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Tsukasa - Mirage of the Rain [Osu|Taiko]

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niedz
719 posts
Joined May 2008
Topic Starter
niedz
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 10 sierpnia 2010 at 20:03:19

Artist: Tsukasa
Title: Mirage of the Rain
Source: Touhou
Tags: loweh lunah happy30 sound online nostalgia undefined fantastic object armpits
BPM: 175
Filesize: 4607kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy Happy (2,26 stars, 97 notes)
  2. Hard (4,93 stars, 201 notes)
  3. Lunah's Normal (4,33 stars, 89 notes)
  4. Lunatic (5 stars, 323 notes)
  5. Taiko (5 stars, 422 notes)
Download: Tsukasa - Mirage of the Rain
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Last edited by niedz , edited 33 times in total.
MLGnom
1,365 posts
Joined October 2008
MLGnom
Here you are :3

Download: Combobursts.rar
banvi
1,793 posts
Joined June 2009
banvi
o.o

General
You should make(or get guest's easy diff) less than ☆3 diff.
Normal+
This is ☆5... no longer,this is hard...
HP -1 or 2 & OD -1
00:34:803 (7,8) 1 grid left?(grid lv3)
00:43:203 (6,7,8) 1 grid right?
00:52:632 (1) 1 grid left?
01:31:803 (n) If you don't use this part , delete this timing point
01:31:975 (n) ^
Lunatic
uh... HP -1 (because OD is high)
00:26:232 (4) 1 grid left&1 grid up?
00:35:317 (14) 1 grid right?
01:08:746 (1) 1 grid right&1 grid up?
01:08:917 (2) 1 grid right?
01:19:717 (6) 1 grid down?
01:20:317 (9) 1 grid left?
01:31:889 (13) just my suggestion : change spinner?

nicemap overall~
star & gl :)
La Cataline
osu! Alumni
1,025 posts
Joined March 2010
La Cataline
[Normal+]
01:03:089(7) nc?

[Lunatic]
Combo consistency is strange. I can't see any logic. Recheck it please.
Here's how I would set combos. You are free to ignore this, anyway.
SPOILER
I would place new combos at the following points:
00:10:974
00:13:546
00:16:632
00:19:203
00:23:489
00:24:689
00:27:432
00:30:175
00:32:746
00:35:660
00:38:403
00:41:146
00:43:717
00:46:975
00:49:203
00:51:089
00:52:117
00:55:032
00:57:603

01:00:346
01:03:089
01:05:660
01:08:746
01:09:946
01:12:689
01:15:432
01:18:175
01:20:917
01:23:660
01:26:403
01:28:975

or shorten this combos by 1/2
MMzz
Elite Mapper
3,979 posts
Joined June 2009
MMzz
Requested Taiko Mod :3!

[ TAIKO ]

00:00:000 - 00:10:974: This section right here, I know you tried to match it with the background beat, but I don't think it works to well. T_T Maybe try and match it with the piano instead?
00:21:946 - Make this slider a spinner? :3
00:35:489 - This slider is to close to the up-comming note, the end of a slider mush be a full measure away from the next note. x.x
00:46:975 - Make the kiai start here and end where it already ends.
01:05:832 - Make this slider a spinner, OR, make it a long stream on Dons. (red notes)

All I have to say, very nice relaxing map. Nothing that makes your fingers strain.
Star~
happy30
Featured Artist
2,064 posts
Joined August 2008
happy30
go go make easy diff ;)

combobursts :3

BG :3
fartownik
2,189 posts
Joined December 2008
fartownik
Sorry for the delay :?

[Lunatic]

Your rhythm is static... I'd say VERY static. Never mind if the song changes, you still continue THE SAME rhythm in every pattern. I wanted to check how much pattern like this: 01:31:032 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) you used, and I counted to 20. Diversity is a good thing.

Also I quite don't like how the kiou clap sounds here. This hitsound doesn't fit this song at all, this one is kinda soft-type hitsounds. You didn't put it in Normal, which sounds good.

There are not any severe mistakes, but you should work on hitsounds and diversity of patterns.

[Normal+]

Yeah, it's kinda hard for a normal.

00:49:203 (1,2,3) - Don't use streams in normal.


Other issues:


- The file called "bgglow.jpg" has too high resolution. The maximum size of a SB file is 800x600.

- Taiko kiai is different compared to rest of the difficulties, fix this.

Let's star this.
niedz
719 posts
Joined May 2008
Topic Starter
niedz

fartownik wrote:

Also I quite don't like how the kiou clap sounds here. This hitsound doesn't fit this song at all
listen carefully to the song,in places where i put them you will notice claps in the background
fartownik
2,189 posts
Joined December 2008
fartownik

niedzwiedz1124 wrote:

fartownik wrote:

Also I quite don't like how the kiou clap sounds here. This hitsound doesn't fit this song at all
listen carefully to the song,in places where i put them you will notice claps in the background
yes, the placement is good, but the problem is especially THIS HITSOUND, it doesn't sound good in this song
Lunah_old
Lunah_old
Hi, here my difficulty, i tried to make it easier possible ><

Download: Tsukasa - Mirage of the Rain (niedzwiedz1124) [LoweH's Easy].osu
roflninja
348 posts
Joined October 2009
roflninja
Hi,
everything seemed fine to me, so just a few suggestions

[normal]
00:49:203 (1,2,3) - i wouldnt use a triple in a normal, maybe delete the (2)?

[lunatic]
01:04:975 (9.10,13) - kinda in the hp bar
maybe add a spinner at the end?

nice map
Card N'FoRcE
osu! Alumni
4,058 posts
Here since the beginning
Card N'FoRcE
- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)
  • Come on, "armpits" as a tag? xD
    BGglow.jpg is way too huge. I mean, 1600*1200? O.o
    Please consider resizing it.
    Also, why did you make playwarningarrow.png transparent? I don't see any particular reason for that.
- LoweH's Easy:
  • I think a spinner from 1:07:546 to 1:09:946 is perfect. Consider adding it.
- Normal+:
  • .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    Fine, but this is definitely a Hard, not a Normal+. I mean, if you raise Overall to 6 it could be considered a standard Hard difficulty.
- Lunatic:
  • .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    00:59:660 (9) - New combo please. This will help the player to understand the change from 1/2 to 3/4
- Taiko:
  • .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    You should delete the last beat. It's not intuitive to play. If you look carefully, it's on a blue line and that alone should be a reason.
:>
niedz
719 posts
Joined May 2008
Topic Starter
niedz

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

Come on, "armpits" as a tag? xD

happy30 wrote:

ARMPITS
DONT
REMOVE
pretty self explanatory lol

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

Also, why did you make playwarningarrow.png transparent? I don't see any particular reason for that
because the break is when the bg is black,so i wanted it to be transparent o.o
Last edited by niedz , edited 1 time in total.
Kecco
908 posts
Joined September 2009
Kecco
•Overall•
You need a 3,25- star diff to get it ranked.

•Lunatic•
00:24:689 (1) - New combo? Just for make better the SB effect.
00:24:860 (2) - I suggest to replace this slider with 3 circles placed behind 00:24:689 (1)
00:30:175 (8) - New combo.
00:34:289 (8) - ^
00:41:146 (9) - ^
01:09:946 (6) - New combo? Just for make better the SB effect.
01:28:460 (10) - New combo?
01:31:889 (13) - New combo. Better effect and end.

•Hard•
00:21:946 (Break) - Remove this break, it covers the SB effect moment.
01:28:117 (7) - New combo?

•LoweH's Easy•
00:39:432 (6) - New combo.
00:44:575 (6) - ^
00:54:860 (5) - ^

+Star.
Pokie
osu! Alumni
2,630 posts
Joined December 2009
Pokie
Tsukasaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Mianki
2,701 posts
Joined September 2008
Mianki
Didin't found nothing wrong with it, nice map :P
Star~
rEdo
809 posts
Joined November 2008
rEdo
just awesome. <3
Takuma
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined October 2008
Takuma
k
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
[Overall]

Remove file .osb and full submit.

The files "comboburst-0, comboburst-1 and comboburst-2" are too big. They should be at a maximum of 500x767 pixels.

[Difficulties]

[Easy Happy]

Remove unused Audio Lead-In.

[Lunah's Normal]

Remove unused Audio Lead-In.

[Hard]

Remove unused Audio Lead-In.

[Taiko]

Remove unused Audio Lead-In.

Source is missing on this difficulty. It should be "Touhou".

[Lunatic]

Remove unused Audio Lead-In.

OD9 doesn't fit so much imho with this soft song. Reduce it at least by 1 tick.

00:38:403 (12) - New combo.
00:38:917 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:04:974 (9) - New combo.

Popped for now until you fix all.
niedz
719 posts
Joined May 2008
Topic Starter
niedz
fixed :3
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
Looks great now.

Re-Bubbled~
Alace
osu! Alumni
3,088 posts
Joined August 2008
Alace
bgglow.jpg is too big.plz resize it to 800 x 600
Also you need to recheck the whole SB after resizing and do full upload again

Ok let`s go
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