2015-10-12 16:44 Underdogs: eeeeey
2015-10-12 16:54 - N a n a k a -: eaaaaaa
2015-10-12 16:54 Underdogs: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/794577 cYsmix - Dovregubben's Hall]
2015-10-12 16:54 Underdogs: CHOOSE WHICH MOD 
2015-10-12 16:55 - N a n a k a -: wow nice :3
2015-10-12 16:55 Underdogs: go on your easy diff
2015-10-12 16:56 Underdogs: I'll point out the bads
2015-10-12 16:56 Underdogs: u in?
2015-10-12 16:56 - N a n a k a -: okei
2015-10-12 16:57 Underdogs: ok i assume u in
2015-10-12 16:58 Underdogs: 00:17:214 (1,2,1) -  this is not bad but not good as well, since the shaping is a bit off
2015-10-12 16:58 Underdogs: but if it's for Distance Snap then ignor
2015-10-12 16:59 Underdogs: 00:25:786 (1) -  this one is out of shape tbh, try to change it so it becomes like 00:25:786 (1) - 
2015-10-12 16:59 Underdogs: 00:23:214 (2) - 
2015-10-12 16:59 Underdogs: *
2015-10-12 17:00 Underdogs: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/794577 cYsmix - Dovregubben's Hall [Hard]]
2015-10-12 17:00 - N a n a k a -: oh wait a min
2015-10-12 17:00 - N a n a k a -: i'm working
2015-10-12 17:02 Underdogs: i guess only Easy here needs a bit of tuning
2015-10-12 17:03 - N a n a k a -: 00:23:214 (2,1) - two slide here alrealy same
2015-10-12 17:03 - N a n a k a -: or you mean distance?
2015-10-12 17:04 Underdogs: not really
2015-10-12 17:04 Underdogs: the slider aren't really blanketing well
2015-10-12 17:05 - N a n a k a -: oh i knew
2015-10-12 17:05 Underdogs: intentional?
2015-10-12 17:06 - N a n a k a -: about you suggest
2015-10-12 17:07 Underdogs: this is a suggestion ye, coz it's not neat
2015-10-12 17:07 - N a n a k a -: ok i'm fix
2015-10-12 17:08 - N a n a k a -: but i skip 00:17:214 (1,2,1) -  also
2015-10-12 17:08 - N a n a k a -: becuz distance
2015-10-12 17:08 Underdogs: i expected that much
2015-10-12 17:11 - N a n a k a -: ok that diff is done?
2015-10-12 17:12 Underdogs: Hard>
2015-10-12 17:12 Underdogs: ?
2015-10-12 17:12 Underdogs: oh wait
2015-10-12 17:12 Underdogs: yes, Easy is done
2015-10-12 17:13 Underdogs: I believe Hard and Insane is pretty OK
2015-10-12 17:13 - N a n a k a -: thanks
2015-10-12 17:14 Underdogs: a'ight get this map ranked :v

suricate1 wrote:

M4M req

General
Sound format over 192kbps, corvert it to 192kbps or less(ranking criteria demands it)
Suggest progressive difficulty scale, so check the difficulties levels. AR CS HP OD
u realy dont want map more the end of song? No.

Easy
decrease the cs to 2,5 or 2 2.5
increase the ar to 3 3 is too fast. change to 2
od = 2
hp= 2
00:36:071 (1) - curve it on middle no, i dont want to make curve here
00:56:214 (2,1) - beginners gonna cry with this ritmy I think it fine also
02:14:214 (2) - at middle the curve same as 00:36:071 (1)
02:21:500 (2) - curve at middle ^
02:36:928 (2) - same

Normal
Ar 6 plox really fast. change to 5
od= 3
hp= 3
only it

Hard
u can reduce the hard points a little bit and increase the settings
Od= 6
Hp=5 4.5
02:18:500 (6,1,2) - its looks so hard to this difficulty
02:25:786 (1,2) - same

Insane
Hp= 6 5
OD= 7

Nanaka's Hall
OD= 8
01:05:643 (2) - This flow looks wrong, try make the slider go down and move then to the top

I dont have much to say about aesthetics, flow and shapes, Its looks very good
Good Work, and have luck!
Good to hear

bestza55567 wrote:

แมพดีเกิ้น -0-
ไม่กล้าม็อดให้เลยเนี่ย สุดยอดแมพเปอร์ TH
ไปทั่ว เอ้ย ทั่วไป

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ดู AiMod ด้วยเรื่อง Audio อย่างที่ม็อดบนเขาว่านะ
Tags เพิ่ม cYsmix Dovregubben hall เข้าไปด้วยนะครับ ไม่ต้อง
สีคอมโบ 2 กับ 4 น่าจะให้แตกต่างกันนิดนึงนะครับ ตั้งใจทำให้มันไล่สี

Nanaka's Hall

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00:05:214 (1,2) - แก้ Blanket นิดนึง
00:41:214 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ผมว่าโน้ตสองข้างน่าจะเป็นแบบ Mirror นะ สองข้างเหมือนกัน mirror อยู่แล่ว
00:48:286 (2,5) - Bklanket มั้ย ไม่ล่ะ วางยาก
ไม่มีอะไรละ ส่วนตัวชอบ Kickslider + Circle ดิฟนี้มาก เล่นมันสุดๆ อย่าชม เดียวลอย :v

Normal

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01:01:786 (1,2) - แก้ Blanket blanket อยู่แล้ว อีกอย่างเหมือน 01:03:500 (1) - ด้วย

แค่นั้นละครับ ขอให้แรงค์ไวๆนะครับ ม็อดยากมากๆๆ
จ๊ะ

Avishay wrote:

Hi.

[General]

1. Add "osu!" as source.
2. If you're aiming to get into the contest then you should probably look into the conditions again:

   Collaborations are not allowed. This is a personal decision; I feel single-creator sets give the most conformity.

   as seen at http://blog.ppy.sh/post/129936251068/ma ... s-sep-2015 last diff is mine

[Nanaka's Hall]

1. 00:11:643 (1,2,3) - The spacing here is rather extreme for no reason, I'd understand gradual change but 0.97x to 2.17x is pretty big I've more spacing cuz changing tempo.
2. 00:21:607 (4,5,1) - Big spacing with the finish would be really really good.
3. 00:28:786 (1,2,1) - Unfitting spacing again, if I may, a suggestion: Stack 2 at the previous 1, then space the other 1 somewhere nicely, I feel like it goes really well with the change in music. i move tail slide a bit.
4. 00:31:143 (2,3,4) - The triplet doesn't go really well into the slider imo.
5. 01:09:500 (5) - I feel like a SV change with holding the note until the blue tick would go really nice with the song. I think it incompatible with other part. cuz this part is jumping.
6. 01:23:214 (5) - Try to do the blanket again, using more than one anchor would help.

[Insane]

1. 00:01:786 (1,1) - The slow SV with the relatively big jump? I don't think it goes really well here.
2. 00:21:928 (1,1,2,3) - Give the pattern some space to breath. I feel triple here.

[Hard]

1. 00:05:643 (2,3,4) - The rhythm is really odd to play, especially on Hard.

Really nice set overall, good luck!
Yay

Sonnyc wrote:

[General]

1. Kiai fountains are way too overused. This is not a recommended way to use kiai sections.
2. Another thing for the kiai, I believe section 01:24:071 - 01:37:786 would've suited a kiai since the music is an intensed version of the previous kiai. I useing kiai in my style like my first map, then i think it's fine.

[Easy]

1. 00:13:786 - The strong change of the music is pretty much ignored due to the slider. http://puu.sh/kIAsT/a0d0ef2602.jpg This rhythm will suit better to make that change clickable.
2. 00:17:214 (1) - 00:20:643 (1) - 00:30:928 (1) - 00:34:357 (1) - 00:37:786 (1) - 00:41:214 (1) - Your combo cycle was too short. Remove NC in these objects. Using new combo sparingly is usually a natural decision to make.
3. 00:23:214 (2,4) - I guess your decision here was a pattern based on ctrl+H, and isn't bad. But since the reverses are in a close distance, I wouldn't stay this is a well organized pattern. Rather using a ctrl+J+G from on the current (4) will make your pattern look better. http://puu.sh/kIAAc/dc8d379321.jpg
4. 00:58:357 (1) - 01:05:214 (1) - 01:08:643 (1) - 01:12:071 (1) - 01:15:500 (1) - 01:18:928 (1) - 01:22:357 (1) - 01:39:500 (1) - 01:42:928 (1) - 01:46:357 (1) - 01:56:643 (1) - 02:00:500 (1) - 02:02:643 (1) - 02:20:643 (1) - 02:24:071 (1) - 02:27:500 (1) - 02:30:928 (1) - 02:34:357 (1) - 02:37:786 (1) - 02:41:214 (1) - 02:44:643 (1) - Other objects where removing NC feels better to make it more sparingly.
5. 01:44:643 (5) - 02:02:214 (5) - Add NC.

[Normal]

1. 00:51:500 (1,2,1,2) - I personally think such 1/2 stack under the slider isn't recommended for this difficulty.
2. 02:32:643 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 02:43:143 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I strongly believe these 1/2 clicks were somewhat overused and doesn't fit your overall difficulty.

[Insane]

1. 00:56:428 (1) - I personally didn't felt this single NC played nice enough.
2. 02:02:107 (4,6) - The pattern was broken in-game due to the stack. You may want to remove this stack.

[Nanaka's Hall]

1. 00:05:428 (2,3,1) - Confusing distance setting compared to the rhythm selection. Starting the new combo from 00:05:857 slightly increases readability.
2. 02:18:714 (5) - Consider NC for a better readability. decided to add at 02:18:500 (4) -

Streliteela wrote:

Hi~Mod from my queue~:D

[General]

1. Audio bitrate is higher than 192kbps, please change the mp3 file to this Maybe not. cuz peppy said about this. you can see link in my previous post in page 1.
2. 'Widescreen support' is not necessary in this map because there's no storyboard files in your map, please cancel this option.
3. About the combo colors: I see you choose 4 custom colors but idk the difference between combo 2&4, they look almost the same. So I think you just need to keep the combo 1&3 colors, or change 2&4 to different colors.

[Nanaka's Hall]

• 
  Well, as this is the highest difficulty, you may change the HP drain rate to 7; 5.5 is too low for a Insane diff. 7 is too high for low bpm song. change to 6.

1. 00:04:143 (3,1,2,3,4) - This little streams looks a bit weird, maybe you can make it more curved like this? I dont need curve here. cuz i fit with other slidekick
   
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2. 00:22:571 (2) - I saw you put a very loud stress to this slider tail (white line), that may decrease the sense of beat. And also you missed a drum sound at 00:22:893 - . So I highly recommend you to change 00:22:357 (1,2,3,4) - , and that looks much better: No, this beat isn't mention streams. then 00:22:893 - isn't have note
   
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3. 00:25:357 (3) - I see you use a note at 00:27:286 (1) - , which has a similar rhythm with 00:25:357 (3,1) - . So why not use the same patterns as well? cuz this part will change tempo of song. i decided to place like this.
   
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4. 00:34:250 - Also miss a note here? No rhythm here
5. 00:35:321 - ^ It's incompatible with song. imo
6. 00:45:500 (4,5) - Just use a 1/2 slider to represent this note & 1/4 slider would be a better way imo because you use it at 00:51:928 (3) - as well XD~Though there's really a slight drum sound at 00:45:607 - , it's too hard for players to hear and notice it. Besides, this part is relatively gentler than the previous parts, so it's ok to ignore some slight drum sound in this part. it's slow part and those rhythm call me to add like that xD
7. 00:56:428 (1) - why nc here? exactly?
8. 01:03:071 (6,7,8,9,1) - Change it to this could be better? No, three note of these 01:03:500 (1,2,3) - have triangle
   
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9. 01:09:500 (5) - Move this slider to x422|y75 to make a better blanket stack down is more flow imo.
10. 01:11:643 (8,9,1) - Move this whole part to x135|y150 for blanket
11. 01:28:786 (6) - Move this to x238|y148 for blanket
12. 01:43:250 - 01:43:678 - 01:44:107 - : I highly recommend you to add 3 notes on these 3 blue ticks, just stack them to 01:43:357 (3,5,7) - these sliders' heads. As the rhythm in this part is very intensive, you'd better not miss these drum sounds on blue ticks. No, there relax part and feelable to play
13. 01:57:607 (5,6) - Here again, a white line stress was put to the slider tail 01:57:821 (6) - , you can add a note at 01:57:607 - , and move 01:57:714 (6,7) - to the red line. Like this: pattern of this part. i used main rhythm at 01:57:607 -
    
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14. 02:18:500 (4) - Why use a note here? There's a obvious drum beat at 02:18:607 - , so it's better to replace it to a 1/4 slider just like 02:18:286 (3,6) - Keep in mind, drum is background beat not main.

[Insane]

1. 00:54:071 (3,4,5,6,7) - Rotate this streams by 20° clockwise would be better imo i keep more curve.
2. 01:01:786 (1,2) - Make them parallel to each other?
3. 01:06:071 (4) - Move it to x125|y200, so 01:04:143 (3,4) - could blanket no, i dont like blanket here.
4. 01:05:428 (2) - Move this slightly to x215|y152, so as to make 01:04:143 (3,2,3) - in a straight line this note blanket at 01:02:643 (3,2) -
5. 01:22:357 (1,2) - This stack is pretty weird because you've already made a series of jumps at 01:21:071 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - , so why not still choose to jump here? Just stack 01:22:571 (2) - with 01:21:928 (6) - and try~ I tired and and it feel good. but i want to break jump at this note. i don't want jump at here
6. 01:59:107 (6,1,2) - Flow is a bit strange here, change the 01:58:678 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - like this to make it smoother
   
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7. 02:01:786 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Also, this stream looks strange too. Move 02:01:786 (1,2,3,4,5) - to x34|y173 to unstack 02:02:107 (4,6) - . It's much easier to read and better to look~:)
8. 02:12:500 (1,1) - Remove these two NCs, as you didn't use NC in the previous part like 02:05:643 (2,3) - change tempo, change parrent. that's why i NC this
9. 02:14:214 (1,1) - ^ ^
10. 02:15:928 (1,1) - ^, and if you want to keep these all NCs, make sure to add NC to previous part as well for consistency. ^
11. 02:32:321 - ahh you miss a note here. So this maybe better: ignore this drum because triple is better.
    
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[Hard]

1. 00:21:607 (4,5,6) - Make it more curved? meh, mirror note
   
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2. 00:31:786 (3,1) - nazi, blanket could be improved~
   
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3. 00:38:000 (1,2) - Better move it to x96|y163, I don't know why these two objects are closer to 00:37:571 (6) - than to 00:38:643 (3) -
4. 00:52:464 - 00:52:678 - Since you didn't ignore the rhythm like 00:50:750 (3,5) - and 00:54:178 (3,5) - , I recommend you to add notes to these blue ticks for consistency
5. 01:05:643 (2) - Move it to x92|y70 for blanket
6. 01:29:107 - Add a note here, just like what you do to 01:25:678 (5) -
7. 01:42:821 - ^
8. 02:29:643 (3,4) - Move these two notes to x168|y276 for stack

[Normal]

• 
  This Normal diff should be improved a lot if you want to rank this map. So I just point out some serious problem:

1. 00:29:643 (2,4) - Blanket could be improved
   
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2. 00:39:286 (3) - Move this x154|y246 could be better for beginners to read
3. 00:39:928 (2) - Well I'm not sure if this is allowed in Normal diff but it really looks weird dont mind.
4. 00:51:500 (1,2,1,2) - These stacks are not allowed in Normal diff now, it may confuse beginners.
5. 01:28:357 (2,3) - Also this one
6. 02:43:143 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is toooooooooooooo hard and not allowed to use in Normal diff LOL

[Easy]

1. 00:23:214 (2,3,4) - Blanket should be improved
2. 02:32:643 (1,2) - Make them parallel to each other?

Okay that's all~
GL~

SrSkyPlayer wrote:

Hello there, m4m as we decided, my map.
General

1. You should remove "nanaka" from tags since it's your own nickname, it's unecessary. I added because I cant find my map when type my name. you can try. Oh wait, It's work for now okay deleted
2. Combo (2) and Combo (4) are the same blue, try to put something different like it.
3. Disable widescreen support since there's no SB justifying it.

Nanaka's Hall

• HP +0.5

1. 00:09:500 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - What you did here was following the little sound with these 1/8 sliders but it wasn't a good choice imo. I mean, you could have been followed the same idea as you were doing before with streams and 1/4 sliders or you can make it again for consistency here 00:11:107 (4,1,2) - imo it would be better.
2. 00:20:643 (1) - ctrl+g?
3. 01:23:214 (5,1) - I think here you could make the slider (5) blanketing with the curve of the slider (1) because the jump before slider (5) is kind of "asking" for something not that difficult to aim, I mean this example here would fits better to this flow you made.
4. 02:12:500 (1) - remove nc. no
5. 02:12:928 (1) - ^ ^
6. 02:14:214 (1) - ^ ^
7. 02:14:643 (1) - ^ ^
8. 02:15:928 (1) - ^ ^
9. 02:16:357 (1) - ^ ^
10. 02:33:286 (5) - this is unrankable because as you can see this note is offscreen, consider put it more to up. Nope not offscreen. cuz i used last grid xD
    
    Nice diff I really liked it.
    Glad to here it :3

Insane

1. 00:22:357 (1,2,3) - You should move them away from it 00:21:928 (1) - This is making it a little bit weird and not polished.
2. 00:23:643 (1) - remove whistle since it's not that good to hear, tbh it feels noisy.
3. 00:33:500 (3,4,5,6) - Could you make this stream with more curve? It would be more smooth and polished as what you are doing and the flow will follow a good movement for players which also will fits to the song better.
4. 00:52:786 (1) - remove nc.
5. 00:56:428 (5) - remove nc.
6. 01:11:857 (9,1) - Make them linear, believe me it would be better.

Normal

1. 00:51:500 (1,2,1,2) - Maybe this stack isn't a good idea for new players, it's really "hard" to read when playing and it barely can be played well when it's sightread. Consider just making them with reverse, just it (as you did before).
2. 02:25:786 (1) - Make this wave properly.
3. 02:32:643 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is too hard for a Normal, consider just putting some 1/2 sliders + circles here.
4. 02:43:143 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^

Easy

• AR +1

1. 00:36:071 (1) - Could you make it with more curve? It would fits more to the flow.
2. 00:56:214 (2) - It's an Easy and you made this slider, you should delete it for help beginners and an easy should just be mapped with 1/1 circles and sliders, consider just putting a simple circle here.

Good luck with it!
Thanks