[ K a e d e ] wrote:

MOD

GENERAL

1. Try to increase the stars of the HARD difficulty. NORMAL usually have 2 stars and HARD are between 3-4.
   This will also help those who play this song at Mania, Taiko and Ctb have more difficulty, or make a difficulty for Mania, Taiko and Ctb.

LeaveDoubt wrote:

Great update, so much fun <#

Xazariorus wrote:

Не знаю почему, но показалось что в изи: в начале нормально, а потом как-то не в ритм...

В нормале: в начале нормально потом ритм сбился, потом снова нормально и так почти всю карту...

Изи и нормал проверял с ускорением и с хардроком, так как слишком медленно для меня.

В харде понравилось все только мне показались некоторые моменты что можно было бы заменить или исправить:
1) 00:44:367-00:45:559 - сдвинуть начало спинера на 00:44:764 а перед ним на слог "ла" поставить что либо чтоб промежутка не было
2) 01:05:427 - 01:07:811 - в этом промежутке 2 повтора мне кажется лучше сделать 3 слайдера на три слога "эс", "оу", "эс" или три точки, тут уж что лучше автору, то и ставь
3) 01:11:784 - 01:14:168 - тоже самое
В 2 и 3 можно и так оставить, но тогда 01:05:427-01:06:221 и 01:11:784-01:12:579 не менять, а со вторым повтором эс оу эс что либо сделать...

всё удачки

• It is on track map, congratulations.
  Although there are still things to change as:

1. Mark the DROP of the song, that is, the chorus of the song so that when you look in the song libraries Osu can hear the song and distinguish.
2. You should try to make a Taiko difficulty or mania. If U want I can make those difficulties for your map
3. If you can get better quality video would be great, and if you can another background, although you have now is fine but I think there are better

[ K a e d e ] wrote:

Mod

• It is on track map, congratulations.
  Although there are still things to change as:

1. Mark the DROP of the song, that is, the chorus of the song so that when you look in the song libraries Osu can hear the song and distinguish.
2. You should try to make a Taiko difficulty or mania. If U want I can make those difficulties for your map
3. If you can get better quality video would be great, and if you can another background, although you have now is fine but I think there are better

wajinshu wrote:

[ K a e d e ] wrote:

Mod

• It is on track map, congratulations.
  Although there are still things to change as:

1. Mark the DROP of the song, that is, the chorus of the song so that when you look in the song libraries Osu can hear the song and distinguish.
2. You should try to make a Taiko difficulty or mania. If U want I can make those difficulties for your map
3. If you can get better quality video would be great, and if you can another background, although you have now is fine but I think there are better

1.Now will do.
2.If you agree to make these difficulties I will be very grateful to you.^^
3.Video I will try to find a good quality. But if you do not find what it'll take.

[ K a e d e ] wrote:

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Well, what can obtain video shortly in good quality I think.
Then in about 3 days at most I will have difficulty Mania completed, and if the time reaches me I make two difficulties in Mania

Alexia-Chan wrote:

hi c:

Easy

00:23:307 (2) - This slider doesn't end on anything. The vocals finish on the blue tick and there is a drum beat on the white tick following that.

00:25:493 (3,4) - This slight overlap doesn't look very nice, move the slider up a bit, something like this: http://puu.sh/joTYA/0464f3c06b.jpg

00:28:075 (1) - Slider doesn't start on anything and hitsounds are way too loud.
(you should really re-do this section 00:28:075 (1,2,3) - )

00:32:447 (2) - This slider should be a tick shorter.

00:34:433 (4) - Slider doesn't start on anything.

00:39:996 (1,2,3) - This section feels awkward to play.

01:07:016 (2,3) - Feels awkward to play.

01:21:717 (1,2) - The overlapping here looks terrible.

Normal

00:02:646 (2) - This slider doesn't start on anything. I think a slider starting on the red tick that reverses and ends on the big white tick would be better. Like this: http://puu.sh/joUvs/9802434501.jpg

00:05:824 (2) - ^

00:07:414 (4) - Doesn't start on anything, should start on the red tick where the reverse is currently at.

00:26:089 (6,7) - Space these out, beginners will find this hard to read.

00:26:487 (1) - Should start on the red tick if you are trying to put emphasis on the guitar.

00:36:619 (3) - Remove this circle.

00:50:725 (2) - Space out more. (Use distance snap)

01:15:758 (3) - Doesn't end on anything.

01:18:142 (1,2,3) - Awkward to play.

Hard

00:02:645 (2) - Doesn't start or end on anything.

00:05:823 (2) - ^

00:21:121 (3) - Doesn't start on anything.

00:39:996 (13) - Nc.

00:51:519 (1) - Should start on the red tick tho the left.

01:21:122 (11,12) - Fix blanket.

01:25:492 (2) - Doesn't start on anything.

01:26:287 (4) - ^

Kyle Y wrote:

#modding queue

[Easy]
SV too high, change to 0.8 or 0.9
Sorry that, 1/4 is not allow in Easy
00:01:850 (1) - 00:05:029 (3) - change to 1/2 reverse or 1 beat slider
00:03:241 (2) - ended 00:04:631 -
00:06:419 (5) - ^
00:08:009 (1) - seldom do slider reverse 2 times
00:10:989 (1) - unrankable spinner, Easy diff need 4 beats (about 1500ms), and not suitable to use spinner here
00:14:566 - suggested rhythm




From the above example, you find that all of them are:
1) spaced at least 1 beat (mainly 1 beat, but still okay for 1 or 2 spaced 1/2)
2) nc every 8 beats
3) only a few slider start at red tick

you should not overlap slider too much, at least clear to read.

In fact Easy is easy to map, if you map about 2 to 3 times, you will know.
I just stop modding Easy here

[Normal]
00:02:844 (2) - 1/4 sound at 00:03:142 - is not preferred to map.
00:03:241 - add sth to click here
00:06:023 (2) - 1/4 sound at 00:06:321 - is not preferred to map.
00:08:605 - add sth to click here
00:10:791 - 1 beat slider here
00:10:990 (1) - start at 00:11:387 - ,ended 00:13:374 - (recovery time problem also, 2 beats for Normal)


Sorry I have no mood to mod anymore.
I just stop here.

deni979 wrote:

Когда скачиваю Beatmap с video и ставлю в osu, то эта бедолага мне говорит, что файл биты, не хочешь устанавливать. (

wajinshu wrote:

deni979 wrote:

Когда скачиваю Beatmap с video и ставлю в osu, то эта бедолага мне говорит, что файл биты, не хочешь устанавливать. (

Хмм, спасибо что сказал попытаемся это устранить. Что бы проигрывалось видео. А вы без видео скачивали? Тогда был поврежден файл или нет?

deni979 wrote:

Сначала скачал только с видео, мне выдало ошибку. Потом скачал без видео, поиграл, кстати мне понравилось, успехов в этом), и решил, что возможно сейчас можно скачать, проверить, вдруг битые файлы были закачаны по ссылке без видео, но так ничего и не изменилось. То есть файл с видео повреждён. Чтобы точно убедиться пару раз перекачал.

wajinshu wrote:

deni979 wrote:

Сначала скачал только с видео, мне выдало ошибку. Потом скачал без видео, поиграл, кстати мне понравилось, успехов в этом), и решил, что возможно сейчас можно скачать, проверить, вдруг битые файлы были закачаны по ссылке без видео, но так ничего и не изменилось. То есть файл с видео повреждён. Чтобы точно убедиться пару раз перекачал.

Я только что вставила новое видео, вы пробовали его еще раз скачать? Если видео все еще повреждено то буду искать новое.

1. According to AiMod, title conflicts with the other diffs, I think because of the (!) at the end of SOX.
2. 00:02:843 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 00:05:029 (3). It will look more consistent.
3. 00:11:387 - Maybe add a spinner here and end it at 00:13:374?
4. 00:23:307 (2) - Fix blanket.
   Like this:

   
5. 00:37:215 (2) - Extend till 00:39:599.
6. 00:45:161 (1) - Remove new combo.
7. 00:56:685 (4) - Blanket thing again.
8. 01:24:897 (6) - Add new combo. (The music stops for a second.)
9. 01:28:274 (8) - Remove backward arrow and cut the slider till 01:28:870.

1. 00:07:612 (3) - Add new combo.
2. 01:02:447 (5) - Add new combo and remove it from 01:04:235 (1).
3. 01:05:427 (4) - Add new combo.
4. 01:10:990 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 01:11:785 (2).
5. 01:14:169 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 01:14:566 (2).
6. 01:26:487 (6) - Move it to 01:27:600 and add new combo. Also, move 01:28:076 (8) to 01:28:274 and add one more circle at 01:28:870. Then move the spinner right after. This will make it fit the song better.

1. 00:07:612 (3) - Cut the slider till 00:08:009~ add new combo and remove it from 00:08:605 (1). Rhythm.
2. 00:11:586 (1) - Cut the spinner till 00:12:976~ 00:13:572 (1) - Move spinner to 00:13:374 and extend it till 00:14:168. Isn't it a lot better that way?
3. 00:16:354 (8) - Add new combo.
4. 00:35:426 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 00:36:221 (2).
5. 00:51:122 (1) - Extend spinner till 00:52:711. Makes more sense to me.
6. 00:58:274 (1) - Remove new combo.
7. 00:59:466 (4) - Add new combo and remove it from 00:59:863 (1).
8. 01:03:440 (2) - Add new combo.
9. 01:10:394 (1) - Remove new combo.
10. 01:15:956 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 01:17:347 (5).
11. 01:27:082 (5) - Extend slider till 01:27:480~ move 01:27:479 (1) at 01:27:678 and cut it till 01:28:076.

1. 00:12:977 (2) - Maybe extend the slider till 00:13:374 or add a circle and move the spinner right after? Fits the music better IMO.
2. 01:17:745 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 01:18:540 (6), like you did with 01:11:388 (7,8,9,10,1).
3. 01:28:871 (1) - Add a circle here and move the spinner right after?

xDarxen wrote:

Hullo! Here is my mod, as requested in my queue:

[Easy]

1. According to AiMod, title conflicts with the other diffs, I think because of the (!) at the end of SOX.
2. 00:02:843 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 00:05:029 (3). It will look more consistent.✔️
3. 00:11:387 - Maybe add a spinner here and end it at 00:13:374?✔️
4. 00:23:307 (2) - Fix blanket. ✔️
   Like this:

   
5. 00:37:215 (2) - Extend till 00:39:599. ✘
6. 00:45:161 (1) - Remove new combo.✔️
7. 00:56:685 (4) - Blanket thing again. ✔️
8. 01:24:897 (6) - Add new combo. (The music stops for a second.) ✔️
9. 01:28:274 (8) - Remove backward arrow and cut the slider till 01:28:870.✔️

[Normal]

1. 00:07:612 (3) - Add new combo. ✔️
2. 01:02:447 (5) - Add new combo and remove it from 01:04:235 (1). ✔️
3. 01:05:427 (4) - Add new combo. ✔️
4. 01:10:990 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 01:11:785 (2). ✔️
5. 01:14:169 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 01:14:566 (2). ✔️
6. 01:26:487 (6) - Move it to 01:27:600 and add new combo. Also, move 01:28:076 (8) to 01:28:274 and add one more circle at 01:28:870. Then move the spinner right after. This will make it fit the song better.✔️

[Hard]

1. 00:07:612 (3) - Cut the slider till 00:08:009~ add new combo and remove it from 00:08:605 (1). Rhythm. ✔️
2. 00:11:586 (1) - Cut the spinner till 00:12:976~ 00:13:572 (1) - Move spinner to 00:13:374 and extend it till 00:14:168. Isn't it a lot better that way?✔️
3. 00:16:354 (8) - Add new combo. ✔️
4. 00:35:426 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 00:36:221 (2). ✔️
5. 00:51:122 (1) - Extend spinner till 00:52:711. Makes more sense to me.
6. 00:58:274 (1) - Remove new combo. ✔️
7. 00:59:466 (4) - Add new combo and remove it from 00:59:863 (1). ✔️
8. 01:03:440 (2) - Add new combo. ✔️
9. 01:10:394 (1) - Remove new combo. ✔️
10. 01:15:956 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 01:17:347 (5). ✔️
11. 01:27:082 (5) - Extend slider till 01:27:480~ move 01:27:479 (1) at 01:27:678 and cut it till 01:28:076.✔️

[Hkz's Insane]

1. 00:12:977 (2) - Maybe extend the slider till 00:13:374 or add a circle and move the spinner right after? Fits the music better IMO.
2. 01:17:745 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 01:18:540 (6), like you did with 01:11:388 (7,8,9,10,1).
3. 01:28:871 (1) - Add a circle here and move the spinner right after?

All these new combo changes I'm suggesting you, is because combos are usually placed to either match the vocal/musical phrases or to indicate the downbeat of each measure. Keep that in mind in your future beatmaps.
That's all! I hope it helped and good luck!

xDarxen wrote:

Hullo! Here is my mod, as requested in my queue:

[Easy]

1. According to AiMod, title conflicts with the other diffs, I think because of the (!) at the end of SOX.
2. 00:02:843 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 00:05:029 (3). It will look more consistent.
3. 00:11:387 - Maybe add a spinner here and end it at 00:13:374?
4. 00:23:307 (2) - Fix blanket.
   Like this:

   
5. 00:37:215 (2) - Extend till 00:39:599.
6. 00:45:161 (1) - Remove new combo.
7. 00:56:685 (4) - Blanket thing again.
8. 01:24:897 (6) - Add new combo. (The music stops for a second.)
9. 01:28:274 (8) - Remove backward arrow and cut the slider till 01:28:870.

[Normal]

1. 00:07:612 (3) - Add new combo.
2. 01:02:447 (5) - Add new combo and remove it from 01:04:235 (1).
3. 01:05:427 (4) - Add new combo.
4. 01:10:990 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 01:11:785 (2).
5. 01:14:169 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 01:14:566 (2).
6. 01:26:487 (6) - Move it to 01:27:600 and add new combo. Also, move 01:28:076 (8) to 01:28:274 and add one more circle at 01:28:870. Then move the spinner right after. This will make it fit the song better.

[Hard]

1. 00:07:612 (3) - Cut the slider till 00:08:009~ add new combo and remove it from 00:08:605 (1). Rhythm.
2. 00:11:586 (1) - Cut the spinner till 00:12:976~ 00:13:572 (1) - Move spinner to 00:13:374 and extend it till 00:14:168. Isn't it a lot better that way?
3. 00:16:354 (8) - Add new combo.
4. 00:35:426 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 00:36:221 (2).
5. 00:51:122 (1) - Extend spinner till 00:52:711. Makes more sense to me.
6. 00:58:274 (1) - Remove new combo.
7. 00:59:466 (4) - Add new combo and remove it from 00:59:863 (1).
8. 01:03:440 (2) - Add new combo.
9. 01:10:394 (1) - Remove new combo.
10. 01:15:956 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 01:17:347 (5).
11. 01:27:082 (5) - Extend slider till 01:27:480~ move 01:27:479 (1) at 01:27:678 and cut it till 01:28:076.

[Hkz's Insane]

1. 00:12:977 (2) - Maybe extend the slider till 00:13:374 or add a circle and move the spinner right after? Fits the music better IMO. I added a circle after the slider, done
2. 01:17:745 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 01:18:540 (6), like you did with 01:11:388 (7,8,9,10,1). Done
3. 01:28:871 (1) - Add a circle here and move the spinner right after? Done

All these new combo changes I'm suggesting you, is because combos are usually placed to either match the vocal/musical phrases or to indicate the downbeat of each measure. Keep that in mind in your future beatmaps.
That's all! I hope it helped and good luck!

Okoratu wrote:

Please dont give kudosu to the same person twice because you already rewarded them with one for modding.

Please only give kudosu to posts that helped you improve the map (i.e. mod posts)

Thanks

pkhg wrote:

nice bg 10/10 would fap lol

[General]
SOX! - B-Chiku Sentai SOX! (TV Size) (wajinshu).osb < pls delete from the folder ✔️
u can get a better mp3, i was like wtf when i heard this 01:31:056 - xd

[Easy]

00:08:010 (1,2) - is not recommended to use more than 1 repeat on lower diffs
00:15:361 (1) - remove nc
00:15:361 (2,3,1) - kinda boring and repetitive, im sure you can do better!
00:20:924 (3) - the repeats thing
00:22:910 (1,2,3) - fix spacing
00:29:070 (2) - clap on tail
00:31:255 (1,2) - pls dont stack things on lower difsss
00:37:216 (2) - uhhhh the repeat isnt even snapped, better delete it and map that part properly xd
00:49:534 (2) - u know
00:51:520 (1,1) - t/241019
01:02:249 (1) - a
01:17:150 (3) - same as 00:37:216 (2) -

[Normal]
the ar is too high, 4~6 should be fine

idk if its ok to use 1/4 sliders on normals, probably not
00:02:844 (2) - uhh, better to replace it with a 1/2 slider or something ✔️
00:06:023 (2) - same^ ✔️
00:10:195 (6,7) - i dont like stacks in slidertails ✔️
00:17:745 (6,7,8) - what about http://puu.sh/jSngL/e1202636d6.jpg ✔️
00:49:136 (5,6) - fix spacing ✔️
00:56:685 (5) - probably not for a normal diff, the shape i mean I removed it. And put the sliders ✔️
01:01:850 (4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - lol thats too hard I removed everything, put the slider ✔️
01:28:274 (2,3) - dem stacks ✔️

[Hard]

you can nerf some jumps to keep a good spread

still need a lot of work but im lazy to point out too many things xd

good luck!

AlejandroMedia wrote:

Awesome, just one thing: Replace the mp3, the current sounds weird

Hard
use shift+ctrl+F for perfect stream
00:06:420 put this circle in front of slider please
00:07:612 circle
00:07:811 circle
00:08:010 slider
00:11:189 circle
00:11:387 circle
00:11:487 spinner
00:13:374 finish the spinner here
00:16:950 slider
00:19:533 slider
00:19:930 circle
00:21:519 (4,5,6) - i think its bad
00:22:910 slider, finish here 00:23:109 and return
00:28:076 (5) - begin this slider here 00:27:877
00:53:506 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - you can delete this and begin a spinner here - 00:59:765
01:04:036 (1) - finish this slider here 01:05:228
01:06:818 slider
01:13:175 slider
01:28:870 (4) - delete and begin a spinner here 01:28:871

Nyark Kidoune wrote:

Hi !

Hard
use shift+ctrl+F for perfect stream
00:06:420 put this circle in front of slider please
00:07:612 circle ✔️
00:07:811 circle ✔️
00:08:010 slider ✔️
00:11:189 circle ✔️
00:11:387 circle ✔️
00:11:487 spinner ✔️
00:13:374 finish the spinner here ✔️
00:16:950 slider ✔️
00:19:533 slider ✔️
00:19:930 circle ✔️
00:21:519 (4,5,6) - i think its bad I removed the circle which was on a blue tick. really better
00:22:910 slider, finish here 00:23:109 and return ✔️
00:28:076 (5) - begin this slider here 00:27:877 ✔️
00:53:506 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - you can delete this and begin a spinner here - 00:59:765 I'll think about it to delete or not
01:04:036 (1) - finish this slider here 01:05:228 ✔️
01:06:818 slider ✔️
01:13:175 slider ✔️
01:28:870 (4) - delete and begin a spinner here 01:28:871 ✔️

Strong mod for me sry, i do my best i hope that mod help you !

1. remove all those "," from tags. you can even separate them by using space
2. the offset should be 1892 (be ready to fix all those timings + snap stuff)

1. why DS 0.8? i'd prefer 1 or 1.1 for this
2. there are some notes that aren't completely using DS
3. 00:01:892 (1) - this is not a normal diff for me. i'd make it into 1/2 slider if i were you
4. 00:01:892 (1,2,1,2) - DS please
5. 00:05:070 (1) - you know what i'm talking about
6. 00:08:249 (2) - finish head
7. 00:09:442 (3,4,5) - here's the correct beat http://puu.sh/kJ0Ep/2f9d962302.jpg
8. 00:19:773 (1,2,3) - DS please
9. 00:17:786 (6,7,8,9) - this stacking might lead the newbies more confusing. unstack there
10. 00:26:726 (1) - this one looks hard. and here's a little bit help from me http://puu.sh/kJ0QR/48acfa3185.jpg
11. 00:38:051 (4) - move this slider to 00:38:448 - , then add a note on 00:38:051 -
12. 00:47:587 (1,2,3) - (1) and (2) seems hard for them. i'd make a 1/2 slider for (1) and (2) only
13. 00:59:706 (2) - one single note here
14. 01:18:183 (1) - aim the red dot at 212|140 and aim the 3rd dot at 148|96 in order to make a blanket with 01:19:375 (2) -
15. 01:19:375 (2,3,4,5,6) - what a bad flow here
16. 01:26:527 (1,2,3) - here's the correct one http://puu.sh/kJ1mG/60f7035935.jpg

1. hitsound issue
2. NC issues
3. there are some notes that has a wrong rhythm on it
4. i'd recommend you that the slider should start at the white tick, so it will be more comfortable to play, like 00:18:382 (5) - for example that needs to fix
5. 00:01:495 (1,2) - wrong note. it should be like this
6. 00:03:283 (1) - end this slider end to the white tick (at 00:04:673 - ) in order to make the rhythm more comfortable
7. 00:20:667 (2) - delete this, since i don't even hear any note there
8. 00:18:978 (1) - remove NC, then 00:19:376 (2) - NC
9. 00:14:607 (1,2,3) - this kind of spacing for (2) and (3) is really close, even though (1) and (2) is quite far a bit. better make the spacing similar or make some kind of jump stuff
10. 00:16:991 (5) - end this slider at the red tick to follow the vocal well
11. 00:23:747 (1) - remove NC, then 00:24:144 (2) - NC
12. 00:05:071 (1,2,3,4,5) - seriously? this is not even a neat stream. please use DS when it comes to this
13. 00:25:733 (3) - i'd make this one into this
14. 00:26:925 (1,2,3,4,5) - this again. (5) is kinda far from the stream part, so make it close by using DS to make the stream part more consistent
15. 00:33:283 (1) - remove NC, then 00:33:680 (2) - NC
16. 00:38:349 - add a note here for following the vocal
17. 00:39:641 (1) - remove NC, then 00:40:038 (2) - NC
18. 00:41:826 (3) - move this one to 277|246 by not using grid in order to blanket 00:42:025 (4) - properly
19. 00:45:998 (1) - remove NC, then 00:46:396 (2) - NC
20. 00:47:985 (2) - finish on head
21. 00:51:561 (3) - end this slider on the white tick please
22. 01:11:429 (1,2,3,4,5) - this again. use DS please
23. 01:12:621 (7) - stack this with (4)
24. 01:17:786 (7,8,9,10,11) - again, DS please for this stream
25. 01:18:183 (11) - NC this
26. 01:21:362 (2) - i'd use DS on this for better + finish
27. 01:24:144 (1) - remove NC, then 01:24:541 (4) - NC
28. 01:24:938 (5) - Ctrl+G + 290|242 by not using grid
29. 01:27:720 (2,5,8) - finish
30. 01:27:720 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i'd prefer this kind of jump http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3809473 (it's just a sample)

-Hakurei- wrote:

video + song + BG = mind blown

i have to skip hard diff for this, sorry

[General]

1. remove all those "," from tags. you can even separate them by using space
2. the offset should be 1892 (be ready to fix all those timings + snap stuff)

[Normal]

1. why DS 0.8? i'd prefer 1 or 1.1 for this
2. there are some notes that aren't completely using DS
3. 00:01:892 (1) - this is not a normal diff for me. i'd make it into 1/2 slider if i were you ✔️
4. 00:01:892 (1,2,1,2) - DS please ✔️
5. 00:05:070 (1) - you know what i'm talking about ✔️
6. 00:08:249 (2) - finish head ✔️
7. 00:09:442 (3,4,5) - here's the correct beat http://puu.sh/kJ0Ep/2f9d962302.jpg ✔️
8. 00:19:773 (1,2,3) - DS please ✔️
9. 00:17:786 (6,7,8,9) - this stacking might lead the newbies more confusing. unstack there ✔️
10. 00:26:726 (1) - this one looks hard. and here's a little bit help from me http://puu.sh/kJ0QR/48acfa3185.jpg ✔️
11. 00:38:051 (4) - move this slider to 00:38:448 - , then add a note on 00:38:051 - ✔️
12. 00:47:587 (1,2,3) - (1) and (2) seems hard for them. i'd make a 1/2 slider for (1) and (2) only ✔️
13. 00:59:706 (2) - one single note here ✔️
14. 01:18:183 (1) - aim the red dot at 212|140 and aim the 3rd dot at 148|96 in order to make a blanket with 01:19:375 (2) - aim start in white tick, I have done differently
15. 01:19:375 (2,3,4,5,6) - what a bad flow here I changed
16. 01:26:527 (1,2,3) - here's the correct one http://puu.sh/kJ1mG/60f7035935.jpg ✔️

[HKz' Insane]

1. hitsound issue
2. NC issues
3. there are some notes that has a wrong rhythm on it
4. i'd recommend you that the slider should start at the white tick, so it will be more comfortable to play, like 00:18:382 (5) - for example that needs to fix
5. 00:01:495 (1,2) - wrong note. it should be like this
6. 00:03:283 (1) - end this slider end to the white tick (at 00:04:673 - ) in order to make the rhythm more comfortable
7. 00:20:667 (2) - delete this, since i don't even hear any note there
8. 00:18:978 (1) - remove NC, then 00:19:376 (2) - NC
9. 00:14:607 (1,2,3) - this kind of spacing for (2) and (3) is really close, even though (1) and (2) is quite far a bit. better make the spacing similar or make some kind of jump stuff
10. 00:16:991 (5) - end this slider at the red tick to follow the vocal well
11. 00:23:747 (1) - remove NC, then 00:24:144 (2) - NC
12. 00:05:071 (1,2,3,4,5) - seriously? this is not even a neat stream. please use DS when it comes to this
13. 00:25:733 (3) - i'd make this one into this
14. 00:26:925 (1,2,3,4,5) - this again. (5) is kinda far from the stream part, so make it close by using DS to make the stream part more consistent
15. 00:33:283 (1) - remove NC, then 00:33:680 (2) - NC
16. 00:38:349 - add a note here for following the vocal
17. 00:39:641 (1) - remove NC, then 00:40:038 (2) - NC
18. 00:41:826 (3) - move this one to 277|246 by not using grid in order to blanket 00:42:025 (4) - properly
19. 00:45:998 (1) - remove NC, then 00:46:396 (2) - NC
20. 00:47:985 (2) - finish on head
21. 00:51:561 (3) - end this slider on the white tick please
22. 01:11:429 (1,2,3,4,5) - this again. use DS please
23. 01:12:621 (7) - stack this with (4)
24. 01:17:786 (7,8,9,10,11) - again, DS please for this stream
25. 01:18:183 (11) - NC this
26. 01:21:362 (2) - i'd use DS on this for better + finish
27. 01:24:144 (1) - remove NC, then 01:24:541 (4) - NC
28. 01:24:938 (5) - Ctrl+G + 290|242 by not using grid
29. 01:27:720 (2,5,8) - finish
30. 01:27:720 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i'd prefer this kind of jump http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3809473 (it's just a sample)

i think this map needs a lot of work if you want to get this one rank. also, you should listen to the song again and check it whether the rhythm is correct or not. GL!

-Hakurei- wrote:

video + song + BG = mind blown

i have to skip hard diff for this, sorry

[General]

1. remove all those "," from tags. you can even separate them by using space
2. the offset should be 1892 (be ready to fix all those timings + snap stuff)

[Normal]

1. why DS 0.8? i'd prefer 1 or 1.1 for this
2. there are some notes that aren't completely using DS
3. 00:01:892 (1) - this is not a normal diff for me. i'd make it into 1/2 slider if i were you
4. 00:01:892 (1,2,1,2) - DS please
5. 00:05:070 (1) - you know what i'm talking about
6. 00:08:249 (2) - finish head
7. 00:09:442 (3,4,5) - here's the correct beat http://puu.sh/kJ0Ep/2f9d962302.jpg
8. 00:19:773 (1,2,3) - DS please
9. 00:17:786 (6,7,8,9) - this stacking might lead the newbies more confusing. unstack there
10. 00:26:726 (1) - this one looks hard. and here's a little bit help from me http://puu.sh/kJ0QR/48acfa3185.jpg
11. 00:38:051 (4) - move this slider to 00:38:448 - , then add a note on 00:38:051 -
12. 00:47:587 (1,2,3) - (1) and (2) seems hard for them. i'd make a 1/2 slider for (1) and (2) only
13. 00:59:706 (2) - one single note here
14. 01:18:183 (1) - aim the red dot at 212|140 and aim the 3rd dot at 148|96 in order to make a blanket with 01:19:375 (2) -
15. 01:19:375 (2,3,4,5,6) - what a bad flow here
16. 01:26:527 (1,2,3) - here's the correct one http://puu.sh/kJ1mG/60f7035935.jpg

[HKz' Insane]

1. hitsound issue
2. NC issues
3. there are some notes that has a wrong rhythm on it
4. i'd recommend you that the slider should start at the white tick, so it will be more comfortable to play, like 00:18:382 (5) - for example that needs to fix
5. 00:01:495 (1,2) - wrong note. it should be like this Done
6. 00:03:283 (1) - end this slider end to the white tick (at 00:04:673 - ) in order to make the rhythm more comfortable Done
7. 00:20:667 (2) - delete this, since i don't even hear any note there Done
8. 00:18:978 (1) - remove NC, then 00:19:376 (2) - NC Done
9. 00:14:607 (1,2,3) - this kind of spacing for (2) and (3) is really close, even though (1) and (2) is quite far a bit. better make the spacing similar or make some kind of jump stuff Done
10. 00:16:991 (5) - end this slider at the red tick to follow the vocal well Done
11. 00:23:747 (1) - remove NC, then 00:24:144 (2) - NC Done
12. 00:05:071 (1,2,3,4,5) - seriously? this is not even a neat stream. please use DS when it comes to this
13. 00:25:733 (3) - i'd make this one into this Done
14. 00:26:925 (1,2,3,4,5) - this again. (5) is kinda far from the stream part, so make it close by using DS to make the stream part more consistent
15. 00:33:283 (1) - remove NC, then 00:33:680 (2) - NC Done
16. 00:38:349 - add a note here for following the vocal I add a 1/4 slider to follow the vocal. Done
17. 00:39:641 (1) - remove NC, then 00:40:038 (2) - NC Done
18. 00:41:826 (3) - move this one to 277|246 by not using grid in order to blanket 00:42:025 (4) - properly Done
19. 00:45:998 (1) - remove NC, then 00:46:396 (2) - NC Done
20. 00:47:985 (2) - finish on head Done
21. 00:51:561 (3) - end this slider on the white tick please I added a note before the slider, that should work
22. 01:11:429 (1,2,3,4,5) - this again. use DS please
23. 01:12:621 (7) - stack this with (4) Done
24. 01:17:786 (7,8,9,10,11) - again, DS please for this stream Done
25. 01:18:183 (11) - NC this Done
26. 01:21:362 (2) - i'd use DS on this for better + finish
27. 01:24:144 (1) - remove NC, then 01:24:541 (4) - NC Done
28. 01:24:938 (5) - Ctrl+G + 290|242 by not using grid Done
29. 01:27:720 (2,5,8) - finish Done
30. 01:27:720 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i'd prefer this kind of jump http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3809473 (it's just a sample)

i think this map needs a lot of work if you want to get this one rank. also, you should listen to the song again and check it whether the rhythm is correct or not. GL!

- H i N a - wrote:

Hi, from Thai's Modding Queue


[Hkz's Insane]

00:01:892 (1,2,3,4,5) - It should have the same DS IMO.
00:11:032 (1) - Move to 217 | 49 ?
00:13:514 (1) - Spinner should be end at 00:14:607 and remove 00:14:607 (1) becuase it's too hard for reading this note
00:18:780 (6,7) - Fix blanket ?
00:21:362 (4) - I think it's too far from previous object, try to change to another position to make the rhythm flow smoother ?
00:22:952 (3) - the same of 00:21:362 (4)
00:27:720 (6) - it's overlap from 00:27:323 (5) that it's not good IMO
00:29:309 (4,5,1) - i think it's too near because 1/2 note have DS the same of 00:28:912 (3) to 00:29:309 (4) which is 1/4 note, can you make it more far than this ?
00:37:257 (4) - I think it's too far from previous object, try to change to another position to make the rhythm flow smoother ?
00:42:025 (4) - this slider should be end at 00:42:223
00:45:402 (4,1) - make them stack ?
00:48:382 (3) - is it too far from previous object ? D:
00:51:560 (3,4) - Fix blanket ?
00:52:057 (1) - can you move the end point of spinner to 00:52:752 and remove 00:52:752 (1) because it's hard to read the note after finish spinner
01:08:250 (1,2) - can you switch the position between that 2 notes ? i think it's make the rhythm flow smoother
01:11:826 (5,6) - Fix blanket ?
01:12:819 (8,2) - make them stack ?
01:16:991 (3) - I think it's too far from previous object, try to change to another position to make the rhythm flow smoother ?
01:18:978 (3) - ^
01:22:554 (1,6) - make them stack ?



[Hard]

00:25:137 - add a note ? hmm no
00:26:130 (1,2) - fix blanket ?maybe
00:28:911 - add a note ? ✔️
00:29:110 (1,2) - fix blanket ? okay
00:32:885 (2) - change it to 2 circles ? ✔️
00:37:454 (1) - ^ hmm okay...
00:38:249 (1) - ^ hmm okay...
00:42:223 (7) - add clap at the end of slider ✔️
01:05:468 (1,4) - make them completely stack plz. okay
01:09:044 (2) - remove this and place circles in 01:09:044 and 01:09:242 ? ✔️
01:24:938 (7,8) - fix blanket ? Maybe



[Normal]

00:34:474 - add a note ? ✔️
01:02:289 (1) - too many reverse slider, i think it's not good for normal diff. I changed into simple sliders
01:08:249 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i think it's too hard for normal players, can you try this ?Yes it's true better

SPOILER

01:18:183 (4,1) - fix blanket ? okay
Sorry, i'm not good at modding Normal diff



That's all my mod

Good Luck

- H i N a - wrote:

Hi, from Thai's Modding Queue


[Hkz's Insane]

00:01:892 (1,2,3,4,5) - It should have the same DS IMO. I put 00:02:289 (5) - a bit closer to the stream
00:11:032 (1) - Move to 217 | 49 ? Done
00:13:514 (1) - Spinner should be end at 00:14:607 and remove 00:14:607 (1) becuase it's too hard for reading this note Done
00:18:780 (6,7) - Fix blanket ? Done
00:21:362 (4) - I think it's too far from previous object, try to change to another position to make the rhythm flow smoother ? Done
00:22:952 (3) - the same of 00:21:362 (4) Done
00:27:720 (6) - it's overlap from 00:27:323 (5) that it's not good IMO Done
00:29:309 (4,5,1) - i think it's too near because 1/2 note have DS the same of 00:28:912 (3) to 00:29:309 (4) which is 1/4 note, can you make it more far than this ? Done
00:37:257 (4) - I think it's too far from previous object, try to change to another position to make the rhythm flow smoother ? Done
00:42:025 (4) - this slider should be end at 00:42:223 Done
00:45:402 (4,1) - make them stack ? Done
00:48:382 (3) - is it too far from previous object ? D: Fixed
00:51:560 (3,4) - Fix blanket ? Done
00:52:057 (1) - can you move the end point of spinner to 00:52:752 and remove 00:52:752 (1) because it's hard to read the note after finish spinner Done
01:08:250 (1,2) - can you switch the position between that 2 notes ? i think it's make the rhythm flow smoother Done
01:11:826 (5,6) - Fix blanket ? Done
01:12:819 (8,2) - make them stack ? Done
01:16:991 (3) - I think it's too far from previous object, try to change to another position to make the rhythm flow smoother ? Done
01:18:978 (3) - ^ Done
01:22:554 (1,6) - make them stack ? Done



[Hard]

00:25:137 - add a note ?
00:26:130 (1,2) - fix blanket ?
00:28:911 - add a note ?
00:29:110 (1,2) - fix blanket ?
00:32:885 (2) - change it to 2 circles ?
00:37:454 (1) - ^
00:38:249 (1) - ^
00:42:223 (7) - add clap at the end of slider
01:05:468 (1,4) - make them completely stack plz.
01:09:044 (2) - remove this and place circles in 01:09:044 and 01:09:242 ?
01:24:938 (7,8) - fix blanket ?



[Normal]

00:34:474 - add a note ?
01:02:289 (1) - too many reverse slider, i think it's not good for normal diff.
01:08:249 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i think it's too hard for normal players, can you try this ?

SPOILER

01:18:183 (4,1) - fix blanket ?
Sorry, i'm not good at modding Normal diff



That's all my mod

Good Luck

Normal

Hard

Dono027 wrote:

From my modding queue :3

Normal

00:01:892 (1,2,1,2) - I think you can change the place of the sliders here. okay

Hard

00:01:892 (1,2,3,4,5) - Stream on the beggining ?! yes

00:16:991 (3,4) - Slider with 1 reverse no

00:22:554 (5,6) - Slider ? okay
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1. the audio has to be removed from the video, otherwise it's not rankable (file size reasons)
2. tags and audio preview are not consistent throughout the set, make sure they're fixed in the Insane diff!
3. video contains mature content, there should be a warning in the description

• -- overall about NCs: you're NCing seems quite random. at first you use them on downbeat, then you match them with the vocals and in-between are some random NCs.. try to make them more consistent, maybe? you could for example use NC on each/each second downbeat

1. OD and HP drain are, imo, far too high for the easiest diff, can you reduce the two?
2. 00:02:885 (2) - there's no beat on the white tick, consider removing the reverse here? a simple 1/1 slider works better
3. 00:06:064 (2) - ^
4. 00:09:044 (3,4) - try ctrl+g on timeline. the circle emphasizes the downbeat much better than the sliderend
5. 00:18:580 (6,7) - similar to ^
   //sidenote: there are quite a lot of unstressed downbeat, that could be better emphasized, imo. so I won't list them up, but maybe you should take a look at that?
6. 00:25:336 (4,1) - can you rotate (1) so the sliderend isn't closer to (4) than the head? this might confuse beginner players
7. 00:34:474 (3,4,5) - the pattern is a little hard for the easiest diff, I prefer if you unstack (3,4)
   also you might want to replace (4,5) with simple 1/1 sliders so the screen won't look so cluttered. but that's just my personal preferance
8. 00:40:832 (3,4) - ctrl+g on timeline? for emphasis, again

1. what's with the short break in the beginning? there's not even one in Normal O:
   how about adding circles at 00:03:878 - , 00:04:276 - and 00:04:673 - or a 1/1 reverse-slider? the beats are so well mapable~
2. 00:12:620 (5,6) - sounds weird to skip the beat on the red tick here, consider using this rhythm instead: http://puu.sh/l2qDG.jpg
   same here btw - 01:03:481 (5,6) -
3. 00:13:216 (7) - 00:13:415 - should be clickable, cause it's a whole different sound, how about removing the reverse and adding a circle there?
4. 00:16:991 (3,4) - there's nothing on the blue tick so two circles or one single 1/1 slider matches better here
5. 00:30:501 (5) - again there's nothing on the blue tick, but a beat on the red one, so why does the slider end on the blue tick? should end on the red one, imo
6. 00:36:064 (1) - same here
7. 00:42:819 (2) - and here
8. 00:51:958 (4,5) - stacks below sliderends might be a little confusing, I prefer if you unstack them, but that might just be me xD
9. 00:59:507 (2) - the red tick here should be clickable, imo. same reasons as for 00:13:415 -
10. 00:59:805 (1,1) - there's too little recovery time after the spinner, imo. can you shorten it a little so it ends on 01:01:891 - ?

Squirrel wrote:

hey there!
m4m from my queue :3 (thanks again for your mod!)

General

1. the audio has to be removed from the video, otherwise it's not rankable (file size reasons) ✔️
2. tags and audio preview are not consistent throughout the set, make sure they're fixed in the Insane diff! ✔️
3. video contains mature content, there should be a warning in the description

✔️

Normal

• -- overall about NCs: you're NCing seems quite random. at first you use them on downbeat, then you match them with the vocals and in-between are some random NCs.. try to make them more consistent, maybe? you could for example use NC on each/each second downbeat ✔️

1. OD and HP drain are, imo, far too high for the easiest diff, can you reduce the two? ✔️
2. 00:02:885 (2) - there's no beat on the white tick, consider removing the reverse here? a simple 1/1 slider works better
3. 00:06:064 (2) - ^
4. 00:09:044 (3,4) - try ctrl+g on timeline. the circle emphasizes the downbeat much better than the sliderend
5. 00:18:580 (6,7) - similar to ^
   //sidenote: there are quite a lot of unstressed downbeat, that could be better emphasized, imo. so I won't list them up, but maybe you should take a look at that?
6. 00:25:336 (4,1) - can you rotate (1) so the sliderend isn't closer to (4) than the head? this might confuse beginner players ✔️
7. 00:34:474 (3,4,5) - the pattern is a little hard for the easiest diff, I prefer if you unstack (3,4)
   also you might want to replace (4,5) with simple 1/1 sliders so the screen won't look so cluttered. but that's just my personal preferance✔️
8. 00:40:832 (3,4) - ctrl+g on timeline? for emphasis, again ✔️

Hard

1. what's with the short break in the beginning? there's not even one in Normal O:
   how about adding circles at 00:03:878 - , 00:04:276 - and 00:04:673 - or a 1/1 reverse-slider? the beats are so well mapable~ nope
2. 00:12:620 (5,6) - sounds weird to skip the beat on the red tick here, consider using this rhythm instead: http://puu.sh/l2qDG.jpg
   same here btw - 01:03:481 (5,6) - ✔️
3. 00:13:216 (7) - 00:13:415 - should be clickable, cause it's a whole different sound, how about removing the reverse and adding a circle there? ✔️
4. 00:16:991 (3,4) - there's nothing on the blue tick so two circles or one single 1/1 slider matches better here ✔️
5. 00:30:501 (5) - again there's nothing on the blue tick, but a beat on the red one, so why does the slider end on the blue tick? should end on the red one, imo ✔️
6. 00:36:064 (1) - same here ✔️
7. 00:42:819 (2) - and here ✔️
8. 00:51:958 (4,5) - stacks below sliderends might be a little confusing, I prefer if you unstack them, but that might just be me xD ✔️
9. 00:59:507 (2) - the red tick here should be clickable, imo. same reasons as for 00:13:415 - ✔️
10. 00:59:805 (1,1) - there's too little recovery time after the spinner, imo. can you shorten it a little so it ends on 01:01:891 - ? ✔️

welp, hope I could help you a little
good luck with this! :3
//squee //squee