Tokyo Karan Koron - Spice · forum

Hiyori

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Joined May 2015

Hiyori 2015-08-02T11:53:08+00:00

Hello Taeyang! From our M4M request. Don't forget to vote on my poll. Thank you!

Easy:

00:22:008 (2) - curve this a bit just to emphasize the vocals like this

Skidayo's Normal:

00:20:393 (1) - how about remove this and make this into circles instead? like this
01:08:854 (1) - chorus parts like this for example, i think its a bit for normal imo. Maybe try simpler flow like this
01:14:393 (4) - try
I need this needs fixing with the flow too.

Hard:

00:03:316 (3) - i dont see this map to anything. Maybe remove this.
00:07:008 (3) - remove ^^
01:26:162 (2) - make this a circle instead

Sorry for short mod. Easy and Hard diff is amazing Goodluck with ranking Taeyang and thanks for shooting kodusu on my map. Really appreciate it !

Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2015-08-04T07:08:23+00:00

1:1 request

[Easy]
* 느린 편인 bpm의 아주 쉬운 이지 -> AR2 이하를 추천
* 00:10:470 - 이 부분 매우 강한 비트이고 그 이전까지 00:03:085 - 00:06:777 - 는 무려 슬라 시작점으로 표현해줬는데 아쉽네요. 00:13:008 (1) - 00:18:316 (2) - 00:22:008 (2) - 도 마찬가지. 맨 마지막 거 빼고는 그 자리에 보컬도 있는데 굳이 저 소리를 무시해가면서까지 흰 선에 끝내야 하나 싶은 생각입니다.
* 00:38:393 (5,1) - Doyak 님이 꼼꼼한 조사원 트로피를 달성했습니다. (오른쪽이 왼쪽보다 가까이 붙었고 전반적으로 슬라이더가 너무 멀리 도네요) 00:40:700 (3,4) - same here
* 01:23:162 (1) - 너무 허전하게 스피너가 길게 들어간 거 같은데 01:24:777 - 여기까지 노트 채우고 01:25:008 - 여기서부터 넣으시는 건?

[Skidayo's Normal]

IRC mod

15:35 *Doyak is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/707462 Tokyo Karan Koron - Spice (TV Size) [Skidayo's Normal]]
15:35 Doyak: 태양님이 모딩 요청을 했는데
15:35 Doyak: 님 난이도는 irc로 따로 불러서 하든지 하라고 하셔서
15:35 Doyak: 가능하시다면 지금 봐드릴게요
15:37 Skidayo: 넵!!
15:37 Skidayo: 지금 해주세요!
15:39 Doyak: 태양님한테도 말씀드렸는데 AR 이지랑 같이 조금 낮추었으면 좋겠고요
15:39 Doyak: 00:03:085 (2,3) - 담요 더 예쁘게 만들어보세요
15:40 Doyak: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3484941
15:40 Skidayo: 넵
15:40 Doyak: 이렇게 어프로치 서클이 벽에 딱 붙도록
15:40 Doyak: 경계를 깔끔하게 타고 가게 만들면 돼요
15:41 Doyak: 00:04:700 (4,1) - 여기도 더 깔끔하게 할 수 있는데
15:41 Doyak: 이런 건 4번 슬라를 컨트롤 G 해놓고
15:41 Doyak: 1번 슬라이더와 동시에 보이게끔
15:41 Doyak: 시간축을 좀 옮겨서
15:41 Doyak: 아까 스샷처럼 어프로치 서클이 깨끗하게 걸리게끔
15:42 Doyak: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3484944
15:42 Doyak: 이런 식으로 조정할 수 있으면 좋아요
15:43 Doyak: 00:06:777 (2,3) - same
15:43 Skidayo: 아하
15:43 Skidayo: 오
15:43 Skidayo: 우와 저렇게 시간축을 옮겨서 할수도있군요 감사합니다!!
15:44 Doyak: 담요 쓰신 거 다 하나씩 보고 이렇게 고쳐보세요
15:44 Skidayo: 넵 감사합니다 ㅎㅎ
15:45 Doyak: 태양님이 저에게 이 맵을 주시면서 저를 시험했는데
15:45 Doyak: 이 맵에서의 가장 큰 문제점이 뭐냐고 물으시면서
15:45 Doyak: 정답은 "흐름이 너무 정직하다"라는 거였어요
15:46 Doyak: 어떤 걸 말하는 거냐면
15:46 Doyak: 00:22:008 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) -
15:46 Doyak: 이런 노트들의 배치를 보면
15:47 Doyak: 노트가 굉장히 배가 항해하듯이
15:47 Doyak: 중간에 움직임이 끊어짐이 없이
15:47 Skidayo: 저도 이걸 보고 너무 구곡같다고 생각했는데..
15:47 Doyak: 가던 방향으로 계속 가는 느낌이에요
15:47 Skidayo: 막상 어떻게 고쳐야할지를모르겠어요..
15:49 Doyak: 00:25:931 (4,5) -
15:49 Skidayo: 패턴도 왠지 하드에 넣어야할 패턴을
15:49 Doyak: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3484953
15:49 Skidayo: 그대로 노말에 집어넣어버린것같고..
15:49 Doyak: 이런 식으로 좀 변화를 줄 수도 있고요
15:50 Doyak: 00:27:777 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 이런 노트 배치를 보면
15:50 Doyak: 노트가 전부 시계방향으로 도는 모습으로 되어 있어요
15:50 Skidayo: 네
15:50 Doyak: 최소한 슬라 방향만이라도 중간에
15:50 Doyak: 반대 방향으로 꺾어주고 그러면
15:50 Doyak: 그런 단조로움을 피할 수 있고요
15:50 Skidayo: 아하
15:51 Skidayo: 감사합니다!!
15:51 Doyak: 지금 이 맵 같은 경우는
15:51 Doyak: 1/2이 서로 다 달라붙어 있는 모양이기 때문에
15:51 Doyak: 박자를 생략하지 않고 전부 밀어넣으면
15:51 Doyak: 맵이 너무 고리로 다 연결시켜놓은 듯한 느낌이 들게 돼요
15:52 Doyak: 00:34:932 (7) - 이런 건 꼭 있지 않아도 노래의 중요한 비트를 표현하는 데에 무리가 없고
15:53 Doyak: 그런 노트 하나 없애고 나면 다음 노트를 집어넣을 때 괜찮은 모양이 여러 가지 나오죠
15:54 Doyak: 사실 지금 슬라 속도가 조금 아쉽긴 해요. 조금만 더 빨랐어도 더 다양한 움직임이 가능할텐데
15:54 Skidayo: 아하
15:54 Skidayo: 감사합니다!!
15:55 Doyak: 1/2을 상당히 꽉 메우신 듯한 느낌인데
15:55 Doyak: 중요하지 않은 박자는 조금 건너 뛰도록 해보시는 게 좋겠고
15:56 Doyak: 그런 문제는 스스로 다시 쭉 훑어보면서 확인하시고
15:56 Doyak: 조금 다른 이야기를 할게요
15:56 Skidayo: 넵
15:56 Doyak: 00:41:623 (3) - 이걸 굳이 빨간 틱까지 끌고 갈 필요는 없을 것 같아요
15:56 Doyak: 보컬은 00:42:085 - 여기서 새로 나와요
15:56 Doyak: 그런데 이걸 긴 슬라 하나로 굳이 표현하는 것보단
15:57 Doyak: 그냥 00:42:085 - 여기서 끊는 게 낫다고 생각해요
15:57 Skidayo: 오오.. 그렇네요감사합니다!!
15:58 Doyak: 00:44:393 (2) - 이건 상당히 애매한데
15:58 Doyak: 들리는 소리가... 일렉트릭 기타인가...?
15:58 Doyak: 아무튼 그 악기 소리는
15:58 Doyak: 저 빨간 틱이 아니라
15:58 Doyak: 1/3들에 스냅되어 있어요
15:58 Skidayo: 헉?
15:58 Doyak: 그렇다고 거기에 맞추는 건 너무 어려운 박자다 라고 할지도 모르죠
15:59 Doyak: 00:45:316 (3) - 도 마찬가지이고
15:59 Doyak: 그래서 여기에 빨간 틱을 쓰는 건 위험하다는 생각이에요
15:59 Skidayo: 헉 정말그렇네요
15:59 Doyak: 차라리 그냥 전부 흰 틱만 쓰셔서
15:59 Skidayo: 1/3이네..
15:59 Doyak: 단순화 시키시는 게 나으리라 보고요
15:59 Skidayo: 감사합니다 ㅜㅜ
16:00 Doyak: 박자 단순화에 대해서 예를 들자면
16:00 Doyak: 00:55:239 (4) - 이런 노트를 완전히 없애버린다던가
16:00 Doyak: 그렇게 해도 지금 이지랑의 격차를 생각하면 충분히 복잡해요
16:01 Doyak: 아니 완전히 없애는 게 아니라
16:01 Doyak: 슬라 대신에
16:01 Doyak: 00:55:470 - 여기에 서클 하나를 넣는다던가
16:01 Doyak: 00:56:854 (6,7) - 이런 거 노트 너무 많으니까 1/2 왕복 슬라 하나로
16:02 Doyak: 00:58:700 (3,4) - ^
16:02 Doyak: 01:00:546 (7,8) - ^
16:02 Doyak: 아니면 아까처럼
16:02 Doyak: 01:00:777 - 이런 빨간 틱 박자는 과감하게 무시하셔도
16:02 Doyak: 어색하지 않아요
16:03 Skidayo: 그렇군요.. 감사합니다 ㅎㅎ
16:03 Skidayo: 확실히 그렇네요
16:03 Doyak: 01:08:854 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 저같으면 이런 곳들 다 빨간 틱 안 쓰고 첫 박자 강조를 위해 제1박에 서클 하나만 둘 거에요
16:04 Doyak: 요즘 강조되는 매핑 요령 중에
16:04 Doyak: '강한 비트에 클릭하게 만들어라'라는 게 있어요
16:04 Doyak: 일반적으로 첫 박자, 드럼 스내어 같은 게 세죠
16:04 Doyak: 보컬이 시작하는 지점
16:05 Doyak: 그런 걸 고려하면
16:05 Doyak: 예를 들면 01:15:777 - 이런 거
16:05 Skidayo: 네
16:05 Doyak: 저 지점은 아주 강한 소리가 있는데
16:05 Doyak: 슬라 끝으로만 표현이 되고 있어서
16:05 Doyak: 플레이할 때의 느낌이 약해요
16:05 Doyak: 그래서 그런 부분은 서클이나 슬라 시작 지점으로 하는 것이
16:05 Skidayo: 네
16:06 Doyak: 더 강조하기에는 좋아요
16:06 Skidayo: 그렇군요 감사합니다 ㅎㅎ
16:06 Doyak: 01:21:546 (5) - 이런 거 하드에서라도 안 넣어도 누가 뭐라고 안 할 정도로 마이너라서
16:06 Doyak: 적당히 잘 끊어주시고
16:07 Doyak: 오히려 01:24:777 (3) - 이런 슬라이더는 중간에 드럼 소리가 많이 있잖아요
16:07 Doyak: 이런 부분은 리버스로 표현한다던지
16:07 Skidayo: 네
16:07 Doyak: 해서 좀 더 강조해 줄 필요가 있고요
16:07 Skidayo: 아항
16:07 Skidayo: 넵
16:07 Doyak: 으 저 이제 나가야 되는데
16:07 Doyak: 일단 이 정도 제가 말씀드린 거
16:07 Doyak: 생각해서 고쳐보시고
16:07 Doyak: 나중에 다시 봐드릴게요
16:07 Skidayo: 넵 정말 감사합니다 ㅠㅠ
16:07 Doyak: 그럼 이만요~

나머지 난이도는 나중에 마저 해드릴게요~

Seto Kousuke

osu! Alumni

610 posts

Joined June 2013

Seto Kousuke 2015-08-04T08:07:30+00:00

Easy

01:23:162 (1) - I think it's better if you change this spinner for more patterns and then make it finish in the moment the singer finishes saying ''spice''

Skidayo's Normal

00:14:623 (3) - For aesthetics i think it's better if you copy this slider 00:10:931 (3) - and paste it in it's place
00:38:854 (1) - Same thing as the previous one, but use this slider instead 00:42:546 (1) -
01:26:854 (1) - I think this slider could be trades for an eding like this, because the singer saying ''Spice'' is the only sound remaining and the slider is following it, so a few choices would be to make an ending like the sample i gave, or extending the slider to 1:28:239 that is the moment she finishes saying ''Spice''

Hard

00:15:546 (3,4,5) - This pattern imo sounds better if you delete note 4
00:58:470 (4) - Put the curve of the slider heading down, the pattern gets prettier x]
01:06:546 (1,2) - This jump is a little uncessary imo, if you just change the position of 1 and 2, you still get the same pattern but with a better flow
01:25:008 (1,2) - I think this pattern is a little too tricky to get the rythm...if you add one single note right after the second slider or make it with a reverse arrow, i think it gets way more instinctive to catch the right rythm

guineaQ's Insane

00:45:777 (5) - This slider would follow the song better if it was a triplet made of single notes or even a slider with reverse arrow

The entire mapset is really fun and well made, tried my best to find stuff to help you xD looking foward to this being ranked <3

Taeyang

Elite Mapper

1,209 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

Taeyang 2015-08-04T08:16:00+00:00

Hiyori wrote:

Hello Taeyang! From our M4M request. Don't forget to vote on my poll. Thank you!

Easy:
00:22:008 (2) - curve this a bit just to emphasize the vocals like this
i dont want D: flow that's better

Hard:
00:03:316 (3) - i dont see this map to anything. Maybe remove this.
00:07:008 (3) - remove ^^
01:26:162 (2) - make this a circle instead

Sorry for short mod. Easy and Hard diff is amazing Goodluck with ranking Taeyang and thanks for shooting kodusu on my map. Really appreciate it !

Doyak wrote:
1:1 request

[Easy]
* 느린 편인 bpm의 아주 쉬운 이지 -> AR2 이하를 추천
2.5로하겠습니다.
* 00:10:470 - 이 부분 매우 강한 비트이고 그 이전까지 00:03:085 - 00:06:777 - 는 무려 슬라 시작점으로 표현해줬는데 아쉽네요. 00:13:008 (1) - 00:18:316 (2) - 00:22:008 (2) - 도 마찬가지. 맨 마지막 거 빼고는 그 자리에 보컬도 있는데 굳이 저 소리를 무시해가면서까지 흰 선에 끝내야 하나 싶은 생각입니다.
무시되긴 했지만 00:09:316 - 00:10:931 - 00:13:008 - 00:16:700 - 00:18:316 - 00:20:393 - 00:22:008 - )
잡을곳을 규칙적으로 잡아줬기떄문에 괜찮다고생각 나중에 이상하다하면 고치겠습니다.
* 00:38:393 (5,1) - Doyak 님이 꼼꼼한 조사원 트로피를 달성했습니다. (오른쪽이 왼쪽보다 가까이 붙었고 전반적으로 슬라이더가 너무 멀리 도네요) 00:40:700 (3,4) - same here고쳤습니다.
* 01:23:162 (1) - 너무 허전하게 스피너가 길게 들어간 거 같은데 01:24:777 - 여기까지 노트 채우고 01:25:008 - 여기서부터 넣으시는 건?
스피너가 너무 짧아지는 느낀이 있어서 모딩 더오면 고치겠습니다.

Taeyang

Elite Mapper

1,209 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

Taeyang 2015-08-04T08:21:24+00:00

Seto Kousuke wrote:
Easy
01:23:162 (1) - I think it's better if you change this spinner for more patterns and then make it finish in the moment the singer finishes saying ''spice''
fixed

Hard
00:15:546 (3,4,5) - This pattern imo sounds better if you delete note 4
fixed
00:58:470 (4) - Put the curve of the slider heading down, the pattern gets prettier x]
fixed
01:06:546 (1,2) - This jump is a little uncessary imo, if you just change the position of 1 and 2, you still get the same pattern but with a better flow
fixed
01:25:008 (1,2) - I think this pattern is a little too tricky to get the rythm...if you add one single note right after the second slider or make it with a reverse arrow, i think it gets way more instinctive to catch the right rythm
fixed

The entire mapset is really fun and well made, tried my best to find stuff to help you xD looking foward to this being ranked <3

Beomsan

Beatmap Nominator

1,890 posts

Joined November 2013

Beomsan 2015-08-04T09:50:09+00:00

늙

[Skidayo's Normal]

00:07:239 (3) - 블랭킷 확인해주세요 00:08:393 (4) - 위에꺼 수정하셨다면 이것도

00:44:393 (2) - ^

전체적으로 너무 빙빙도는 패턴이 아쉽네요.
제가 할 말은 아니지만 구곡같았습니다.

[Hard]

ai모드에서 언스냅체크

01:07:008 (3,4,5) - 여기 박자 이렇게하는게 좀 더 간단하고 좋지않을까요?

01:21:777 (3,4,5) - ^

[Insane]

꽤ㅐ애애애애애액

하위난이도는 원래 젬병이지만 스키다요님 페어리테일 찍으실 때 보다 훨씬 발전하신 거 같아 좋네요.

이상 쓰레기 모딩이었습ㄴ......

Taeyang

Elite Mapper

1,209 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

Taeyang 2015-08-04T10:59:35+00:00

Beomsan wrote:
늙

[Hard]

ai모드에서 언스냅체크
자살각ㅋㅋㅋㅋ 앜앜앜

01:07:008 (3,4,5) - 여기 박자 이렇게하는게 좀 더 간단하고 좋지않을까요?

01:21:777 (3,4,5) - ^
박자는 우선 드럼소리 들리는데로 박은거라 bpm도 느리기떄문에 이대로 놔두고 모딩 또오면 고치겠습니다.
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Rose Pacifica

238 posts

Joined February 2012

Rose Pacifica 2015-08-04T12:19:45+00:00

Hard

00:07:816 (2) - 이서클 빼는개 나은거같아염
나머지는모르니까 시간없으니 일단패스..

skidayo's Normal

초반부에 담요를 굉장히 많이쓰셧네요
노말이라기보단 후반으로 갈수록 하드랑 노말이랑 합친..?
00:07:239 (3) - 이부분 담요가아니라 그냥 저렇게 안꺽는개 보기좋아보여요
EX
http://puu.sh/joVCW/221f58f334.png

00:12:085 (4) - 30도 회전해서 00:13:008 (1) - 에 다시담요 해보시는건어떨까요
00:19:239 (4) - 서클 뺴는것도 괜찮은거같아요
00:15:777 (4,1) - 배치 바꾸는개 낫지않을까요?
EX
http://puu.sh/joWac/efb02602f6.png

00:31:470 (1) - 리버스 없에시고 빨간선에 1/2슬라 00:32:854 - 여기에 서클하나
00:33:316 (4) - 그대로놔두시고00:34:008 - 제가보기엔 이자리에 서클이 들어가야할거같아요
00:36:316 (2,3) - 서클이랑 슬라이더랑 박자 변경하는것이?
01:19:008 - 이부분 앞박자처럼 서클하나넣으시는개?
키아이타임은 나머지는 배치같은것만 손보시면 될거같아요

지금 시간이없어서 이만큼만썻네요
내일 아침에 다시 써드리겠습니다..ㅜㅜ

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

lolia 2015-08-04T13:04:42+00:00

ㅁㄴㅇㄹㅇ

General

BG 16:9 비율이 아마 1366 * 768 아니었던가요? 차이 좀 나는거같은데 손보시는게...
모든 난이도의 첫 노트의 시작이 이미 1.9초라 Lead in을 1초나 줄 필요는 없을꺼같아요
PreviewTime 언스냅된거같은데 확인해주세요
비디오가 노말 난이도에만 들어가있는거같네요.

Easy

음.. 개인적으로 이지는 리듬이 간단한만큼 강/약 비트는 최대한 살리는게 낫다고 생각해요. 00:09:316 (1) - 00:13:008 (1) - 등등 규칙적인 리듬이긴 한데 전부 강한비트 바로 앞에서 잘라버리니까 어색하게 들리네요.. 한번 고려해주세요 ㅋㅋ
키아이에만 피니시가 들어가있는거같은데 그냥 (00:24:085 - 00:38:854 - 00:46:239 - ) 이런 앞부분에도 넣어주시는게..
00:45:316 (3) - 머리부분 휘슬보단 클랩이 더 나을듯하네요
00:49:470 (4,1,2,3,4) - 브픔이 낮긴하지만 이지에서 5서클은 너무한거같네요..
00:59:162 (3,4) - 리듬 뒤집는게 보컬이랑 더 잘 어울리지 않을까요
SPOILER

Skidayo's Normal

00:11:623 - 00:12:085 - 휘슬 지워주세요
00:19:239 (4) - 노말에선 지우는게 더 깔끔하겠네요
00:31:470 (1) - 여기부터 00:38:854 (1) - 여기까지 리듬 너무하신듯...ㄷ 처음 4비트만 손봤는데 대충 이런식으로 좀 더 간단하게 짜주세요
SPOILER
00:38:854 (1) - 보컬을 버리실꺼라면 리버스쪽에 휘슬을 넣는게 좀 더 듣기 편할꺼에요
00:41:623 (3) - 얘는 개인적으로 보컬따라 00:42:085 - 여기서 끝내는게 낫다고 생각되네요. 그 후에 연타따라 00:42:316 - 여기에 노트 하나 놓으셔도 되고.. (00:49:008 (3) - 여기도 같은곳)
00:55:931 (5,6,7,8) - 00:57:777 (1,2,3,4) - 00:59:623 (5,6,7,8) - 01:03:316 (5,6,7,8) - 등등 보컬 따라 전부 넣으셨는데 리듬만 놓고 보면 거의 하드같네요.. 필요한 보컬만 따라가고 버려도 되겠다 싶은건 버리시는걸 추천드려요. 제일 처음의 00:55:931 (5,6,7,8) - 얘를 예로들자면
SPOILER
이렇게 짜는게 더 간단하고 보컬이랑도 안어울리진 않는데.. 이건 제 스타일이니 그냥 간단하면서도 어울리게끔 전부 고쳐주세요 ㅁㄴㅇㄹ
01:24:777 (3) - 얘는 01:25:008 - 여기에서 끊어주는게 더 잘 어울릴꺼같네요

Hard

00:07:238 (3,1) - 스택 뭔가 안어울리는느낌이...
00:22:931 (3,4) - 순서 바꿔서 서클-슬라 순으로 놓는게 나을꺼같네요
00:37:470 (2) - 개인적으론 리버스 지우고 00:37:931 - 여기부터 서클 놓는게 좋을꺼같은데...
00:52:700 (2) - 보컬만 살아있는 부분인데 점프가 좀 넓은거같네요..
00:53:393 (3) - 여기 놓는것보단 00:52:700 (2) - 얘 주위에 둬서 00:53:393 (3,1) - 여기에 점프를 두는게 낫지 않을까요
01:22:700 (6,1) - 플레이하면서 느낀건데 점프로 두는게 더 어울리겠네요

guineaQ's Insane

00:05:393 (8) - 배치 거의 일직선인데 앞뒤 DS 같게하는건 어떨까요
00:15:316 (2) - 이걸 슬라로 두고 음악따라 00:15:777 - 여기부터 서클 놓는게 나을꺼같네요(00:19:470 (3,4,5) - 여기처럼..)
00:16:470 (5,1) - 얘는 스택 푸는게 더 재밌지 않을까요?
01:25:008 (1) - 별거아닌데 5연타 중간에서 콤보 바꾸는것보단 01:24:777 (6) - 여기부터 새로 시작하는게 낫지않을까요
잘찍으셔서 적을게 없...

GL~

Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2015-08-04T14:56:33+00:00

no kds

아까 포스트 너무 밀려나서 여기에 새로 이어씁니다.

[Hard]
* 00:28:700 (3,4) - 바이올린 소리(?)를 좀 더 강조해 보실 생각 없으신가요.
* 00:52:239 (1,2,3) - 악기가 약하고 거의 보컬 뿐인데 움직임이 너무 크지 않은지? 저라면 키아이 도입을 강조하기 위해서 여기는 거리 고정으로 작게 해줬을 듯
* 점프가 있다면 오히려 00:53:393 (3,1) - 여기에 있어야 할 것처럼 느껴지는데요.
* 00:55:008 (6,1) - 를 비롯한 비슷한 패턴들 - 1. 첫 박이라 강조도 하면 좋겠고 2. 슬라 뒤 노트라서 체감 거리는 더 좁아지고 3. 다음 노트가 제자리 스택이라 움직임도 없으니 이런 박자들마다 좀 더 거리를 벌린 점프를 넣어 처리했으면 어떨까요. 00:58:470 (4,1) - 여기는 넣으셨네요.
* 01:25:931 (1) - 갑자기 뉴콤 주기가 바뀌었는데 꼭 그래야 할 이유가 있나요?
* 01:26:393 (2,3,4,5,1) - 연타 간격이 조금 불일정하고 뒤틀린 듯한 느낌은 의도적?

[제 멘토's Insane]
* 00:41:393 (2,3,4) - 음... 2-3은 0.66x에 3-4는 0.80x?
* 00:44:854 (3,4,5,6,7) - 인세인인데 여기에 있는 1/3 박들을 실현해 보심은 어떤가요. 저는 그쪽 소리가 훨씬 선명하게 들려서요.
* 00:53:393 (3,1,2) - 강조는 해야될 것 같은데 맵 전체에서 제일 빡센 점프가 여기서 나올 법한 지는 조금 의문이네요.
* 01:07:008 (3,4,5) - 3-4와 4-5 거리를 같게 해주는 게 균형 잡히지 않나요?
* 01:13:008 (4,5,6,7,8) - 4-5만 거리가 좀 다른데 저같은 경우에는 직선 연타 패턴을 만들 땐 노트 2개를 찍고 복붙해서 뒤 노트에 스택시킨다음 스택한 노트를 지우는 식으로 하는데 이렇게 하면 완벽한 직선을 쉽게 만들 수 있더라고요.
* 전반적으로 키아이에서의 연타 간격을 늘렸다 줄였다 하시는데 무엇에 의한 변동인지 궁금합니다. 또한 01:03:546 (2,3,4) - 01:18:546 (4,5,6) - 이렇게 반복적으로 비슷한 느낌의 구간에서는 같은 거리를 써주는 것이 일관성 있는 것이 아닌가요?

Good luck~

MineSweeper

39 posts

Joined March 2014

MineSweeper 2015-08-04T16:00:10+00:00

[Easy]
00:10:470 - 00:14:162 - 여기 부분들 음이 정말 강한데, 노트가 없는게 어색한것 같아요. 이 위치에 노트를 추가하면 이지치고 너무 어려워지는 거라면 00:09:316 (1) - 앞의 슬라이더를 00:10:470 - 여기까지 늘리는게 어떨까요?

[skidayo's normal]
00:38:854 (1) - 반주를 따라가는 것보다 보컬에 맞춰서 1/1 슬라이더 두개로 만드는게 좋지 않을까요?
보컬이 없어서 반주가 뚜렸하게 들리는 00:42:546 (1) - 이거랑 구분되게요.
00:41:623 (3) - 박자를 쪼개는게 좋을것 같아요. 슬라이더 시작점에 노트 하나 있고, 00:42:085 - 여기에 1/2슬라이더 하나 있는 식으로
00:46:239 (1,2,3) - 마찬가지
01:24:777 (3) - 이 슬라이더는 01:25:008 - 여기에서 끝내는게 좋을것 같아요.
01:26:854 (1) - 이 슬라이더는 좀더 길게해야 할것 같아요

[hard]
아까 낮에 링크 주셨을때 잠깐 플레이 해봤는데, 맨 앞부분 어색하게 느껴졌던게 고쳐져 있군요~
00:09:777 (2,3) - 2번 슬라이더를 시작점에 서클로 바꾸고 00:10:008 - 에 1/2슬라이더가 들어가야 할것 같아요. 00:10:008 - 여기음을 키보드로 누르도록 하는게 더 좋은것 같아서요.
00:20:393 (1) - 이 슬라이더도 00:20:854 - 여기는 직접 누르도록 하는게 좋을것 같아요.
00:38:162 (3) - 점프가 갑작스럭달까.. 3번이랑 5번 노트의 위치를 바꾸는게 좋아보여요.

Sidetail

1,268 posts

Joined October 2012

Sidetail 2015-08-05T05:06:44+00:00

[guineaQ's Insane]
- 00:03:085 (6,1) - This rhythm sounds better!

- 00:06:777 (6) - Same as above, there is less impact on melody when it is played at very end of slider. (Opinion)

- 00:08:623 (5,6,7,8,1,2) - This seems more clear

- 00:41:393 (2,3,4) - Uneven spacing in triple

- 00:43:931 (5,1) - I move both to (X:284, Y:132)

- 00:53:623 (1,2) - Fits MUCH better if these are switched around

[Hard]
- I can't find any ;;

[Skidayo's Normal]
General - I wish the spacing were bigger so that it is easier to read for people who plays normal. Current map looks like one gigantic set of objects in one line ;;

01:13:008 (2) - I would make #2 slider to this

01:18:546 (6) - To make it more fun, I would cut this slider in half and put reverse on it. Fits song well too.

01:24:777 (3) - I would also do the same thing over [url=01:24:777 (3) -]here as well.[/url] (To make is more fun)

01:26:854 (1) - Slider end at 01:28:123

[Easy]
General - Seems like almost all of them (sliders) are in either horizontal or vertical position. Try some in diagonal, for aesthetics... IE: 00:27:777 (1) - THIS
Other than that, I don't really see anything that I can really improve.

아직 모딩을 잘못해서 미안해염

Taeyang

Elite Mapper

1,209 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

Taeyang 2015-08-05T09:52:22+00:00

ceramics2 wrote:
Hard
00:07:816 (2) - 이서클 빼는개 나은거같아염
나머지는모르니까 시간없으니 일단패스..
소리가 있긔

Karia wrote:
General
BG 16:9 비율이 아마 1366 * 768 아니었던가요? 차이 좀 나는거같은데 손보시는게...
수정완료
모든 난이도의 첫 노트의 시작이 이미 1.9초라 Lead in을 1초나 줄 필요는 없을꺼같아요
수정완료
PreviewTime 언스냅된거같은데 확인해주세요
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비디오가 노말 난이도에만 들어가있는거같네요.
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Easy
음.. 개인적으로 이지는 리듬이 간단한만큼 강/약 비트는 최대한 살리는게 낫다고 생각해요. 00:09:316 (1) - 00:13:008 (1) - 등등 규칙적인 리듬이긴 한데 전부 강한비트 바로 앞에서 잘라버리니까 어색하게 들리네요.. 한번 고려해주세요 ㅋㅋ
키아이에만 피니시가 들어가있는거같은데 그냥 (00:24:085 - 00:38:854 - 00:46:239 - ) 이런 앞부분에도 넣어주시는게..
00:45:316 (3) - 머리부분 휘슬보단 클랩이 더 나을듯하네요
00:49:470 (4,1,2,3,4) - 브픔이 낮긴하지만 이지에서 5서클은 너무한거같네요..
00:59:162 (3,4) - 리듬 뒤집는게 보컬이랑 더 잘 어울리지 않을까요
SPOILER
이지 전부 고쳤습니다!

Hard
00:07:238 (3,1) - 스택 뭔가 안어울리는느낌이...
모딩 또들어오면 고치겠습니다.
00:22:931 (3,4) - 순서 바꿔서 서클-슬라 순으로 놓는게 나을꺼같네요
수정완료
00:37:470 (2) - 개인적으론 리버스 지우고 00:37:931 - 여기부터 서클 놓는게 좋을꺼같은데...
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00:52:700 (2) - 보컬만 살아있는 부분인데 점프가 좀 넓은거같네요..
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00:53:393 (3) - 여기 놓는것보단 00:52:700 (2) - 얘 주위에 둬서 00:53:393 (3,1) - 여기에 점프를 두는게 낫지 않을까요
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01:22:700 (6,1) - 플레이하면서 느낀건데 점프로 두는게 더 어울리겠네요
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GL~

Doyak wrote:
[Hard]
* 00:28:700 (3,4) - 바이올린 소리(?)를 좀 더 강조해 보실 생각 없으신가요.
억지로 강조했다 망할거같으니 우선 이대로
* 00:52:239 (1,2,3) - 악기가 약하고 거의 보컬 뿐인데 움직임이 너무 크지 않은지? 저라면 키아이 도입을 강조하기 위해서 여기는 거리 고정으로 작게 해줬을 듯
수정완료!
* 점프가 있다면 오히려 00:53:393 (3,1) - 여기에 있어야 할 것처럼 느껴지는데요.
수정완료!
* 00:55:008 (6,1) - 를 비롯한 비슷한 패턴들 - 1. 첫 박이라 강조도 하면 좋겠고 2. 슬라 뒤 노트라서 체감 거리는 더 좁아지고 3. 다음 노트가 제자리 스택이라 움직임도 없으니 이런 박자들마다 좀 더 거리를 벌린 점프를 넣어 처리했으면 어떨까요. 00:58:470 (4,1) - 여기는 넣으셨네요.
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* 01:25:931 (1) - 갑자기 뉴콤 주기가 바뀌었는데 꼭 그래야 할 이유가 있나요?
수정완료!
* 01:26:393 (2,3,4,5,1) - 연타 간격이 조금 불일정하고 뒤틀린 듯한 느낌은 의도적?
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chmpro wrote:
[Easy]
00:10:470 - 00:14:162 - 여기 부분들 음이 정말 강한데, 노트가 없는게 어색한것 같아요. 이 위치에 노트를 추가하면 이지치고 너무 어려워지는 거라면 00:09:316 (1) - 앞의 슬라이더를 00:10:470 - 여기까지 늘리는게 어떨까요?
굳굳 수정완료!

[hard]
아까 낮에 링크 주셨을때 잠깐 플레이 해봤는데, 맨 앞부분 어색하게 느껴졌던게 고쳐져 있군요~
00:09:777 (2,3) - 2번 슬라이더를 시작점에 서클로 바꾸고 00:10:008 - 에 1/2슬라이더가 들어가야 할것 같아요. 00:10:008 - 여기음을 키보드로 누르도록 하는게 더 좋은것 같아서요.
00:20:393 (1) - 이 슬라이더도 00:20:854 - 여기는 직접 누르도록 하는게 좋을것 같아요.
위의 두문제는 저는 괜찮다고 생각하기에 모딩이 더오면 고치도록 하겠습니다.
00:38:162 (3) - 점프가 갑작스럭달까.. 3번이랑 5번 노트의 위치를 바꾸는게 좋아보여요.
수정완료!

BetaStar wrote:
[Easy]
General - Seems like almost all of them (sliders) are in either horizontal or vertical position. Try some in diagonal, for aesthetics... IE: 00:27:777 (1) - THIS
fixed
Other than that, I don't really see anything that I can really improve.

모딩 감사합니다.!

Skidayo

220 posts

Joined November 2013

Skidayo 2015-08-05T11:03:05+00:00

수정했습니다! 상당히 괜찮아진것같아요

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osu file format v14

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Artist:Tokyo Karan Koron
ArtistUnicode:東京カランコロン
Creator:Taeyang
Version:Skidayo's Normal
Source:食戟のソーマ
Tags:shokugeki no soma 1st Ending  food wars guineaQ Skidayo
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Startrick

361 posts

Joined June 2013

Startrick 2015-08-05T11:32:41+00:00

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Last edited by Startrick 2017-12-27T03:59:34+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Taeyang

Elite Mapper

1,209 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

Taeyang 2015-08-05T14:11:20+00:00

Startrick wrote:
From M4M

제가 모딩 실력이 부족한 터라 어떻게 해야 할지도 잘 모르며 거의 주관적인 의견이 대부분입니다
많이 잡아내지도 못 하고 모두 거절하셔도 상관없지만 본인이 괜찮다고 요청하신 만큼 답은 꼭 제대로 해주시면 감사하겠습니다

General
지적해야 하는 건지 잘 모르겠습니다만 태그에 'Ending'이랑 'food' 사이에 띄어쓰기가 2번 돼있네요
수정완료!
Easy 난이도에 비디오가 안 들어가 있네요
수정완료!

Easy
00:10:931 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3489955 < 사진과 같이 수정하는 게 좀 더 예쁘지 않을까요?
맵 전체적으로 00:09:316 (1) - 이런 슬라이더가 많이 보이는데 지금의 ~ 슬라이더와는 느낌이 이상한 것 같아서요
00:14:623 (2) - ^
수정완료
00:17:854 / 00:21:546 - 이 두 부분 음이 강한데 수정해서 맞춰보시는 건 어떨까 싶네요
저걸 잡게된다면 박자가 어려워 지기떄문에 우선 보류해두겠습니다.
00:43:931 (2) - ^
수정완료

Skidayo's Normal
00:30:546 (6) - x:8 y:92로 옮겨보시는 건 어떨까요? 00:29:623 (4) - 이 슬라이더랑 대칭이 완벽해지네요
00:49:931 (1) - 모양 좀 더 다듬으시면 보기 예쁠 듯...?
01:22:700 (8) - x:8 y:184로 옮기시면 더 보기 좋을 것 같네요
수정하신다면 01:23:623 (1) - 디스턴스 다시 맞춰주셔야 하고요
몇몇 구간 리매핑이 되었습니다.

Hard
00:28:700 (3) - 제가 보기엔 00:27:777 (1) - 이 슬라이더가 완전히 사라지기도 전에 겹치는 게 눈에 보여서 이상한 것 같은...?
모딩이 또온다면 수정하겠습니다. 플레이할떄는 큰이상이 없기때문에....
01:25:008 (1,2) - 헷갈릴 수도 있지 않을까요? 2번 슬라이더가 01:25:354에 있는 걸로 본다던가...
DS를 똑같이 해서 수정했습니다.

모딩 감사합니다~!

Ayana Hana

796 posts

Joined June 2014

Ayana Hana 2015-08-05T15:44:07+00:00

Hello.

[guineaQ's Insane]

00:09:546 (2) -

00:13:008 (1) - 224/272.
00:35:623 (2) - Ctrl+G.

[Hard]

00:54:777 (4,5,4) - 01:00:777 (5,6) - You can stack them (Randomly) ^^^

I can't say anything about easy and normal.

Sorry for the small mod.

go rank

guineaQ

1,588 posts

Joined December 2013

guineaQ 2015-08-07T09:19:14+00:00

수정 안한것만 답하겠음
I will only reply to mods that I didn't fix

Karia wrote:
ㅁㄴㅇㄹㅇ

guineaQ's Insane
00:05:393 (8) - 배치 거의 일직선인데 앞뒤 DS 같게하는건 어떨까요 00:04:470 (4,5,8) - 이걸로 일직선 형성을 위해서 이렇게 배치
00:15:316 (2) - 이걸 슬라로 두고 음악따라 00:15:777 - 여기부터 서클 놓는게 나을꺼같네요(00:19:470 (3,4,5) - 여기처럼..) 딱히 좋은 배치가 생각 안나서 보류..
잘찍으셔서 적을게 없...

GL~

Doyak wrote:
no kds

아까 포스트 너무 밀려나서 여기에 새로 이어씁니다.

[제 멘토's Insane]
* 00:44:854 (3,4,5,6,7) - 인세인인데 여기에 있는 1/3 박들을 실현해 보심은 어떤가요. 저는 그쪽 소리가 훨씬 선명하게 들려서요. 갑자기 1/3으로 바꾸면 혼돈과 카오스가 일어나서 ㄴㄴ
* 01:13:008 (4,5,6,7,8) - 4-5만 거리가 좀 다른데 저같은 경우에는 직선 연타 패턴을 만들 땐 노트 2개를 찍고 복붙해서 뒤 노트에 스택시킨다음 스택한 노트를 지우는 식으로 하는데 이렇게 하면 완벽한 직선을 쉽게 만들 수 있더라고요. 사실 슬라이더 찍고 ctrl+shift+f 한거인데도 저럼 ㅋ
* 전반적으로 키아이에서의 연타 간격을 늘렸다 줄였다 하시는데 무엇에 의한 변동인지 궁금합니다. 또한 01:03:546 (2,3,4) - 01:18:546 (4,5,6) - 이렇게 반복적으로 비슷한 느낌의 구간에서는 같은 거리를 써주는 것이 일관성 있는 것이 아닌가요? 사실 코러스 때의 보컬이 너무나도 지루하고 노래 리듬 자체에도 변형이 거의 없어 리듬은 복붙하되 배치는 다양화 시킴 ㅇㅅㅇ

Good luck~

BetaStar wrote:
[guineaQ's Insane]
- 00:03:085 (6,1) - This rhythm sounds better! 전 지금 이게 더 나은것 같은데 ;;

- 00:06:777 (6) - Same as above, there is less impact on melody when it is played at very end of slider. (Opinion) 일관성 땜시

- 00:08:623 (5,6,7,8,1,2) - This seems more clear 너무 빈약한듯

- 00:43:931 (5,1) - I move both to (X:284, Y:132) 삼각형이 일그려져서

아직 모딩을 잘못해서 미안해염

Startrick wrote:
From M4M

제가 모딩 실력이 부족한 터라 어떻게 해야 할지도 잘 모르며 거의 주관적인 의견이 대부분입니다
많이 잡아내지도 못 하고 모두 거절하셔도 상관없지만 본인이 괜찮다고 요청하신 만큼 답은 꼭 제대로 해주시면 감사하겠습니다

guineaQ's Insane
00:22:239 (1) - 여기 뉴 콤보를 제거하고 00:23:162 (3) - 여기 추가하시는 건 어떨까요?
제가 느끼기엔 이게 좋은 것 같아서... 솔직히 말해서 보컬에 맞추는 것도 좋지만 저는 일관성이 1순위라서
01:24:777 (6,7,1,2,3) - 연타 배치 제자리에 두기보다는 01:22:700 (9,10,11,12,1) - 이런 식으로 둬보시는 건 어떨까 싶네요 마땅히 갈 곳이 없어서 ㅜㅜ

제가 잡을 수 있는 것들은 여기까지인 것 같네요
짧은 모딩 죄송합니다...

Lama Poluna wrote:
Hello.

[guineaQ's Insane]

00:09:546 (2) - breaks blanket and I don't think having a completely horizontal slider fits vocal pitch change there
00:13:008 (1) - 224/272. breaks structure
00:35:623 (2) - Ctrl+G. vocal pitch winds back to original pitch where 00:35:162 (1) - started so I want to have sliders point outward from similar point

can you state your reasoning in the future mods? Because it's really hard for me (or others) to consider these mods if you don't really explain your thought process behind them :c

I can't say anything about easy and normal.

Sorry for the small mod.

go rank

업뎃ㄱㄱ

osu file format v14

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Nathan

2,161 posts

Joined August 2014

Nathan 2015-08-09T00:57:50+00:00

mod as requested

[General]

ehhhhhh I'm a bit unsure about the video, it's not suggestive in any way but near-nudity still isn't allowed according to ranking criteria
There is a 1ms delay on normal-hitfinish2 ;w;
Skidayo's Normal has inconsistent video offset with the rest of the diffs

[Easy]

00:27:777 (1) - The curve really goes against the flow coming from 00:26:854 (4), maybe you wanted to break flow for emphasis but imo you shouldn't do that in a low diff, I'd ctrl+h 00:27:777 (1), which should also be an improvement aesthetically
00:58:239 (2,4) - Would do the same with both of these, then since you would have to move 00:59:162 (3) - I'd stack it on 01:01:008 (1) -

[Hard]

00:07:238 (3,1) - I wouldn't stack these when you have all this low spaced 1/4 in 00:07:470 (1,2,3,4,5), it might be a bit hard to read
00:47:623 (3) - Ends on a stronger vocal+downbeat
00:58:239 (3,4) - Weird rhythm, would've just used 2 1/2 sliders here instead of a 1/2 repeat that starts on a weaker vocal

good luck! ww

Taeyang

Elite Mapper

1,209 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

Taeyang 2015-08-09T09:10:23+00:00

sukiNathan wrote:
mod as requested

[General]
ehhhhhh I'm a bit unsure about the video, it's not suggestive in any way but near-nudity still isn't allowed according to ranking criteria
i think that's fine
There is a 1ms delay on normal-hitfinish2 ;w;
fixed
Skidayo's Normal has inconsistent video offset with the rest of the diffs
fixed
[Easy]
00:27:777 (1) - The curve really goes against the flow coming from 00:26:854 (4), maybe you wanted to break flow for emphasis but imo you shouldn't do that in a low diff, I'd ctrl+h 00:27:777 (1), which should also be an improvement aesthetically
fixed
00:58:239 (2,4) - Would do the same with both of these, then since you would have to move 00:59:162 (3) - I'd stack it on 01:01:008 (1) -
fixed
[Hard]
00:07:238 (3,1) - I wouldn't stack these when you have all this low spaced 1/4 in 00:07:470 (1,2,3,4,5), it might be a bit hard to read
fixed
00:47:623 (3) - Ends on a stronger vocal+downbeat
fixed
00:58:239 (3,4) - Weird rhythm, would've just used 2 1/2 sliders here instead of a 1/2 repeat that starts on a weaker vocal
fixed
good luck! ww

Bara-

11,978 posts

Joined April 2013

Bara- 2015-08-10T12:38:53+00:00

[Easy]

00:27:777 (1) - Make it in the same as as you did 00:24:085 (1,2,3) -, it curves more naturally
00:33:316 (3) - ^^
00:35:162 (1,2) - Distance is hightened here. Please set it to 1.0
01:01:470 (2) - Sliders such as these, upbeat sliders are generally a bad idea. Upbeat sliders start at 2nd or 4th beats and end on 1st or 3rd beats, which are stronger. These should almost never be used in easies as they play rather weird when there is a solid beat
01:15:316 (4) - ^^ (See how it ends on a downbeat (big white tick) and has a finish. Such sounds, impactful sounds should Always be mapped with either a sldierstart or a circle. You'll never want to map those with sliderends)

[Skidayo]

00:10:931 (3,1) - Improve stack
00:59:623 (5,1) - The overlap here isn't really nice. Why not move (1) to 232:252 (then look at the next notes for proper distance)

Great diff

[Hard]

00:42:546 (1,2,3) - What's the reason for these high spacings? I think you should Ctrl G 2 so it's all 1.2 spacing which makes more sense

[guineaQ]

01:04:123 - Shouldn't the triplet be around here, instead of 01:03:893 (3) - ?
01:26:854 (1) - <3 (Minor - Perhaps make the end a selfblanket (needs a red node)

This is literally all I could find
It's such a great and well made map :3

Get a few more mods (mostly for polishing), then you can call me back :3
Star'd :3

Taeyang

Elite Mapper

1,209 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

Taeyang 2015-08-11T03:09:57+00:00

Baraatje123 wrote:

[Easy]
00:27:777 (1) - Make it in the same as as you did 00:24:085 (1,2,3) -, it curves more naturally
00:33:316 (3) - ^^
00:35:162 (1,2) - Distance is hightened here. Please set it to 1.0
01:01:470 (2) - Sliders such as these, upbeat sliders are generally a bad idea. Upbeat sliders start at 2nd or 4th beats and end on 1st or 3rd beats, which are stronger. These should almost never be used in easies as they play rather weird when there is a solid beat
01:15:316 (4) - ^^ (See how it ends on a downbeat (big white tick) and has a finish. Such sounds, impactful sounds should Always be mapped with either a sldierstart or a circle. You'll never want to map those with sliderends)
[Skidayo]
00:10:931 (3,1) - Improve stack
00:59:623 (5,1) - The overlap here isn't really nice. Why not move (1) to 232:252 (then look at the next notes for proper distance)
Great diff

[Hard]
00:42:546 (1,2,3) - What's the reason for these high spacings? I think you should Ctrl G 2 so it's all 1.2 spacing which makes more sense

This is literally all I could find
It's such a great and well made map :3

Get a few more mods (mostly for polishing), then you can call me back :3
Star'd :3

we are fixed all thanks !!

guineaQ

1,588 posts

Joined December 2013

guineaQ 2015-08-11T08:16:52+00:00

Baraatje123 wrote:

[guineaQ]
01:04:123 - Shouldn't the triplet be around here, instead of 01:03:893 (3) - ? I'm placing slider -> 1/4s based on vocal waves (like the syllable pronounced is same but the vocal distorts the pitch while holding that syllable :3), so it is on correct position for this one (the song isn't awfully consistent with when it uses this technique sooooo)
01:26:854 (1) - <3 (Minor - Perhaps make the end a selfblanket (needs a red node) ehhhh too much adjustments required XD, place a circle at the slider end with stack view off, and you will see that it's fine as it is :3
This is literally all I could find
It's such a great and well made map :3

Get a few more mods (mostly for polishing), then you can call me back :3
Star'd :3

Come[Back]Home

1,790 posts

Joined October 2011

Come[Back]Home 2015-08-12T17:20:22+00:00

Easy

00:01:931 (1,2) Instead of this (1) should be a slider till 00:03:085 and you could add a circle here 00:03:546 . I think thats better since it fills the boring emptiness
00:27:777 (1) This one should look into another direction than 00:26:854 (4) Otherwise its just a weird placement with a weird flow.
00:53:623 (1,2,3,4,5,6) You could get this a bit more interesting by moving (3) a bit up and down (whatever you prefer) and (6) a bit left or right. It would get some movement into it instead of those straight lines

Skidayo's Normal

00:15:777 (4) Moving the middlepoint too 480/88 and the tail too 464/40 would create a better flow and it will look better

Hard

00:43:931 (4) I dont if it is okay to use this slidershape in a Hard, it seems unfitting, i guess you shouldnt use it. Its just weird to follow those sliders, and they look strange and random
01:22:239 (5,1) Bad overlap

guineaQ's Insane

00:37:008 (1) ctrl+g here would be nice, since when you go down from (4) to (5) you go clockwise. So to keep that flow up you should ctrl+g this
00:37:470 (2) ^

Cool Mapset! :3

Good Luck~

[ Zzz ]

1,296 posts

Joined June 2011

[ Zzz ] 2015-08-14T05:37:50+00:00

ㅎㅇㅎㅇ

노말

01:12:777 (2) - 여기 x148 y308 로 바꿔주세요. 흐름상 너무 위로 간것같아요. 그김에 01:13:008 (3) - 이것도 x124 y264 정도로 변경.

볼게 없네요 .. 안고치셧으면 쿠도스 안주시면되고 고치셨으면 쿠도스주세요 :3

SLM

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SLM 2015-08-15T05:49:04+00:00

맵이 전체적으로 괜찮아서 무시해도 될 법한 세세한것들만 모딩해봤습니다. (대부분 제 주관적인 의견입니다)

Easy

딱히 없네요..

Skidayo's Normal

- 00:53:623 (1,2,4) - 여기서도 곡선 슬라 쓰시는게 어떨까요?

Hard

- 00:13:008 (1) - 00:12:316 (4) - 와 스택?
- 00:16:700 (1) - 직선보다는 약간 곡선으로 하는게 나을것 같아요.

SPOILER

- 00:27:777 (1) - 00:28:700 (3) - 와 오버랩되는게 약간 보기 안좋은데 이렇게 거꾸로 두는건 어떨까요?

SPOILER

- 01:02:854 (1) - 01:10:239 (1) - 이 두개 점프 거리를 약간만 줄이시는게 어떨까요? 이런식으로 뉴콤 넘어가면서 생기는 다른 점프들은 DS 2를 안넘는데 이 두개는 약간 큰 것 같아요.
- 01:07:008 (3,4) - 이것도 01:21:777 (3,4) - 얘네처럼 밑에서 위로 올라가게 두는게 보기에 좋을것 같아요.

guineaQ's Insane

- 00:02:277 (2) - 00:04:123 (2) - 00:05:046 (6) - 00:05:970 (2) - 이것들 빼시는게 노래에 맞다고 생각해요.
- 00:43:700 (4,5) - 00:44:393 (1,2,3,4) - 노래 흐름상 00:38:854 여기부터 쉬는부분? 이라 좀 더 쉬워야 할것 같은데 거리 좀 줄이시는게 어떨까요? 지금 점프는 너무 어려운 느낌
- 01:26:393 (9,10,11,12,1) - 하드난이도와 차이를 두기위해 간격 좀 늘리시는건 어떨까요?

이상입니다. Good luck

Sonnyc

7,761 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2015-08-15T07:05:18+00:00

[Hard]

00:57:316 (1,2) - 스택 완벽하게 해주세요.
01:07:008 (3,4,5) - 간격 다 같게 하는게 안정감 있어보입니다.
01:21:777 (3,4,5) - ^

모딩 거리가 별로 없네요

Taeyang

Elite Mapper

1,209 posts

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Topic Starter

Taeyang 2015-08-15T08:07:15+00:00

Come[Back]Home wrote:
Easy

00:01:931 (1,2) Instead of this (1) should be a slider till 00:03:085 and you could add a circle here 00:03:546 . I think thats better since it fills the boring emptiness
that's make hardly
00:27:777 (1) This one should look into another direction than 00:26:854 (4) Otherwise its just a weird placement with a weird flow.
i think fine
00:53:623 (1,2,3,4,5,6) You could get this a bit more interesting by moving (3) a bit up and down (whatever you prefer) and (6) a bit left or right. It would get some movement into it instead of those straight lines
01:08:393 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
same part here is KIAI time
Skidayo's Normal

00:15:777 (4) Moving the middlepoint too 480/88 and the tail too 464/40 would create a better flow and it will look better
fixed

Hard

00:43:931 (4) I dont if it is okay to use this slidershape in a Hard, it seems unfitting, i guess you shouldnt use it. Its just weird to follow those sliders, and they look strange and random
00:43:470 (3,4) - blanket pattern and i think that's not hard
01:22:239 (5,1) Bad overlap
fixed

[ Zzz ] wrote:
ㅎㅇㅎㅇ

노말

01:12:777 (2) - 여기 x148 y308 로 바꿔주세요. 흐름상 너무 위로 간것같아요. 그김에 01:13:008 (3) - 이것도 x124 y264 정도로 변경.

볼게 없네요 .. 안고치셧으면 쿠도스 안주시면되고 고치셨으면 쿠도스주세요 :3
수정완료~

SLMmix wrote:
맵이 전체적으로 괜찮아서 무시해도 될 법한 세세한것들만 모딩해봤습니다. (대부분 제 주관적인 의견입니다)

Easy

딱히 없네요..

Skidayo's Normal

- 00:53:623 (1,2,4) - 여기서도 곡선 슬라 쓰시는게 어떨까요?
맵에 곡선을 좀많이써서 직선슬라좀 때려박으라했습니다.

Hard

- 00:13:008 (1) - 00:12:316 (4) - 와 스택?
강조해주고싶어서 점프 만들어 반스택 했습니다.
- 00:16:700 (1) - 직선보다는 약간 곡선으로 하는게 나을것 같아요.
SPOILER
전에 곡선이 조금 많아서 그리고 직선쪽이 흐름이 더 좋아보여서 이대로 두겠습니다.
- 00:27:777 (1) - 00:28:700 (3) - 와 오버랩되는게 약간 보기 안좋은데 이렇게 거꾸로 두는건 어떨까요?[spoilerbox[/spoilerbox]
제 나름대로 고쳤습니다
- 01:02:854 (1) - 01:10:239 (1) - 이 두개 점프 거리를 약간만 줄이시는게 어떨까요? 이런식으로 뉴콤 넘어가면서 생기는 다른 점프들은 DS 2를 안넘는데 이 두개는 약간 큰 것 같아요.
줄였습니다
- 01:07:008 (3,4) - 이것도 01:21:777 (3,4) - 얘네처럼 밑에서 위로 올라가게 두는게 보기에 좋을것 같아요.
나름대로 고쳤습니다.

Sonnyc wrote:
[Hard]
00:57:316 (1,2) - 스택 완벽하게 해주세요.
수정완료!
01:07:008 (3,4,5) - 간격 다 같게 하는게 안정감 있어보입니다.
01:21:777 (3,4,5) - ^
2연타뺴고 같게했습니다. 나름대로 조금 수정했습니다.
모딩 거리가 별로 없네요

guineaQ

1,588 posts

Joined December 2013

guineaQ 2015-08-16T08:13:57+00:00

Come[Back]Home wrote:
guineaQ's Insane

00:37:008 (1) ctrl+g here would be nice, since when you go down from (4) to (5) you go clockwise. So to keep that flow up you should ctrl+g this
the jump is pretty gargantuan which kinda eliminates all the clockwise momentum you built up from the 4,5, so I think this is in fact a good place to change the flow direciton instead.
00:37:470 (2) ^ ^ since I did not change the above

Cool Mapset! :3

Good Luck~

SLMmix wrote:
맵이 전체적으로 괜찮아서 무시해도 될 법한 세세한것들만 모딩해봤습니다. (대부분 제 주관적인 의견입니다)

guineaQ's Insane

- 00:02:277 (2) - 00:04:123 (2) - 00:05:046 (6) - 00:05:970 (2) - 이것들 빼시는게 노래에 맞다고 생각해요. 그거 다 기타에 맞춘건데
- 00:43:700 (4,5) - 00:44:393 (1,2,3,4) - 노래 흐름상 00:38:854 여기부터 쉬는부분? 이라 좀 더 쉬워야 할것 같은데 거리 좀 줄이시는게 어떨까요? 지금 점프는 너무 어려운 느낌 00:43:700 (4,5) -는 00:43:931 - 에 들어오는 기타+드럼 소리 강조를 위해서 점프로 해놓은거고, 00:44:393 (1,2) -은 걍 00:43:700 (4,5) - 이거 복붙이라서;; (그리고 드럼 2연타도 나와서) 그리고 이거 무빙도 그리 어렵다고 생각되지는 않네요
- 01:26:393 (9,10,11,12,1) - 하드난이도와 차이를 두기위해 간격 좀 늘리시는건 어떨까요? 안그래도 난이도 전체가 1/4 떡칠이라서 더 차이를 둘 필요는 없을 듯하네요

이상입니다. Good luck

Bara-

11,978 posts

Joined April 2013

Bara- 2015-08-20T18:20:58+00:00

All seems fine now

Bubbled

To next BN

Normal has some slight DS issues (0.9 instead of 1.0), however, I was told you are free to change DS to make it look better. I'm quite sure it's fine, so don't feel weird about that

Beomsan

Beatmap Nominator

1,890 posts

Joined November 2013

Beomsan 2015-08-22T17:56:38+00:00

가나요

Taeyang

Elite Mapper

1,209 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

Taeyang 2015-08-22T19:49:57+00:00

Beomsan wrote:
가나요

ㄴ 한번 터질듯ㅋㅅㅋ

sheela

2,651 posts

Joined October 2011

sheela 2015-08-23T19:38:49+00:00

Hello Taeyang!

First, I have to pop the bubble due to following reasons:

Okay, the first part of the video is showing mostly near-nudity content, and slightly suggestive in my opinion (the pink-haired girl posing and the girl blushing with a weird face expression). This is not suitable for the community, as they are younger people also playing the game. You'll need to remove this out of the beatmap.
The metadata for the title is wrong. Therefore, the (TV Size) should be removed:
1. Title: スパイス
2. Romanised Title: Spice
http://avex.jp/tokyokarankoron_spice/
http://shokugekinosoma.com/music/ed/ed.html

Second, here's my mod!

General

The timing appears to be little early. I think +13 for the offset and everything should be accurate.
This is optional so you don't have to do. soft-hitwhistle.wav and soft-hitwhistle2.wav have both silences in after the last noise. Removing them while keeping the length of the file higher or equal to 100ms could save tiny amounts of filesize.

Easy

00:58:239 (2) - Very nazi, but the tail's hitborder is a little too close to the following hitcircle. It was kind of obvious to me, so move this to bottom-right by little pixels (using Ctrl + Arrow Keys).

Skidayo's Normal

01:01:470 (2) - To be honest, I would move this somewhere like x:171 y:145 in order to get the consistent distance. You can move 01:01:931 (3) to x:71 y:134 to get the blanket pattern.

Hard

00:01:931 to 00:07:470 - You could at least add more objects in this part, compared to Insane. Hard has way less density than Insane for this part which could be a problem. You can try this rhythm:
SPOILER
00:52:239 (1,2) - I explain something in the Insane section of the mod. The sliderslide is enabled, yet it's noisy for the current part of the music and doesn't feel fitting when you follow the vocals alone in my opinion. I would silence the slides.
01:25:008 (1,2) - For each kicksliders, how about you add a repeat? Currently, it sounds unnatural, since you strictly follow the drums. Adding a repeat will hit the snare on the red ticks, and it feels more complete to me.

guineaQ's Insane

00:12:546 (4,1) - I think this should get a bigger spacing than 00:11:854 (3,4) because of the loud beat on the downbeat 00:13:008 .
00:20:393 (1) - How about you move this closer to the previous circle, like x:369 y:183? It's to get a better readability like 00:16:470 (5,1) due to the 3/4 rhythm before.
00:52:239 (1,2) - I'd remove the slider slide sound to those slider. It gets noisy and I personally think it fits when you follow the vocals.
01:00:200 (3) - Remove this hitcircle? I couldn't hear any beat in the music in this tick.

Good map you got here! Call me back whenever everything is updated.

guineaQ

1,588 posts

Joined December 2013

guineaQ 2015-08-24T19:35:06+00:00

sheela901 wrote:

guineaQ's Insane
00:12:546 (4,1) - I think this should get a bigger spacing than 00:11:854 (3,4) because of the loud beat on the downbeat 00:13:008 .
00:20:393 (1) - How about you move this closer to the previous circle, like x:369 y:183? It's to get a better readability like 00:16:470 (5,1) due to the 3/4 rhythm before.
00:52:239 (1,2) - I'd remove the slider slide sound to those slider. It gets noisy and I personally think it fits when you follow the vocals.
01:00:200 (3) - Remove this hitcircle? I couldn't hear any beat in the music in this tick.
Good map you got here! Call me back whenever everything is updated.

fixed everything except that for the 2nd point I didn't move it THAT close

fasdfasdfasdf I was worried about the vid too

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Spice.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 53508
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Spice (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:スパイス (TV Size)
Artist:Tokyo Karan Koron
ArtistUnicode:東京カランコロン
Creator:Taeyang
Version:guineaQ's Insane
Source:食戟のソーマ
Tags:shokugeki no soma 1st Ending food wars guineaQ Skidayo
BeatmapID:707460
BeatmapSetID:317592

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8.2
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Taeyang

Elite Mapper

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Taeyang 2015-08-26T15:21:46+00:00

sheela901 wrote:

Hello Taeyang!

First, I have to pop the bubble due to following reasons:
Okay, the first part of the video is showing mostly near-nudity content, and slightly suggestive in my opinion (the pink-haired girl posing and the girl blushing with a weird face expression). This is not suitable for the community, as they are younger people also playing the game. You'll need to remove this out of the beatmap.
Fixed
The metadata for the title is wrong. Therefore, the (TV Size) should be removed:
Title: スパイス
Romanised Title: Spice
http://avex.jp/tokyokarankoron_spice/
http://shokugekinosoma.com/music/ed/ed.html
Fixed

Second, here's my mod!
General
The timing appears to be little early. I think +13 for the offset and everything should be accurate.
+13 so mush so i did +9
This is optional so you don't have to do. soft-hitwhistle.wav and soft-hitwhistle2.wav have both silences in after the last noise. Removing them while keeping the length of the file higher or equal to 100ms could save tiny amounts of filesize.
i agree but it's not unrankable also i removed 'vid' so file size it's fine to me

Easy
00:58:239 (2) - Very nazi, but the tail's hitborder is a little too close to the following hitcircle. It was kind of obvious to me, so move this to bottom-right by little pixels (using Ctrl + Arrow Keys).
fixed

Skidayo's Normal
01:01:470 (2) - To be honest, I would move this somewhere like x:171 y:145 in order to get the consistent distance. You can move 01:01:931 (3) to x:71 y:134 to get the blanket pattern.
fixed

Hard
00:01:931 to 00:07:470 - You could at least add more objects in this part, compared to Insane. Hard has way less density than Insane for this part which could be a problem. You can try this rhythm:
SPOILER
here is intro part so i dont want make hardly
00:52:239 (1,2) - I explain something in the Insane section of the mod. The sliderslide is enabled, yet it's noisy for the current part of the music and doesn't feel fitting when you follow the vocals alone in my opinion. I would silence the slides.
fixed
01:25:008 (1,2) - For each kicksliders, how about you add a repeat? Currently, it sounds unnatural, since you strictly follow the drums. Adding a repeat will hit the snare on the red ticks, and it feels more complete to me.
fixed

Thanks~!

Enon

Beatmap Nominator

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Enon 2015-08-27T10:20:55+00:00

BG

이것도 그렇게 화질이 좋은건 아닌데, 지금껀 너무 상태가 안좋아보여서 이거 써보시는거 추천

Taeyang

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Taeyang 2015-08-27T16:42:38+00:00

Enon wrote:
BG

이것도 그렇게 화질이 좋은건 아닌데, 지금껀 너무 상태가 안좋아보여서 이거 써보시는거 추천

오 ㄳㄳ요~!
쿧오스 드센
Thanks to enon for nice BG

sheela

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Joined October 2011

sheela 2015-08-27T18:48:20+00:00

So,

The mapper has change the background image to what Enon provided.
In Hard, he decided to map more the intro part, as it was empty to me. Looks nice.

The only thing you'll have to do is to snap an inherited point on 00:24:094 in Skidayo's Normal. After that, I should be able to bubble your beatmap!

Taeyang

Elite Mapper

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Taeyang 2015-08-27T18:57:28+00:00

sheela901 wrote:
So,
The mapper has change the background image to what Enon provided.
In Hard, he decided to map more the intro part, as it was empty to me. Looks nice.
The only thing you'll have to do is to snap an inherited point on 00:24:094 in Skidayo's Normal. After that, I should be able to bubble your beatmap!

ok fixed~!

sheela

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Joined October 2011

sheela 2015-08-27T18:59:25+00:00

The mapset looks pretty good to me! Here's my rebubble!

Bara-

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Joined April 2013

Bara- 2015-08-27T19:26:53+00:00

As said in-game, I'll qualify when I can
With that I mean, when my 24 hrs cooldown is over which is approx 23 hours after this post
This is mostly to the other bn

Enon

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Enon 2015-08-28T07:23:29+00:00

ㅊㅊㅊㅊㅊ

Taeyang

Elite Mapper

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Taeyang 2015-08-28T13:14:56+00:00