-SoraGami- wrote:

Waw. Good luck in this one Feru!
another halozy marathon map OwO

Tadayuuki wrote:

I really like this map, good luck !

Satoshi Kazuki wrote:

Hi
Mod Requested From:

Column:1|2|3|4

Mod

00:13:542 - offset seems wrong to me cause i hear multiple sound like - 00:15:102 (15102|2) - try hear with 100% For me it seems good. But i let check it

00:19:554 - add note? dont leave it empty in order to rest player hand
00:19:650 - ^ Dont really like this :/ i keep my
00:27:683 (27683|2) - LN start - 00:27:876 - here and true end are - 00:28:602 - here by using 1/8 snap I'll check this few Times, the beginning is a bit earlyer but the ending you mention is correct so accepted
00:50:521 (50521|3,50521|1,50618|0,50618|2) - kinda hard to combine with this note - 00:50:715 Okay i make them singlenotes.(50715|0,50715|1,50812|2,50812|3,50908|0,50908|1,51005|2,51005|3,51102|1,51102|0,51199|2,51199|3,51296|0,51296|1,51392|2,51392|3) -
^suggestion
00:50:425 (50425|0,50521|1) - ctrl + G
00:50:618 (50618|0) - move to 2 Both accepted

01:04:650 (64650|0,64650|2,64650|1,64650|3,65425|3,65425|2,65425|1,65425|0,65812|1,65812|0,65812|3,65812|2) - not loud enough...just change to triple i keep cuz i think its loud enough, previous i map 3 Chords for Clap, here is Finish. Should be good :3
01:20:328 (80328|3,80328|1,80715|2,80715|0,81102|0,81102|1) - why suddenly double?? just change all of it to single note Okay have change and rearrange a bit
01:40:070 (100070|0) - move to 3 for balance after that 01:40:360 (100360|2,100457|1) - ctrl + G then 01:40:554 (100554|0) - to 3 after that 01:40:650 (100650|2,100747|0) - ctrl + G Was kinda hard to understand but accepted xD
01:58:457 (118457|1,118457|0,118457|2,118457|3) - triple Keep
02:22:070 (142070|1,142070|0,142070|3,142070|2,142457|1,142457|2,142457|0,142457|3,142844|1,142844|0,142844|2,142844|3,143231|0,143231|3,143231|2,143231|1) - ^ First one i keep because finish, the other i change to tripple
02:23:618 (143618|3,143618|0,143618|1) - this are the one should be fourth...i think triple are ok Keep my :3
02:28:457 (148457|1,148650|1,148844|1,149134|1,149328|1,149521|1) - rearrange? Yeah done, thanks!
03:03:489 (183489|3,183489|1,183489|2,183489|0) - triple No keep cuz finish

Good Luck

Rivals_7 wrote:

Hi~ from my queue~
1|2|3|4
03:16:263 (196263|1) - One note is enough i think hmm, double is fine here since this is the quite loud too for calm part :3
03:33:876 (213876|1,213876|3,214070|0,214070|3) - suggest to change. you use the same pattern before - 03:30:779 (210779|1,210779|3,210973|3,210973|0) - ok, rearranged~
03:43:747 (223747|1,223941|0) - col 1|2 respectively rearranged
start from here - 03:53:425 - The pattern is kinda repetitive. suggest to variate them might reconsider, since all these sound are the same, that why i make it same pattern

AlisceaSparku wrote:

Hi Feerum~ :3
From Han & Aliscea's Mania Modding Plaza!

Here's my Mod
|1|2|3|4|

woosh

03:16:263 - 4th slider shift it into either 2 or 3 fits more i think i think is fine here owo
03:32:521 (212521|2) - move to 1, change the look of the notes to differentiate the beat, for same pattern for that sound aswell here is fine
03:38:521 (218521|0,218715|2) - switch columns, ^ ok
03:40:263 (220263|1) - move to the left by 1 column hmm, nope i prefer the current pattern :3
03:40:457 (220457|0) - if ^ applied, move to 3 ^
03:43:166 - missing note? yea, added
03:44:908 (224908|2) - move to 1 the reason why i put some note like this are just to avoid using same pattern always xD
03:47:231 (227231|2,227618|1) - switch columns, for balance rearranged here
03:47:812 - missing note? add at 2 ok
03:48:005 (228005|1) - if ^ applied, move to 4 refix some pattern here
03:48:199 (228199|3,228392|2) - if ^ applied, switch columns ^
03:49:360 (229360|0,229554|1) - switch columns ok

Nice map!
Good luck with your map! Hope these helps...

04:30:392 (270392|0) - to 3?
04:34:166 (274166|0) - ^3? better play
04:37:263 (277263|0) - ^2
04:46:650 (286650|0) - ^4
rearranged all above

NlHIL wrote:

C.Star
03:34:844 (214844|3,214844|0,214844|2) - why 3 notes? opps my bad, removed a note
04:50:715 - add?nope, here already have 3-hit xD

NlHIL wrote:

Feerum
00:28:618 - add a LN? No don't really hear a good sound for a LN
01:00:005 - add? Rearranged and Added
01:06:199 - add No Thanks. No finish for a 4 Chord
01:12:005 - add? Nope, just want to emphasize the Guitar here
01:12:392 (72392|0) - remove? Nice, done
01:15:102 - add? don't really see need for another note here
01:34:844 - 01:35:618 - and ... - add? Nope. I emphasize the clap with the 3 Chord here
02:22:070 (142070|0) - remove Okay..
02:37:070 - add Nice catch.
02:51:102 - add a note as 01:46:070 (106070|1,106070|0,106070|3) oh didn't see that. Thanks

Rivals_7 wrote:

Hi~ from my queue~
1|2|3|4
Sorry if its short mod

[FeruStar's Deconstructed Eternal Full Moon]
Thats too long :v

00:54:005 (54005|2,54296|2,54489|1,54683|3) - Why are you mapping sounds that not even exist?
There's other like this too........ This all have sounds o.o

01:33:102 - suggest to add LN starting from here....... same goes for this - 02:38:134 - No i like this little break before the Kiai begins
02:22:070 (142070|1) - this is literally a same noise like the triples after this. suggest to delete Already done in Mod before.

Good Luck ~

AlisceaSparku wrote:

Hi Feerum~ :3
From Han & Aliscea's Mania Modding Plaza!

Here's my Mod
|1|2|3|4|

woosh

01:04:650 - make 3 notes only, or add a note at 01:06:199 i remove some notes
01:05:425 - ^
01:05:812 - ^ ^ Done
01:12:005 - add a note? No just follow the Guitar here
01:12:392 - remove a note? Already done
01:15:296 (75296|0) - move to 4, more balanced
01:15:489 (75489|3) - if ^ applied, move to 1 Nice, done
01:18:199 - add note at 2, different sound Nice Catch
01:17:037 - remove a note? No, i emphasize the finish
01:26:521 (86521|2,86908|1) - move to the left by one column, to avoid those triple jack Then i would have a triple jack on Col 1. I like how it is, a Little jack before every LN
01:33:683 - remove a note Okay
01:58:457 - ^ ( i suggest putting SVs here xD )
01:58:844 - ^ No. I hate SV's will not add some
02:22:070 - remove, same pitch with 02:22:457 - Done in other mod already
02:38:715 - remove a note Done
02:39:199 - 02:39:489 - columns 1 and 2 are used too much, how about putting some notes somewhere else? Rearranged
02:52:650 - missing note
02:56:521 - ^ Both no. Here you have listen closely what i Map. With the 2 Chords i try to follow the Guitar
02:56:908 - remove a note Noe
02:57:296 - missing note No
02:58:070 - 03:00:392 - wrong pattern? for the 1/1 3 notes remove a note and for the 1/1 2 notes add a note Don't really understand that but it looks right for me

Nice map!
Good luck with your map! Hope these helps...

• [General]
  [list:1337][beatmap file]
  
  SPOILER

  
  SB folder?
  
  [hitsound]
  soft-hitfinish
  
  SPOILER

  
  Break?
  
  [metadate]tag add : Plain Asia
  (=プレインエイジア)

• [Feerum's part]00:27:779 (27779|2) - start to 00:27:876 - . like 02:04:263 (124263|1) -
  
  01:21:489 - 01:23:425 - 01:23:812 - 01:24:199 - 01:24:586 - why double note? In 01:20:328 - 01:20:715 - 01:21:102 - is one note
  01:26:521 - 01:26:908 - 01:27:296 - 01:27:683 - ^
  
  [Critial_Star's part]04:11:473 - …double note?
  
  05:13:650 (313650|2,313747|0,313747|1,313844|3,313844|2) - ctrl+H. avoid double jack

RuberusuScarlet wrote:

ruberusu's BN check

from my BN queue (requester : NlHIL)

good map

|1|2|3|4|

metadate : ok
bg : ok
mp3 : ok
hitsound : ok
beatmap file : not good

• [General]
  [list:1337][beatmap file]
  
  SPOILER

  
  SB folder?
  
  [hitsound]
  soft-hitfinish
  
  SPOILER

  
  Break?
  
  [metadate]tag add : Plain Asia
  (=プレインエイジア)

[FeruStar's Deconstructed Eternal Full Moon]

• [Feerum's part]00:27:779 (27779|2) - start to 00:27:876 - . like 02:04:263 (124263|1) -
  
  01:21:489 - 01:23:425 - 01:23:812 - 01:24:199 - 01:24:586 - why double note? In 01:20:328 - 01:20:715 - 01:21:102 - is one note
  01:26:521 - 01:26:908 - 01:27:296 - 01:27:683 - ^
  
  [Critial_Star's part]04:11:473 - …double note?
  
  05:13:650 (313650|2,313747|0,313747|1,313844|3,313844|2) - ctrl+H. avoid double jack

that's all

if ready for bubble, please call me

DE-CADE wrote:

01:17:037 (77037|2,77425|3,77812|0,78199|1,78199|2) - Better improve this pattern, somehow it's off from music ;Suggestion http://puu.sh/kdmFY/3ddc652700.png yeah looks really good. Changed

02:51:102 (171102|0,171199|1,171296|0,171344|1) - Try something else http://puu.sh/kdmVH/32dbda3649.jpg Haaai! Done!

DE-CADE wrote:

03:37:554 - Add Note oh, nice catch here :3
03:40:650 - ^ ^
03:41:618 - ^ ^
03:49:941 - ^^

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

Hi Feerum :3
BN Check

Metadata, audio, timing, bg is fine !~

[FeruStar's]
HP OD 8

00:12:779 (12779|0) - move to 4
00:25:941 (25941|3) - end here 00:27:876 -
00:27:876 (27876|2) - move to 2
00:29:037 (29037|2) - move to 4

very good diff

call me after update

Feerum wrote:

Feerum wrote:

Feerum wrote:

- Bad Apple - wrote:

CONGRATS!

Feerum wrote:

I Love you Shanaaaaaa!!!!!

THANK YOU!!!!


C_STAR! WE DID IT!!!!

- Bad Apple - wrote:

CONGRATS!

Okoratu wrote:

sorry not sorry

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

another Halozy's map by Feerum \:D/
congratz >w<

Kyousuke- wrote:

Nice job feerum~
Pls map more <3 i love all ur maps lmao

Spy wrote:

Congrats !

Niroe wrote:

Holy moly, boiz, it's coming, one of the best mania map i played so far is being ranked in few hours

Congrats Feerum and Critical_Star

Niroe wrote:

Holy moly, boiz, it's coming, one of the best mania map i played so far is being ranked in few hours

Congrats Feerum and Critical_Star