1. Easy (1.47 stars, 50 notes)
2. eveless' Yoru (3.68 stars, 90 notes)
3. Hard (4.42 stars, 123 notes)
4. Insane (4.97 stars, 229 notes)
5. S i R i R u's Namida (4.79 stars, 181 notes)

osuplayer111 wrote:

BPM: 129,00

Offset: 110

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Remember to resnap all notes

S i R i R u wrote:

ヾ(*Ő౪Ő*)

EDIT : oops forgot to add new combo 1 point XD

eveless wrote:

STAR~

MOD IRC...

1. 视频码率1280kpbs...
2. 所有难度的tags不统一诶...

1. 01:16:404 (1) - 最后的clap不要了吧..

1. 00:06:869 (3) - 这个slider得变一下...完全和lyrics无关了
2. 00:56:404 (2) - 最后一个back明显没有意义..00:57:218这里应该有个note

1. fine

1. some long combos don't feel good but fine.

1. 01:20:124 (3) - new combo

Frill wrote:

[Easy]

01:08:962 (1) - add clap all places where.
01:16:404 (1) - add finish.

[eveless' Yoru]

00:51:752 (1) - remove new combo?

[S i R i R u's Namida]

Fun,

[Insane]

00:46:171 (10) - new combo

Nice map.

+Star

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
soft-hitclap音量偏大了，把这个音效的声降低。
offset拿不准，个人觉得比较理想的是+5左右。

[Easy]
对Easy的Distance Spacing用1.0x保留很大看法。HP-1, OA-1
00:46:636 (1) - 弄更对称点吧。。。
01:08:962 (1) - 停两下没多大意义，节拍器就节拍器吧，头+折返 clap

[eveless's Yoru]
OA-1
00:30:357 (2,3) - spacing
00:34:311 (3) - sliderwhistle消掉

[Hard]
00:29:194 (4) - 上一格。
00:44:078 (1) - 这很不明所以……vocal就是1/2*4的情况下这个3/4没意义。
00:47:566 (3,4) - 或许让3结束在4开头处，后面补个circle效果更好。
00:49:659 (3) - 去掉折返
00:52:101 - 加一拍？
对kiai加间距无兴趣
01:14:543 (1,2,3) - spacing

[S i R i R u's Namida]
the hitsound volume is a bit low (compared to other diffs)
00:42:218 (9) - new combo?
00:56:171 - add a note?

[Insane]
kiai部分note的摆放是何等的random啊……
01:20:938 (4) - new combo

Amethyst Wolf wrote:

Attention:
If I put a '?' there, you can do that if you want.
If I pua a '.' there, you have to do thet.
All gril change in lv3. Remember follow hitobject's snap.
I'm a lazy guy, so:
Sp : Spacing
Ci : Circle
Sl : Slider
W : Whistle
F : Finish
C : Clap

[Easy]
00:53:613 (1) Revoke New Combo?

[eveless' Yoru]
Great

Hard
I change so much...
[attachment=0:8688a]Yoshioka Aika - Izayoi Namida (TV Size) (Clare) [Hard].osu[/attachment:8688a]

S i R i R u's Namida
I skip this.

Insane
00:01:287 (5) Add W.
00:03:148 (5) ^.
00:04:078 (2) ^.
00:04:659 (3) Add W here.
00:05:241 (4) Revoke W?
00:24:776 (1) ^.
00:25:008 (2) Add W?

banvi wrote:

Hello

mod

SPOILER

I often do nazi's mod. If you don't like this mod , I'm sorry.
Easy&elevess
OK
Hard
00:01:055 (4) 1 grid left
00:01:985 (1) 1 grid up
00:29:194 (4) 1 grid right
00:34:311 (4,5,6) ^
00:52:218 (4) 1 grid left
00:52:450 (5,1,2) 1 grid right
01:10:357 (3,4) I anxious this too close spacing... But I think , this is a deliberately...
S i R i R u
I think perfect
Insane
I think perfect

Thismap is very nice overal~
star & gl

Sallad4ever wrote:

Hi Clare

[General]
- Personally I don't like having 15 seconds break on a TV Size song >.< >"<
- Is the source only Hakouki or Hakuouki Shinsegumi Kitan ? Hakuouki Shinsegumi Kitan is just the game's name
- You don't need OP on the tags ok
- Who is Yumiyo?Yumiyo is the composer of the song

[Easy]
01:01:520 (1) - the only slider with 3 repeats, novice player won't be expecting this better change it one repeat and then add another slider on 01:02:915
The combo is quite....>.<

[eveless' Yoru]
00:35:473 (1) - cause all the previous pattern start exactly at the begining of the lyric and this is the only note that start earlier move this to 00:35:706 (next red tick)
01:10:822 (x) - add a note here ?
01:17:101 (1) - I think you shouldn't silence this, maybe increase the volume and add finish just like in the other diff?

[Hard]
00:06:171 (2) - remove 1 repeat and move the spinner to 00:07:218 oh and if you do this don't forget to lengthen the spinner as necessary
00:56:171 (1) - shouldn't this start on the next blue tick ? or if this is intentional, shorten the slider to blue tick then add a repeat
Combo mod:
01:11:055 (4) - NC

[SiRiRu's Namida]
at least add 1 tick to all the timing sections volume or increase the volume just on the kiai time, the current volume is very low, especially in 00:56:287 (1,2,3,4,5,6) I bearly hear anything XD

[Insane]
Try using finish it will add more spice to the song
Here is some place I think good for finish
00:39:659 (3) - at the begining
00:43:148 (5) - at the end
00:47:101 (2)
00:57:799 (1) - at the end
01:05:706 (4)
Well that's the gist of it
00:52:683 (3) - shorten this repeat slider to 00:53:380 then put the spinner on 00:53:497
01:20:124 (1,2,3) - Nice anti-jump

Nice map and song Clare
~star

roxkyuubiforever wrote:

Easy
The combo order and pattern looks so random >_<
00:26:171(1,2) - Switch New Combos.
00:28:031(1,2) - ^
00:31:752(1) - This slider is messing with the New Combos... Maybe make a hitcircle here (no new combo) and creat a slider at 00:32:218, ending at 00:32:683 (with New Combo)
00:33:613(1) - No New Combo here.
00:39:194(1) - doesn't sound cool... Make a hitcircle here (no New Combo) and move this slider 1/1 later (00:39:659)
00:41:985(1,1,2,1,1,1,1,2,3) - Move everything 1/1 later. Sounds really better ._.
00:48:961(1) - No New Combo looks better for me ._.
01:11:287(2) - On the similar part (01:03:845) you use New Combo here, so I think that you should decide between using or not on both parts~

everless's
00:37:799(4) - Doesn't sound really cool. Maybe a long slider sounds better~
00:41:520(2) - Hum... I was expecting for one more loop here (ending at 00:42:915). I think that it would make it sound better but if you don't wanna change it, could you at least change the slider so the end of it gets a bit more far from the next note? (00:43:148)
00:56:404(2) - Ugly D: Maybe make it on the center of the screen, pointed down?
01:10:822(1,2) - Switch New combos~

Hard
00:25:473(3) - Ending at 00:25:590(1/4 earlier) sounds better.
00:29:194(4) - ^
00:31:055(5) - ^
00:32:915(4) - ^
00:34:776(6) - ^
00:38:148(8) - End 1/4 later (00:39:194)

S i R i R u's
00:01:985(4) - Hum... The New Combo should be here (according to the vocal), imo.

Insane
Nice diff >w<
00:47:799(4) - It's not playing really good... It's better start at 00:47:915~(ending on the same time that is now)
01:16:171(1,2,3) - Hum... Maybe: No new combo on the (1), New Combo on the (3)?
01:20:124(1,2,3,1,2,3) - Weird to read. No New Combo on the first (1), New Combo on the first (3) and no New Combo on the second (1).

Not really fun of the map set but it's still fun to play
Stared~

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi hi!!

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't habe to change them if you don't agree with me
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- I find that break too long... maybe if you reduce it to the half (for example, map until 00:17:334) it will be better imo =x

~Easy~
00:06:171 (1) - Finish this slider on 00:07:218 (snap to 1/4)
00:40:590 (1) - Delete clap? (woah, I modded a hitsound!! D:!)
01:11:287 (1,2,3) - Make a prettier triangle pattern with this? (Suggestion: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/13181)

~eveless' Yoru~
No problems here~

~Hard~
01:06:636 (4) - Move up to make the jump on (4,1) a bit less hard? :3

~S i R i R u's Namida~
No problems here~

~Insane~
00:02:915 (4,5,6) - Flip Horizontally?
00:39:194 (13,1) - This jump is a bit annoying x_x maybe you can change the stream movement to avoid this jump?
01:20:124 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - This change of spacing is a bit annoying too... >.<

Nice map Good luck with it~ *star*

Davidz123 wrote:

Mod! [REQUEST VIA QUEUE]

Anything marked with * is a suggestion.

[Easy]
Fine.

[eveless' Yoru]
00:29:892 - Add Note (?) *
00:31:752 - ^ *

[Hard]
Fine.

[S i R i R u's Namida]
Fine.

[Insane]
00:02:915 (4,5,6) - Line this up with 00:01:985 (1,2,3)

+Star!~

Shinxyn wrote:

Oi, it got bubbled while waiting in my queue....

Hmm... I won't pop.. but not sure about theses-

I'm getting offset +8 (133)

Easy-
00:06:171 (1) - I'm against this ending on 1/4... it just sounds... so weird..., I like how the other three diffs end on the 1/2 vocal earlier and start the spinner on 00:07:334 more... or maybe shorten this back to the 1/1 and start spinner on the 1/4 right after it? O_O?
01:01:520 (1) - did you intentionally not add claps on this slider....?

Insane-
00:07:218 (5,1) - would prefer this look like Hard's (spinner starts where 5 is)... the vocal sounds off here T_T

The rest are fine (though I do think Siriru's volume level before the kiai is too quiet :X!)
If you do self pop, then tell me to rebubble, if you don't, then... hope next BAT doesn't mind ;-;

Alace wrote:

Offset -5ms and resnap all notes
thank you