CoLouRed GlaZeE wrote:

好吧

xi7yang3 wrote:

CoLouRed GlaZeE wrote:

好吧

另外真的是仅供参考！！！！
我希望不要因为我而被dq
【然而现在都没被泡】

1. 00:01:788 (2,2) - replace on a note here 00:01:788 here 00:02:588 and here 00:04:988 and here 00:05:788
2. 00:36:988 (1) - finish here 00:37:388
3. 00:37:788 - add note

1. 00:00:188 (1,3) - replace on slider whit 1 repeat
   
2. 00:00:988 (2,4) - replace on 2 notes as the difficulty easy
3. 00:03:388 (1) - make here repat 00:03:788
   
4. 00:38:388 (4) - move on 87;242
5. 00:38:588 (5) - move on 88;192

1. 00:00:588 (2) - remove sample, cut ears
2. 00:00:588 (2) - move on 00:00:788 and remove 00:00:988 (3) -
3. 00:02:188 (2) - remove
4. 00:02:588 (2) - move on 00:02:388
5. 00:02:788 - add note
6. 00:03:388 (1) - finish here 00:03:588
7. 00:03:988 - add note
8. 00:17:988 (6) - remove (overmap)
9. 00:20:188 (6) - ^
10. 00:21:588 - add note
11. 00:32:188 (6) - offgrid
12. 00:37:988 (5) - move on the example here 168;180

1. 00:00:588 (2) - remove and add note here 00:00:788

1. 00:16:788 (6) - NC
2. 00:17:988 (6) - remove
3. 00:19:788 (6) - NC
4. 00:31:188 (7) - NC

1. 00:00:588 (3) - remove
2. 00:01:789 (1) - remove
3. 00:03:388 (1) - remove
4. 00:25:988 (2) - ^
5. 00:28:088 (7) - NC
6. 00:29:188 (5) - remove
7. 00:31:188 (6) - NC

Loony Key wrote:

Hi, M4M

EASY

1. 00:01:788 (2,2) - replace on a note here 00:01:788 here 00:02:588 and here 00:04:988 and here 00:05:788 no
2. 00:36:988 (1) - finish here 00:37:388 no
3. 00:37:788 - add note no,I think these are not good.

NORMAL

1. 00:00:188 (1,3) - replace on slider whit 1 repeat
   
2. 00:00:988 (2,4) - replace on 2 notes as the difficulty easy
3. 00:03:388 (1) - make here repat 00:03:788
   Here I think a new
4. 00:38:388 (4) - move on 87;242 fix
5. 00:38:588 (5) - move on 88;192 fix

HARD

1. 00:00:588 (2) - remove sample, cut ears
2. 00:00:588 (2) - move on 00:00:788 and remove 00:00:988 (3) -
3. 00:02:188 (2) - remove
4. 00:02:588 (2) - move on 00:02:388
5. 00:02:788 - add note
6. 00:03:388 (1) - finish here 00:03:588
7. 00:03:988 - add note
8. 00:17:988 (6) - remove (overmap)
9. 00:20:188 (6) - ^
10. 00:21:588 - add note Here I think a new, too.
11. 00:32:188 (6) - offgrid ?
12. 00:37:988 (5) - move on the example here 168;180 no

HYPER

1. 00:00:588 (2) - remove and add note here 00:00:788 fix

STRENGTHEN

1. 00:16:788 (6) - NC
2. 00:17:988 (6) - remove
3. 00:19:788 (6) - NC
4. 00:31:188 (7) - NC all fix

INSANE

1. 00:00:588 (3) - remove
2. 00:01:789 (1) - remove
3. 00:03:388 (1) - remove
4. 00:25:988 (2) - ^
5. 00:28:088 (7) - NC
6. 00:29:188 (5) - remove
7. 00:31:188 (6) - NC all fix

Nitrousdragon wrote:

map looks gud to me ^_^

Xinchii wrote:

哈囉哈囉 ~ 哈囉哈囉 ~

From queue ~

純做個一個難度的mod
不太擅長這種歌:< ;w;

[General]

1. seems fine

[Insane]

1. 00:00:988 (4) - 可以讓這個Slider的尾巴和(3)的距離保持跟(3)和(5)的距離一樣 , 看起來整齊些 fix.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:08:188 (1) - 這個跟(3)靠得有點近 , 稍微調整一下吧
   讓(5)(3)(1)的距離在畫面上看起來一致 , 比較乾淨 fix.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:20:188 (6) - Ctrl+G ? 覺得Flow會變順一些 fix
4. 00:21:388 (2,3) - 只是個小建議 , 要不要把這2個Slider交換 , Flow會比較順暢 , 跳點也比較合音樂的感覺 嘛。。我覺得不改才是比較合音樂的感覺，所以呢qwq，不改啦
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:28:088 (1,2) - 這種節奏在前面不是間距更大些嗎? 像00:14:488 (8,9) - , 跟00:15:688 (3,4) - 這樣
   考慮統一一下 ? fix.
6. 00:30:088 (3,4) - ^ ^
7. 00:33:288 (3,4) - ^ ^
8. 00:35:288 (9,1) - ^ ^

Good luck ~~ 謝謝摸圖~ 正體字有點不會看了，所以有些用來翻譯成簡體了hhh

Kuki wrote:

[General]
Uhh, not sure about your [Strengthen] diff name? A little strange, and as far as I can see absolutely so relation to anything I see here in the set nor the movie. Consider renaming to either [Extra] or something that actually fits. ummm.. OK.

[Insane]
00:00:989 (4) - Ctrl+G. fixed
00:01:389 (5) - Ctrl+G. fixed
00:32:388 (6,1,2) - Fix spacing. fixed
00:37:588 (1,2,3) - Move up so 00:37:788 (3) - stacks on 00:36:188 (3) - fixed
00:38:588 (3) - Consider something like this for the end slider. It feels so strange and why? so no

[Strengthen]
00:03:588 (2) - Ctrl+G.
00:08:588 (2) - Ctrl+G.
00:10:588 (1,2) - Stack.
00:38:588 (3) - Try making some sliderart here, it would make this part a little cooler imo. All fixed

Asahina Momoko wrote:

hi! from m4m~ you've got funny song lol

General

1. add AudioLeadIn 1000~2000 to all diff is better fixed

Easy

1. AImod says spacing error ?.? i couldn't see any error
2. 00:22:588 (4) - move grid before last one to 56/177, and move last one to 108/220 make this slider more clean. (if you apply this, dont forget to check spacing with 00:26:188 (1) - ) ahh..no

Normal

• 
  nice diff!! thx!!

Hard

1. 00:12:988 (4,5) - ctrl+g is more fit to music fixed
2. 00:14:588 (7) - add NC and remove it on 00:14:988 (1) - fixed
3. 00:19:588 (5,1) - hmm i felt to want some notes,,, how about this? I don't feel good xD
   
   SPOILER

   

Hyper

1. the diff name "Hyper" isn't bad, but this name usually used mapset like not "Easy,Normal,Hard...", but "Beginner, Basic, Standard..." so i felt something weird. if i remember collect, "Advanced" often used and might fit this one as well
2. 00:14:989 (1) - stack with 00:14:089 (4,5) -
3. 00:22:388 (6,7,8) - how about move more inner place around 344/109? that makes "easy to go spinner" all fixed

Insane

1. 00:01:788 - add note is better i think
2. 00:03:388 - ^
3. 00:10:588 (5) - ctrl+g all fixed

Flying

1. i tried to play it with AR9~9.4, and thought maybe fit this one with 9~9.2 (AR9.4 for 150BPM is a bit high imo)
2. 00:14:588 (9) - add NC and remove it on 00:14:988 (1) -
3. 00:19:388 (5) - ^ and remove it on 00:19:788 (1) -
4. 00:28:988 (10) - ^ and remove it on 00:29:388 (1) - all fixed!

that's all, good luck for ranking! Thanks for modding~ QAQ, no BN bubble

1. 00:04:188 (4) - Move to x:379 y:174?
2. 00:12:988 (4) - Move this -10 degree then move to x:380 y:324?
3. 00:13:588 (6,7,8) - In my opinion it'll look nicer if lower the spacing abit on those three, so can increase the readable of the triplet rhythm
4. 00:36:588 (4,5,1,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Lower the spacing? nerf it down seems good
   
   I feel this diff a bit overdone with several big jumps and spacing like 00:20:588 (4,5,1) - 00:37:588 (1,2,3) - 00:38:388 (1,2,3) - etc. I don't mention it all, I hope you can consider to lower some of those jumps

1. 00:00:388 (2,3) - I guess it's better to replace both circle with 1/1 slider imo, something like this might good https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3565652
2. 00:06:188 (4) - Maybe move down a bit to x:260 y:288?
3. 00:19:288 (4) - Replace with two circles? so it more consistent, something same like this 00:17:388 (8,9,10) -

1. 00:34:589 (3) - Make it more curve, something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3565673, so the flow more fluent

1. 00:00:188 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Those rhythm kinda odd imo, how about try this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/jJ81F/d2b6244af0.jpg by following the guitar sound it'll more nicer to play

1. 00:03:388 (1) - Move to right a bit to x:328 y:160? then move this 00:04:588 (2) - to x:120 y:256
2. 00:04:988 (3) - Rather to use a 1/1 slider repeat, something like this might better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3565706
3. 00:06:588 (1) - Try that to stop on 00:08:588 - so it'll have enough recovery time 2 measurement http://puu.sh/jJ8fO/3fbe854b29.jpg
4. 00:12:388 (2,3,4) - The placement and the flow on reverse is kinda too complicated there imo, try something easier like http://puu.sh/jJ8lK/6d63ac9820.jpg

1. 00:26:188 (1) - Move down to x:52 y:324?

Mako Sakata wrote:

Nicee song

[Flying]

1. 00:04:188 (4) - Move to x:379 y:174?
2. 00:12:988 (4) - Move this -10 degree then move to x:380 y:324?
3. 00:13:588 (6,7,8) - In my opinion it'll look nicer if lower the spacing abit on those three, so can increase the readable of the triplet rhythm
4. 00:36:588 (4,5,1,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Lower the spacing? nerf it down seems good
   
   I feel this diff a bit overdone with several big jumps and spacing like 00:20:588 (4,5,1) - 00:37:588 (1,2,3) - 00:38:388 (1,2,3) - etc. I don't mention it all, I hope you can consider to lower some of those jumps ohhh, all fixed

[Insane]

1. 00:00:388 (2,3) - I guess it's better to replace both circle with 1/1 slider imo, something like this might good https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3565652
2. 00:06:188 (4) - Maybe move down a bit to x:260 y:288?
3. 00:19:288 (4) - Replace with two circles? so it more consistent, something same like this 00:17:388 (8,9,10) - here i about the same remaped qwq

[Harder]

1. 00:34:589 (3) - Make it more curve, something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3565673, so the flow more fluent fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:00:188 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Those rhythm kinda odd imo, how about try this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/jJ81F/d2b6244af0.jpg by following the guitar sound it'll more nicer to play fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:03:388 (1) - Move to right a bit to x:328 y:160? then move this 00:04:588 (2) - to x:120 y:256
2. 00:04:988 (3) - Rather to use a 1/1 slider repeat, something like this might better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3565706
3. 00:06:588 (1) - Try that to stop on 00:08:588 - so it'll have enough recovery time 2 measurement http://puu.sh/jJ8fO/3fbe854b29.jpg
4. 00:12:388 (2,3,4) - The placement and the flow on reverse is kinda too complicated there imo, try something easier like http://puu.sh/jJ8lK/6d63ac9820.jpg all fixed

[Easy]

1. 00:26:188 (1) - Move down to x:52 y:324? fixed

[]
Lower diff seems good, but to be honest, I'm more consider the gameplay on Insane and Flying diff. Try to find more feedback from the community and other bn~ ok ;w;

I hope that's help, goodluck! thx for modding and you star~!

Amori wrote:

[Flying]
00:16:188 (1) - 这个改成折返会不会爽一点因为00:16:388 - 有节拍 fixed
00:17:988 - 这个地方听着感觉不加点东西进去会很违和:W;加个note与00:18:188 (1) - 重合如何 fixed，不那个重合，我和00:18:388 (2) - 的滑条为重合了
[Insane]
00:16:788 (1) - NC fixed

能摸的都被摸了摸不动了，以上仅供参考

ZZHBOY wrote:

irc

15:36 *ZZHBOY is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/709280 Howard Goodall - Paris Taxi Ride [Flying]]
15:37 ZZHBOY: 00:10:188 - 这里接走错了
15:37 CoLouRed GlaZeE: .
15:37 ZZHBOY: 节奏错了
15:38 CoLouRed GlaZeE: ok 删了蓝线得了
15:38 ZZHBOY: 不是删蓝线
15:38 ZZHBOY: 你放节奏要跟音乐来
15:38 CoLouRed GlaZeE: 0.0
15:39 ZZHBOY: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3734109
15:39 ZZHBOY: 音乐应该是这样的
15:40 ZZHBOY: 00:14:488 - 这里似乎也有个音 我觉得可以不用空着
15:41 ZZHBOY: 00:15:688 (5) - 这里没音 放圈不妥当 建议把这个圈去了
15:41 ZZHBOY: 00:18:888 (3) - ^
15:42 ZZHBOY: 00:25:389 (1) - 这个跟后面太远了 建议放到184 184
15:42 ZZHBOY: 00:26:889 (3) - ^
15:43 ZZHBOY: 00:28:488 (8) - 和上面一个都感觉是overmap
15:43 ZZHBOY: 00:28:888 - 这里有音却空了
15:43 ZZHBOY: 00:32:088 - ^
15:43 ZZHBOY: 00:33:289 (3) - 这里也是音乐没音
15:44 ZZHBOY: 00:34:889 (8) - 这里没音 而且00:34:988 - 这里开始应该有连续1/4圈才对
15:45 ZZHBOY: 00:37:788 (3,3) - 最后这两个加速有点几把 建议最多用1.2x就足够了
15:45 ZZHBOY: 美丽 就这些 你改了和我说吧

Additional mod:
[General]
unused file: soft-sliderslide.wav, please remove it
hp setting is unreasonable, suggest to use 5.5 in Harder, 6.0 in Insane All fixed
[Hard]
00:12:988 (4,5,6) - here looks weird, try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3734215 fixed
00:20:888 (2) - consider to remove this circle, to create a better spread with neighbor diffs fixed


总感觉最后一个难度和easy有点多余 改好了和我说吧 0.0

ZZHBOY wrote:

let's fly :3

RVMathew wrote:

Good luck.

我最喜欢你的Beatmap.

1. Metadata source, if someone asking

1. 00:01:388 (4) - Imo that placement too far, yet the beat you're trying to follow not that strong, so maybe make it more close by moving that to x:452 y:68?
2. 00:02:188 (2) - Try to moving that a bit up to prevent unnecesarry overlap, maybe move to x:270 y:68?
3. 00:11:188 (4) - I think that need more spacing, so the flow from 00:10:788 (2,3,4) - less wierd. Maybe you can try to move that (4) to x:164 y:192?
4. 00:16:788 (2) - That placement kinda too sharp, imo it's not comfortable when move from 00:16:188 (1,2) - because we need to turn too sharp suddenly, I think you can move that (2) to x:125 y:89? It'll also improve the flow there
5. 00:19:388 (1) - About that slider shape on (1), I think you can do copy-paste the previous curve slider here 00:18:988 (3) - so the whole shape looks nicer http://puu.sh/kOfZp/450d8c4acb.jpg
6. 00:28:588 (7,8,1) - 00:17:388 (4,5,6) - Please stacked them more?
7. 00:28:988 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Kinda weird how's the flow on 00:29:588 (5,6,7,8,9) - it just turn too sharp too sudden imo. My sugestion you can try this pattern instead http://puu.sh/kOgcZ/ce73d685d6.jpg it'll flow better
8. 00:36:588 (4,5,1) - That just turn too sharp on (5,1). Try this pattern http://puu.sh/kOgka/3c4d2022ec.jpg

1. 00:03:588 (1,2,3) - Move them to x:452 y:132? then make this slider 00:04:188 (4,5) - more symetric? so the overall pattern like
2. 00:22:188 (4,5,6) - You can improve the flow there by rotate them by 40 degree and move to x:235 y:103? something like http://puu.sh/kOgRv/88e85b5615.jpg
3. 00:29:588 (2) - Try to have shape something like http://puu.sh/kOgVr/12843b9563.jpg? the end node on that (2) is on 128 y:254
4. 00:38:388 (1,2,3) - Please reduce the spacing on them. Try to have at least same spacing as the previous one like you did on 00:36:588 (4,5,1) - and 00:37:588 (1,2,3) - More consistent is better
5. 00:36:588 (4,1) - Swap NC?

1. 00:03:388 (1,2) - The rhythm should be like http://puu.sh/kOhg3/ccb73adcec.jpg because the beat on red tick here 00:03:588 - worth to be clicked. You can try this placement http://puu.sh/kOhm2/9a4ed59dc8.jpg

1. 00:06:588 (1) - That spinner will be better if endded on big tick here 00:08:188 -

1. 00:33:788 (2,3) - Spacing error

Mako Sakata wrote:

[General]

1. Metadata source, if someone asking _(:D」∠)_

[Flying]

1. 00:01:388 (4) - Imo that placement too far, yet the beat you're trying to follow not that strong, so maybe make it more close by moving that to x:452 y:68? I moved it to x:452 y:170
2. 00:02:188 (2) - Try to moving that a bit up to prevent unnecesarry overlap, maybe move to x:270 y:68? Fixed
3. 00:11:188 (4) - I think that need more spacing, so the flow from 00:10:788 (2,3,4) - less wierd. Maybe you can try to move that (4) to x:164 y:192? Fixed
4. 00:16:788 (2) - That placement kinda too sharp, imo it's not comfortable when move from 00:16:188 (1,2) - because we need to turn too sharp suddenly, I think you can move that (2) to x:125 y:89? It'll also improve the flow there Fixed
5. 00:19:388 (1) - About that slider shape on (1), I think you can do copy-paste the previous curve slider here 00:18:988 (3) - so the whole shape looks nicer http://puu.sh/kOfZp/450d8c4acb.jpg Fixed
6. 00:28:588 (7,8,1) - 00:17:388 (4,5,6) - Please stacked them more? No, because I don't know what does it means
7. 00:28:988 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Kinda weird how's the flow on 00:29:588 (5,6,7,8,9) - it just turn too sharp too sudden imo. My sugestion you can try this pattern instead http://puu.sh/kOgcZ/ce73d685d6.jpg it'll flow better Fixed
8. 00:36:588 (4,5,1) - That just turn too sharp on (5,1). Try this pattern http://puu.sh/kOgka/3c4d2022ec.jpg Fixed

[Insane]

1. 00:03:588 (1,2,3) - Move them to x:452 y:132? then make this slider 00:04:188 (4,5) - more symetric? so the overall pattern like
2. 00:22:188 (4,5,6) - You can improve the flow there by rotate them by 40 degree and move to x:235 y:103? something like http://puu.sh/kOgRv/88e85b5615.jpg Fixed
3. 00:29:588 (2) - Try to have shape something like http://puu.sh/kOgVr/12843b9563.jpg? the end node on that (2) is on 128 y:254 Fixed
4. 00:38:388 (1,2,3) - Please reduce the spacing on them. Try to have at least same spacing as the previous one like you did on 00:36:588 (4,5,1) - and 00:37:588 (1,2,3) - More consistent is better Fixed
5. 00:36:588 (4,1) - Swap NC? Fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:03:388 (1,2) - The rhythm should be like http://puu.sh/kOhg3/ccb73adcec.jpg because the beat on red tick here 00:03:588 - worth to be clicked. You can try this placement http://puu.sh/kOhm2/9a4ed59dc8.jpg Fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:06:588 (1) - That spinner will be better if endded on big tick here 00:08:188 - Fixed

[Easy]

1. 00:33:788 (2,3) - Spacing error Fixed

Shall I call you back? I need rebubbed, so I don't update now.

Mako Sakata wrote:

Checked, rebubble!

Regraz wrote:

As requested.

[Normal]
Do you have a specific reason to use tick-rate 2? 好吧，remap的时候没注意到这里 fixed

00:01:788 (2,1) - Why not make a blanket here? 这里难道没包到吗？

[Hard]
In the intro part where the music is quite smooth, large jumps like 00:02:588 (3,4) - 00:05:388 (2,3) - and so on oughtn't to be used. 有些跳改了，不过间距大一点没事吧？

00:16:988 (6) - There's a triplet at 00:17:588 You may map it out (Maybe use 1/4 repeat slider like your latter sections) 150bpm的hard节奏不用太紧吧？先不改

00:36:188 (1) - You don't need to NC here. fixed

[Insane]
In the intro part where the music is quite smooth, large jumps like 00:00:788 (3,1) - 00:03:988 (2,3) - should not be used. 改了一些

00:20:588 (4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - I am not sure if they could be counted as 1/4. Maybe you need to find pro modders. 这里我跟音乐的

00:26:188 (1,2) - Personally I disapprove this kind of pattern. Just personally. 为什么觉得不好呢

00:33:988 (2,3) - Avoid such slightly overlaps. fixed
==================================================================
The song is pretty nice, yet there's still space to improve distance consistency and pattern aesthetics in the top diff. 正在学这种整齐简洁的mapstyle，很喜欢

Good luck for your map!

Thanks for modding

1. 00:06:588 (1,2) - 這樣也不是不行 不過如果可以跟背面的note疊在一起的話看上去可以更整潔
2. 00:18:388 (2) - 可以拉拉錨點使滑條兩邊更平行
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:11:788 (1,2) - 這個有點太遠了 可以移到x428 y300跟00:10:988 (4) - 的尾巴stack一起
2. 00:13:588 (6) - 提早到紅線完結然後加個circle會較自然
3. 00:28:588 (7,1) - 之間可以有更高的spacing的 畢竟你這個難度也有用高spacing的1/2
4. 00:31:388 (5) - 這個1/1也是 可以放得遠離00:30:588 (4) - 一點 在00:29:588 (2,3) - 也有相似的距離 但是是1/2

Rizia wrote:

[Insane]

1. 00:06:588 (1,2) - 這樣也不是不行 不過如果可以跟背面的note疊在一起的話看上去可以更整潔 fixed
2. 00:18:388 (2) - 可以拉拉錨點使滑條兩邊更平行 fixed
   
   SPOILER

   

[Hard]

1. 00:11:788 (1,2) - 這個有點太遠了 可以移到x428 y300跟00:10:988 (4) - 的尾巴stack一起 确实有点太过了xixi fixed
2. 00:13:588 (6) - 提早到紅線完結然後加個circle會較自然 fixed
3. 00:28:588 (7,1) - 之間可以有更高的spacing的 畢竟你這個難度也有用高spacing的1/2 keep
4. 00:31:388 (5) - 這個1/1也是 可以放得遠離00:30:588 (4) - 一點 在00:29:588 (2,3) - 也有相似的距離 但是是1/2 keep 我只是保持下结构

除了hard有部份間距有模糊的感覺之外其他都沒什麼太問題
另外你metadata的puush link死了 fixed

Rizia wrote:

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check aimod unsnapped object

Rizia wrote:

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