DevilishP feat.GUMI - Yume Maboroshi · forum

Bara-

Joined April 2013

Bara- 2015-08-11T12:52:56+00:00

M4M as requested via Forum-PM

[General]
BG dimension is 1208x767? Please make it correct

[Mao's Beginner]

00:20:722 (1,2) - As it's beginner, this is quite unexpected and fast. Hey, a circle. Omg, already a slider, what, nooo. Miss. It is fine in the rest of the map, but it comes in so umpredictable. That, and 1/1 at 190 BPM Beginner diff is quite fast
00:45:354 (2) - Due to the way you mapped this, people will think this is at 00:45:038, as you constantly map the beat with the claps, while you suddenly start following vocals here, which is quite out of place. Consider letting it start 1/1 eariler (at the time mentioned) with the same end time to follow the claps
00:45:354 (2,1) - Also, distance
00:55:459 (2) - The same applies here as 2 above (00:45:354 (2))
01:18:512 (3,1) - This overlap plays quite weird, as you need to go right to hit (1), then go left to follow slider. Why not move (3) to 440:188?
01:57:196 (2) - I know you're following vocals here, but it feels much better if you let this start 1/2 earlier to follow the clap, as it feels quite awkward to miss such a strong sound and map the sound 1/2 later. For example at 01:59:249 (1) - you follow claps, but not the vocals
02:53:565 (2,1) - Consider blanketing them
03:32:407 (1) - I personally find these wiggles a bit overdone, please tone the wiggle down, but instead make the slider longer

Nice diff, but personally I find it too hard for a beginner. Consider naming it Easy

[Desperate's Easy]

00:40:933 (1,2,3,4,5) - Please add some sliders here, only circles feels too hard, even if it's only for the first 2, like 00:51:038 (1) -
01:11:249 (1) - <3 I love how this follows the vocals so perfectly due to the red nodes :3
01:32:091 (3,4) - Blanket them?

Nice diff! But perhaps look a little to improve the blankets

[Nely's Normal]
There are many strong sounds in the kiai which are mapped with soft-sampleset, which feels really out of place, examples are 02:23:249 (4) - 02:25:776 (4) -

00:23:249 (1,2,3) - I personally wouldn't ever use triple stacks in normal. double ones are fine, as they are quite common and people know about them, but this feels a bit too much
01:01:617 (2) - The head here nearly feels silenced. Please make it normal sampleset as well
01:28:933 (7) - NC, the combo goes on quite long, and for consisteny (NC every 8 beats)
01:40:459 (2) - Please extend by 1/2, it fits the music much better
02:41:091 (2,3) - This doesn't follow anything. Either map the vocals, on follow the beat (extend first slider by 1/2)
03:22:617 (4) - NC, the combo goes on quite long, and for consisteny (NC every 8 beats)

I think this diff is quite hard O.o
Also, please try to work on blanketing
Nice diff though

[10nya's Hard]

01:08:407 (3,4,5,6) - Might be a little hard, as it's a 5-plet, consider making it a reverse slider
01:58:617 (4,2) - Consider stacking these
02:02:091 - Add circle to follow vocals
02:02:249 (2) - Shorten by 1/2 to folow vocals. Then add a circle at the "old" end

A great diff, I love it <3
But please fix what Erunamo said, about the blankets

[Insane]

00:40:301 (2,4,5,1) - Misstack? Please stack them properly
02:02:565 (4,5,1,2) - Stacks feel a bit out of place, as you don't use them in other similar parts
02:16:617 (3,1) - Fix stack please

Nice!

[Dream]
Check AiMod, I agree with that

Great map!
Good luck!

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2015-08-11T14:36:35+00:00

Padge14 wrote:
Normal
01:40:459 (2,3,1) - Sounds weird for me. im following drums
02:41:091 (2,3) - Same^ ^
General: Some triple notes looks weirds for me (but I think its just me so don't pay attention).
Pretty good normal
[/notice]

@Depths : NC'ed

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:
[Nely's Normal]
01:41:091 (3) - circle feels strange imo, i want to suggest this: ah but 01:41:565 - has cymbal and it's strong so i have to use clickable object to map it that's why i choose circle
I think you will add more notes in kiai sections (like in 01:22:459 - 01:32:565 - etc etc) i was afraid with spread since i havent see Easy but ok i added some (little) more

Baraatje123 wrote:
M4M as requested via Forum-PM

[Nely's Normal]
There are many strong sounds in the kiai which are mapped with soft-sampleset, which feels really out of place, examples are 02:23:249 (4) - 02:25:776 (4) - /me slaps natsu
00:23:249 (1,2,3) - I personally wouldn't ever use triple stacks in normal. double ones are fine, as they are quite common and people know about them, but this feels a bit too much well im forced to map Normal (a bit hard than usual as u see we have beginner and easy for making spread)
01:01:617 (2) - The head here nearly feels silenced. Please make it normal sampleset as well
01:28:933 (7) - NC, the combo goes on quite long, and for consisteny (NC every 8 beats)
01:40:459 (2) - Please extend by 1/2, it fits the music much better
02:41:091 (2,3) - This doesn't follow anything. Either map the vocals, on follow the beat (extend first slider by 1/2)
03:22:617 (4) - NC, the combo goes on quite long, and for consisteny (NC every 8 beats)
I think this diff is quite hard O.o
Also, please try to work on blanketing well im not making blanketing here actually.. i'm mapping based of flow lmao
Nice diff though

Great map!
Good luck!

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Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Natsu 2015-08-12T02:13:11+00:00

Depths

Depths wrote:
[Insane]
03:55:933 (6) - NC? Nah I prefer to keep them consistent
good set good luck with ranking~

ErunamoJAZZ

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:
[Insane]
00:49:459 (4,1) - Este jump es bastante dificil de preveer. esta el NC, personalmente no lo siento dificil
01:01:775 (3,4) - Este stack hace que se pierda un poco el dinamísmo... pienso que se podría stackear sobre 01:00:670 (4) - (ordenando el spacing, por supuesto). pero quiero conservar el pattern
01:32:880 (1,2,3,4) - es cuirioso que es el unico salto como de este estilo acá es 1/1 asi que en realidad no es un salto tenes tiempo de sobra para acomodarte a el
02:22:932 (1,2) - mismo de antes con el stack... se siente incómodo que se pierda el dinamismo en justamente la parte donde empieza lo más animado. Ya sé que venias con el patron de stacks, pero, estos son los que sentí incómodos. igual que el anterior
02:56:407 (3) - feo el flow que hace este slider xD yo lo veo bien xDD
03:26:723 (1) - Este salto también es dificil de preveer. Pienso que es porque la musica no lo suguere tan enfáticamente (igual en el que dije antes) es cambio de combo a combo + las vocales elevan el tono
[Dream]
00:33:354 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - una vez hice un patron del mismo estilo en un normal, y TicClick me ~~regañó~~modeó diciendome que no fuera tan repetitivo xD, así que, acá va mi sugerencia: nah a mi me gusta hahaha, me vale quien me quiera regañar hahaha
00:51:828 (4,5) - 00:52:617 (3,4,5) - LOL, esto es demasiado troll xD, se hace dificil de leer, quizás podrías desapilarlos, que queden cerca, pero no completamente encima. lo dejare por ahora, pero no veo lo que sea dificil de leer ahi es 1/2 :c
00:52:617 (3,4,5) - Este lo siento overmapeado. borralo y escucha a 25% o 50%
03:45:354 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - esto fluye muy extraño... creo que es por el espaciado de los dos ultimos circulos... yo lo podría más cerca (además, ya ahí la canción se va haciendo más tranquila, por lo que no quedaría mal, imo). pero estan al espaciado que generalmente uso
Nice song and mapset, good luck!

Baraatje123

Baraatje123 wrote:
[Insane]
00:40:301 (2,4,5,1) - Misstack? Please stack them properly no, look at them in game, if I stack properly in the editor it become really ugly, that's why the manual stack
02:02:565 (4,5,1,2) - Stacks feel a bit out of place, as you don't use them in other similar parts well is a stack pattern 02:02:565 (4,5,1,2) -
02:16:617 (3,1) - Fix stack please fixed I guess
Nice!

[Dream]
Check AiMod, I agree with that hahaha thanks

Great map!
Good luck!

thanks guys

Natsu

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Topic Starter

Natsu 2015-08-12T02:30:34+00:00

Double post, but w/e

Redownload pls, did change metadata according to:

http://vocaloid.wikia.com/wiki/夢幻_(Yume_Maboroshi)
http://vocaloid.wikia.com/wiki/Darvish-P

I'll add video and new BG, but waiting for gero

IamKwaN

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Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2015-08-20T12:35:54+00:00

Hi there, as requested.
I guess it is included in one album only by EXIT TUNES as follows.

SPOILER

Unicode Title: 夢幻
Romanised Title: Yume Maboroshi
Unicode Artist: ダルビッシュP feat.GUMI
Romanised Artist: DevilishP feat.GUMI (I am actually doubtful about this, may poke neonat for opinions

)
Reference:
http://exittunes.com/cd/exit_tunes/qwce00292.html

Poke me if you have any other questions, good luck!

Mao

Elite Mapper II

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Joined December 2012

Mao 2015-08-23T17:53:48+00:00

Erunamo

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:
[Mao's Beginner]
00:23:565 - here is a audible beat, it feels empty... i think a slider in 00:23:249 (1) - will be better. Following the background instrument here :/
00:33:670 - ^ ^
00:51:038 (1,2,3,4) - is it flow.. a bit complicated? What I intended this to be was a kind of triangular curve but you could be right, I will wait for more opinions.
01:21:354 (1,2,3) - this pattern look complicated also 1 should already be vanished sooo I think it shouldn't be too confusing.

Baraatje

Baraatje123 wrote:
M4M as requested via Forum-PM
[Mao's Beginner]
00:20:722 (1,2) - As it's beginner, this is quite unexpected and fast. Hey, a circle. Omg, already a slider, what, nooo. Miss. It is fine in the rest of the map, but it comes in so umpredictable. That, and 1/1 at 190 BPM Beginner diff is quite fast Uhm, I will wait with this, doesn't appear to be too complicated and already introduces you into the difficulty.
00:45:354 (2) - Due to the way you mapped this, people will think this is at 00:45:038, as you constantly map the beat with the claps, while you suddenly start following vocals here, which is quite out of place. Consider letting it start 1/1 eariler (at the time mentioned) with the same end time to follow the claps I am also following the cymbal crash so I though this would be the perfect place to do this. it would sound pretty weird starting earlier. I fixed the spacing though and changed the pattern a bit.
01:57:196 (2) - I know you're following vocals here, but it feels much better if you let this start 1/2 earlier to follow the clap, as it feels quite awkward to miss such a strong sound and map the sound 1/2 later. For example at 01:59:249 (1) - you follow claps, but not the vocals Changed the others, shouldn't be really complicated
02:53:565 (2,1) - Consider blanketing them The paralellity is more important to me and blanketing would make it look to unnatural in my eyes
03:32:407 (1) - I personally find these wiggles a bit overdone, please tone the wiggle down, but instead make the slider longer
Nice diff, but personally I find it too hard for a beginner. Consider naming it Easy Why? It's just a zigzag slider, each anchor fulfills its own purpose here within the music.

Everything not mentioned has been fixed. I had to map the difficulty harder to fit the Easy which is not really simple as well :/

Code

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TitleUnicode:夢幻
Artist:Devilish-P
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Myxo

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3,103 posts

Joined December 2012

Myxo 2015-08-24T18:55:43+00:00

Depths wrote:
short mod~

[Desperate's Easy]
04:06:512 (2,3) - object too far from previous It's intentional, for the clean pattern

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:
hi o/

[Desperate's Easy ~~Normal~~]
00:35:249 (3,2) - avoid overlap? But, it's intentional ;w;
01:27:038 (3) - this will improve the flow, imo: This would also flow nice, but I really like to keep some flow variation in the map so it is not that repetetive
02:05:249 (2) - try a blanket? I didn't intend a blanket here
02:06:828 (1,2) - flow feels a bit weird, maybe try some like this?: My flow is a bit more simple and works better for an Easy difficulty imo, as it just includes one rather sharp turn instead of 2 as in your example
02:19:459 (1) - It's not 100% Symmetryc (?) I tried to fix
02:42:196 (5) - random whistle? You are right, removed :3
03:28:617 (4) - you will improve this blanket It's not intended to be a blanket
in general, feels good, maybe a bit complicated, but good (why call it "easy?") Because it's clearly an Easy difficulty. It has no complicated rhythms nor patterns and would be boring for Normal players.

Baraatje123 wrote:
M4M as requested via Forum-PM

[Desperate's Easy]
00:40:933 (1,2,3,4,5) - Please add some sliders here, only circles feels too hard, even if it's only for the first 2, like 00:51:038 (1) - There are 2/1 gaps between most of these circles, so this really shouldn't be an issue. (Also I love circles <3)
01:11:249 (1) - <3 I love how this follows the vocals so perfectly due to the red nodes :3 c:
01:32:091 (3,4) - Blanket them? They are blanketed, but only one way. I like how it looks
Nice diff! But perhaps look a little to improve the blankets

Good luck!

I am trying my best with the blankets, but I don't understand why there should be blankets everywhere. My style is definitely not based on blankets. It's important to have some pattern variation.
Thank you all for modding :3

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Natsu

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Natsu 2015-08-26T08:29:45+00:00

Updated, I'm going to confirm metadata with some people before changing it btw

Natsu

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Natsu 2015-09-03T15:58:49+00:00

10nya can't fix due irl things, so she did ask me to fix for her

Depths wrote:
[10nya's hard]
02:41:723 (1) - make this into 2 kick sliders? keeped since 2 slider will have different amount of repeats and will be a bit weird to play

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:
[10nya's hard]
01:29:880 (4,5) - flow feels really strange here :/
You will improve a lot of blankets! did improve some for her, others aren't noticeable when playing

Baraatje123 wrote:
[10nya's Hard]
01:58:617 (4,2) - Consider stacking these na I think the current pattern is better
02:02:249 (2) - Shorten by 1/2 to folow vocals. Then add a circle at the "old" end keeped, since following drums is also ok
A great diff, I love it <3
But please fix what Erunamo said, about the blankets did fix some

changed BG, combo colours and metadata! redownload pls :3

KASUM1

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KASUM1 2015-09-04T17:43:25+00:00

Time for shooting stars! KABOOM!

Grrum

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Grrum 2015-09-05T01:24:57+00:00

Hi. Saw this in #modreqs and thought I'd give some minor input. I'm not good at modding lower difficulties (and I'm lazy

), so I just did the highest two. Hope this helps!

[Insane]

01:16:144 (5,1) – the flow into this is a little awkward. Try a rotation and placement change, for example: http://puu.sh/k0eqO/fac3d74102.jpg

03:47:565 (3,1) – Consider not stacking these to give emphasis on the downbeat at (1)

03:48:827 (1,2) - Consider not stacking these to give emphasis on (2) (I'm going with the singer, it looks like you're going with the drum, but either way I like not stacking. This is more subjective though)

[Fantasy]

00:34:617 (1) - Make a bigger jump into this to better represent the change in pitch of the guitar to give these two combos a more distinct feel to them.

01:14:249 (3,1) – I would prefer these not to overlap, try moving (1) to the right more

02:01:617 (10,1) - , 02:02:565 (4,5) - , 02:03:038 (1,2) – I think we have a difference in interpretation in the music and I'd like to understand why. I can't hear anything that would suggest to stack these mentioned patterns and also not stack anything in following combos like 02:04:301 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - . Imo, there is an important change in music here (02:01:775 (1) - ). Since before this point you use a few stacks, I think it would make this section more distinct and emphasized if things like 02:01:617 (10,1) - , 02:02:565 (4,5) - , 02:03:038 (1,2) – were not stacked, but instead had bigger changes in flow/angle.

03:04:302 (4,5,6,7) – with the increased pitch and volume of the guitar here, I don't like using the repetition here since this change in intensity is pretty major. Try making a different jump pattern that emphasizes the guitar.

03:46:301 (11,12) – This section is energetic enough such that a jump between these would compliment the hit-finish on (12) and make a stronger climax for the section.

04:06:512 (4,1) – pretty minor, but this isn't perfectly linear. Try moving (1) to 175, 277, or try changing the slant of the (1) slider or both move and rotate.

Edit: forgot to mention, very nice maps overall, have a star

Suimya

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Suimya 2015-09-06T16:02:06+00:00

I'll mod this soon =3=/

Natsu

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Natsu 2015-09-06T17:18:09+00:00

pinataman wrote:
Hi. Saw this in #modreqs and thought I'd give some minor input. I'm not good at modding lower difficulties (and I'm lazy ), so I just did the highest two. Hope this helps!

[Insane]

01:16:144 (5,1) – the flow into this is a little awkward. Try a rotation and placement change, for example: http://puu.sh/k0eqO/fac3d74102.jpg to be honest I feel mine to be more comfortable to play

03:47:565 (3,1) – Consider not stacking these to give emphasis on the downbeat at (1) stack work cool as well, since you do move when playing the slider >:

03:48:827 (1,2) - Consider not stacking these to give emphasis on (2) (I'm going with the singer, it looks like you're going with the drum, but either way I like not stacking. This is more subjective though) Keeped for now for better gameplay

[Fantasy]

00:34:617 (1) - Make a bigger jump into this to better represent the change in pitch of the guitar to give these two combos a more distinct feel to them. but my pattern, visuals are really important to me, that's why

01:14:249 (3,1) – I would prefer these not to overlap, try moving (1) to the right more Fixed

02:01:617 (10,1) - , 02:02:565 (4,5) - , 02:03:038 (1,2) – I think we have a difference in interpretation in the music and I'd like to understand why. I can't hear anything that would suggest to stack these mentioned patterns and also not stack anything in following combos like 02:04:301 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - . Imo, there is an important change in music here (02:01:775 (1) - ). Since before this point you use a few stacks, I think it would make this section more distinct and emphasized if things like 02:01:617 (10,1) - , 02:02:565 (4,5) - , 02:03:038 (1,2) – were not stacked, but instead had bigger changes in flow/angle. oh man, well let explain I do map mostly to vocals, so my stacks at this diff are to not bring movement when no vocals and lets cursor dance when vocals again, that's why, ye people usually blame for vocal mapping, but I do prefer in that way, since Gumi OP

03:04:302 (4,5,6,7) – with the increased pitch and volume of the guitar here, I don't like using the repetition here since this change in intensity is pretty major. Try making a different jump pattern that emphasizes the guitar. Keeped cuz symmetry

03:46:301 (11,12) – This section is energetic enough such that a jump between these would compliment the hit-finish on (12) and make a stronger climax for the section. yes

04:06:512 (4,1) – pretty minor, but this isn't perfectly linear. Try moving (1) to 175, 277, or try changing the slant of the (1) slider or both move and rotate. k

Edit: forgot to mention, very nice maps overall, have a star

thanks :3

10nya

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10nya 2015-09-07T13:13:57+00:00

sheet i cant shoot more damn it

Natsu

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Natsu 2015-09-07T13:26:15+00:00

lol baka thanks xD

Pendu

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Pendu 2015-09-21T19:23:53+00:00

Hi first mod :>

General
In the difficulties Fantasy and Insane there is a little gap in the third Kiai Time and in all the other difficulties there isnt. Kiai Time should generally be the same in all difficulties.

Mao's Beginner
01:17:880 (2) - and 01:18:828 (1) - Shouldnt overlap imo it looks weird to me.
02:42:196 (1) - I think this spinner should end when the vocals end.

Desperate's Easy
01:00:512 (3,1) - I think it looks better if you move (1) a little to the left so they dont overlap.
02:42:354 (1) - Same with this spinner. It should end when the vocals end.

Nely's Normal
02:42:196 (1) - Same with this spinner

Insane
AR 8,5 is a little low for this map. I would change it to AR 9.

Really nice Beatmap overall.

I know this was really short and probably terrible but i hope it still helps :>

Nyukai

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Nyukai 2015-09-25T15:13:33+00:00

Since Sekai can't do anything with this now I'll be here tomorrow and try to mod it as we accorded.

Last edited by Nyukai 2015-10-01T15:27:45+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Nyukai

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Nyukai 2015-09-27T11:10:56+00:00

Hola c:

[Mao's Beginner]

00:58:617 (2) - Shouldn't be NC here too?

[Nely's Normal]

01:16:301 (1,2,3) - This rhythm sounds a bit weird for me, why you skip vocal here o3o

Realmente creo que el mapa está genial, solo una cosa respecto a los nombres de las dificultades, cuando vi Beginner/Easy/Normal esperaba unas dificultades como tal pero debido a cómo están mapeados y por las estrellas creo que encajaría mejor que pusieras Easy/Normal/Advanced, es solo una sugerencia personal pero realmente creo que quedaría mejor.

Igualmente antes del bubble haré un recheck rápido, así que cuando hayas actualizado o al menos visto este post llámame o3o

Natsu

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Natsu 2015-09-27T11:14:53+00:00

oh btw @Mao and Desperate Inyuschan say that will be a good idea to change your diff names to Easy and Normal, I dont mind so up to you guys

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Myxo 2015-09-27T12:13:38+00:00

Pendu wrote:
Desperate's Easy
01:00:512 (3,1) - I think it looks better if you move (1) a little to the left so they dont overlap. The overlap is not a problem, I want to keep the current flow
02:42:354 (1) - Same with this spinner. It should end when the vocals end. It feels better to me when it ends at the big white tick. I will change it if the others change it though

Thanks :3

Also, I don't want the diffs to be renamed personally. My Easy is clearly an Easy difficulty, by no means a Normal... It might be on the harder side of things, but if I were to make a Normal it'd be more dense and variative in rhythm.

Nyukai

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Nyukai 2015-09-27T12:42:29+00:00

Desperate-kun wrote:
Pendu wrote:
Desperate's Easy
01:00:512 (3,1) - I think it looks better if you move (1) a little to the left so they dont overlap. The overlap is not a problem, I want to keep the current flow
02:42:354 (1) - Same with this spinner. It should end when the vocals end. It feels better to me when it ends at the big white tick. I will change it if the others change it though
Thanks :3

Also, I don't want the diffs to be renamed personally. My Easy is clearly an Easy difficulty, by no means a Normal... It might be on the harder side of things, but if I were to make a Normal it'd be more dense and variative in rhythm.

Basically what I'm saying is that I don't agree with this. Mao's diff is clearly the Easy of the mapset xD Anyways I respect your opinions guys =)

Natsu

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Natsu 2015-09-27T13:10:02+00:00

is just because of spacing and bpm, but imo Desperate's diff isn't close of a normal diff tbh

Mao

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Mao 2015-09-27T21:40:15+00:00

Applied the NC Inyuschan listed. To the spinner, I am keeping it for now because of consistency with the other difficulties and the overlap..well I don't think it's bothering too much and it used to be way more cruel, already made it easier >_>

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Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Natsu 2015-09-28T12:45:58+00:00

Did change rhythm at Xinely diff, Spinner is fine as it is and AR in my insane is really easy to play, personally I can fc with 8,5 and 9 feels overdone sorry

Nyukai

2,415 posts

Joined July 2012

Nyukai 2015-09-28T13:29:37+00:00

Seems fine, good luck (I'll call you when my map is finished yk)

Mao

Elite Mapper II

2,963 posts

Joined December 2012

Mao 2015-09-28T21:47:06+00:00

yay

Gero

4,438 posts

Joined March 2012

Gero 2015-09-29T14:41:26+00:00

~ Qualified ~

Euny

2,274 posts

Joined January 2014

Euny 2015-09-29T14:47:37+00:00

as your request

gratz(with love)

Last edited by Euny 2015-09-29T14:48:34+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Bara-

11,955 posts

Joined April 2013

Bara- 2015-09-29T14:47:44+00:00

Gratz!

Kalibe

2,060 posts

Joined October 2013

Kalibe 2015-09-29T14:47:47+00:00

Gratz !! \:D/

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Natsu 2015-09-29T14:51:53+00:00

Euny wrote:

as your request

gratz(with love)

thanks

everyone

Mao

Elite Mapper II

2,963 posts

Joined December 2012

Mao 2015-09-29T15:22:27+00:00

yay

Mint

1,607 posts

Joined February 2013

Mint 2015-09-29T20:26:12+00:00

love this song, grats!

10nya

2,746 posts

Joined February 2011

10nya 2015-09-30T08:01:52+00:00

yeeeyyy

Gamu

Elite Mapper

2,606 posts

Joined December 2010

Gamu 2015-10-06T00:26:36+00:00

Hello everyone!

Pretty good mapset, but I have to disqualify this because I found the issues in Beginner diff.

[Mao's Beginner]

00:49:775 (2,1) - Very small spacing error. You can easily fix it.
01:54:512 (1) - This slider is obviously strange because this should end on the white tick and 01:55:065 - there is no sound at here. Therefore, you should use 2/1 slider at here.

You can get bubble/heart soon. Feel free to call me If you need me.

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Topic Starter

Natsu 2015-10-06T00:35:51+00:00

Thanks Gamu, already did send a pm to Mao, so lets wait for him o/~

Nyukai

2,415 posts

Joined July 2012

Nyukai 2015-10-06T08:35:43+00:00

-.- Call me if you need it

Gero

4,438 posts

Joined March 2012

Gero 2015-10-06T10:49:36+00:00

Call me back too.

Mao

Elite Mapper II

2,963 posts

Joined December 2012

Mao 2015-10-06T14:30:38+00:00

Uhm yeah, that slider is obviously not intentional like this, I have no idea what happened there o.o
Anyways, thanks a lot for pointing it out!

Code

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: P.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 80328
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 40933,60828,68407,70617,98723,100933,172301,205144,215249
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.5

[Metadata]
Title:Yume Maboroshi
TitleUnicode:夢幻
Artist:DevilishP feat.GUMI
ArtistUnicode:ダルビッシュP feat.GUMI
Creator:Natsu
Version:Mao's Beginner
Source:
Tags:GUMI kamishaku NETERO beriko Arisaka Ako Mie no Hito vocaloid megpoid -_t_e_n_n_y_a_- 10nya Mao Desperate-kun Xinely Fantasy
BeatmapID:747858
BeatmapSetID:325340

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:1
CircleSize:2.3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:1.5
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"NowCgzu.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,164923,170681
2,185132,203524
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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40932,-100,4,2,1,55,0,0
61143,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
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184933,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
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227880,-100,4,1,1,60,0,1
248091,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
248170,-100,4,1,1,25,0,0


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Combo2 : 0,159,80
Combo3 : 0,96,191

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