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Lia - Bravely You (TV size)

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HappyRocket88
4,321 posts
Joined May 2014
HappyRocket88

Padge14 wrote:

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  • General : Your map in general is going for the vocal/ in general, but sometime you switch for the drum. I assumed you were going for vocal/
  1. 00:05:638 (1) Normaly in normals you need to let a 2/1 recover after a spinner. IMO your should removed the spinner and just put a note on the end your current slider if I just put a note there that wouldn't fit because it might end with empty spaces.
  2. 00:36:038 - to 00:45:238 - Realy suggest you to change this part for something like the easy. For now, I'll keep it as it is. That would be so easy and take into a count this is a normal diff.
  3. 00:56:438 (3,1) - Blanket can be improved a little bit I like it as it is. If someone else complai about it, I'll see what to do.
  4. 01:00:038 (1) - IMO I would split the slider into 2 sliders. why? The song advertise players that it will be a same whish has been repeated once b4.
  5. 01:01:438 - Add a note. Doing this ^ will make the note add easier. Yeah but I wanted to emphasize the instrumental part here 01:01:638 (1)
  6. 01:06:238 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved by moving to the right the end of 2. What a nazi suggestion. lol I don't see too much problem with it.
  7. 01:14:238 - Add note I didn't want to emphasize vocals here.
  8. 01:17:438 - Add note ^
Thanks you very much for modding. Everything else was applied.

I am a you
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- Suwako -
33 posts
Joined March 2014
- Suwako -
From my queue :)

Easy
00:22:038 (3) - why not http://puu.sh/jLfp0/011e19ea46.png ?
00:57:638 (2,3) - fix this blanket
01:14:038 (1) - follow the rhythm http://puu.sh/jLfwH/018091e84e.png
01:16:038 (3) - separate it like this http://puu.sh/jLfAh/f08e579145.png

A's Bravery : don't try to make your map like skystar's ... this just a slow anime ost song...
00:19:038 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - you should fix this stream like this http://puu.sh/jLg55/087d3a5e37.png
00:20:838 - add a note here
00:55:438 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - shouldn't overmap this, recommend to put a jump here
00:56:438 (9,10) - don't try to make your map look stranger... it hard to ranked
01:03:138 (2,3,4) - rhythm suggestion http://puu.sh/jLgrX/4ff3decb33.png
01:06:338 (2,3,4) - ^
01:15:938 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - rhythm suggestion http://puu.sh/jLgEK/1d9d07750d.png
01:22:538 (1) - don't put a spinner here @@, it looks strange
01:25:738 (1) - ^

something i have to say
fix this http://puu.sh/jLf4S/9c2aa2c4c4.png in your diff in starmine :P

Others look fine to me :)
Good luck :)
JJburstOwO
183 posts
Joined July 2012
JJburstOwO
M4M~

[A's Bravery]
00:09:238 (1) - cancel NC
00:10:438 (1) - ^
00:09:538 (2,3) - ↓
00:14:638 (4,5,6) - ↓
00:20:838 - maybe add note(x108,y256) here?
00:28:638 (3) - why miss the drum 00:28:838 - here?
00:41:438 (3) - ^
01:14:738 (2) - I prefer 2 notes here since it looks like↓
01:17:938 (2) - ^
01:26:738 (1) - remove
01:28:438 (1,2) - switch NC

[Chocox's Insane]
00:44:838 (3) - Ctrl+G
00:54:438 (3,4,5,6) - Ctrl+G
00:56:638 (6) - stack 4

[Del's Hard]
00:04:038 (1,2) - I prefer no slight overlap.. make 2 a little bend
00:20:638 (2) - ^
01:19:038 (1) - ^

[Rocket's Normal]
00:19:638 (3,1) - blanket
00:53:438 (3,1) - ^
00:54:438 (3,4) - ^
Because of the cs and distance you chose, lots of objects are slightly overlap. CS3.2 makes it much more tidy imo.

[Easy]
Nice~

Tomori kawaii >-<
Avishay
1,250 posts
Joined April 2013
Avishay

- Suwako - wrote:

From my queue :)

A's Bravery : don't try to make your map like skystar's ... this just a slow anime ost song...
00:19:038 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - you should fix this stream like this http://puu.sh/jLg55/087d3a5e37.png Chnaged.
00:20:838 - add a note hereAdded, might remove it in the future.
00:55:438 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - shouldn't overmap this, recommend to put a jump here It is not overmapped, the triplets exist in the music.
00:56:438 (9,10) - don't try to make your map look stranger... it hard to ranked It is fine?
01:03:138 (2,3,4) - rhythm suggestion http://puu.sh/jLgrX/4ff3decb33.png I prefer to use my rhythm.
01:06:338 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
01:15:938 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - rhythm suggestion http://puu.sh/jLgEK/1d9d07750d.png I like it.
01:22:538 (1) - don't put a spinner here @@, it looks strange Remapped.
01:25:738 (1) - ^ ^

something i have to say
fix this http://puu.sh/jLf4S/9c2aa2c4c4.png in your diff in starmine :P

Others look fine to me :)
Good luck :)
Avishay
1,250 posts
Joined April 2013
Avishay

JJburstOwO wrote:

M4M~

[A's Bravery]
00:09:238 (1) - cancel NC SV change indictaor
00:10:438 (1) - ^ New stanza with new vocals
00:09:538 (2,3) - ↓ Nice.
00:14:638 (4,5,6) - ↓ But what's tbe problem with the current pattern?
00:20:838 - maybe add note(x108,y256) here? V
00:28:638 (3) - why miss the drum 00:28:838 - here? Following the ringing sounds
00:41:438 (3) - ^ ^
01:14:738 (2) - I prefer 2 notes here since it looks like↓ V
01:17:938 (2) - ^ Changed pattern.
01:26:738 (1) - remove Nah, the note clearly exists.
01:28:438 (1,2) - switch NC V

Tomori kawaii >-<
Thank you both,

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HappyRocket88
4,321 posts
Joined May 2014
HappyRocket88
Suwako

- Suwako - wrote:

Easy
00:22:038 (3) - why not http://puu.sh/jLfp0/011e19ea46.png ? If you listen carefully, there's a beat at 1/2 that can be missed by putting a 1/1 slider.
00:57:638 (2,3) - fix this blanket. It's not very notiaceable though. I'll fix it if someone else point it out.
01:14:038 (1) - follow the rhythm http://puu.sh/jLfwH/018091e84e.png Sure! Nice suggestion <3
01:16:038 (3) - separate it like this http://puu.sh/jLfAh/f08e579145.png Well, I was trying to enphasize the beats so I don't think that would fit there.
JJburstOwO

JJburstOwO wrote:

[Rocket's Normal]
00:19:638 (3,1) - blanket ✔
00:53:438 (3,1) - ^ ✔
00:54:438 (3,4) - ^ ✔
Because of the cs and distance you chose, lots of objects are slightly overlap. CS3.2 makes it much more tidy imo. Woah! *-*/
Thanks you both for modding it! <3
I am fancy
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Charlotte Op - Bravely You.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 61438
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.7

[Metadata]
Title:Bravely You (TV size)
TitleUnicode:Bravely You (TV size)
Artist:Lia
ArtistUnicode:Lia
Creator:Kyle Y
Version:Rocket's Normal
Source:シャーロット
Tags:Charlotte op Del05 HappyRocket88 Avishay Raiden [I]MMoRTal[S] Chocox
BeatmapID:743753
BeatmapSetID:336036

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3.2
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"charlotte.png",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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61638,-100,4,2,0,100,0,1
80838,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0


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Xinying
559 posts
Joined July 2013
Xinying
JJburstOwO

JJburstOwO wrote:

[Chocox's Insane]
00:44:838 (3) - Ctrl+G Fixed
00:54:438 (3,4,5,6) - Ctrl+G Fixed
00:56:638 (6) - stack 4 Fixed

Tomori kawaii >-< yeah >_<

All fixed , I like your suggestions :3. Update
wasonz
714 posts
Joined July 2013
wasonz

ManP wrote:

From mod queue :3

Oni
  1. 00:02:638 00:02:838 change to k? They are high pitch kkd not familiar with other pattern in this part
  2. 00:02:938 delete? I think unsnap wot ?
  3. 00:49:838 00:50:038 00:53:238 00:56:238 00:59:638 too huh ? lol

    And scroll speed is 0.75x from 00:48:838 to 01:01:638 better i think change scroll speed is not my style so keep

That's all! Sorry for lame mod :3
I hope it is gonna be ranked 8-)
update : http://puu.sh/jNFVU/c2403ab93c.rar
- change vol. on last inherited point from 100 -> 80
Del05
482 posts
Joined May 2014
Del05
Hi
Thanks for the mod
So no change for now :D but i will think again about your mod :D

JJburstOwO wrote:

[Del's Hard]
00:04:038 (1,2) - I prefer no slight overlap.. make 2 a little bend Will consider it, cause i think it is good now :D
00:20:638 (2) - ^ Will consider it, cause i think it is good now :D
01:19:038 (1) - ^ Will consider it, cause i think it is good now :D
Kyle Y
1,204 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Kyle Y

Padge14 wrote:

M4M
[Easy]
  1. 00:57:638 (2,3) - Blanketu~ fixed
  2. 01:04:838 (1,2) - Mayve some minor improvement for the blanketu ~fixed

JJburstOwO wrote:

M4M~
[Easy]
Nice~ thanks

Tomori kawaii >-<

- Suwako - wrote:

From my queue :)
Easy
00:22:038 (3) - why not http://puu.sh/jLfp0/011e19ea46.png ?
00:57:638 (2,3) - fix this blanket
01:14:038 (1) - follow the rhythm http://puu.sh/jLfwH/018091e84e.png
01:16:038 (3) - separate it like this http://puu.sh/jLfAh/f08e579145.png
fixed all
Others look fine to me :)
Good luck :)
-Mo-
Nomination Assessment Team
953 posts
Joined December 2012
-Mo-
Hello, M4M from my queue.

Easy
- 00:00:838 (1) - Remove one of the latter slider points; you don't need two.
Example
- 00:03:838 (1,2) - This rhythm seems kind of weird to play in Easy, since you miss the downbeat (large white tick) entirely, and then you use a red to white tick polarity, which seems kind of confusing to read in my opinion.
- 00:07:238 (1) - This slightly touches the health bar on my screen. I'd try to lower it.
- 00:20:838 (2,3) - Similar kind of thing with the polarity and missing the downbeat. It fits the music, but it's kind of confusing to read.
- 01:00:838 (2) - Seems kind of weird starting the kiai time with a slider like this in my opinion. You have the kiai start at 01:01:638 but there's no emphasis at all in terms of the mapping since this part is filled with the slider. It might be a bit tricky with this music, but I would aim to have some sort of hard note at this point for emphasis.
- 01:02:438 (1,2) - This is probably mapped this way because of the previous slider I mentioned. I think that you can find a better rhythm for this section. The vocal note on 01:03:038 has the same if not more emphasis in the music compared to 01:03:438 but the latter is mapped with a new slider and the former with a slider tail, which gives this section some unusual and unfitting emphasis. Also with slider 01:03:438 (2) there is a vocal note on 01:03:838 whereas there is not on 01:04:038 which is mapped.

Rocket's Normal
- 00:05:638 (1,1) - I feel there isn't enough recovery time after the spinner for beginner players to handle. The general rule of thumb for Normal is half a measure.
- 00:08:038 (2) - Minor: This blanket can be slightly improved.
- 00:23:838 (2) - Personally, I find this flows better when placed below the combo as opposed to above. This also avoid the overlap you have going on here which in my opinion doesn't look too good.
- 00:45:638 (1,1) - Same thing about the spinner.
- 01:11:238 (1,2) - These aren't perfectly the same shape (the way the slider reverse arrows point in different directions is barely noticable). Also, try using some more red ticks to make a smoother looking elbow.
Example
- 01:15:238 (4) - Minor: Blanket issue.
- 01:22:438 (2) - Are so many slider points necessary? You'll get a much smoother result by using just one slider point (not including head and tail).
Example

Del's Hard
- 00:04:038 (1,2) - Move 2 further away so they aren't barely touching. Overlapping slightly for this kind of flow like you did at 00:16:838 (1,2) is fine, but if they're barely touching (touching only the border of the slider), I don't think it looks good.
- 01:00:838 (3,4,5) - I'd keep the spacing between these consistent.
- 01:16:838 (3) - I don't like how this is almost completley obstructed by slider 01:15:838 (1) but I guess there's not much you can do if you want to keep the flow unless you want to move 01:16:438 (2) too.

General thing for the previous 3 difficulties:
- 00:48:838 (1) to 01:01:238 (4) - Consider placing some hitsounds (clap or whistle) on each and every white tick note, since there is a very distinct drum sound on each of these. This seems to have already been done in the Insane difficulties.

Chocox's Insane
- 00:02:438 - I'd aim to have a hard note (new slider or circle) on this beat as opposed to a slider end since this is a downbeat and there is a significant beat in the music here.
- 00:16:838 - Similar kind of thing here.
- 00:26:238 (5,1) - I'd move these further out to create atleast some sort of a jump, since 00:26:438 (1) is the start of a new line in the vocals. You've already done a similar sort of thing in this section already.
- 01:22:438 - As before with the downbeat.
- 01:24:038 - And here.

A's Bravery
- 00:01:904 (5) - I definitely do not hear any 1/6 notes on this section of the music. Why not just use the blue tick?
Example
- 00:10:238 (1) - This new combo doesn't feel necessary.
- 00:11:838 (7,8,1) - Consider a Ctrl+G for a better flow?
- 00:29:638 (1,2) - I'd say there's too much spacing between these for the blue-tick rhythm to be read properly.
- 00:31:438 (2) - Again, definitely no 1/6 here.
- 00:57:238 (4,5) - Reduce the spacing of these so the blue-tick can be read a bit easier.
- 01:03:138 (2,3) - This seems like blatant overmapping. This rhythm persists so I'll only mention it once. I wouldn't say there is anything significant on the blue ticks that you mapped these two since the vocal note is on 01:03:038 and 01:03:438 respectively. I wouldn't say these notes should need to be here at all. At the very least 01:03:138 (2) does not deserve a clap hitsound, and overall using blue tick polarity over a downbeat is just confusing to play. You should avoid adding beats to the map where there isn't any in the music, which is the general definition of overmapping.
- 01:26:438 (3,1) - Poor polarity, since this is difficult to read. I don't believe the blue tick should be there anyway, as mentioned before.

Good luck. :)
Avishay
1,250 posts
Joined April 2013
Avishay

-Mo- wrote:

Hello, M4M from my queue.

A's Bravery
- 00:01:904 (5) - I definitely do not hear any 1/6 notes on this section of the music. Why not just use the blue tick? I probably was drunk or something, removed.
Example
- 00:10:238 (1) - This new combo doesn't feel necessary. V
- 00:11:838 (7,8,1) - Consider a Ctrl+G for a better flow? V
- 00:29:638 (1,2) - I'd say there's too much spacing between these for the blue-tick rhythm to be read properly. V
- 00:31:438 (2) - Again, definitely no 1/6 here. Actually, I do hear 1/6 here, but I removed it anyway becaues the pattern is not going nicely with the 1/6.
- 00:57:238 (4,5) - Reduce the spacing of these so the blue-tick can be read a bit easier. Ehm.. okay.
- 01:03:138 (2,3) - This seems like blatant overmapping. This rhythm persists so I'll only mention it once. I wouldn't say there is anything significant on the blue ticks that you mapped these two since the vocal note is on 01:03:038 and 01:03:438 respectively. I wouldn't say these notes should need to be here at all. At the very least 01:03:138 (2) does not deserve a clap hitsound, and overall using blue tick polarity over a downbeat is just confusing to play. You should avoid adding beats to the map where there isn't any in the music, which is the general definition of overmapping. I do realise this is unorthodox and may seem a bit weird, but this it not an original idea of mine. The thing is that the 1/4 notes do exist there but I didn't want to just regulary follow them like almost everyone would do. So I added some artificial rhythm which compliments the song nicely, I tried playing it by myself, it goes really nicely with the hitsounds that create the rhythm and overall it goes nicely with the held strong vocals.
- 01:26:438 (3,1) - Poor polarity, since this is difficult to read. I don't believe the blue tick should be there anyway, as mentioned before. Uhm, I might change this pattern so it'll be easier to read, but I'll leave it as it is for now.

Good luck. :)
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Thanks!
Xinying
559 posts
Joined July 2013
Xinying
-Mo-

-Mo- wrote:

Hello, M4M from my queue.
Chocox's Insane
- 00:02:438 - I'd aim to have a hard note (new slider or circle) on this beat as opposed to a slider end since this is a downbeat and there is a significant beat in the music here. I have to agree.
- 00:16:838 - Similar kind of thing here. ^
- 00:26:238 (5,1) - I'd move these further out to create atleast some sort of a jump, since 00:26:438 (1) is the start of a new line in the vocals. You've already done a similar sort of thing in this section already. I don't know how I can improve this to not make the flow "suck" , so this will be on my "to be confirmed" list.Almost imo, it plays fine as of now, hence, no change for now.
- 01:22:438 - As before with the downbeat. ^^
- 01:24:038 - And here. ^ (I hope I didn't made the flow worse lol ==)

Thank you for mod :D Fixed some flow issues too Update
Del05
482 posts
Joined May 2014
Del05
Hi
Thanks for the mod :D

My Update

Tell me if i send the wrong file xD

-Mo- wrote:

Del's Hard
- 00:04:038 (1,2) - Move 2 further away so they aren't barely touching. Overlapping slightly for this kind of flow like you did at 00:16:838 (1,2) is fine, but if they're barely touching (touching only the border of the slider), I don't think it looks good. Will consider it :D, i like it now
- 01:00:838 (3,4,5) - I'd keep the spacing between these consistent. Fixed
- 01:16:838 (3) - I don't like how this is almost completley obstructed by slider 01:15:838 (1) but I guess there's not much you can do if you want to keep the flow unless you want to move 01:16:438 (2) too. Will consider it

General thing for the previous 3 difficulties:
- 00:48:838 (1) to 01:01:238 (4) - Consider placing some hitsounds (clap or whistle) on each and every white tick note, since there is a very distinct drum sound on each of these. This seems to have already been done in the Insane difficulties. Fixed
Kyle Y
1,204 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Kyle Y

-Mo- wrote:

Hello, M4M from my queue.

Easy
- 00:00:838 (1) - Remove one of the latter slider points; you don't need two.
Example
remap part, changed
- 00:03:838 (1,2) - This rhythm seems kind of weird to play in Easy, since you miss the downbeat (large white tick) entirely, and then you use a red to white tick polarity, which seems kind of confusing to read in my opinion. fixed, I think
- 00:07:238 (1) - This slightly touches the health bar on my screen. I'd try to lower it. fixed
- 00:20:838 (2,3) - Similar kind of thing with the polarity and missing the downbeat. It fits the music, but it's kind of confusing to read.
- 01:00:838 (2) - Seems kind of weird starting the kiai time with a slider like this in my opinion. You have the kiai start at 01:01:638 but there's no emphasis at all in terms of the mapping since this part is filled with the slider. It might be a bit tricky with this music, but I would aim to have some sort of hard note at this point for emphasis. fixed
- 01:02:438 (1,2) - This is probably mapped this way because of the previous slider I mentioned. I think that you can find a better rhythm for this section. fixed The vocal note on 01:03:038 has the same if not more emphasis in the music compared to 01:03:438 but the latter is mapped with a new slider and the former with a slider tail, which gives this section some unusual and unfitting emphasis. Also with slider 01:03:438 (2) there is a vocal note on 01:03:838 whereas there is not on 01:04:038 which is mapped.
becasue you mentioned about the rhythm weird, then I nearly remap for the rhythm, hope it won't be weird now.
Good luck. :)
Sukii-chan_old
Sukii-chan_old
Pheria asked me to mod in her place, so h3r3 I 4m.

General
there isn't really anything significantly wrong with any of these, so i don't really have much to write

Easy
01:13:638 (4,1) - sounds kind of off, might want to consider changing 01:13:638 (4) - to end at 01:14:038 - with a circle at 01:14:438 - and moving 01:14:638 (1) - back to 01:14:838 - and shortening it to end at 01:15:238 -

A Bravery
00:28:638 (3) - sounds a bit short, even to be following the violin, it sounds better ending at 00:28:838 -


R Muzu
feels empty at 00:43:238 - might want to add a note, even though what you currently have fits your other pattern

how about i don't point out any blankets that bother me so you dont hate me
HappyRocket88
4,321 posts
Joined May 2014
HappyRocket88

-Mo- wrote:

Rocket's Normal
- 00:05:638 (1,1) - I feel there isn't enough recovery time after the spinner for beginner players to handle. The general rule of thumb for Normal is half a measure. The BPM is quite low. It's not that fast to "follow" that general rule. I think that the one tick of difference works perfectly here since the player could click the next circle properly.
- 00:08:038 (2) - Minor: This blanket can be slightly improved. I really don't know what objects should I move to "improve" the blanket. What I did was fixing the DS consistency among these objects. 00:08:038 (2,3,1)
- 00:23:838 (2) - Personally, I find this flows better when placed below the combo as opposed to above. This also avoid the overlap you have going on here which in my opinion doesn't look too good. Nice suggestion. Thanks! <3
- 00:45:638 (1,1) - Same thing about the spinner. Same argument. /u\ don't kill me please. ><
- 01:11:238 (1,2) - These aren't perfectly the same shape (the way the slider reverse arrows point in different directions is barely noticable). Also, try using some more red ticks to make a smoother looking elbow. You're right but I proved but it doesn't change the flow and the playability. Since I like more the points of my sliders, I'll keep it as they are. Thanks!
- 01:15:238 (4) - Minor: Blanket issue. oHHHHH! What a good eye you have! Fixed! o.o7
- 01:22:438 (2) - Are so many slider points necessary? You'll get a much smoother result by using just one slider point (not including head and tail). I know /u\ but I like the "C" shape with several unnecessary points. I'll change it if someone else complains. >.<

Good luck. :) Thanks for your mod! It was really helpful!
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osu file format v14

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Creator:Kyle Y
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walaowey
952 posts
Joined March 2012
walaowey
Hi kyle :)

I'm here to mod your map :P

So here's my mod xD

A's Bravery
00:02:438 (1) - imo, its better if u use circle here, there's a nice piano sound there to map :P
00:06:638 - although the sound is very weak, you could perhaps add a circle here?
00:14:738 (5) - move this lower? ..so that is follow the flows to the slider.. and dont have that zig zaggy pattern lol
00:21:238 (5) - bigger jump here? since the beat is quite strong imo
00:28:438 (2) - claps
00:38:038 (2) - i think u should reduce this spacing..its quite big lol.. because if u making a jump here, then u should do it to 00:38:838 (7) - because they seems to have same rhythm and beats
00:41:638 - you miss a beat here..i know what you are following here..but it feels awkward when u skip the beat like that.. and the gap became 3/4 because of that..conisider to change it :P
01:03:338 (3) - tbh, i dont hear anything here, instead i hear something at 01:03:238 ..u miss something there..consider to remove (3) and add circle at 01:03:238
01:06:538 (3) - ^
01:08:938 (5) - ^
01:10:538 (4) - ^
01:12:138 (5) - ^
01:21:738 (5) - ^
01:04:338 (2) - this slider feels overdone :/ i dont hear anything on the blue ticks .. and you skip the beats on the white tick lol..its a strong beat..its better to use circle/slider head to emphasize the strong beats on the white tick :P
01:07:038 (5,6,7) - tbh, i dont really like the flow after this, the flow here are very sharp..its like going front and back, but in a really sharp flow its easily miss out lol, consider to do something about it :P

Chocox's Insane
00:39:238 (1) - add some jump for this slider? ..to emphasize the strong beat better
00:47:438 (2) - actually this is quite trolling.. when i testplayi it with HD .. i didnt really notice this circle because its stacking with the previous slider tail..consider to change this
01:23:638 (8,1,2) - i dont really like the flow here..its quite awkward.. *Click* (you can try to place 01:24:038 (1) somewhere on the yellow line that i had suggested :P , btw the red line are the flow u have now
Overall its a nice diff, i like it >w<

Del's Hard
00:47:642 (2) - in previous part you're using full DS, why was the spacing suddenly increases here? the rhythm is constant though.. consider to fix it

Lol, this diff is really nice and flows well too..i like it a lot >w<

Rocket's Normal
00:35:638 (4) - lol, its not in DS :P
00:39:238 (1) - mm..tbh, the slider is quite low, and its not flowing well from the previous slider imo, consider to fix it
mm..idk about this diff, its ok imo, but some of the sliders seems not flowing too well imo :P

Ok, thats all from me.. good luck ranking this map xD
Xinying
559 posts
Joined July 2013
Xinying
walaowey

walaowey wrote:

Hi kyle :)

I'm here to mod your map :P

So here's my mod xD

[Chocox's Insane]00:39:238 (1) - add some jump for this slider? ..to emphasize the strong beat better Changed the slider , for future purposed , I didn't meant to blanket the note ... so yeah xD
00:47:438 (2) - actually this is quite trolling.. when i testplayi it with HD .. i didnt really notice this circle because its stacking with the previous slider tail..consider to change this Changed positions of star placements
01:23:638 (8,1,2) - i dont really like the flow here..its quite awkward.. *Click* (you can try to place 01:24:038 (1) somewhere on the yellow line that i had suggested :P , btw the red line are the flow u have now I fixed this.
Overall its a nice diff, i like it >w< Thank you!!!

Ok, thats all from me.. good luck ranking this map xD

Thank you very much!!~ Update here , tell me if I messed up with the file or what not xD
Avishay
1,250 posts
Joined April 2013
Avishay

walaowey wrote:

[notice]
A's Bravery
00:02:438 (1) - imo, its better if u use circle here, there's a nice piano sound there to map :P
00:06:638 - although the sound is very weak, you could perhaps add a circle here?
00:14:738 (5) - move this lower? ..so that is follow the flows to the slider.. and dont have that zig zaggy pattern lol
00:21:238 (5) - bigger jump here? since the beat is quite strong imo
00:28:438 (2) - claps
00:38:038 (2) - i think u should reduce this spacing..its quite big lol.. because if u making a jump here, then u should do it to 00:38:838 (7) - because they seems to have same rhythm and beats
00:41:638 - you miss a beat here..i know what you are following here..but it feels awkward when u skip the beat like that.. and the gap became 3/4 because of that..conisider to change it :P
01:03:338 (3) - tbh, i dont hear anything here, instead i hear something at 01:03:238 ..u miss something there..consider to remove (3) and add circle at 01:03:238
01:06:538 (3) - ^
01:08:938 (5) - ^
01:10:538 (4) - ^
01:12:138 (5) - ^
01:21:738 (5) - ^
01:04:338 (2) - this slider feels overdone :/ i dont hear anything on the blue ticks .. and you skip the beats on the white tick lol..its a strong beat..its better to use circle/slider head to emphasize the strong beats on the white tick :P
01:07:038 (5,6,7) - tbh, i dont really like the flow after this, the flow here are very sharp..its like going front and back, but in a really sharp flow its easily miss out lol, consider to do something about it :P


Ok, thats all from me.. good luck ranking this map xD
Everything accepted excpt for the artificial beats at the kiai time. Kiai time is full of 1/4 notes that are not that siginificant, so I decided to use hitsounds with certain pattern to emphasize what's needed.

Furthermore, I've remapped a lot of shitty parts I had mapped, and it should be overall much better.

SPOILER
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Charlotte Op - Bravely You.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 61438
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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GridSize: 4
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Title:Bravely You (TV size)
TitleUnicode:Bravely You (TV size)
Artist:Lia
ArtistUnicode:Lia
Creator:Kyle Y
Version:A's Bravery
Source:シャーロット
Tags:Charlotte op Del05 HappyRocket88 Avishay Raiden [I]MMoRTal[S] Chocox
BeatmapID:743750
BeatmapSetID:336036

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Del05
482 posts
Joined May 2014
Del05
Hi
Thanks for the mod :D

I let kyle to apply this mod

to kyle : ctrl+g 00:47:642 (2)

walaowey wrote:

Del's Hard
00:47:642 (2) - in previous part you're using full DS, why was the spacing suddenly increases here? the rhythm is constant though.. consider to fix it

Lol, this diff is really nice and flows well too..i like it a lot >w< Thank you :D
Kyle Y
1,204 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Kyle Y

Sukii-chan wrote:

Pheria asked me to mod in her place, so h3r3 I 4m.

General
there isn't really anything significantly wrong with any of these, so i don't really have much to write

[Easy]01:13:638 (4,1) - sounds kind of off, might want to consider changing 01:13:638 (4) - to end at 01:14:038 - with a circle at 01:14:438 - and moving 01:14:638 (1) - back to 01:14:838 - and shortening it to end at 01:15:238 - remain, I think it is okay.
Kyle Y
1,204 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Kyle Y
Sorry for my inactive to this map,
[ Bacun ]
58 posts
Joined April 2015
[ Bacun ]
Normal
Everything seems fine :D


Bravery
Everything seems fine :D

(From my modding queue https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/372718)
Deppyforce
1,967 posts
Joined November 2014
Deppyforce
Free Random Mod Yayyyyyyyyyy

[Easy]
  1. 00:04:038 (3) - Add NC And Remove NC At 00:05:638 (1)
  2. 00:29:638 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe Change (1) And (4) To A Curve Slider To Make Flow Better
  3. 01:27:238 (1,2) - Change To Spinner? Rocket's Diff Is Spinner Here
[Rocket]
  1. 00:02:038 (4) - Curve This Slider (Down) Will Make It Looks Better imo
  2. 00:05:638 (1,1) - Um I Think 1 Tick To Recover After Spinner Is A Bit Too Fast
  3. 00:16:838 (2) - This Is Too Hard To Read For Normal Because That AR Make It Appears Too Fast After (1)
  4. 00:36:038 (1) - Make This Part Harder To Make It Kinda ''Balance'' With These 00:23:238 (1,2,3,4)
  5. Hi Rocket Its Me lol
[Bravery]
  1. 00:13:238 (7,8) - Change To 2 1/4 Sliders; I Hear A Note At 00:13:438 -
  2. 00:26:038 (6) - Change To 1/2 Slider; Some gasp(?) Ended At 00:26:238
  3. 00:29:238 (5) - ^
  4. 01:11:638 (2) - Ctrl + J
Good Luck Ranking Thisssss :3
Avishay
1,250 posts
Joined April 2013
Avishay

Deppyforce wrote:

Free Random Mod Yayyyyyyyyyy

[Bravery]
  1. 00:13:238 (7,8) - Change To 2 1/4 Sliders; I Hear A Note At 00:13:438 - I prefer following vocals here, and overmapping here doesn't seem ideal.
  2. 00:26:038 (6) - Change To 1/2 Slider; Some gasp(?) Ended At 00:26:238 There's nothing wrong with the current pattern.
  3. 00:29:238 (5) - ^ ^
  4. 01:11:638 (2) - Ctrl + J ^


Good Luck Ranking Thisssss :3
Thank you for your time anyway >/>

Kyle, a small change is still needed, add a clap at 01:14:838 (2) - and at the sliderend 01:24:438 , thanks.
Kyle Y
1,204 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Kyle Y

Deppyforce wrote:

Free Random Mod Yayyyyyyyyyy

[Easy]
  1. 00:04:038 (3) - Add NC And Remove NC At 00:05:638 (1) no quite sure about it, I just remain and ask sb else
  2. 00:29:638 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe Change (1) And (4) To A Curve Slider To Make Flow Better remain, both are okay.
  3. 01:27:238 (1,2) - Change To Spinner? Rocket's Diff Is Spinner Hereremain, maybe different mapping style.
Good Luck Ranking Thisssss :3
HappyRocket88
4,321 posts
Joined May 2014
HappyRocket88

walaowey wrote:

[Rocket's Normal] 00:35:638 (4) - lol, its not in DS :P aYYY, It's just a stack. I don't see any problem with it! >u<
00:39:238 (1) - mm..tbh, the slider is quite low, and its not flowing well from the previous slider imo, consider to fix it
mm..idk about this diff, its ok imo, but some of the sliders seems not flowing too well imo :P If you listen carefully, there are 1/2 beats that are emphasized with the reverses that fits completely fine. o.o
[Rocket]
  1. 00:02:038 (4) - Curve This Slider (Down) Will Make It Looks Better imo NUUUUUU, I wanted to keep symmetry with this 00:01:638 (3) slider. /u\
  2. 00:05:638 (1,1) - Um I Think 1 Tick To Recover After Spinner Is A Bit Too Fast. Since the BPM is low, I don't see any problem with this. >u<
  3. 00:16:838 (2) - This Is Too Hard To Read For Normal Because That AR Make It Appears Too Fast After (1) Woah! You're right! fixed! _:3_>_
  4. 00:36:038 (1) - Make This Part Harder To Make It Kinda ''Balance'' With These 00:23:238 (1,2,3,4) They're different because I was following vocals with the long repetitive sliders. /u\
  5. Hi Rocket Its Me lol Hellow. <3
Thanks you both for modding!<3

ADDITIONAL MODDING

Del's Hard
  1. Please, the offset should be the same among all the difficulties. So it should be here 00:00:838 to keep consistency. Otherwise it's unrankable /u\
  2. The same goes with the Preview Point. Make sure it does on 01:01:438 as the other difficulties.
  3. Add Chocox to tags.
Chocox's Insane
  1. Add Chocox to tags as well as the other diffs have it.
I AM A SASUKE CHIDORRIIIII
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Charlotte Op - Bravely You.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 61438
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.7

[Metadata]
Title:Bravely You (TV size)
TitleUnicode:Bravely You (TV size)
Artist:Lia
ArtistUnicode:Lia
Creator:Kyle Y
Version:Rocket's Normal
Source:シャーロット
Tags:Charlotte op Del05 HappyRocket88 Avishay Raiden [I]MMoRTal[S] Chocox
BeatmapID:743753
BeatmapSetID:336036

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3.2
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Raiden
osu! Alumni
2,419 posts
Joined January 2013
Raiden

HappyRocket88 wrote:

hi fellow bn

btw taiko mods when x d
HappyRocket88
4,321 posts
Joined May 2014
HappyRocket88
I can m4m the map if you want babe _:3_>_
Avishay
1,250 posts
Joined April 2013
Avishay

Avishay wrote:

Thank you for your time anyway >/>

Kyle, a small change is still needed, add a clap at 01:14:838 (2) - and at the sliderend 01:24:438 , thanks.
Please apply those Kyle, and HR88's mod too.
Kyle Y
1,204 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Kyle Y

Avishay wrote:

Avishay wrote:

Thank you for your time anyway >/>

Kyle, a small change is still needed, add a clap at 01:14:838 (2) - and at the sliderend 01:24:438 , thanks.
Please apply those Kyle, and HR88's mod too.
Updated
HappyRocket88
4,321 posts
Joined May 2014
HappyRocket88
Add the video to Avishay's diff too. o-o

Otherwise...

Avishay
1,250 posts
Joined April 2013
Avishay

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Add the video to Avishay's diff too. o-o

Otherwise...

Could it be that the video gets removed whenever I post the map because I download it without the video?

Eitherway, whenever Kyle readds it, I'll just re download the whole map.
Kyle Y
1,204 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Kyle Y
Added the video to Avishay's diff

Then...
→ (X)
Raiden
osu! Alumni
2,419 posts
Joined January 2013
Raiden

HappyRocket88 wrote:

I can m4m the map if you want babe _:3_>_
walaowey
952 posts
Joined March 2012
walaowey

Avishay wrote:

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Add the video to Avishay's diff too. o-o

Otherwise...

Could it be that the video gets removed whenever I post the map because I download it without the video?

Eitherway, whenever Kyle readds it, I'll just re download the whole map.
Yeah, if u didnt download the video, it will get remove everytime u post the code for the mapper to update,
It happens in a gd in my map.. the gd'er didnt download the video..so i have to re-add it every single time :o
lit120
3,261 posts
Joined August 2013
lit120
i still remember about the request for M4M stuff~~~ and yes, just a quick check only

[General]
  1. AiMod
[Easy]
  1. 00:02:838 (2,3) - try this http://puu.sh/kUXnj/45564ef2a9.jpg
  2. 00:04:838 (4,1) - neat this blanket
  3. 00:54:838 (2,3) - almost neat enough
  4. 01:27:238 (1,2) - remove those finish. and for 01:27:238 (1) - head finish
[Rocket's Normal]
  1. Hitsounds are not even done yet :/
  2. OK, looks like that this diff needs to remap. The reason why is that there are many parts that might be hard for newbies and those DS are not even correct yet to set it :/
  3. 00:00:838 (1,2,3,4,1) - symmetry stuff? move them to 200|296
  4. 00:03:038 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - here's how i even gonna make it correctly and easier http://puu.sh/kUW9B/f1a7a84099.jpg (sample only)
  5. 00:15:238 (1,2) - neat this blanket
  6. 00:20:038 (1,2,3,4,5) - i'd prefer this, because when you're trying to follow the piano note only, that might be confusing for the other newbies tbh
  7. 00:24:638 (4) - it might be fit if you remove this note
  8. 00:28:638 (2,3) - not a neat blanket
  9. 00:31:238 (1,2,3,4) - this is pretty a bad idea set. use this http://puu.sh/kUWJ5/f44677dd3c.jpg (it's a sample)
  10. 00:33:438 (2,3,4) - 1) neat the blanket for (2) and (3). 2) bad flow for (3) and (4). 3) DS please on (4)
  11. 00:37:638 (1,1) - blanket please
  12. 00:45:638 (1) - i kinda feel bad about this, cuz you skipped them and idk if you're pretty lazy to map this ._.
end from here. GL!
Vovan
547 posts
Joined March 2014
Vovan
Quick mod for Easy :D

Easy


00:05:638 (1) - Question : Why the end of the slider don't go to the next white tick ?
00:14:438 (2,3) - Slider with 1 reverse + circle ?
01:04:038 (5) - I don't know, the slider need to have the end to the red tick ? I prefer the white tick, but you do all that you want :3
Wingmann
49 posts
Joined November 2014
Wingmann
You said you wanted a mod for normal? well, 1/4 of a mod
Everything looks fine to me.
Easy:
Overall: Might need to use fewer sliders from 00:23:238 (1) to 00:48:038 (4) -
00:49:238 (2,3) - are overlapping, kinda ruins all the nice blankets you have!
Otherwise, Easy is perfect.
Hard:
00:16:842 (1,2) - are overlapping, not sure if intentional
00:20:042 (1,2) - ^
Looks good aswell.
Good luck with ranking!
sorry for useless mod
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