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Lia - Bravely You (TV size)

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Kyle Y
1,204 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Kyle Y
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年12月31日 at 11:32:46

Artist: Lia
Title: Bravely You (TV size)
Source: Charlotte
Tags: シャーロット op Del05 HappyRocket88 Avishay Chocox
BPM: 150
Filesize: 17731kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. A's Bravery (4.04 stars, 361 notes)
  2. Chocox's Insane (3.78 stars, 315 notes)
  3. Del's Hard (3 stars, 232 notes)
  4. Easy (1.39 stars, 95 notes)
  5. Rocket's Normal (2.1 stars, 126 notes)
Download: Lia - Bravely You (TV size)
Download: Lia - Bravely You (TV size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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glad to coorperate with different mappers:
Easy by Kyle Y (Remapped: file before remapping)
Normal by HappyRocket88
Hard by Del05
Insane by Chocox
Insane by Avishay

Muzukashii by Raiden (Removed, file: http://puu.sh/lB57R/2b2ac923a0.osu)
Oni by [I]MMoRTal[S] (Removed, file: http://puu.sh/lB59N/b83ce9888b.osu)
Inner OniPpuskalin (Removed, file: http://puu.sh/jIjUm/cc6cdbaa98.osu)
Last edited by Kyle Y , edited 31 times in total.
HappyRocket88
4,321 posts
Joined May 2014
HappyRocket88
First. ºuº)/
OrangeYouGlad
123 posts
Joined December 2012
OrangeYouGlad
General Comments
To be honest, these difficulties both feel very well put together, so great job to both of the beat mappers!
I don’t know if these difficulties are meant to be stand alone or complement each other, but I looked at them assuming the latter.

Kyle Y’s Easy
I suggest moving the AR from 2 to 3, it makes the map play more intuitively; before it felt a bit sluggish compared to the tempo.

00:03:842 (1) - – This finish feels extremely out of place, try putting it here 00:07:242 (1) -

00:48:842 (1) – to 01:01:442 - Volume set currently is good for this section. Other than that consider playing around with the volume settings and sample sets so that when you do implement hit sounds it complements the dynamics of the song. (ex. I suggest maybe using a different sample set during kiai time to add more emphasis to the chorus.)
01:28:842 - The ending of the spinner is a little late, try moving it here. 01:28:642 –

This generally feels really well put together, I can’t tell if this difficulty is completed or not, but the only next step I can think of is adding in hit sounds ( This will help newer players keep track of circles and sliders occurring on and off the beats and create something interesting for the player to follow along with.) Other than that great job!

HappyRocket88’s Normal
The change in circle size between the easy and normal feels quite large. I suggest using circle size 3 instead?

00:29:442 (3) – By extending the end of the slider to here you destroy the symmetry, I suggest placing a hit circle here (ex. X: 200 Y: 112) and bumping the end of the slider back to here: 00:29:242 -
Reference: http://puu.sh/j7Bm4/abbfd088e4.jpg

00:32:442 (4) – Remove this slider and extend 00:32:042 (3) – to where number 4 starts (00:32:442)
Reference: http://puu.sh/j7Br9/99eabbdc1d.jpg

00:51:842 – ( X: 104 Y: 176)I suggest adding a hit circle here and 00:52:642 – (X: 176 Y: 324)
Reference: http://puu.sh/j7BuX/5c59ec5d59.jpg

01:01:442 – Your hit circle placed at the chorus are all 1/ 2 ( 1 red tick off) I suggest remapping this area with this in mind. Not all of it is off. But you can definitely hear it is a little off from the melody at times. Here are my suggested changes; all of these were made so that the beat map more closely follows the melody.

01:01:642 (1) – moved to 01:01:442. New note added: 01:02:042 (2) – use this as a reference if needed: http://puu.sh/j7zud/5c08f6d243.jpg

01:03:242 (1) – Removed. 01:03:042 (5) – turned into a repeating slider. Reference: http://puu.sh/j7zIa/0720ef8f7c.jpg
01:04:842 (1) – Pushed back 1/ 2 tick and extended to 01:05:042-.
01:06:042 (4) – Removed. End of 01:05:642 (3) – extended to 01:06:042
Reference: http://puu.sh/j7zYy/245aa4023f.jpg

01:14:442 (1) – pushed back 1/ 2 tick and extended to 01:14:642 -
01:15:042 (3) – repeated and rotated 180 degrees.
Reference: http://puu.sh/j7AiE/0e71be47d4.jpg

01:16:042 (1) – and 01:16:442 (2) – moved forward 1 / 2
01:15:642 (4) –repeated to 01:16:042 -
Reference: http://puu.sh/j7AEe/3a41269f8c.jpg

01:16:642 (2) – removed. 01:16:842 (3) - – moved back 1/2 tick and reflected across the horizontal axis. (ctrl + j)
Reference: http://puu.sh/j7AHN/dba9553674.jpg

01:17:642 (1) – pushed back 1/ 2 tick and extended to 01:17:842 -
Reference: http://puu.sh/j7AQc/dd648752f7.jpg

After these changes some of the sliders need to be moved around but the map itself plays a lot better because of the changes. Great job overall. Some next steps would be to implement hit sounds to complement the map and the melody.

Feel free to PM with any questions. I look forward to seeing the finished product :D
Please reply to my mod letting me know what you think of my suggested changes. This will help me become a better mod in the future :) If I'm online in game feel free to pm as well.
HappyRocket88
4,321 posts
Joined May 2014
HappyRocket88

Fixed almost everything of your mod! Thanks a bunch for it! ♥


I am a tree
osu file format v14

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Countdown: 0
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WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
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TitleUnicode:Bravely You (TV size)
Artist:Lia
ArtistUnicode:Lia
Creator:Kyle Y
Version:Rocket's Normal
Source:シャーロット
Tags:Charlotte op Del05 HappyRocket88 Avishay
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BeatmapSetID:336036

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Kyle Y
1,204 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Kyle Y

OrangeYouGlad wrote:

General Comments
To be honest, these difficulties both feel very well put together, so great job to both of the beat mappers!
I don’t know if these difficulties are meant to be stand alone or complement each other, but I looked at them assuming the latter.

[Kyle Y’s Easy]
I suggest moving the AR from 2 to 3, it makes the map play more intuitively; before it felt a bit sluggish compared to the tempo.

00:03:842 (1) - – This finish feels extremely out of place, try putting it here 00:07:242 (1) -

00:48:842 (1) – to 01:01:442 - Volume set currently is good for this section. Other than that consider playing around with the volume settings and sample sets so that when you do implement hit sounds it complements the dynamics of the song. (ex. I suggest maybe using a different sample set during kiai time to add more emphasis to the chorus.)

for the above hitting sound modding, as I haven't done anything on hitting sound, will check it when I finished it
01:28:842 - The ending of the spinner is a little late, try moving it here. 01:28:642 – fixed
This generally feels really well put together, I can’t tell if this difficulty is completed or not, but the only next step I can think of is adding in hit sounds ( This will help newer players keep track of circles and sliders occurring on and off the beats and create something interesting for the player to follow along with.) Other than that great job!


Feel free to PM with any questions. I look forward to seeing the finished product :D
Please reply to my mod letting me know what you think of my suggested changes. This will help me become a better mod in the future :) If I'm online in game feel free to pm as well.
Prophecy
1,794 posts
Joined December 2013
Prophecy
[Muzukashii]
ok. Your style is not mapping at vocal. I cannot help you too much.
  1. SV should be 1.4 or 1.6
  2. OD 5 , HP 5 or OD 4 HP 5
  3. 00:02:642 - add k
  4. 00:13:342 - not match to the song.
[IMT's Oni]

Since your map is quite good. Here cannot point out any error.
Please slap me ;w;
Raiden
osu! Alumni
2,419 posts
Joined January 2013
Raiden

Prophecy wrote:

[Muzukashii]
ok. Your style is not mapping at vocal. I cannot help you too much. rip
  1. SV should be 1.4 or 1.6 bro it is 1.4 already t_t
  2. OD 5 , HP 5 or OD 4 HP 5 hp and od are fine as they are
  3. 00:02:642 - add k added+d
  4. 00:13:342 - not match to the song. it does lol
Thanks for the mod c:

Raiden's Muzukashii
osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:Bravely You (TV size)
Artist:Lia
ArtistUnicode:Lia
Creator:Kyle Y
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Source:シャーロット
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Nyan
1,455 posts
Joined September 2008
Nyan
[General]

-8 ~ -16 to all offsets.

[Muzukashii]

01:10:426 (242,243,244,245) - ddd k instead of dd dk(other dd dk patterns are fine, but usually not used in Muzukashii)

01:13:626 (260,261,262,263) - k d kkk instead of kd dk. Because the song has drum sound starts at 01:14:026 -

[Oni]

is fine.

GOOD MAP
Raiden
osu! Alumni
2,419 posts
Joined January 2013
Raiden

Nyan wrote:

[General]

-8 ~ -16 to all offsets.

[Muzukashii]

01:10:426 (242,243,244,245) - ddd k instead of dd dk(other dd dk patterns are fine, but usually not used in Muzukashii) BPM is low and we are in a kiai. I also doubted about using doublets but I was told by a QAT that they are fine., however would cause inconsistency with the rhythm I'm using. Besides, it keeps the flow going.

01:13:626 (260,261,262,263) - k d kkk instead of kd dk. Because the song has drum sound starts at 01:14:026 - I am clearly not following the drums here, so it might be a bit pointless.
Thanks for the mod :D
Avishay
1,250 posts
Joined April 2013
Avishay
My diff: http://puu.sh/jlpZ0/50c19ceb5c.osu

As for the moment I didn't hitsound it, and I might polish some stuff by myself, but I wanted to finish it so you can upload the set fully and get mods, and meanwhile I will hitsound and etc.

Don't forget to change necessary tags and fix background or whatever.
Avishay
1,250 posts
Joined April 2013
Avishay
Hitsounds done, here's the diff file with a custom hitsound I've added:
http://puu.sh/jmIhj/88d9a22ddd.rar

It should feel much better to play with the correct hitsounds.
KamizonoShinobu
722 posts
Joined October 2011
KamizonoShinobu
Overall:
Offset +10 (Is neccessery cuz the current timing is not focus well)
Muzu HP drain > Oni HP drain (Weird)

Muzukashii:
00:03:228-00:04:028 X d X k d (1/2 interval) (X = no note)
00:25:828 move to 00:25:628
00:40:228 (139-145) sounds weird, try changing some notes?
01:08:228-01:10:828 Avoid these pattern, dd dk will sound better if changed to d ddk(01:20:828-01:27:228 is better)

Oni:
00:06:428 k
00:16:728 add a note here?
00:43:828-00:44:828 not match to music, I suggest d ddkdk kdd d k d d
00:58:028 d to match the 1/4 drum hit in the music
00:51:628 ^
01:05:628 d
Raiden
osu! Alumni
2,419 posts
Joined January 2013
Raiden

LCM01 wrote:

Overall:
Offset +10 (Is neccessery cuz the current timing is not focus well)
Muzu HP drain > Oni HP drain (Weird) This is not weird. 1st of all we're 2 different mappers. And 2nd I put HP higher on lower difficulties always

Muzukashii:
00:03:228-00:04:028 X d X k d (1/2 interval) (X = no note) fixed
00:25:828 move to 00:25:628 00:25:428 - added a note here instead, to maintain consistency
00:40:228 (139-145) sounds weird, try changing some notes? does not sound weird at all. I'm keeping the rhythm consistent and swapping some colours to fit a bit the pitch
01:08:228-01:10:828 Avoid these pattern, dd dk will sound better if changed to d ddk(01:20:828-01:27:228 is better) breaks consistency, and I don't see why I should avoid them, as monocolours would sound terrible
Thanks for the mod :333

Here's the updated diff

gud stuff
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Charlotte Op - Bravely You.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 61428
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 1
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.7

[Metadata]
Title:Bravely You (TV size)
TitleUnicode:Bravely You (TV size)
Artist:Lia
ArtistUnicode:Lia
Creator:Kyle Y
Version:Raiden's Muzukashii
Source:シャーロット
Tags:Charlotte op Del05 HappyRocket88 Avishay Raiden [I]MMoRTal[S]
BeatmapID:747455
BeatmapSetID:336036

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6.5
CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:0
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"charlotte.png",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
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61628,-100,4,1,0,100,0,1
80828,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0


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snz
877 posts
Joined February 2015
snz
I Can Do A Inner Oni GD?
Yamicchi
1,175 posts
Joined May 2015
Yamicchi
Hi, late M4M ><
[Easy]
00:14:828 (2) - if you follow the vocal, then the slider should start from the next red tick
00:28:028 (2) - this sound is like echo, so can you make the slider look the same as 1?
00:37:628 (3) - this should make the new-players click in the slider tail.
01:01:428 (2) - make it clickable here
01:03:428 (2) - slider end at the previous red tick, the 3 should be a circle
01:05:028 (1) - slider start at the previous white tick
[Normal]
00:09:828 (2) - remove
00:16:828 (1) - change this to 1 or 2 sliders pls.
00:32:828 (1) - the spinner here is not very suitable. Just follow the vocal and add some sliders and circles instead.
00:23:628 (1) - no NC
00:40:828 (1) - no NC
00:44:028 (1) - no NC
00:48:828 to 00:54:828 - remove all circles, except for the 00:54:228 (2)
01:09:628 (1) - no NC
01:12:828 (1) - ^
01:20:828 (1) - these 2 spinners, change them to a slider
Good luck on your map :3
Kyle Y
1,204 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Kyle Y
Will check later

LCM01 wrote:

Overall:
Offset +10 (Is neccessery cuz the current timing is not focus well) Fixed
Muzu HP drain > Oni HP drain (Weird)

[ Shana Yami ] wrote:

Hi, late M4M ><
[Easy]
00:14:828 (2) - if you follow the vocal, then the slider should start from the next red tick remain
00:28:028 (2) - this sound is like echo, so can you make the slider look the same as 1? fixed
00:37:628 (3) - this should make the new-players click in the slider tail. fixed
01:01:428 (2) - make it clickable herewhere?
01:03:428 (2) - slider end at the previous red tick, the 3 should be a circlefixed
01:05:028 (1) - slider start at the previous white tickfixed
Good luck on your map :3
wasonz
714 posts
Joined July 2013
wasonz

LCM01 wrote:

Oni:
00:06:428 k why ?
00:16:728 add a note here? that's a little break
00:43:828-00:44:828 not match to music, I suggest d ddkdk kdd d k d d o.o ! whoops
00:58:028 d to match the 1/4 drum hit in the music k
00:51:628 ^ k#2
01:05:628 d ok
update : http://puu.sh/jyYbl/240dbe4e9e.rar
HappyRocket88
4,321 posts
Joined May 2014
HappyRocket88
Applied everything except from the NCs.

I am brave
osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 61428
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Bravely You (TV size)
TitleUnicode:Bravely You (TV size)
Artist:Lia
ArtistUnicode:Lia
Creator:Kyle Y
Version:Rocket's Normal
Source:シャーロット
Tags:Charlotte op Del05 HappyRocket88 Avishay Raiden [I]MMoRTal[S]
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[Difficulty]
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Inner Oni Edited Again

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ManP
221 posts
Joined October 2014
ManP
From mod queue :3
Muzukashii
  1. 00:40:438 cahnge to d? I heard low pitch sound
  2. 00:40:638 delete? I think thiss is unsnap
  3. 01:08:038(238,239,240,241,242,243,244,245,246) change to ? I think dd dk is not suitable Muzukashii
  4. 01:09:638 ~ 01:10:838 too
  5. 01:12:038(253,254,255,256) change to ddk(1/2)?
  6. 01:13:638(262,263,264,265) too
Almost pattern is nice :3

Oni
  1. 00:02:638 00:02:838 change to k? They are high pitch
  2. 00:02:938 delete? I think unsnap
  3. 00:49:838 00:50:038 00:53:238 00:56:238 00:59:638 too

    And scroll speed is 0.75x from 00:48:838 to 01:01:638 better

Inner Oni
  1. 00:02:438(12,13.,14,15,16) kd d kd change to kddkkdk(1/4)?
  2. 00:48:538 delete? I think this is unsnap
  3. 01:07:738 delete? Stream can be fun :3
  4. 01:28:438 add D?
0.8x timing point should start 48538 offset :3

That's all! Sorry for lame mod :3
I hope it is gonna be ranked 8-)
Last edited by ManP , edited 1 time in total.
snz
877 posts
Joined February 2015
snz

ManP wrote:

From mod queue :3
Inner Oni
  1. 00:02:438(12,13.,14,15,16) kd d kd change to kddkkdk(1/4)? Charged
  2. 00:48:538 delete? I think this is unsnap Deleted
  3. 01:07:738 delete? Stream can be fun :3 :3
  4. 01:28:438 add D?
Added And Liked :!:
0/8x timing point should start 48538 offset :3 :roll:

That's all! Sorry for lame mod :3
I hope it is gonna be ranked 8-)


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osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Charlotte Op - Bravely You.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 61438
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 1
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 48838,68038
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 2.7

[Metadata]
Title:Bravely You (TV size)
TitleUnicode:Bravely You (TV size)
Artist:Lia
ArtistUnicode:Lia
Creator:Kyle Y
Version:Ppu's Inner Oni
Source:シャーロット
Tags:Charlotte op Del05 HappyRocket88 Avishay Raiden [I]MMoRTal[S] Ppuskalin
BeatmapID:760808
BeatmapSetID:336036

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.39999990463257
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"charlotte.png",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Raiden
osu! Alumni
2,419 posts
Joined January 2013
Raiden

ManP wrote:

From mod queue :3
Muzukashii
  1. 00:40:438 cahnge to d? I heard low pitch sound it's a k to contrast from last 00:37:438 (129) -
  2. 00:40:638 delete? I think thiss is unsnap no, it is fine
  3. 01:08:038(238,239,240,241,242,243,244,245,246) change to ? I think dd dk is not suitable Muzukashii
  4. 01:09:638 ~ 01:10:838 too
  5. 01:12:038(253,254,255,256) change to ddk(1/2)?
  6. 01:13:638(262,263,264,265) too same answers to all regarding dd dk ^. It is suitable, personally asked a QAT about this :3
Almost pattern is nice :3 thanks!


That's all! Sorry for lame mod :3
I hope it is gonna be ranked 8-)
Thanks for the mod!!
Padge14
111 posts
Joined October 2013
Padge14
M4M
Easy
  1. 00:57:638 (2,3) - Blanketu~
  2. 01:04:838 (1,2) - Mayve some minor improvement for the blanketu ~


Normal

  • General : Your map in general is going for the vocal/ in general, but sometime you switch for the drum. I assumed you were going for vocal/
  1. 00:04:638 (1) - I would change this 1/2 repeat slider by a 1/1. Better focus at the instrumental, that you were actualy mapping
  2. 00:05:638 (1) - Normaly in normals you need to let a 2/1 recover after a spinner. IMO your should removed the spinner and just put a note on the end your current slider
  3. To continue, IMO this part look better like this ( 1 is at 00:07:238 - )
  4. 00:10:438 - Same kind, Would change for this.
  5. 00:28:638 (2,3) - Blanket can be improved. Ex: Shoud look like this one 00:30:238 (2,3) -
  6. 00:36:038 - to 00:45:238 - Realy suggest you to change this part for something like the easy
  7. 00:45:638 (1) - Recover, just end the slider at 00:48:038 -
  8. 00:53:438 (3,1) - Blanket can be improved a little bit
  9. 00:54:438 (3,4) - Fix Blanket
  10. 00:56:438 (3,1) - Blanket can be improved a little bit
  11. 00:59:038 - & 00:59:038 - Must have a note or something, since you did it just b4 in the precedent combo
  12. 01:00:038 (1) - IMO I would split the slider into 2 sliders
  13. 01:01:438 - Add a note. Doing this ^ will make the note add easier
  14. 01:04:638 - Add note
  15. 01:06:238 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved by moving to the right the end of 2
  16. 01:14:238 - Add note
  17. 01:17:438 - Add note

Bravery
#overmapped, even more in the kyai time
HappyRocket88
4,321 posts
Joined May 2014
HappyRocket88

Padge14 wrote:

[Normal]

  • General : Your map in general is going for the vocal/ in general, but sometime you switch for the drum. I assumed you were going for vocal/
  1. 00:05:638 (1) Normaly in normals you need to let a 2/1 recover after a spinner. IMO your should removed the spinner and just put a note on the end your current slider if I just put a note there that wouldn't fit because it might end with empty spaces.
  2. 00:36:038 - to 00:45:238 - Realy suggest you to change this part for something like the easy. For now, I'll keep it as it is. That would be so easy and take into a count this is a normal diff.
  3. 00:56:438 (3,1) - Blanket can be improved a little bit I like it as it is. If someone else complai about it, I'll see what to do.
  4. 01:00:038 (1) - IMO I would split the slider into 2 sliders. why? The song advertise players that it will be a same whish has been repeated once b4.
  5. 01:01:438 - Add a note. Doing this ^ will make the note add easier. Yeah but I wanted to emphasize the instrumental part here 01:01:638 (1)
  6. 01:06:238 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved by moving to the right the end of 2. What a nazi suggestion. lol I don't see too much problem with it.
  7. 01:14:238 - Add note I didn't want to emphasize vocals here.
  8. 01:17:438 - Add note ^
Thanks you very much for modding. Everything else was applied.

I am a you
osu file format v14

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PreviewTime: 61438
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
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Version:Rocket's Normal
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Tags:Charlotte op Del05 HappyRocket88 Avishay Raiden [I]MMoRTal[S] Ppuskalin
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- Suwako -
33 posts
Joined March 2014
- Suwako -
From my queue :)

Easy
00:22:038 (3) - why not http://puu.sh/jLfp0/011e19ea46.png ?
00:57:638 (2,3) - fix this blanket
01:14:038 (1) - follow the rhythm http://puu.sh/jLfwH/018091e84e.png
01:16:038 (3) - separate it like this http://puu.sh/jLfAh/f08e579145.png

A's Bravery : don't try to make your map like skystar's ... this just a slow anime ost song...
00:19:038 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - you should fix this stream like this http://puu.sh/jLg55/087d3a5e37.png
00:20:838 - add a note here
00:55:438 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - shouldn't overmap this, recommend to put a jump here
00:56:438 (9,10) - don't try to make your map look stranger... it hard to ranked
01:03:138 (2,3,4) - rhythm suggestion http://puu.sh/jLgrX/4ff3decb33.png
01:06:338 (2,3,4) - ^
01:15:938 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - rhythm suggestion http://puu.sh/jLgEK/1d9d07750d.png
01:22:538 (1) - don't put a spinner here @@, it looks strange
01:25:738 (1) - ^

something i have to say
fix this http://puu.sh/jLf4S/9c2aa2c4c4.png in your diff in starmine :P

Others look fine to me :)
Good luck :)
JJburstOwO
183 posts
Joined July 2012
JJburstOwO
M4M~

[A's Bravery]
00:09:238 (1) - cancel NC
00:10:438 (1) - ^
00:09:538 (2,3) - ↓
00:14:638 (4,5,6) - ↓
00:20:838 - maybe add note(x108,y256) here?
00:28:638 (3) - why miss the drum 00:28:838 - here?
00:41:438 (3) - ^
01:14:738 (2) - I prefer 2 notes here since it looks like↓
01:17:938 (2) - ^
01:26:738 (1) - remove
01:28:438 (1,2) - switch NC

[Chocox's Insane]
00:44:838 (3) - Ctrl+G
00:54:438 (3,4,5,6) - Ctrl+G
00:56:638 (6) - stack 4

[Del's Hard]
00:04:038 (1,2) - I prefer no slight overlap.. make 2 a little bend
00:20:638 (2) - ^
01:19:038 (1) - ^

[Rocket's Normal]
00:19:638 (3,1) - blanket
00:53:438 (3,1) - ^
00:54:438 (3,4) - ^
Because of the cs and distance you chose, lots of objects are slightly overlap. CS3.2 makes it much more tidy imo.

[Easy]
Nice~

Tomori kawaii >-<
Avishay
1,250 posts
Joined April 2013
Avishay

- Suwako - wrote:

From my queue :)

A's Bravery : don't try to make your map like skystar's ... this just a slow anime ost song...
00:19:038 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - you should fix this stream like this http://puu.sh/jLg55/087d3a5e37.png Chnaged.
00:20:838 - add a note hereAdded, might remove it in the future.
00:55:438 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - shouldn't overmap this, recommend to put a jump here It is not overmapped, the triplets exist in the music.
00:56:438 (9,10) - don't try to make your map look stranger... it hard to ranked It is fine?
01:03:138 (2,3,4) - rhythm suggestion http://puu.sh/jLgrX/4ff3decb33.png I prefer to use my rhythm.
01:06:338 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
01:15:938 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - rhythm suggestion http://puu.sh/jLgEK/1d9d07750d.png I like it.
01:22:538 (1) - don't put a spinner here @@, it looks strange Remapped.
01:25:738 (1) - ^ ^

something i have to say
fix this http://puu.sh/jLf4S/9c2aa2c4c4.png in your diff in starmine :P

Others look fine to me :)
Good luck :)
Avishay
1,250 posts
Joined April 2013
Avishay

JJburstOwO wrote:

M4M~

[A's Bravery]
00:09:238 (1) - cancel NC SV change indictaor
00:10:438 (1) - ^ New stanza with new vocals
00:09:538 (2,3) - ↓ Nice.
00:14:638 (4,5,6) - ↓ But what's tbe problem with the current pattern?
00:20:838 - maybe add note(x108,y256) here? V
00:28:638 (3) - why miss the drum 00:28:838 - here? Following the ringing sounds
00:41:438 (3) - ^ ^
01:14:738 (2) - I prefer 2 notes here since it looks like↓ V
01:17:938 (2) - ^ Changed pattern.
01:26:738 (1) - remove Nah, the note clearly exists.
01:28:438 (1,2) - switch NC V

Tomori kawaii >-<
Thank you both,

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HappyRocket88
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HappyRocket88
Suwako

- Suwako - wrote:

Easy
00:22:038 (3) - why not http://puu.sh/jLfp0/011e19ea46.png ? If you listen carefully, there's a beat at 1/2 that can be missed by putting a 1/1 slider.
00:57:638 (2,3) - fix this blanket. It's not very notiaceable though. I'll fix it if someone else point it out.
01:14:038 (1) - follow the rhythm http://puu.sh/jLfwH/018091e84e.png Sure! Nice suggestion <3
01:16:038 (3) - separate it like this http://puu.sh/jLfAh/f08e579145.png Well, I was trying to enphasize the beats so I don't think that would fit there.
JJburstOwO

JJburstOwO wrote:

[Rocket's Normal]
00:19:638 (3,1) - blanket ✔
00:53:438 (3,1) - ^ ✔
00:54:438 (3,4) - ^ ✔
Because of the cs and distance you chose, lots of objects are slightly overlap. CS3.2 makes it much more tidy imo. Woah! *-*/
Thanks you both for modding it! <3
I am fancy
osu file format v14

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Xinying
559 posts
Joined July 2013
Xinying
JJburstOwO

JJburstOwO wrote:

[Chocox's Insane]
00:44:838 (3) - Ctrl+G Fixed
00:54:438 (3,4,5,6) - Ctrl+G Fixed
00:56:638 (6) - stack 4 Fixed

Tomori kawaii >-< yeah >_<

All fixed , I like your suggestions :3. Update
wasonz
714 posts
Joined July 2013
wasonz

ManP wrote:

From mod queue :3

Oni
  1. 00:02:638 00:02:838 change to k? They are high pitch kkd not familiar with other pattern in this part
  2. 00:02:938 delete? I think unsnap wot ?
  3. 00:49:838 00:50:038 00:53:238 00:56:238 00:59:638 too huh ? lol

    And scroll speed is 0.75x from 00:48:838 to 01:01:638 better i think change scroll speed is not my style so keep

That's all! Sorry for lame mod :3
I hope it is gonna be ranked 8-)
update : http://puu.sh/jNFVU/c2403ab93c.rar
- change vol. on last inherited point from 100 -> 80
Del05
482 posts
Joined May 2014
Del05
Hi
Thanks for the mod
So no change for now :D but i will think again about your mod :D

JJburstOwO wrote:

[Del's Hard]
00:04:038 (1,2) - I prefer no slight overlap.. make 2 a little bend Will consider it, cause i think it is good now :D
00:20:638 (2) - ^ Will consider it, cause i think it is good now :D
01:19:038 (1) - ^ Will consider it, cause i think it is good now :D
Kyle Y
1,204 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Kyle Y

Padge14 wrote:

M4M
[Easy]
  1. 00:57:638 (2,3) - Blanketu~ fixed
  2. 01:04:838 (1,2) - Mayve some minor improvement for the blanketu ~fixed

JJburstOwO wrote:

M4M~
[Easy]
Nice~ thanks

Tomori kawaii >-<

- Suwako - wrote:

From my queue :)
Easy
00:22:038 (3) - why not http://puu.sh/jLfp0/011e19ea46.png ?
00:57:638 (2,3) - fix this blanket
01:14:038 (1) - follow the rhythm http://puu.sh/jLfwH/018091e84e.png
01:16:038 (3) - separate it like this http://puu.sh/jLfAh/f08e579145.png
fixed all
Others look fine to me :)
Good luck :)
-Mo-
Nomination Assessment Team
953 posts
Joined December 2012
-Mo-
Hello, M4M from my queue.

Easy
- 00:00:838 (1) - Remove one of the latter slider points; you don't need two.
Example
- 00:03:838 (1,2) - This rhythm seems kind of weird to play in Easy, since you miss the downbeat (large white tick) entirely, and then you use a red to white tick polarity, which seems kind of confusing to read in my opinion.
- 00:07:238 (1) - This slightly touches the health bar on my screen. I'd try to lower it.
- 00:20:838 (2,3) - Similar kind of thing with the polarity and missing the downbeat. It fits the music, but it's kind of confusing to read.
- 01:00:838 (2) - Seems kind of weird starting the kiai time with a slider like this in my opinion. You have the kiai start at 01:01:638 but there's no emphasis at all in terms of the mapping since this part is filled with the slider. It might be a bit tricky with this music, but I would aim to have some sort of hard note at this point for emphasis.
- 01:02:438 (1,2) - This is probably mapped this way because of the previous slider I mentioned. I think that you can find a better rhythm for this section. The vocal note on 01:03:038 has the same if not more emphasis in the music compared to 01:03:438 but the latter is mapped with a new slider and the former with a slider tail, which gives this section some unusual and unfitting emphasis. Also with slider 01:03:438 (2) there is a vocal note on 01:03:838 whereas there is not on 01:04:038 which is mapped.

Rocket's Normal
- 00:05:638 (1,1) - I feel there isn't enough recovery time after the spinner for beginner players to handle. The general rule of thumb for Normal is half a measure.
- 00:08:038 (2) - Minor: This blanket can be slightly improved.
- 00:23:838 (2) - Personally, I find this flows better when placed below the combo as opposed to above. This also avoid the overlap you have going on here which in my opinion doesn't look too good.
- 00:45:638 (1,1) - Same thing about the spinner.
- 01:11:238 (1,2) - These aren't perfectly the same shape (the way the slider reverse arrows point in different directions is barely noticable). Also, try using some more red ticks to make a smoother looking elbow.
Example
- 01:15:238 (4) - Minor: Blanket issue.
- 01:22:438 (2) - Are so many slider points necessary? You'll get a much smoother result by using just one slider point (not including head and tail).
Example

Del's Hard
- 00:04:038 (1,2) - Move 2 further away so they aren't barely touching. Overlapping slightly for this kind of flow like you did at 00:16:838 (1,2) is fine, but if they're barely touching (touching only the border of the slider), I don't think it looks good.
- 01:00:838 (3,4,5) - I'd keep the spacing between these consistent.
- 01:16:838 (3) - I don't like how this is almost completley obstructed by slider 01:15:838 (1) but I guess there's not much you can do if you want to keep the flow unless you want to move 01:16:438 (2) too.

General thing for the previous 3 difficulties:
- 00:48:838 (1) to 01:01:238 (4) - Consider placing some hitsounds (clap or whistle) on each and every white tick note, since there is a very distinct drum sound on each of these. This seems to have already been done in the Insane difficulties.

Chocox's Insane
- 00:02:438 - I'd aim to have a hard note (new slider or circle) on this beat as opposed to a slider end since this is a downbeat and there is a significant beat in the music here.
- 00:16:838 - Similar kind of thing here.
- 00:26:238 (5,1) - I'd move these further out to create atleast some sort of a jump, since 00:26:438 (1) is the start of a new line in the vocals. You've already done a similar sort of thing in this section already.
- 01:22:438 - As before with the downbeat.
- 01:24:038 - And here.

A's Bravery
- 00:01:904 (5) - I definitely do not hear any 1/6 notes on this section of the music. Why not just use the blue tick?
Example
- 00:10:238 (1) - This new combo doesn't feel necessary.
- 00:11:838 (7,8,1) - Consider a Ctrl+G for a better flow?
- 00:29:638 (1,2) - I'd say there's too much spacing between these for the blue-tick rhythm to be read properly.
- 00:31:438 (2) - Again, definitely no 1/6 here.
- 00:57:238 (4,5) - Reduce the spacing of these so the blue-tick can be read a bit easier.
- 01:03:138 (2,3) - This seems like blatant overmapping. This rhythm persists so I'll only mention it once. I wouldn't say there is anything significant on the blue ticks that you mapped these two since the vocal note is on 01:03:038 and 01:03:438 respectively. I wouldn't say these notes should need to be here at all. At the very least 01:03:138 (2) does not deserve a clap hitsound, and overall using blue tick polarity over a downbeat is just confusing to play. You should avoid adding beats to the map where there isn't any in the music, which is the general definition of overmapping.
- 01:26:438 (3,1) - Poor polarity, since this is difficult to read. I don't believe the blue tick should be there anyway, as mentioned before.

Good luck. :)
Avishay
1,250 posts
Joined April 2013
Avishay

-Mo- wrote:

Hello, M4M from my queue.

A's Bravery
- 00:01:904 (5) - I definitely do not hear any 1/6 notes on this section of the music. Why not just use the blue tick? I probably was drunk or something, removed.
Example
- 00:10:238 (1) - This new combo doesn't feel necessary. V
- 00:11:838 (7,8,1) - Consider a Ctrl+G for a better flow? V
- 00:29:638 (1,2) - I'd say there's too much spacing between these for the blue-tick rhythm to be read properly. V
- 00:31:438 (2) - Again, definitely no 1/6 here. Actually, I do hear 1/6 here, but I removed it anyway becaues the pattern is not going nicely with the 1/6.
- 00:57:238 (4,5) - Reduce the spacing of these so the blue-tick can be read a bit easier. Ehm.. okay.
- 01:03:138 (2,3) - This seems like blatant overmapping. This rhythm persists so I'll only mention it once. I wouldn't say there is anything significant on the blue ticks that you mapped these two since the vocal note is on 01:03:038 and 01:03:438 respectively. I wouldn't say these notes should need to be here at all. At the very least 01:03:138 (2) does not deserve a clap hitsound, and overall using blue tick polarity over a downbeat is just confusing to play. You should avoid adding beats to the map where there isn't any in the music, which is the general definition of overmapping. I do realise this is unorthodox and may seem a bit weird, but this it not an original idea of mine. The thing is that the 1/4 notes do exist there but I didn't want to just regulary follow them like almost everyone would do. So I added some artificial rhythm which compliments the song nicely, I tried playing it by myself, it goes really nicely with the hitsounds that create the rhythm and overall it goes nicely with the held strong vocals.
- 01:26:438 (3,1) - Poor polarity, since this is difficult to read. I don't believe the blue tick should be there anyway, as mentioned before. Uhm, I might change this pattern so it'll be easier to read, but I'll leave it as it is for now.

Good luck. :)
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Xinying
559 posts
Joined July 2013
Xinying
-Mo-

-Mo- wrote:

Hello, M4M from my queue.
Chocox's Insane
- 00:02:438 - I'd aim to have a hard note (new slider or circle) on this beat as opposed to a slider end since this is a downbeat and there is a significant beat in the music here. I have to agree.
- 00:16:838 - Similar kind of thing here. ^
- 00:26:238 (5,1) - I'd move these further out to create atleast some sort of a jump, since 00:26:438 (1) is the start of a new line in the vocals. You've already done a similar sort of thing in this section already. I don't know how I can improve this to not make the flow "suck" , so this will be on my "to be confirmed" list.Almost imo, it plays fine as of now, hence, no change for now.
- 01:22:438 - As before with the downbeat. ^^
- 01:24:038 - And here. ^ (I hope I didn't made the flow worse lol ==)

Thank you for mod :D Fixed some flow issues too Update
Del05
482 posts
Joined May 2014
Del05
Hi
Thanks for the mod :D

My Update

Tell me if i send the wrong file xD

-Mo- wrote:

Del's Hard
- 00:04:038 (1,2) - Move 2 further away so they aren't barely touching. Overlapping slightly for this kind of flow like you did at 00:16:838 (1,2) is fine, but if they're barely touching (touching only the border of the slider), I don't think it looks good. Will consider it :D, i like it now
- 01:00:838 (3,4,5) - I'd keep the spacing between these consistent. Fixed
- 01:16:838 (3) - I don't like how this is almost completley obstructed by slider 01:15:838 (1) but I guess there's not much you can do if you want to keep the flow unless you want to move 01:16:438 (2) too. Will consider it

General thing for the previous 3 difficulties:
- 00:48:838 (1) to 01:01:238 (4) - Consider placing some hitsounds (clap or whistle) on each and every white tick note, since there is a very distinct drum sound on each of these. This seems to have already been done in the Insane difficulties. Fixed
Kyle Y
1,204 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Kyle Y

-Mo- wrote:

Hello, M4M from my queue.

Easy
- 00:00:838 (1) - Remove one of the latter slider points; you don't need two.
Example
remap part, changed
- 00:03:838 (1,2) - This rhythm seems kind of weird to play in Easy, since you miss the downbeat (large white tick) entirely, and then you use a red to white tick polarity, which seems kind of confusing to read in my opinion. fixed, I think
- 00:07:238 (1) - This slightly touches the health bar on my screen. I'd try to lower it. fixed
- 00:20:838 (2,3) - Similar kind of thing with the polarity and missing the downbeat. It fits the music, but it's kind of confusing to read.
- 01:00:838 (2) - Seems kind of weird starting the kiai time with a slider like this in my opinion. You have the kiai start at 01:01:638 but there's no emphasis at all in terms of the mapping since this part is filled with the slider. It might be a bit tricky with this music, but I would aim to have some sort of hard note at this point for emphasis. fixed
- 01:02:438 (1,2) - This is probably mapped this way because of the previous slider I mentioned. I think that you can find a better rhythm for this section. fixed The vocal note on 01:03:038 has the same if not more emphasis in the music compared to 01:03:438 but the latter is mapped with a new slider and the former with a slider tail, which gives this section some unusual and unfitting emphasis. Also with slider 01:03:438 (2) there is a vocal note on 01:03:838 whereas there is not on 01:04:038 which is mapped.
becasue you mentioned about the rhythm weird, then I nearly remap for the rhythm, hope it won't be weird now.
Good luck. :)
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