Hello M4M~
[General]
Nice~
Good Luck!
[General]
- Add the English version of source to the tags
- Uncheck Countdown, Widescreen, and Letterbox during breaks in all diff
- 00:28:985 (2) - Nazi, fix blanket
- 00:39:573 (3,4) - The curve might be useless because it's too small . Maybe you want to make them into straight sliders . If you want to keep this curved, at least, give a more curve to them . Maybe curving them like this is enough for me
- 00:40:455 (4) - Also, if you apply my mod above about the slider's curve, you should move this slider 2 grid higher to make a better flow with the previous slider
- 00:02:073 (3) - Placement made this flow 00:00:750 (1,2,3) - seems likely becomes too dense, and slightly hard to read imo . Move it to somewhere else to avoid the problems
- 00:03:397 - Better to map this section . the current one, you placed it with slider tail isn't looks good to emphasize it . Also, put new combo here 00:03:838 (1) - seems like there's something missing on it because the more likely must be have NC is on this section . Please consider to map this out
- 00:14:646 (3) - Same as top above
- 00:17:514 - Please consider to map the triplet rhythm that could be heard around this mentioned section . You map out this section 00:19:279 (4) - which has the same rhythm like the first one, that's why I recommend you to map the previous one for consistency sake
- 00:27:220 - Put the cymbal sound at the tail of slider { 00:26:779 (3) - } isn't perfectly emphasis the sound, especially this sound is appears at the downbeat . Try to shorten this slider 00:26:779 (3) - into 1/2, then you could map this 00:27:220 - as a slider or a circle . I'd rather to use this pattern instead
- 00:47:624 (5,6) - I know that you want to emphasis the drum sound that appears on these circles better, but how about let it plays on this slider 00:47:293 (4) - ? These pattern is kinda hard imo, so I prefer to to use my suggestion to replace it
- 01:15:529 (3,4,5) - ^
- 00:37:808 (1) - Parallel up this slider with 00:38:249 (2) - ? It would creates some nice flow here
- 00:38:249 (2) - I'd rather to place them at the lower side, to easily read by some people . Looks a bit hard to turn out the movement after you played 00:40:014 (3) - suddenly to them
- 01:17:735 (6) - With the same reason as above, bend this slider to the opposite side . It would creates better transition from 01:17:293 (3) - and to 01:18:176 (7) -
- 01:25:014 (5,6,7) - Place them on 264|184? Slightly increase the gameplay performances on movement
Nice~
Good Luck!