qzy wrote:

yo

Vaportrap:

00:05:289 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3) - This pattern here is pretty ridiculously hard to pull off, even after multiple attempts, especially compared to the rest of the song. I would suggest making these jumps a little smaller and neater. made it a little smaller (i guess). i hope i made it better.
00:07:860 (2,3,1) - Same thing here, except less severe in difficulty. placed it in a lil bit easier place i guess?
00:09:489 (1) - This slider feels a little out of place, I would suggest replacing it with a 10th note on the previous color combo and either leaving the "Yo Skrill drop it hard" part empty, or adding some more hitcircles/sliders to coincide with the lyrics. replaced it with a 10th note for the stream, done
00:11:710 (1) - This needs a note before it to actually coincide with the start of the "vaporwave" section as it kind of sounds awkward as it is. added a slider to spice that up

Really REALLY needs hitsounding, especially the 2nd half of the song, good luck. ill do the hitsounding later

1. Timing pertama BPM 175 Offset -7, Timing kedua BPM 82 Offset 10964, kalo ganti timing jangan lupa di resnapped notes nya, nanti jadinya kaya gini -_- http://puu.sh/ks56w/146cc8f34f.png

1. 00:00:834 - Bagian awalnya masih bisa dimap kok soalnya masih agak audible audionya
2. 00:05:993 (4,5) - Bisa dijadiin circle deh soalnya agak aneh pas dipencet, smt like http://puu.sh/ks4Ur/ec5eadb2c8.jpg or else
3. 00:28:524 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Bentuk bintangnya bisa dirapihin lagi ;(

Mako Sakata wrote:

ini pasti kerjaan Niva deh WKWK
[General]

1. Timing pertama BPM 175 Offset -7, Timing kedua BPM 82 Offset 10964, kalo ganti timing jangan lupa di resnapped notes nya, nanti jadinya kaya gini -_- http://puu.sh/ks56w/146cc8f34f.png changed. waiting for Kuki's

[VaporInsane]

1. 00:00:834 - Bagian awalnya masih bisa dimap kok soalnya masih agak audible audionya mapped a lil something
2. 00:05:993 (4,5) - Bisa dijadiin circle deh soalnya agak aneh pas dipencet, smt like http://puu.sh/ks4Ur/ec5eadb2c8.jpg or else gw ganti agak2 jump zigzag gitu done
3. 00:28:524 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Bentuk bintangnya bisa dirapihin lagi ;( iya ini kurang bagus gitu, cuma lagi ga ada ide o<< nanti pengen ganti

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[ddddddddddddd] is only test diff, don't mod

[ Rizen ] wrote:

shouldn't fort's diff be named "Fort's Hard"? he wanted it to be only Hard, his choice

also add "kuki bearzizm" to tags (GD names must be in tags) done, also added dubstep on tags

soundclown or soundcloud? o.o yes its meant to be soundclown instead of soundcloud. knowyourmeme.com/memes/subcultures/soundclown

in easy,
NC at 00:05:478 (1) -
remove NC at 00:06:850 (3) -
00:13:890 (1) - NC
00:19:744 (3) - NC
00:25:598 (1) - NC
00:28:524 (1) - NC
this is to follow NC every 1 measure rule (u can do every 2 measures instead if u want) all done

no kds (even though this isn't kd worthy)

1. Ada kemungkinan hitsound delay >5ms di soft-hitfinish10.wav dan soft-hitclap.wav, menurut ranking criteria itu unrankable
2. Hm beda density antara Normal -> Hard jauh bgt gapnya, di bagian skrillex ritme yang dipake Hard lumayan kompleks 1/2 beat sama 1/4
3. Regarding the timing, you can ask experince people to recheck, but the current afaik is fine

1. 00:02:735 (1,2,3) - Berasa aneh gerak mousenya, baru mulai udah harus belok tajem. Mungkin bisa dicoba (1) rotate 30 drajat terus (3) rotate -45 drajat, kaya gini mungkin bagus http://puu.sh/l56ao/cafe46ca20.jpg atau mungkin yang lainnya?
2. 00:16:817 (1) - Bagian awal slidernya kalo pake finish malah agak aneh, mungkin baiknnya gausah pake finish
3. 00:19:744 - and 00:21:207 - worth to be add whistle, as the piano sound kinda stronger there
4. 00:31:451 (1) - Tambah finish? kayanya di normal sama insane ada finishnya deh
5. Try to add more hitsound? as I hear it sounded too plain

1. 00:19:744 - and 00:21:207 - worth to be add whistle, as the piano sound kinda stronger there
2. 00:27:061 (1) - No need to be nc
3. 00:31:451 (1) - Add finish on spinner?
4. Try to add more hitsound? as I hear it sounded too plain

1. 00:02:735 (1,2) - Agak aneh ritmenya, untuk yang itu mungkin ritmenya bisa kaya gini 00:02:735 (1,2,3) - biar sama kaya 00:05:478 (1,2,3) - ?
2. 00:03:935 (3,4,5) - Kalo ngikutin yang di atas, mungkin yang 00:03:935 (3,4,5) - bisa disederhanain ritmenya kaya http://puu.sh/l57mS/590438b5c4.jpg
3. 00:06:850 (1,2,3) - Yang ini juga bisa disederhanain http://puu.sh/l57mS/590438b5c4.jpg
4. Btw untuk part skrillex, spacing 1,6x kayanya agak kurang bagus soalnya ada overlap yang nanggung bgt, contohnya ini http://puu.sh/l57vS/026115578e.jpg. Mungkin pake spacing 1,8x bakal lebih rapih, contoh http://puu.sh/l57xF/c37544cecf.jpg
5. Try to add more hitsound? as I hear it sounded too plain

1. 00:19:744 - and 00:21:207 - worth to be add whistle, as the piano sound kinda stronger there
2. 00:22:671 (1,2) - Anti jumpnya aneh pas gerak ke (2), coba pindah (2) nya agak jauh atau coba buat (1) nya stack bareng (2)
3. Try to add more hitsound? as I hear it sounded too plain

1. Maybe you should rename the diff into Insane instead of Insanewave, as its not the highest diff anymore :p
2. 00:01:707 (2,3) - The movement so weird on them, because the placement of (3). Maybe a placement like this can improve the flow http://puu.sh/l58kq/afe9408423.jpg?
3. 00:03:421 (4) - Maybe move that a bit more far to x:208 y:56? The anti jump on 00:03:250 (3,4,5) - not played well imo, because we have to sudden jump on 00:03:593 (5,6) -
4. 00:04:450 (2,3) - Somewhat same as 00:01:707 (2,3) -
5. Try to add more hitsound? as I hear it sounded too plain

Mako Sakata wrote:

Hallooo hai mako, tiga!

[General]

1. Ada kemungkinan hitsound delay >5ms di soft-hitfinish10.wav dan soft-hitclap.wav, menurut ranking criteria itu unrankable hmm, gw liat2 dulu fixed it i guess
2. Hm beda density antara Normal -> Hard jauh bgt gapnya, di bagian skrillex ritme yang dipake Hard lumayan kompleks 1/2 beat sama 1/4 gw coba ngmg ke fort tentang ini deh
3. Regarding the timing, you can ask experince people to recheck, but the current afaik is fine qzy, Bearizm and I talked about this, and i asked Bakari for further guidement and fixed it to -37 and second offset to 10989

[Easy]

1. 00:02:735 (1,2,3) - Berasa aneh gerak mousenya, baru mulai udah harus belok tajem. Mungkin bisa dicoba (1) rotate 30 drajat terus (3) rotate -45 drajat, kaya gini mungkin bagus http://puu.sh/l56ao/cafe46ca20.jpg atau mungkin yang lainnya? changed!
2. 00:16:817 (1) - Bagian awal slidernya kalo pake finish malah agak aneh, mungkin baiknnya gausah pake finish changed
3. 00:19:744 - and 00:21:207 - worth to be add whistle, as the piano sound kinda stronger there yup, changed
4. 00:31:451 (1) - Tambah finish? kayanya di normal sama insane ada finishnya deh kelupaan, added x)
5. Try to add more hitsound? as I hear it sounded too plain will try

[qzy's Easy]

1. 00:19:744 - and 00:21:207 - worth to be add whistle, as the piano sound kinda stronger there
2. 00:27:061 (1) - No need to be nc
3. 00:31:451 (1) - Add finish on spinner?
4. Try to add more hitsound? as I hear it sounded too plain

[Normal]

1. 00:02:735 (1,2) - Agak aneh ritmenya, untuk yang itu mungkin ritmenya bisa kaya gini 00:02:735 (1,2,3) - biar sama kaya 00:05:478 (1,2,3) - ? gw keep dulu deh kayanya, sepertinya udah pas menurut gw
2. 00:03:935 (3,4,5) - Kalo ngikutin yang di atas, mungkin yang 00:03:935 (3,4,5) - bisa disederhanain ritmenya kaya http://puu.sh/l57mS/590438b5c4.jpg
3. 00:06:850 (1,2,3) - Yang ini juga bisa disederhanain http://puu.sh/l57mS/590438b5c4.jpg
4. Btw untuk part skrillex, spacing 1,6x kayanya agak kurang bagus soalnya ada overlap yang nanggung bgt, contohnya ini http://puu.sh/l57vS/026115578e.jpg. Mungkin pake spacing 1,8x bakal lebih rapih, contoh http://puu.sh/l57xF/c37544cecf.jpg it does look better with x1.8, fixed
5. Try to add more hitsound? as I hear it sounded too plain

[Insane]

1. 00:19:744 - and 00:21:207 - worth to be add whistle, as the piano sound kinda stronger there mhm
2. 00:22:671 (1,2) - Anti jumpnya aneh pas gerak ke (2), coba pindah (2) nya agak jauh atau coba buat (1) nya stack bareng (2) fixed
3. Try to add more hitsound? as I hear it sounded too plain

[Kuki's Insanewave]

1. Maybe you should rename the diff into Insane instead of Insanewave, as its not the highest diff anymore :p
2. 00:01:707 (2,3) - The movement so weird on them, because the placement of (3). Maybe a placement like this can improve the flow http://puu.sh/l58kq/afe9408423.jpg?
3. 00:03:421 (4) - Maybe move that a bit more far to x:208 y:56? The anti jump on 00:03:250 (3,4,5) - not played well imo, because we have to sudden jump on 00:03:593 (5,6) -
4. 00:04:450 (2,3) - Somewhat same as 00:01:707 (2,3) -
5. Try to add more hitsound? as I hear it sounded too plain

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Semoga membantu, good luck awoken!

Vialle wrote:

Hello! heya

Insane

00:08:221 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make a bounce for the flow. Ex: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3898306 think im going to keep it for a while

Hard

00:08:907 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Are you sure with stream on a hard?
00:32:183 (2,3) - Make them a little closer

Easy

00:02:735 - What's with the low volume? i pretty much screwed something here, fixed

Short mod for short map. Thanks for the involvement, though.

Mako Sakata wrote:

[qzy's Easy]

1. 00:19:744 - and 00:21:207 - worth to be add whistle, as the piano sound kinda stronger there I think whistle isn't really a good choice for this the first suggestion but I did add it at 00:21:207.
2. 00:27:061 (1) - No need to be nc Good catch, done.
3. 00:31:451 (1) - Add finish on spinner? Done.
4. Try to add more hitsound? as I hear it sounded too plain Done, actually.