Leorda wrote:

SPOILER

Apa kabar!! Baik!!

[General]
The 3rd and 4th Combo color it's looks similar, maybe try the other color? Changed color for every diff

[Storyboard]
How about the 2x speed warning place in the cloud? Unchanged, because if placed so it will be overlapped by some notes (example:01:17:500 (1))


[Easy]
00:29:195 (1) - Cut short this spinner to 00:30:395 Done
00:33:996 (3) - Maybe try move backward to blue tick and add 1 repeating slider? Not changed... I like the old version more
00:36:996 (1,2,3,4) - The stack at the middle is not looks right, please stack it to make it perfect Done
01:26:501 (1) - Don't place near spinner at timing, since this is a easy diff, it would be difficult to begginer player Deleted the 1st slider, moved the 2nd slider earlier and added a repeat

[Normal]
00:33:096 (x) - Maybe try add note here? Added
01:42:702 (2) - This is looks ugly, use bezier pls Fixed slider. Although it's not 100% bezier, it's smoother now.
02:03:555 (1) - This slider is unsnapped, snap it to the blue tick Snapped
02:07:530 (1) - This slider is unsnapped too, please snap to the white tick Snapped

[Neo-Hard]
00:21:544 (15) - Please move the new combo to 00:21:694 (1) New combo moved
00:29:495 (1) - Cut short to the 00:30:395 Done
00:42:397 (1,2,3) - An evil jumps, try make it closer Noooooooooo, it's my favorite jump
01:19:300 (B) - This breaks are too short, remove it? Removed
01:40:902 (B) - ^ Removed
02:02:053 (x) - Add note here? Added
02:10:510 (1) - Extend this spinner to 02:15:010 No, it's timing is already correct.

[Shuna's Insane]
00:38:796 (3,4,5) - Maybe try reverse those 3 slider to make nice pattern?
00:41:196 (6) - Too far between these two
02:10:885 (1) - Silence this spinner please
Waiting for Arusha Shuna's response.

Not bad
STAR

Nivalis wrote:

Mutsui: The break is too short

[attachment=0:df6ec]break.jpg[/attachment:df6ec]

Thanks very much for the mods. And, because this map isn't in progress anymore, I decide to move it back to pending.

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
BPM:100 Offset:1610 That's it! That's why the timing sounds wierd in the kiai time! Thanks so much, fixed
remove .osb file and re-full submit it. Done.

[Easy]
HP Drain Rate:3, Overall Diff:3, I know it's easy, but not in this way. and, 1/4 in a [Easy] is kind of weird. The HP drain rate is actually 2 And most of the map is actually mapped in 1/2, I use 1/4 only for tricking some sliders such as 01:13:010 (2)
01:37:302 (4) - make it a 1/2 x 3 slider. Done, also moved 01:38:810 (5) for spacing purpose
02:01:604 (5) - remove whistle in the slider Done
02:10:885 (1) - not snapped. Snapped

[Normal]
00:06:393 (3,1) - spacing Fixed
00:13:594 (3,1) - spacing? Fixed
00:20:194 (2,1) - spacing? Fixed
00:39:396 (7) - new combo? Done
00:59:798 (3) - 2 grid up and 2 grid right. Unfortunately that's how I trick the spacing... Can't think of any better place
01:38:802 (1,2,1) - spacing? Not changed
01:40:602 (3) - break after this note is too short, remove the break Removed
01:44:502 (1) - remove whistle Removed
01:53:204 (4,1,2) - spacing? Nothing wrong with this spacing actually... I've checked it
01:55:303 (1) - remove whistle Removed

[Neo-Hard]
00:11:493 (7,1) - spacing? Fixed
00:25:595 (12) - i don't like this slider. What's wrong with 1.5 tick slider? Seems fine for me.
00:32:496 (4) - ^ ^
00:57:698 (1) - ^ ^
01:11:199 (1) - too sudden Edited storyboard so it wouldn't be that sudden
01:22:901 (10) - new combo? Done
01:23:951 (1) - remove new combo Done
01:27:701 (3,1) and parts after this - i suggest use new combo on long white lines. On "red lines" seems better
01:42:702 (2,3) - let (2) ends at 01:43:902 and remove (3) Done
01:55:902 (1) - i don't like this slider. Unchanged
02:10:510 (1) - not snapped (unless it is snapped to 1/8... but any need to do so?) Snapped

[Shuna's Insane]
this diff has a different timing (more red timing sections), make all diff's timing the same plz.
remove whistle on the sliders.
00:57:098 (7) - break after this note is too short, remove the break
that's all. Shuna's work is great.

Matma Rex wrote:

Sorry for the delay D:

[General]
When changing volume with timing sections, place them 1/4 before the first affected note - if you don't do it, player clicking the note too early will get wrong sound. Fix it in all difficulties and all places, please.
Correct offset for 2nd red section (BPM 95) is 123562.
(all except Insane) 02:10:885 (1) - align the end with white tick, or make it longer as in Insane. Made it longer

[Easy]
00:01:610 (1), 00:25:610 (3), 00:35:210 (1), 00:58:010 (1), 01:17:210 (1), 01:26:810 (1), 01:38:810 (5), 01:42:410 (1,2,3,4), 02:01:610 (5) - please, make these sliders nice and curved. Linear sliders do not fit the mood of the song D:
00:28:610 (3,1) - I would delete (3), place spinner at 00:28:610 and make it 1/1 longer.
00:31:310 (1,2) - that is confusing and doesn't fit music that good. Delete these two altogether and place a single note at 00:32:210?
00:34:010 (3) - two times longer and only one repeat, please.
00:37:010 (1) - it's not perfectly horizontal.
00:58:010 (1) - doesn't fit well. Start 1/2 later, make it 1/2 shorter.
01:11:810 (1,2,3) - this might be a little confusing for beginners. Unstack?
01:37:310 (4,5) - make them not overlap.
02:07:510 (1) - I don't really think that the 0.5x section is needed here. No, I'll keep the 0.5x.

[Normal]
01:42:410 - remove the red section.
Linear sliders do not fit the mood of the song. I'm not gonna point all these sliders here out, find them by yourself.
00:10:310 (5,1,2,1) - spacing.
00:17:210 (1,2,3,4,1) - it looks really ugly when playing. Unstack. Unchanged, because I see no problem with this one.
00:23:810 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
00:31:010 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - why not aligned with center? Also ^ Yes for this one.
00:42:410 (1,2,3) - I'm sure sure if jumps are a good idea for Normal.
01:01:010 (1,2,3,4) - spacing (that doesn't look intentional, I missed here).
01:20:510 (1) - that slider is weirdly shaped.
01:42:702 (2) - so ugly D: Unchanged
01:47:202 (2,1) - spacing.
01:52:302 (1,2,3,4) - spacing.
02:07:510 (1) - I don't really think that the 0.5x section is needed here. No, I'll keep the 0.5x.

Will mod the rest later.

Matma Rex wrote:

I was gonna edit the other post, but since Arusha posted, I'll make a new one
Finally I had enough time to do this mod

The timing isn't perfect. I'm not a pro myself, but I got BPM 100.10, offset 1673 for the first one. I also think there's one more section: BPM 98, offset 121935. After doing these changes in all difficulties, resnap all notes and recalculate slider lengths ("Timing" dropdown menu). Ah I got it! The offset is still 1610 for the first part, but it changed +63ms after the break. It's perfect now

[Neo-Hard]
Why do all sections use custom overrides? There are none is the folder. The custom override is soft-sliderslide.
Is it a guest diff or does it just have stupid name? Changed into Hard.
00:09:110 (1,2,3) - stack nicely (turn off grid snap). Stacked.
00:19:310 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3,4) - that part doesn't play well. It plays well for me
00:25:610 (12) - silence the sliderticks? (just use empty wav file) This is intentional.
00:28:760 (4,5,6,7) - doesn't fit. Remove and make next spinner start at 00:28:910? Fixed
00:32:510 (4) - silence the sliderticks? Intentional
00:37:910 (1,2,3) - spacing. (if it's jump, it's extremely counter-intuitive) Actually it's a jump... Fixed
00:57:710 (1) - silence the sliderticks? Intentional
00:59:810 (1) - ugly. Fixed
01:05:810 (8,9,10,11,12,1) - spacing / unintuitive jumps. Basically it's 0.8 to 1.2 to 1.6. Not changed
01:11:210 (1) - this speedup totally doesn't fit the song. Kill it! Also, if you really want to keep it, place the storyboard warning where Leorda said. Killed.
01:17:510 (1) - ^ Not sure whether to kill this or not... Unchanged for now
01:31:610 (1,2,3,4) - ^ it seriously sucks.Also these are unequally spaced. ^
01:50:810 (1) - ^ Killed.
01:52:910 (1,2) - spacing (don't trust distance snap, it goes crazy on 2x/0.5x sections) A jump.
01:55:910 (1) - silence the sliderticks? Intentional.

[Shuna's Insane]
Why do all sections use custom overrides? There are none is the folder.
00:38:810 (3,4) - hidden reverse arrows. That's not gonna get ranked.
Except for that, really nice difficulty.
Changed BPM and offset for Shuna's diff, otherwise waiting for Arusha Shuna's response.

Matma Rex wrote:

[Shuna's Insane]
Why do all sections use custom overrides? There are none is the folder. wow, i didn't notice this
00:38:810 (3,4) - hidden reverse arrows. That's not gonna get ranked. remapped
Except for that, really nice difficulty. thanks!

YGOkid8 wrote:

Jordan Trudgett? On osu!? You'd think he'd sue for giving a song he made away for free, but meh

YGOkid8 wrote:

Jordan Trudgett? On osu!? You'd think he'd sue for giving a song he made away for free, but meh

Nivalis wrote:

Yes, I really don't know that Jordan Trudgett is on osu!...

Nivalis wrote:

Ardentryst is a fully freeware game, so I think it's fine to map this song

Nivalis wrote:

I shocked, truly
HP drain rate 8, small circle size, Overall difficulty 9...
Shuna's Insane is much harder now

YGOkid8 wrote:

Jordan Trudgett? On osu!? You'd think he'd sue for giving a song he made away for free, but meh

dksslqj wrote:

[Easy]
00:32:778 (2) - remove newcombo OK

[Normal]
00:10:601 (1) - distance check Checked, and nothing is wrong.

[Hard]
00:19:741 (9) - add new combo OK
01:05:754 (8) - △ OK
01:09:351 (8) - △ OK
01:58:544 (9) - △ OK

[Shuna's Insane]
ovarall -1
cricle cize -1
Actually it's Arusha Shuna's decision to put OD to 9... About the circle size, it's gradually decreasing from Easy to Insane, so I see circle size -1 is unneeded.
00:24:986 (6) - △ Because this is only a new-combo mod, I decide to do it myself... OK

Sallad4ever wrote:

Apa kabar?

Jordan Trudgett play osu!
That my friend, is very surprising

[General]
Sama kan seluruh offset di semua diff, sekarang ini easy cuma punya 4 offset, sedangkan yg lain punya 5, trus offset ke 2 masing2 diff berbeda. p-pokoknya di samain aja offsetnya
Offset ke-2 disamain, Easy memang cuma punya 4 offset karena bagian yang 98 BPM-nya isinya break, jadi nggak perlu offset baru

[Easy]
00:25:586 (3) - jadiin curve slider, supaya konsisten dg note yg sbelumnya (nazi dikit) OK
02:01:552 (5) - hilangin whistle dari "slidernya" OK

[Normal]
Menurutku diff ini masih agak kurang hitsound nya, tambah lagi?atau kalau mau biar wa yg nambahin? Tambah whistle
00:08:203 (2) - unstack? (apa bahasa indonesianya?) Kalau di-unstack, bingung mau ditempatin di mana... Untuk sementara belum diganti dulu
00:24:986 (1,2,3) - ^ OK
01:10:588 (2) - putar repeatnya jgn ke note setelahnya OK

[Hard]
Bagus

[Shuna's Insane]
ehh...kurangin cricle size nya 1 tick?
Nice
Hmm... circle size ini makin mengecil per diff, masih bingung memang mau dikurangin atau nggak
Untuk sementara circle sizenya masih sama, biar Arusha Shuna yang memutuskan

Jordan Trudgett main osu itu betul2 mengejutkan, kalo timingnya masih bingung mungkin minta bantuannya aja
Lagu yg sgt menenangkan Iya... Lagu ini offsetnya aneh memang
Star~

Arusha Shuna wrote:

koq kayaknya pada benci CS4 ya? :/

SPOILER

SPOILER

• • "speedwarning.png" contains unnecessary trasparency
  • Volume: 6
  • 00:01:610 (red timing section) - Offset: 1640 (resnap all notes)

• • 02:01:852 (4) - Move this slider here 02:01:935

• • Overall Difficulty: 7
  • Circle Size: Normal

xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
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[General]

• • "speedwarning.png" contains unnecessary trasparency
  • Volume: 6 I changed into 7 instead... There are some timing points where I used volume 6
  • 00:01:610 (red timing section) - Offset: 1640 (resnap all notes)[/color] Done. Much, much better now

[Normal]

• • 02:01:852 (4) - Move this slider here 02:01:935 Moved

[Shuna's Insane]

• • Overall Difficulty: 7
  • Circle Size: Normal Hmm... This complaint again. I will ask Arusha Shuna about the circle size, then.

Mafiamaster wrote:

[All difficulties]
Generally two timing sections shouldn't be right on top of each other so delete the inherited timing section at 02:07:510 and halve the uninherited timing section to 40.00 Fixed

[Easy]
02:01:935 - Remove this timing section, there's no use for it since you've added a break. Removed
02:01:552 (5) - Shorten by a 1/4 tick so it ends on the blue tick at 02:02:601. Done

[Normal]
02:01:935 - The timing section here is different from [Easy] Because the timing on Easy is deleted, I made the timing section on Normal, Hard, and Shuna's Insane same

[Hard]
02:10:510 (1) - Remove the finish from this spinner. Removed

[Arusha]
02:01:852 - Shouldn't the uninherited timing section be started here like it is with the other difficulties? Fixed (it's just a timing problem so I decide to do it myself)

VanMoNky wrote:

[General]
1. I just want you to lower the volume down 50% if possible. This is a relaxing song, don't use the volume too high. The first time I mapped this, I used low volume, and YGOkid8 said it's too quiet. Leaved in 70%.
2. Finish hitsound doesn't fit at all in this song. Removed (except some finishes with quieter volume)
3. The offset on 02:01:852 feels too late. Yes, but I can't find the correct offset. Leaved as is.

[Easy]
01:36:378 (2) - This note doesn't stacked properly. Done
02:01:552 (5) - Reduce this one 1/4 tick, then move it forward 1/2 tick. Uhh... added a repeating slider instead
02:10:885 (1) - Can you silence this using custom hitsound? Done

[Normal]
00:18:123 (3,1) - They aren't stacked properly. Done
00:23:817 (5,6) - ^ Done
00:41:200 (3) - Extend it one 1/4 tick, then reduce 2 repeats. Done
02:05:930 (4) - Move forward one 1/4 tick. Done
02:10:885 (1) - Can you silence this using custom hitsound? Done

[Hard]
00:09:731 (2,3) - They are not stacked properly. Done
00:16:924 (2) - Bad jump placement. Done
00:40:301 (4,5) - Move one tick up. Done
01:05:958 (2,3,4,5,1) - The spacing's confusing. I had no idea how to change this
02:05:930 (4) - Delete this. Done
02:10:885 (1) - Can you silence this using custom hitsound? Done

[Shuna's Insane]
-- Don't use whistle on sliderslide. It sounds weird. Waiting for Arusha Shuna's response

00:46:744 (6) - Remove this. Overmapped. Waiting for Arusha Shuna's response
01:18:096 (3) - Unstacked. Waiting for Arusha Shuna's response
02:10:885 (1) - Can you silence this using custom hitsound? Done
Star.

Nivalis wrote:

This beatmap is dedicated to Jordan Trudgett herself. I don't know that she is on osu! these days

1. 02:02:413 (5) - This slider bothers me. It starts too early. Maybe start it at red (02:02:571) tick?

Real1 wrote:

[Shuna's Insane]

1. 02:02:413 (5) - This slider bothers me. It starts too early. Maybe start it at red (02:02:571) tick?k

VanMoNky wrote:

[Shuna's Insane]
-- Don't use whistle on sliderslide. It sounds weird. YOU PEOPLE ARE MEAN ;_;

00:46:744 (6) - Remove this. Overmapped. k
01:18:096 (3) - Unstacked. k
02:10:885 (1) - Can you silence this using custom hitsound?[/notice]
Star.

Frill wrote:

[Easy]

01:17:174 (1) - add whistle in end Done
01:42:371 (1) - add whistle in start Finish is better
01:45:968 (4) - add whistle in end Done
01:47:166 (5) - remove whistle Lowered volume

[Hard]

00:23:800 (6) - new combo? Done

Death_the_kid wrote:

[Easy]

Fine.

[Normal]

00:23:800 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - Messy

[Hard]

00:03:571 (4) - Maybe NC here? OK
00:25:599 (7) - Ugly Remapped this part
01:28:885 (1) - Remove NC Done
01:30:683 (1) - ^ I think it's 01:30:083 (1)... 01:30:086 should have a NC
01:34:879 (6) - NC Done
01:49:264 (5) - ^ Done, also changed a slider there

[Shuna's Insane]

Fine.[/color]

Star~

Eirene wrote:

seems pretty good... just few remarks about hitsounds

[Insane] :
Waiting for Arusha Shuna's response

[Hard] :
parts without hitsounds are really odd *.* Tweaked hitsounds
00:42:706 (2) - remove the whitsle ? I prefer with whistle in it
01:05:785 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - I feel it's not very clear... I had to look in the editor to understand the pattern No, I like that pattern
01:34:879 (1) - finish at the end Done
01:42:371 (1) - finish Done
01:49:564 (2) - ^ Done

[Normal] :
00:05:818 (2) - remove whistle ? I prefer with whistle in it
00:13:011 (2) - ^ ^
00:42:706 (2) - ^ ^
01:18:672 (2) - add whistle Done
01:30:683 (2) - whistle on 3 instead ? Done
01:42:371 (1) - finish Done
01:55:258 (1) - whistle on 4 instead ? I fixed most of that part's hitsounds

[Easy] :
01:27:986 (2) - finish ? Done
01:42:371 (1) - ^ Eh... There's already a finish there
01:48:965 (1) - ^ Done

Eirene wrote:

seems pretty good... just few remarks about hitsounds

[Insane] :
00:03:421 (7) - try a bit more curved like this :
ATTACH[mod3.jpg]
00:20:803 (3) - whistle at the begining
00:39:409 (4) - remove whistle at the end
00:42:706 (10) - ^
00:43:605 (11) - whistle at the begining and at the end
01:01:589 (8) - whistle at the begining
01:49:564 (4) - finish here o.o
01:54:659 (6) - whistle at the begining

banvi wrote:

Hello

mod
All diff
01:42:371 uh... I think kiai don't fit and weird such like silent song. Use moment kiai?(01:42:371~01:42:521 & 01:49:564~01:49:714 ) Yes, thanks for this!
Easy
00:11:213 (5) 1 grid up?(composed with (1).)(grid lv3) Done
00:13:611 (2) 1 grid up? Done
Normal
00:10:014 (4) nazi: 1 grid down & 1 grid left? Repatterning that part
00:10:314 (5) nazi: 2 grid down & 2 grid left? ^
01:52:561 (2) nazi: 1 grid right? Fixed
01:53:160 (4) nazi: 1 grid up? Fixed
01:54:959 (4,1,2) ^ Nothing wrong with the spacing...
Hard
00:35:813 (6,1) move vertical center? (but I think this is intentional) Fixed
01:45:968 (1,1,1) uh... make these all one combo? Done
Shuna's
Nazi modding... I decide to fix these myself, but if Arusha Shuna wants to change it too, just change it Shuna
00:04:952 (8) nazi: 1 grid down & 1 grid left? Done
00:36:412 (2) nazi: 1 grid up? No, the current position seems better
01:18:081 (3,4,5) ^ Also this, if you see the spacing from 01:18:980 (5) to (6) the current spacing seems to be correct

nicemap~
star & gl

CXu wrote:

Hya :p Hi

i'm fine with both Easy, Normal and Insane. They felt fine during my playthrough, and that should be enough imo ^^"

[Hard] - Generally I think it has a bit too many streams >.< Reduced stream
For me I think the distance snap is a bit low, but well, not sure if you want to remap the whole thing due to that ^_^"
00:42:406 (1,2,3) - Didn't like this jump. I didn't combobreak, or get 100's or anything, but I still think it feels kinda out of place. Maybe make it smaller?
01:02:189 (6,7,8) - You might want to somehow get the tone/note/whatever you want to call it at 01:02:638? I've tried it, and it ruins the notes' position, so I don't change it
01:05:785 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe you should make these notes in the middle of the playfield, then use the rotate-by and rotate the notes in that angle? I think it'll look neater.
01:17:473 (1) - Uneccesary and out of place imo. I have no idea how to change this
01:23:917 (2) - I think this part should be to the usual speed, and have the slowdown at 01:24:346 No, I prefer the current one
01:31:582 (1,2,3,4) - Silence the sliderticks?
01:55:858 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Can't get this parts rythm and stuff.
02:01:954 (1) - This is really out there :p Move it a bit closer in the playfield?


Well, I generally like the map, and it's not all thaaat bad up there^, so here's a star

Nivalis wrote:

CXu wrote:

Hya :p Hi

[Hard] - Generally I think it has a bit too many streams >.< Reduced stream
01:17:473 (1) - Uneccesary and out of place imo. I have no idea how to change this

Thanks CXu! Others are fixed.

Nivalis wrote:

Hi YGOkid8! Ah... I remember the first time you mod this. This map was very, very flawed. Now it has gotten this far (+22 priority since your first post)

Yes. If you've played the game, you'll see her photo on the credits screen (or the about screen, I forgot)