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Laura Brehm & Evoke - Future Holds

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DahplA
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DahplA

Lumael wrote:

Hello! As your request:

[Alpha's Easy]
  1. In this diff you used the sampleset custom 2 but there isn't any file with that sampleset number, are you planning to add some or it was supposed to be custom 1 or even default? Oops
  2. Where are the finishes?! You could add every new combo on this diff and it would be fine. Finishes are essencial to mark song transitions! But there is literally 0 cymbal sounds in the song.
  3. 00:26:652 (2,3) - This is a bit hard to play for low rank players as 00:27:005 (3) - this slider starts in a very soft beat, looks like a downbeat even being on the tall white tick, which makes it a little hard to get 300 points, I found it really weird to play. You could easily fix that by Control Ging 00:26:652 (2,3) - which will play much better which the current rhythm. This isse happens quite oftenly, and imo it would play much better if you control G all the simillar sections ...That beat ain't soft my friend. It's very audible and I do not want to fill up my difficulty with sliderend downbeats.
  4. 01:47:475 (1,2,3,4) - I'm not yet concerned about the usage of the polarity here, it follows pretty well the vocals but tbh it's losing all the drums which makes it awful to play imo (This issue happens again on the next kiai) Can't help it. I am mapping this mostly (if not, the whole thing) to the vocals. I've seen other Easy's completely disregard hitsounds and use some other wacky stuff. This for the most part is going well.
  5. 01:59:652 (2,3) - This gap is really confusing for an Easy and I was recommended by a QAT to avoid the most them on Easy diff. People who play easy diffs usually don't have the ability to read the approach circle well, and this is the only way to make them realize that this gap isn't 1/1 as usual (This issue happens again on the next kiai) Fixed both. Hopefully I got the right one on the second kiai
  6. 02:00:887 (4) - I know that perfecting blankets is something foolish most of the times but it never costs too much to fix when it's easy right? By moving this slider to 388|56 you could easily fix this tiny issue. Don't forget to adjust the spacing for the next notes accordinly Too late. I moved it because of another note before.
Thank you.

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osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Evoke & Laura Brehm - Future Holds.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 67946
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 2.2

[Metadata]
Title:Future Holds
TitleUnicode:Future Holds
Artist:Laura Brehm & Evoke
ArtistUnicode:Laura Brehm & Evoke
Creator:Yoges
Version:Alpha's Easy
Source:
Tags:Alden electronic female vocalist deep emotional hoen andrei7 DahplA single
BeatmapID:781869
BeatmapSetID:344391

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.899999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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Lumael
1,520 posts
Joined December 2014
Lumael
I added some finishes myself to see how they would work and they worked finely
Makeli
932 posts
Joined October 2013
Makeli
Yo! From my queue. Decided to do this mod now since I'm so fucking bored.

[General]
Nothing here lol

[Insane]

  1. My eye tells me that at least some of your blankets are 1mm off. (This was totally worth mentioning)
  2. 00:32:299 (4,5) - This feels a bit weird imo. I would stack 4 and 5 and then move 00:32:299 (4,5,6) - these all down a bit
  3. 00:53:828 (1,2) - This kind of slider curving just looks bad to my eye. I would just remove the middle point from both. I saw this kind of slider curving/placement later too but this stood out to my the most for some weird reason the mankind will never get to know.
  4. 01:15:358 (8) - I would ctrl+g this and move it up with 1.2x ds
  5. 02:33:358 (3) - This is really sharp. Too sharp.
  6. 03:07:593 (1,2) - This just felt weird again imo. Here's what I'd do:
    Highlighted notes
  7. 03:16:417 (1) - Not that this is too sharp but it still is sharp
  8. 03:39:005 (2,4) - I would ctrl+h these but that's totally not necessary
  9. I love this diff. This diff was already so good so the things I pointed out in this are pretty much just things that I would do so there's definitely no need for these.

[andrei7's Hard]

  1. My eye tells me that at least some of your blankets too are 1mm off.
  2. 00:50:828 (6) - You have stacked before so why not here?
  3. 02:27:005 (1,2,3) - Um uhh... um idk about this
  4. 02:35:299 (7,1) - Stack?
  5. 03:48:534 (4,5) - ^
  6. Sorry, I'm not too good at modding anything lower than insane but hey I'm doing my best to improve

[Hoen's Normal]

  1. SV changes :o
  2. 00:40:417 (2) - This blanket is just off. My blanket eye noticed this very easily.
  3. 02:34:769 (1) - This really caught my eye that the turn in this slider is that sharp. Maybe just make it a little less sharp?
  4. The end just made this map a lot harder lol

[Alpha's Easy]

  1. My blanket eye tells me that most of your blankets are fine but I think it noticed still some. Maybe.
  2. Check AiMod there's one note not ds'd correctly
  3. Too good for me

All in all this mapset is too fucking good for me to even make a decent mod on this. Idc if you even ignore all of my suggestions and don't give me kudosu.
In my eyes this set could be ranked if not for the sv changes in normal diff.
Have some stars.
Yoges
896 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Yoges
Cheers for the stars. I'll respond to your mod tomorrow cause I'm in bed now.
DahplA
1,099 posts
Joined March 2014
DahplA
@Maakkeli: Didn't find the unsnapped note in AIMod, all blankets look fine so far. Thanks anyways.
Lumael
1,520 posts
Joined December 2014
Lumael
Yoges I will take a look at your diff soon, but no kds for it
Makeli
932 posts
Joined October 2013
Makeli

DahplA wrote:

@Maakkeli: Didn't find the unsnapped note in AIMod, all blankets look fine so far. Thanks anyways.
http://puu.sh/kft40/35ce71ec2c.jpg

Idk but when I checked it still showed me this.
Lumael
1,520 posts
Joined December 2014
Lumael
andrei7:

01:15:887 (6,7) - Control G here would improve a lot the gameplay, the current upbeat slider is hard to get 300 points as I could notice while playing it, it starts in a downbeat which is very soft here making the strong beat unclickable which is a shame 01:12:887 (6,7,8) - Is there a problem here, then? you did not mention it, so it will be fine, I hope.

Bold is the problem
DahplA
1,099 posts
Joined March 2014
DahplA

Maakkeli wrote:

DahplA wrote:

@Maakkeli: Didn't find the unsnapped note in AIMod, all blankets look fine so far. Thanks anyways.
http://puu.sh/kft40/35ce71ec2c.jpg

Idk but when I checked it still showed me this.
http://puu.sh/kfvkq/8cb5d7af70.PNG

Weird...I think it's these notes 00:46:064 (2,3) - which are completely fine. That is strange though.
Yoges
896 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Yoges

Maakkeli wrote:

Yo! From my queue. Decided to do this mod now since I'm so fucking bored.

[General]
Nothing here lol

[Insane]

  1. My eye tells me that at least some of your blankets are 1mm off. (This was totally worth mentioning) I hate nazis
  2. 00:32:299 (4,5) - This feels a bit weird imo. I would stack 4 and 5 and then move 00:32:299 (4,5,6) - these all down a bit Nah
  3. 00:53:828 (1,2) - This kind of slider curving just looks bad to my eye. I would just remove the middle point from both. I saw this kind of slider curving/placement later too but this stood out to my the most for some weird reason the mankind will never get to know. That looks better actually
  4. 01:15:358 (8) - I would ctrl+g this and move it up with 1.2x ds Nah
  5. 02:33:358 (3) - This is really sharp. Too sharp. Adjusted
  6. 03:07:593 (1,2) - This just felt weird again imo. Here's what I'd do:
    Highlighted notes

    Nah
  7. 03:16:417 (1) - Not that this is too sharp but it still is sharp That one's fine
  8. 03:39:005 (2,4) - I would ctrl+h these but that's totally not necessary Nah the DS would make less sense than it already does
  9. I love this diff. OuO This diff was already so good so the things I pointed out in this are pretty much just things that I would do so there's definitely no need for these.
lit120
3,254 posts
Joined August 2013
lit120
hi. i will mod insane diff only, sorry, since i'm lazy to mod other diffs D:

[Insane]
  1. i think you should add clap like 00:23:475 (4) - head, 00:24:887 (5) - head, 00:26:299 (3) - head, and so on
  2. 00:22:770 (1) - a perfect start to use finish
  3. 00:34:064 (1) - finish
  4. 00:47:475 (6) - aim this slider end to 12|128
  5. 00:56:652 (5) - finish
  6. 01:07:946 (1) - ^
  7. 01:14:299 (4,5) - improve this blanket a little bit
  8. 01:19:240 (1) - finish
  9. 01:44:652 (1) - finish
  10. 01:55:946 (7) - finish head
  11. 02:29:475 (4) - stack this to (1) tail
  12. 02:58:064 (1) - finish
  13. 03:09:358 (7) - finish on head
  14. 03:33:005 (1) - why not start this one at blue tick? even though, it keeps going until 03:34:397 - (end it here)
  15. 03:40:064 (1) - same thing from what i said
  16. 03:44:299 (1) - ^
  17. 03:51:358 (1) - ^ and use clap
  18. 03:54:534 (2) - finish head
  19. 03:59:299 (8) - NC this, since you changed the slider speed
  20. 04:05:828 (1) - finish head
that's all. GL!
Yoges
896 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Yoges

-Hakurei- wrote:

hi. i will mod insane diff only, sorry, since i'm lazy to mod other diffs D:

[Insane]
  1. i think you should add clap like 00:23:475 (4) - head, 00:24:887 (5) - head, 00:26:299 (3) - head, and so on Oh yeah shit I forgot to hitsound properly lol
  2. 00:22:770 (1) - a perfect start to use finish Good idea
  3. 00:34:064 (1) - finish Done
  4. 00:47:475 (6) - aim this slider end to 12|128 w0t?
  5. 00:56:652 (5) - finish Done
  6. 01:07:946 (1) - ^ Done
  7. 01:14:299 (4,5) - improve this blanket a little bit I hate jews
  8. 01:19:240 (1) - finish Done
  9. 01:44:652 (1) - finish Done
  10. 01:55:946 (7) - finish head Done
  11. 02:29:475 (4) - stack this to (1) tail Done
  12. 02:58:064 (1) - finish Done
  13. 03:09:358 (7) - finish on head Done
  14. 03:33:005 (1) - why not start this one at blue tick? even though, it keeps going until 03:34:397 - (end it here) Nah
  15. 03:40:064 (1) - same thing from what i said ^
  16. 03:44:299 (1) - ^ ^
  17. 03:51:358 (1) - ^ and use clap Only added clap
  18. 03:54:534 (2) - finish head Done
  19. 03:59:299 (8) - NC this, since you changed the slider speed Done
  20. 04:05:828 (1) - finish head Done


that's all. GL!
Yoges
896 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Yoges
New Diffs + New Diff names
Easy = New Diff
Alpha's Easy => Alpha's Normal
Hoen's Normal => Hoen's Advanced
andrei's Hard = Same
Insane = Same
Yoges
896 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Yoges
Temporarily responding for Hoen as he is having internet issues.

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Hoen's Normal
[ Hoen's Normal] Hi Hoen! \(ºuº Well... this diff is pretty well made but I'd like you to explain two things before digging into the map. First, I'd like to know why you set up different SV changes despite knowing you were mapping a Normal diff which, according to Ranking Criteria, it doesn't allow to make these abrupt changes in the SV. The main reason is that if the song doesn't suggest to reduce the SV, the lower diffs shouldn't do it. So, please, it would make more sense if you keep the SV during the whole song to not mislead players into confusing flows.
  1. Increase the OD diff by +1 to have consistency between the Easy and the Hard diffs. Increased to 4.2
  2. The hitsounds of the beginning are a bit noisy. Mostly because of the claps and finish of the objects. So It would be better if you reduce a bit the general vol to 50%. You could keep the 60% of vol on the kiai time. Decreased to 45%
  3. Remove these unnecessary green lines. (I'm not touching the ones you change the SV): 03:59:299 - 03:59:828 - 03:20:652 - That one's to stop the kiai 02:49:593 - Others removed
  4. 00:26:299 (2,3) Fix the DS between these objects, it should go on 1.68x as well as you did here 00:25:593 (1,2) to keep consistency. There's nothing wrong with the spacing. And DS doesn't matter all that much any more since it's an advanced now.
  5. 00:26:828 (3) The way you give the rhythm in this section plays good. But you're missing some important beats that can't be avoided. For example, here 00:27:181 there's a very noticeable drum beat and it's avoided by the slider. It would flow better if you try out to don't skip that beat. What about this? 85 BPM so it's a blue tick now
  6. 00:39:711 (1,2) The current flow plays good but you could fix that blanket to improve the visual pattern. Fixed
  7. 00:46:946 (3) the way you place the slider's end point is not the proper one. Because the cursor would have to into a non-intuitive flow to follow the rhythm. I think it would flow better if you place the slider followig the following points. For example. It's excusable now cause advanced
  8. 00:49:593 (3) Place this slider here x=252|y=248 to improve the readability of the pattern. The current one is a bit odd. No that's even more odd
  9. 00:59:475 (1) The red point of this slider doesn't make sense if it's placed at the slider's end. Visually this look ugly and this is not following the drums/vocals as it should. It would be more logic if it would've followed the vocals change, like this. Done
  10. 01:00:534 (3) The rhythm doesn't play good here because you're avoiding such as important drum/vocals beats as these ones 01:00:711 - 01:00:887 with that 1/1 slider . This would play better if you try out to don't miss those beats by placing a 1/2 slider here 01:00:534 and 1/1 slider 01:00:887. For example. Added circles instead
  11. 01:01:593 (5,1) Just a minor suggestion, but the blanket is off. You could make something cleaner like this to develop the flow. I fixed the off blanket but I won't do a straight going into a curve
  12. 01:05:828 (2,3) The way you give rhythm in this part doesn't flow good. As it seems you're following the vocals, the song has more emphasis in the drum beats which are really important to emphasize. Examples of them are these two 01:06:358 - 01:06:711 . It would sound better if you add a circle here 01:06:358 and a 1/2 slider here 01:06:711 as well as you did in this previous part 00:57:711 (2,3) . iIt would look like this Blue ticks
  13. 01:16:417 (1,2) Move the slider's end point 4 grids to the right to fix the flow. The current one is a bit compelled and it's not following the flow. Done
  14. 01:19:240 (1,1) The way you split the NC combing here doesn't make sense if song doesn't claim for it. I think it would look better if you remove the NC in this slider 01:20:299 (1) to not confuse players about random combings. Removed the first NC instead
  15. 01:24:887 (1,1) Same occurs here. Please, remove the NC here 01:25:946 (1) to improve the pattern. ^
  16. 01:47:475 (1) This 2/1 slider doesn't assert the main rhythm here. I know you were following the vocals, but it would make more sense if you follow the drums as you did with the previous patterns. So that means it would play better if you convert that slider into a 1/1 and add a reverse to improve the rhytmn in this section. Like this Not going to apply that change Crap, I just realised the kiai is full of blues... Aw well. Advanced!
  17. 01:50:299 (1) This isn't not a big issue but It would flow better if try a circular flow with this slider to keep the flow with the previous slider. For example. Done
  18. 01:51:711 (1) The way you split the NC would make more sense if the next pattern wouldn't have had 6 objects. I think it would look better if you remove the NC here and add NC in the next circle 01:53:475 (2) . Added NC to 01:53:828 (1) - Instead
  19. 02:01:593 (1) This slider would look better if you folow the following line of the default skin. In that order of ideas, it should look like this. Changed
  20. 02:07:946 Just a minor suggestion, but the "break" should be snapped here 02:07:946 . As it is shown in this pic. Done
  21. 02:29:122 (1) Remove NC here to keep consistency with the NC combing. I see no sense by setting the NC here despite knowing the NC combing you manage during the whole song. Re-NCd the whole section
  22. 02:29:122 (1) The slider's flow of thispart doesn't fir properly. It would make more sense if you keep the rounded flow of the previous slider that it might end with an intuitive flow like this. Done
  23. 02:34:769 (1,2) The red point of this slider would look better if you have followed the flow here. A pattern like this would make stuffs smoother. Done
  24. 02:34:769 (1) Remove NC here to keep consistency. I Re-NCd the section
  25. 02:35:475 (2) Add NC here. ^
  26. 02:39:887 (3) The flow doesn't circulate well here. It would make mroe sense if the slider's end leads to the players that the next note will be up to it. Try doing Ctrl + J in this slider to fix it. Done
  27. 03:04:240 I highly suggest to add a note to don't miss an important drum beat of this section. I'll leave nothing here
  28. 03:32:299 (2) This could look better if you follow the vocals. Try to make this 1/1 slider and make the spinner starts on 03:32:828 and end on 03:34:769. Fixed
No changes from lumies mod.
DahplA
1,099 posts
Joined March 2014
DahplA
Update. Please double check to see if everything is fine.
osu file format v14

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sheela
2,651 posts
Joined October 2011
sheela


Hello Yoges!

[General]

  1. soft-hitfinish.wav has a delay, so here's a new file: http://puu.sh/kifwM/1004a8b3b3.wav
  2. The BG is bad quality to me. How about you try this background?
    Image
  3. 02:07:946 - 03:21:358 - It looks really weird when you start a break on the upbeat when it doesn't follow anything in the music in my opinion. I would just let the break closer to its previous object. The music lets the rhythm flow, so having the break on the white tick isn't best.
[Easy]

  1. 03:47:475 to the end - The hitsounds are inaudible and needs to have the volume increased. Having nearly silent hitsounds don't give a proper feedback to the players. And after 03:54:534 you don't seem to have any hitsounds, so you should try to get the same volume and add hitsounds as Insane.


[Alpha's Normal]

  1. 00:22:770 - Remove the inherited point as they don't allow unless for special purposes.
Can't really say anything else. That's a good Normal!

[Hoen's Advanced]

  • 01:09:711 (3,1) - 01:15:711 (3,1) - It's so weird when I play them. It felt making you stop uncomfortably your play, and I think it needs a change. Personally, I would move the long sliders somewhere else with a distance of 1.0x.
  1. 02:27:005 (5) - Just move this two pixels to the left and it should get a better blanket with 02:26:299 (4,5) .
[andrei7's Hard]

  1. 00:24:887 (5,6) - You might want to keep the constant distance for those hitcircles, so 1.0x. Players can be confused after 00:25:240 (6) has appeared because it can be acted as a 1/2 rhythm.
  2. 00:50:828 (6,1) - How about you stack those two objects? It looks like a 1/4 if you place it like that.
  3. 00:53:475 (7,1) - I do not see a reason on reducing the distance here. It's better if you keep the same 1.0x distance.
  4. 01:10:417 (5) - I don't like when this hitcircle is overlapped by 01:10:064 (4) . It brings a little more obscurity and might be hard to see. You should try to move this somewhere like x:378 y:40, yet this is subjective.
    This also applies to 01:55:240 (7,8) - 02:26:299 (7,8) .
  5. 01:17:652 (3) - Move this more down because it's touching the bar.
  6. 01:28:769 (3) - I think you should add a new combo because you changed the rhythm that has gaps, and I hit too earlier 01:29:299 (4) .
  7. 02:27:181 (2,3) - A similar case here, the short distance doesn't seem to follow anything with the music, and the movement makes it uncomfortable to play. Try to move this to x:49 y:347
  8. 02:35:299 (7,1) - If you have the hitcircle (1) off of 02:35:299 (7) in my opinion it emphasizes better with the strong beat on 02:35:475 .
[Insane]

  1. 01:18:887 (2,1) - Perhaps add more distance in-between? That way, the jump will emphasize the strong cymbal beat on 01:19:240 (1) . If you edit something there, maybe 01:18:534 (1,2) should get a lesser distance to emphasize better the jump on (2,1).
  2. 01:22:769 (4) - This may be nazi, but it felt like weird when I played this. Just move this more to the right to get a distance of 1.0x ~ 1.05x.
  3. 01:44:652 to 01:56:652 - The new combo pattern is different than 01:56:652 and later, but that pattern doesn't go well with the rhythm. I suggest you revise the pattern with a pattern that has a new combo on the main downbeat, so the first downbeat in a measure.
  4. 01:55:946 (7) - I think this should have a new combo since there's a finish hitsound, so it fits better in my opinion.
    This also applies to 02:29:828 (5) - 03:09:358 (7) .
  5. 02:38:299 (1,2,3,4) - When the distance is not constant, the pattern doesn't look pretty, in my opinion. If you use the Distance Snap tool, you should get a beautiful pattern. You should be able to obtain this:
    Placement
  6. 03:07:240 (5,1) - Similar a previous case, yet this is not consistent with distance, and plays uncomfortably. Try moving the slider to x:164 y:131.
  7. 03:09:711 (8,1) - The movement doesn't flow very well to me. A good way to fix it is I think to rotate 03:09:711 (8) 90° and add a node to make a curve that goes up.
Nothing much to say about this difficulty. You've done a good job!

This should be it. I see a potential quality in your map, so let me know when you have applied my mod.
Yoges
896 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Yoges

sheela901 wrote:



Hello Yoges! Wow... First time one of my beatmaps got an Icon.

[General]

  1. soft-hitfinish.wav has a delay, so here's a new file: http://puu.sh/kifwM/1004a8b3b3.wav Thanks! ^^
  2. The BG is bad quality to me. How about you try this background? I'll use this one for the moment but I might change it in future.
    Image
  3. 02:07:946 - 03:21:358 - It looks really weird when you start a break on the upbeat when it doesn't follow anything in the music in my opinion. I would just let the break closer to its previous object. The music lets the rhythm flow, so having the break on the white tick isn't best. I fixed them?


[Easy]

  1. 03:47:475 to the end - The hitsounds are inaudible and needs to have the volume increased. Having nearly silent hitsounds don't give a proper feedback to the players. And after 03:54:534 you don't seem to have any hitsounds, so you should try to get the same volume and add hitsounds as Insane.
Kept 03:31:593 (1) - Quiet as i think silent HS suit the music in this part. HS'd everything passed 03:54:534 (1) - at 60% Vol

[Hoen's Advanced]

  • 01:09:711 (3,1) - 01:15:711 (3,1) - It's so weird when I play them. It felt making you stop uncomfortably your play, and I think it needs a change. Personally, I would move the long sliders somewhere else with a distance of 1.0x. I'll have a look at those again tomorrow. I have to go to sleep soon
  1. 02:27:005 (5) - Just move this two pixels to the left and it should get a better blanket with 02:26:299 (4,5) . Done
[Insane]

  1. 01:18:887 (2,1) - Perhaps add more distance in-between? That way, the jump will emphasize the strong cymbal beat on 01:19:240 (1) . If you edit something there, maybe 01:18:534 (1,2) should get a lesser distance to emphasize better the jump on (2,1). Changed to your mod
  2. 01:22:769 (4) - This may be nazi, but it felt like weird when I played this. Just move this more to the right to get a distance of 1.0x ~ 1.05x. Done
  3. 01:44:652 to 01:56:652 - The new combo pattern is different than 01:56:652 and later, but that pattern doesn't go well with the rhythm. I suggest you revise the pattern with a pattern that has a new combo on the main downbeat, so the first downbeat in a measure. Re-NCd the section
  4. 01:55:946 (7) - I think this should have a new combo since there's a finish hitsound, so it fits better in my opinion.
    This also applies to 02:29:828 (5) - 03:09:358 (7) . Done
  5. 02:38:299 (1,2,3,4) - When the distance is not constant, the pattern doesn't look pretty, in my opinion. If you use the Distance Snap tool, you should get a beautiful pattern. You should be able to obtain this: Yeah, I get into fights with DS when I'm making insanes. Fixed now.
    Placement
  6. 03:07:240 (5,1) - Similar a previous case, yet this is not consistent with distance, and plays uncomfortably. Try moving the slider to x:164 y:131. Done
  7. 03:09:711 (8,1) - The movement doesn't flow very well to me. A good way to fix it is I think to rotate 03:09:711 (8) 90° and add a node to make a curve that goes up. Not quite sure what you mean here. Could you take a screenshot and show me?
Nothing much to say about this difficulty. You've done a good job!

This should be it. I see a potential quality in your map, so let me know when you have applied my mod. I'll send you a message when the other mappers have responded ^^ Holy shit i got a fucking star...
sheela
2,651 posts
Joined October 2011
sheela

Yoges wrote:

sheela901 wrote:

  1. 03:09:711 (8,1) - The movement doesn't flow very well to me. A good way to fix it is I think to rotate 03:09:711 (8) 90° and add a node to make a curve that goes up. Not quite sure what you mean here. Could you take a screenshot and show me?
http://puu.sh/kiqQq/a48e9b6e50.jpg | As you can see, the flow will get better for 03:09:711 (2,1) . I also suggest you reduce the distance between 03:09:358 (1,2) a little; it's kind of random in my opinion. So maybe if you stack it with the tail of 03:08:298 (4) it would be great.
DahplA
1,099 posts
Joined March 2014
DahplA
That was a quick mod. Thank you.

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kirinokirino
354 posts
Joined June 2011
kirinokirino
update my diff please
sorry sheela901

ED: OR WAIT, LET ME APPLY ALL MODS FIRST

ED: sorry for lack of proper quote
SPOILER
andrei7's Hard

My eye tells me that at least some of your blankets too are 1mm off. so as some S sliders are not symmetrical. I did my best at first and cant see them now, if you can link them, I will double check.
00:50:828 (6) - You have stacked before so why not here? just on visual purpose
02:27:005 (1,2,3) - Um uhh... um idk about this <3 Louis Cyphre
02:35:299 (7,1) - Stack? no, but fixed blanket
03:48:534 (4,5) - ^ NUUU
Sorry, I'm not too good at modding anything lower than insane but hey I'm doing my best to improve Thanks, just write what was important for you while playing, dont just mod maps from editor.

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andrei7's Hard

00:24:887 (5,6) - You might want to keep the constant distance for those hitcircles, so 1.0x. Players can be confused after 00:25:240 (6) has appeared because it can be acted as a 1/2 rhythm. yep, they can be confused, but I want to do something like that. changed. now it can be even more confusing, but I like this.
00:50:828 (6,1) - How about you stack those two objects? It looks like a 1/4 if you place it like that. no, since I have no 1\4 at all, there are no
prerequisites for that whatsoever
00:53:475 (7,1) - I do not see a reason on reducing the distance here. It's better if you keep the same 1.0x distance. fixed from previous mod
01:10:417 (5) - I don't like when this hitcircle is overlapped by 01:10:064 (4) . It brings a little more obscurity and might be hard to see. You should try to move this somewhere like x:378 y:40, yet this is subjective. I have a better idea :D
This also applies to 01:55:240 (7,8) I actually want it to be stack, but desplaced a bit so it can be actually seen - 02:26:299 (7,8) fixed.
01:17:652 (3) - Move this more down because it's touching the bar. fixed, hate when this happens, since Im playing ctrl+tab mostly
01:28:769 (3) - I think you should add a new combo because you changed the rhythm that has gaps, and I hit too earlier 01:29:299 (4) . thats like the same moment as 01:25:946 (4,5) - do I need to insert NC here, too? And this is 01:28:417 (3) - easier to hit earlier. or did I misunderstood you? And I think NC should not be changed becouse of readability, so I need to fix that the other way, anyway
02:27:181 (2,3) - A similar case here, the short distance doesn't seem to follow anything with the music, and the movement makes it uncomfortable to play. Try to move this to x:49 y:347 was that something I fixed from previous mod?
02:35:299 (7,1) - If you have the hitcircle (1) off of 02:35:299 (7) in my opinion it emphasizes better with the strong beat on 02:35:475 .my english is too bad, cant understand.
Thanks!
Combocolours dont look nice with that BG, can you change them?
Are hitsound difference of Insane to other diffs ok? should I make hs like in Insane, or in other diffs?
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osu file format v14

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Title:Future Holds
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Artist:Laura Brehm & Evoke
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Creator:Yoges
Version:andrei7's Hard
Source:
Tags:Alden electronic female vocalist deep emotional hoen andrei7 DahplA single
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I myself think my idea didnt work at all. I like ending, but for other parts at least decade of mods are appriecieted
ED: Im unbearable, sorry
Last edited by kirinokirino , edited 2 times in total.
DahplA
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DahplA
Made a few changes since the AR/OD/HP spread was a bit out of whack.

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Yoges
896 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Yoges

sheela901 wrote:

http://puu.sh/kiqQq/a48e9b6e50.jpg | As you can see, the flow will get better for 03:09:711 (2,1) . I also suggest you reduce the distance between 03:09:358 (1,2) a little; it's kind of random in my opinion. So maybe if you stack it with the tail of 03:08:298 (4) it would be great. I did something similar.

sheela901 wrote:

01:09:711 (3,1) - 01:15:711 (3,1) - It's so weird when I play them. It felt making you stop uncomfortably your play, and I think it needs a change. Personally, I would move the long sliders somewhere else with a distance of 1.0x. The pause fits the music fine for me. I don't really see a compelling reason to change it unless a lot of people complain about it.
All mods applied. :) I hope everything is fixed.
Yoges
896 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Yoges
Could all the mappers involved in this beatmap please Re-download to prevent me having to fix conflicting tags, timing, and unsnapped bookmarks each time. Thank you!
sheela
2,651 posts
Joined October 2011
sheela

andrei7 wrote:

01:28:769 (3) - I think you should add a new combo because you changed the rhythm that has gaps, and I hit too earlier 01:29:299 (4) . thats like the same moment as 01:25:946 (4,5) - do I need to insert NC here, too? And this is 01:28:417 (3) - easier to hit earlier. or did I misunderstood you? And I think NC should not be changed becouse of readability, so I need to fix that the other way, anyway
Actually, keep it the way it is now. When I modded, I remembered that you had another rhythm. But now, it's fine.

02:27:181 (2,3) - A similar case here, the short distance doesn't seem to follow anything with the music, and the movement makes it uncomfortable to play. Try to move this to x:49 y:347 was that something I fixed from previous mod?
My wordings might misunderstand you. I'm suggesting that you move 02:27:358 (3) out of 02:27:181 (2) so it doesn't have the small distance and keep the movement fluid. That's my opinion though.

02:35:299 (7,1) - If you have the hitcircle (1) off of 02:35:299 (7) in my opinion it emphasizes better with the strong beat on 02:35:475 .my english is too bad, cant understand.
It's the same as the point above. It would be best if you move 02:35:299 (7) somewhere else, other than overlapping 02:35:475 (1) .

andrei7 wrote:

Are hitsound difference of Insane to other diffs ok? should I make hs like in Insane, or in other diffs?
It doesn't matter if your difficulty has different or similar hitsound patterns to the other difficulties. You can put them on your own, or use a hitsound copier to copy the hitsounds from the hardest difficulty to yours (if the mapper allows it).

Let me know if andrei7 has made changes.
kirinokirino
354 posts
Joined June 2011
kirinokirino

sheela901 wrote:

My wordings might misunderstand you. I'm suggesting that you move 02:27:358 (3) out of 02:27:181 (2) so it doesn't have the small distance and keep the movement fluid. That's my opinion though.
It's the same as the point above. It would be best if you move 02:35:299 (7) somewhere else, other than overlapping 02:35:475 (1) .

well, that is part of idea. If I change them, I should change 00:54:887 (3,4) - 00:56:828 (2,3) - 00:59:652 (2,3) - 01:01:946 (8,9) - etc. as well
and, if I will, I should change lots of things which will no longer make sense. maybe I will, maybe flow and readability will make a good map, but that requires a lot of mods.


It doesn't matter if your difficulty has different or similar hitsound patterns to the other difficulties. You can put them on your own, or use a hitsound copier to copy the hitsounds from the hardest difficulty to yours (if the mapper allows it)..
Thanks for link, I was using old one all the time.
I'd like to make hitsounds something similar to advanced. hopefully will finish them soon.
Changed last circle, and something else, i think
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128,280,152829,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,368,153005,2,0,P|160:368|216:312,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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384,212,155299,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,228,155475,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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68,128,157240,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,288,157593,2,0,B|203:315|252:302|252:302|295:291|323:315,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,280,158122,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,280,158299,6,0,P|440:252|456:208,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,132,158652,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,44,159005,2,0,P|244:60|128:64,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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92,288,159887,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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344,176,160769,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,232,160946,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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76,368,163946,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,174534,12,0,177358,0:0:0:0:
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68,28,185299,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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472,304,187769,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,324,187946,2,0,B|352:362|303:347|303:347|252:331|216:378,1,179.999994506836,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,324,188475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,324,188652,2,0,P|132:284|124:232,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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220,312,190593,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,312,190769,2,0,B|254:337|305:324|305:324|356:312|392:336,1,179.999994506836,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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316,132,191828,2,0,P|267:127|226:96,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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48,88,192711,2,0,B|81:60|133:72|133:72|221:96,1,179.999994506836,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,120,193240,1,0,0:0:0:0:
283,208,193417,2,0,B|296:268|296:268|276:288|276:288|312:332|292:384,1,179.999994506836,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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282,91,194828,1,0,0:0:0:0:
282,91,195005,6,0,B|316:60|366:66|366:66|416:72|452:36,1,179.999994506836,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,128,195534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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212,252,196417,2,0,P|160:264|112:268,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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84,320,197652,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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128,132,200652,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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328,72,215828,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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428,228,224122,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,292,227122,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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76,64,228534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
74,49,228711,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,172,229946,6,0,L|376:152,1,56.2500021457673,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,80,230299,2,0,P|348:60|256:56,1,112.500004291535,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,152,231005,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,152,231181,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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272,196,236299,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,168,236652,2,0,P|400:136|352:24,1,168.750006437302,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,64,237358,6,0,B|236:36|236:36|172:52,1,112.500004291535,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,120,237887,2,0,P|148:160|112:228,1,112.500004291535,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,336,238593,2,0,B|104:332|132:344|132:344|160:328|200:332,1,112.500004291535,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,240,239299,2,0,B|292:268|344:248|344:248|392:228|432:264,1,168.750006437302,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,152,240181,6,0,P|304:120|324:40,1,112.500004291535,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,44,240711,2,0,P|204:24|108:20,1,112.500004291535,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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348,208,243005,6,0,P|376:216|456:192,2,112.500004291535,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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312,324,245475,2,0,L|388:336,1,56.2500021457673,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,260,245828,5,0,0:0:0:0:
448,180,246534,2,0,P|464:144|416:32,1,168.750006437302,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,18,247240,2,0,P|292:44|264:92,1,112.500004291535,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,188,247946,2,0,P|316:232|212:304,1,168.750006437302,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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8,180,249181,2,0,P|72:176|116:140,1,112.500004291535,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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352,308,251828,5,0,0:0:0:0:
352,308,252005,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,236,252358,2,0,B|232:208|184:220|184:220|136:236|96:196,1,168.750006437302,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,132,253064,2,0,L|96:72,1,56.2500021457673,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,40,253593,2,0,P|264:76|328:88,1,112.500004291535,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,36,254299,6,0,L|464:148,1,112.500004291535,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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300,48,257122,5,0,0:0:0:0:
Yoges
896 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Yoges
Andrei want me to hitsound it for you?
Yoges
896 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Yoges


All done! Hope everything is fine.

Also extended 02:05:828 (4) - to 3 repeats because you weren't mapping a very prominent note.
sheela
2,651 posts
Joined October 2011
sheela
No issues has been lifted in my end, so why don't we step this mapset a little further? Bubbled!
BigEarsMau
786 posts
Joined June 2015
BigEarsMau
M4M
Easy, Alpha's Normal, and Hoen's Advanced are fine :)

[andrei7's Hard]
  1. 00:50:828 (6) - I suggest to stack this circle right at the top of 00:51:005 (1) for better readability and for a more tidier position
  2. 02:27:005 (1,2,3) - I suggest for a stack on these three circles for better flow because they look unorganized and uneven
  3. 03:33:358 - You should map the echoes or the instruments in this empty part since leaving this empty feels like a pacebreaker for players. Also, it feels like a waste if you didn't map in here
  4. 03:40:417 - ^
  5. 03:44:652 - ^
  6. 03:51:711 - This would be a perfect chance for a break
I can't mod Insane bc I can't play Insane diffs well :(

That's all I can find. Hope this helps

Good luck in being ranked :)
Yoges
896 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Yoges
Ooo a bubble! I'm getting excited :3
I'll do your M4M soon big ears.
Krfawy
1,374 posts
Joined March 2012
Krfawy
Hi, so you requested Krfawy to tesplay Insane only but she was that tricky so she testplayed the whole mapset, because she could. \w/

General
  1. How about 22768 as an offset number? A really small change, but wouldn't hurt.
Easy
  1. 00:28:417 (1) - This patterning is not... unrankable... maybe, however, it'd be nicer to make something more straightforward because noobies might have troubles here. Additionally, QATs love simpler stuff in easiest diffs, you know. How about something as simple as *THIS*? Other variations are as welcome as if not more!
  2. 00:39:711 (5) - To be honest I think it would be a nice moment for a new combo since you've been comboing like this from the beginning, I mean: 00:22:770 (1) - here, 00:28:417 (1) - here 00:34:770 (1) - and here. I don't really think it's an issue that a possible new combo would be very short, it would work preety nicely I believe. \o/
  3. 00:46:064 - Okay, so the comboinb after the first break starts to be less common and the accurate ones are quite long. Because they were significantly shorter in the previous section I'd recommend to use shorter ones because now it's rather inconsistent and that seems to be rather unpolished than made on a purpose. So I simply recommend to make new combos at every note like 00:51:711 (5) - here, 01:03:005 (5) - here 01:08:652 (2) - and here and so on, moreover, I'd rather delete it 01:06:534 (1) - here because it doesn't really follow the vocals and the beat, I guess you mistook it with 01:08:652 (2) - this note. xD
  4. 01:27:711 - Not a really good idea to use only 15% volume in my opinion, the notes are barely audible. I'd recommend 25% or something similar.
  5. 02:58:064 (1,2) - Okay, so firstly I suggest two things here. Firstly, you start every section with a circle instead of a slider and I have to admit it would fit better in terms of the playability. Secondly, the power of blanketing might not be worthy because the flow is not as nice as possible. I've done similar mistakes in the past and I highly recommend to use something what plays properly instead of using patterns which just look nice.What do I mean? I mean *THIS*. Just please, make an obvious simple path instead of making a pattern which is not as obvious as presented one. :<
Alpha's Normal
  1. How about addint mini breaks between 03:31:593 (1,2,3) - and 03:35:828 (1,2,3) - and so on? I really think it might be needed because the song is quite long and noobs might not be doing so well, you know. D:
Insane
  1. My personal suggestion: How about AR8.7-8.8? Objects appear a liiiiittle bit too quickly for me, but just my opinion. Also how about OD8 so it's more ppable? *Krfawy runs
If you have any concerns, try to catch me in-game or send me a private message via forums!

Call me back! :3

EDIT: LOL Are you stalking the thread that I got KDS so quickly? XD
kirinokirino
354 posts
Joined June 2011
kirinokirino
SPOILER

BigEarsMau wrote:

M4M
Easy, Alpha's Normal, and Hoen's Advanced are fine :)

[andrei7's Hard]
  1. 00:50:828 (6) - I suggest to stack this circle right at the top of 00:51:005 (1) for better readability and for a more tidier position
    cant do that nicely. and this is more important for me in that particular map, since readability is relatively fine
  2. 02:27:005 (1,2,3) - I suggest for a stack on these three circles for better flow because they look unorganized and uneven "well, that is part of idea. If I change them, I should change 00:54:887 (3,4) - 00:56:828 (2,3) - 00:59:652 (2,3) - 01:01:946 (8,9) - etc. as well
    and, if I will, I should change lots of things which will no longer make sense. maybe I will, maybe flow and readability will make a good map, but that requires a lot of mods."
  3. 03:33:358 - You should map the echoes or the instruments in this empty part since leaving this empty feels like a pacebreaker for players. Also, it feels like a waste if you didn't map in here
  4. 03:40:417 - ^
  5. 03:44:652 - ^ no, cant find any valid way to do that.
  6. 03:51:711 - This would be a perfect chance for a break meh, dont like small breaks
I can't mod Insane bc I can't play Insane diffs well :(

That's all I can find. Hope this helps

Good luck in being ranked :)
no changes for now, sorry
Yoges
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Yoges

Krfawy wrote:

Hi, so you requested Krfawy to tesplay Insane only but she was that tricky so she testplayed the whole mapset, because she could. \w/

General
  1. How about 22768 as an offset number? A really small change, but wouldn't hurt. Done
Easy
  1. 00:28:417 (1) - This patterning is not... unrankable... maybe, however, it'd be nicer to make something more straightforward because noobies might have troubles here. Additionally, QATs love simpler stuff in easiest diffs, you know. How about something as simple as *THIS*? Other variations are as welcome as if not more! Done
  2. 00:39:711 (5) - To be honest I think it would be a nice moment for a new combo since you've been comboing like this from the beginning, I mean: 00:22:770 (1) - here, 00:28:417 (1) - here 00:34:770 (1) - and here. I don't really think it's an issue that a possible new combo would be very short, it would work preety nicely I believe. \o/ Ok, done
  3. 00:46:064 - Okay, so the comboinb after the first break starts to be less common and the accurate ones are quite long. Because they were significantly shorter in the previous section I'd recommend to use shorter ones because now it's rather inconsistent and that seems to be rather unpolished than made on a purpose. So I simply recommend to make new combos at every note like 00:51:711 (5) - here, 01:03:005 (5) - here 01:08:652 (2) - and here and so on, moreover, I'd rather delete it 01:06:534 (1) - here because it doesn't really follow the vocals and the beat, I guess you mistook it with 01:08:652 (2) - this note. xD Increased NCs from 00:46:064 (1) - to 01:06:534 (6) - and I left it after 01:08:652 (1) -
  4. 01:27:711 - Not a really good idea to use only 15% volume in my opinion, the notes are barely audible. I'd recommend 25% or something similar. 25% works much nicer
  5. 02:58:064 (1,2) - Okay, so firstly I suggest two things here. Firstly, you start every section with a circle instead of a slider and I have to admit it would fit better in terms of the playability. Secondly, the power of blanketing might not be worthy because the flow is not as nice as possible. I've done similar mistakes in the past and I highly recommend to use something what plays properly instead of using patterns which just look nice.What do I mean? I mean *THIS*. Just please, make an obvious simple path instead of making a pattern which is not as obvious as presented one. :< Done
Insane
  1. My personal suggestion: How about AR8.7-8.8? Objects appear a liiiiittle bit too quickly for me, but just my opinion. Nah. I want to keep it at a high AR because it'll be a good gateway map for low ar players who still play hards but want to do more challenging stuff like insanes. AR 9 means It'll also be friendlier to HR & DT players, aswell as players that are locked to high ARs. Also if high diff, low AR maps like this can get ranked I don't see a reason for low diff, high AR maps not to be ranked aswell. Also how about OD8 so it's more ppable? Changed to OD 7.5*Krfawy runs
If you have any concerns, try to catch me in-game or send me a private message via forums!

Call me back! :3 Will be happy to ^^

EDIT: LOL Are you stalking the thread that I got KDS so quickly? XD Ssshhhhh!
Yoges
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Yoges
Responding for Alpha as this mod is quite short.

Krfawy wrote:

Alpha's Normal
  1. How about addint mini breaks between 03:31:593 (1,2,3) - and 03:35:828 (1,2,3) - and so on? I really think it might be needed because the song is quite long and noobs might not be doing so well, you know. D: Done
Krfawy
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Yoges
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Yoges
Thanks Krfawy! Lets hope we can survive the QATs OuO
Lumael
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Congrtz on first qualified! \(o.o)/
meii18
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meii18

Lumael wrote:

Congrtz on first qualified! \(o.o)/
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Mekki

Lumael wrote:

Congrtz on first qualified! \(o.o)/
Makeli
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Makeli

Lumael wrote:

Congrtz on first qualified! \(o.o)/
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