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Chitose Sara - Arcadia

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10nya
2,746 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
10nya
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Last edited by 10nya , edited 10 times in total.
Laurier
1,785 posts
Joined February 2011
Laurier
http://puu.sh/j2Hh2/512a9cc400.osu
o/
Shurelia
Global Moderator
2,782 posts
Joined December 2013
Shurelia

Laurier wrote:

http://puu.sh/j2Hh2/512a9cc400.osu
o/
きた！！
10nya
2,746 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
10nya
ok the map is ready for mods now! \w\
- Milhofo -
683 posts
Joined February 2014
- Milhofo -
Hi, from your queue ^^

[Airu]
  1. 00:06:663 (3) - imo would flow better if you stacked it with 00:07:337 (2) - 's slider end
  2. 00:24:360 (1,3) - try to curve 3 more, to improve flow and the blanket with 1
  3. 00:28:236 (1,2) - blanket can be improved
  4. 00:31:944 (4,1) - ^
  5. 00:57:225 (3) - I prefer the flow of this slider with ctrl+h
  6. 01:07:169 (1,2) - no need for NC imo
  7. 01:28:068 (1) - why the NC here?
  8. 01:33:461 (1) - ^
  9. 01:38:180 (1) - no need for NC (ikik too many NC points sorry :c)
  10. My only "problem" with the diff is the flow with some jumps into sliders, like 00:25:371 (4,1) - , 00:59:247 (4,5) - or 01:05:821 (3,4) - because they don't flow perfectly, might be only me though, so don't take it super seriously lol
[Laurier's Insane]
  1. Only problem I found with this diff was the combo size, I found the majority of combos really smal, not exceeding 4 or 5 notes, imo it would be better to remove half the combos, extending each one to the following combo (just my opinion though)
[Fast's Slow Insane]
  1. 00:40:203 (5) - I would avoid leaving the snare / strong beat on a slider end, and replace it by a clickable note / slider start
  2. 00:42:899 (4) - ^
  3. 00:40:203 (5,1) - try to blanket
  4. 00:48:292 (4) - same as above, and the same for the rest of them xd
  5. 01:17:618 (3,1) - maybe you could try to take advantage of 3's shape and use it to blanket 1's slider end
  6. 01:45:174 - it realy feels like a note is missing here
[Hard]
  1. 00:08:012 (3) - would move to x:151 y:280 and 00:08:180 (1) - to x:143 y:200, then rotate 1 to your liking
  2. 00:13:236 (2) - maybe start the NC here?
  3. 00:18:798 (1) - would remove NC from here and add on 00:20:146 (5) - also removing from 00:20:652 (1) -
  4. 00:37:843 (1) - wouldn't ctrl+j improve flow?
  5. 00:55:034 (4,1) - this stack might be confusing for the newer players, as you change the timing between both notes
  6. 00:55:371 (1,2) - I really didn't want to comment on this xD but yeah it can be blanketed >.<
  7. 00:59:247 (4) - moving it below 3 and 1 wouldimprove flow
  8. 01:12:056 (2,3) - improve blanket
  9. 01:26:382 (1) - reversing the slider would improve flow imo (ctrl+g, ctrl+h and ctrl+j)
  10. 01:34:978 (6,7) - blanket can be improved
  11. 01:45:764 (4) - to be consistent with the other diffs this should be a NC
[Shu's Normal]
  1. 00:04:809 (4) - x:204 y:136 so it blankets better
  2. 00:18:629 (5,6) - I think it would be better to replace these notes by a slider
  3. 00:51:158 - the pattern looks confusing if you don't map the beat / snare here
  4. 01:36:495 (2) - ctrl+j flows better imo
  5. 01:38:180 (5,6) - same point about slider
[Shu's Easy]
  1. 00:09:360 (3,4,5) - both sliders can be blanketed
  2. 00:12:899 - is this timing point necessary?
  3. 00:23:684 - maybe add a kick slider or note to map the guitar? by kickslider I mean something like 00:21:158 (4) -
  4. 00:27:056 (1,4) - they look almost straight, is the middle node (box) really necessary?
  5. 00:37:843 (1) - couldn't this be shaped like 00:31:607 (4) -
  6. 01:04:809 (5) - I think you could reverse this slider, would fit the music
  7. 01:13:236 (2,3) - fix blanket
  8. 01:25:708 (2,4) - maybe you could move 4 a bit up so it doesn't "overlap" with 2? it doesn't overlap in game, but I still think it would look nicer
  9. 01:36:495 (2,3) - blanket?
Long time I didn't mod a full set with more than 5 diffs lol I liked it, good luck with the set! :D (also edited my post in your queue)
Shurelia
Global Moderator
2,782 posts
Joined December 2013
Shurelia

- Milhofo - wrote:

Hi, from your queue ^^ ~ Hello
[Shu's Normal]
  1. 00:04:809 (4) - x:204 y:136 so it blankets better done
  2. 00:18:629 (5,6) - I think it would be better to replace these notes by a slider mmm, i'm trying to follow the violin that playing on the background that i preferred to click 3 times instead 2.
  3. 00:51:158 - the pattern looks confusing if you don't map the beat / snare here mm, i don't know what to follow (if i add an object) at here. also the current one is good enoug to play imo
  4. 01:36:495 (2) - ctrl+j flows better imo okay
  5. 01:38:180 (5,6) - same point about slider same then
[Shu's Easy]
  1. 00:09:360 (3,4,5) - both sliders can be blanketed alright, fixed the blankets
  2. 00:12:899 - is this timing point necessary? oops, removed this
  3. 00:23:684 - maybe add a kick slider or note to map the guitar? by kickslider I mean something like 00:21:158 (4) - fine~
  4. 00:27:056 (1,4) - they look almost straight, is the middle node (box) really necessary? if i removed the node one the middle, the slider would look too plain for me. well , i make this one a bit more curvy though
  5. 00:37:843 (1) - couldn't this be shaped like 00:31:607 (4) - didn't looks very same but.. should be fine now
  6. 01:04:809 (5) - I think you could reverse this slider, would fit the music yep, it quite fit
  7. 01:13:236 (2,3) - fix blanket done
  8. 01:25:708 (2,4) - maybe you could move 4 a bit up so it doesn't "overlap" with 2? it doesn't overlap in game, but I still think it would look nicer okay
  9. 01:36:495 (2,3) - blanket? naah, not planning to make blanket at here
Thanks for the mod!

Update : http://puu.sh/j52Lp.rar (Aah, i forgot to change the slider tick into 2 . 10nya would mind to help me to do that? Thank you)

Also 10nya here's a BG Video for you~ :
10nya
2,746 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
10nya

- Milhofo - wrote:

Hi, from your queue ^^ hello there~

[Airu]
  1. 00:06:663 (3) - imo would flow better if you stacked it with 00:07:337 (2) - 's slider end i dont really want big jump here since the part is really calm
  2. 00:24:360 (1,3) - try to curve 3 more, to improve flow and the blanket with 1
  3. 00:28:236 (1,2) - blanket can be improved
  4. 00:31:944 (4,1) - ^ this one is intentional
  5. 00:57:225 (3) - I prefer the flow of this slider with ctrl+h
  6. 01:07:169 (1,2) - no need for NC imo
  7. 01:28:068 (1) - why the NC here? combo 7,8 is a bit big for me + its slider stream im afraid player miss-read this one
  8. 01:33:461 (1) - ^ im afraid player cant read this as 3/4 + the slider is slower here
  9. 01:38:180 (1) - no need for NC (ikik too many NC points sorry :c)
  10. My only "problem" with the diff is the flow with some jumps into sliders, like 00:25:371 (4,1) - , 00:59:247 (4,5) - or 01:05:821 (3,4) - because they don't flow perfectly, might be only me though, so don't take it super seriously lol reduced some tho, well i mostly use star patterns/my own pattern here, let's see other opinions ans thanks for mentioning :D
[Hard]
  1. 00:08:012 (3) - would move to x:151 y:280 and 00:08:180 (1) - to x:143 y:200, then rotate 1 to your liking
  2. 00:13:236 (2) - maybe start the NC here? nah i'll keep current
  3. 00:18:798 (1) - would remove NC from here and add on 00:20:146 (5) - also removing from 00:20:652 (1) - im following the music here, its support nc
  4. 00:37:843 (1) - wouldn't ctrl+j improve flow?
  5. 00:55:034 (4,1) - this stack might be confusing for the newer players, as you change the timing between both notes
  6. 00:55:371 (1,2) - I really didn't want to comment on this xD but yeah it can be blanketed >.< nah i think current flow is good :3
  7. 00:59:247 (4) - moving it below 3 and 1 wouldimprove flow
  8. 01:12:056 (2,3) - improve blanket its intentional~
  9. 01:26:382 (1) - reversing the slider would improve flow imo (ctrl+g, ctrl+h and ctrl+j)
  10. 01:34:978 (6,7) - blanket can be improved
  11. 01:45:764 (4) - to be consistent with the other diffs this should be a NC
Long time I didn't mod a full set with more than 5 diffs lol I liked it, good luck with the set! :D (also edited my post in your queue)
thanks a lot for modding, updated + video please re-download everyone :3
kd for shurelia since he helped me on video
BeatofIke
4,172 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
Timing Check!

10nya
2,746 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
10nya
thanks ike<3
all timing is fixed o/ (hope i didnt ruin anything ;-;)
wcx19911123
3,862 posts
Joined June 2010
wcx19911123
m4m here

[Shu's Easy]
00:12:881 - why not end the slider here? you can fix code to snap
00:35:128 (1,2) - the blanket can be better
00:56:026 - finish here is better imo

[Shu's Normal]
00:18:442 (4,5,6,1) - this is too hard to be a Normal diff imo
01:30:408 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:37:993 (4,5,6,1) - ^

[Hard]
the difficulty setting(HD OD) is too low to be a Hard diff imo
00:56:701 - better to use circle or slider head to follow heavy beat(like 00:59:397 - )
01:02:094 - ^

[Fast's Slow Insane]
01:27:712 - how about add note here and start the spinner later?
01:31:083 (5) - try use straight slider here? using all straight slider before 01:32:094 - , can strengthen the feeling to follow the song's heavy beats

[Airu]
00:58:723 (1,2,3,4) - ctrl+h on them and slightly adjust position, flow better imo(mainly to fix 00:58:386 (7,1) - )
01:10:015 (1) - ctrl+> and move to x:392 y:24? a jump here fit the song better

good luck
10nya
2,746 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
10nya

wcx19911123 wrote:

m4m here hello wcx-san~

[Hard]
the difficulty setting(HD OD) is too low to be a Hard diff imo increased them a bit
00:56:701 - better to use circle or slider head to follow heavy beat(like 00:59:397 - )
01:02:094 - ^ all fixed

[Airu]
00:58:723 (1,2,3,4) - ctrl+h on them and slightly adjust position, flow better imo(mainly to fix 00:58:386 (7,1) - )
01:10:015 (1) - ctrl+> and move to x:392 y:24? a jump here fit the song better fixed in other way~

good luck
thanks a lot wcx-san~
DahplA
1,099 posts
Joined March 2014
DahplA
M4M

Airu
  1. 00:01:944 Personally I feel you could have a lower volume section here where there's only vocals, because the instruments don't kick in until 00:02:787 (applies to only your difficulties)
  2. 00:44:734 (2,3) - I think you should re-arrange the mapping here so that you have circles or sliderstarts on the claps here, for better audio feedback
  3. 01:27:712 I don't feel the slider velocity reduction here is needed. Readability-wise is fine, but the song doesn't slow down here at all, unlike the pre-kiai 01:07:993 where there's mainly only vocals. You should keep the 3/4 and just use 1.0x SV. Either that or you can use SV that's not that low, eg. 0.9x
  4. 01:33:105 ^
  5. 01:43:217 Does the metronome not reset here again? It makes sense so that the downbeats reset on 01:45:576
Laurier's Insane
  1. 00:10:877 (1) - Slightly off-stacked
  2. 00:38:330 (2) - Wouldn't it make sense to stack this again?
  3. 01:12:880 (1) - Slightly off-stacked
  4. 01:38:666 (2) - ^
  5. 01:41:868 (3) - ^
Fast's Slow Insane
  1. Nothing
Hard
  1. 00:06:495 Why skip this beat? I think it's pretty significant and deserves a note.
  2. 00:34:959 (1) - I really think a hittable downbeat works much better here. You've done it in all your other difficulties, so there's no point (or reasoning) in this. It just doesn't give feedback here for a finish, and should be consistent with something like 00:56:701 (1) - (sorry, I'm sure you already know this. I just like to provide lengthy explanations)
Shu's Normal
  1. 00:24:341 (1) - Slightly off-stacked
  2. 01:33:105 (1) - ^
Shu's Easy
  1. Nothing
Len
Beatmap Nominator
2,817 posts
Joined June 2012
Len
@milhofo: i fixed except hitsound mods
@wcx: thx fixed all
lazy to reply sorry ..
here code
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: arcadia.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 67993
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:Arcadia
TitleUnicode:アルカディア
Artist:Chitose Sara
ArtistUnicode:千歳サラ
Creator:10nya
Version:Fast's Slow Insane
Source:11月のアルカディア
Tags:11gatsu no arcadia LevoL eroge opening visual novel Shurelia Fast Laurier -_t_e_n_n_y_a_-
BeatmapID:739266
BeatmapSetID:333610

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6.6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6.9
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

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Lasse
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Lasse
m4m from your queue




Airu
00:01:944 (1) - 40% volume
00:02:787 (1) - put the 50% volume here
00:12:881 (1,2) - move left so 00:13:386 (5) - is in the middle
00:18:948 (1) - this might play better if you move it 1 up a little
00:28:723 (2) - move this down just a little bit
00:41:026 (3) - move the red points up a little bitm looks much betterin my opinion
00:42:880 (5) - move left to fix blanketing
00:45:071 (3,4) - feels a bit weird, the sldier tilts slightly to the right, but the jump goes to the left
00:58:723 (1,2,3,4,5) - this would look better if you moved 5 a bit upwards to make a star
01:07:150 (1) - these could probably use 80% volume
01:37:993 (4,6) - move those down a bit to make nicer triangle

Laurier's Insane
00:34:790 (4,5,6) - could be rotatetd a little to the left

Fast's Slow Insane
00:12:881 (2) - don't really like that placement
00:46:588 (3) - might look better like this
01:08:498 (1) - moving the end of this closer to the start of 01:08:835 (1) - would feel better
01:10:015 (1) - roatate to blanket 4 would look better (and/or move 4)
01:17:599 (3) - add another red point between the two to make it look smoother, somehow like this
01:40:520 (3) - would look better if you moved the end of the slider more left

Hard
00:13:049 (1) - might feel betetr if this note was removed
00:55:352 (1,2,3) - plays kinda weird
01:32:768 (5) - move the sliderend a bit to the right

Shu's Normal
00:27:038 (1) - move sliderend a bit upwards
01:15:577 (3) - ^

Shu's Easy
00:05:483 (1) - i don't like the way this slider looks .-. but seems fine
00:11:551 (1) - looks slightly unsymmetrical
00:26:195 (4) - move the last grey point one boxes on the tiny grid to the right
00:31:588 (4) - ^ 1 or 2 boxes
10nya
2,746 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
10nya
DahplA

DahplA wrote:

M4M

[notice]Airu
  1. 00:01:944 Personally I feel you could have a lower volume section here where there's only vocals, because the instruments don't kick in until 00:02:787 (applies to only your difficulties) ok
  2. 00:44:734 (2,3) - I think you should re-arrange the mapping here so that you have circles or sliderstarts on the claps here, for better audio feedback
  3. 01:27:712 I don't feel the slider velocity reduction here is needed. Readability-wise is fine, but the song doesn't slow down here at all, unlike the pre-kiai 01:07:993 where there's mainly only vocals. You should keep the 3/4 and just use 1.0x SV. Either that or you can use SV that's not that low, eg. 0.9x
  4. 01:33:105 ^ used 0.9x
  5. 01:43:217 Does the metronome not reset here again? It makes sense so that the downbeats reset on 01:45:576 the metronome is 7/4 should be ok
Hard
  1. 00:06:495 Why skip this beat? I think it's pretty significant and deserves a note.
  2. 00:34:959 (1) - I really think a hittable downbeat works much better here. You've done it in all your other difficulties, so there's no point (or reasoning) in this. It just doesn't give feedback here for a finish, and should be consistent with something like 00:56:701 (1) - (sorry, I'm sure you already know this. I just like to provide lengthy explanations) all fixed

Lasse

Lasse wrote:

m4m from your queue

[box=Airu]00:01:944 (1) - 40% volume
00:02:787 (1) - put the 50% volume here all done
00:12:881 (1,2) - move left so 00:13:386 (5) - is in the middle nice catch done
00:18:948 (1) - this might play better if you move it 1 up a little fixed some on the jump too
00:28:723 (2) - move this down just a little bit it's blanket good enough on previous slider ;w;
00:41:026 (3) - move the red points up a little bitm looks much betterin my opinion did something here
00:42:880 (5) - move left to fix blanketing
00:45:071 (3,4) - feels a bit weird, the sldier tilts slightly to the right, but the jump goes to the left did something
00:58:723 (1,2,3,4,5) - this would look better if you moved 5 a bit upwards to make a star it'll make the jump huge though there's no strong reason to make it too far
01:07:150 (1) - these could probably use 80% volume current is ok i guess
01:37:993 (4,6) - move those down a bit to make nicer triangle specific place/ss please?

Hard
00:13:049 (1) - might feel betetr if this note was removed yeah the offset change maybe a bit hard to catch
00:55:352 (1,2,3) - plays kinda weird
01:32:768 (5) - move the sliderend a bit to the right doesnt affect anything tho
[/box]
didnt replied means fixed, thanks a lot for the mod guys!
fast chan's diff updated too
Shurelia
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Shurelia

wcx19911123 wrote:

m4m here

[Shu's Easy]
00:12:881 - why not end the slider here? you can fix code to snap I changed this slider into a spinner because i have no idea how to fix it. orz.
00:35:128 (1,2) - the blanket can be better alright, adjusted a bit. i hope i'm doing it right.
00:56:026 - finish here is better imo Mmh, Fine

[Shu's Normal]
00:18:442 (4,5,6,1) - this is too hard to be a Normal diff imo Mmh, Change into 1 circle 1 slider. Should be okay now.
01:30:408 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ mm, Changed
01:37:993 (4,5,6,1) - ^ ^^^


good luck
Thanks !

DahplA wrote:

M4M

Shu's Normal
  1. 00:24:341 (1) - Slightly off-stacked Mm? I don't see anything wrong with the stack.
  2. 01:33:105 (1) - ^
Thank you

Lasse wrote:

m4m from your queue

Shu's Normal
00:27:038 (1) - move sliderend a bit upwards okay~
01:15:577 (3) - ^ mmh, fine

Shu's Easy
00:05:483 (1) - i don't like the way this slider looks .-. but seems fine ahaha, yeah, well changed the slider
00:11:551 (1) - looks slightly unsymmetrical i changed this in to a spinner
00:26:195 (4) - move the last grey point one boxes on the tiny grid to the right Mmh
00:31:588 (4) - ^ 1 or 2 boxesmmmh
Thank you~

Update~
Shu's Easy
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Last edited by Shurelia , edited 2 times in total.
Lasse
osu! Alumni
3,644 posts
Joined June 2011
Lasse

10nya wrote:

01:37:993 (4,6) - move those down a bit to make nicer triangle specific place/ss please?
Looked at it again, thought five was flipped, forget that one ;) The pattern looks fine like it is right now
10nya
2,746 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
10nya
@Lasse : okay then! thanks for the feedback~ gonna mod yours ><

updated ~
Nickoloui
60 posts
Joined August 2013
Nickoloui
Hello, from your m4m queue~
Thanks for modding my map, my turn :3
Let's go!

[Shu's Easy]
What is there even to mod about this? Bloody perfect -3-

[Shu's Normal]
00:10:877 (5) - NC?
00:39:678 (4) - Try like this?
00:59:734 (4) - NC
01:11:532 (1) - Finish strongly reccomended here
01:16:925 (1) - ^
01:23:498 (3) - ^
01:28:049 (1) - Why finish here and not 01:29:060 (3) - here? o-o

[Hard]
01:14:734 (2,3) - Why so much time without notes between these two? D:
01:33:105 (1) - Really needs finish!

[Fast's Slow Insane]
00:12:056 (5,6,1) - ? Why triplet here? Music doesn't really sound like a triplet fits here imho
00:46:588 (3,5) - Why not overlap this one to the slider's end properly since you did so previously?
01:33:105 (8) - Finish
01:33:189 (1) - A bit too long for an Insane diff spinner.. Maybe you can make it shorter and map the area a bit more? c:
01:40:520 (3) - Try this rough example you can do better
01:42:880 (3) - ^

[Laurier's Insane]
01:08:498 (2,1) - Maybe overlap these to emphasize that the player should be ready to alternate on that part? Just a suggestion
01:10:184 (1,2) - ^
01:11:195 (4,1) - This is what I was talking about for the 2 mods above this one.. You overlapped here so why not overlap to the other two as well? :3
01:45:071 (7,8,9) - I feel like you could make this into 3 notes instead of 3 sliders and adjust them so it's like a pentagon jump or something :D.. just me tho feel free to ignore

[Airu]
01:27:712 (1,1) - idk this doesnt really feel right.. maybe you can make it better D:
01:45:071 (2,3,4,5,6) - Ctrl + J and move to original position.. better flow

Great mapset man, there wasn't really much that I could mod tbh. Good luck with getting it ranked! Hope I've helped even a bit ~
Len
Beatmap Nominator
2,817 posts
Joined June 2012
Len

[ Shark ] wrote:

Hello, from your m4m queue~
Thanks for modding my map, my turn :3
Let's go!

[Fast's Slow Insane]
00:12:056 (5,6,1) - ? Why triplet here? Music doesn't really sound like a triplet fits here imho o
00:46:588 (3,5) - Why not overlap this one to the slider's end properly since you did so previously? i changed
01:33:105 (8) - Finish good point
01:33:189 (1) - A bit too long for an Insane diff spinner.. Maybe you can make it shorter and map the area a bit more? c: let me think about more
01:40:520 (3) - Try this rough example you can do better no since i dont like stream lol
01:42:880 (3) - ^ s ame

Great mapset man, there wasn't really much that I could mod tbh. Good luck with getting it ranked! Hope I've helped even a bit ~
thanks!


　
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10nya
2,746 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
10nya

[ Shark ] wrote:

Hello, from your m4m queue~
Thanks for modding my map, my turn :3
Let's go!

[Hard]
01:14:734 (2,3) - Why so much time without notes between these two? D: its the same as usual tho , 1/2 break :\
01:33:105 (1) - Really needs finish! might consider this one since there's no cymbal ;w;

[Airu]
01:27:712 (1,1) - idk this doesnt really feel right.. maybe you can make it better D: fixed
01:45:071 (2,3,4,5,6) - Ctrl + J and move to original position.. better flow nice catch

Great mapset man, there wasn't really much that I could mod tbh. Good luck with getting it ranked! Hope I've helped even a bit ~
thanks a lot, updated! :3
Shurelia
Global Moderator
2,782 posts
Joined December 2013
Shurelia

[ Shark ] wrote:

Hello, from your m4m queue~
Thanks for modding my map, my turn :3
Let's go!

[Shu's Easy]
What is there even to mod about this? Bloody perfect -3- Wahaha , Thanks!

[Shu's Normal]
00:10:877 (5) - NC? Mmh, fine
00:39:678 (4) - Try like this? Naah, i have to keep it consistent with 00:36:981 (4) - though actually i want it ;w;
00:59:734 (4) - NC Mmm, Yep.
01:11:532 (1) - Finish strongly reccomended here Mmh, Added
01:16:925 (1) - ^ ^
01:23:498 (3) - ^ ^
01:28:049 (1) - Why finish here and not 01:29:060 (3) - here? o-o Mmm, I don't think it would fit at here. .

Great mapset man, there wasn't really much that I could mod tbh. Good luck with getting it ranked! Hope I've helped even a bit ~
Thank you thank you~

10nya please re copy the code below. i feel like i gave you a wrong code...

Update :
Shu's Normal
osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 67993
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:Arcadia
TitleUnicode:アルカディア
Artist:Chitose Sara
ArtistUnicode:千歳サラ
Creator:10nya
Version:Shu's Normal
Source:11月のアルカディア
Tags:11gatsu no arcadia LevoL eroge opening visual novel Shurelia Fast Laurier -_t_e_n_n_y_a_-
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BeatmapSetID:333610

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:2

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Video,0,"Arcadia.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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10nya
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updated. sorry i've been busy with school, might update every weekends.
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Airi!?!??
10nya
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Bearizm wrote:

Airi!?!??
yes!!!1!111
Giralda
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Hey 10nya~
From my queue

[Shu's Easy]
  1. 00:10:203 (4,5) - Hmm the finishes on the heads of these sliders sound excessive to me but I know you're trying to maintain that hitsounding rhythm. Switching them to a soft whistle sounds more appropriate. If anything, I think keeping it on the (5) seems nice as well.
  2. 00:14:229 (2) - Removing the whistle on the slider end matches the music better as it puts more emphasis on the whistle on 00:15:071 (3).
  3. 00:56:026 (4,5,1) - The transition downwards here plays pretty awkward and I think you could polish this up by straightening out the objects. Give this a try: http://puu.sh/jGs7q/6681e7fd0f.jpg
  4. 01:04:790 (5) - Nazi, but you can improve the blanket here. Moving 01:04:453 (4) to x:188 || y:233 should do the trick.
  5. 01:17:599 (2) - The direction of the slider looks really forced and doesn't look too appealing. Maybe try something like this for better flow? http://puu.sh/jGsrj/c5e2439661.jpg
[Shu's Normal]
  1. 01:23:330 (2) - Inconsistent spacing here (1.42x)
  2. 00:10:877 (1) - If you were to have a new combo here, I'd suggest you remove the NC on the spinner since it would cause a double HP regen for completing both objects which isn't ideal. Otherwise, remove NC on the slider.
  3. 00:18:611 (5) - Missed a clap on the slider head
  4. 00:20:802 (4) - Missed clap on the slider end
  5. 00:34:453 (4,5,6) ; 00:56:026 (4,5,6) - and 00:45:240 (4,5,6) - Three consecutive 1/2 circles seem too excessive considering you had no 1/2 patterns in Easy, which causes a bit of a spread problem.
  6. 00:49:959 (3) - Either straighten out the slider so it would fit the straightened out circles at 00:50:802 (4,5) or curve the circle pattern since it looks kinda meh right now.
[Hard]
  1. 00:02:787 (1,2) - How about moving these sliders over so that it reflects the cursor movements better? http://puu.sh/jGtrf/f3abc71ba3.jpg
[Laurier's Insane]
♥♥♥
  1. 00:15:240 (2) - Missed clap on sliderhead.
  2. 00:37:150 (3,2) - Hmm fix stack here o:
Not much to say, great map as always ~
[Airi]
  1. 00:05:989 (2) - This 3/2 slider caught me off guard a few times and I think it would improve readability if you turned it into a unique slider shape to differentiate itself from the 1/1 sliders previously. For example, http://puu.sh/jGpMl/db404f9fe5.jpg
  2. 00:45:577 (6,7,8,9,1) - Instead of the curve you have now, how about pointing downwards before heading back up? IIt would provide a much better emphasis going into the calmer section: http://puu.sh/jGpVR/71d2561cf4.jpg
  3. 00:09:191 (3) - Not a fan of this placement here to be placed lower than the slider and I think it would benefit more if 00:09:191 (3,4) - were stacked on to the head of 00:08:180 (1,2). http://puu.sh/jGqxS/3d04aaad26.jpg
  4. 00:15:408 (3,4) - Try an S:C1 soft whistle for these circles here. They go along with the violin quite nicely. If you decide to do this, you should add it for 00:18:105 (3,4) and 00:18:611 (6,7) as well for consistency.
Cool set, good luck <3
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