Just a few things that seem questionable. I only suggest the mapper to respond to this post and not anyone else.
[Beat Heaven]
2015-11-07 11:25 Jaitonat: actually tbh
2015-11-07 11:25 Jaitonat: it should be o10
2015-11-07 11:25 Jaitonat: *od10
2015-11-07 11:25 Jaitonat: for full emphisis on the beat part
Considering the 1/8's and the huge amount of potential notelocking this map can bring, I don't see any reason for it to be OD 8. It would be better to use OD 9 or higher to prevent this issue and allow a less frustrating map.
If you do not know what notelocking is, please refer to
this thread. 01:01:884 (2,2,2,2) - why do these sliders have different rhythms from each other?
01:36:723 (1,2,1,2) - It's strange that this part has a higher spacing than 01:35:949 (1,2,1,2) why is that. This also applies to 01:55:303 (1,2,1,2) and many other parts in other kiais.
01:37:497 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this is also questionable as you have just established before that you made 2 doubles with jumps in between so just having a straight line is already off.
01:41:271 (9,10) - why is the intersection on 9 and not 10. Before, you had 01:40:981 (6) which is on a white tick, but 9 is not on a white tick and so it feels inconsistent and off from this stream. In fact, you even do it differently from this pattern 01:52:981 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) and 02:45:626 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) please explain.
04:08:368 (4,5) - considering the nature of this part, it is strange that this is stacked
04:17:562 (6,7) - compared to the rest of the map, this looks incredibly off compared to the rest of the map.
00:33:723 (2,3) - speaking of which, this is also off.
04:25:110 (1,2) - I would suggest to remove one repeat from each slider as it is a part easy to break and is pretty much a "be more lucky to keep combo" part
04:33:240 (1,2,1,2) - this is strange compared to the ones before. It is smaller in spacing and the notes after it have a higher ascent in the vocals.
04:40:595 (1,2,3,4) - it is also strange this is flipped compared to the other streamjumps
Again, please explain the reasoning behind all these points.