This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年1月2日 at 下午 12:31:19

Artist: Satou Hiromi
Title: Believe Forever(Short Ver.)
Source: Suzukaze no Melt -Where wishes are drawn to each other-
Tags: Whirlpool Kochiya_Sanae
BPM: 182
Filesize: 3157kb
Play Time: 01:58
Difficulties Available:

1. Hard (4.99 stars, 305 notes)
2. Insane (5 stars, 443 notes)
3. Normal (4.06 stars, 179 notes)
4. Sanae's Easy (2.96 stars, 122 notes)

Download: Satou Hiromi - Believe Forever(Short Ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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PC GAME"涼風のメルト" OP

Sanae's Easy - Done - Kochiya Sanae
Normail - Done
Hard - Done
Insane - Done

Sanae moe moe =w=

1st~ ☆

2nd~ ★

3rd~~☆

star~

5th~~☆

6th~~☆

=w=

Download: Satou Hiromi - Believe Forever(Short Ver.) (SnowWhite) [Sanae's Easy].osu

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
BG>1M = unrankable, 再见.

[Sanae's Easy]
这显然是Normal.虽然说星数符合了就没差....
00:20:438 (3,4,5,6) - 迷惑性有些强了,考虑34换个slider
00:51:757 (6) - new combo
00:57:691 (5,6) - 距离略尴尬.
01:00:329 (2) - 因为有个自然顿而且是Easy,考虑删.
01:02:966 (2) - ^
01:27:361 (3) - 尾clap

[Normal]
说实话我不好判别这和Easy哪个简单.
00:20:109 (7,8,9) - 7尾及89往前1/2
00:52:911 (3,4) - 不如直接把slider从3位置开始
01:14:175 (3) - 节奏略怪(和vocal对比),考虑改?
01:52:334 (3) - 位置错了吧.前1/4. 以及前面那个空档可以插个音,如果你是合那个升音的话.

[Hard]
HP和OD换掉
00:35:933 (1) - 好糙
00:37:087 (3) - 你还是老实摆俩circle比较顺。
01:09:724 (4) - new combo下吧，太2了。
01:34:449 (6,7) - 这节奏太2 remap吧
01:41:208 (5) - 往前1/2？

[Insane]
00:37:252 (5) - new combo
00:47:142 (3,4) - 我真是听不出2连感觉。。。
01:09:724 (10) - 还是new combo

Rin你太壞了

Modding:

General:
- Reduce the audio (7/11)
- I would have reduced the stack (4/9)

Timing:
BPM - 182
Offset - 326 i think

Sanae's Easy:
00:01:309 - add a circle
00:02:627 - add a circle
00:02:527 - break time?
00:10:869 (3) - new combo
00:12:187 (1) - remove new combo
01:10:868 (2) - Don't know, but it can shorten the slider? to 01:10:704
01:13:505 (2) - the same thing
01:32:133 (1) - extended to 01:32:627

Normal:
00:17:471 (3) - extended to 00:18:131
00:20:109 (7) - cut to 00:20:603
00:21:098 (8) - moves on 00:20:933
00:21:427 (9) - moves on 00:21:263
01:09:889 (5) - add a circle, he immediately needed. true
01:48:460 (1) - extended to 01:48:708. sounds better
01:52:416 (spinner) - start it with 01:52:499
<Sound>
00:01:123 - W
00:01:647 - delete W
00:02:307 - W
00:03:790 - W
00:05:274 - W
00:05:933 - W
00:06:922 - W
00:09:559 - W
00:13:186 - W
00:21:263 - E
00:27:361 - W
00:32:636 - W
00:38:241 - W
00:43:021 - W
00:50:109 - W
00:58:021 - W
01:00:329 - W
01:04:614 - delete W
01:04:944 - W
01:09:889 - E
01:18:131 - W+E
01:18:955 - E
01:38:076 - W
01:38:735 - W
01:43:186 - E
01:44:339 - E
01:48:460 - E
01:50:768 - W
01:52:334 - E

Hard:
00:44:504 (7) - take away the two repeat
00:59:010 (1) - remove the new combo
01:00:493 - add a circle
01:08:900 (1) - remove the new combo
01:09:724 (4) - new combo. He slows down, it will be easier to read
01:10:219 (1) - new combo, yes
01:10:878 - add a circle
01:34:449 (6,7,8) - not very good sounds =/
/suggetion:
01:52:416 (spinner) - extended to 01:54:394
01:54:724-01:56:702 - a new spinner
01:58:186-02:03:955 - a new spinner
<Sound>
00:00:658 - W
00:00:988 - W
00:01:977 - W
00:02:307 - W
00:06:922 - W
00:07:581 - W
00:08:900 - W
00:10:878 - E
00:12:197 - E
00:14:669 - W
00:15:823 - W
00:17:142 - W
00:20:109 - W+E
00:22:087 - E
00:22:581 - E
00:22:746 - E
00:23:735 - W+E
00:24:394 - W
00:24:889 - W
00:25:054- W
00:25:219 - W
00:26:372 - E
00:27:526 - W
00:28:350 - W
00:28:680 - W
00:32:307 - W
00:32:801 - W
00:59:669 - E
01:02:307 - E
01:00:823 - W
01:01:977 - W
01:03:131 - W
01:04:944 - W+E
01:15:493 - E
01:16:153 - W+E
01:16:812 - W+E
01:17:801 - E
01:18:131 - E
01:19:285 - E
01:20:768 - E
01:21:592 - E
01:21:922 - E
01:22:911 - E
01:23:405 - E
01:24:724 - E
01:26:702 - E
01:28:680 - W+E
01:30:329 - E
01:31:318 - W+E
01:33:955 - E
01:35:274 - E
01:37:581 - E
01:38:241 - E
01:39:559 - E
01:43:186 - E
01:44:669 - E
01:45:658 - E
01:46:153 - E
01:46:812 - E
01:47:142 - E
01:49:614 - E

Insane:
00:21:345 (spinner) - start with 00:21:427, finish - 00:24:147
00:37:252 (5,6,7,8) - here need a new combo
01:00:988 (1,2) - spacing?
/suggetion:
01:52:416 (spinner) - extended to 01:54:394
01:54:724-01:56:702 - a new spinner
01:58:186-02:03:955 - a new spinner
<Sound>
oh lol, if you want, I can tweak hitsounds a little and throw a new version here. Write to the PM or the queue. I'm not a machine and my brain furiously on such a large number of text D:

Awesome song. 8th~~☆

dont forget to del the .osb

Download: Satou Hiromi - Believe Forever(Short Ver.) (SnowWhite) [Sanae's Easy].osu

>Famfrit

Thank you so much time to read my map

ga n ba re~

多少来着……~☆

star~

多少来着……~☆

0.0

star~~~~☆

- What is this file? [Believe Forever(Short Ver.) (SnowWhite).osu]
- Delete all .osb files.


- Sanae's Easy -
00:21:260 (5) - make it longer
01:12:194 (5) - change to slider and end on 01:12:853
01:12:523 (6) - delete
01:32:139 (1) - end on 01:32:468
01:49:776 (1) - start on 01:49:611 and end on 01:52:413
01:52:413 - delete timing section
01:53:650 - ^

- Normal -
00:21:507 (1) - start on 00:21:342
00:53:073 - add slider here
01:49:117 (2) - move 1/2 left
01:52:413 - set the volume to 0 and speed x1
01:53:650 - delete timing section

- Hard -
00:52:908 (4) - move 1/2 left
01:30:985 (2) - ^
01:32:304 (3) - ^
01:33:293 (3) - move 1/2 right
01:49:117 (1) - start on 01:48:952
01:52:413 - set the volume to 0 and speed x1
01:53:650 - delete timing section

- Insane -
00:35:765 (2) - move left 4 grids & up 2 grids (Lv3)
01:52:413 - set the volume to 0 and speed x1
01:53:650 - delete timing section


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大星星._.☆

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星星

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:OOO

Good Beatmaps!
It becomes better, if there is a movie file.

nice map!!

Timing a bit early for me

+5 ms to all offset?

don't forget resnap all notes and green lines.

other stuff are fine.

star for now.

Edit :

補充

[Sanae's Easy]

00:21:265 (5) - 這邊崩潰了

[Normal]

00:21:260 (9,1) - 這兩個沒snap到,用 beat snap divisor : 1/4 重新resnap一次

awa

Bubbled.

[Overall]

Change the Audio Lead-In to 2 seconds.

[Difficulties]

[Hard]

01:09:726 (1) - This slider is unrankable. Even if there's a new combo, it doesn't help much. Make this slider curve if you wanna keep it like that at least.

[Insane]

01:09:726 (1) - Same as Hard.

Sorry but I have to pop for now x_x

EDIT: Re-Bubbled~

ranked

> < rank了

oh it`s 200th map ranked by me XD

2

too 2

Really well-mapped, but it felt a bit fast for the song. ><

Nice map