Eternalie wrote:

Hi Shin hi Etlie
hope it will help :3

9K is Nine Knight//Eternalie is Nyaho

Collumn 9K = 1/2/3/4/5/6/7/8/9
9K !!!!! hhhnnnnnng go for it ! :3
[Lv.20]
00:22:083 (22083|4) - I think , maybe that could be better placed on 6th collumn instead of triple jack wich is kinda hard to press ill consider that
00:25:128 (25128|3) - add note ( melody sound)
^really soft sound so I think maybe no need okay also re-arranged
01:22:677 (82677|4) - same suggestion as above but moving it to 4 this time will consider that
[Lv.10]
00:28:543 (28543|0) - you can add one more note here no cause i hear kick only
00:30:474 (30474|0) - here aswell ^ ^
00:42:801 (42801|6) - add note to 7 okay =w=
[Lv.05]
00:11:761 (11761|2,12058|2) - move to 2 so you don't have alot of time the 3rd collumn pressed cause of this > 00:12:652 (12652|2,12949|2) - whoa nice catch >w< but i choose to move it to 4 cause of 00:13:098 (13098|5,13395|5) -
00:20:227 (20227|7) - (optional) you can add a note to 8 for cymbal sound i didnt follow any cymbal or kick in this diff xD

Nice diff , and BG are cute >////< hau~
Good Luck , have a nice day shin , here is a star :3/ where is the star owo

IamBaum wrote:

Howdy Shin, just a small mod for ya

Column |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9|

Lv.10

00:24:236 (24236|4) - I'd suggest to move it to |6| to stay Symmetrical, cause the rest around it, is symmetrical. orz it was on 6 already before, so okay =w=
00:42:801 - Add a note cause this last note sounds like a climax to the stair. nice
01:06:563 - Add a note to |8|, i think this "sound" should already belong to the chord pattern ahead. oh nice catch x_x
01:11:316 - Maybe add a note, i think this could have a "chord feeling". oh ye
01:24:830 (84830|4) - I'd suggest to move it to |6| to stay Symmetrical. ok

Lv.15

I'm especially proud about the length for Lv.15
00:41:019 - Add a note, cause the other sounds that sound "similiar" are also chords. no theres no snare

Sry i tried to find more but... i guess i lack experience in 9K, i hope it was still somehow useful

Anyway good luck with your map, we need more 9k ranked songs

1. 00:07:751 (7751|0) - I think this note should be moved to somewhere from 5 to 8, to match the background music's pitch.
2. 00:09:236 (9236|6,9385|2,9682|6,9979|2) - At first you placed 2 hits with 1/2 space, but then you placed them again with a 1/1 space in the same column. I think that can confuse players, why not move the last 2 notes to somewhere else?
3. I have nothing else to say lol

1. 00:13:395 (13395|6) - I think this note should be placed in column 8, I don't hear any pitch changes...
2. 00:19:038 - Add note here for cymbals?
3. 00:30:474 (30474|0) - If you want to emphasis the beat here, you may as well add a note at 00:30:623. If not, maybe make a small pause.
4. 00:45:920 (45920|4,46217|4) - I don't think the instrument that this is emphasizing on does not need to be emphasized... I think removing them would be better for a Normal difficulty (Is this even a Normal difficulty?)
5. 00:55:425 (55425|5,55722|3) - ^^
6. Still, good difficulty

1. 00:06:860 (6860|1) - Move to column 2 for consistency in pattern.
2. 00:07:009 (7009|5,7009|3,7306|7,7306|1,7603|2,7603|6,7900|0,7900|8,8197|2,8197|6) - All these doubles on red ticks... I don't really hear that kind of strong sound in the background, so why doubles? Yea of course some of them fits, but some like 00:07:009 (7009|3,7009|5) - doesn't fit.
3. 00:09:385 (9385|0,9385|8,9682|7,9682|1,9979|5,9979|3,10276|2,10276|5,10573|6,10573|2) - ^^ again. If you are doing it for the sake of the pattern...
4. 00:10:276 (10276|5) - This should be moved to column 6 if this doubles on the red ticks are on purpose.
5. Be sure to check some of the doubles on the red ticks, like I mentioned some of them aren't that necessary.

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:

Hello~ Request from in-game~

Column : 0|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8

All these are purely suggestions, feel free to decline.

[Lv.5]

1. 00:07:751 (7751|0) - I think this note should be moved to somewhere from 5 to 8, to match the background music's pitch. but, acording to the pitch, its should be there
2. 00:09:236 (9236|6,9385|2,9682|6,9979|2) - At first you placed 2 hits with 1/2 space, but then you placed them again with a 1/1 space in the same column. I think that can confuse players, why not move the last 2 notes to somewhere else? hmm good idea, moved
3. I have nothing else to say lol

[Lv.10]

1. 00:13:395 (13395|6) - I think this note should be placed in column 8, I don't hear any pitch changes... yup thats why the other note was on the same column
2. 00:19:038 - Add note here for cymbals? oh yeah x_x
3. 00:30:474 (30474|0) - If you want to emphasis the beat here, you may as well add a note at 00:30:623. If not, maybe make a small pause. oh im following the synt and the kick only, so 1 note for synt and 1 note for kick
4. 00:45:920 (45920|4,46217|4) - I don't think the instrument that this is emphasizing on does not need to be emphasized... I think removing them would be better for a Normal difficulty (Is this even a Normal difficulty?) ehmm nice nice
5. 00:55:425 (55425|5,55722|3) - ^^ ^
6. Still, good difficulty

[Lv.15]

1. 00:06:860 (6860|1) - Move to column 2 for consistency in pattern. k then
2. 00:07:009 (7009|5,7009|3,7306|7,7306|1,7603|2,7603|6,7900|0,7900|8,8197|2,8197|6) - All these doubles on red ticks... I don't really hear that kind of strong sound in the background, so why doubles? Yea of course some of them fits, but some like 00:07:009 (7009|3,7009|5) - doesn't fit. 2 note kick 1 note synt and 1 note hit hat
3. 00:09:385 (9385|0,9385|8,9682|7,9682|1,9979|5,9979|3,10276|2,10276|5,10573|6,10573|2) - ^^ again. If you are doing it for the sake of the pattern...
4. 00:10:276 (10276|5) - This should be moved to column 6 if this doubles on the red ticks are on purpose. moved
5. Be sure to check some of the doubles on the red ticks, like I mentioned some of them aren't that necessary.

That will be all from me, and sorry if I couldn't help out much :/
GL! Just because I like the song and the game that it comes from, here is a star

Zevioz- wrote:

hi shinzooooh *insert syahrini sticker lol

simple mod yaapppp

9K : |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9|

Lv5

00:37:157 (37157|4,37751|4) - delete aja mending ngikutin suara tenet (wut tenet) (instrumen kayaknya) tapi ada suara tenet tenet disitu
00:50:375 (50375|2,50524|0) - CTRL+G terus geser 2baris oke kekanan kan ? =="

9

00:05:078 - strong kenapa gaditambah note karna hanya kick dan gk ada synt
00:05:375 - how ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3337290 rada gk cocok ama pitch =w=
00:06:860 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3337297 pitch, dan gila lo ini normal ><
00:07:751 - saran juga shin https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3337299 ini normal --"
00:45:326 (45326|1) - move to 6 re-arranged
01:08:345 - saran yang di 00:07:751 - sama

lv 15

00:06:712 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3337339 kalo di double note keknya gaenak shin but, itu hithat sama synt
00:16:959 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3337364 hmm ._. very nice >w<
00:20:821 (20821|1) - delete aja kalo bisa ._. kgk bisia :p
00:54:830 (54830|8,54830|6) - delete salah satu terus pindahin ke 3 no delete and no move cause of pitch
01:21:415 (81415|7) - delete no

lv20

00:05:821 (5821|1) - delete 2 note bass 1 note synt
00:13:543 (13543|4) - bzz delete aja btw ._. hit hat
00:13:692 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3337388 '3' re-arranged
00:14:286 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3337424 jadi ular deh (free reject) re-arranged
00:20:821 (20821|5,20821|1,20821|8,20821|7) - dafuq 4 , delete 1 atau 2 note hehehe, deleted 1
00:34:335 (34335|0) - delete synt

dah gitu aja :'3
rip my jari
GL~

Column
9K ｜1｜2｜3｜4｜5｜6｜7｜8｜9｜

▽LV.5

Click

00:09:682 (9682|7) - move to 9. It has the same pitch as this part 00:04:929 (4929|8) -
This one chord does not match with before same part ▽
00:04:929 (4929|8,5227|1,5375|7,5524|6,5672|5,5821|3) - = 00:09:682 (9682|7,9979|1,10128|7,10276|6,10425|5,10573|3) -
If you can hold to the same pattern, it would be a good pattern progress.


00:21:266 (21266|4) - move to 4. This has the flow associated with this..00:21:415 (21415|5,21637|3,21860|5) -
in this, i think this is more smooth playable than col5

00:25:425 (25425|4) - move to 3. when i viewed a around note, hand balance for beginner

00:31:811 (31811|6) - move to 2 and 00:31:959 (31959|1) - move to 5
representation of the rising pitch, and consider with around pattern

00:33:593 (33593|6) - move to 8
same pitch relevance with before this 00:33:296 (33296|7) -
even though you intend this, i recommend the same col.

00:50:078 (50078|4,50375|2) - move to one col left(5,3 -> 4,2)
As follows, if you can spread this part. can have a better play.

01:08:345 (68345|2) - move to 7 and 01:08:494 (68494|6) - move to 5
representation of the around pitch, and consider with around pattern

01:13:989 (73989|2) - move to 4
same pitch relevance with before this 01:13:692 (73692|3) -
even though you intend this, i recommend the same col.

01:22:231 (82231|4) - move to 3 and 01:22:454 (82454|3) - move to 5
same mod with this mod 00:21:266 - ~ 00:21:860 -

▽LV.10

Click

00:06:563 (6563|7,6563|1) - move to 3,7. when i viewed a around pattern, I thought the balance of the pattern

00:09:385 (9385|3) - move to 5. same with this 00:07:009 (7009|4) -
there is only one chord. When I thought same pitch and many reason. i think col5 is best choice as one chord

00:15:771 (15771|8,15771|6,15920|2,16068|3,16068|5,16217|1) - what do u think about this pattern? ▽


00:21:860 (21860|1,21860|7) - move to 4,6 and 00:22:157 (22157|3) - move to 5
pattern for a better process, If you apply this,
players can feel more smooth about this 00:21:637 - 00:21:860 - and 00:22:157 - and 00:22:454 -

00:30:177 (30177|4,30326|3,30474|0) - move to ▽

^ detail explanation, col 5 is bass, and 00:30:177 - ~ 00:30:326 - this is pitch relevance with 00:30:771 - ~ 00:30:920 -

00:36:563 (36563|1) - move to 3. for balance
00:49:929 (49929|1) - move to 3. i was considered this pitch 00:50:078 (50078|4,50227|6,50375|4,50524|2) -

01:04:187 - ~ 01:24:979 - maybe, seems same pattern with before kiai part. i did not mention about same this part
if you apply the mod in the previous kiai part, this part should applied.

▽LV.15

Click

00:17:405 (17405|5) - and 00:17:702 (17702|0) - remove. i think no need.
if you using only 3chord at this 00:17:256 - 00:17:553 - 00:17:850 -
because there is strong cymbol sound, It may have the same chord relationship.

00:41:613 (41613|4,41835|4) - difficult on playable. I recommend the changes. like ▽
00:41:316 (41316|8) - move to 6
00:41:464 (41464|7) - move to 7
00:41:613 (41613|6) - move to 8
00:41:613 (41613|4) - move to 9

01:17:999 - remove one
01:18:296 - ^same. same mod with before kiai part.

▽LV.20

Click

00:17:405 - remove one. same mod with LV15
00:17:702 - ^same.

00:19:038 - add one. You had to used the same chord with 00:17:850 -
consider about chord amount relevance from your LV 15 00:17:850 - and 00:19:038 -

00:22:009 (22009|4,22009|0,22083|1,22083|4,22157|4,22157|2) - Can you re-arrange this pattern?
i can understand about this pattern representation. col 5 is bass and col 1,2,3 is string
but it is really difficult to pattern for playable. If players use space-key with the left hand.
It must play with one hand. so, i recommend a stair pattern.

00:22:900 (22900|8) - move to 8, i consider with 00:22:603 (22603|0,22603|6,22603|3,22900|4,22900|1,23197|8,23197|4,23197|0) -

00:24:682 (24682|7,24830|7) - move to 6 and 00:24:756 (24756|1,24905|1) - move to 3
^players can feel a lot of difficulty at trill next pattern this 00:24:905 (24905|1,24979|2,24979|0) - ,
coz, all players col1 and col9 is relatively weak. i consider your pattern and good playable as possible

00:25:128 (25128|3) - remove and 00:25:425 - add one?
from your all diff, you focus on only this string sound. u can consider your other diff
*if it's intend, 00:25:573 - add one. consistency with like this sound00:26:316 - 00:26:613 -

00:50:746 (50746|4) - move to 8?

01:17:999 - remove one
01:18:296 - ^same. same mod with before kiai part

01:19:632 - add one. same mod with before kiai part

01:22:603 (82603|4,82603|8,82677|7,82677|4,82751|4,82751|6) - consider. same mod.

KawaEE wrote:

Okay. Hiiii, and sorry T^T no prob o/
too late

▶ Timing : Okay

▶ Kiai : Okay

▶ AImod : no problem

▶ BG / Sound File : no problem

▶ Etc : I suggest you about this ▽
LV 10 : Life Drain 6 → 7
LV 15 : OD 8 → 7.5
LV 20 : OD 9 → 8
When I consider each slide and Star-rating, I think it's enough.
but, if u want, u can keep. ill keep that for now

and BG Loli, so cuute.. JK xD lol

Column
9K ｜1｜2｜3｜4｜5｜6｜7｜8｜9｜

▽LV.5

Click

00:09:682 (9682|7) - move to 9. It has the same pitch as this part 00:04:929 (4929|8) - moved
This one chord does not match with before same part ▽
00:04:929 (4929|8,5227|1,5375|7,5524|6,5672|5,5821|3) - = 00:09:682 (9682|7,9979|1,10128|7,10276|6,10425|5,10573|3) -
If you can hold to the same pattern, it would be a good pattern progress. ok samed the pattern


00:21:266 (21266|4) - move to 4. This has the flow associated with this..00:21:415 (21415|5,21637|3,21860|5) -
in this, i think this is more smooth playable than col5 hmmm ok then moved

00:25:425 (25425|4) - move to 3. when i viewed a around note, hand balance for beginner ok

00:31:811 (31811|6) - move to 2 and 00:31:959 (31959|1) - move to 5
representation of the rising pitch, and consider with around pattern done

00:33:593 (33593|6) - move to 8
same pitch relevance with before this 00:33:296 (33296|7) -
even though you intend this, i recommend the same col. ok ok

00:50:078 (50078|4,50375|2) - move to one col left(5,3 -> 4,2)
As follows, if you can spread this part. can have a better play. hmmm ok nice nice

01:08:345 (68345|2) - move to 7 and 01:08:494 (68494|6) - move to 5
representation of the around pitch, and consider with around pattern i choose to do the reverse of it for pitch

01:13:989 (73989|2) - move to 4
same pitch relevance with before this 01:13:692 (73692|3) -
even though you intend this, i recommend the same col. done

01:22:231 (82231|4) - move to 3 and 01:22:454 (82454|3) - move to 5
same mod with this mod 00:21:266 - ~ 00:21:860 - okay okay

▽LV.10

Click

00:06:563 (6563|7,6563|1) - move to 3,7. when i viewed a around pattern, I thought the balance of the pattern ok nice

00:09:385 (9385|3) - move to 5. same with this 00:07:009 (7009|4) -
there is only one chord. When I thought same pitch and many reason. i think col5 is best choice as one chord hmmm ok then

00:15:771 (15771|8,15771|6,15920|2,16068|3,16068|5,16217|1) - what do u think about this pattern? ▽ ok good


00:21:860 (21860|1,21860|7) - move to 4,6 and 00:22:157 (22157|3) - move to 5
pattern for a better process, If you apply this, good
players can feel more smooth about this 00:21:637 - 00:21:860 - and 00:22:157 - and 00:22:454 - oh yeah !

00:30:177 (30177|4,30326|3,30474|0) - move to ▽ oh hey ! nice

^ detail explanation, col 5 is bass, and 00:30:177 - ~ 00:30:326 - this is pitch relevance with 00:30:771 - ~ 00:30:920 - yeap

00:36:563 (36563|1) - move to 3. for balance ok
00:49:929 (49929|1) - move to 3. i was considered this pitch 00:50:078 (50078|4,50227|6,50375|4,50524|2) - okeay

01:04:187 - ~ 01:24:979 - maybe, seems same pattern with before kiai part. i did not mention about same this part
if you apply the mod in the previous kiai part, this part should applied. ok applied

▽LV.15

Click

00:17:405 (17405|5) - and 00:17:702 (17702|0) - remove. i think no need.
if you using only 3chord at this 00:17:256 - 00:17:553 - 00:17:850 -
because there is strong cymbol sound, It may have the same chord relationship. hmm i dont think so, since they are just the same sound but for the gap with previous diff then okay !

00:41:613 (41613|4,41835|4) - difficult on playable. I recommend the changes. like ▽
00:41:316 (41316|8) - move to 6 ok
00:41:464 (41464|7) - move to 7 ok
00:41:613 (41613|6) - move to 8 ok
00:41:613 (41613|4) - move to 9 moved to 6

01:17:999 - remove one okay then
01:18:296 - ^same. same mod with before kiai part.

▽LV.20

Click

00:17:405 - remove one. same mod with LV15 ok
00:17:702 - ^same. ^

00:19:038 - add one. You had to used the same chord with 00:17:850 - no.. cause there is no synt
consider about chord amount relevance from your LV 15 00:17:850 - and 00:19:038 - oh yeah fixed the Lv.15

00:22:009 (22009|4,22009|0,22083|1,22083|4,22157|4,22157|2) - Can you re-arrange this pattern?
i can understand about this pattern representation. col 5 is bass and col 1,2,3 is string
but it is really difficult to pattern for playable. If players use space-key with the left hand.
It must play with one hand. so, i recommend a stair pattern. hmmm if the reason is for hand then i moved the jakc to right hand

00:22:900 (22900|8) - move to 8, i consider with 00:22:603 (22603|0,22603|6,22603|3,22900|4,22900|1,23197|8,23197|4,23197|0) - ok nice

00:24:682 (24682|7,24830|7) - move to 6 ok and 00:24:756 (24756|1,24905|1) - move to 3 u mean 4 ? moved to 4
^players can feel a lot of difficulty at trill next pattern this 00:24:905 (24905|1,24979|2,24979|0) - ,
coz, all players col1 and col9 is relatively weak. i consider your pattern and good playable as possible

00:25:128 (25128|3) - remove and 00:25:425 - add one? i dont think so but ill think of that
from your all diff, you focus on only this string sound. u can consider your other diff
*if it's intend, 00:25:573 - add one. consistency with like this sound00:26:316 - 00:26:613 - oh yeah added

00:50:746 (50746|4) - move to 8? hmm ok then

01:17:999 - remove one done
01:18:296 - ^same. same mod with before kiai part ^

01:19:632 - add one. same mod with before kiai part no synt (same reason like the previous mod)

01:22:603 (82603|4,82603|8,82677|7,82677|4,82751|4,82751|6) - consider. same mod. fixed

good luck ~

Ichigaki wrote:

Hello, Shinzo-
Maafkan daku karena hanya bisa segini. I just, aw, what is 9K. Sorry.

[General]

SPOILER

Gimana kalau ngikutin leveling cytus aja? o3o
Lv.9 > Lv.7 > Lv.5 > Lv.3 <<< Urut dari yang paling tinggi oh ye saya pikir" dulu

[Lv.20]

SPOILER

1. 00:01:068 (1068|3,1068|5,1142|2,1142|6,1662|3,1662|5,1736|2,1736|6,2256|5,2256|3,2330|6,2330|2) - Aku saranin untuk ctrl+g aja, lebih nyaman buat main menurutku. Terlebih ini masih awal awal. okay
   
   1. 00:02:405 - Bagaimana kalau https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3348831 ? hmmm boleh juga
2. 00:21:266 (21266|8) - Move to 8? Dunno why `-` ok
3. 00:41:464 - Add note buat hihatnya? (Aku anggep note yang sudah ada itu ngikutin melodinya) but dari awal udh kgk ngikut hit hat xD
4. 00:43:692 (43692|1,43692|7,43840|1,43840|7) - Aku rasa ini suaranya beda deh, jadi kalau bisa 00:43:840 (43840|7,43840|1) - di jadiin 37 aja ok then :3
5. 00:44:583 (44583|6) - Move to 8, jadi pattern tuh oh iya nice =w=
6. 01:03:444 (63444|2,63444|0,63444|8,63444|6) - Hapus salah satu notenya, kukira semua dari 01:01:811 - 3-notes semua soalnya sama suaranya, like 01:24:979 - waduh thanks ><
7. 01:23:791 (83791|0,84088|0) - Move to 3 aja deh, lebih pas dan seimbang sama 01:23:197 (83197|6,83197|2,83197|0,83494|6,83494|0,83494|2) - oh yeah gud gud

[Lv.10]

SPOILER

1. 00:10:722 - Add note buat drumnya? hmm boleh boleh
2. 00:13:692 - ^ ^
3. 00:20:969 (20969|6) - Move to 5? Biar nggak kanan semua itu oh iya ok wkwkwkk

Good luck!
Udah 9K, kadang ngikutin pitch, just rip me.

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

eeeeey Shinzo

[Loli. 5]

00:42:801 - add note ok
01:01:514 (61514|3) - move to 6 yeah nice
01:13:395 (73395|2) - move to 2 hmmmm.... okay

[Loli. 10]

00:29:731 (29731|7) - move to 7 hmmmm okay then

[Loli. 20]

00:22:009 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3352322 ahh ifne then, since everyone ask me to make like that
00:24:236 (24236|0) - move to 2 wah nice
00:30:177 (30177|4) - move to 3 sorry xD no for pitch
00:47:553 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3352354 hmmmm good for hand, nice ><
01:03:890 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3352364 okay owo
01:19:632 - add note sorry no synt
01:20:821 - ^ sorry no kick
01:21:415 - ^ ^
01:22:603 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3352369 ok
01:24:830 (84830|8) - move to 8 i dont think so xD

good luck ~
nice 9K diffs thanks

Kazamastar wrote:

IRC MOD

14:55 Shinzo-: 01:05:227 -
14:55 Shinzo-: sampe situ >_>
14:56 Shinzo-: 00:13:840 (13840|3) -  ini ke tengah   <<< sampe situ
14:56 Shinzo-: but w reject tadi ^^
14:56 Kazamastar: 01:14:434 (74434|3) - 5
14:56 Shinzo-: 5 ? yakin ?
14:56 Shinzo-: kan jelek ama 01:14:731 (74731|5) -
14:57 Shinzo-: 01:15:029 (75029|4) -  ad ini juga
14:59 Kazamastar: yeah
14:59 Shinzo-: udh ? :V
15:00 Kazamastar: belom
15:00 Shinzo-: lama x_x
15:00 Kazamastar: lanjut
15:00 *Kazamastar is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/706834 Dj Mashiro - Prismatic Lollipops [Lv.15]]
15:00 Shinzo-: ok
15:01 *Shinzo- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/706834 Dj Mashiro - Prismatic Lollipops [Lv.15]]
15:01 Kazamastar: dat pattern
15:01 Kazamastar: pengen gua ancurin
15:01 Shinzo-: uhhhh
15:02 Kazamastar: 00:28:543 (28543|5,28543|6) - pindahin salah satu
15:02 Kazamastar: OMG COLUMN ADA BANYAK KENAPA DEMPET GITU ORZ
15:03 Shinzo-: oke iye kok dempet gitu ye -_-
15:03 Kazamastar: :)
15:03 Shinzo-: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
15:05 Kazamastar: 01:24:385 (84385|5,84385|3,84533|6,84533|2,84682|7,84682|1) -  bentuknya dibalik
15:05 Kazamastar: eh apa gausah
15:05 Shinzo-: Ctrl G ?
15:05 Shinzo-: lel ok
15:05 Kazamastar: rearrange
15:05 Kazamastar: ctrl+g suaranya berubah
15:06 Shinzo-: jadiii
15:06 Shinzo-: 01:24:385 (84385|3,84385|5,84533|2,84533|6,84682|1,84682|7) -  re-arrange ? gitu ?
15:07 Kazamastar: bentar
15:07 Shinzo-: o
15:07 Shinzo-: k
15:07 Kazamastar: http://puu.sh/iRlWD/d1fc44531d.png
15:08 Shinzo-: hmmm
15:09 Kazamastar: ujungnya hammer
15:09 Shinzo-: kwkwwkk boleh but...
15:09 Kazamastar: atau 01:24:830 (84830|3) - geser ke kiri
15:09 Shinzo-: 01:24:682 (84682|7,84682|1) -  keep
15:09 Kazamastar: 01:24:830 (84830|5) - ini ke kanan
15:09 Kazamastar: oh ok
15:09 *Kazamastar is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/706835 Dj Mashiro - Prismatic Lollipops [Lv.20]]
15:09 Shinzo-: 01:24:385 (84385|7,84385|1,84682|7,84682|1,84979|7,84979|1) -  pitchnya sama klo didenger baik"
15:10 Kazamastar: memang sama
15:10 Kazamastar: kalo mau di hammer juga gapapa
15:10 Kazamastar: takutnya lu nolak
15:10 Shinzo-: udah
15:10 Kazamastar: lanjut
15:10 Shinzo-: [http://puu.sh/iRm4j/71336cfd1e.png gini jadinya]
15:11 Kazamastar: Nah iya
15:11 Kazamastar: Lv. 20
15:11 *Shinzo- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/706835 Dj Mashiro - Prismatic Lollipops [Lv.20]]
15:11 Shinzo-: ok
15:11 Kazamastar: 00:08:939 (8939|5) - Ini ke 7 ?
15:11 Kazamastar: re arrange atasnya ?
15:12 Kazamastar: 00:09:533 (9533|4) - ini ke 1
15:12 Shinzo-: hmmm bentar
15:13 Shinzo-: 00:09:533 (9533|4) -  w moved to 2
15:13 Kazamastar: 00:18:741 (18741|5) - ke 0
15:14 Shinzo-: eh tdi mxudny moved ke 1 xD wkwkwk bru inget klo 012345678
15:14 Shinzo-: ok
15:15 Kazamastar: 00:47:553 (47553|3,47553|2) - banyak column mz
15:15 Shinzo-: itu ceritanya suarany kan lebih lama naek
15:15 Shinzo-: ._.
15:16 Shinzo-: but, ok re-arranged
15:16 Kazamastar: Ok no problem
15:17 Shinzo-: re-arranged kaka T^T
15:17 Kazamastar: 01:10:128 (70128|4) - ke 1 ?
15:18 Shinzo-: hmmm bole bole
15:18 Kazamastar: Ok, otw post to forum

NlHIL wrote:

random modding~

Lv.5
01:18:444 - add a note as 00:17:850

Lv.15
00:17:850 - how about chaning the 4 notes to 3 notes (3,5,7)

Julie wrote:

Finally here huehuehue

• 
  
  [Lv.5]
  
  00:11:019 (11019|3) - Move this note to the 3rd or 5th column, is starting to have to much 4th column for different sound near this part, look before 00:10:573 (10573|3) - and after there is 2 more 00:11:761 (11761|3,12058|3) - .
  
  00:21:266 (21266|3) - Move it to the 2nd column, so you see the difference between these 00:21:415 (21415|5,21637|3,21860|5) - .
  
  01:16:959 - remove this sample soft-hitclap.wav, so it keep the sample sound consistent. no, the others have a note.. so i add a clap HS and this one have no note so i add soft-hitclap HS just like 00:16:365 -
  
  01:18:444 (78444|0) - Woops, you never leave just a finisher hitsound for this kind of sound, pretty sure you forgot your whistle here XD.
  
  [list:1337]

[list:1337]

[Lv.10]

00:13:692 (13692|1,13692|7,13989|1,13989|7) - Don't put these in the same column, they have different sound.

00:13:692 - Shouldn't it be like this 00:04:187 - ?

00:17:850 (17850|1) - Move to the 1st column, so it doesn't go on the same column as them 00:17:256 (17256|1,17553|1) - , and it give more impact for the last finisher >w<.

00:19:038 (19038|3,19038|0) - Since these note aren't for the lead sound but for the drum, aren't you going to add the same hitsound like Lv.15, Lv.20 and even Lv.5 (on sample).

00:24:830 (24830|5) - Forgot your clap here? XD Since these one 00:24:682 (24682|3,24830|5) - are for the drum stream, it should be the same hitsound, and also to be consistent with the higher difficulty.

00:37:157 - I think you forgot a clap here, since you kept hitsound consistent among all the difficulty, and Lv.10 have 2 notes like Lv.15 and Lv.20, but it doesn't have a clap on Lv.10, even Lv.5 have one.

00:56:167 (56167|6,56167|2,56464|4,56464|8,56761|6,56761|2) - Try to make a pattern that fit the song, like these 00:56:167 (56167|6,56167|2,56761|6,56761|2) - shouldn't be in the same column (example).

00:58:840 (58840|6,58840|2) - Move this to 2nd and 8th column so it doesn't jack with this 00:59:137 (59137|6) - .

00:59:731 (59731|8) - Move to the 8th column so it doesn't jack with this 00:59:434 (59434|8) - , and it could make a nice stair with these 00:59:434 (59434|8,60028|6) - to match the pitch of the song

01:19:632 - Add a finish hitsound or remove that finish hitsound on Lv.5. Since there is a spread on hitsound as well among level, the sound on Lv.5 here is higher then Lv.10.

[list:1337]

[list:1337]

[Lv.15]

00:13:989 (13989|2,13989|6,14137|0,14137|8,14286|6,14286|2,14434|0,14434|8) - Try something different? I know this is trying to be a nice symetry, but it doens't match the song, since the song isn't repeating itself in this small part XD.

00:42:207 (42207|0) - Add finish, should be like this 00:41:613 - due to the cymbal.

00:42:207 (42207|4) - Add a clap hitsound, you probably hear the cymbal and the bass sound taking over that snare drum sound, but the drum is still consistent and still going at the same rhythm like here 00:20:227 - to 00:21:415 - .

01:11:613 (71613|6,71613|2,71910|6,71910|2) - Hmm make this flow instead of putting it the same pattern. Since is not the same sound, and the pitch go higher here 01:11:316 - to here 01:11:910 - .

01:21:340 (81340|2) - make this flow with 01:21:266 - . Try to make the stream here flow, so that it change direction here 01:21:415 - , it will be a lots easier to play no? Here a screenshot so you get to see what I mean http://puu.sh/jTi7Q.jpg, that cymbal cause the change of direction, of course I don't suggest you putting the exact same thing as in the screenshot, is just to show you my point of view XD, really suggest you move around, and play around to see what will feel good to play >w<.

01:24:979 (84979|7,84979|1) - Move it to the 1st and last column, the ending pitch is a bit different then these 2 01:24:385 (84385|1,84385|7,84682|7,84682|1) - and instead of repeating, the end should be a bit different if you follow the song XD.

• 
  
  [Lv.20]
  
  00:17:405 - and 00:17:702 - add whistle to keep it consistent with Lv.15?
  
  00:22:306 (22306|6,22306|0,22306|3,22603|0,22603|6,22603|3) - Try follow the pitch, so these doesn't end up being the same column.
  
  00:22:603 (22603|6,22603|3,22603|0,22900|4,22900|1,22900|7) - make these the same column like in Lv.15.
  
  00:30:029 - and 00:30:623 - These two should be the same amount of notes.
  
  01:19:632 - add one more notes, due the loud cymbal, it shouldn't be 3 notes like this 01:20:227 - (example). Just to create a different effect, since you been adding a lots of 3 notes when there wasn't a loud cymbal sound. sorry to reject this one cuz.. 01:19:632 - this may have cymbal, but this have no synt xD 01:20:227 - but this one has

...and....add "Loli" in tags (reason : for lolicon) >w< *runs* ayy LMAO added btw hahahaha xD

UPDATED

Julie wrote:

Bubble by Julolipop~

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Hello,

I'm sorry! Popping for some issues still appears to avoid an unwanted disqualification

[Generals]
Artist: must be DJ Mashiro
Based on:
Lastest Ranked Beatmap
soundcloud
twitter
discogs
Cytus-Wiki

Moreover: You still need to add tags
- Happy Hardcore


---------
- Good luck!

Keep in mind that i will come back

RuberusuScarlet wrote:

congratulations :3

-SoraGami- wrote:

Gratz Shin xD

Kyousuke- wrote:

grats shit shinzoo!

how 2 play well 9K...

Rivals_7 wrote:

Gratz :3

Raediaufar wrote:

Congratulation shinzo >.< 9K is so gg

Btw hbd alex

ExUsagi wrote:

aaaaaaaaaaaaa dah qualify aja, sorry nih belakangan ini sibuk <(")

ExUsagi wrote:

good luck buat qualify nya ya