NieN - Someday · forum

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-06-04T11:41:21+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010년 6월 14일 월요일 at 오전 1:36:34

Artist: NieN
Title: Someday
Source: DJMAX
Tags: CHRIS Name Trilogy TECHNIKA 2
BPM: 136
Filesize: 8780kb
Play Time: 01:55
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1 stars, 86 notes)
Hard (4.34 stars, 198 notes)
Maximum (4.78 stars, 232 notes)
Normal (2.58 stars, 111 notes)
Taiko (4.83 stars, 458 notes)

Download: NieN - Someday
Download: NieN - Someday (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 27th beatmap, Done.

Composed by NieN
Visualized by CHRIS
Vocal by Name

Included in DJMAX Trilody and TECHNIKA 2

Last edited by Gens 2010-06-26T00:46:46+00:00, edited 25 times in total.

vincerio

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vincerio 2010-06-05T07:57:10+00:00

first trial >w< b

~*
I think i will mapped song from TECHNIKA 2 someday ;____;

Pokie

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Pokie 2010-06-07T17:09:34+00:00

Hello MoonFragrance!

General
- ouch, .osb file appears D:
EDIT: maybe a little offset change... +2ms (2286)?
2284 is a little bit quick on kiai part, 2286 maybe better

Easy
- o.o audio lead-in is 996 on this difficulty, change it to 1000

nani...
I can't find other problems ! (as I expect XD
Really a nice work

~~Comboburst is scary D:! No! Stop looking at me!~~

Kecco

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Joined September 2009

Kecco 2010-06-07T21:44:51+00:00

•Overall•
Remove the .osb and Full Submit.
Resnap All Notes on all diffs. They are unsnapped.

•Maximum•
00:12:431 (9) - Third point : 3 grid left.
00:50:261 (2) - 1 grid up.
00:50:592 (3,4) - 1 grid right.
01:41:989 (3) - This slider is ugly, make it more curve?
01:56:769 (1) - 1 grid left.

•Hard•
Ok.

•Normal•
OD -1?

•Easy•
Ok.

bmin11

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bmin11 2010-06-07T22:06:51+00:00

군대라니....... 군대라니........ 근데 설마 공익으로 간건가요...?

Last edited by bmin11 2010-06-08T02:43:02+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Tatsuo

575 posts

Joined January 2009

Tatsuo 2010-06-07T23:54:38+00:00

Hai, here comes my mod~

[Overall]
BPM and Offset are good.
Not much else to say.

[Easy]
Good.

[Normal]
00:30:519 (1) - I understand why you did this for [Easy], but maybe you could change this. Just a suggestion.
01:26:989 through 01:34:048 - I'm not too fond of this for a normal difficulty.

[Hard]
Good.

[Maximum]
Good.

Good beatmap. Here you go.
*star*

MoonFragrance

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Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2010-06-08T07:49:35+00:00

fixed :3

bmin11 wrote:
군대라니....... 군대라니........ 근데 설마 공익으로 간건가요...?

설정은 학도병이지만 유저들 사이에선 지하철 공익으로 불리는...

Hurude Rika

Hurude Rika 2010-06-08T07:52:26+00:00

good luck

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2010-06-08T08:21:01+00:00

[Normal]:

01:11:109 (1) - cancel the new combo?
01:21:697 (1) - ^

[Hard]:

01:54:124 (6) - move the 2nd way point 1 grid left

[Maximum]:

01:21:697 (1) - cancel new combo
01:25:227 (1) - ^
01:56:771 (1) - cancel the new combo, or new combo it in [Hard]

[Easy] is fine and I can't mod Taiko diff :3

IceBeam

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IceBeam 2010-06-08T10:35:03+00:00

Hello.

[All difficulties]
01:56:771 (x) - What's with Kiai here?

[Easy]
00:22:580 (2,3) - They're so loud and rough.I can't hear a clap on (3) one.Could you make the volume a bit lower here?
01:21:256 (4) - 1 grid down and 1 to the right?
01:47:286 (3) - A bit rugged.Fix the way point,it should be right in the middle.

[Normal]
01:22:580 (3) - 1 grid to the left,please.
01:23:021 (4) - ^

[Hard]
01:47:727 (7) - Ah,what's with this slider? If you wanted to allign it with 01:47:506 (6),then you should probably do it better.If no,make it more plain,please.

[Maximum]
00:06:697 (4) - 1 grid up?
00:07:359 (1) - 2 grids up? If you follow it,don't forget to allign with 00:08:241 (3).
00:12:433 (9) - Well,same suggestion with sliders,as above.Then I won't suggest about it anymore.
00:41:550 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Oh well,maybe making jumps,putting further each two?

[Taiko]
Fine.

Good luck,star~

DeathxShinigami

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DeathxShinigami 2010-06-08T12:00:35+00:00

Uh no...starring though.

wmfchris

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wmfchris 2010-06-08T15:02:28+00:00

[Taiko]
Appreciate this, but the RRBBR B R BRR B is repeated 5~6 times at the beginning, so maybe use another 5 notes pattern to substitute some of them?

[Max]
0:10:006 (2) spacing
0:50:594 (3) fix the slider shape to make it symmetrical?
1:18:168 (4) ^, say toggle the last slider fixing point up 4 grid?
1:26:991 Suggestion: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/12314
1:43:535 (3) spacing different from (1,2). Up 2~3 grid?

[hard]
0:26:991 (1) fix slider to make it symmetrical?
0:49:491 (4) up 1 grid?
1:26:991 Suggestion: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/12314
1:56:771 (5) new combo refer to [Max]?

Nice song and map, star.

RandomJibberish

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RandomJibberish 2010-06-08T17:17:49+00:00

General
The hitsounds and lighting are cool~
Comboburst is 15px too wide, 500 is the limit. Also a comboburst that filled the side of the screen might be nice.
End Kiai at the end of the map

Only problems I could find in actual mapping:

Hard:
01:41:550 (1) - Move back to blue tick (And fix spacing)

Maximum
01:40:561 (7) - Looks a bit weird. Move more into line with the beats before and after

Great map~

NatsumeRin

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NatsumeRin 2010-06-09T06:15:12+00:00

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
timing: BPM:135.988, offset:2272, should works much better than now.
need one more timing point to stop the kiai at the end= =
still the sliderwhistle problems... i guess i won't mention it next time? XD

[Easy]
00:30:521 (1) - cut 1 repeat and start a 3/4 slider at 00:35:815 (repeat at 00:36:146 and end at 00:36:477)?
01:12:874 (1,2) - 1- 1 grid down, 2- 1 grid right, better.

[Normal]
00:08:683 (4) - 1 grid right+ 1 grid up?
00:10:668 (3) - nazi, 1 grid left.
00:38:903 (4) - 1 grid left to keep symmetry?

[Hard]
fine.

[Maximum]
00:50:266 (2) - 1 grid up
01:26:553 (5,6) - a little strange
01:41:774 (2,3) - nazi spacing.

[Taiko]
well don't use that many sliders with finish hitsounds... don't like to see many big yellow bars comes one by one... except for that, fair enough.

kino77

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kino77 2010-06-09T13:15:55+00:00

MF~~

[Normal]
00:23:021 (4) - Remove clap?
01:26:994 (1) - End 1/2 forward?
01:28:759 (1) - Move 1/2 forward?
01:30:524 (1) - Start 1/2 forward?

[Hard]
01:26:994 (1) - End 1/2 forward?
01:28:759 (1) - Move 1/2 forward?
01:30:524 (1) - Start 1/2 forward?

[Maximum]
00:58:649 - Volume 65%?
01:26:994 (1) - End 1/2 forward?
01:28:759 (1) - Move 1/2 forward?
01:30:524 (1) - Start 1/2 forward?

Other fine~
Star~

MoonFragrance

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Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2010-06-09T14:49:07+00:00

kino77 wrote:
[Normal]
01:26:994 (1) - End 1/2 forward?
01:28:759 (1) - Move 1/2 forward?
01:30:524 (1) - Start 1/2 forward?

[Hard]
01:26:994 (1) - End 1/2 forward?
01:28:759 (1) - Move 1/2 forward?
01:30:524 (1) - Start 1/2 forward?

[Maximum]
01:26:994 (1) - End 1/2 forward?
01:28:759 (1) - Move 1/2 forward?
01:30:524 (1) - Start 1/2 forward?

They're fitted to synth sounds :3

Others 'almost' fixed :3

Vendemmia

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Vendemmia 2010-06-11T12:40:16+00:00

오오오오 군데이 찬양

Muya

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Muya 2010-06-11T13:45:34+00:00

KRZY

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KRZY 2010-06-11T19:32:48+00:00

sorry, i've become a bit lazy over the past few days orz

will mod in the weekend. star for now!

DJNightmare

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DJNightmare 2010-06-12T10:48:15+00:00

Starred!

KRZY

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KRZY 2010-06-12T17:31:55+00:00

kirikaru wrote:
오오오오 군데이 찬양

ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ

모든 모딩은 suggestion이기 때문에 해도 되고 안해도 되긔

[Easy]
00:18:596 (1) - 1 grid down

[Normal]
00:49:920 (1) - 슬라이더를 구성하는 네 번째 포인트를 1 grid down

[Hard]
01:12:420 (4) - 1 grid left, 2 grid up
01:12:861 (1) - 1 grid left

[Maximum]
00:50:584 (3) - 1 grid down, 2 grid right
00:51:246 (4) - ^

LOVE THIS SONG.

MoonFragrance

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Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2010-06-12T17:42:22+00:00

fixed :3

YGOkid8

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YGOkid8 2010-06-13T11:26:53+00:00

General:
- DJ MAX to Tags

Easy:
00:30:508 (1) - Ugly :/
01:35:802 (1) - No New Combo.

Normal:
00:30:508 (1) - Ugly
01:06:905 (3) - Grid Down + Left to align with (2)

yaya

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yaya 2010-06-13T12:30:19+00:00

bubbled.

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-06-13T12:34:10+00:00

YGOkid8 wrote:
General:
- DJ MAX to Tags
- You sometime tell me put it into a tag, some time put out. why? :/

Easy:
00:30:508 (1) - Ugly :/
- i think it's okay.

01:35:802 (1) - No New Combo.
- it's for lyrics

Normal:
00:30:508 (1) - Ugly
- i think it's okay too. ( and i dunno how i make it pretty )

01:06:905 (3) - Grid Down + Left to align with (2)
- It makes a line with (2)