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HO-KAGO TEA TIME - Songs Compilation

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lolia
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015년 11월 15일 일요일 at 오전 12:56:19

Artist: HO-KAGO TEA TIME
Title: Songs Compilation
Source: けいおん!
Tags: Tenshi ni Fureta yo! Watashi no Koi wa Hotchkiss Pure Pure Heart Cagayake! GIRLS Honey Sweet Tea Time Don't Say "Lazy" NO, Thank You! Listen!! Singing! Ichigo Parfait ga Tomaranai Kira Kira Days Girls in Wonderland U&I U and I Tokimeki Sugar Fuwa Fuwa Time Houkago Tea Time Keion K-ON! HTT Marathon Kanari
BPM: 117
Filesize: 21511kb
Play Time: 10:07
Difficulties Available:
  1. After School Tea Time (5.2 stars, 2142 notes)
Download: HO-KAGO TEA TIME - Songs Compilation
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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After School Tea Time - me
StoryBoard - Kanari

Timing by pkk, BeatofIke. Thanks!!

~♬
01 Tenshi ni Fureta yo! - BPM 117
02 Watashi no Koi wa Hotchkiss - BPM 130
03 Pure Pure Heart - BPM 154
04 Cagayake! GIRLS - BPM 170
05 Honey Sweet Tea Time - BPM 165
06 Don't Say "Lazy" - BPM 181
07 NO, Thank You! - BPM 181
08 Listen!! - BPM 175
09 Singing! - BPM 180
10 Ichigo Parfait ga Tomaranai - BPM 186
11 Kira Kira Days - BPM 200
12 Girls in Wonderland - BPM 235
13 U&I - BPM 210
14 Tokimeki Sugar - BPM 197
15 Fuwa Fuwa Time - BPM 180
16 Houkago Tea Time - BPM 147
The Veldt
Wow... *shoots star because K-ON*
Topic Starter
lolia

forbiddenplayer wrote:

Wow... *shoots star because K-ON*
lol thanks!
HappyRocket88
<Insert beautiful banner here>


Hi! from my queue.

[General]
htt.jpg is 1365x768, which differs from the recommended size of 1366x768 :P
The folder size exceeds the weight allowed. Are you sure you tried reducing it?
Uncheck Letterbox during break because you don't storyboard yet.
Maybe an idea for the soryboard could be choosing the same quantity of images related to the number to the songs. and writing the BPM over the image. Just an idea though.

[After School Tea Time]
00:12:432 (6) Just a nazi suggestion but you can stack it over this slider's beginning 00:10:637 (1)
00:20:381 (5,6) What about using the same DS here as you did here 00:19:099 (2,3) ?
00:51:510 (2) Just a nazi suggestion but this object can be stack over this slider's end 00:50:817 (4) . as well as you did here 00:51:279 (1,3) .
00:57:971 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5) I'd rather suggest to follow the DS in this pattern to don't confuse in this tiny stream.
01:01:894 (5) Also, this can be stacked at this slider's end 01:01:202 (3) to make the pattern neater.
01:10:433 (4,5,6,7,8) You can make this stream flow more lineal though.
01:16:894 (1,2) Just a nazi suggestion but you can improve the blanket among this pattern.
01:41:640 (6) Put it here 392|268 to follow the lineal flow with the rest of the pattern.
02:12:309 (8,1) Fix DS flow here. It's better to keep consistency.
02:13:015 (8,1) ^
02:53:659 (2) IS the unstack really intentional? It looks a bit ugly imo.
03:26:357 (2) I think it would look better if you stack it here 03:26:688 (4) , as well as you did with this object 03:27:186 (1) .
04:03:342 (6,1) Blanket. Such as a nazi suggestion.
04:06:160 (2) Put it here 108|32 for a better lineal flow.
04:20:509 (1) The jumpy pattern here among these two sliders (4) is a bit high, I'd rather go for putting this object here 340|352 to reduce the lack a bit.
06:51:903 (3) You can stack this into this slider's end 06:51:332 (1) to make a neater look of these pattern.
07:18:475 (4) Lineal flow, what about setting it here 312|120

That's all I can found out in the mapset. Because, tbh, I can't pass it. :p I like the jumps and the neat streams you manage, :3 Good luck!
OzzyOzrock
can I make a marathon taiko (maybe i'll collab it with someone)? ;w;
Topic Starter
lolia

HappyRocket88 wrote:

<Insert beautiful banner here>


Hi! from my queue.

[General]
htt.jpg is 1365x768, which differs from the recommended size of 1366x768 :P fixed
The folder size exceeds the weight allowed. Are you sure you tried reducing it? I already reduced the mp3 file size ;w; Maybe current mp3 size is almost same as others marathon maps!
Uncheck Letterbox during break because you don't storyboard yet. fixed
Maybe an idea for the soryboard could be choosing the same quantity of images related to the number to the songs. and writing the BPM over the image. Just an idea though. I'm looking for sb now =w=

[After School Tea Time]
00:12:432 (6) Just a nazi suggestion but you can stack it over this slider's beginning 00:10:637 (1)
00:20:381 (5,6) What about using the same DS here as you did here 00:19:099 (2,3) ? fixed
00:51:510 (2) Just a nazi suggestion but this object can be stack over this slider's end 00:50:817 (4) . as well as you did here 00:51:279 (1,3) .
00:57:971 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5) I'd rather suggest to follow the DS in this pattern to don't confuse in this tiny stream. fixed
01:01:894 (5) Also, this can be stacked at this slider's end 01:01:202 (3) to make the pattern neater.
01:10:433 (4,5,6,7,8) You can make this stream flow more lineal though. fixed
01:16:894 (1,2) Just a nazi suggestion but you can improve the blanket among this pattern. I don't want blanket here orz
01:41:640 (6) Put it here 392|268 to follow the lineal flow with the rest of the pattern. fixed
02:12:309 (8,1) Fix DS flow here. It's better to keep consistency.
02:13:015 (8,1) ^ both fixed
02:53:659 (2) IS the unstack really intentional? It looks a bit ugly imo. lol fixed
03:26:357 (2) I think it would look better if you stack it here 03:26:688 (4) , as well as you did with this object 03:27:186 (1) . fixed the pattern a bit
04:03:342 (6,1) Blanket. Such as a nazi suggestion. fixed
04:06:160 (2) Put it here 108|32 for a better lineal flow. fixed
04:20:509 (1) The jumpy pattern here among these two sliders (4) is a bit high, I'd rather go for putting this object here 340|352 to reduce the lack a bit. fixed
06:51:903 (3) You can stack this into this slider's end 06:51:332 (1) to make a neater look of these pattern.
07:18:475 (4) Lineal flow, what about setting it here 312|120 fixed

Sorry for skip some stack modding, I want to keep it!

That's all I can found out in the mapset. Because, tbh, I can't pass it. :p I like the jumps and the neat streams you manage, :3 Good luck!
Thanks for moodding!


OzzyOzrock wrote:

can I make a marathon taiko (maybe i'll collab it with someone)? ;w;
Uuh,, sorry, I want only one std diff orz

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Awww... you're cute! :3 You have my star. \(o.o)/
> < //
HappyRocket88
Awww... you're cute! :3 You have my star. \(o.o)/
Come[Back]Home
Just to let you know i didnt forget about thise map... :c I just dont have time at the moment sry. Take my star for now! Will mod it when i have time.
Come[Back]Home
After School Tea Time

00:38:586 (4,5) The Beat on (5) is not strong enough for a jump here, and theres no strong sound anyway, so maybe no jump there?
01:02:125 (1,2) They should start on a white tick, not on a redtick, it doesnt fit. Like here 01:02:356 Theres a strong clickable beat
01:13:548 (2,3) You could reduce the spacing here a bit, its a bit too big, people might think it starts on a redtick
01:16:894 (1,2) Same as 01:02:125 (1,2)
01:39:887 (5) This slider is curved too much imo. It looks just weird, decurve it a bit?
01:40:277 (1,6) Perfect stack maybe?
01:52:355 (5) Same as 01:39:887 (5)
01:58:589 (5) ctrl+g for a better flow?
02:09:573 (3,1) Ill stop pointing them out since it seems that you like them lol~
02:50:205 (1,3) I think that a perfect stack would look better here
03:17:738 (7,8) ctrl+g for a cool jump? Would fit with the music


Welp, now i can feel bad for barely finding anything. Awesome Beatmap! I really like your mappingstyle, but many jumps in this map doesnt seem to fit, but i havent pointed them out since its your style... :pp

Good Luck with it! :3
And sry for the short mod :c
Topic Starter
lolia

Come[Back]Home wrote:

After School Tea Time

01:02:125 (1,2) They should start on a white tick, not on a redtick, it doesnt fit. Like here 01:02:356 Theres a strong clickable beat Followed the vocal. Actually 01:02:356 - here is a bit strong beat, but it is week compared with vocal imo
01:13:548 (2,3) You could reduce the spacing here a bit, its a bit too big, people might think it starts on a redtick (2) starts on a blue tick, and also ends on a blue tick. So players can read this rhythm more easily
01:16:894 (1,2) Same as 01:02:125 (1,2) Same reason
01:40:277 (1,6) Perfect stack maybe? I want to keep current stack
01:58:589 (5) ctrl+g for a better flow? Flow is better, but it's too far with next (1) orz
02:09:573 (3,1) Ill stop pointing them out since it seems that you like them lol~ =w=
03:17:738 (7,8) ctrl+g for a cool jump? Would fit with the music Current linear circles are also good with 4-claps to me ;w;


Welp, now i can feel bad for barely finding anything. Awesome Beatmap! I really like your mappingstyle, but many jumps in this map doesnt seem to fit, but i havent pointed them out since its your style... :pp

Good Luck with it! :3
And sry for the short mod :c
Others are all fixed
Thanks for modding!
Kanari
Topic Starter
lolia

Kanari wrote:

sb done~ http://puu.sh/jR869.zip
Updated!! Thanks xD
Sangzin
Hello! from your request!

[After School Tea Time]

  • 대충 훑어보니까 전부다 케이온 노래같은데태그가 아니라 소스에에 K-ON! 넣어야 되는거 아닌가요?
    00:16:791 (1) - 언스택 하시는건 알고있는데, 뭔가 이건 좀 지저분하달까..? 그런 느낌이 드네요
    04:31:481 (1,2) - 블랭캣?
    04:59:791 (5) - 여기 있으니까 뭔가 묘한 느낌이네요... 왼쪽으로 배치해보시는게?
    05:55:026 (1) - 다운비트마다 뉴콤넣으셨는데 여기만 뉴콤넣으니 이상하네요. 개인적으로는 뉴콤풀고 05:54:876 (5) - 이거랑 스택시키는게 좋은거 같네요.
    07:49:941 (3,2) - 음....조금 더 언스택인시 스택인지 구별을 둬보시는게?
모딩이 짧아서 다시한번 봤는데
없음.
모딩할게 안보여요
짧아서 죄송합니다. 도움됬으면 좋겠네요. GL!
Topic Starter
lolia

Sangzin wrote:

Hello! from your request!

[After School Tea Time]

  • 대충 훑어보니까 전부다 케이온 노래같은데태그가 아니라 소스에에 K-ON! 넣어야 되는거 아닌가요?
    소스라는게 앨범 수록곡까지 전부 포함하는질 잘 몰라서 일단 태그에 넣었는데 나중에 한번 알아봐야겠네요 orz
    04:31:481 (1,2) - 블랭캣? 블랭캣보단 그냥 머리/꼬리의 중앙쪽에 찍은거라 이대로 두고싶네요..
    04:59:791 (5) - 여기 있으니까 뭔가 묘한 느낌이네요... 왼쪽으로 배치해보시는게? 음.. 아마 플레이상으론 문제없을껍니다 :D
모딩이 짧아서 다시한번 봤는데
없음.
모딩할게 안보여요
짧아서 죄송합니다. 도움됬으면 좋겠네요. GL!
나머진 전부 고쳤습니다
Thanks for modding!
Taeyang
늦은 모딩 ㅈㅅ 전에 한번 쫙 했었는데 인터넷 끊기는바람에 다날라감 ㅠㅠ
  • General
  1. Found unused .wav files:
    - soft-hitclap3.wav
    - soft-sliderslide3.wav
    - soft-hitwhistle3.wav


  • After School Tea Time
  1. 00:12:689 (1,2,3,4,5) - 이박자가 더 잘맞는것 같습니다.
  2. 00:25:766 (3) - x134y129? 왼쪽으로 두는게 훨신 낫다고 생각합니다.
  3. 00:18:586 (1) - 뉴콤해제
  4. 00:40:380 (1,2,1) - 리듬
  5. 02:13:456 (2,5) - 하프스택 시켜보는게 어떨까요?
  6. 02:30:044 (1,2,3,4) - 앞에 점프썻는데 여기도 같게 하면?
  7. 03:17:572 (6,7,8,9) - 이런 흐름은 어떤가요? 개인적으로 이게 더편해서 ㅇㅅㅇ
  8. 03:27:020 (6) - 스택 해제해서 x300 y56?
  9. 05:54:576 (3,4,5,6) - 점프 줄이거나 스택 해제? 다른곳에 비해서 살짝 먼거 같아요
  10. 06:23:829 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 담요가 살짝 가까운거같은데06:23:319 (3,4) - 스택도 하면서 담요 잡는건 어떤가요

굳럭!
Topic Starter
lolia

Taeyang wrote:

늦은 모딩 ㅈㅅ 전에 한번 쫙 했었는데 인터넷 끊기는바람에 다날라감 ㅠㅠ ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ

  • After School Tea Time
  1. 00:12:689 (1,2,3,4,5) - 이박자가 더 잘맞는것 같습니다. 전 지금이 나은듯한...ㅋㅋ
  2. 02:13:456 (2,5) - 하프스택 시켜보는게 어떨까요? 음.. 이건 이대로 유지하고싶네요
  3. 02:30:044 (1,2,3,4) - 앞에 점프썻는데 여기도 같게 하면? 이건 지금 당장은 떠오르는 패턴이 없네요...
  4. 03:27:020 (6) - 스택 해제해서 x300 y56? 여기는 스택이 더 어울릴꺼같아서..
  5. 06:23:829 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 담요가 살짝 가까운거같은데06:23:319 (3,4) - 스택도 하면서 담요 잡는건 어떤가요 DS때문에 전부 손봐야하는데 플레이상으로 문제만 없으면 이대로 두는쪽을..ㅁㄴㅇㄹ

굳럭!
다른건 전부 고쳤습니다
Thanks for modding!
pkk
  1. 04:47:125 - +10
  2. 04:48:485 - add timing point (180 bpm)
  3. 05:45:576 - +6
  4. 06:17:702 - +15
  5. 06:50:198 - +12
  6. 06:51:332 - +2/+4
  7. 07:32:581 - +5
  8. 08:26:621 - +19
  9. 08:37:292 - add timing point (180 bpm)
  10. 09:01:511 - +4
  11. 09:33:737 - add timing point (147 bpm)
  12. 09:34:173 - add timing point (147 bpm) not sure about this one, I think you might need more timing points for this section. It's better to ask someone else like Q-hime chan guinea qqq
nice map
meii18
Hello! As requested
Checked all the tracks on official website of the anime and on https://itunes.apple.com/us/album/ho-kago-tea-time-ii-from-k-on!!/id935217107 and seems all the track are sung by this band so:

  1. Artist: 放課後ティータイム
  2. Romanised Artist: HO-KAGO TEA TIME http://www.generasia.com/wiki/HO-KAGO_TEA_TIME
  3. Title: Songs Compilation
  4. Source: けいおん!
    Move to tags K-ON! as alternative title of the anime

no kudosu.Good Luck!
Topic Starter
lolia

pkk wrote:

  1. 04:47:125 - +10
  2. 04:48:485 - add timing point (180 bpm)
  3. 05:45:576 - +6
  4. 06:17:702 - +15
  5. 06:50:198 - +12
  6. 06:51:332 - +2/+4
  7. 07:32:581 - +5
  8. 08:26:621 - +19
  9. 08:37:292 - add timing point (180 bpm)
  10. 09:01:511 - +4
  11. 09:33:737 - add timing point (147 bpm)
  12. 09:34:173 - add timing point (147 bpm) not sure about this one, I think you might need more timing points for this section. It's better to ask someone else like Q-hime chan guinea qqq I'll try it ww
nice map

ByBy13 wrote:

Hello! As requested
Checked all the tracks on official website of the anime and on https://itunes.apple.com/us/album/ho-kago-tea-time-ii-from-k-on!!/id935217107 and seems all the track are sung by this band so:

  1. Artist: 放課後ティータイム
  2. Romanised Artist: HO-KAGO TEA TIME http://www.generasia.com/wiki/HO-KAGO_TEA_TIME
  3. Title: Songs Compilation
  4. Source: けいおん!
    Move to tags K-ON! as alternative title of the anime

no kudosu.Good Luck!

Applied all! Thanks xD
Narcissu


  • [After School Tea Time]
  1. about timing , pkk is right but i suggest follow form not sounds ↓↓↓ , add a redline in barline enough , hitsound will correct accuracy

  2. 00:45:741 - 02:40:031 - stroyboard a little late …… um .. i think it shouldn't map same as 00:02:432 - , music fade in ..
  3. maybe you wish a precise PNG ? ↓↓↓

  4. 00:20:765 - add a note follow drum & voice ?
  5. 00:59:817 (1) - stack in stream head or tail ? 00:57:971 (1) - or 00:58:663 (7) -
  6. 04:30:281 (1,2,3) - e .. the same distance look comfortable

  7. 09:16:412 (2,3) - add whistle like 09:32:739 (1,2) - ?
i'm sorry my poor mod for m4m :o …… but i can't point more

good luck
Kin
Hi, from my modding Q ~

  1. 00:39:355 (7) - I'd be a big mistake to have this strong note as a simple slider end : 00:40:381 (1) - . The note plays passive because it's only a slider end, while it's actually a strong beat with the cymbal.
  2. 01:50:995 (7,1) - quite suggetive, but I think it'd be better to increase a lil bit the spacing. I think it'd be a great idea to move the cursor faster to clic this note 01:51:190 (1) - which are stronger than the slider jump drum roll.
  3. If you have those 2 notes for the vocal 04:34:738 (2,3) - , you should also add a note here to follow the vocal : 04:35:252 -
  4. 05:17:380 (5,1) - Maybe try something like this ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3626533
    It just has a better shape & look
  5. 05:45:732 (1,2) - about those 2 sliders : this note 05:45:732 - is strong as this one : 05:45:882 - . which I think, make it really strange to not click it. I think it'd be more logic to use 4 circles, instead of 2 sliders. Because tapping strong beat, is I think better than have a strong beat ignore thanks to slider end.
  6. 08:18:575 (3) - it's kinda the same thing. I prefer to have this note clicked : 08:18:880 - .
  7. 09:54:145 (3,4) - I find it really weird to have the jump here. I think it'd be better if it's 2/2 jump, I mean,
    Jump here ; 09:53:940 (2,3) -
    no jump : 09:54:145 (3,4) -
  8. 10:03:736 - maybe add a note here, to move the spin 1/4 later ?
that's pretty much all. I won't go into too much detail, because, some are just useless. The map have a really nice flow. And the timeline is ok, even thought I find it really repetitive.

Good luck ~
Topic Starter
lolia

Narcissu wrote:



  • [After School Tea Time]
  1. about timing , pkk is right but i suggest follow form not sounds ↓↓↓ , add a redline in barline enough , hitsound will correct accuracy Keep current cuz I don't know about timing things well orz

  2. 00:45:741 - 02:40:031 - stroyboard a little late …… um .. i think it shouldn't map same as 00:02:432 - , music fade in .. I'll ask this to Kanari with below one
  3. maybe you wish a precise PNG ? ↓↓↓
  4. 00:20:765 - add a note follow drum & voice ? I want to keep current rhythm for consistency
i'm sorry my poor mod for m4m :o …… but i can't point more Enough helpful modding ww, I'll give mine asap!

good luck

Kin wrote:

Hi, from my modding Q ~

  1. 00:39:355 (7) - I'd be a big mistake to have this strong note as a simple slider end : 00:40:381 (1) - . The note plays passive because it's only a slider end, while it's actually a strong beat with the cymbal. You're right, but I want to keep cuz 1/2 or 3/4 slider is not suitable orz
  2. If you have those 2 notes for the vocal 04:34:738 (2,3) - , you should also add a note here to follow the vocal : 04:35:252 - Hmm,, I wanted to cut rhythm with a low SV slider. And 04:35:252 - this vocal is not strong compared with others!
  3. 05:17:380 (5,1) - Maybe try something like this ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3626533 It just has a better shape & look But I prefer current shape xD
  4. 05:45:732 (1,2) - about those 2 sliders : this note 05:45:732 - is strong as this one : 05:45:882 - . which I think, make it really strange to not click it. I think it'd be more logic to use 4 circles, instead of 2 sliders. Because tapping strong beat, is I think better than have a strong beat ignore thanks to slider end. Maybe if this was not compilation, I would follow this suggestion. But I want to keep current rhythm cuz here is start of a bit high BPM song and for giving preparation time to players.
  5. 08:18:575 (3) - it's kinda the same thing. I prefer to have this note clicked : 08:18:880 - . same reason
  6. 09:54:145 (3,4) - I find it really weird to have the jump here. I think it'd be better if it's 2/2 jump, I mean,
    Jump here ; 09:53:940 (2,3) -
    no jump : 09:54:145 (3,4) -
    Hmm,, I think current DS is better with music ;w; I'll get more opinions!
  7. 10:03:736 - maybe add a note here, to move the spin 1/4 later? I can't do it cuz drum's offset is a bit fast orz
that's pretty much all. I won't go into too much detail, because, some are just useless. The map have a really nice flow. And the timeline is ok, even thought I find it really repetitive.

Good luck ~
Others are all fixed
Thanks for moddings!!
KASUM1
Hello~! from #modreqs :)

[After School Tea Time]
01:09:279 (6,3) - stack these for better pattern
01:42:618 (4,1) - I don't think this overlap is intentional
02:17:162 (1,3) - ^
02:21:220 (6,3) - ^
03:37:142 (3,1) - overlap , This overlap is bad , makes the pattern hard to read conisder moving it somewhere else
03:48:269 (3,1) - ^
03:49:761 (4,1) - they are crossing each other
04:19:823 (3,1) - overlap
05:35:444 (5,2) - ^
05:48:882 (5,2) - ^
06:54:049 (3,5) - ^
06:56:477 (3,1) - ^

Well, that's all

Good luck! and I hope my mod helps you
Topic Starter
lolia

KASUM1 wrote:

Hello~! from #modreqs :)

[After School Tea Time]
01:09:279 (6,3) - stack these for better pattern
01:42:618 (4,1) - I don't think this overlap is intentional
02:17:162 (1,3) - ^
02:21:220 (6,3) - ^
03:37:142 (3,1) - overlap , This overlap is bad , makes the pattern hard to read conisder moving it somewhere else
03:48:269 (3,1) - ^
03:49:761 (4,1) - they are crossing each other
04:19:823 (3,1) - overlap
05:35:444 (5,2) - ^
05:48:882 (5,2) - ^
06:54:049 (3,5) - ^
06:56:477 (3,1) - ^

Well, that's all

Good luck! and I hope my mod helps you
fixed 03:37:805 (1) - this overlap, but all of overlaps/stacks in my maps are intentional xP
Thanks for modding!
Crier
hi m4m

After School Tea Time
  1. 00:25:509 (2) - 00:26:022 (4) 에 스택하는 것보다는 아예 삼각형 만들어주시는게 부드러울거 같네요.
  2. 00:30:894 (5) - 232||68 음 별로 차이없긴 한데 저게 좀 더 잘 쳐지네요
  3. 00:55:433 (3) - 324||169 (취향)
  4. 01:50:313 (3,4) - 쪼끔만 더 떨어뜨려주세요 0.30x정도
  5. 03:17:584 (6,7,8,9) - 점프로 좀 더 강조해주셨으면 해여
  6. 04:28:652 - 여기 노트 추가해주시면 좋겠는데 패턴이..글쎼요
  7. 06:08:682 (3,4) - 이부분 스택은 잘 안어울리는 거 같아요. 이런 느낌으로 어떠세요?
  8. 06:24:738 (5) - 06:24:865 (1) 에 스택해보시는건 어떤가요.
  9. 07:05:050 (1) - 1/2슬라로 줄여주세요. 3/4는 오히려 소리가 좀 거슬리네요ㅠㅠ
  10. 07:26:738 (1,2,3,4,1) - 좀 더 벌려주세요
  11. 09:42:308 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - bpm이 갑자기 느려져서 그런지 앞부분이랑은 다르게 좀 지루한 느낌을 받았어요 09:43:736 (8) - 316||321같은 곳에

맵이 전체적으로 좋아서 별로 문제가 될건 못찾았어요. 화이팅~
Crimmi
Thank you for applying at the #modreqsea. Feel free to ignore or reject any parts of your map that you deem unfit and vice versa.


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  1. Storyboard image file dimensions is more than allowed maximum ( 640x1440 or 1920x480 for scrolling images) or (1366x768)
    "sb\images\a (13).jpg" is 900x1324
    "sb\images\a (16).jpg" is 1205x850

After School Tea Time



  1. 06:13:176 (x) - This green line is unsnapped.
  2. 08:54:208 (5) - This note isn't really needed and there is nothing in the music (to me) that backs it up.

But overall good map, the second time I modded a K-ON! comp, gg.
Topic Starter
lolia

Crier wrote:

hi m4m

After School Tea Time
  1. 00:55:433 (3) - 324||169 (취향) 이건 일자로 유지하고싶네요
  2. 03:17:584 (6,7,8,9) - 점프로 좀 더 강조해주셨으면 해여 고집일수도 있지만 이부분은 1.0 단타로 하고싶은..
  3. 04:28:652 - 여기 노트 추가해주시면 좋겠는데 패턴이..글쎼요 나쁘진 않을꺼같은데 이 곡은 전체적으로 거의 보컬위주로만 찍어서..
  4. 06:08:682 (3,4) - 이부분 스택은 잘 안어울리는 거 같아요. 이런 느낌으로 어떠세요? 바로 앞 보컬점프보단 약한 부분이라 일단 스택 처리했는데.. 모딩 더 들어오면 생각해보겠습니다 ㅁㅇㄹㄴ
  5. 07:05:050 (1) - 1/2슬라로 줄여주세요. 3/4는 오히려 소리가 좀 거슬리네요ㅠㅠ 소리를 줄이는 쪽으로 했습니다
  6. 09:42:308 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - bpm이 갑자기 느려져서 그런지 앞부분이랑은 다르게 좀 지루한 느낌을 받았어요 09:43:736 (8) - 316||321같은 곳에 끝부분이기도 하고 8노트를 부분부분 넣어서 전부 점프로 두기보단 규칙적으로 스택시켜줬는데.. 이대로도 괜찮지 않을까해요

맵이 전체적으로 좋아서 별로 문제가 될건 못찾았어요. 화이팅~

Crimmi wrote:

Thank you for applying at the #modreqsea. Feel free to ignore or reject any parts of your map that you deem unfit and vice versa.


General (Metadata, Timing, etc.)


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  1. Storyboard image file dimensions is more than allowed maximum ( 640x1440 or 1920x480 for scrolling images) or (1366x768)
    "sb\images\a (13).jpg" is 900x1324
    "sb\images\a (16).jpg" is 1205x850
    I'll summon Kanari =w=

After School Tea Time



  1. 08:54:208 (5) - This note isn't really needed and there is nothing in the music (to me) that backs it up. There is a drum beat =3=

But overall good map, the second time I modded a K-ON! comp, gg. lol, did you modding Tari's?
Others are all fixed
Thanks for modding!
Kanari

Narcissu wrote:



  • [After School Tea Time]
  1. 00:45:741 - 02:40:031 - stroyboard a little late …… um .. i think it shouldn't map same as 00:02:432 - , music fade in ..
  2. maybe you wish a precise PNG ? ↓↓↓

intended


Crimmi wrote:

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  1. Storyboard image file dimensions is more than allowed maximum ( 640x1440 or 1920x480 for scrolling images) or (1366x768)
    "sb\images\a (13).jpg" is 900x1324
    "sb\images\a (16).jpg" is 1205x850
i've made sb's out of those dimensions and they were ranked too, currently have a few sb's pending with the same issue, it will be discussed soon so anything about size will left as it until then
walaowey
Hi Karia o/
Sorry for the late mod ;w;

K-on compilation \o/
Nice :)
And nice map too lol

anyway, here's my mod..feel free to reject it if you think its not suitable with your map :3

After School Tea Time
01:41:644 (6) - stack this with 01:40:281 (1) ?
03:01:477 (8) - 03:00:387 (1) - stack?
03:08:932 (1) - imo, its better if u turn this slider upside down, turn it 180° then ctrl+g .. it flows better that way *Click* if u dont know what i mean :v
03:09:477 (3,4) - this 2 stack circles feels not that good to play..separate them maybe?
03:09:477 (3) - the beats here is actually quite strong.. you can move 03:09:296 (2) higher so it will have larger spacing to emphasizes (3) *Click*
03:18:579 (2,3) - actually this part feels very cramped up lol.. but seems like its flowing well..so meh :v
03:23:220 (6,1) - u seems to like this type of pattern.. actually its a bit awkward for me.. because the slider (6) is curving downward.. but the next slider is at top..it does not flow that well for me :P .. And i saw a lot of these pattern in the map :P
03:36:645 (6) - i dont think this circle need that big jump, because its a weak beat lol.. consider to remove the jump :P
03:53:905 (4) - its a strong beat.. i think you should add more spacing here..to emphasize it..
03:55:562 (1,2) - imo, the flow does not flow that well to slider (2) .. it feels a little awkward :P .. maybe u can try to bend the slider tail upward?
04:12:109 (4) - could u perhaps move this circle to another position? When i testplay your map with HD , i miss at this part.. i didnt notice this circle tbh, its hidden under the slider tail of 04:11:595 (2)
04:17:081 (4) - this beats seems to be the same as 04:22:566 (4) , but why 04:17:081 (4) have small jump while 04:22:566 (4) have bigger jump lol?
04:31:481 (1) - blanket this with 04:31:995 (2) ?
06:08:682 (3,4) - imo, its better to separate, it plays out better.
06:41:844 (4) - same like 04:12:109 (4) . maybe move it to the right side? So that it will flow circularly too :P .. *Click* (suggestion only, fix it as u like)
08:28:640 (3,4,5) - i think u should have bigger jump from (3) -> (4) instead of (4) -> (5) .. because 08:28:973 (4) - has a stronger beat compare to (5) .. so its better to emphasize it
09:28:861 (5) - add a bigger jump here,? i hear strong beats.. the small jump now didnt emphasize the jump quite well :P
09:39:451 (3,4) - imo, stack this 2 circle instead of 09:39:859 (5,6) for consistency and the rhythm is the same too..because in 09:36:185 (3,4,5,6) - u stack (3,4) instead of (5,6)
actually the last song is my favourite part :3 it plays well, its just that some of the stacking feel quite random lol..sometimes i didnt expect it to be there :P

Alright, thats all from me :)

Nice map anyway, i've always like your mapping style >w<

Good luck ranking it :)
Topic Starter
lolia

walaowey wrote:

Hi Karia o/
Sorry for the late mod ;w;

K-on compilation \o/ XDD
Nice :)
And nice map too lol

anyway, here's my mod..feel free to reject it if you think its not suitable with your map :3

After School Tea Time
01:41:644 (6) - stack this with 01:40:281 (1) ?
03:01:477 (8) - 03:00:387 (1) - stack?
03:18:579 (2,3) - actually this part feels very cramped up lol.. but seems like its flowing well..so meh :v =w=
03:23:220 (6,1) - u seems to like this type of pattern.. actually its a bit awkward for me.. because the slider (6) is curving downward.. but the next slider is at top..it does not flow that well for me :P .. And i saw a lot of these pattern in the map :P ww, this will be no problem in-playing
03:53:905 (4) - its a strong beat.. i think you should add more spacing here..to emphasize it.. I have no idea here orz
03:55:562 (1,2) - imo, the flow does not flow that well to slider (2) .. it feels a little awkward :P .. maybe u can try to bend the slider tail upward? Hmm,, maybe you means flows in 'Editor'. Usually players' cursor doesn't follow shape of sliders exactly, so 'Editor flow' and 'Real flow' is not same imo
04:12:109 (4) - could u perhaps move this circle to another position? When i testplay your map with HD , i miss at this part.. i didnt notice this circle tbh, its hidden under the slider tail of 04:11:595 (2) Some players are confused 'not perfect-stack' like this. And I know that cuz I have got lots of test-playings before ww. This stack is one of my style =w=
04:17:081 (4) - this beats seems to be the same as 04:22:566 (4) , but why 04:17:081 (4) have small jump while 04:22:566 (4) have bigger jump lol? Cuz my DSes are following patterns with randomness lol
04:31:481 (1) - blanket this with 04:31:995 (2) ? This is not for blanket
06:41:844 (4) - same like 04:12:109 (4) . maybe move it to the right side? So that it will flow circularly too :P .. *Click* (suggestion only, fix it as u like) same reason
08:28:640 (3,4,5) - i think u should have bigger jump from (3) -> (4) instead of (4) -> (5) .. because 08:28:973 (4) - has a stronger beat compare to (5) .. so its better to emphasize it Keep for pattern orz
09:39:451 (3,4) - imo, stack this 2 circle instead of 09:39:859 (5,6) for consistency and the rhythm is the same too..because in 09:36:185 (3,4,5,6) - u stack (3,4) instead of (5,6) Want to keep for various pattern
actually the last song is my favourite part :3 it plays well, its just that some of the stacking feel quite random lol..sometimes i didnt expect it to be there :P

Alright, thats all from me :)

Nice map anyway, i've always like your mapping style >w< >w<

Good luck ranking it :)
Deleted things are fixed and no reply is skip(I want to keep that stack!)
Thanks for modding!
Nathan
01:00:510 - some slider rhythms in this section are weird
  1. 01:02:125 (1,2) - I don't hear anything that warrants red tick 1/2 sliders, both end on something stronger than they start on, at first I thought you were just following vocals, but it's on both the head and tail here, so combined with the drums the white ticks should be given more emphasis, change the rhythm to something else please
  2. 01:04:433 (2) - ^
  3. 01:16:894 (1,2) - ^
  4. 01:18:971 (1) - could add a finish on the head
everything else is cool, you can call me back if you fix those rhythms
Topic Starter
lolia

sukiNathan wrote:

01:00:510 - some slider rhythms in this section are weird
  1. 01:02:125 (1,2) - I don't hear anything that warrants red tick 1/2 sliders, both end on something stronger than they start on, at first I thought you were just following vocals, but it's on both the head and tail here, so combined with the drums the white ticks should be given more emphasis, change the rhythm to something else please
  2. 01:04:433 (2) - ^
  3. 01:16:894 (1,2) - ^
  4. 01:18:971 (1) - could add a finish on the head
everything else is cool, you can call me back if you fix those rhythms
fixed all, thanks for modding!
Nathan
ok I probably should've asked this earlier, but do you have any metadata confirmation for the artist name? I'm unsure about the capitalization of it lol
Topic Starter
lolia

sukiNathan wrote:

ok I probably should've asked this earlier, but do you have any metadata confirmation for the artist name? I'm unsure about the capitalization of it lol
lol, this site says about it : http://www.tbs.co.jp/anime/k-on/k-on_tv/disc/cd_2.html
Nathan
alright
Topic Starter
lolia
thanks! xD
PatZar
taiko is pro mapper :D
Bara-
Hi

[General]
• Storyboard image file dimensions is more than allowed maximum ( 640x1440 or 1920x480 for scrolling images) or (1366x768)
{sb\images\a (13).jpg} (900x1324)
{sb\images\a (16).jpg} (1205x850)
I have asked around, and this is unrankable, therefore I'm popping the bubble. Feel free to call me back after it's fixed for rebubble (or if the other 2 are faster for a qual :P)

Some additional modding
[Diff]
  1. 03:09:841 (5) - Just for aesthetic reasons, can you stack this tail with 03:08:932 (1) - head ?
  2. 06:11:982 (5,1,2,3,4) - Ctrl Shift D please, this looks kinda ugly >__>
  3. 07:04:763 (4,1,4) - What's the point of these if you are silencing them? The music plays much better and much less forced when using 1/2
  4. 07:07:335 (1) - ^^
  5. 07:08:763 (3) - ^^
  6. 10:03:736 (1) - Isn't it better when it starts with a circle, then 1/4 later the spinner appears?
I like the diff itself, it does have many overlaps, but they are done in a good manner, so they should be fine
Call me when it's fixed!
Topic Starter
lolia

Baraatje123 wrote:

Hi

[General]
• Storyboard image file dimensions is more than allowed maximum ( 640x1440 or 1920x480 for scrolling images) or (1366x768)
{sb\images\a (13).jpg} (900x1324)
{sb\images\a (16).jpg} (1205x850)
I have asked around, and this is unrankable, therefore I'm popping the bubble. Feel free to call me back after it's fixed for rebubble (or if the other 2 are faster for a qual :P)

Some additional modding
[Diff]
  1. 03:09:841 (5) - Just for aesthetic reasons, can you stack this tail with 03:08:932 (1) - head ?
    // Current stack is better to my aesthetic sense xD
  2. 06:11:982 (5,1,2,3,4) - Ctrl Shift D please, this looks kinda ugly >__> fixed
  3. 07:04:763 (4,1,4) - What's the point of these if you are silencing them? The music plays much better and much less forced when using 1/2
  4. 07:07:335 (1) - ^^
  5. 07:08:763 (3) - ^^
    // I muted the tails cuz someone says 3/4 sounds feels a bit awkward. Also I want to use extended slider for vocal in this short part
  6. 10:03:736 (1) - Isn't it better when it starts with a circle, then 1/4 later the spinner appears?
    // You're right. But drum offset is not same with cymbal offset in this song, so I put an only spinner
I like the diff itself, it does have many overlaps, but they are done in a good manner, so they should be fine
Call me when it's fixed!
Thanks for modding!
Waiting for Kanari
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