For M4M! I was going to post this in the queue before hand, but since I am motivated now, I should go straight into it. Haha
Happens to like this song as well
[Normal]
Also check for AI-mod for spacing.
00:03:635 (3,4,5) - Fix spacing (Normal needs consistent spacing!)
00:34:235 (4,5,6,7) - Looked confusing to me so I would do: http://puu.sh/jetqi/ea107fd9f1.jpg
[Hard]
00:08:235 (4,1) - Blanketing
00:15:035 (1) - Doesn't look very nice, it obstructs view. Try re-positioning?
00:30:035 (2,3) - Spacing is uneven.
00:31:635 (2,3) - ^
00:33:235 (2,3,4,1) - ^
00:41:235 (2,3) - ^
01:06:635 (2) - Looks confusing
01:13:435 (3) - ^
[Insane]
00:03:835 (7) - After this there is melody in the song that has not been mapped between circle #7 & #8. Consider mapping it!
00:04:835 (9,10,11) - Anti-jump <- Mapping term.. The spacing is different but these notes are in even beat/rhythm.
00:12:235 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I changed this to this: http://puu.sh/jespE/03a8dec446.jpg and stack those 4 circles on the slider. I think this fits
better with music.
01:01:035 (1,2) - Overmapped.
If you are following drum: http://puu.sh/jesGT/87e1e057e0.jpg
If you are following voal: http://puu.sh/jesIT/3fc610c62a.jpg
01:06:035 (1,2,3) - Bad flow
01:14:835 (2) - It's seems better if this circle is on top of Slider #3 (next slider) rather than going near out of bound after staying under previous slider.
01:15:435 (4,5,1) - For spacing, it is better if is under head of Slider #3. Looks more even.
01:23:035 (4,5) - Flow can be improved!
[Some Random Stuff]
00:48:635 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This in DT will be like asking for PP. Nice job on this. Avoided protential anti-jumps
[General]
File -> Open .osu in Notepad -> AudioLeadIn: 300~600ish?
[Song SetUp]
Artist: リア
Romanized Artist: Lia
Design Tab: Turn off WideScreen Support as you don't have storyboard.
Very nice beatmap. Wish you luck on ranking it!
Happens to like this song as well
[Normal]
Also check for AI-mod for spacing.
00:03:635 (3,4,5) - Fix spacing (Normal needs consistent spacing!)
00:34:235 (4,5,6,7) - Looked confusing to me so I would do: http://puu.sh/jetqi/ea107fd9f1.jpg
[Hard]
00:08:235 (4,1) - Blanketing
00:15:035 (1) - Doesn't look very nice, it obstructs view. Try re-positioning?
00:30:035 (2,3) - Spacing is uneven.
00:31:635 (2,3) - ^
00:33:235 (2,3,4,1) - ^
00:41:235 (2,3) - ^
01:06:635 (2) - Looks confusing
01:13:435 (3) - ^
[Insane]
00:03:835 (7) - After this there is melody in the song that has not been mapped between circle #7 & #8. Consider mapping it!
00:04:835 (9,10,11) - Anti-jump <- Mapping term.. The spacing is different but these notes are in even beat/rhythm.
00:12:235 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I changed this to this: http://puu.sh/jespE/03a8dec446.jpg and stack those 4 circles on the slider. I think this fits
better with music.
01:01:035 (1,2) - Overmapped.
If you are following drum: http://puu.sh/jesGT/87e1e057e0.jpg
If you are following voal: http://puu.sh/jesIT/3fc610c62a.jpg
01:06:035 (1,2,3) - Bad flow
01:14:835 (2) - It's seems better if this circle is on top of Slider #3 (next slider) rather than going near out of bound after staying under previous slider.
01:15:435 (4,5,1) - For spacing, it is better if is under head of Slider #3. Looks more even.
01:23:035 (4,5) - Flow can be improved!
[Some Random Stuff]
00:48:635 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This in DT will be like asking for PP. Nice job on this. Avoided protential anti-jumps
[General]
File -> Open .osu in Notepad -> AudioLeadIn: 300~600ish?
[Song SetUp]
Artist: リア
Romanized Artist: Lia
Design Tab: Turn off WideScreen Support as you don't have storyboard.
Very nice beatmap. Wish you luck on ranking it!