[General]
*I have some issues with the artist/title/source before I go any farther. I don't know why I didn't catch this on MikiMiki, but...
*samfree isn't the singer; the vocaloid/utau is. "samfree" (or capital s, whichever way) should be the source to stay consistent with most other vocaloid/utau songs.
*artist should just be "Mitani Nana"
*add "utau" to tags and possibly "vocaloid" as well?
*should "Nana Nana" be "NanaNana"? I'm not sure about this..
[Garven's Normal]
01:42:814 (1) - perhaps move back a white tick and extend?
01:59:459 (2,3,4,5) - spacing?
[Insane]
00:00:557 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I was expecting these to get lower and lower in volume =(
00:03:484 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:06:228 (1) - this sounds much better with 0 volume (or a decrescendo)
02:17:935 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - some of the whistles sound too loud and jangly here imo ;x
02:49:948 (1) - bleh don't end kiai in the middle of a spinner. End it 1/4th before it starts. Also, silence/decrescendo please
Like I mentioned in irc, I really dislike the difficulty spread for this map. Normal->Insane is kinda meh... Actually, I feel like Normal is a bit too tricky to be the easiest diff in this set. There's too many unpredictable offbeats due to the mildly-high bpm. The offbeats could be changed and the circle size could be upped, but I think that it would be better to just add a third diff. If you could at least add an Easy to the set (@ouran) I'd believe that this work would be much stronger. :p
*I have some issues with the artist/title/source before I go any farther. I don't know why I didn't catch this on MikiMiki, but...
*samfree isn't the singer; the vocaloid/utau is. "samfree" (or capital s, whichever way) should be the source to stay consistent with most other vocaloid/utau songs.
*artist should just be "Mitani Nana"
*add "utau" to tags and possibly "vocaloid" as well?
*should "Nana Nana" be "NanaNana"? I'm not sure about this..
[Garven's Normal]
01:42:814 (1) - perhaps move back a white tick and extend?
01:59:459 (2,3,4,5) - spacing?
[Insane]
00:00:557 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I was expecting these to get lower and lower in volume =(
00:03:484 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:06:228 (1) - this sounds much better with 0 volume (or a decrescendo)
02:17:935 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - some of the whistles sound too loud and jangly here imo ;x
02:49:948 (1) - bleh don't end kiai in the middle of a spinner. End it 1/4th before it starts. Also, silence/decrescendo please
Like I mentioned in irc, I really dislike the difficulty spread for this map. Normal->Insane is kinda meh... Actually, I feel like Normal is a bit too tricky to be the easiest diff in this set. There's too many unpredictable offbeats due to the mildly-high bpm. The offbeats could be changed and the circle size could be upped, but I think that it would be better to just add a third diff. If you could at least add an Easy to the set (@ouran) I'd believe that this work would be much stronger. :p