Histoire wrote:

m4m with fort

C18H1283127831829p3471293412371NO3

[General]

1. Audio 100% throughout?
2. Combo colour 2 is way to dark, consider making it brighter?

[Fort's EXTERMINATION (gasp)]

1. i can't really do a good job on mapping this because damn its amazing already. these are all suggestions so feel free to reject any time~!
2. 00:11:636 (1,2,3) - blanket these 3?
3. 00:17:351 (1,3) - blanket this?
4. 00:20:208 (2) - fix overlap maybe?
5. 00:23:065 (1) - fix blanket ;w;
6. 00:23:922 (2) - fix overlap?
7. 02:11:708 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - i can see what you are doing here, but maybe too many spinners is exhausting to the player especially after all the intense stuff? maybe you can rework with sliderart? nope
8. 02:42:494 (1,1,1) - same again :/ nope
9. 02:48:208 (1) - if you are planning to keep the spinner, the SV might be too high here after killing arms from spinning. maybe change sv? fix spinner duration :3
10. 05:22:494 (1) - ? the 1 note is really awkward after the spinner spam :/

good luck for rank!

ohad1881 wrote:

[fort's diff]
00:11:636 - 00:28:779- don't you prefer a smaller volume for this part? like 65?
00:29:065 (2,4) - better blanket over here pls
00:37:922 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - is a nightcore on every second note is necessary?
01:41:636 (9) - mb you should do this slider like 01:41:922 (1,2) it'll you better i put that slider for some reason
01:53:351 (1) - not sure so much about this slider' i think it should be a note im gonna put this as noticeable slider, maybe will fix if people suggesting same suggestion
00:29:351 (3,2) - stack? no need i think
00:31:065 (1,2) - make the same slider?
00:39:065 - 00:48:208 65% vol 00:48:208 - 00:58:494 80% vol will set volume later
01:02:494 (3,4) - these two should be the same as the other sliders 1/2 1/2
01:12:494 (2) - ctrl g? i didnt put jump there lol
02:01:351 (9) - nc?
02:03:779 (2,3) - ctrl g? looks that stacked jump can be hard to read, i will keep this one
02:05:208 (3,4) - ^^ nice
02:11:636 - 02:48:208 vol 75% ^
02:54:065 (2,3,4) - stacking them will really stop the flow and the extremeness of this part, you hype with the 1/4 jumps and then suddenly you need to stop and triple :3 anyway, doing this will be much better imo http://prntscr.com/84x2wi but you need stamina to deal with that triplet so i put this one stacked D:
03:14:779 (3,4) - rotate 45 degrees maybe later
04:12:636 (8) - don't stack here it's the end of the hype and imo you should end it with a big jump sure
awesome map!
gl!

Fort wrote:

ohad1881 wrote:

[fort's diff]
00:11:636 - 00:28:779- don't you prefer a smaller volume for this part? like 65?
00:29:065 (2,4) - better blanket over here pls
00:37:922 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - is a nightcore on every second note is necessary?
01:41:636 (9) - mb you should do this slider like 01:41:922 (1,2) it'll you better i put that slider for some reason
01:53:351 (1) - not sure so much about this slider' i think it should be a note im gonna put this as noticeable slider, maybe will fix if people suggesting same suggestion
00:29:351 (3,2) - stack? no need i think
00:31:065 (1,2) - make the same slider?
00:39:065 - 00:48:208 65% vol 00:48:208 - 00:58:494 80% vol will set volume later
01:02:494 (3,4) - these two should be the same as the other sliders 1/2 1/2
01:12:494 (2) - ctrl g? i didnt put jump there lol
02:01:351 (9) - nc?
02:03:779 (2,3) - ctrl g? looks that stacked jump can be hard to read, i will keep this one
02:05:208 (3,4) - ^^ nice
02:11:636 - 02:48:208 vol 75% ^
02:54:065 (2,3,4) - stacking them will really stop the flow and the extremeness of this part, you hype with the 1/4 jumps and then suddenly you need to stop and triple :3 anyway, doing this will be much better imo http://prntscr.com/84x2wi but you need stamina to deal with that triplet so i put this one stacked D:
03:14:779 (3,4) - rotate 45 degrees maybe later
04:12:636 (8) - don't stack here it's the end of the hype and imo you should end it with a big jump sure
awesome map!
gl!

thanks for mod, ohad.
im fix all suggestion except red one :3

updated!

additional update:
+Temporary Hitsounding (70% hitsounded)

http://puu.sh/jDC5t/f9726af79a.txt

MrSergio wrote:

Little IRC with Fort

14:56 Fort: hello
14:56 MrSergio: o/
14:57 Fort: can i request testplay
14:57 *Fort is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/743080 Team Grimoire - C18H27NO3(extend)]
14:57 Fort: ?
14:57 Fort: please :3
14:57 MrSergio: lol, sure
14:57 MrSergio: Let me finish a thing here
14:57 Fort: okay nice one, thanks
14:58 MrSergio: 6.31 stars
14:58 MrSergio: Gonna die xD
14:58 Fort: full singletap
14:58 MrSergio: Do you mind if I put NF on just to be sure I finish it? xD
14:58 Fort: 210bpm
14:59 Fort: sure
15:05 MrSergio: My hand xD
15:05 Fort: lel
15:05 MrSergio: I was expecting the sldier stream part tho
15:05 Fort: how was it?
15:05 MrSergio: Nice flow
15:05 Fort: thanks
15:05 Fort: ummm can you give me some suggestion for this one?
15:06 MrSergio: Beside my poor aim atm, it was easy to understand
15:06 Fort: ayy
15:06 MrSergio: Wait, let me open the editor
15:06 MrSergio: Oh, SB~
15:09 Fort: haha
15:09 Fort: yeah sb
15:11 MrSergio: Hm... I can't really fdind anything on the go
15:11 MrSergio: find*
15:11 MrSergio: All the problems I saw while playing where just misreadings
15:11 Fort: lmao this map is ready for rank?
15:11 Fort: missreadings?
15:11 Fort: where
15:11 MrSergio: From me xD
15:11 MrSergio: Because I had the wrong combo colors xD
15:11 Fort: hue
15:12 MrSergio: From the editor it looked fine
15:12 Fort: how about on gameplay?
15:15 MrSergio: 03:09:065 (2,3,1,2) - This is the only part where you do a back-and-fort pattern, while all the others have circular pattern, like 03:00:208 (1,2,1,2) - or 03:02:494 (1,2,1,2) -
15:15 MrSergio: I mean, on the same sound
15:15 MrSergio: I expected another circular pattern there too
15:15 MrSergio: During gameplay
15:16 Fort: ummm okay
15:16 MrSergio: But I guess that pattern was due to lack of space, since you got in the corner of the screen
15:21 Fort: okay im gonna do this
15:21 MrSergio: The rest, really, looks fine for me
15:21 MrSergio: All patterns are consistent and readable
15:22 Fort: hard to thinking that pattern
15:22 MrSergio: I'm not a BN, and maybe some little things still need fixing, but imo it's a great map
15:23 Fort: little things?
15:23 Fort: what's that? just curious :3
15:24 MrSergio: Little things I don't notice xD
15:24 Fort: yeh
15:24 MrSergio: If you give me an afternoon I'm able to find all sort of useless stuff to say xD
15:24 Fort: hahaha
15:24 MrSergio: Anyway, that's it :3
15:25 Fort: okay thanks for this one, im fixed this thing
15:25 Fort: post this log please
15:25 MrSergio: Sure~
15:25 MrSergio: For what xD
15:25 MrSergio: I said just one thing lol
15:25 Fort: im gonna reply on thread
15:25 MrSergio: As you wish~

Fort wrote:

MrSergio wrote:

Little IRC with Fort

14:56 Fort: hello
14:56 MrSergio: o/
14:57 Fort: can i request testplay
14:57 *Fort is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/743080 Team Grimoire - C18H27NO3(extend)]
14:57 Fort: ?
14:57 Fort: please :3
14:57 MrSergio: lol, sure
14:57 MrSergio: Let me finish a thing here
14:57 Fort: okay nice one, thanks
14:58 MrSergio: 6.31 stars
14:58 MrSergio: Gonna die xD
14:58 Fort: full singletap
14:58 MrSergio: Do you mind if I put NF on just to be sure I finish it? xD
14:58 Fort: 210bpm
14:59 Fort: sure
15:05 MrSergio: My hand xD
15:05 Fort: lel
15:05 MrSergio: I was expecting the sldier stream part tho
15:05 Fort: how was it?
15:05 MrSergio: Nice flow
15:05 Fort: thanks
15:05 Fort: ummm can you give me some suggestion for this one?
15:06 MrSergio: Beside my poor aim atm, it was easy to understand
15:06 Fort: ayy
15:06 MrSergio: Wait, let me open the editor
15:06 MrSergio: Oh, SB~
15:09 Fort: haha
15:09 Fort: yeah sb
15:11 MrSergio: Hm... I can't really fdind anything on the go
15:11 MrSergio: find*
15:11 MrSergio: All the problems I saw while playing where just misreadings
15:11 Fort: lmao this map is ready for rank?
15:11 Fort: missreadings?
15:11 Fort: where
15:11 MrSergio: From me xD
15:11 MrSergio: Because I had the wrong combo colors xD
15:11 Fort: hue
15:12 MrSergio: From the editor it looked fine
15:12 Fort: how about on gameplay?
15:15 MrSergio: 03:09:065 (2,3,1,2) - This is the only part where you do a back-and-fort pattern, while all the others have circular pattern, like 03:00:208 (1,2,1,2) - or 03:02:494 (1,2,1,2) -
15:15 MrSergio: I mean, on the same sound
15:15 MrSergio: I expected another circular pattern there too
15:15 MrSergio: During gameplay
15:16 Fort: ummm okay
15:16 MrSergio: But I guess that pattern was due to lack of space, since you got in the corner of the screen
15:21 Fort: okay im gonna do this
15:21 MrSergio: The rest, really, looks fine for me
15:21 MrSergio: All patterns are consistent and readable
15:22 Fort: hard to thinking that pattern
15:22 MrSergio: I'm not a BN, and maybe some little things still need fixing, but imo it's a great map
15:23 Fort: little things?
15:23 Fort: what's that? just curious :3
15:24 MrSergio: Little things I don't notice xD
15:24 Fort: yeh
15:24 MrSergio: If you give me an afternoon I'm able to find all sort of useless stuff to say xD
15:24 Fort: hahaha
15:24 MrSergio: Anyway, that's it :3
15:25 Fort: okay thanks for this one, im fixed this thing
15:25 Fort: post this log please
15:25 MrSergio: Sure~
15:25 MrSergio: For what xD
15:25 MrSergio: I said just one thing lol
15:25 Fort: im gonna reply on thread
15:25 MrSergio: As you wish~

uh my post didnt posted, lol.
thanks for this one :3

here we go the update
http://puu.sh/jKSJu/319051f741.osu

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  You know, you make it very challenging to mod a map when it's already perfect. 10/10

Nyan wrote:

[Taiko]

00:56:494 (11) - k

05:21:922 (3) - d

05:24:494 (1) - k

05:26:494 (3) - d

05:31:065 (3) - d

Oh I cannot find any fatal problems! This mod is just a suggestion.

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

move to graveyard

all BN busy

NlHIL wrote:

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

move to graveyard

all BN busy

depressed ;w;

Bruce wrote:

OK Short check here(Mania)

[4K]
01:16:208 - Add 1 more Hold likes 01:16:065 -

01:34:494 (94494|2,94636|0) - Ctrl+J Seems more comfortable.

01:43:636 (103636|2) - Change this to Hold.The same long sound likes 01:43:779 (103779|3) -

03:18:351 (198351|1,198351|0,198494|2,198494|3,198636|1,198636|0) - Ctrl+H Becuz 03:18:208 (198208|2,198208|3,198351|0,198351|1) - are the same can make outstanding

04:03:636 - ~ 04:04:494 - Suggest you use hold or delete 1 Note here. The beat are not too heavy.needn't triple here.

04:13:351 - Suggest you start 1/8 here.

04:38:494 - Double holds likes before.

[7K]
Good.


Call me back to icon if you finished fix

Bruce wrote:

Piano'd. Congrats

Starry- wrote:

Reverted the piano icon.

rtech wrote:

Nooooo. Fort's diff was good ;_;

-[C R A Z Y]- wrote:

I love this map and song... Rank Rank! :3/

Rivals_7 wrote:

Uh just notice something........
The banner on your first post said "TeamGrimoire" with no spacebar
But you wrote the artist as "Team Grimoire" with spacebar

Idk which one are true tho but https://osu.ppy.sh/s/326079 used "TeamGrimoire"

Rivals_7 wrote:

Ah....... so the artist in croix was wrong then.....
just curious why starry didnt mention that on his dq post xD (o wait, you even bubbled that map xD)

Sorry for bothering your thread xD. Have a nice day and good luck with getting ranked.

psst, have my stars xD

ExUsagi wrote:

placeholder for check.. #1 by bruce right?

MEGAtive wrote:

New Files of the SB Extract into the SB folder
The .osb file

Additional Info:
Delete "bgBLUE", "bgGRAY", "bgRED", "bgYELLOW". I use a Storyboard script to manipulate the colors