Hi there
General- What is Tak.wav used for (no idea what it is, just asking)
- I don't know where you got the mp3 from, but if you can find a 192 kbps version that would be nicer than a 128 kbps mp3.
- Some custom combo colors would be nice
- Please add a silent sliderslide for the normal sliderslides as well. It's hard to find the sliders that use this, but here 00:48:120 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - they kinda kill the purpose of the soft-sliderslide because you can hear the slides.
Secretpipe00:28:245 (3,1) - I'm usually not complaining about this, but if this was supposed to be a blanket it can look a lot better
00:28:620 (1) - the only really changing thing here is the sound on the start of the slider and the red tick in the return of it. Personally I would map that red tick (with a circle for example) instead of ignoring it, but just a suggestion
00:32:745 (3) - Why not 2 1/4 sliders? it would emphasize the basskick because you can tap it and it would actually full map the sound it's currently mapped to
00:42:495 (2) - The sound you're trying to hitsound actually can be represented more properly, and a slider-end does not really work out for that.
Just a pattern suggestion. What I'm trying to say is that it is again, the only sound that really changes here (except for the drums but that doesn't matter here)
00:43:995 (2,3) - Only a slight difference but ctrl+j'ing these sliders would make more sense as they flow better
00:43:995 (2,3) - What bothers me sometimes, is that you make the distance between 00:43:245 (6,1) - a lot smaller with the downbeat being quite a strong beat here, while 00:44:370 (3) - has literally nothing that would justify this larger jump. Maybe a general thought I put here, and I know not everyone cares about this.
00:46:526 (1) - I would've mapped that white tick with a circle, but that would make the spinner too short. However, you can move the spinner start to the downbeat, it would make more sense no?
00:55:245 (5) - In this section you let the sliders end on nothing, which I don't really like (but hey if you do who am I to complain about that). Anyway this slider is inconsistent with 00:49:245 (3,3) - so i was wondering why. I prefer the sliders you used here because the return doesn't really fit
01:05:370 (4) -
Maybe this?, the slider facing the other way feels kinda weird
01:15:495 (2) - Why do you ignore this sound?
I like the build up here, but ignoring the snare is kiiinda meh. you could place it like
this01:15:682 (3,4) - Here you do this, but here 01:18:682 (3) - you do this. Whyyy please make the 3/2 slider like the first one because ignoring that basskick is meeeh
01:19:620 (4) - Make this a circle so the sound that is being added here 01:19:995 (5) - is emphasized? This slider basically ends on nothing anyway
01:22:245 (4,5,1) - Equal spacing? It would fit better
01:24:213 (1) - Why the basskick hitsound for the spinner? It's not in the song
Also, it's inconsistent with 03:49:713 (1,1) - because you're using a slider here. Choose one
. The best thing would be to end the spinner (with the basskick hitsound) on the blue tick, but then I would highly recommend putting the circle in the middle of the spinner so it can be reached in time, not like the slider you used with the second spinner, because you are forcing the player to stop spinning early, but since the spinner is quite short that would result in a 100 or even a miss.
01:28:995 (2) - Circle+slider or something similar? You're ignoring the synthesizer sound and that's kinda sad
(You did it perfectly here 01:34:995 (2,3) - )
01:37:995 (1) - Especially here, since the synthesizer sound is so strong here and serves a purpose
01:40:995 (1,2) - Same thing here actually because again, you map the beats with sliders, but that's not the most important thing here
02:09:870 (3,4,5,6,1) - Why is the spacing getting larger here when the song decreases in intensity? I think a smaller spacing would work out better
02:11:745 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - This is way too soft to be honest. Could you bum up the volume so the minimum is at least 30%
02:34:620 (1,2,3,1,2) - Why is the volume so high here? If doesn't really make sense that it becomes softer here 02:37:620 (1) - , and it's actually just way too loud imo
03:00:120 (4) - A whistle on the slider-body I forgot to mention in Pm
03:08:745 (4,5,1) - Make the spacing consistent, or slightly bigger for 03:09:120 (1) - but not like this
03:24:682 (1,2) - Why no triple? Kinda weird to ignore that
03:44:745 (4,5) - The jump here doesn't really fit, does it? Consider using a smaller spacing
03:55:995 (3,1) - Small distance, 03:56:370 (1,2) - larger distance. I find these kind of things weird because the spacing doesn't represent the song properly, as nitpicky or nazi it might sound, I think it's not. Just a thing to think about
04:12:120 (1,2) - le flow pls, I don't think this is a great pattern, it might be better for 04:12:682 (2) - to face the first slider like
this, and to move 04:13:245 (1) - to a spot where it would properly flow from the slider-end of 04:12:682 (2) -
04:14:745 (5,6,7,8,1) - Move this down, for example like a blanket for 04:13:245 (1) - , it will result in a better flow, and greater distance for the next burst
04:25:995 (1) - Make this a 1/4 return slider as well? I don't see a reason to use a circle only
(it would be best for 04:26:370 (2) - to be moved as well then)
04:31:620 (1,2) - This jump is kiiiinda really big because there isn't really anything special on that red tick right? I understand that it's part of the downbeat, but it's still pretty large imo
04:36:120 (7) - NC? You kinda do this all the time already
04:40:995 (5,6,7) - Because this part is all soft again, maybe a return slider would fit the "mood" in this part better
04:44:370 (7,8,9) - Spacing is kinda weird here, keeping it consistent (or using the larger distances for the beats) would be a better choice
04:48:120 (1,2,3) - Same thing here
04:48:870 (3,4) - This jump is weird as well, would move it down tbh
04:54:120 (1) - This beat is way strong than 04:53:745 (9) - , so move this one close to the previous slider
04:55:995 (7,8,9) - You know what I'm going to say here
04:59:557 (8) - this offbeat slider is really weird and unfitting, remove it and use a pattern like the previous ones
05:00:120 (1) - Stronger beat, larger distance
I'm not sure what happened at the end, the logic behind your spacing suddenly vanished D: (or there's something I really can't see)
I'm so sorry for the long mod, but I believe there could be some improvements, and I mentioned those I found worth mentioning
Good luck! (and have a star)
c'est aussi un peu répétitif à mon goût (et compliqué à accu)
