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Sc4v4ng3r

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Sc4v4ng3r 10 years ago

Hello~ Mod as requested through forum PM~

Unrankable issues
My opinion which I highly recommend changing it
Just small suggestions/nazi

[General]

The red line could go to 00:00:477 - this point, no point bringing the offset 4 beats back. It still won't mess up the downbeat and upbeat measures, so it should be fine, unless it is intended.
Pretty sure the AudioLeadIn should be increased by 1000, the song starts really early.
Other than that, look fine. I hope you are adding combo colours and video~

[Easy]

00:39:905 (3) - Just being nitpicky about the flow here, this could possibly lean towards the left, taking in the account of the curve from the previous slider.
00:44:620 (4) - I seriously don't like to make blanket mods... But this one just struck me hard.
00:48:048 (2,3) - These 2 looks really close together. I can see that you are trying to keep a linear flow for 00:46:763 (1,2,3) - , but in fact these could looks better when they are further apart for better playability. Well I guess I am being sensitive to things...
00:57:477 (2,1) - Just saying, these 2 could be the same shape, I think it would look better with these 2 being the same shape (and symmetrical at same time)
The difficulty is really well done, can't point out much

[Sonnyc's Normal]

00:10:763 (1) - Ok I get the long sliders and all (I like your diffs ), but this seems not right... This slider skips out important beats especially at 00:11:620 - .
00:26:191 (1) - Hmm... Rather a sharp curve at the end of this slider... Well you may keep this if you insist, but I feel that sharp angle curve which completely goes in the opposite direction from the slider doesn't play out nicely on normal, it is kind of hard to read the repeat ;-; Instead, this could be symmetrical :
Well what can I say, good difficulty

[Startrick's Hard]

00:34:655 - If 00:31:227 (7) - this was emphasized, this place should be also emphasized for the consistency.
00:45:048 (1,2) - These notes have strong beats on them, but yet they don't really have the same or a higher DS than 00:43:334 (1) - , which was pretty much weaker. These 2 notes should have 2.0x DS, and instead 00:43:334 (1) - this note should have smaller DS on it, but I guess you could keep it for the pattern.
00:56:191 (3,4) - Swap the hitsounds on these for the consistency from the previous part. Or if you want to emphasize the vocals, using soft whistles will do the job.
01:06:048 (5,6) - Flow doesn't really look too good here, you could instead go make a parallel pattern off these :
Well overall the hitsounds on kiai could be improved using some whistles, and some flow issues could be addressed too. Still, good job on this difficulty

[Insane]

00:41:405 - Feels weird to leave this out as you didn't leave this beat out on 00:39:691 - , or are you just following the vocals for this part?
00:41:620 (1) - You should keep the momentum from the previous flow, this slider should be above 00:41:191 (8) - instead of being below.
00:42:048 (2,3,4) - I don't really hear any instruments or beats which justifies (3)... You could keep the consistency, so deleting (3) and instead placing it back at 00:42:370 - will sound more nicer.
00:52:763 (4) - Being nitpicky here, but the flow would be better if this was pointing directly at 00:53:191 (5) - .
01:06:477 (4) - But for this one though... Straight slider on a sqaure pattern doesn't look that much pleasing... You could again make this point towards (5), or instead go for variety and make this into a triplet.
Well no definite issues on this difficulty. just being me bad at modding insane

[Taeyang's Insane]

00:13:763 - Just mentioning this, this green line isn't snapped.
00:26:191 (1,2,3,4) - Not really sure, but players should be able to notice the difference between 1/1's distance and 1/2's distance, right now this pattern (1/1) is having techincally the same DS as all other 1/2 patterns in this section. You could further reduce these notes' distance, or make a trap :
01:15:477 (7,1) - Would look better if these were having the same shape.
No definite issues on this difficulty too. again being bad on modding insane

That is all from me. GL!

Beomsan

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Joined November 2013

Beomsan 10 years ago

as your req

Easy

00:12:048 (2) - 여기 노트 하나 두고 뒤에 1/1슬라 두개로 하면 더 좋은 거 같아요

Sonnyc's Normal

00:36:048 - 00:36:905 - 이런 곳 채워서 클랩넣는게 더 나을 거 같아요 보컬 너무 따라간 듯 해서
00:50:620 (2,3) - 가사 00:51:477 - "리" 00:51:691 - "오"
00:59:620 - 여기 음이 없기도 하고 00:58:977 - 여기 음은 무시한다 치고 00:58:763 - 이건 따라가는게 좋은 거 같습니다. 박자만 봐주세요https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3692243

Startrick's Hard

00:05:405 (1) - 테일 크랩 해제후 00:06:048 (2) - 크랩추가 //// 여러번 번복되는걸 보니 의도하신 거 같아 한 가지 더 제안해보자면 00:02:834 (3) - 여기같은 경우는 테일 크랩 추가 00:03:477 (4) - 헤드 크랩 해제후 테일 크랩 추가 이게 나은 거 같아요
00:11:834 (2) - 이것도 여기 크랩보단 00:12:048 (3) - 이게 맞는 느낌이고..
00:49:334 (3) - 크랩 해제
01:03:048 (3) - ^
00:56:405 (4) - ^
01:03:048 (3) - ^
00:50:834 (2) - 테일 크랩
01:04:548 (2) - ^
00:57:263 - 00:58:120 - 크랩

Insane

00:03:263 (7) - 00:02:191 (3) - 잔상이랑 좀 띄우시는게 좋을 듯
00:41:620 (1) - 박자만 봐주세요 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3692290
01:13:334 (3,4) - 연타넣기 좋은 거 같네요

태양님껀 역시 제가 할 말이 없네요.

미워죽겠다~~~~~~!!!!!!!!!!!

Sangzin

628 posts

Joined February 2013

Sangzin 10 years ago

From 한국 모딩큐 ~~제가 거기서 모딩거리 찾습니다~~

[General]

~~타이밍 포인트가 마이너스 오프셋 ㄷㄷ~~
콤보컬러가 없네요. 추가하는걸 권장합니다.

[Taeyang's Insane]

00:41:405 (5) - 오른쪽 말고 왼쪽에 오버랩시키는게 좋은 거 같네요
01:11:834 (4) - Ctrl+G?

[Insane]

00:00:477 (2) - 뉴콤?
00:01:977 (1) - 여기보단 00:02:191 (3) - 에 뉴콤 넣는게 맞는 거 같네요 뒤에보니까 이렇게 넣으셨던데
00:44:191 (1) - 갑자기 점프가 있으니까 처리하기 힘드지 않을까 싶네요 1/2에서 슬라끊는게?
01:15:477 (4) - Ctrl+G?

[Startrick's Hard]

.......할말없네요

[Sonnyc's Normal]

00:12:263 (2) - 리버스 슬라보단 그냥 서클도 좋은거 같아보이네요
00:19:334 (4) - 좀만 블랭캣 신경써서 옆으로 좀더 뻗는것도 괜찮아보이네요
00:50:834 (3) - 1/2 일찍 끝내서 뒤에 서클넣어보시는건?
01:22:763 (2) - 차라리 00:07:334 (1) - 이런슬라처럼 만드는게 좋은거 같아보이네요

[Easy]

00:45:477 여기 초록선 안쓰니 지워도 되지 않나요?
여기도 딱히 할말은 없는거 같네요....

That's all. GL!

Beomsan

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Joined November 2013

Beomsan 10 years ago

한국 모딩큐 좌표좀 헉헉

Affirmation

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Affirmation 10 years ago

Beomsan wrote:
한국 모딩큐 좌표좀 헉헉

#modreqs

Sangzin

628 posts

Joined February 2013

Sangzin 10 years ago

Beomsan wrote:
한국 모딩큐 좌표좀 헉헉

t/23538

Doyak

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Topic Starter

Doyak 10 years ago

Kloyd wrote:
콤보컬러 넣는게 나음. 딱히 생각이 안나면 기본색깔에서 연한색깔 고르면 색깔이 이뻐짐 이런식으로 http://puu.sh/keACT/8ce723ddf8.png
이렇게 일단 바꿔놓고 색깔모딩받으면됨 이미 정해둔 게 있어서 그걸로 적용했습니다.

인세인

00:27:477 (6) - 이거 00:26:834 (3,4) - 3번이나 4번중 하나랑 좌우대칭 해서 나오는 위치에 두면 나을듯 지금도 00:26:191 (1,2) - 이것보다 거리가 좀 더 먼데 너무 확 벌리고 싶진 않네요.
00:41:620 (1) - 앞노트랑 스택 수정
00:45:477 (1) - 약간 이상했음 이런식으로 http://puu.sh/keB6c/ef3dcbd614.jpg 보라2개랑 얘하나랑 대칭구조 만들어보시는것도 수정
00:46:763 (1) - 혹시 그렇게 하실거라면 얘는 스택 수정
00:51:691 (1) - 슬라 점을 교차시키면 더 ㄱㅊ은 슬라 나옴 http://puu.sh/keBbX/996a947976.jpg 음 저도 지금 모양이 완벽하다고는 생각하진 않지만 개인적으론 제시해주신 것보단 지금이 더 마음에 드는 듯해서... 앞으로 더 좋은 제안이 나오면 바꿔볼게요.

이지

00:43:334 (3) - 클랩 화살표에만 있 어도 될 듯 아래에도 같은 지적이 많은 것 같네요. 인센이랑 똑같이 맞춰놓은 거였는데 노트 밀도가 낮으니 수정했습니다.
00:46:334 - 여기 나오는 소리 표현해도 될거같음 가능하면 키아이에 들어간 노트부터 꽝 때리고 싶네요. 인세인도 비슷한 느낌이고요.

굳럭

-[ Kami ]- wrote:
별거 없지만 모딩입니다..

[전체]
이지난이도만 cs가 3인데 노말난이도의 cs를 3으로 하는건 어떨까요 ~~(바꾸니까 맵이 이상해지네..)~~ 안 바꿔도 문제 없습니다 ㅎㅎ 원래 제 이지가 2.5였는데 3으로 올렸으니 격차 문제는 ㄴㄴ
[이지]
00:26:191 (2) - 슬라 끝 x:496 y:36 그 좌표가 어떻게 좋은 건지는 모르겠는데 직선형 비뚤어진 거 직접 수정했습니다.

[인센]
없음 ㅋㅅㅋ

전 진짜 모딩을 못하나 봅니다 제 눈으론 도저히 잡아낼데가 없네요
죄송합니다.. 쿠도수 안주셔도돼요 ㄴㄴㄴㄴㄴ 이건 거부하겠어요! 쿠도스는 맵의 sp가 달린 일! 농담이고 모딩 이만큼이라도 하셨으면 쿠도스 받아갈 자격이 되니 굳이 주지 말라고 하지 않으셔도 돼요 ㅎㅎ

Skidayo wrote:
ㅠㅠ 2015년에 이 노래를 볼수있다니.. 맵핑해주셔서 정말 감사합니당..
맵이 재미있어서 다운받고 50판도 넘게 한것같네요
그런데 모딩 요청을 받았지만 전 아무리 뚫어지게 봐도 도무지 잡을 곳이 없네요.. 그나마 찾은게 이것 하나.. ㅠㅠ

너무 짧아서 죄송합니다 ㅠㅠ
그리고 언른 동영상도 넣어주세요!! 이번 업뎃 끝나면 넣어볼게요!

iedesu wrote:
Insane
00:19:334 (1) - 살짝 과도하게 꺾인 느낌이 납니다...? 그리고 블랭킷? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3691559 음 00:18:477 (3) - 이걸 복붙한 것도 있고 전 그냥 지금 모양이 마음에 드네요 ㅎ

Easy
이지는 전체적으로 괜찮네요 ㅋㅅㅋ

Good Luck.

[ HalLoWeeN ] wrote:
as your req
[General]
no ㅋㅅㅋ

[이지]
00:43:334 (3) - 클랩 넘 많이드감. 중간부분 빼고 지워주시는게 좋을듯. 클로이드 님 모딩 때 수정했습니다.

00:45:477 - 00:45:905 - 00:46:334 - 셋중 하나 골라서 서클 하나 추가해주는게 흐름도 잘 이어지고 더 나을듯. 개인적으론 마지막부분 추천 음 글쎄요... 저는 인세인 찍었을 때처럼 저 '오렌지' 부분은 전체를 아주 작은 움직임으로 표현하면 했지 특정 한 박만 살리는 건 좀 그렇다고 생각해서...

[인센]
OD 너무 애매. 걍 7로 하는편이 나을듯. 크 그냥 장식용으로 달아두면 안 돼요?

00:13:334 (5) - 클랩 딱히 필요없을듯. 수정

00:41:620 (1) - 별로 안이뻐요. 앞 노트랑 거의 붙이거나, 아니면 아예 스택하는 편이 나을듯. 클로이드 님 모딩 때 스택으로 수정했습니다.

00:51:691 (1) - 모양이 별로 안이쁨. 점을 아래위로 대칭시키거나 / 교차 시키는 편이 나을듯. 아래위 대칭으로 수정했습니다.

good luck

Neoskylove wrote:
와 모딩 많네요. 저는 꾸밀줄 모르니 대충 쓰겠습니다. 밋밋해도 이해바람;;

이지
00:12:905 (3) - 박자 이상하다는 생각이 듭니다.http://puu.sh/kfnsf/e40a92d166.jpg이렇게 한번... 그 악기 소리를 일정하게 잡아줬으면 거기도 그렇게 해야했겠지만 드럼 소리를 따라서 매핑한지라(그 쪽이 단순한 박자가 잘 나와서 이지를 만들기 좋아요) 00:02:405 - 00:02:834 - 00:05:834 - 00:06:263 - 등등등등등을 전부 안 잡아줬기 때문에 굳이 거기만 표현하는 것은 오히려 일관성을 해칩니다.
01:23:620 - 여기 부분도 매핑 해보시는게...? 01:21:263 (1) - 이 스피너를 지우지 않는 이상은 그 사이에 노트를 넣으면 시간 차가 너무 짧아서 언랭요소가 됩니다.

인센
00:16:763 - 여기 1/2 슬라이더나 1/2간격 서클 2개 넣어보시는건 어떠신지
00:23:620 - 위에랑 동일 둘 다, 제가 매핑한 요소가 배경에 잔잔하게 깔리는 그 멜로디가 전혀 아니기 때문에(전 거기에 멜로디가 있다는 사실을 최근에야 깨달았습니다...) 끼워넣는 것은 일관성을 해칩니다.
http://puu.sh/kfo0x/96a1a14b10.jpg

ps. 첫 모딩이라 많이 보지는 못했스빈다. 그리고 왜 매핑 바보가 이거를 모딩했는지 모르겠네요...ㅠ
그리고 바보한테ㅐ 모딩 해보라고 해주신 도약님 감사합니다 다 경험입니다 ㅎ 앞으로는 직접 모딩할 거리도 좀 구해서 해보세요~ 매핑 연습에 도움이 많이 될 겁니다.

noz1995 wrote:
Hello
m4m from in-game pm, and now it's my turn

Wow, such a good map (And I love the song , you can see that I have some other maps before). And you do not work in my style, so I can't mod much. Otherwise, I am bad at mapping and modding Insane and over, so...
[Testplay]
SPOILER

[General]
Add video Will add it before rank
Timing: offset 477 ms (same with previous, but follow the music theory) Putting a note before the red line (ex: 00:00:048 (1) - on Insane) seems like a bad idea imo, and current mapping doesn't care about that much, I guess
I don't know why you two use OD 7.2 and 7.8 OD 7 and 8 is easily to understand, but... Hmm... why not? I actually don't understand why some people are hesitating to use those.
[Easy]
00:03:905 (1) - I think curve it to point to 00:05:191 (2) look well Consistency with 00:00:477 (1) -
00:07:334 (1) - I prefer it pointing at 00:06:905 (4) and blanket with 00:09:048 (3) : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3691994 Oh, I'm not gonna use any complicated slider in this diff. But maybe I could fix it a little, but later when someone gives me a better idea
00:27:905 (1) - Move to the left, that 00:28:763 (2) can point to 00:29:620 (3) That's also kind of my style, it's not a bad flow imo, so I'll keep it.
00:31:334 (1,2) - Just my style: curve them a bit, (1) point to the left, (2) point to the right: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3692005 That looks cool, but horizontal/veritical sliders are some kind of a concept for this map, so yeah...
00:44:620 (4) - http://puu.sh/kflgX.png I'll consider that, but I don't wanna use any 1/2s in this diff now...
00:57:477 (2,3) - Just the way I like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3692013 Ok that's nice I actually didn't like what I used there, so fixed.
[Insane]
00:05:405 (1) - I thing reverse it feel better 00:05:405 - Melody and 00:05:834 - Melody, so clickable.
00:08:191 (3) - ^ (I like it go round round round round round) ^^ 00:08:620 (4) - emphasized melody.
00:18:477 (3) - ^ lol no xD
00:24:048 (4) - A stream instead? There is a big resting time before that and the music doesn't really provide some good sound to keep the rhythm on, therefore it's hard to get good accuracy on there if it's a stream. This is very intentional because I played that as a stream on https://osu.ppy.sh/s/55662 and I felt so hard to acc there.
00:27:691 - I think a triplet here sound good But I don't, sorry xD
00:31:763 (2,3) - Swap them I like current state. Maybe I can change that like what you said, but there would need some re-placemnt and therefore it would hurt the map's structure.
00:33:691 (3,4) - Swap them for better flow That actually seems good, fixed.
00:47:405 (3,4) - Sound at 00:47:834 is strong so I think it sould not be a slider tail. http://puu.sh/kfnyR.png I actually thought about that, but I think it's enough to just put it like this when I basically follow the drum rhythm.
00:49:120 (3,4,5,6,7) - (5) -> (6) -> (3) -> (4) -> (7) or (4) -> (3) -> (5) -> (6) -> (7) or (3) -> (6) -> (5) -> (4) -> (7) (I like the 3rd the most) lol these are all fine(except the 2nd one because I don't really like star patterns), but perhaps I should change before/after notes a lot if I adjust them, and I actally like current state.
01:15:477 (4) - Reverse Umm, I don't see why D: I just like current state.
OK, that's my mod. Good luck on ranking.
If this is ranked, you must p/m me Doyak ^^ Sure! I'll call ya

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:
Hello~ Mod as requested through forum PM~

Unrankable issues
My opinion which I highly recommend changing it
Just small suggestions/nazi

[General]
The red line could go to 00:00:477 - this point, no point bringing the offset 4 beats back. It still won't mess up the downbeat and upbeat measures, so it should be fine, unless it is intended. I'll ask some BN about that, but there's a note before that time on Insane 00:00:048 (1) - so I'm not sure if it's safe.
Pretty sure the AudioLeadIn should be increased by 1000, the song starts really early. Will consider that and ask BN too
Other than that, look fine. I hope you are adding combo colours and video~ Combo colours added, and video is planned!
[Easy]
00:39:905 (3) - Just being nitpicky about the flow here, this could possibly lean towards the left, taking in the account of the curve from the previous slider. I just curved it.
00:44:620 (4) - I seriously don't like to make blanket mods... But this one just struck me hard. Oh lol, I did that truly wrong. Fixed.
00:48:048 (2,3) - These 2 looks really close together. I can see that you are trying to keep a linear flow for 00:46:763 (1,2,3) - , but in fact these could looks better when they are further apart for better playability. Well I guess I am being sensitive to things... Hmm I don't see much of problem there, so I'll skip it for now.
00:57:477 (2,1) - Just saying, these 2 could be the same shape, I think it would look better with these 2 being the same shape (and symmetrical at same time) I changed 00:58:763 (3) - this slider as a curved one on one of the previous mods so there definitely needs a straight slider somewhere there
The difficulty is really well done, can't point out much Thanks
[Insane]
00:41:405 - Feels weird to leave this out as you didn't leave this beat out on 00:39:691 - , or are you just following the vocals for this part? Both? I should say, but that whole part is just like my feeling, so not gonna change.
00:41:620 (1) - You should keep the momentum from the previous flow, this slider should be above 00:41:191 (8) - instead of being below. 2 modders before mentioned that, so I just stacked them.
00:42:048 (2,3,4) - I don't really hear any instruments or beats which justifies (3)... You could keep the consistency, so deleting (3) and instead placing it back at 00:42:370 - will sound more nicer. As I said, that whole part is just my feeling, with getting intense and intense as that part goes on. And there are consistent 1/4 drums on the background, you need a better sound tool to hear them clearly by slowing down, other than osu! editor's function, that does not try to keep the pitch while changing speed.
00:52:763 (4) - Being nitpicky here, but the flow would be better if this was pointing directly at 00:53:191 (5) - . Vertical slider is my life xD and 00:52:548 (3,4,5) - this is slightly going to the right, I just felt that.
01:06:477 (4) - But for this one though... Straight slider on a sqaure pattern doesn't look that much pleasing... You could again make this point towards (5), or instead go for variety and make this into a triplet. Changed to point (5).
Well no definite issues on this difficulty. just being me bad at modding insane Thx
That is all from me. GL!

Beomsan wrote:
as your req

Easy
00:12:048 (2) - 여기 노트 하나 두고 뒤에 1/1슬라 두개로 하면 더 좋은 거 같아요 앜 그렇게 할까 했는데 해보려니 마음에 드는 배치가 안 나와서 일단 패스

Insane
00:03:263 (7) - 00:02:191 (3) - 잔상이랑 좀 띄우시는게 좋을 듯 살짝 띄움
00:41:620 (1) - 박자만 봐주세요 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3692290 위에 다른 모더분도 그거 제안했다 거절했는데 일단 바꿔봤는데... 모양이 망했다!
01:13:334 (3,4) - 연타넣기 좋은 거 같네요 엥? 거기가 어째서요...

미워죽겠다~~~~~~!!!!!!!!!!! 미워죽겠다!!!!!!

Sangzin wrote:
From 한국 모딩큐 ~~제가 거기서 모딩거리 찾습니다~~

[General]

~~타이밍 포인트가 마이너스 오프셋 ㄷㄷ~~ 그건 한 번 BN들한테 물어보고 바꿔야될지도...
콤보컬러가 없네요. 추가하는걸 권장합니다. 이미 추가가 예정되어있었습니다. 비트맵 설명을 아무도 안 읽는 듯 ㅋㅅㅋ
[Insane]

00:00:477 (2) - 뉴콤? 수정
00:01:977 (1) - 여기보단 00:02:191 (3) - 에 뉴콤 넣는게 맞는 거 같네요 뒤에보니까 이렇게 넣으셨던데 헛 매의 눈... 저 원래 이렇게 안 넣는데 실수했나 봐요. 수정
00:44:191 (1) - 갑자기 점프가 있으니까 처리하기 힘드지 않을까 싶네요 1/2에서 슬라끊는게? 음 저도 꺼림칙했던 부분이라 끊어봤습니다.
01:15:477 (4) - Ctrl+G? 이쪽은 그냥 일정 거리 유지하면서 가고 싶네요. 한쪽 방향으로 쭉 흘러가는 느낌으로

[Easy]

00:45:477 여기 초록선 안쓰니 지워도 되지 않나요? 인세인에서 그대로 가져온 거라 지우는 걸 깜빡했네요. 수정
여기도 딱히 할말은 없는거 같네요.... ㅋㅅㅋ

That's all. GL!

모딩해주신 11분께 정말 감사드립니다!
Thanks to 11 people who modded this!

모딩 수정하는 데만 2시간 20분이 걸렸네요 ㅎㄷㄷ

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Doyak

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Topic Starter

Doyak 10 years ago

겟난러 분들은 급하지 않아도 되니까 천천히 업뎃 해주세요~ ~~(본격 더블 포스팅 실수 덮어쓰기)~~

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Beomsan

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Beomsan 10 years ago

고생하십니다

Doyak

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Doyak 10 years ago

Beomsan wrote:
고생하십니다

아직 반도 안 왔다니이이이이이이이이이이이

Startrick

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Startrick 10 years ago

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Taeyang

Elite Mapper

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Taeyang 10 years ago

noz1995 wrote:
[Taeyang's Insane]
Oh my god. Please rank this soon, my pp pool ^^
:D
00:13:763 (1) - Why NC hear?
i used 0.75 SV
00:18:263 (3,4) - Move (3) to (289,293) and reverse (4), change it a bit to make a blanket. Just because I like that flow
00:16:334 (2,3,2,3) - stack here and i done want blanket there
00:35:834 (6) - Reverse
why?
01:08:405 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I don't like this some, my mouse move round and round and round @@. Why don't you make some notes move anti-clockwise?
~~because for my pp~~ i cant find then better flow
01:11:405 (3) - Reversefixed
01:19:334 (1) - Flow break here makes no sense . Reverse it
for emphasis so i dont want
OK, that's my mod. Good luck on ranking.
If this is ranked, you must p/m me Doyak ^^

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:
Hello~ Mod as requested through forum PM~

[Taeyang's Insane]
00:13:763 - Just mentioning this, this green line isn't snapped.
fixed
00:26:191 (1,2,3,4) - Not really sure, but players should be able to notice the difference between 1/1's distance and 1/2's distance, right now this pattern (1/1) is having techincally the same DS as all other 1/2 patterns in this section. You could further reduce these notes' distance, or make a trap :

i dont want hlaf stack line then better antijump
01:15:477 (7,1) - Would look better if these were having the same shape.
fixed
No definite issues on this difficulty too. again being bad on modding insane
That is all from me. GL!
Sangzin wrote:
[Taeyang's Insane][notice]

00:41:405 (5) - 오른쪽 말고 왼쪽에 오버랩시키는게 좋은 거 같네요
흐름 위주로 배치하고 최소한의 모양을 잡아둔거고 00:41:405 (5,2) - 여기 이렇게 스택
01:11:834 (4) - Ctrl+G?
나름대로 수정했습니다.

ㅋㅅㅋㅅㅋ

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Artist:Kugimiya Rie, Horie Yui, Kitamura Eri
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Creator:Doyak
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Source:とらドラ!
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Sonnyc

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Artist:Kugimiya Rie, Horie Yui, Kitamura Eri
ArtistUnicode:釘宮理恵, 堀江由衣, 喜多村英梨
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-Nanaka-

815 posts

Joined July 2013

-Nanaka- 10 years ago

hi

toradoraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
red: unrankable issue.
purple: maybe unrankable or Disqualification issue
blue: Highly recommended.
bold: should fix.

General

Change Title オレンジ
SPOILER

Easy

00:57:048 (1,2) - try Ctrl+G rhythm
01:09:905 (4,5) - try flow
SPOILER
00:53:620 - 01:07:334 - add finish

Very nice Easy! nice work!!!

Sonnyc's Normal

00:04:977 - add note here? Because you are picking up the piano.feel odd
00:05:191 (3,4) - DS high a bit
00:10:763 (1) - same reason,how about this?
SPOILER
00:13:548 (4,1) - DS
00:21:048 (1,2) - it is difficult to suddenly switch to a vocal, remove reverse slider end at 00:21:905 -
idk.maybe it's just me...
00:24:477 (1,2) - ??? what are you to follow? 00:24:477 - add circle 00:24:905 - 1/1slider 00:25:548 - circle
00:26:191 (1) - u-m. change 4circle? have a good end
00:28:548 (2) - why vocal follow? 00:29:405 - 00:29:834 - strange because you havenot picked up here 00:28:548 (2,3) - 00:28:763 - change1/1slider?
00:50:834 (3,4,2,3) - DS
01:02:405 (5,6) - ^
01:22:763 (2) - ^

Startrick's Hard

00:19:334 - Should be start point to 00:19:334 - move to 00:19:548 (2) - 00:19:120 - 00:19:977 - add circle
00:27:905 (3) - u-m I like stack to 00:28:334 (1) -
00:30:477 (5,6,7,8) - be hard play 00:30:477 (5) - 1/2slider 00:30:905 - circle click,easy to play
00:33:905 (5) - same reason
00:37:977 (1) - very strange, try 00:37:977 - add circle　00:38:191 - 1/1reverse
00:39:691 (1) - ^ 00:39:905 - 1/2slider？
00:47:620 - 00:48:477 - etc.. is not interesting. sound less to Kiai time
01:11:405 (2,3) - try this rhythm
SPOILER
01:13:763 (3,3) - Please be consistent with hit sound

Insane

00:37:977 (1,2) - u-m,Ctrl+G rhythm here? 00:38:084 - add note 00:38:191 - Finish,like imo
00:43:334 (1,2,3,4) - overmap lol 00:43:334 - 1/2slider plz
00:45:477 (1) - vol60% all points add whistle? Vocal very cute :3
00:53:620 (1,2) - Ctrl+G rhythm, 00:53:620 - add finish. also I want to clickd Clap
01:00:048 (2) - ummmmm,un fit for me;; plz Vol50% sample Normal Add Soft finish
01:07:334 - finish
01:14:191 - 01:15:905 - 01:17:620 - 01:19:334 - add whistle?
Very pretty Diff!! your map fun

Taeyang's Insane

Uncheck wide screen
00:07:120 (6,1) - It is not enough sound...00:07:227 - I want to add Note here
00:15:691 (5) - remove note. here there are many sound 00:14:191 - 00:25:977 - this section slow part, Irhink you should reduce the sound, also 00:15:691 - sound very low .showld not use the circle,if your this sound pick up the slider end better
00:19:977 (3,4) - same reason, 00:19:977 - 1/1slider better
00:23:191 (2,3) - ^ 00:23:191 - circle 00:23:405 - 1/1slider fit imo
00:27:048 (3,4) - why use a Drum Clap? un fit for me
00:27:048 - Soft whistle
00:27:477 - Drum whistle
00:27:691 - Soft whistle. Have a good end
00:34:655 - add note here? very good sounds
00:38:191 - 00:46:655 - This section, why use a Drum clap & Finish? seems out of plece to me. I want to re-samples...
00:35:620 (5,6) - feel odd a bit. 00:35:620 - 1/2reverse or Ctrl+G rhythm here ?
00:45:477 (1,1,1,1) - Very Favolite pattern
00:48:263 (6,1,2) - 00:48:263 (6,1,2) - sound strange. plz Ctrl+G rhythm,00:48:691 - 00:49:977 - na,ri,ta,i,ka,ji,tsu, 7circles. that sounds like fun
if your changed 00:50:191 (1,2) - Ctrl+G rhythm here
00:52:977 (2,3) - Remove clap.I think 00:52:977 - D whistle 00:53:084 (3) - S whistle
00:52:763 (1,2) - switch NC
00:59:834 (2) - add whistle
01:05:620 (6,1) - Please be consistent with patterns00:51:905 (1,2) -
01:06:477 (1,2) - ^
01:12:263 (5) - too close 68/188?
01:12:905 (2) - ^ 388/72
01:16:977 (6,7) - bad stack.Please do not stack in Clap

mod time: 2.5hour

gl

Taeyang

Elite Mapper

1,209 posts

Joined June 2013

Taeyang 10 years ago

-Nanaka- wrote:
Taeyang's Insane
Uncheck wide screen
fixed
00:07:120 (6,1) - It is not enough sound...00:07:227 - I want to add Note here
00:03:691 (6,1,6,1,6,1,4,1) - for consistency
00:15:691 (5) - remove note. here there are many sound 00:14:191 - 00:25:977 - this section slow part, Irhink you should reduce the sound, also 00:15:691 - sound very low .showld not use the circle,if your this sound pick up the slider end better
there is fine to me KIAI time jump really hard but here DS and patterns make to easy
00:19:977 (3,4) - same reason, 00:19:977 - 1/1slider better
00:19:763 - vocal stoped here
00:23:191 (2,3) - ^ 00:23:191 - circle 00:23:405 - 1/1slider fit imo
i followed almost background and i want make easily for rhythm
00:27:048 (3,4) - why use a Drum Clap? un fit for me
00:27:048 - Soft whistle
00:27:477 - Drum whistle
00:27:691 - Soft whistle. Have a good end
here only changed to whistle
00:34:655 - add note here? very good sounds
00:30:905 (5,1) - 00:34:334 (5,1) - consistency
00:38:191 - 00:46:655 - This section, why use a Drum clap & Finish? seems out of plece to me. I want to re-samples...
00:45:905 (1,1) - for here sound i want use durm hitsound
00:35:620 (5,6) - feel odd a bit. 00:35:620 - 1/2reverse or Ctrl+G rhythm here ?
00:45:477 (1,1,1,1) - Very Favolite pattern
Thanks
00:48:263 (6,1,2) - 00:48:263 (6,1,2) - sound strange. plz Ctrl+G rhythm,00:48:691 - 00:49:977 - na,ri,ta,i,ka,ji,tsu, 7circles. that sounds like fun
if your changed 00:50:191 (1,2) - Ctrl+G rhythm here
but that's weird to me there jump make easliy 00:49:120 (3,4) - here
00:52:977 (2,3) - Remove clap.I think 00:52:977 - D whistle 00:53:084 (3) - S whistle
i dont want D whistle sry ;w;
00:52:763 (1,2) - switch NC
nah i want down beat NC term that's looks better
00:59:834 (2) - add whistle
NO
01:05:620 (6,1) - Please be consistent with patterns00:51:905 (1,2) -
Thanks suggest but i read more fine01:05:191 (4,5,6) -01:05:834 (1,2,3) - triangle pattern
01:06:477 (1,2) - ^
^
01:12:263 (5) - too close 68/188?
i think that's enough
01:12:905 (2) - ^ 388/72
too far
01:16:977 (6,7) - bad stack.Please do not stack in Clap

asdf

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Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,623 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Doyak 10 years ago

-Nanaka- wrote:
hi
toradoraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
red: unrankable issue.
purple: maybe unrankable or Disqualification issue
blue: Highly recommended.
bold: should fix.

General
Change Title オレンジ Thanks, but I'm not caring about those metadata too much because I anyways would have to change some when KwaN comes here
SPOILER

Easy
00:57:048 (1,2) - try Ctrl+G rhythm Not really need to, and that would hurt the good shape I made.
01:09:905 (4,5) - try flow That's actually good, so I'll try it, but I'm kinda worried if they'll say it's too hard for an Easy diff, let's see how BN says about that.
SPOILER
00:53:620 - 01:07:334 - add finish Although there's a little cymbal sound on the background, I feel finish hitsound here really doesn't fit, so I'll skip it.

Very nice Easy! nice work!!! Thanks!
Insane
00:37:977 (1,2) - u-m,Ctrl+G rhythm here? 00:38:084 - add note 00:38:191 - Finish,like imo n-o,because I want to emphasize the long vocal there.
00:43:334 (1,2,3,4) - overmap lol 00:43:334 - 1/2slider plz It's not really an overmapping. There are actually 1/4 beats throughout most of the song. The tension gets tighter here, so I wanted to fill them out with 1/4s, so yeah.
00:45:477 (1) - vol60% all points add whistle? Vocal very cute :3 That's actually a good idea, thanks
00:53:620 (1,2) - Ctrl+G rhythm, 00:53:620 - add finish. also I want to clickd Clap Though long vocal 00:53:834 - here, it's just preference I guess.
01:00:048 (2) - ummmmm,un fit for me;; plz Vol50% sample Normal Add Soft finish Hmm okay fixed.
01:07:334 - finish As like 00:53:620 - and in Easy, no.
01:14:191 - 01:15:905 - 01:17:620 - 01:19:334 - add whistle? Fixed.
Very pretty Diff!! your map fun Thanks! your mod helpful

mod time: 2.5hour

gl

Thanks! Btw, where did you come from lol I only remember I posted this map on #modreqs 2 days ago, just once

Lami

1,756 posts

Joined June 2011

Lami 10 years ago

Normal

00:24:477 (1,2) -

or

는 어떨까 싶네요

Insane

00:28:655 (4) - overmap 간당간당한듯..
01:07:763 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - 흐름 더 좋게 개선의 여지가 있는거같음

Guest Insane

00:40:763 (3,5) - 애매한 오버랩이라 생각이 들음 차라리 5를 3번 머리에 두는게 나을듯
01:05:620 (6,1) - 뉴콤은 빨간박자보단 하얀박자에서 시작하는게 더 자연스러운 뉴콤이라 생각됨

Doyak

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Doyak 10 years ago

intoon wrote:
Insane

00:28:655 (4) - overmap 간당간당한듯.. 보컬의 떨림 같은 느낌을 표현한 거긴 한데 그게 정 문제가 될 수도 있다면 http://puu.sh/kgO28/734439e2a5.mp3 소리 있습니다.
01:07:763 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - 흐름 더 좋게 개선의 여지가 있는거같음 바꿔보았습니다.

모딩 감사합니다!

Startrick

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Startrick 10 years ago

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Sonnyc

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Sonnyc 10 years ago

Fixed 00:24:477 (1,2). Small DS issue isn't something worth changing since it isn't likely noticable. Fixed 00:29:620.

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Official Site

Artist : 逢坂大河（CV：釘宮理恵）・櫛枝実乃梨（CV：堀江由衣）・川嶋亜美（CV：喜多村英梨）
Romanized Artist : Aisaka Taiga(CV:Kugimiya Rie) Kushieda Minori(CV:Horie Yui) Kawashima Ami(CV:Kitamura Eri)
Title : オレンジ
Romanized Title : Orange

Link : http://www.starchild.co.jp/special/tora ... lease.html

Doyak

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Doyak 10 years ago

Metadata updated, please redownload!

Discussion about how to write the artist with KwaN

2015-09-20 17:15 Doyak: Hi

I think I can cancel my metadata request sicne Sonnyc found me an official source
2015-09-20 17:15 IamKwaN: sue
2015-09-20 17:15 IamKwaN: sure
2015-09-20 17:25 Doyak: Umm, can I ask you a question?
2015-09-20 17:26 IamKwaN: yea
2015-09-20 17:26 Doyak: I got the artist name as
2015-09-20 17:26 Doyak: 逢坂大河（CV：釘宮理恵）・櫛枝実乃梨（CV：堀江由衣）・川嶋亜美（CV：喜多村英梨）
2015-09-20 17:26 Doyak: but the submission says that it's too long
2015-09-20 17:26 Doyak: How should I reduce this?
2015-09-20 17:27 IamKwaN: 釘宮理恵・堀江由衣・喜多村英梨
2015-09-20 17:27 Doyak: Just voice actor names?
2015-09-20 17:27 IamKwaN: yep
2015-09-20 17:28 Doyak: then should I change the romanized title only with voice actors too?
2015-09-20 17:28 Doyak: and should I add characters' name on the tag or something?
2015-09-20 17:28 IamKwaN: title?
2015-09-20 17:28 Doyak: ah I mean
2015-09-20 17:28 Doyak: romanized artist
2015-09-20 17:28 IamKwaN: romanized and unicode must be consistent
2015-09-20 17:28 IamKwaN: so put characters' names to the Tag
2015-09-20 17:29 Doyak: Ok, thanks so much!
2015-09-20 17:29 IamKwaN: no problem
2015-09-20 17:31 Doyak: ah, just one more question
2015-09-20 17:31 IamKwaN: ok
2015-09-20 17:31 Doyak: Romanizing ・ this character, how should I change this?
2015-09-20 17:31 Doyak: use , this or just blank?
2015-09-20 17:32 IamKwaN: .
2015-09-20 17:32 IamKwaN: use '.'
~~~
2015-09-20 17:33 Doyak: ok, thanks a lot!
2015-09-20 17:34 IamKwaN:

~~~
2015-09-20 17:37 Doyak: so
2015-09-20 17:37 Doyak: Kugimiya Rie. Horie Yui. Kitamura Eri
2015-09-20 17:37 Doyak: this is fine?
2015-09-20 17:38 IamKwaN: yea
2015-09-20 17:38 IamKwaN: it's okay
2015-09-20 17:38 Doyak: k, thanks again :3
2015-09-20 17:38 IamKwaN:

Taeyang

Elite Mapper

1,209 posts

Joined June 2013

Taeyang 10 years ago

intoon wrote:
Guest Insane

00:40:763 (3,5) - 애매한 오버랩이라 생각이 들음 차라리 5를 3번 머리에 두는게 나을듯
큰문제 없으니 이대로 둘게여
01:05:620 (6,1) - 뉴콤은 빨간박자보단 하얀박자에서 시작하는게 더 자연스러운 뉴콤이라 생각됨
리딩에 따라서 박았기때문에 이대로 둡니다.

모딩 ㄳㄳ

Lanturn

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Lanturn 10 years ago

[General]

To follow proper measures because of the beginning being an anacrusis, You should technically start your timing at 00:00:477 - instead. It isn't a huge issue, but it makes NC sound odd because of it. Anything from before it will carry the same volume anyways. The only diff that would be affected is Taeyang, but that's only 10% volume. Up to you if you want to change it. The green timings will probably be unsnapped by 1ms if you do this though so you'll have to go through each one again.

For the title, I'm pretty sure we chose to ignore interpuncts " ・", but I don't think it really matters either way. There's been recently ranked maps with interpuncts that just use spaces anyways, I don't think it is a set in stone rule yet. Either or, it shouldn't matter.

Maybe delete color 5? http://puu.sh/kliwN.jpg It's kind of similar to color 1, and I don't really think it's needed since you already have 4 unique colors.

[Easy]
nothing really to say. Solid and simple diff.

00:44:620 (4) - Stuff like this. You could have the tail end at 00:45:048 - be its own circle so it brings out the potential in the note. Just having it on its tail end kind of makes the note itself feel a bit passive and not really required to hit.
01:16:763 (2) - you could probably curve this a bit more so the movement to (1) is a little bit more fluid. If you don't like two circles in a row, then you can just remove the reverse from 00:43:334 (3) - and add another 1/1 slider at 00:44:191 -

[Normal]

00:10:763 (1) - Is it possible to make this a little more interesting? I really liked 00:07:334 (1) - and then seeing 00:10:763 (1) - after was a bit disappointing if that makes sense. Up to you though.
00:45:048 (1,2) - I would personally remove the reverse on (1) and start (2) as a reverse slider at 00:45:477 - so it seperates the finishes and the orange vocals -> http://puu.sh/kljhs.jpg
00:50:834 (3) - Spacing bugs me on this one a little, even if it is only minor. (from 2->3 and 3->4 being different)
01:21:691 (1) - because this is just an awkward note to hit, it works much better as a tail end. Consider changing 01:20:834 (5) - to a circle at 01:20:620 - and then use a slider from 01:21:048 - to 01:21:691 - Although there really isn't any sound to hit at 01:24:048 - you could even add a reverse I guess if you wanted since y'know, tail ends.

[Hard]

00:14:620 (1,2,1,2) - I would personally control+j these so the gap from 00:16:333 (2) - to 00:17:191 (1) - doesn't feel so awkard, as it's literally half.
00:40:977 (3) - Since you kind of follow vocals, wouldn't it make more sense to start the slider at 00:41:191 - instead? It also adds a much needed 1/1 break.

[Insane]

00:26:834 (3,4,5) - It wouldn't surprise me if this was in 1/6 actually, but it's a bit hard to hear. Idk, you probably don't need to map this, but it's up to you, the other insane doesn't even bother with it even.
01:20:405 (3) - I would have preferred these to all be clickable circles like 01:16:763 (2,3,4,5) - since they're all equally important to hit. 01:23:620 (1) - here as well, either or works though. Circles are fun to click, you don't need sliders to hold any hands on Insane here.

[Taeyang Insane]

the bass kick things (whistle) at the beginning are a bit too much imo. You honestly really don't need them. Or at least used a lot less. Notes like the tail end of 00:02:834 - work good for them, but not on every note. I highly recommend you nerf them down quite a bit and use them where they actually match the song.
00:05:191 (7,1) - I suggest swapping the position of these in the timeline so it captures the most important sounds. (Circle Slider instead of Slider Circle)
00:08:620 (7,1) - Same idea as above.
00:13:763 (1,1) - hopefully the colors get changed, as this red/pink can get a little confusing. If it doesn't, then please swap one color out so the slowdown is a bit more noticeable as it feels really similar to the length of a 1/2 slider.
00:52:548 (4,1) - imo a 1/2 slider would work better here to emphasize on the vocals. 01:06:263 (3,1) - same here.
00:57:048 (1,2) - control+g for better flow?
01:08:405 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - to be honest, I really don't think you need to go this excessive with circles, the big difficulty spike comes from here and I'd personally think it'd be better if it was slightly nerfed a little. Though probably unpopular opinions.

Not really much else to say, map is good enough to move on. Call me back and I'll do a few more in-depth checks.

Doyak

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Doyak 10 years ago

Lanturn wrote:
[General]

To follow proper measures because of the beginning being an anacrusis, You should technically start your timing at 00:00:477 - instead. It isn't a huge issue, but it makes NC sound odd because of it. Anything from before it will carry the same volume anyways. The only diff that would be affected is Taeyang, but that's only 10% volume. Up to you if you want to change it. The green timings will probably be unsnapped by 1ms if you do this though so you'll have to go through each one again. Fixed that, and snapped all green lines.

For the title, I'm pretty sure we chose to ignore interpuncts " ・", but I don't think it really matters either way. There's been recently ranked maps with interpuncts that just use spaces anyways, I don't think it is a set in stone rule yet. Either or, it shouldn't matter. It would be pretty odd to have the artist as "Kugimiya Rie Horie Yui Kitamura Eri" xD and it doesn't matter I guess, so let's keep this.

Maybe delete color 5? http://puu.sh/kliwN.jpg It's kind of similar to color 1, and I don't really think it's needed since you already have 4 unique colors. Deleted the color from '!' character.

[Easy]
nothing really to say. Solid and simple diff.
00:44:620 (4) - Stuff like this. You could have the tail end at 00:45:048 - be its own circle so it brings out the potential in the note. Just having it on its tail end kind of makes the note itself feel a bit passive and not really required to hit. Divided into 2 circles.
01:16:763 (2) - you could probably curve this a bit more so the movement to (1) is a little bit more fluid. If you don't like two circles in a row, then you can just remove the reverse from 00:43:334 (3) - and add another 1/1 slider at 00:44:191 - lol this sentence seems to be broken xD Blanketed, as I always like to
[Insane]
00:26:834 (3,4,5) - It wouldn't surprise me if this was in 1/6 actually, but it's a bit hard to hear. Idk, you probably don't need to map this, but it's up to you, the other insane doesn't even bother with it even. The mapset I got the mp3 from actually used that as a 1/6 repeat slider(00:26:841 (1) - on https://osu.ppy.sh/b/168743 Insane, where I actually got the negative offset thing too), but I actually examined it really carefully to confirm it that 1/4 fits there. If you listen to http://puu.sh/klnu3/e801dc25b4.mp3 this 30% speed version, the rhythm is like: http://puu.sh/klnCq/3faecac233.jpg so I can use 1/4.
01:20:405 (3) - I would have preferred these to all be clickable circles like 01:16:763 (2,3,4,5) - since they're all equally important to hit. 01:23:620 (1) - here as well, either or works though. Circles are fun to click, you don't need sliders to hold any hands on Insane here. Just my preference, successive circles on quiet, or vocal-only part are much harder to keep accuracy. Also, I made the pitch gap biggest on between the circle and slider, for both two parts.
Not really much else to say, map is good enough to move on. Call me back and I'll do a few more in-depth checks.

Thanks for your mod! I'll call you back when all GD mappers fix their diffs!

Sonnyc

7,762 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 10 years ago

Lanturn wrote:
[Normal]
00:10:763 (1) - Is it possible to make this a little more interesting? I really liked 00:07:334 (1) - and then seeing 00:10:763 (1) - after was a bit disappointing if that makes sense. Up to you though. // This pattern was intended to interact between 00:10:763 (1,3,4). Yeah it's not as interesting as the previous, but I'd like to keep the current pattern.
00:45:048 (1,2) - I would personally remove the reverse on (1) and start (2) as a reverse slider at 00:45:477 - so it seperates the finishes and the orange vocals -> http://puu.sh/kljhs.jpg // Imo either way could work fine enough. I agree that your suggestion fits better in the perspective of vocals. However I was somewhat focusing on the instruments. Giving a short pause at 00:45:691 was intended to emphasize the finish sounds of 00:45:048 - 00:45:262 - and 00:45:905 (2) - is fitting another instrument element.
00:50:834 (3) - Spacing bugs me on this one a little, even if it is only minor. (from 2->3 and 3->4 being different) // Valid nazi.
01:21:691 (1) - because this is just an awkward note to hit, it works much better as a tail end. Consider changing 01:20:834 (5) - to a circle at 01:20:620 - and then use a slider from 01:21:048 - to 01:21:691 - Although there really isn't any sound to hit at 01:24:048 - you could even add a reverse I guess if you wanted since y'know, tail ends. // Fixed.

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Startrick

361 posts

Joined June 2013

Startrick 10 years ago

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Last edited by Startrick 7 years ago, edited 1 time in total.

Taeyang

Elite Mapper

1,209 posts

Joined June 2013

Taeyang 10 years ago

Lanturn wrote:
[Taeyang Insane]
the bass kick things (whistle) at the beginning are a bit too much imo. You honestly really don't need them. Or at least used a lot less. Notes like the tail end of 00:02:834 - work good for them, but not on every note. I highly recommend you nerf them down quite a bit and use them where they actually match the song.
00:00:477 (1) - 00:03:905 (1) - 00:07:334 (1) - 00:10:763 (1) - i remove tails whistle sound
00:05:191 (7,1) - I suggest swapping the position of these in the timeline so it captures the most important sounds. (Circle Slider instead of Slider Circle)
00:08:620 (7,1) - Same idea as above.
00:02:191 (1,2) - 00:05:620 (1,2) - 00:09:048 (1,2) - 00:12:477 (1,2) - here rhythm is all consistency so change hard, and i prefer this rhythm
00:13:763 (1,1) - hopefully the colors get changed, as this red/pink can get a little confusing. If it doesn't, then please swap one color out so the slowdown is a bit more noticeable as it feels really similar to the length of a 1/2 slider.
fixed
00:52:548 (4,1) - imo a 1/2 slider would work better here to emphasize on the vocals. 01:06:263 (3,1) - same here.
i tried it but when i DT play flow better put in circle then slide
00:57:048 (1,2) - control+g for better flow?
nah here is zigzag flow
01:08:405 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - to be honest, I really don't think you need to go this excessive with circles, the big difficulty spike comes from here and I'd personally think it'd be better if it was slightly nerfed a little. Though probably unpopular opinions.
00:55:334 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - same here ;idk what's metter and here is second kiai time so i want make some hardly
Not really much else to say, map is good enough to move on. Call me back and I'll do a few more in-depth checks.

Thx mod ~!

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382,364,78691,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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Beomsan

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Beomsan 10 years ago

버블각

Doyak

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Doyak 10 years ago

Beomsan wrote:
버블각

ㅇㅇ Please come back soon, Lanturn!

Mint

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Mint 10 years ago

While indeed the title should be okay, to me I'd rather use , instead to keep consistent with the already ranked mapsets - seems more logical to use the , anyways.
Also, Taeyang's diff is missing the video.

Call me after Lanturn

Doyak

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Doyak 10 years ago

appleeaterx wrote:
While indeed the title should be okay, to me I'd rather use , instead to keep consistent with the already ranked mapsets - seems more logical to use the , anyways.
Also, Taeyang's diff is missing the video.

Call me after Lanturn

Oh, okay, will fix the video soon

Thanks! Will call you soon as well

Beomsan

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Beomsan 10 years ago

랭크각

Doyak

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Doyak 10 years ago

Beomsan wrote:
랭크각

ㄴㄴ 퀄파각
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Lanturn

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Lanturn 10 years ago

appleeaterx wrote:
While indeed the title should be okay, to me I'd rather use , instead to keep consistent with the already ranked mapsets - seems more logical to use the , anyways.
Also, Taeyang's diff is missing the video.

Call me after Lanturn

While I'd agree with you on this, sadly metadata rules wouldn't allow it. XD

Video:
Gonna get you a new one if my torrent goes through. So uhh. wait for it.

Easy:
01:09:905 (4,5,1) - You can also maybe move the (4) from stacking on the (1) if you want since it isn't recommended to use them because newbie confusion. Either or, just fix the DS issue at the least.

Normal:
00:24:477 (1,2) - Try moving these a little bit more to the left since it's in perfect range of 00:24:048 - 's sound and might lead to some confusion. adjust 00:26:191 (1) - as needed after

Taeyang: