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Saten ruiko
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年9月12日 at 下午 12:30:24

Artist: Hatsune Miku
Title: Moon
Source: iroha
Tags: eveless banvi Project Diva vocaloid
BPM: 150
Filesize: 3598kb
Play Time: 02:00
Difficulties Available:
  1. banvi's Hoshi (2.88 stars, 162 notes)
  2. eveless' Tsuki (4.45 stars, 194 notes)
  3. Hard (4.7 stars, 257 notes)
  4. Insane (4.99 stars, 341 notes)
Download: Hatsune Miku - Moon
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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@_@ skin by Scarle-M
map by clement eveless banvi
banvi
Done~
I hope you like this normal diff.
But I don't have hitsound sense :o
If some modders tell my diff , you can fix things as possible.
But if you don't know how to fix things , please call me by in-game chat or PM. :)

[attachment=0:7d28e]Hatsune Miku - Moon (Clement) [banvi's hoshi].osu[/attachment:7d28e]
banvi
And my mod
SPOILER
General
Please add "Vocaloid" , "Project DIVA" and "iroha" in tags.
And I mistaked. Rename "banvi's Hoshi" plz XD
elevess' Tsuki
00:41:540 (5) 1 grid down?(grid lv3)
00:57:940 (3) ^
01:03:940 (4) 1 grid up?
01:43:140 (3,4,5,2) 1 grid left?
After I finished my diff , I saw ths diff. I made not normal? :?
Hard
Overall Difficulty -1 (because this is same star rate as insane)
00:16:940 (1) 1 grid right?
00:34:340 (2,3) 1 grid up and 1 grid left?
00:36:340 (4,5,6) 1 grid left?
00:36:940 (1) remove new combo?
00:43:540 (5) 1 grid down or 1 grid left?
00:49:540 (4,5,6) 1 grid down?
00:49:940 (7) 2 grid down and 1 grid right?
01:36:740 (3,4,5,6,7,8) 2 grid left?
01:49:940 why break?_?
Insane
I seem this is WIP because this is copy with Hard.
Jump
Sorry , I can't mod this.
Some modders do mod much better than me. XD

Of course , I hope thismap become ranked soon~ ;)
Topic Starter
Saten ruiko
thx i like it :oops:
Zetsubou Sensei
This map is fun, I wanna see this get ranked soon. Should be great!

~STAR
Selee
Star~
All suggestions
SPOILER
[General]
Delete osb?
[banvi's Hoshi]
00:41:940 (5) - 2 grid down+1 grid left to make a symmetry?
00:43:540 (3) - move to the vertical axis?
01:39:540 (5) - 1 grid down + 1 grid left?


[eveless' Tsuki]
00:50:940 (4) - 1 grid down+1 grid left to make a symmetry?
00:57:940 (3) - 1 grid down+1 grid left to make a symmetry?

Insane&Jump mod in irc
Mystearica
我觉得整体还不错的...

[Jump]

00:29:940 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 像这样我个人觉得很难读...可以排成串或者分开吗?

其它都挺好的, 有些地方现在就不提了, 以后你会自己体会的, 我相信你能够很快成为出色mapper~
Mokou_Fujiwara
答应C触跑过来MOD了=A=
下面都是建议 可采纳也可以无视lol
General
(或者TAG里面加上图帮助的人?
[banvi]
01:47:540 音量线可以删除(或者这根完全没用到?)
01:53:940 这slider我认为4拍比较好lol
01:57:140 ^
或许某些CLAP用的不好 反正我没仔细去听 clap数量貌似多了点?
[E神触难度]
00:25:340 这是卧槽NOTE 请删除
01:21:940 两根绿线 找一根删了吧
01:41:540 连续5个NOTE节奏 嘛嘛 随意
KIAI结束线请设置好lol
[Insane]
00:22:440 0.5用的有点不知所以然lol
00:59:540 ^
01:26:740 变速这需要SNAPING? (雾
你确定你这难度是完成了还是WIP
[jump]
00:14:540 很好很卧槽
00:54:740 ^
00:59:540 各种0.5至少我看不懂(我是彩笔
这难度就是0.5我看不懂了么(我是彩笔无疑
高潮时间为啥圈那么多还那么长=A=(我自重
总体来说还是很不错 搞定了0.5就是好图lol
PS:其实看这我蛋疼又想做SB了
嘛 C触不急的话下周有时间帮你做SB好了
Star!
Clare
唷~~幫你看看=w=
我queue都是滿的,特別服務XDD

恩 你還需要放個hitcircleoverlay跟spinner-approachcircle在你的skin裡
tags填點東西吧

[banvi's Hoshi]
00:41:940 (5) - nazi
01:39:540 (5) - 1 grid down

[eveless' Tsuki]
mod irc

[Insane]
把全部的綠線對在格子上
00:25:940 (5) - 右一格上一格改了後面要排好
00:36:740 (1) - 這跳太小了 不如把DS改2.0跳?
01:15:540 (6) - new combo
02:00:040 (T) - 這條線刪了

[Jump]
把全部的綠線對在格子上
00:12:940 (1) - 這一串連打太吵了 試著把音量降低
00:38:540 (4) - new combo
00:49:340 (5) - ^
00:54:740 (1) - 音量
01:29:340 (7) - new combo
叫jump難度感覺還不夠跳,試著把跳變多一點再遠一點,減少些連打會好一點

整體不錯 進步很多了繼續努力!
star~
banvi

Selee wrote:

[banvi's Hoshi]
00:41:940 (5) - 2 grid down+1 grid left to make a symmetry? :arrow: ok
00:43:540 (3) - move to the vertical axis? :arrow: no
01:39:540 (5) - 1 grid down + 1 grid left? :arrow: ok
This mod mulutiples with Clare's mod.

Mokou_Fujiwara wrote:

[banvi]
:arrow: I can't read Chinese!!! lol
Tags :arrow: I wrote something to add my mod.
01:47:540 音量线可以删除(或者这根完全没用到?) :arrow: I don't know what you mean. Please fix , Clement? :o
01:53:940 这slider我认为4拍比较好lol :arrow: ok
01:57:140 ^ :arrow: ok
或许某些CLAP用的不好 反正我没仔细去听 clap数量貌似多了点?
:arrow: Clement don't like whistle. So I ask change all whistle to clap. But I think so too many clap.
I don't have hitsound sense. Please delete some crap and add or change whistle , Clement... No whistle is not good.
Please understand. :(
But I don't want change chorus(kiai) part.
Thank you for your mod.

EDIT :
Please redownload :3
[attachment=0:308cc]Hatsune Miku - Moon (Clement) [banvi's Hoshi].osu[/attachment:308cc]
Mokou_Fujiwara
01:47:540 there are three greed lines But in the place only need two line,please delete the useless one
Well. I needn't to let you change the KIAI part.I means some of the part the are too clap in it?Whistle'voice is good.
But it depends on you.Because I am a hitsound BAKA =A= wwwwwwwww
AngelHoney
All

你少放了
hit0.png
spinner-spin.png
spinner-clear.png
approachcircle.png
(因為之前我也因為這樣被某些蛋疼BAT指出lol
offset好像有點快(不是很肯定._.

Insane

00:14:940 (1) - 這一段乾脆靜音 會更好 (其他也有幾處spinner也這樣處理吧 或者降低音量 )
00:47:340 (1,1) - 如果是new combo的話 之前的(5)也new combo 或者 (5)new combo 這2個去掉new combo
01:06:540 (4,5) - 移開點(容易搶拍lol

Hard

00:12:940 (1) - 加個音效finish
00:25:740 (4) - 這個就改成一般的note的吧...這樣有點噁心人的感覺lol
00:41:140 (5) - ^
00:46:740 (6) - 和insane一樣

eveless

OA -1~-2 (要不然+DT+HR就變成OA9了 lol)
preview point和其他難度不同(偏差了50ms...
我倒是蠻喜歡這diff的 combo color(逃
00:13:140 (1) - 加個音效finish
01:21:940 (1) - 從這開始 好多slider都忘記加音效了?!

banvi

00:12:940 (1) - add hitsound finish ._.
00:18:340 (2) - why are you use N-whistle on this part ...lol
00:43:540 - break time is too long ...i think you need to add some notes <3

star~ :) :)
Astom
Hi =)
In red maybe important, In blue suggestions

[General]
-comboburst.png Max width is 500 pixels
-Use same kiai time in Hard and Insane

[Insane]
-01:36:340 (1) finish this in 01:36:740, move this 01:37:740 (1) to 01:37:140 and finish it in 01:39:540
-01:41:140 (1) finish it in 01:42:540.

Nice song ^^
Star~
Topic Starter
Saten ruiko

Astom wrote:

Hi =)
In red maybe important, In blue suggestions

[General]
-comboburst.png Max width is 500 pixels
-Use same kiai time in Hard and Insane

[Insane]
-01:36:340 (1) finish this in 01:36:740, move this 01:37:740 (1) to 01:37:140 and finish it in 01:39:540
-01:41:140 (1) finish it in 01:42:540.

Nice song ^^
Star~
thx for you mod and i will fix it
100pa-
(ノ゚д゚)ノ 彡☆

insane
00:34:540 (4) - 陷阱moemoe :?
Topic Starter
Saten ruiko

100pa- wrote:

(ノ゚д゚)ノ 彡☆

insane
00:34:540 (4) - 陷阱moemoe :?
done
:oops:
banvi
: )

[attachment=0:fde80]Hatsune Miku - Moon (Clement) [banvi's Hoshi].osu[/attachment:fde80]
TTTTTTTTTTTT
:)

Insane
104,64,100140,5,0
256,136,100340,1,0
104,192,100540,1,0
256,272,100740,1,0
104,328,100940,1,0
256,192,101140,12,0,102740
176,208,103340,5,0
264,120,103540,1,0
320,224,103740,1,0
240,312,103940,1,8
104,200,104140,5,0
184,112,104340,1,0
240,216,104540,1,0
160,304,104740,1,8
384,224,105140,1,0
384,104,105340,1,0
488,168,105540,2,0,B|392:168|392:168,3,80,8|0|0|0
288,168,106340,5,4
168,168,106540,1,4

这个只是个建议,01:40:140后的一些修改,可以看看。。

Circle Size缩到Normal也不错

Starrr
subarasikibuta
:)
Topic Starter
Saten ruiko
:oops:
LKs
只有一些小的nazi问题,对map无影响 :roll:
打分的话可以打8分,(不是指游戏后打的评分,那个分都是有水分的。我指我实际对这map的感觉至少在8分左右,GD和你的难度都不错,这是很难能可贵的 :)
只加星不要kud
Topic Starter
Saten ruiko

LKs wrote:

只有一些小的nazi问题,对map无影响 :roll:
打分的话可以打8分,(不是指游戏后打的评分,那个分都是有水分的。我指我实际对这map的感觉至少在8分左右,GD和你的难度都不错,这是很难能可贵的 :)
只加星不要kud
thx :oops:
Pokie
8-) c-chu
Topic Starter
Saten ruiko

Pokie wrote:

8-) c-chu
POLKE-W- 8-)
Alace
-7ms to your offset and resnap all notes to all of your diffs

<Hitsounds>
Easy:有一些部份有中斷掉的感覺,clap與whistle都算合曲子,但因為note量比較少所以可以考慮只使用clap (whostle太少時反而不好聽)
Normal:nice 00:03:940 (4) - 兩個音效混在一起沒有單一拍手好聽,建議把一開始的部份修改一下
Hard+insane:clap的位子有些沒下對位,以長白線為第一拍的話,在2 4的拍子上下clap會比較好聽 (跟音樂的clap同步) 可以參考normal的音效與下圖
banvi
done

[attachment=0:6e6a1]Hatsune Miku - Moon (Clement) [banvi's Hoshi].osu[/attachment:6e6a1]
eveless
忘了星.
最近忙昏头- -

> <
Cyril Scarlet
Just Suggestion ~ Plz ignore this if you feel weird


Overall

 ● add banvi and eveless in tag


banvi' Hoshi

00:03:933 (2) - use grid snap and put it again


eveless's Tsuki

00:32:740 (4) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
00:41:933 (5) - I think mapiing after this until 00:43:533 is good <3
00:57:940 (3) - Down 1 grid (Lv3)


Hard

00:20:533 (1) - Remove new combo ?
00:20:933 (3) - add new combo
00:27:333 (1,2,3) - use same spacing
00:32:333 (1) - remove new combo
00:33:533 (1,2,3) - change rhythm from 1 to 2 ? ? ↓↓

1.

2.

00:41:733 (1) - remove new combo
00:50:533 (1,2,3,4,5) - this note is not put in same line , I think open use Grid Snap and put again is good


Insane

00:19:533 (5) - move 1 grid up ? (Lv3)
00:21:733 (8,9,10) - move little right for same with 4-5 ?
00:22:533 (1) - stop spin at 00:23:933 and add note at 00:24:333 ? (suggestion)
00:25:733 (6) - new combo ?
00:26:533 (1) - remove new combo ?
00:34:933 (7) - new combo ?
00:46:533 (5,1) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
00:46:733 (1) - I think not need to new combo here :3
00:50:533 (1,2,3,4,5) - move it like this ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14229
00:57:533 (7) - it's not pattern I think use spacing same with 2-6 is better
01:00:533 (1,2,3) - mvoe right 1 grid (Lv3)
01:04:333 (3) - down 1 grid (Lv3)
01:04:533 (4) - left 1 grid (Lv3)
01:11:133 (3) - new combo
01:33:933 (1) - remove new combo
01:36:333 (1) - ^
01:40:133 (1,2) - up 1 grid (Lv3)
01:40:733 (4) - ^
banvi
Thx , S i R i R u

update please >w<
[attachment=0:46207]Hatsune Miku - Moon (Clement) [banvi's Hoshi].osu[/attachment:46207]
xierbaliti
some suggestions in irc.

*star*
ignorethis
- add composer to tag

- "thanks for playing" should appear after the song ends, and the colour of the text makes it hard to read

- are the pics in background SB moving a bit too fast? >_>

<Banvi's Hoshi>
00:19:933 (4) - remove whistle
00:50:733 (3) - up + left one grid in lv3
01:22:333 (2) - down one grid in lv3
01:27:333 (1,2,3,4,5) - remove 1,3,5 or use sliders
01:37:933 (1) - up one grid in lv3
01:38:333 (2) - left + down one grid lv3
(don't forget to mirror them)
01:40:133 (1,2,3,4,5) - same as above
01:58:733 (2,3,4,5,6) - down one grid lv3

<eveless' Tsuki>
oa+1
00:17:940 (1,2,3) - copy, paste and rotate 120° will look better
01:15:540 (3) - new combo
01:20:333 - add spinner?

<Hard>
00:36:733 (1,2) - this jump doesn't fit the rhythem at all, remove
00:49:133 (2,3,4,5,6) - arrange like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14713
01:21:133 (7) - this 0.5x slider is weird o.o
01:26:733 (4) - add this to 0.5x
01:39:133 (8) - add clap
01:47:933 (2,3,4,5) - remove

<Insane>
00:28:333 - add a note here
00:45:733 (1,2,3,4) - two grids up in lv3
01:04:333 (3) - right one grid in lv3
01:04:733 (5) - up two grids
01:29:333 (8) - left one grid
01:47:533 - add a spinner until here

star'd
Mokou_Fujiwara

ignorethis wrote:

- add composer to tag

- "thanks for playing" should appear after the song ends, and the colour of the text makes it hard to read
That's right. I will fixed it
- are the pics in background SB moving a bit too fast? >_>
^

star'd
thanks
Topic Starter
Saten ruiko

ignorethis wrote:

- add composer to tag

- "thanks for playing" should appear after the song ends, and the colour of the text makes it hard to read

- are the pics in background SB moving a bit too fast? >_>

<Banvi's Hoshi>
00:19:933 (4) - remove whistle
00:50:733 (3) - up + left one grid in lv3
01:22:333 (2) - down one grid in lv3
01:27:333 (1,2,3,4,5) - remove 1,3,5 or use sliders
01:37:933 (1) - up one grid in lv3
01:38:333 (2) - left + down one grid lv3
(don't forget to mirror them)
01:40:133 (1,2,3,4,5) - same as above
01:58:733 (2,3,4,5,6) - down one grid lv3

<eveless' Tsuki>
oa+1
00:17:940 (1,2,3) - copy, paste and rotate 120° will look better
01:15:540 (3) - new combo
01:20:333 - add spinner?

<Hard>
00:36:733 (1,2) - this jump doesn't fit the rhythem at all, remove
00:49:133 (2,3,4,5,6) - arrange like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14713
01:21:133 (7) - this 0.5x slider is weird o.o
01:26:733 (4) - add this to 0.5x
01:39:133 (8) - add clap
01:47:933 (2,3,4,5) - remove

<Insane>
00:28:333 - add a note here
00:45:733 (1,2,3,4) - two grids up in lv3
01:04:333 (3) - right one grid in lv3
01:04:733 (5) - up two grids
01:29:333 (8) - left one grid
01:47:533 - add a spinner until here

star'd
done
vivicat
._.
xBubu
Moded in-irc
hvick225
:) STAR
tsuka
Easy:
00:57:133 (2) - new combo
just like the 01:09:133 (1)

01:59:533 (4,5,6) - soft whistle
02:00:333 (1) - soft finish
volume 80%

eveless' Tsuki:
fine
nice one

hard:
01:22:011 & 01:22:013 - why there are two same timing sections?????? remove the one of them


Insane:
00:29:633 (4,5) - awful distance =w=
01:20:333 (1,2,3,4) - could you make the jumps more closed ? its really harder than others ....just a suggestion

good job
Topic Starter
Saten ruiko

tsukamaete wrote:

Easy:
00:57:133 (2) - new combo
just like the 01:09:133 (1)

01:59:533 (4,5,6) - soft whistle
02:00:333 (1) - soft finish
volume 80%

eveless' Tsuki:
fine
nice one

hard:
01:22:011 & 01:22:013 - why there are two same timing sections?????? remove the one of them


Insane:
00:29:633 (4,5) - awful distance =w=
01:20:333 (1,2,3,4) - could you make the jumps more closed ? its really harder than others ....just a suggestion

good job
thx~ :)
Mriya_Suwako
fight on~!~
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