485 (3) - will be better
  6. 01:33:453 (1,2) - you can improve blanket here

  • [Normal]
  1. 00:24:549 (2) - don't like flow here, maybe move on 162 30?
  2. 00:27:646 (7,8) - same, don't like, but if you rotate it by 10-15 degrees it will look good.

  • [Hard]
  1. 00:08:679 (4) - imo looks ugly
  2. 00:42:162 (4,1) - check pls, uneven blanket and error spacing i guess

  • [Lunatic]
  1. 00:15:646 (4) - i guess you wanted to put this slider at centre, but now it is not
  2. 00:32:872 (3) - i think this slider is not good for your style, also it not looks good. My sugestion http://puu.sh/lRyA1/4fcae838cb.jpg it will be better
  3. 00:36:162 (1) - same as 00:15:646 (4). Check other same sliders
  4. 01:34:033 (3,5) - uh, due to stack this circles is not parallel, make something here
Lily Bread
1,228 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Lily Bread
/*
red = nope.
orange = in consideration.
no comment or pink= fixed.
*/

FCL wrote:

  • [Easy]
  1. 00:00:549 (1,2,1,2) - don't like this, idk why. Probably it's looks a bit boring and also overlaps looks not good
    //though it's not my diff, pls don't say "i don't like" when you mod a map.
    //we can't fit everyone's like and dislike.

  • [Normal]
  1. 00:24:549 (2) - don't like flow here, maybe move on 162 30?
    //nope
  2. 00:27:646 (7,8) - same, don't like, but if you rotate it by 10-15 degrees it will look good.
//nope

  • [Hard]
  1. 00:08:679 (4) - imo looks ugly
    //nope
  2. 00:42:162 (4,1) - check pls, uneven blanket and error spacing i guess
    //nope

  • [Lunatic]
  1. 00:15:646 (4) - i guess you wanted to put this slider at centre, but now it is not
    //fixed
  2. 00:32:872 (3) - i think this slider is not good for your style, also it not looks good. My sugestion http://puu.sh/lRyA1/4fcae838cb.jpg it will be better
    //it's ok imo
  3. 00:36:162 (1) - same as 00:15:646 (4). Check other same sliders
    //nope
  4. 01:34:033 (3,5) - uh, due to stack this circles is not parallel, make something here
    //considering..
/*
thanks for mod.
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XiaofengTiger
122 posts
Joined September 2013
XiaofengTiger
[General]
  1. 每个难度都有Blanket问题……不过我不敢贴
  2. 音效ok啦！
[Luantic]
  1. 开NF打了一下，死的很惨……对称好溜
  2. 00:51:646 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这一堆东西还是不要堆叠吧，有SL这堆东西看起来和整个图的对称风格格格不入，我觉得排成移动连打会好看一些...
  3. 01:22:324 (4) - 确认clap是放在蓝线上么？
  4. 01:40:904 (3) - 同上
[Hard]
  1. 00:00:549 (1,2) - 锚点感觉不对称，而且红锚点不在slidertick上
  2. 00:04:033 (4) - 这个也左右不对称呀，用Ctrl+G就可以把锚点调整到滑条头尾的中心了
  3. 00:37:711 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉可以用渐变SV
[Normal]
  1. 01:21:066 (4,6) - 轻微遮挡
[Mollen's Easy]
  1. 大问题是没有的，还是有blanket问题
百合面包出品皆属精品
Lily Bread
1,228 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
Lily Bread
/*
red = nope.
orange = in consideration.
no comment or pink = fixed.
*/

XiaofengTiger wrote:

[General]
  1. 每个难度都有Blanket问题……不过我不敢贴
  2. 音效ok啦！
[Luantic]
  1. 开NF打了一下，死的很惨……对称好溜
  2. 00:51:646 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这一堆东西还是不要堆叠吧，有SL这堆东西看起来和整个图的对称风格格格不入，我觉得排成移动连打会好看一些...
    //不过这里我就是很想用这样的梗..再看看吧
  3. 01:22:324 (4) - 确认clap是放在蓝线上么？
    //仔细听了下，感觉这个应该是在红线上
  4. 01:40:904 (3) - 同上
    //^
[Hard]
  1. 00:00:549 (1,2) - 锚点感觉不对称，而且红锚点不在slidertick上
    //改了一下
  2. 00:04:033 (4) - 这个也左右不对称呀，用Ctrl+G就可以把锚点调整到滑条头尾的中心了
    //这个没问题吧...
  3. 00:37:711 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉可以用渐变SV
    //不，省的又被说太难
[Normal]
  1. 01:21:066 (4,6) - 轻微遮挡
    //诶，竟然会犯这种低级失误..

百合面包出品皆属精品
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Mollon
86 posts
Joined February 2013
Mollon
[quote="FCL"]
  • [Easy]
  1. 00:00:549 (1,2,1,2) - don't like this, idk why. Probably it's looks a bit boring and also overlaps looks not good
    hmm...i wanna fit the repeat of the song~ i just take lily bread's advice to make it for real newbies so i think its ok~
  2. 00:17:969 (4) - a bit weird. Suggest to rotate it at 90 degrees relativity 00:16:807 (3) - and move on 145 92
    i've changed it at 90 degrees and i keep the place now~
  3. 00:22:614 (4,1) - maybe try to do blanket here?
    to make it neatly i make 1's head on 00:20:291's tail..so its a bit hard to make it a blanket cause DS...i'll try!
  4. 00:37:711 (1) - parallel relativity 00:36:162 (3) - pls
    fixed!
  5. 01:28:807 (1) - stack with end of 01:26:485 (3) - will be better
    changed a little
  6. 01:33:453 (1,2) - you can improve blanket here
    fixed!

To xiaofengtiger:blanket我查了一些，准备做成blanket的部分我看着都尽量修了一下，有一些因为DS问题是有点修不动，如果还是有问题的话就麻烦扣扣告诉我啦~

thx for mod~><
Mollon
86 posts
Joined February 2013
Mollon
SPOILER
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: dBu music - Higan Kikou ~ Titanic of Stygian.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 65582
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
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[Metadata]
Title:Higan Kikou ~ Titanic of Stygian
TitleUnicode:彼岸帰航 ~ Titanic of Stygian
Artist:dBu music
ArtistUnicode:dBu music
Creator:Lily Bread
Version:Mollon's Easy
Source:東方Project
Tags:mollon Touhou zun 小野塚小町 Onozuka Komachi 大弾奏結界 総集篇纂組曲 ～The Suite～ 上海アリス幻樂団
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pieguyn
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pieguyn
suggestion, only change if you feel like it
should fix
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[General]
how about adding another kiai fountain at 01:24:162 ? seems to fit imo since the song becomes noticeably louder there.
i'm pretty sure the intro/kiai should be 3/4 not 4/4:

should probably double check this bc i'm not sure on this.

[Mollon's Easy]
00:05:195 (1,2) - move it up and right a bit? imo it'd look more neat if 00:05:195 (1) wasn't in the exact same spot as 00:00:549 (1) .
00:12:162 (3) - mb this might look nicer if it's a c/p from 00:11:001 (2) . example http://puu.sh/lSC41/a752db002a.jpg
00:28:420 (1,2) - intentional spacing?
00:37:711 (1) - it's too close to 00:36:162 (3) . move it down a bit to keep the distance more consistent?
00:59:388 (1,2) - any reason this spacing is closer?

[Normal]
00:29:388 (3) - add finish on tail?
00:32:291 (2,3) - imo finish is more suitable than clap to emphasize the cymbal here.

[Hard]
01:14:098 (6,7,8) - distance here is noticeably different. intentional?

[Lunatic]
00:30:356 (2) - i'd move it up a few grids, more interesting movement imo. (similar to 00:33:453 (1,2,3) )
00:37:711 (1,2,3,4) - how about this pattern... http://puu.sh/lSClp/2de8d5c929.jpg ? imo current pattern feels kinda close, and the speedup could be emphasized more.
01:10:033 (10) - shouldn't it be straight?
01:28:420 (8) - ^
01:28:420 (8) - what do you think about splitting this into 2 sliders like the others? i thought it played really well and this is the most epic part of the song so seems it'd fit.

good map, really nice patterns ~ i don't have any good suggestion lol, map seems really good as it is already.
good luck getting it qualified. :)

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