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Spy
當然
難道還要浪費時間嗎
Outlaww
hi.

Victorica's 4K ExTrA
These trills feel extremely awkward to play. It doesn't really make much sense either because this is one sound, not two separate sounds.



The above section is also inconsistent with this section. This is the exact same sound, but it is mapped in triples not trills.



I think this part 00:08:297 (8297|0,8376|3,8455|0,8533|3,8612|0,8690|3,8769|0,8847|3,8926|0,9004|3,9083|0,9161|2) would be much better if it were alternating doubles. This could be triples too, but the idea of doubles sounds better because it makes the map progressively harder. Something like this:


I think this map needs a little bit more work before qualification, but that's just me. I like this map and I do want to see it ranked, but I also want it to be the best it can.
Ayachi-
現在這個比較好玩吧
PANDAAAAAAAA
I think victorica's 4K ExTrA needs more work, i will mod soon.
Topic Starter
Spy
Do it as soon as possible. I don't like waiting.
[Emiria]

Outlaww wrote:

hi.

Victorica's 4K ExTrA
These trills feel extremely awkward to play. It doesn't really make much sense either because this is one sound, not two separate sounds.



The above section is also inconsistent with this section. This is the exact same sound, but it is mapped in triples not trills.



I think this part 00:08:297 (8297|0,8376|3,8455|0,8533|3,8612|0,8690|3,8769|0,8847|3,8926|0,9004|3,9083|0,9161|2) would be much better if it were alternating doubles. This could be triples too, but the idea of doubles sounds better because it makes the map progressively harder. Something like this:


I think this map needs a little bit more work before qualification, but that's just me. I like this map and I do want to see it ranked, but I also want it to be the best it can.
干你妈间谍 大声王
i think now is fine .
PANDAAAAAAAA
Ok. Skip me. Let's the next BN check.
Topic Starter
Spy
....
Topic Starter
Spy
Self popped for adjusting some patterns in 7K Hyper, 4K Another, victorica's 4K ExTrA, and Bruce's 7K Another.
Deep Sea
re-bubbled
Topic Starter
Spy

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

re-bubbled
Thanks for rebubble :D
Zan-
  1. coloumn: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |
  2. note that i mod in 0% effect volume
  3. hitsound check after this
[KK's 4K Normal]
00:37:591 - http://puu.sh/kKCIE/409a68f5c1.jpg
00:39:318 - add note at |4| | 00:39:633 (39633|2) - move to |2|
01:40:575 - add note at |4| like you did before

[KK's 4K Hyper]
01:30:208 (90208|3,90523|0) - just normal notes, no need to LN
01:40:261 (100261|0,100575|0) - ^

[4K Another]
00:12:538 (12538|1) - just remove, there are no 1/4 again above | 00:12:617 (12617|2) - then move to |2|
00:26:753 - add note la, cymbal
01:13:245 - 3-noted? while here 01:10:732 - 2-noted?
why are these going to 2-noted:
01:13:402 - 01:13:716 - 01:13:873 - 01:14:030 - 01:14:345 - 01:14:502 - 01:14:816 - 01:15:130 - 01:15:444 - 01:15:601 - ///
01:16:229 - 01:16:544 - 01:16:858 - 01:17:172 - 01:17:643 - 01:17:800 (77800|2,77800|3,77879|1,77879|0,77957|2,77957|3,78036|1,78036|0,78114|2,78114|3) -

[S.Star's 7K Normal]
01:52:198 - add more note? as final ending

[7K Hyper]
00:40:025 (40025|0) - just remove la, suddenly different instrument
00:47:172 - add note?
01:32:093 - ^
01:34:920 (94920|5) - remove

[S.Star's 7K Another]
00:19:214 - add note, since above are 3-noted
00:39:004 (39004|5) - remove
01:13:245 - add note
01:13:873 (73873|1,74030|1) - remove
Topic Starter
Spy

Zan - wrote:

  1. coloumn: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |
  2. note that i mod in 0% effect volume
  3. hitsound check after this
[4K Another]
00:12:538 (12538|1) - just remove, there are no 1/4 again above Removed | 00:12:617 (12617|2) - then move to |2| Keep
00:26:753 - add note la, cymbal Added la
01:13:245 - 3-noted? while here 01:10:732 - 2-noted? Fixed
why are these going to 2-noted:
01:13:402 - Vocal + BGM 01:13:716 - Vocal + BGM 01:13:873 - Vocal + BGM01:14:030 - Vocal + BGM 01:14:345 - Vocal + BGM 01:14:502 - Vocal + BGM 01:14:816 - Vocal + BGM 01:15:130 - Vocal + BGM 01:15:444 - Vocal + BGM 01:15:601 - Fixed ///
01:16:229 - Vocal + BGM 01:16:544 - Doesn't it just 1 note 01:16:858 - Vocal + BGM 01:17:172 - Vocal + BGM 01:17:643 - Vocal + BGM 01:17:800 (77800|2,77800|3,77879|1,77879|0,77957|2,77957|3,78036|1,78036|0,78114|2,78114|3) - Snare + Vocal

[S.Star's 7K Normal]
01:52:198 - add more note? as final ending

[7K Hyper]
00:40:025 (40025|0) - just remove la, suddenly different instrument They actually same..
00:47:172 - add note? Nope, and it seems conflict to fourth point you mentioned ?
01:32:093 - ^ OK
01:34:920 (94920|5) - remove OK

[S.Star's 7K Another]
00:19:214 - add note, since above are 3-noted
00:39:004 (39004|5) - remove
01:13:245 - add note Added at 6
01:13:873 (73873|1,74030|1) - remove
In Bruce's diff no reply = didn't fix.
Thanks for checking :D
Akasha-
Fixed all, thank you a lot, Zan
updated: http://puu.sh/kL8H9/06cdef8b35.rar
Topic Starter
Spy
Updated.
Zan-
  1. | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |
  2. no kudosu
[KK's 4K Normal]
01:22:355 (82355|3) - add C
01:23:612 (83612|1) - add W
01:24:240 (84240|3) - add W
01:24:868 (84868|0) - add W
01:27:381 (87381|3) - add W

[KK's 4K Hyper]
00:27:931 (27931|2) - remove note

[victorica's 4K ExTra]
00:49:685 - add 1 more LN?

[S.Star's 7K Normal]
01:16:858 (76858|5) - move to 3
01:24:240 (84240|3,84397|4,84554|5) - remove | according to 01:26:753 (86753|6,86910|4,87067|1) -

[7K Hyper]
00:46:544 (46544|2) - remove note

[S.Star's 7K Another]
00:15:444 (15444|4) - move to 7
00:19:371 (19371|4) - move to 6 | since vocal-jack start from 00:19:528 -
00:29:266 (29266|1) - move to 1
00:29:973 (29973|0) - move to 2
00:36:491 (36491|4) - remove note
00:39:004 (39004|5) - remove note
01:37:041 (97041|1) - remove note
01:39:554 (99554|4) - remove note
Topic Starter
Spy

Zan - wrote:

  1. | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |
  2. no kudosu
[KK's 4K Normal]
01:22:355 (82355|3) - add C
01:23:612 (83612|1) - add W
01:24:240 (84240|3) - add W
01:24:868 (84868|0) - add W
01:27:381 (87381|3) - add W

[KK's 4K Hyper]
00:27:931 (27931|2) - remove note

[victorica's 4K ExTra]
00:49:685 - add 1 more LN? No, it plays bad

[S.Star's 7K Normal]
01:16:858 (76858|5) - move to 3
01:24:240 (84240|3,84397|4,84554|5) - remove | according to 01:26:753 (86753|6,86910|4,87067|1) -

[7K Hyper]
00:46:544 (46544|2) - remove note Keep

[S.Star's 7K Another]
00:15:444 (15444|4) - move to 7
00:19:371 (19371|4) - move to 6 | since vocal-jack start from 00:19:528 - Fixed
00:29:266 (29266|1) - move to 1
00:29:973 (29973|0) - move to 2
00:36:491 (36491|4) - remove note
00:39:004 (39004|5) - remove note
01:37:041 (97041|1) - remove note
01:39:554 (99554|4) - remove note
In S.Star's diffs reply = fix, other = no fix
All updated, wait for recheck again :D
Zan-
last
22:16 *Zan - is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/769275 Seiryu - Time to Air [Bruce's 7K Another]]
22:16 Zan -: 00:47:957 - at least make it like this http://puu.sh/kNuAc/5f3decbbed.jpg
22:17 Spy: Let me check it
22:17 Zan -: to keep consistency with other jack
22:17 Zan -: like here 00:27:852 -
22:19 Spy: fixed
22:19 Spy: and more ?
22:20 Zan -: 01:36:962 (96962|5,96962|1,96962|4,97041|5,97041|1) - i'm worry about theseeeeeeeeeeee
22:21 Spy: OK let me ask
22:25 Zan -: if want to make like that, then a jack is fine 01:36:962 - http://puu.sh/kNv3f/df7a3704bc.jpg
22:26 Spy: http://imgur.com/dWSOkpl
22:31 Spy: OK
22:31 Spy: Any more ?
22:31 Zan -: 01:39:475 - here too, make it like previous suggested
22:32 Zan -: jack in |2| then 01:39:554 (99554|4) - remove
22:34 Spy: OK wait for a moment
22:37 Spy: http://imgur.com/NH18HxF
22:40 Spy: Any more ?
22:42 *Zan - is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/769868 Seiryu - Time to Air [victorica's 4K ExTrA]]
22:43 Zan -: 00:49:685 - how about add 1/2 LN in |3| since there is still sound left
22:44 Spy: He said up to me
22:44 Spy: And let me refer previous if have same sound and used LN
22:44 Spy: After checking I just feel no LN plays better
22:46 Zan -: ok
Topic Starter
Spy

Zan - wrote:

last
22:16 *Zan - is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/769275 Seiryu - Time to Air [Bruce's 7K Another]]
22:16 Zan -: 00:47:957 - at least make it like this http://puu.sh/kNuAc/5f3decbbed.jpg
22:17 Spy: Let me check it
22:17 Zan -: to keep consistency with other jack
22:17 Zan -: like here 00:27:852 -
22:19 Spy: fixed
22:19 Spy: and more ?
22:20 Zan -: 01:36:962 (96962|5,96962|1,96962|4,97041|5,97041|1) - i'm worry about theseeeeeeeeeeee
22:21 Spy: OK let me ask
22:25 Zan -: if want to make like that, then a jack is fine 01:36:962 - http://puu.sh/kNv3f/df7a3704bc.jpg
22:26 Spy: http://imgur.com/dWSOkpl
22:31 Spy: OK
22:31 Spy: Any more ?
22:31 Zan -: 01:39:475 - here too, make it like previous suggested
22:32 Zan -: jack in |2| then 01:39:554 (99554|4) - remove
22:34 Spy: OK wait for a moment
22:37 Spy: http://imgur.com/NH18HxF
22:40 Spy: Any more ?
22:42 *Zan - is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/769868 Seiryu - Time to Air [victorica's 4K ExTrA]]
22:43 Zan -: 00:49:685 - how about add 1/2 LN in |3| since there is still sound left
22:44 Spy: He said up to me
22:44 Spy: And let me refer previous if have same sound and used LN
22:44 Spy: After checking I just feel no LN plays better
22:46 Zan -: ok
Thank you very much :D
MeowPaz
Time to Loud
Sky_Demon

MeowPaz wrote:

Time to Loud
Topic Starter
Spy

MeowPaz wrote:

Time to Loud

Sky_Demon wrote:

MeowPaz wrote:

Time to Loud
I reject loud
liaoxingyao

MeowPaz wrote:

Time to Loud
Akasha-
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