LiSA - Rising Hope (TV Size) · forum

Kibbleru

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5,846 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2014-04-08T02:10:17+00:00

Lets go for some m4m here
via ur queue

[Insane]

00:04:773 (2,5) - perhaps you can stack (5) with the end of (2). just neater
00:16:299 (1,4) - make these parallel o3o, they're pretty close atm
00:16:299 (1,6) - ^
00:33:984 (1,3) - uhh space out a bit more
00:35:484 (5) - how bout copy (4) and rotate it by -120
00:57:826 (5,8) - how bout a blanket?
00:59:247 (1,3) - i wouldn't overlap this, not that pretty
01:10:615 (5,1) - consider stacking heads
General comments, try finding some stuff you can stack, for neatness
Also try copy pasting the sliders more and using the rotate tool (ctrl shift r). again to make stuff look pretty

[Hope]

00:13:773 (1,3) - space out a bit
00:27:194 (3,2) - ^
00:48:931 (3,1) - this can be blanketed better
00:48:931 (3,1) - eh not too important but u can try stack
01:05:878 (1,2) - try copying one of the sliders here

[Hard]

01:03:037 (1) - might be better flow if you did ctrl g
00:38:563 (4,5,6) - you can put a curve here for more comfortable flow
SPOILER
01:09:984 (3) - expose slider end a bit more? i dunno just looks better to me lol
SPOILER
-nazi- 01:13:932 (3) - move the middle slider point a grid down for better blanket

[Normal]

00:03:195 (5,1) - anti jumps too hard for normal
00:41:563 (1) - how bout line it up like this?
SPOILER
00:58:299 (4,1) - space out a bit more

[Easy]

-nazi- 00:23:405 (3,1) - blanket better
00:36:511 (1,1) - ugly overlap here
01:20:721 (3) - the first inner curve is a bit sharp imo, round it out a bit

lmao gg ur map is good *-*

have a star
i hope this was somewhat helpful ._.

captin1

osu! Alumni

2,607 posts

Joined February 2011

captin1 2014-04-08T02:24:38+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
Lets go for some m4m here
via ur queue

[Insane]
00:04:773 (2,5) - perhaps you can stack (5) with the end of (2). just neater nah, i'd like to keep the triangle as is
00:16:299 (1,4) - make these parallel o3o, they're pretty close atm
00:16:299 (1,6) - ^ sure
00:33:984 (1,3) - uhh space out a bit more why? they don't overlap and increasing the distance will increase the jump, I think it's fine
00:35:484 (5) - how bout copy (4) and rotate it by -120 don't think it's necessary, looks fine as is
00:57:826 (5,8) - how bout a blanket? it is a blanket, just a wide one. don't want to curve 5 more or change the placement of 8
00:59:247 (1,3) - i wouldn't overlap this, not that pretty adjusted so they end in the same spot
01:10:615 (5,1) - consider stacking heads doesn't really make a difference
General comments, try finding some stuff you can stack, for neatness excessive stacking can create problems when you use hd mod, and in an easier Insane I'd prefer if the readability is clear. it's fine if things aren't stacked if it's clearly intentional that they're not supposed to be. Also keep in mind that many of those stacks aren't really noticeable in play, especially if the previous note was much earlier
Also try copy pasting the sliders more and using the rotate tool (ctrl shift r). again to make stuff look pretty lol I guess i just like making my sliders by hand, since I'm pretty particular about their direction
i hope this was somewhat helpful ._.

thanks~

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Title:Rising Hope (TV Size)
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Source:魔法科高校の劣等生
Tags:Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei Oribe Risa 織部 里沙 Tabuchi Tomoya Tsutomu Satō The Irregular at Magic High School captin1
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232,292,76536,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,304,76615,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2014-04-08T05:03:23+00:00

Kibbleru

Kibbleru wrote:
Lets go for some m4m here
via ur queue

[Hope]
00:13:773 (1,3) - space out a bit done
00:27:194 (3,2) - ^ ^
00:48:931 (3,1) - this can be blanketed better ^
00:48:931 (3,1) - eh not too important but u can try stack well it's kinda unnecessary cuz its not noticeable in game so nope
01:05:878 (1,2) - try copying one of the sliders here it is copied but than rotated, plays finer current imo
[Hard]
01:03:037 (1) - might be better flow if you did ctrl g another modder also mentioned it so aight.
00:38:563 (4,5,6) - you can put a curve here for more comfortable flow was done intentional, prefer it like this
SPOILER
01:09:984 (3) - expose slider end a bit more? i dunno just looks better to me lol well kay, only did a little tho, it would end up killing the blanket
SPOILER
-nazi- 01:13:932 (3) - move the middle slider point a grid down for better blanket done
[Normal]
00:03:195 (5,1) - anti jumps too hard for normal spaced it out
00:41:563 (1) - how bout line it up like this? done
SPOILER
00:58:299 (4,1) - space out a bit more great catch, thanks to this I noticed that this whole section wasn't DSed lol
[Easy]
-nazi- 00:23:405 (3,1) - blanket better done
00:36:511 (1,1) - ugly overlap here done
01:20:721 (3) - the first inner curve is a bit sharp imo, round it out a bit done
lmao gg ur map is good *-* *w*

have a star
i hope this was somewhat helpful ._.

Thanks for the mod and star~~!!! :3

Umi wrote:
I want back, I want map ! ;w;

good luck with this ;3

Than come back baka =3=, also thx for the star <3

kintyan

150 posts

Joined September 2010

kintyan 2014-04-08T08:39:04+00:00

hi~~ from my user page queue

[Easy]
01:21:984 (1,2) - suggestion http://puu.sh/80zzV.jpg

[Normal]
00:23:405 (4) - suggestion http://puu.sh/80zoE.jpg Ctrl+G and Ctrl+> x2

[Hard]
00:08:090 (3) - add NC?
01:28:931 (3) - NC
00:24:195 (2,3) - suggestion

SPOILER

00:24:194 - circle
00:24:352 1/2 return slider

how about this?

00:48:511 (3,4) - beat snap divisor is 1/3, now not match sound
00:53:879 (4,5,1) - change to 1/2 return slider?

[Insane]
00:08:089 - suggestion, slider velocity multiplier for 1.2x ?
00:08:720 ~ 00:08:799 - how about kiai time ?
00:18:668 - add 1/4 slider, vocal cover
01:08:878 (5,6,1,2,3) - how about stream? i think that very exciting
01:26:720 (1,2,3,4,1) - i think that look is bad >< i want clean stream
01:28:931 (3) - NC

good luck!!

Arcubin

689 posts

Joined September 2013

Arcubin 2014-04-08T08:53:37+00:00

i don't know where i have to start ._. let's start from general
sorry for my bad english -_-

Genereal

i think hitsound volume should get louder ._. i don't know it's my speaker fault or the beatmap (the hitsound volume is quiet low)
background maybe? but it's a good background. you don't have to change it (but if you prefer change. change with the anime one not the chibi)
video :v ahaha don't mind this one. the anime is still 1 episode (i can give you the BG video after 2nd episode is released)
overall is good

Easy
overall is good. just a bit confusing
00:04:299 - delete the whistle. a bit confusing for beginner
00:13:457 - give it a note (i think the next note are in this section)
00:54:510-00:56:089 - spinner if you want

Normal
00:13:457 - note
00:18:352 - change to 1/4 slider? i think it's have better sound (but it's look easier in 1/2)
00:51:668 - change to 1 1/2 slider and give a note at 00:52:299 (better sound but harder)
00:54:510-00:56:089 - spinner (you know. i think you should give a spinner on this beatmap)

Hard
i think you should re-balancing this one. the differentiation from Normal to Hard is a bit large
00:07:142 - a bit too far
00:11:089 - i think this note should put near the next note
00:12:352 - delete this one and change to 1/2 slider at 00:12:510 (ah, don't mind it. increasing the difficulty)
00:38:563 (and next 3 note) - should get closer too next note
00:39:668 - closer too next note? (it's not far. but for decreasing the difficulty. you know re-balancing with the other difficulty)
00:49:615 - put it at the end of the previous slider
00:54:194 - delete this note or change with spinner
00:58:457 - change the place with note number 4 of same combo
01:02:878 - put it at the end of the previous slider or at the start of next slider
01:15:352 - a bit confusing. put the note somewhere else

Hope
00:01:615 or 00:01:931 - maybe get closer from previous note? (pick one note. not all)
00:12:194 - closer to next note? (my opinion. you don't have to change it. cause it's give a challenge)
00:12:826 - ctrl+g
00:14:720 (and next 1 note) - put it at the end of previous slider
00:15:036 - ctrl+g (for me it's easier)
00:21:589 - note (following the previous beat)
00:26:878 - ctrl+g? (it's slightly better)
00:33:668 - confusing... -_- don't change the speed so suddenly
00:37:142 - move this note to x : about 392 and y : about 204
00:38:720 - too far. try re-balancing it simultaneously with previous note
00:48:510 (and next 3 slider) - not fit with the song. i don't know you what is your purpose. but it's not good (change to 1/3 slider. it's fit enough)
00:57:036 - too far
01:03:826 - too far
01:05:563 - too far (reached but get 100 point :3)
01:06:510 - put at the start of 1st slider of same combo <=== hard to understand? i will give the SS if you don't understand
01:10:457 - put this somewhere else. it will be better if you put it under the previous slider
01:11:326 - too close? (just my imagination, maybe)
01:13:615 - ctrl+g or not it's your decision
01:14:720 - change the place with note number 4 of same combo
01:15:036 - ctrl+g, then ctrl+h
01:22:299 - ctrl+g

i don't have mod at captin's insane (quite good)

ah yea, are you open for guest diff? i want make a taiko map on this song

-Neipezi

2,266 posts

Joined October 2011

-Neipezi 2014-04-08T12:30:39+00:00

xChippy, need the video(HD) owo?

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2014-04-08T15:07:19+00:00

azintairin710

azintairin710 wrote:
i don't know where i have to start ._. let's start from general
sorry for my bad english -_-

Genereal
i think hitsound volume should get louder ._. i don't know it's my speaker fault or the beatmap (the hitsound volume is quiet low) sounds fine to me tho, I'll w8 for more opinions
background maybe? but it's a good background. you don't have to change it (but if you prefer change. change with the anime one not the chibi) I'm waiting for a good background
video :v ahaha don't mind this one. the anime is still 1 episode (i can give you the BG video after 2nd episode is released) ye dis <-- xD
overall is good
Easy
overall is good. just a bit confusing
00:04:299 - delete the whistle. a bit confusing for beginner done
00:13:457 - give it a note (i think the next note are in this section) did this to make it a bit easier so nope not adding
00:54:510-00:56:089 - spinner if you want spinner doesnt fit imo so I'll just keep it as a break

Normal
00:13:457 - note nah same reason as easy to give the players a little rest and to make it a bit easy
00:18:352 - change to 1/4 slider? i think it's have better sound (but it's look easier in 1/2) 1/4 slider in a normal is meeh so nope
00:51:668 - change to 1 1/2 slider and give a note at 00:52:299 (better sound but harder) I follow vocal here ;w;
00:54:510-00:56:089 - spinner (you know. i think you should give a spinner on this beatmap) same as above

Hard
i think you should re-balancing this one. the differentiation from Normal to Hard is a bit large really? imo it seems fine, I'll ask some more opinions
00:07:142 - a bit too far nah jumps little jumps are cool in hard also the slider leniency decreases it even more.
00:11:089 - i think this note should put near the next note nah prefer jump for the emphasize on the slider
00:12:352 - delete this one and change to 1/2 slider at 00:12:510 (ah, don't mind it. increasing the difficulty) I'm following the high pitched instrument so prefer to keep like this
00:38:563 (and next 3 note) - should get closer too next note it's DS tho ;w; well I decreased the jump to the slider a little
00:39:668 - closer too next note? (it's not far. but for decreasing the difficulty. you know re-balancing with the other difficulty) prefer jump
00:49:615 - put it at the end of the previous slider will break the flow
00:54:194 - delete this note or change with spinner same spinner doesnt fit here imo
00:58:457 - change the place with note number 4 of same combo nah I prefer the jump here
01:02:878 - put it at the end of the previous slider or at the start of next slider why? I dont see a problem with the current
01:15:352 - a bit confusing. put the note somewhere else nah prefer this did it intentionally like this as a trap.

Hope
00:01:615 or 00:01:931 - maybe get closer from previous note? (pick one note. not all)
00:12:194 - closer to next note? (my opinion. you don't have to change it. cause it's give a challenge)
00:12:826 - ctrl+g done
00:14:720 (and next 1 note) - put it at the end of previous slider
00:15:036 - ctrl+g (for me it's easier)
00:21:589 - note (following the previous beat) switching the emphasize to vocal so nope
00:26:878 - ctrl+g? (it's slightly better)
00:33:668 - confusing... -_- don't change the speed so suddenly
00:37:142 - move this note to x : about 392 and y : about 204
00:38:720 - too far. try re-balancing it simultaneously with previous note
00:48:510 (and next 3 slider) - not fit with the song. i don't know you what is your purpose. but it's not good (change to 1/3 slider. it's fit enough) it is 1/3
00:57:036 - too far
01:03:826 - too far
01:05:563 - too far (reached but get 100 point :3)
01:06:510 - put at the start of 1st slider of same combo <=== hard to understand? i will give the SS if you don't understand would break flow
01:10:457 - put this somewhere else. it will be better if you put it under the previous slider no it won't current flow is better and also has a nice blanket
01:11:326 - too close? (just my imagination, maybe) no rythm is 1/4 so distance is smaller
01:13:615 - ctrl+g or not it's your decision
01:14:720 - change the place with note number 4 of same combo
01:15:036 - ctrl+g, then ctrl+h
01:22:299 - ctrl+g
the other ''Ctrl G's and too far'' suggestion were rejected cuz I see no reason to change those as the current already flows better for me. This is also the hardest diff in the mapset so there is no need for concern about this being to hard

i don't have mod at captin's insane (quite good)

ah yea, are you open for guest diff? i want make a taiko map on this song

Not accepting anymore GD's for this map >< so I have to reject.

Sheryl

Sheryl wrote:
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[Easy]
01:21:984 (1,2) - suggestion http://puu.sh/80zzV.jpg would kill blanket TwT so nope

[Normal]
00:23:405 (4) - suggestion http://puu.sh/80zoE.jpg Ctrl+G and Ctrl+> x2 done

[Hard]
00:08:090 (3) - add NC? nope would break consistency
01:28:931 (3) - NC ^
00:24:195 (2,3) - suggestion following instrument ;w; so nope
SPOILER

00:24:194 - circle
00:24:352 1/2 return slider

how about this?
00:48:511 (3,4) - beat snap divisor is 1/3, now not match sound oops fixed
00:53:879 (4,5,1) - change to 1/2 return slider? prefer to let those different beats have their own emphasizes

[Insane]
00:08:089 - suggestion, slider velocity multiplier for 1.2x ? nah
00:08:720 ~ 00:08:799 - how about kiai time ? prefer to keep kiai only in refrain
00:18:668 - add 1/4 slider, vocal cover vocal not very noticeable tho o3o
01:08:878 (5,6,1,2,3) - how about stream? i think that very exciting done
01:26:720 (1,2,3,4,1) - i think that look is bad >< i want clean stream want symmetry with anti jump of before
01:28:931 (3) - NC done

good luck!!

Thanks for modding both~~!!! :3

Last edited by xChippy 2014-04-08T15:13:10+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

captin1

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captin1 2014-04-08T15:09:41+00:00

hehe

Bara-

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Bara- 2014-04-08T16:23:32+00:00

Hi, M4M
Good map, so not much things to point out ><
Sorry
[Easy]
00:32:721 (3) - Change overlap, It is too hard for an easy, it is beautiful, but it breaks flow for easy
00:54:510 - Maybe map this part, break feels little weird, so short
01:03:036 (3,2) - Overlap
01:22:615 (2) - Feels better with 1/1, instead of 3/2 (current)

[Normal]
00:10:615 (1) - IMO this is a weird overlap, you don't need to fix this, as it is my opinion
00:40:931 (4) - This feels weird, because overlap, let it go down, instead of up
00:49:142 (1,2) - Sorry, change this, kinda ugly overlap ><
Also map the break
01:27:036 (1,2,3) - Don't know if this is okay/allowed for Normal, because 190 BPM

[Hard]
00:08:326 (5) - Seems unneccessary (onnodig)
00:11:247 (1) - Avoid this jump please, try to not use around 2.0x DS jumps, as they will confuse players
00:20:011 (4) - Seems unneccessary
00:31:458 (1) - Might be a fast jump, too fast
Map the break
00:58:458 (3,4) - [ctrl] + [g]
01:09:273 (7) - Unneccessary
Try to change some 1/4 reverse slider into triplets, par example 01:07:774 (4)
01:14:721 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - TBH, I HATE this, please make some sliders. This is the only part I dislike
01:26:878 (2,3) - I don't get those notes, I don't understand why you did those
01:29:563 Add note here, or even better, make 01:29:405 (6) - end here as a slider

[captin's Insane]
HP -1
00:01:142 (2) - Sorry, place it somewhere else, or make it a stream (5 notes) It feels not good as a reverse slider
00:15:510 (6) - Jump is way to much, or ctrl g or do something els with it, like slider + circle
00:27:984 (5) - Seems out of place, put it at same place as the (3)
00:40:299 (6) - Make it 1/2, instead of 3/4,
00:40:536 Make 1/2 slider here, or move 00:40:615 (7) to here (fix spacing)
00:50:405 (5,6) - Only have a slider, start at (5) till end of (6)
00:54:194 - Add note here
Map the break, or at least do ^^
00:58:773 (1) - Sudden speed down ○.○
01:19:457 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - In this part, NO circles on red ticks! Slider ends are allowed, but not recommended
01:29:563 Add note here

[Hope]
HP- 1/2
OD- 1
00:08:326 (2) - Set this in the middle of (1) & (3)
00:20:089 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - Make the triples note triples, not note+slider
00:22:457 (1,2,1,1) - Maybe avoid slowdowns
00:33:668 (1) - Slowdown is too much
00:37:142 (3) - Overlap is not that good with (1)
00:40:615 (2) - Move back 1/4 tick
00:48:510 (1,2,3) - It does follow music, but it doesn't really fit IMO, or Ctrl+G (2), or the others
00:53:247 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - A little too fast?
Map the break
00:58:773 (1) - This is a no-no sorry. Follow music, make 1/2 reverse or something like that
01:07:773 (1) - Out-of-bounds?
01:07:931 (2) - Insane jump
01:11:089 (3) - Out-of-bounds?
01:26:720 (1,2,3,4) - Why is there a stream?
01:29:563 Add note here

Good Lcuk!

Kodora

Kodora 2014-04-08T16:34:18+00:00

Hi, from #modreqs
All diffs looks very neat and clean, so all my lines are suggestions mostly.

[General]

Kiai in your own diffs are 1 ms inconsistent, would be better to keep them same for safe
Not going to add video?

[Hope]

*Change Stack Leniency to 0.4 - you will have more neat stacked patterns with keeping them readable enough to play.

00:01:615 (4) - New combo follow jump and new part of music would be nice here
00:05:247 (2,3,1,2,1,2) - You kinda overusing whistles at this part. I understand that you wanted to emphazire this tiny BGM bell, but with that big amount of whistles this simple sounds too loud and doesnt fit at all. I'd recommend to add whistles to every red tick at this part (see the example) - sounds quite well for me, try it:

SPOILER
00:07:773 (2) - Suggest remove whistle from head and add on tail to follow music better
00:15:510 (3) - Add soft whistle here follow vocals, works quite nice for me (not your custom one)
00:21:510 (3,4,5) - After previous streamy part (00:20:089 - 00:21:352 - ) this sudden 1/2 section feels jarringly and not so intuitive to play - i understand that you wanted to follow lyrics here, but such sudden rhythm change feels rather drastic. Imo, would be more intuitive, you you would keep drum rhythm what you choosed before - like this:

SPOILER
00:23:247 (1) - I don't think that this NC is really needed, remove it perhaps?
01:03:984 (5) - Missed hitfinish on slider head. If you will add it, try to reduse volume a bit on it to follow music properly.
01:07:773 (1,2) - This section will be quite harsh to follow with hard rock due to really big spacing between them, maybe make a little stack like this instead?

SPOILER
01:13:615 (3,4) - I would prefer to see this rotated in another direction for more smooth flow, something like this:

SPOILER
01:14:089 (5) - Finish to head of slider (may reduse volume a tiny bit)
01:20:089 (1,2) - Would be nicer if you'd stack them perfeclty - such manual stacking looks rather like antijumps and works kinda unintuitive

[captin's Insane]

00:03:589 - I'd prefer if you add note here to follow music properly
00:09:352 (3,4) - Kinda feels weird. Try to swap them on timeline to follow music properly, it also will feels better while playing
00:10:299 (6) - New combo follow jump & new part of music please
00:19:931 (5,6,1) - This triple feels rather random for me since all this part you followed vocals instead of drums - try to keep consistensy at rhythm what you choose - i believe that 1/2 slider here would work nicer.
00:35:720 (6) - Kinda weird to play - i understand that you wanted to follow lyrics here but this note is simple hard to catch for players. Try to delete this and extend 00:35:484 (5) - to 00:35:720 - that would work more intuitive imo
00:41:168 (2,3) - Same here
00:48:510 (6) - New combo follow new part of music?
00:51:668 (1) - Make 3/4 extended slider instead follow vocals? Like this:

SPOILER
00:54:194 - Feels kinda empty without note here :c
01:04:299 (1) - Make it slighty curved for better flow? Like this:

SPOILER
01:10:615 (5) - Same as above, i'd made it slighty curved for better flow:

SPOILER

[Hard]

*Raise AR by 1 tick - AR 8 will made your stacking patterns more readable, and you will have better difficulty spread since Normal have AR5 and Insane AR9.
*Change Stack Leniency to 0.5 - you will have more neat stacked patterns with keeping them readable enough to play.

00:05:090 (1,2,3,4) - Same as Insane
00:08:247 (4,5,6) - Replacing them with 1/4 repeat-slider would be more hard player-friendly
00:08:721 (1,3) - Inproperly stacked, please fix that.
00:09:984 (1,2) - This 1/1 stacking is very counter-intuitive with this AR - people will expect beat at 00:10:142 - , while you keeping big enough pause and ignoring music at this point :< Might be better to read with AR8, but i highly suggest you consider reworking all similiar 1/1 stacks on this diff (might be easily fixed by adding note at 00:10:142 - )
00:10:616 (3,1) - Stacking issue
00:15:511 (2) - Add soft whistle here follow vocals, works quite nice for me (not your custom one)
00:54:195 (1) - whistle perhaps?
01:00:984 (2,3) - Very unintuitive stacking again I understand that you wanted to follow vocals at this part but vocals simple have no stable pattern here, so it will work very unintuitive for players. Try this to make it more friendly to play:

SPOILER
01:28:931 (3) - New combo follow new part on music?

[Normal]

*Tick Rate 2 would work nice here with rhythm what you choosed
*So low DS choise

*Add a spinner somewhere so that there are variable high scores possible.

00:22:299 (2,3) - Stack them perfectly - this would work much better than overlapping
01:06:511 (4,1) - Same as above
01:07:774 (3,4) - ^
01:16:616 (4,1) - ^
01:28:931 (6) - New combo follow new part on music?

[Easy]

*Raise OD by 1 tick for more balanced settings
*Add a spinner somewhere so that there are variable high scores possible.

00:31:458 (1,3) - Not beginner-friendly - don't forget that beginners might be not able to read tricky stacked patterns like this one. Perhaps try something like this to make it easier?

SPOILER
00:46:616 (1,3) - Overlap
01:03:036 (3,2) - Same, try to change snape of (3) to avoid that - something like this

SPOILER
01:28:931 (4) - New combo follow new part on music?

Well, really nicely mapped Easy, but might be a bit too hard - kinda feels like soft normal, and 3.24 stars can be questionable for rank - try to make it a bit easier.

Good luck~

captin1

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captin1 2014-04-08T21:38:07+00:00

baraatje123 wrote:
Hi, M4M
Good map, so not much things to point out ><
Sorry

[captin's Insane]
HP -1 probably not, diff settings are balanced with the rest of the set
00:01:142 (2) - Sorry, place it somewhere else, or make it a stream (5 notes) It feels not good as a reverse slider I think it feels fine, and I'd like to keep the beginning a bit easier on accuracy since there hasn't been music to establish the beat yet
00:15:510 (6) - Jump is way to much, or ctrl g or do something els with it, like slider + circle it's fine since they're sliders
00:27:984 (5) - Seems out of place, put it at same place as the (3) that makes the jump to 6 too high
00:40:299 (6) - Make it 1/2, instead of 3/4, the 3/4 is with the vocal
00:40:536 Make 1/2 slider here, or move 00:40:615 (7) to here (fix spacing)
00:50:405 (5,6) - Only have a slider, start at (5) till end of (6) then i would be skipping the snare, which i don't want to do
00:54:194 - Add note here sure
Map the break, or at least do ^^
00:58:773 (1) - Sudden speed down ○.○ it's fine since it's a repeat slider, meant to be played as a hold
01:19:457 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - In this part, NO circles on red ticks! Slider ends are allowed, but not recommended uh, this sounds like you're trying to force me to, which is totally not cool. this is fine as is
01:29:563 Add note here nope, there's definitely no sound to map here

Good Lcuk!

Kodora wrote:
Hi, from #modreqs
All diffs looks very neat and clean, so all my lines are suggestions mostly.

[captin's Insane]

00:03:589 - I'd prefer if you add note here to follow music properly not sure if it really is following the music, not a clear 1/4, but it does play well still
00:09:352 (3,4) - Kinda feels weird. Try to swap them on timeline to follow music properly, it also will feels better while playing
00:10:299 (6) - New combo follow jump & new part of music please did it on 00:09:826 (1) - instead
00:19:931 (5,6,1) - This triple feels rather random for me since all this part you followed vocals instead of drums - try to keep consistensy at rhythm what you choose - i believe that 1/2 slider here would work nicer. i'll give this some thought, I like the rhythmic variety it throws in there but I get what you're saying
00:35:720 (6) - Kinda weird to play - i understand that you wanted to follow lyrics here but this note is simple hard to catch for players. Try to delete this and extend 00:35:484 (5) - to 00:35:720 - that would work more intuitive imo
00:41:168 (2,3) - Same here yep to both, I was thinking the same on those anyways
00:48:510 (6) - New combo follow new part of music? sure
00:51:668 (1) - Make 3/4 extended slider instead follow vocals? Like this: no thanks, chose not to do that for this map

SPOILER
00:54:194 - Feels kinda empty without note here :c yep
01:04:299 (1) - Make it slighty curved for better flow? Like this: sure

SPOILER
01:10:615 (5) - Same as above, i'd made it slighty curved for better flow: works well

SPOILER

Good luck~

thanks~

SPOILER

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xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2014-04-08T21:52:45+00:00

baraatje123

baraatje123 wrote:
Hi, M4M
Good map, so not much things to point out ><
Sorry
[Easy]
00:32:721 (3) - Change overlap, It is too hard for an easy, it is beautiful, but it breaks flow for easy done
00:54:510 - Maybe map this part, break feels little weird, so short prefer the break same as other diffs
01:03:036 (3,2) - Overlap done
01:22:615 (2) - Feels better with 1/1, instead of 3/2 (current) with the current you catch the major beats so I prefer the current one

[Normal]
00:10:615 (1) - IMO this is a weird overlap, you don't need to fix this, as it is my opinion well it kinda is a blanket o3o only made the slider a bit weird but it follows the music
00:40:931 (4) - This feels weird, because overlap, let it go down, instead of up plays fine for me tho OAO
00:49:142 (1,2) - Sorry, change this, kinda ugly overlap >< true
Also map the break same as the others
01:27:036 (1,2,3) - Don't know if this is okay/allowed for Normal, because 190 BPM its okay I think I did the same in another map with 202 bpm

[Hard]
00:08:326 (5) - Seems unneccessary (onnodig) well there is a beat there, but I went with Kodora his/her suggestion and changed it into a 1/4 repeat slider
00:11:247 (1) - Avoid this jump please, try to not use around 2.0x DS jumps, as they will confuse players jumps wont confuse players imo and having a map full DSed is boring... tho so nope
00:20:011 (4) - Seems unneccessary there is a beat that is pretty audible so why
00:31:458 (1) - Might be a fast jump, too fast nah slider leniency and the natural flow is good enough to indicate and also it has a nice emphasize
Map the break same as insane
00:58:458 (3,4) - [ctrl] + [g] intentional to give it a nice intro into the refrain so nope
01:09:273 (7) - Unneccessary same as before
Try to change some 1/4 reverse slider into triplets, par example 01:07:774 (4) that would make the map harder o.o?
01:14:721 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - TBH, I HATE this, please make some sliders. This is the only part I dislike I like the rapid tapping here tho it atleast makes the map a bit interesting imo, but I´ll consider when more ppl mention this
01:26:878 (2,3) - I don't get those notes, I don't understand why you did those uuh there is an instrument
01:29:563 Add note here, or even better, make 01:29:405 (6) - end here as a slider just doesnt sound right same as insane

[Hope]
HP- 1/2 no
OD- 1 no I don´t see why
00:08:326 (2) - Set this in the middle of (1) & (3) nah prefer the current
00:20:089 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - Make the triples note triples, not note+slider no, it´s to distinguish the beats that are present there.
00:22:457 (1,2,1,1) - Maybe avoid slowdowns no they fit the music
00:33:668 (1) - Slowdown is too much all testplayers played this perfectly me myself too so nope
00:37:142 (3) - Overlap is not that good with (1) I´ll ask some more opinions I don´t really want to place it somewhere else for flow reason, I prefer flow over aesthetics
00:40:615 (2) - Move back 1/4 tick I´ll consider doing that
00:48:510 (1,2,3) - It does follow music, but it doesn't really fit IMO, or Ctrl+G (2), or the others why doesn´t it fit o.o? the current has a nice circular flow to it
00:53:247 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - A little too fast? huh its the same speed as before :O?
Map the break nah prefer having the break there
00:58:773 (1) - This is a no-no sorry. Follow music, make 1/2 reverse or something like that It is following the music, the 1/2 your referring to is following the vocals I prefer to keep it as is.
01:07:773 (1) - Out-of-bounds? nope look at the test editor, seems fine.
01:07:931 (2) - Insane jump nah seems fine, the slider leniency is there to fix it a bit up
01:11:089 (3) - Out-of-bounds? same as before
01:26:720 (1,2,3,4) - Why is there a stream? there is that low-pitched instrument which I am following and it plays perfectly fine.
01:29:563 Add note here nah feels weird to me

Good Lcuk!

Kodora

Kodora wrote:
Hi, from #modreqs
All diffs looks very neat and clean, so all my lines are suggestions mostly.

[General]

Kiai in your own diffs are 1 ms inconsistent, would be better to keep them same for safe done
Not going to add video? Full video not out yet TwT
[Hope]

*Change Stack Leniency to 0.4 - you will have more neat stacked patterns with keeping them readable enough to play. aight

00:01:615 (4) - New combo follow jump and new part of music would be nice here true
00:05:247 (2,3,1,2,1,2) - You kinda overusing whistles at this part. I understand that you wanted to emphazire this tiny BGM bell, but with that big amount of whistles this simple sounds too loud and doesnt fit at all. I'd recommend to add whistles to every red tick at this part (see the example) - sounds quite well for me, try it:

SPOILER
it has the same amount tho xD, but oh well this way it sounds better tho I did one extra so kinda fixed
00:07:773 (2) - Suggest remove whistle from head and add on tail to follow music better done
00:15:510 (3) - Add soft whistle here follow vocals, works quite nice for me (not your custom one) I actually prefer this section to be silent as is, as the music is really calm and I see no need for it owo
00:21:510 (3,4,5) - After previous streamy part (00:20:089 - 00:21:352 - ) this sudden 1/2 section feels jarringly and not so intuitive to play - i understand that you wanted to follow lyrics here, but such sudden rhythm change feels rather drastic. Imo, would be more intuitive, you you would keep drum rhythm what you choosed before - like this: I´ll ask some more opinions on this one and than I will see what to do

SPOILER
00:23:247 (1) - I don't think that this NC is really needed, remove it perhaps? well fine than.
01:03:984 (5) - Missed hitfinish on slider head. If you will add it, try to reduse volume a bit on it to follow music properly. oh nice catch
01:07:773 (1,2) - This section will be quite harsh to follow with hard rock due to really big spacing between them, maybe make a little stack like this instead? I prefer it more like this tho >< I will consider this

SPOILER
01:13:615 (3,4) - I would prefer to see this rotated in another direction for more smooth flow, something like this: I think the current flows better tho :O, but oh well its more personal preferences

SPOILER
01:14:089 (5) - Finish to head of slider (may reduse volume a tiny bit) done
01:20:089 (1,2) - Would be nicer if you'd stack them perfeclty - such manual stacking looks rather like antijumps and works kinda unintuitiveit´s my intention tho TwT
[Hard]

*Raise AR by 1 tick - AR 8 will made your stacking patterns more readable, and you will have better difficulty spread since Normal have AR5 and Insane AR9. sounds reasonable, done
*Change Stack Leniency to 0.5 - you will have more neat stacked patterns with keeping them readable enough to play.aight

00:05:090 (1,2,3,4) - Same as Insane done
00:08:247 (4,5,6) - Replacing them with 1/4 repeat-slider would be more hard player-friendly done
00:08:721 (1,3) - Inproperly stacked, please fix that. done
00:09:984 (1,2) - This 1/1 stacking is very counter-intuitive with this AR - people will expect beat at 00:10:142 - , while you keeping big enough pause and ignoring music at this point :< Might be better to read with AR8, but i highly suggest you consider reworking all similiar 1/1 stacks on this diff (might be easily fixed by adding note at 00:10:142 - ) well I changed the AR so I will first await and see how it goes like this
00:10:616 (3,1) - Stacking issue done
00:15:511 (2) - Add soft whistle here follow vocals, works quite nice for me (not your custom one) same as insane
00:54:195 (1) - whistle perhaps? done
01:00:984 (2,3) - Very unintuitive stacking again I understand that you wanted to follow vocals at this part but vocals simple have no stable pattern here, so it will work very unintuitive for players. Try this to make it more friendly to play: well same as the other one I´ll w8 first be4 I take action as I kinda like those stacks TwT

SPOILER
01:28:931 (3) - New combo follow new part on music? done
[Normal]

*Tick Rate 2 would work nice here with rhythm what you choosed aight
*So low DS choise yes but cuz of the high bpm and the SV the visual distance seems pretty large already
*Add a spinner somewhere so that there are variable high scores possible. tried something

00:22:299 (2,3) - Stack them perfectly - this would work much better than overlapping done
01:06:511 (4,1) - Same as above
01:07:774 (3,4) - ^
01:16:616 (4,1) - ^ the others flows good tho so I didn´t change them
01:28:931 (6) - New combo follow new part on music? done
[Easy]

*Raise OD by 1 tick for more balanced settings done
*Add a spinner somewhere so that there are variable high scores possible. ye tried

00:31:458 (1,3) - Not beginner-friendly - don't forget that beginners might be not able to read tricky stacked patterns like this one. Perhaps try something like this to make it easier? done in my own way cuz your suggestion does look nice but the flow is a bit meh ><

SPOILER
00:46:616 (1,3) - Overlap its not really noticeable tho in-game TwT I will see what to do
01:03:036 (3,2) - Same, try to change snape of (3) to avoid that - something like this done

SPOILER
01:28:931 (4) - New combo follow new part on music?done
Well, really nicely mapped Easy, but might be a bit too hard - kinda feels like soft normal, and 3.24 stars can be questionable for rank - try to make it a bit easier. meh idk how2map easy TwT

Good luck~

Thanks for modding both of you!!! :33

OblivioN

OblivioN 2014-04-09T03:58:40+00:00

[Easy]
00:21:036 (4) - move to x:176 y:280 looks better
00:24:195 (1,2) - ummmm……not good……

[Normal]
00:14:720 (2) - clap
00:15:984- ^
00:39:352 ^
00:39:984 (2) - ^
00:42:194 Delete clap and add at 00:42:510 (2) -
00:45:036 (2) - whistle
00:45:668 ^
00:46:299 ^
00:47:563 ^
00:48:194 ^
00:48:826 ^
00:50:720 clap
00:51:036 delete clap

[Hard]
nice

[captin's Insane]
00:01:063 add circle?
00:33:510 empty……@_@

nice map XD

-Neipezi

2,266 posts

Joined October 2011

-Neipezi 2014-04-09T11:02:00+00:00

hi

video is here 'w'Download

[Easy]
00:47:878 (2) - add the finish on the tail?
00:56:405 - here is circle add? hear the drums here

[Normal]
reduced to 1 slider tick rate?
00:28:773 (5) - whistle add?
00:52:931 (3) - add the clap on the tail?
00:53:563 (4) - ^
00:31:931 (2) - add the whistle head and arrow
01:23:721 (4) - add the whistle on the head?

[Hard]
00:34:774 (4) - add the whistle on the head
00:35:879 (3) - add the clap on the tail
00:40:773 (3) - whistle add
00:48:511 (3) - NC add?
00:57:195 (3) - accurate blanket (2: x252 y184, end: x276 y240)
01:00:984 (2) - whistle add?
01:08:879 (4) - ^
01:11:090 (2) - ^
01:15:511 (2,3) - (2) and (3) the spacing (01:15:668 (3) - x188 y148, 01:15:826 (4) - x260 y184 move?)

[Hope]
Insane in comparison difficult. Extra or Expert change

[captin's Insane]
00:26:089 (9) - clap add
00:28:142 (5,6) - owo?
00:30:194 (5) - NC add

good lucky

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2014-04-09T13:22:20+00:00

OblivioN

OblivioN wrote:
[Easy]
00:21:036 (4) - move to x:176 y:280 looks better looks better but plays bad that is why I have it like the current one
00:24:195 (1,2) - ummmm……not good…… hmmm its good so no change

[Normal]
00:14:720 (2) - clap
00:15:984- ^
00:39:352 ^
00:39:984 (2) - ^
00:42:194 Delete clap and add at 00:42:510 (2) -
00:45:036 (2) - whistle
00:45:668 ^
00:46:299 ^
00:47:563 ^
00:48:194 ^
00:48:826 ^
00:50:720 clap
00:51:036 delete clap
denied all of those, they don't fit the music at all. I hitsound by following the music. tho I might have added one not sure which tho anymore.

[Hard]
nice

nice map XD

-Neipezi

-Neipezi wrote:
hi

video is here 'w'Download told you its not yet the full video ;w; need to wait for episode 2 TwT cuz this one is probably cutted.

[Easy]
00:47:878 (2) - add the finish on the tail? seems a bit noisy so nope
00:56:405 - here is circle add? hear the drums here would be very hard to catch nicely cuz of the break.

[Normal]
reduced to 1 slider tick rate? nah
00:28:773 (5) - whistle add? nah don't fit music imo
00:52:931 (3) - add the clap on the tail? there is already clap on tail o-o
00:53:563 (4) - ^ ^
00:31:931 (2) - add the whistle head and arrow don't fit imo >< I follow the bass with my whistles here
01:23:721 (4) - add the whistle on the head? ^

[Hard]
00:34:774 (4) - add the whistle on the head done
00:35:879 (3) - add the clap on the tail whistle sounds better to me
00:40:773 (3) - whistle add done
00:48:511 (3) - NC add? done
00:57:195 (3) - accurate blanket (2: x252 y184, end: x276 y240) did own fixes
01:00:984 (2) - whistle add?
01:08:879 (4) - ^
01:11:090 (2) - ^ no to these three cuz I follow the bass with the whistles
01:15:511 (2,3) - (2) and (3) the spacing (01:15:668 (3) - x188 y148, 01:15:826 (4) - x260 y184 move?) done

[Hope]
Insane in comparison difficult. Extra or Expert change uuh where is insane this is Hope

good lucky

Thanks for modding both of you~~!!! :3

captin1

osu! Alumni

2,607 posts

Joined February 2011

captin1 2014-04-10T02:40:50+00:00

-Neipezi wrote:
hi

[captin's Insane]
00:26:089 (9) - clap add k
00:28:142 (5,6) - owo? baka editor
00:30:194 (5) - NC add would break consistency

good lucky

don't want to add those notes oblivion, sorry!

SPOILER

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xChippy

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xChippy 2014-04-10T15:41:09+00:00

updated~~

captin1

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captin1 2014-04-10T15:56:11+00:00

SPOILER

:3

xChippy

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xChippy 2014-04-10T16:05:46+00:00

captin1 wrote:
SPOILER

:3

HUE NICE ONE CAPTIN, using it o3o/ Thanks :3

Myxo

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Myxo 2014-04-10T18:17:05+00:00

Mod by request~

[General]

Omg this mapset is perfect, will be short mod ;w;

[Easy]

00:27:668 (3) - Maybe move more upwards, to create better transition with the previous object? Something like this:
Example
00:42:826 (2) - Uhh even more nazi but I don't like how close this slider is to (1), maybe move it a little bit away like this:
Example
Impressive Easy.

[Normal]

00:05:563 (4) - It might look better if you move it to x:402 y:234, to create a straight line with 00:04:774 (3) like this:
Example
00:51:036 (5) - I think it would look better, if the red anchor point was exactly at the middle of the slidershape, at x:195 y:243:
Example
01:02:405 (2) - Maybe curve this slider a little, to create a better flow? I mean this:
Example
So lovely!

[Hard]

00:05:878 (4) - You could move it to x:437 y:325, to improve the pattern 00:05:247 (2,3,4) - It would look like this:
Example
Almost perfect.

[captin's Insane]

00:38:563 (1,2,3,1) - That looks like it belongs together but looks pretty random on the other hand. Maybe you could make this a better pattern with more use of spacing?
Nothing else. This is my favourite work from you o:

[Hope]

00:07:142 (4) - I guess moving it to x:388 y:182 (or generally a little more left) would improve the flow, and it stacks more on the track of (1)
Wow, why does this play so well and look so good, although you told me you didn't use much spacing ;w; Awesome!

Well, nice mapset! Hitsounding is perfect in all diffs, the rest is almost. I hope my short mod helped you a little bit ;w; Of course, I could've listed (even more) nazi spacing differences in Easy + Normal as well as wrong blankets in all diffs, but that's not important... Important is that the diffs are fun, play well and look good, and your map meats all those criteria! Keep up the good work!

You got my star of course :b

Good job! Good luck :3

captin1

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captin1 2014-04-11T06:14:29+00:00

i like how that pattern plays, so i'll keep for now, thanks~

xChippy

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xChippy 2014-04-11T06:18:09+00:00

I've done everything except the one in Hard, cuz imo it looks a bit to cramped >< currently the DSed one is fine owo
Thanks for modding~~!!! :3

10crystalmask01

10crystalmask01 2014-04-11T21:27:27+00:00

Hey, mod from queue

[captin's Insane]
00:01:142 (2) - NC because it's the first objects to official appear on the timing point (whereas 00:00:984 (1) - is before it).

00:21:510 (6) - NC?

00:22:457 (1) - Forgot to add a finish on the head.

00:23:247 (3,4) - Is a bit funny how they're stacked here imo. Why not try swapping 00:23:405 (4,5) - timing points, so that it forms a back-and-forth sort of flow instead?

00:50:405 (5) - NC?
01:18:194 (1) - ^

[Hope]
00:09:668 (5,1) - Sounds a bit off here, mainly because you have the tail of 00:09:668 (5) - hit a strong note in the music (you can hear that sudden high pitch in the music here).
What I suggest is try remapping this current rhythm to this:

That way, the slider at 00:09:826 will hit and follow the hold on the high pitch note smoothly. You can even make the slider at 00:09:826 have a slowdown in speed to enhance the effect.

00:12:194 (5,1) - Same suggestion as above. In this case, just extend 00:12:352 (1) - 's tail to 00:12:668.

00:31:457 (1) - Wanna try adding a finish on the head, to help show the tempo of the music growing faster?

[Hard]
00:09:668 (3,1) - Oh, here is the same issue as in the previous diff with 00:09:668 (5,1) - Try this rhythm here instead?

00:11:720 - Why did you make an empty gap here? In the previous rhythm, you did not make an empty gap at 00:10:457 nor in the next rhythm cycle at 00:12:984.
Please consider adding a note here, for consistency.

00:24:195 (2) - Sound kinda funny, because you decided to have the tail start on the vocals saying the long hold on the "tai" in mitai, and 00:24:668 (3) - be the filler for the lyrics. Try shrinking it to a 1/2 slider, then move 00:24:668 (1) - to 00:24:510. remove the hit circle, and addtwo hit circles after that.
How it should look:

01:18:195 (1) - Why not make this slider blanket 01:17:879 (4) - 's tail, rather then be overlapped by it?

[Normal and Easy]
Looks good.

Nice map set

Have a star!

Good luck!

captin1

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captin1 2014-04-11T21:40:32+00:00

10crystalmask01 wrote:
Hey, mod from queue
[captin's Insane]
00:01:142 (2) - NC because it's the first objects to official appear on the timing point (whereas 00:00:984 (1) - is before it). I think it's fine, doesn't affect much

00:21:510 (6) - NC? sure

00:22:457 (1) - Forgot to add a finish on the head. oops

00:23:247 (3,4) - Is a bit funny how they're stacked here imo. Why not try swapping 00:23:405 (4,5) - timing points, so that it forms a back-and-forth sort of flow instead? I like this as is, since it gives a short pause on 3,4, making the quicker jumps 4,5,6 have more impact

00:50:405 (5) - NC?
01:18:194 (1) - ^ no to these just as preference and consistency with sections around them

Nice map set Have a star!

Good luck!

thanks~

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261,183,78194,2,0,P|252:91|320:28,1,191.999994140625,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,180,78668,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,308,78826,2,0,P|344:340|304:344,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,344,79063,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,336,79142,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,256,79299,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,344,79457,6,0,P|84:368|124:368,1,95.9999970703126,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,236,79773,2,0,L|248:132,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,184,80089,2,0,L|360:80,1,95.9999970703126,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,144,80405,2,0,L|148:40,1,95.9999970703126,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,28,80720,5,8,0:0:0:0:
407,104,80878,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,100,81036,2,0,L|217:79,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
62,156,81352,1,8,0:0:0:0:
21,232,81510,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,228,81668,2,0,L|210:207,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,184,81984,6,0,P|400:196|360:232,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,368,82299,2,0,P|447:316|436:264,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,264,82615,2,0,P|316:303|367:319,1,95.9999970703126,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,168,82931,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,260,83089,6,0,B|148:288|148:288|100:268|100:268|60:300|4:280,1,191.999994140625,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,148,83563,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,144,83720,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,244,83878,2,0,P|260:304|212:344,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,340,84115,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,344,84194,1,0,1:0:0:0:
168,344,84273,1,0,1:0:0:0:
144,336,84352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,320,84431,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,300,84510,6,0,L|108:240,4,47.9999985351563,0|0|0|0|0,1:0|1:0|1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
272,244,84984,1,2,0:0:0:0:
72,44,85299,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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388,252,86247,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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332,348,87352,2,0,P|297:317|274:267,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,3:0:0:0:
420,176,87668,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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452,64,88299,2,0,L|500:152,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,264,88615,2,0,P|320:204|320:164,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,16,88931,5,8,1:3:0:0:
164,52,89089,1,8,1:3:0:0:
116,192,89247,1,8,1:3:0:0:
208,308,89405,1,8,1:3:0:0:

xChippy

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xChippy 2014-04-11T22:02:02+00:00

10crystalmask01 wrote:
Hey, mod from queue

[Hope]
00:09:668 (5,1) - Sounds a bit off here, mainly because you have the tail of 00:09:668 (5) - hit a strong note in the music (you can hear that sudden high pitch in the music here).
What I suggest is try remapping this current rhythm to this:

That way, the slider at 00:09:826 will hit and follow the hold on the high pitch note smoothly. You can even make the slider at 00:09:826 have a slowdown in speed to enhance the effect. did some own fixes with the suggestion above I would be ignoring a pretty loud beat and I wouldn't want that.

00:12:194 (5,1) - Same suggestion as above. In this case, just extend 00:12:352 (1) - 's tail to 00:12:668. in this case I don't see any problems with it these sliders/circles have currently the major beats on their heads so no change

00:31:457 (1) - Wanna try adding a finish on the head, to help show the tempo of the music growing faster? I prefer to add finishes only where finishes are in the music so nope

[Hard]
00:09:668 (3,1) - Oh, here is the same issue as in the previous diff with 00:09:668 (5,1) - Try this rhythm here instead? nah don't want to ignore that stanza beat

00:11:720 - Why did you make an empty gap here? In the previous rhythm, you did not make an empty gap at 00:10:457 nor in the next rhythm cycle at 00:12:984.
Please consider adding a note here, for consistency. well it's not for consistency cuz. the first one in your example is not the same music-wise as in the gap same story for the second one, and the second one even has a high pitched beat on it. This part is the same music-wise as this one 00:09:194 - and as you can see I left it open therefore I let it as a blank here too. I don't look at the stanza cycles but for consistency musical-wise

00:24:195 (2) - Sound kinda funny, because you decided to have the tail start on the vocals saying the long hold on the "tai" in mitai, and 00:24:668 (3) - be the filler for the lyrics. Try shrinking it to a 1/2 slider, then move 00:24:668 (1) - to 00:24:510. remove the hit circle, and addtwo hit circles after that.
How it should look:
well many mentioned this but I did my own fixes

01:18:195 (1) - Why not make this slider blanket 01:17:879 (4) - 's tail, rather then be overlapped by it? this way flows better imo

[Normal and Easy]
Looks good.[/notice]

Nice map set Have a star!

Good luck!

Thanks for the star and mod~~!!! :3

Alarido

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Alarido 2014-04-12T00:03:47+00:00

Free Mod from The Coffee Party Free Mods

(See the requesting post)

[captin's Insane]
♥ Feels good, no complaints here. It has amazing flow overall (: hope thelewa love it ^^

[Hope]
00:12:826 (3,2) - This stack can be made perfect. How? First, Move 00:12:826 (3) - to x:256 y:296 and then, follow these steps:
Step #0: You'll need disable "Distance Snap" and enable "Grid Snap";
Step #1: Ctrl-G 00:13:300 (2) and stack its "new head" with the 00:12:826 (3)'s head.
Step #2: Ctrl-G 00:13:300 (2) newly, so you'll undo the previous Ctrl-G and keep the intended flow. The Ctrl-G is used here just for making stacking easier (by inverting head and tail) because aligning the sliderhead is a lot easier than aligning the slidertail.

♥ 00:13:457 (3,1) - It's perfectly stacked ^^
00:15:826 (5) - Move the 2nd dot by 1 grid up and the 3rd dot by 1 grid down, so the blanket will get improved.
00:16:773 (2) - Move a bit to x:200 y:288, so it'll stack perfectly with 00:15:510 (3) -
00:18:036 (3) - Move the 2nd dot to x:236 y:304 and the 3rd dot to x:200 y:288, so the blanket will get improved :3

00:37:142 (3) - It can be potentialy unrankable (partially hidden by leap seconds) if Hidden mod is considered.
♥ 00:58:773 (1) - This slowing is amazing :3

[Hard]
00:10:932 (4,1) - I can see this existing blanket can be improved too! So move the slider 00:11:247 (1) - to x:352 y:300, then move its 2nd node to x:288 y:276 and the 3rd node to x:268 y:216. Tip: you can use the Approach Circle as a visual guide to make perfect blankets.
00:20:090 (1) - Move its tail node to x:409 y:247 to make it parallel with 00:20:405 (2) -- .... Or you can just copy it from 00:20:405 (2), make Ctrl-< twice (rotating it by 180º) and move the copy to x:346 y:249.
00:30:511 (3) - Move its tail node to x:308 y:38, so it'll stack better with 00:30:984 (5)'s tail.
♥ 01:22:616 (2,1) - Amazing flow :3

[Normal]
♥ Perfect!

[Easy]
♥ Perfect!

That's it ^^

Sooooo perfect!!!!! Star for perfect

Att.

xChippy

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xChippy 2014-04-12T13:53:35+00:00

Alarido wrote:
Free Mod from The Coffee Party Free Mods
(See the requesting post)

[captin's Insane]
♥ Feels good, no complaints here. It has amazing flow overall (: hope thelewa love it ^^

[Hope]
00:12:826 (3,2) - This stack can be made perfect. How? First, Move 00:12:826 (3) - to x:256 y:296 and then, follow these steps: done
Step #0: You'll need disable "Distance Snap" and enable "Grid Snap";
Step #1: Ctrl-G 00:13:300 (2) and stack its "new head" with the 00:12:826 (3)'s head.
Step #2: Ctrl-G 00:13:300 (2) newly, so you'll undo the previous Ctrl-G and keep the intended flow. The Ctrl-G is used here just for making stacking easier (by inverting head and tail) because aligning the sliderhead is a lot easier than aligning the slidertail.

♥ 00:13:457 (3,1) - It's perfectly stacked ^^ owo
00:15:826 (5) - Move the 2nd dot by 1 grid up and the 3rd dot by 1 grid down, so the blanket will get improved. did some own fixes
00:16:773 (2) - Move a bit to x:200 y:288, so it'll stack perfectly with 00:15:510 (3) - done
00:18:036 (3) - Move the 2nd dot to x:236 y:304 and the 3rd dot to x:200 y:288, so the blanket will get improved :3 did some own fixes
00:37:142 (3) - It can be potentialy unrankable (partially hidden by leap seconds) if Hidden mod is considered. not sure about this will ask a bit around
♥ 00:58:773 (1) - This slowing is amazing :3 Glad you like it o3o

[Hard]
00:10:932 (4,1) - I can see this existing blanket can be improved too! So move the slider 00:11:247 (1) - to x:352 y:300, then move its 2nd node to x:288 y:276 and the 3rd node to x:268 y:216. Tip: you can use the Approach Circle as a visual guide to make perfect blankets. done
00:20:090 (1) - Move its tail node to x:409 y:247 to make it parallel with 00:20:405 (2) -- .... Or you can just copy it from 00:20:405 (2), make Ctrl-< twice (rotating it by 180º) and move the copy to x:346 y:249. copied so fixed
00:30:511 (3) - Move its tail node to x:308 y:38, so it'll stack better with 00:30:984 (5)'s tail. done
♥ 01:22:616 (2,1) - Amazing flow :3 :3

[Normal]
♥ Perfect!

[Easy]
♥ Perfect!

That's it ^^

Sooooo perfect!!!!! Star for perfect

Att.

Thanks for the mod and star Alarido~~!!! :3

Andrea

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Andrea 2014-04-18T13:54:32+00:00

~Hard~

00:30:511 (3,4,5) - The stacking between these sliders could be improved if you disable the grid snap.

~captin's Insane~

00:25:615 (8) - I'd remove the whistle from this slider body, it sounds bad imo.
01:08:720 (5) - New combo should start here, since vocals changes here.
01:08:957 (1) - Remove new combo from here afterwards.
01:15:668 (7) - I'd remove the whistle from this slider body, it sounds bad imo.

~Hope~

00:13:142 (1,2) - These two short sliders are kinda hard to see due to the previous ones, move them somewhere else if possible.
01:09:194 (1) - Remove new combo, it shouldn't be there.
01:09:352 (3) - Add new combo here, kiai time and new section begins here.
01:20:089 (1,2,1,2) - I'd highly prefer if you stack these circles together, this way right now are pretty confusing to read.
01:25:615 (7) - New combo should go here due to the spacing and rhythm change.
01:25:931 (1) - Remove this new combo from here afterwards.

Well done :3

BeatofIke

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BeatofIke 2014-04-18T14:18:25+00:00

Once Andrea bubbles, I'll take a look at it!

xChippy

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xChippy 2014-04-18T14:21:45+00:00

Andrea wrote:
~Hard~
00:30:511 (3,4,5) - The stacking between these sliders could be improved if you disable the grid snap.
~Hope~
00:13:142 (1,2) - These two short sliders are kinda hard to see due to the previous ones, move them somewhere else if possible.
01:09:194 (1) - Remove new combo, it shouldn't be there.
01:09:352 (3) - Add new combo here, kiai time and new section begins here.
01:20:089 (1,2,1,2) - I'd highly prefer if you stack these circles together, this way right now are pretty confusing to read. did some other pattern
01:25:615 (7) - New combo should go here due to the spacing and rhythm change.
01:25:931 (1) - Remove this new combo from here afterwards.
Well done :3

All fixed~~ Thanks Andreaaa :33 Also fixed captin's Insane
Yay Ike o3o/

Andrea

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Andrea 2014-04-18T20:23:58+00:00

I'm satisfied with this map now, good luck man!

Bubbled~

xChippy

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xChippy 2014-04-18T20:33:08+00:00

Thanks Andrea~~!! =w=b

captin1

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captin1 2014-04-19T02:36:53+00:00

yay~

BeatofIke

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BeatofIke 2014-04-19T07:22:16+00:00

Hi there. Just a few things to point out.
[Easy]

00:03:668 (1) - You can polish this blanket a bit by moving the red anchor point at 304|48 and the 3rd anchor point at 324|16.
00:49:142 (1) - Just an observation, but this 2/1 slider is not symmetrical. I suggest making this slider as symmetrical as possible.
01:03:036 (3,1) - The blanket could be slightly better in respect to 1. That's up to you if you want to fix that of course.

[Normal]

00:20:720 (4,5) - Try moving 4 at 410|4 and 5 at 311|23. It looks slightly better imo. You can notice the respective spacing between the end of 00:20:089 (3) and the start of 00:21:352 (1).

[Hard]

The mapset looks fine but I personally prefer AR7 for for Hard difficulties, but if you want to keep the AR8 then that's fine I guess (due to the high BPM and the song intensity).

Both the Insane and Hope (Extra) difficulties looks fine. Honestly this map and song is so epic (haven't watched the anime yet, but the opening also looked epic as well XD). Anyways, call me back once you are ready!

xChippy

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xChippy 2014-04-19T07:36:52+00:00

BeatofIke wrote:
Hi there. Just a few things to point out.
[Easy]
00:03:668 (1) - You can polish this blanket a bit by moving the red anchor point at 304|48 and the 3rd anchor point at 324|16. done
00:49:142 (1) - Just an observation, but this 2/1 slider is not symmetrical. I suggest making this slider as symmetrical as possible. did my best
01:03:036 (3,1) - The blanket could be slightly better in respect to 1. That's up to you if you want to fix that of course. well tried my best xD
[Normal]
00:20:720 (4,5) - Try moving 4 at 410|4 and 5 at 311|23. It looks slightly better imo. You can notice the respective spacing between the end of 00:20:089 (3) and the start of 00:21:352 (1). done
[Hard]
The mapset looks fine but I personally prefer AR7 for for Hard difficulties, but if you want to keep the AR8 then that's fine I guess (due to the high BPM and the song intensity). yep exactly as you said also imo it reads easier with AR8 so keeping it :3
Both the Insane and Hope (Extra) difficulties looks fine. Honestly this map and song is so epic (haven't watched the anime yet, but the opening also looked epic as well XD). Anyways, call me back once you are ready!

Yesss the animu is gooooood \(=w=)/, Thanks Ike~~!!! ;3