YGOkid8 wrote:

Jordan Trudgett? On osu!? You'd think he'd sue for giving a song he made away for free, but meh

YGOkid8 wrote:

Jordan Trudgett? On osu!? You'd think he'd sue for giving a song he made away for free, but meh

Nivalis wrote:

Yes, I really don't know that Jordan Trudgett is on osu!...

Nivalis wrote:

Ardentryst is a fully freeware game, so I think it's fine to map this song

Nivalis wrote:

I shocked, truly
HP drain rate 8, small circle size, Overall difficulty 9...
Shuna's Insane is much harder now

YGOkid8 wrote:

Jordan Trudgett? On osu!? You'd think he'd sue for giving a song he made away for free, but meh

dksslqj wrote:

[Easy]
00:32:778 (2) - remove newcombo OK

[Normal]
00:10:601 (1) - distance check Checked, and nothing is wrong.

[Hard]
00:19:741 (9) - add new combo OK
01:05:754 (8) - △ OK
01:09:351 (8) - △ OK
01:58:544 (9) - △ OK

[Shuna's Insane]
ovarall -1
cricle cize -1
Actually it's Arusha Shuna's decision to put OD to 9... About the circle size, it's gradually decreasing from Easy to Insane, so I see circle size -1 is unneeded.
00:24:986 (6) - △ Because this is only a new-combo mod, I decide to do it myself... OK

Sallad4ever wrote:

Apa kabar?

Jordan Trudgett play osu!
That my friend, is very surprising

[General]
Sama kan seluruh offset di semua diff, sekarang ini easy cuma punya 4 offset, sedangkan yg lain punya 5, trus offset ke 2 masing2 diff berbeda. p-pokoknya di samain aja offsetnya
Offset ke-2 disamain, Easy memang cuma punya 4 offset karena bagian yang 98 BPM-nya isinya break, jadi nggak perlu offset baru

[Easy]
00:25:586 (3) - jadiin curve slider, supaya konsisten dg note yg sbelumnya (nazi dikit) OK
02:01:552 (5) - hilangin whistle dari "slidernya" OK

[Normal]
Menurutku diff ini masih agak kurang hitsound nya, tambah lagi?atau kalau mau biar wa yg nambahin? Tambah whistle
00:08:203 (2) - unstack? (apa bahasa indonesianya?) Kalau di-unstack, bingung mau ditempatin di mana... Untuk sementara belum diganti dulu
00:24:986 (1,2,3) - ^ OK
01:10:588 (2) - putar repeatnya jgn ke note setelahnya OK

[Hard]
Bagus

[Shuna's Insane]
ehh...kurangin cricle size nya 1 tick?
Nice
Hmm... circle size ini makin mengecil per diff, masih bingung memang mau dikurangin atau nggak
Untuk sementara circle sizenya masih sama, biar Arusha Shuna yang memutuskan

Jordan Trudgett main osu itu betul2 mengejutkan, kalo timingnya masih bingung mungkin minta bantuannya aja
Lagu yg sgt menenangkan Iya... Lagu ini offsetnya aneh memang
Star~

Arusha Shuna wrote:

koq kayaknya pada benci CS4 ya? :/

SPOILER

SPOILER

• • "speedwarning.png" contains unnecessary trasparency
  • Volume: 6
  • 00:01:610 (red timing section) - Offset: 1640 (resnap all notes)

• • 02:01:852 (4) - Move this slider here 02:01:935

• • Overall Difficulty: 7
  • Circle Size: Normal

xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
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[General]

• • "speedwarning.png" contains unnecessary trasparency
  • Volume: 6 I changed into 7 instead... There are some timing points where I used volume 6
  • 00:01:610 (red timing section) - Offset: 1640 (resnap all notes)[/color] Done. Much, much better now

[Normal]

• • 02:01:852 (4) - Move this slider here 02:01:935 Moved

[Shuna's Insane]

• • Overall Difficulty: 7
  • Circle Size: Normal Hmm... This complaint again. I will ask Arusha Shuna about the circle size, then.

Mafiamaster wrote:

[All difficulties]
Generally two timing sections shouldn't be right on top of each other so delete the inherited timing section at 02:07:510 and halve the uninherited timing section to 40.00 Fixed

[Easy]
02:01:935 - Remove this timing section, there's no use for it since you've added a break. Removed
02:01:552 (5) - Shorten by a 1/4 tick so it ends on the blue tick at 02:02:601. Done

[Normal]
02:01:935 - The timing section here is different from [Easy] Because the timing on Easy is deleted, I made the timing section on Normal, Hard, and Shuna's Insane same

[Hard]
02:10:510 (1) - Remove the finish from this spinner. Removed

[Arusha]
02:01:852 - Shouldn't the uninherited timing section be started here like it is with the other difficulties? Fixed (it's just a timing problem so I decide to do it myself)

VanMoNky wrote:

[General]
1. I just want you to lower the volume down 50% if possible. This is a relaxing song, don't use the volume too high. The first time I mapped this, I used low volume, and YGOkid8 said it's too quiet. Leaved in 70%.
2. Finish hitsound doesn't fit at all in this song. Removed (except some finishes with quieter volume)
3. The offset on 02:01:852 feels too late. Yes, but I can't find the correct offset. Leaved as is.

[Easy]
01:36:378 (2) - This note doesn't stacked properly. Done
02:01:552 (5) - Reduce this one 1/4 tick, then move it forward 1/2 tick. Uhh... added a repeating slider instead
02:10:885 (1) - Can you silence this using custom hitsound? Done

[Normal]
00:18:123 (3,1) - They aren't stacked properly. Done
00:23:817 (5,6) - ^ Done
00:41:200 (3) - Extend it one 1/4 tick, then reduce 2 repeats. Done
02:05:930 (4) - Move forward one 1/4 tick. Done
02:10:885 (1) - Can you silence this using custom hitsound? Done

[Hard]
00:09:731 (2,3) - They are not stacked properly. Done
00:16:924 (2) - Bad jump placement. Done
00:40:301 (4,5) - Move one tick up. Done
01:05:958 (2,3,4,5,1) - The spacing's confusing. I had no idea how to change this
02:05:930 (4) - Delete this. Done
02:10:885 (1) - Can you silence this using custom hitsound? Done

[Shuna's Insane]
-- Don't use whistle on sliderslide. It sounds weird. Waiting for Arusha Shuna's response

00:46:744 (6) - Remove this. Overmapped. Waiting for Arusha Shuna's response
01:18:096 (3) - Unstacked. Waiting for Arusha Shuna's response
02:10:885 (1) - Can you silence this using custom hitsound? Done
Star.

Nivalis wrote:

This beatmap is dedicated to Jordan Trudgett herself. I don't know that she is on osu! these days

1. 02:02:413 (5) - This slider bothers me. It starts too early. Maybe start it at red (02:02:571) tick?

Real1 wrote:

[Shuna's Insane]

1. 02:02:413 (5) - This slider bothers me. It starts too early. Maybe start it at red (02:02:571) tick?k

VanMoNky wrote:

[Shuna's Insane]
-- Don't use whistle on sliderslide. It sounds weird. YOU PEOPLE ARE MEAN ;_;

00:46:744 (6) - Remove this. Overmapped. k
01:18:096 (3) - Unstacked. k
02:10:885 (1) - Can you silence this using custom hitsound?[/notice]
Star.

Frill wrote:

[Easy]

01:17:174 (1) - add whistle in end Done
01:42:371 (1) - add whistle in start Finish is better
01:45:968 (4) - add whistle in end Done
01:47:166 (5) - remove whistle Lowered volume

[Hard]

00:23:800 (6) - new combo? Done

Death_the_kid wrote:

[Easy]

Fine.

[Normal]

00:23:800 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - Messy

[Hard]

00:03:571 (4) - Maybe NC here? OK
00:25:599 (7) - Ugly Remapped this part
01:28:885 (1) - Remove NC Done
01:30:683 (1) - ^ I think it's 01:30:083 (1)... 01:30:086 should have a NC
01:34:879 (6) - NC Done
01:49:264 (5) - ^ Done, also changed a slider there

[Shuna's Insane]

Fine.[/color]

Star~

Eirene wrote:

seems pretty good... just few remarks about hitsounds

[Insane] :
Waiting for Arusha Shuna's response

[Hard] :
parts without hitsounds are really odd *.* Tweaked hitsounds
00:42:706 (2) - remove the whitsle ? I prefer with whistle in it
01:05:785 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - I feel it's not very clear... I had to look in the editor to understand the pattern No, I like that pattern
01:34:879 (1) - finish at the end Done
01:42:371 (1) - finish Done
01:49:564 (2) - ^ Done

[Normal] :
00:05:818 (2) - remove whistle ? I prefer with whistle in it
00:13:011 (2) - ^ ^
00:42:706 (2) - ^ ^
01:18:672 (2) - add whistle Done
01:30:683 (2) - whistle on 3 instead ? Done
01:42:371 (1) - finish Done
01:55:258 (1) - whistle on 4 instead ? I fixed most of that part's hitsounds

[Easy] :
01:27:986 (2) - finish ? Done
01:42:371 (1) - ^ Eh... There's already a finish there
01:48:965 (1) - ^ Done

Eirene wrote:

seems pretty good... just few remarks about hitsounds

[Insane] :
00:03:421 (7) - try a bit more curved like this :
ATTACH[mod3.jpg]
00:20:803 (3) - whistle at the begining
00:39:409 (4) - remove whistle at the end
00:42:706 (10) - ^
00:43:605 (11) - whistle at the begining and at the end
01:01:589 (8) - whistle at the begining
01:49:564 (4) - finish here o.o
01:54:659 (6) - whistle at the begining

banvi wrote:

Hello

mod
All diff
01:42:371 uh... I think kiai don't fit and weird such like silent song. Use moment kiai?(01:42:371~01:42:521 & 01:49:564~01:49:714 ) Yes, thanks for this!
Easy
00:11:213 (5) 1 grid up?(composed with (1).)(grid lv3) Done
00:13:611 (2) 1 grid up? Done
Normal
00:10:014 (4) nazi: 1 grid down & 1 grid left? Repatterning that part
00:10:314 (5) nazi: 2 grid down & 2 grid left? ^
01:52:561 (2) nazi: 1 grid right? Fixed
01:53:160 (4) nazi: 1 grid up? Fixed
01:54:959 (4,1,2) ^ Nothing wrong with the spacing...
Hard
00:35:813 (6,1) move vertical center? (but I think this is intentional) Fixed
01:45:968 (1,1,1) uh... make these all one combo? Done
Shuna's
Nazi modding... I decide to fix these myself, but if Arusha Shuna wants to change it too, just change it Shuna
00:04:952 (8) nazi: 1 grid down & 1 grid left? Done
00:36:412 (2) nazi: 1 grid up? No, the current position seems better
01:18:081 (3,4,5) ^ Also this, if you see the spacing from 01:18:980 (5) to (6) the current spacing seems to be correct

nicemap~
star & gl

CXu wrote:

Hya :p Hi

i'm fine with both Easy, Normal and Insane. They felt fine during my playthrough, and that should be enough imo ^^"

[Hard] - Generally I think it has a bit too many streams >.< Reduced stream
For me I think the distance snap is a bit low, but well, not sure if you want to remap the whole thing due to that ^_^"
00:42:406 (1,2,3) - Didn't like this jump. I didn't combobreak, or get 100's or anything, but I still think it feels kinda out of place. Maybe make it smaller?
01:02:189 (6,7,8) - You might want to somehow get the tone/note/whatever you want to call it at 01:02:638? I've tried it, and it ruins the notes' position, so I don't change it
01:05:785 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe you should make these notes in the middle of the playfield, then use the rotate-by and rotate the notes in that angle? I think it'll look neater.
01:17:473 (1) - Uneccesary and out of place imo. I have no idea how to change this
01:23:917 (2) - I think this part should be to the usual speed, and have the slowdown at 01:24:346 No, I prefer the current one
01:31:582 (1,2,3,4) - Silence the sliderticks?
01:55:858 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Can't get this parts rythm and stuff.
02:01:954 (1) - This is really out there :p Move it a bit closer in the playfield?


Well, I generally like the map, and it's not all thaaat bad up there^, so here's a star

Nivalis wrote:

CXu wrote:

Hya :p Hi

[Hard] - Generally I think it has a bit too many streams >.< Reduced stream
01:17:473 (1) - Uneccesary and out of place imo. I have no idea how to change this

Thanks CXu! Others are fixed.

Nivalis wrote:

Hi YGOkid8! Ah... I remember the first time you mod this. This map was very, very flawed. Now it has gotten this far (+22 priority since your first post)

Yes. If you've played the game, you'll see her photo on the credits screen (or the about screen, I forgot)