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Jeff Williams - Red Like Roses II

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PoNo
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MikasaSerket
16:27 MikasaSerket: Hello, I am here to help mod your map ^_^
16:28 Sydio: Hi :3 no problem :p
16:28 MikasaSerket: 00:47:788 -
16:29 MikasaSerket: Right here I would suggest splitting the combo up
16:29 MikasaSerket: But that is just what I think
16:29 Sydio: mhmm, can you post on the forum after ? :x
16:29 MikasaSerket: Oh I will
16:29 MikasaSerket: ^^
16:29 Sydio: need priority ^^'
16:29 MikasaSerket: Mhm
16:29 Sydio: thanks :D
16:29 MikasaSerket: Is it fully finished?
16:29 MikasaSerket: Hitsounds included?
16:29 Sydio: yup
16:30 MikasaSerket: Oh okie
16:30 MikasaSerket: 00:18:931 (3) -
16:30 MikasaSerket: Right here
16:30 MikasaSerket: I think you should add a hit sound
16:30 Sydio: okay
16:31 MikasaSerket: Maybe finish?
16:31 Sydio: mhmm
16:31 Sydio: will try finish and clap
16:31 Sydio: or*
16:31 MikasaSerket: Mhm
16:31 MikasaSerket: Just see what works for you
16:31 Sydio: finish better
16:32 MikasaSerket: also
16:32 MikasaSerket: Some parts are not snapped
16:32 Sydio: So, i'll add hitsound on the start
16:32 MikasaSerket: Mhm
16:32 MikasaSerket: That will be good ^_^
16:32 Sydio: 00:14:360 (7,8,9) -
16:32 MikasaSerket: Mhm, those too
16:35 MikasaSerket: 02:08:931 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) -
16:35 MikasaSerket: RIght here, if you want to
16:35 MikasaSerket: Only if you want to
16:35 Sydio: hitsounds ?
16:35 MikasaSerket: Try seperating them or make them farther from each other
16:35 MikasaSerket: To make it harder
16:35 MikasaSerket: Only if you want too
16:35 Sydio: I see
16:35 Sydio: will try
16:36 MikasaSerket: 02:19:645 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
16:36 MikasaSerket: I have no problems with this part, but
16:36 MikasaSerket: It just gets a little too
16:36 MikasaSerket: Repetitive
16:37 MikasaSerket: I would suggest adding sliders
16:37 MikasaSerket: Or make it a different part
16:37 Sydio: ok
16:37 MikasaSerket: I mean
16:37 MikasaSerket: Pattern
16:37 MikasaSerket: Because it is really stamina draining
16:38 MikasaSerket: 02:26:360 (4) -
16:38 MikasaSerket: I don't think it might be neccasary to slow down that slider right there
16:38 MikasaSerket: But that is what I think
16:39 MikasaSerket: Maybe keep it the same speed as the previous slider
16:39 MikasaSerket: 02:26:931 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) -
16:39 MikasaSerket: The jumps here are not bad
16:39 MikasaSerket: But they are not as common
16:40 MikasaSerket: I am just saying, I have no problem with it though
16:40 Sydio: originality won '^'
16:40 MikasaSerket: Ohhhhh
16:40 MikasaSerket: Hue hue
16:41 Sydio: but I used some patterns of the kotayo version for that map
16:41 Sydio: cause I'm bad for making jumps
16:41 MikasaSerket: Oh I see
16:41 MikasaSerket: XD
16:41 MikasaSerket: 03:28:790 -
16:41 MikasaSerket: I don't know the break it seems
16:41 MikasaSerket: awkward.
16:41 Sydio: But at least I asked him for using that patterns ^^'
16:41 MikasaSerket: But it is rankable
16:41 MikasaSerket: XD
16:42 Sydio: Yes
16:42 Sydio: I want this map be rank
16:42 MikasaSerket: Mhm
16:42 MikasaSerket: Another thing
16:42 Sydio: so much work ;w;
16:42 Sydio: ?
16:42 MikasaSerket: A lot of maps that have the same song
16:42 MikasaSerket: Might have this background
16:42 MikasaSerket: since it is really common
16:42 MikasaSerket: I have the Blake version of this
16:42 Sydio: change the BG ?
16:43 MikasaSerket: If you want to
16:43 Sydio: mhmmm
16:43 MikasaSerket: You don't have too
16:43 Sydio: why n ot
16:43 MikasaSerket: Lol
16:43 Sydio: I need to found something nice
16:43 MikasaSerket: Lol good luck with that
16:43 Sydio: ;w;
16:43 MikasaSerket: Okay, overall this beatmap wasn't bad at all
16:44 MikasaSerket: I just suggest adding more hitsound in the beginning
16:44 Sydio: so, I'll work on your suggestions
16:44 MikasaSerket: Mhm, That is pretty much it
16:44 Sydio: true
16:44 MikasaSerket: Good luck with your beat map ^^
16:44 Sydio: thanks :D
Beomsan
hi, M4M


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    00:20:074 (4) - you can make more beautiful blanket

    00:53:217 (1) - ^

    00:22:788 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - how about this pattern?

    00:27:360 - delete slider and add one note. and 00:27:503 - add slider

    01:00:074 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think this pattern is not good.

    03:14:932 (1) - remove reverse and 03:15:218 - add 1/2 slider

    03:28:647 (1) - x380 y220 is better

    03:35:790 (1,2,3) - Hard to read. Increase the distance

    05:02:362 (2) - remove nc

    05:03:504 (4) - ^

    05:04:647 (1) - ^

    05:04:647 (1) - ^




    05:02:504 (1) - nc

    05:03:076 (1) - ^

    05:03:647 (5) - ^

    05:04:219 (1) - ^

    05:05:219 (1) - ^

    05:05:790 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I Think this notes is fits jump



My English skill is really sucks LOL
Good luck for this map
Topic Starter
PoNo
thanks for modding !
Slayed_old_1
noob`s mod is here 8-)
1. 00:14:503 (7) - i guess u should put this note to the next red tick or just add another one after this.
2. 00:15:503 (1) - NC
3. 00:29:360 (8) - ^
4. 00:42:931 (9) - ^
5. 00:47:645 (10) - ^
6. 01:01:503 (10) - ^
7. 01:08:788 (1) - Nc is not needed, or put NC here: 01:08:217 (10)
8. 01:11:503 (1) - I guess this is too fast..
9. 01:14:931 (1) - This slider looks bad. Maybe u will change it?
10. 01:18:360 (1) - I guess u should put this higher and make this 01:19:217 (4) - slider similar to him. Like here: http://cs627628.vk.me/v627628809/d2c2/PFD8CzYxzpQ.jpg
Same with 01:19:503 (5) - and 01:20:360 (8)
11. 01:26:931 (11) - NC
12. 02:42:932 (1) - this slider is not for ur map. Change it
13. 02:50:932 (11) - NC
14. 04:01:790 (1) - same as 12
15. 04:52:504 (9) - NC
16. 05:09:219 (1) - this is very fast... i guess its even unrankable (i can make a mistake)
Topic Starter
PoNo

nnikitin11 wrote:

noob`s mod is here 8-)
1. 00:14:503 (7) - i guess u should put this note to the next red tick or just add another one after this.
2. 00:15:503 (1) - NC
3. 00:29:360 (8) - ^
4. 00:42:931 (9) - ^
5. 00:47:645 (10) - ^
6. 01:01:503 (10) - ^
7. 01:08:788 (1) - Nc is not needed, or put NC here: 01:08:217 (10)
8. 01:11:503 (1) - I guess this is too fast..
9. 01:14:931 (1) - This slider looks bad. Maybe u will change it?
10. 01:18:360 (1) - I guess u should put this higher and make this 01:19:217 (4) - slider similar to him. Like here: http://cs627628.vk.me/v627628809/d2c2/PFD8CzYxzpQ.jpg
Same with 01:19:503 (5) - and 01:20:360 (8)
11. 01:26:931 (11) - NC
12. 02:42:932 (1) - this slider is not for ur map. Change it
13. 02:50:932 (11) - NC
14. 04:01:790 (1) - same as 12
15. 04:52:504 (9) - NC
16. 05:09:219 (1) - this is very fast... i guess its even unrankable (i can make a mistake)
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