well let's try this.
Mod
- 00:03:626 (3) - maybe add a soft whistle here? the piano's pitch is changing drastically and i think it would fit. this note's somehow emphasized, I think (maybe do this for more of those kind of notes?)
- 00:04:981 - I don't think that note should be on a sliderend. it's really emphasized so maybe tap this?
- 00:08:078 (5) - maybe some hitfinish here? because of sound?
- 00:11:174 - same as 00:04:981
- 00:22:981 (3,4) - I'm not sure about this. This may be a bit difficult to read because you use a higher distance for 00:22:594 (1,2) - (those 1/4) than for the 1/2 afterwards. maybe make the 1/4 smaller or the 1/2 gap bigger?
- 00:33:045 (3,4,3,4) - again this may be difficult to read because you stack 1/2 AND 1/4 (00:34:207 (6,7,8) - )
- 01:13:400 - maybe add a circle here? the guitar is really loud and put it so it's good to map this, imo
- 01:58:400 (3,4,1) - I don't understand the purpose of this jump. there's nothing becoming louder, no emphasize. just a sudden jump. doesn't fit the music, imo
- 02:06:529 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe add some inheriting sections here and make a volume vortex? uhm...increase the volume slowly, maybe? i think that'd be nice
- 02:18:432 - again maybe map the loud guitar here?
- 03:16:594 (1,1) - i'm not sure if the slider should follow the spinner so fast.
- 04:05:755 - add a soft whistle here because sound? the new beat begins here
- 04:06:529 - ^ ( for all of those, actually)
- 04:14:078 (4,5,6) - not sure about the readability of those notes again there's 1/4 jumps that are bigger or as big as the 1/2 ones and this is weird to read and play. (04:13:884 (3,4) - and 04:14:271 (5,6) - )
- 04:15:432 (3,4,5,6) - ^