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Lia - Bravely You (TV Size)

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Homura-
271 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Homura-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年9月16日 at 4:34:35

Artist: Lia
Title: Bravely You (TV Size)
Source: Charlotte
Tags: シャーロット key 麻枝准 maeda jun opening image-- meg shirakai kacha kiranagamatu alyce
BPM: 150
Filesize: 17562kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Alyce's Extra (4.6 stars, 341 notes)
  2. iMage's Easy (1.39 stars, 91 notes)
  3. KIRANAGAMATU's Insane (3.91 stars, 241 notes)
  4. Normal (2.01 stars, 162 notes)
  5. ShiraKai's Hard (2.9 stars, 211 notes)
  6. ZHIEND (4.67 stars, 384 notes)
Download: Lia - Bravely You (TV Size)
Download: Lia - Bravely You (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Easy by Meg
Normal by me
Hard by ShiraKai
Insane by KIRANAGAMATU
Extra by Alyce
ZHIEND by me
Last edited by Homura- , edited 22 times in total.
Meg
1,617 posts
Joined August 2012
Meg
my easy :3
http://puu.sh/ja0Ko.zip
Owntrolf
546 posts
Joined December 2013
Owntrolf
Omg they stole Momovely's bg

http://key.soundslabel.com/charlotte_music/
MeowPaz
499 posts
Joined March 2012
MeowPaz

Owntrolf wrote:

Omg they stole Momovely's bg

http://key.soundslabel.com/charlotte_music/
Homura-
271 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Homura-

Owntrolf wrote:

Omg they stole Momovely's bg

http://key.soundslabel.com/charlotte_music/
lol

I just asked to erase the character from the official image in Momovely :)
iyasine
1,135 posts
Joined January 2012
iyasine
ほむほむ&ゲストのみなさんこんにちは、リクエストありがとうございます :)

[iMage's Easy]
  1. 00:34:174 (3) - このsliderの角度を00:35:774 (1) - このsliderの最初の辺に合わせるともっと見栄えがよくなると思います。
    img
  2. 00:41:174 - add sampleset Drum , additions soft + whistle 。手前の00:28:374 - こことパターンを組む形です。
  3. 00:58:174 (1) - sliderの山を歌詞の「間違え」より中点(赤点）をslider tick point で鳴っているバスドラとボーカルに合わせたほうがプレイしやすいと思います。
    img
  4. 01:04:574 - 01:17:374 - シンセで聴き取りにくいですがバスドラの音があるのでfinishを。
[Normal]
  1. 00:14:974 - おそらくsampleset Drum , additions soft + whistleの付け忘れだと思います。
  2. 01:04:574 - 01:17:374 - Easy diff でもいいましたがバスドラの音が鳴ってますのでfinishをオススメします。
  3. 01:17:974 (2,3) - 手前までスタックパターンで来てますので、いきなり並べると初心者の方は混乱するかもしれません。
    スタックをする、もしくは01:05:174 (2,3) - ここも並べて配置して新たにパターンを組んでみてはいかがでしょう。
[ShiraKai's Hard]
  1. 00:05:374 - finish いかがですか？
  2. 01:10:374 (2) - アレンジしてfinishいかがですか？bass と bass drumは運命共同体みたいなところあるのでたぶん合うと思います。
  3. 01:24:574 - 01:24:774 - 上記と同じです。
  4. 01:28:374 (5) - x:51 y:291 ? ここは手前01:27:174 (2,3) - からの流れを重視して三角形を崩し画面左に展開したほうがいいかもしれません。
[KIRANAGAMATU's Insane]
  1. 00:03:574 - NC 追加 & 00:03:774 - NC 削除 いかがでしょう、00:05:174 - こことNCパターンを合わせる感じです。
  2. 01:05:574 - 01:16:774 - 01:19:974 - アレンジしてfinishいかがでしょうか。
[Alyce's Extra]
  1. 00:10:574 (2) - x:42 y:172 ? もう少し横幅を広げてみてはいかがでしょう。こちらのほうが打ちやすいと思いました。
  2. 00:28:774 (6) - NCを追加？ 00:41:574 (1) - こことパターンを合わせる感じです。
  3. 01:04:574 - sampleset Drum , additions soft + whistleいかがでしょう。01:17:374 - こことパターンを組む感じです。
[ZHIEND]
  1. 00:34:974 (3) - 3/4sliderオブジェクトの長さに非常によく似てますので混乱を避けるためにNCを付けて区別化してみてはいかがでしょう。
  2. perfect!

以上です :D 厳しい暑さが続きますね、水分と塩分をしっかりとって熱中症には十分に注意しましょう(¦3[___]
Homura-
271 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Homura-

iyasine wrote:

ほむほむ&ゲストのみなさんこんにちは、リクエストありがとうございます :)

[Normal]
  1. 00:14:974 - おそらくsampleset Drum , additions soft + whistleの付け忘れだと思います。
  2. 01:04:574 - 01:17:374 - Easy diff でもいいましたがバスドラの音が鳴ってますのでfinishをオススメします。
  3. 01:17:974 (2,3) - 手前までスタックパターンで来てますので、いきなり並べると初心者の方は混乱するかもしれません。
    スタックをする、もしくは01:05:174 (2,3) - ここも並べて配置して新たにパターンを組んでみてはいかがでしょう。

    all fixed


[ZHIEND]
  1. 00:34:974 (3) - 3/4sliderオブジェクトの長さに非常によく似てますので混乱を避けるためにNCを付けて区別化してみてはいかがでしょう。
    :arrow: 00:34:574 (1) - ここにもNC入れました
  2. perfect!
    :arrow: よし！

以上です :D 厳しい暑さが続きますね、水分と塩分をしっかりとって熱中症には十分に注意しましょう(¦3[___]
Modありがとうございます！
バイト行ったらいつも汗だくで死にそうです　Ω＼ζﾟ)ﾁｰﾝｯ…
5hiki
5hiki

iyasine wrote:

ほむほむ&ゲストのみなさんこんにちは、リクエストありがとうございます :)


[Alyce's Extra]
  1. 00:10:574 (2) - x:42 y:172 ? もう少し横幅を広げてみてはいかがでしょう。こちらのほうが打ちやすいと思いました。ok
  2. 00:28:774 (6) - NCを追加？ 00:41:574 (1) - こことパターンを合わせる感じです。完全に盲点でした fix
  3. 01:04:574 - sampleset Drum , additions soft + whistleいかがでしょう。01:17:374 - こことパターンを組む感じです。fix


以上です :D 厳しい暑さが続きますね、水分と塩分をしっかりとって熱中症には十分に注意しましょう(¦3[___]
thank you for mod ;)

https://www.dropbox.com/s/80cjakxc9kc1q ... D.osu?dl=0
Haruru
215 posts
Joined May 2010
Haruru
as you requested
[先生's 優しい]
  1. 00:06:974 (1) - 00:06:174 (3) に合わせるように置いてもいいかも http://i.imgur.com/ponMMPl.png
[KIRANAGAMATU]
  1. 00:27:774 (1,2) - http://i.imgur.com/zfMmEUy.png
[ShiraKai]
  1. 00:40:574 (1) - ケツにwhistle?
  2. 00:41:374 (3) - ケツにwhistle?
  3. 00:48:574 - ここからピアノに合わせてwhistleを付けても良いかもしれません
[Alyce's Extra]
  1. 01:04:574 (1) - finish? ついでにもうちょっと曲げた方が好き
[Normal]
  1. 00:27:774 (3) - ケツにwhistle?
  2. 00:27:774 (3) - ケツホイ?
  3. 01:05:974 (4) - 頭にsoft-hitwhitsle
[ZHIEND]
  1. 00:38:974 (1) - whistle？
以上です！ 頑張ってください :)
5hiki
5hiki
[Alyce's Extra]
  1. 01:04:574 (1) - finish? ついでにもうちょっと曲げた方が好き
　fix

thanks!

https://www.dropbox.com/s/80cjakxc9kc1q ... D.osu?dl=0
ShiraKai
534 posts
Joined September 2010
ShiraKai

iyasine wrote:

ほむほむ&ゲストのみなさんこんにちは、リクエストありがとうございます :)

[ShiraKai's Hard]
  1. 00:05:374 - finish いかがですか？
  2. 01:10:374 (2) - アレンジしてfinishいかがですか？bass と bass drumは運命共同体みたいなところあるのでたぶん合うと思います。
  3. 01:24:574 - 01:24:774 - 上記と同じです。
  4. 01:28:374 (5) - x:51 y:291 ? ここは手前01:27:174 (2,3) - からの流れを重視して三角形を崩し画面左に展開したほうがいいかもしれません。

以上です :D 厳しい暑さが続きますね、水分と塩分をしっかりとって熱中症には十分に注意しましょう(¦3[___]
wa~~~いやしねさんおひさです～ :)
全部直しました！ ありがとう ;)

Haruru wrote:

as you requested

[ShiraKai]
  1. 00:40:574 (1) - ケツにwhistle? :arrow: OK~
  2. 00:41:374 (3) - ケツにwhistle? :arrow: OK~~
  3. 00:48:574 - ここからピアノに合わせてwhistleを付けても良いかもしれません ちょっとうるさくなりそうだから保留~~~

以上です！ 頑張ってください :)
はるるさんありです 8-)
ほむらさんへ
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Bravely you.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 500
PreviewTime: 61074
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1.7

[Metadata]
Title:Bravely You (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Bravely You (TV Size)
Artist:Lia
ArtistUnicode:Lia
Creator:Homura-
Version:ShiraKai's Hard
Source:Charlotte
Tags:シャーロット key 麻枝准 opening image-- meg shirakai kacha kiranagamatu alyce
BeatmapID:749002
BeatmapSetID:337527

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.3
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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426,345,41374,2,0,B|335:352|335:352|296:345,1,130,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
117,312,42174,6,0,P|107:248|95:184,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
61,98,42774,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,177,42974,2,0,P|79:184|133:150,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
150,60,43574,1,0,0:0:0:0:
217,120,43774,6,0,P|268:158|331:155,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
409,107,44374,1,2,0:0:0:0:
409,107,44574,2,0,P|420:170|431:235,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,358,45374,6,0,B|283:316|283:316|279:230,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
195,265,45974,1,0,0:0:0:0:
195,265,46174,2,0,B|189:221|189:221|201:136,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
290,154,46774,1,0,0:0:0:0:
290,153,46974,6,0,P|290:121|283:89,1,65,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
225,20,47374,2,0,L|161:32,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,107,47774,2,0,P|107:139|114:171,1,65,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
171,241,48174,2,0,L|235:229,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,243,48474,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,243,48574,6,0,P|295:250|327:253,1,65,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,218,48974,1,4,0:0:0:0:
479,279,49174,2,0,P|477:311|473:343,2,65,0|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,218,49774,2,0,P|407:185|406:153,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
462,80,50174,6,0,P|430:71|401:57,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,20,50574,1,4,0:0:0:0:
278,101,50774,2,0,P|248:115|217:123,1,65,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
127,131,51174,1,0,0:0:0:0:
106,20,51374,2,0,P|138:28|166:44,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,138,51774,6,0,P|31:107|33:74,2,65,4|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
89,214,52374,1,0,0:0:0:0:
89,214,52574,2,0,P|121:211|153:216,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
65,299,52974,2,0,L|0:296,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
89,377,53374,6,0,P|121:382|153:379,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,333,53774,1,4,0:0:0:0:
310,378,53974,2,0,P|342:383|374:380,2,65,0|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,333,54574,2,0,L|232:268,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
274,187,54974,5,4,0:0:0:0:
323,263,55174,1,0,0:0:0:0:
366,183,55374,1,4,0:0:0:0:
443,230,55574,2,0,P|452:199|453:166,1,65,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
441,76,55974,1,0,0:0:0:0:
354,101,56174,2,0,P|321:104|289:102,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
245,22,56574,6,0,P|185:47|121:56,1,130,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
34,27,57174,1,0,0:0:0:0:
0,126,57374,2,0,P|32:129|63:137,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
149,166,57774,2,0,L|137:229,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,320,58174,5,4,0:0:0:0:
46,267,58374,1,0,0:0:0:0:
34,357,58574,1,4,0:0:0:0:
121,320,58774,1,0,0:0:0:0:
209,342,58974,1,4,0:0:0:0:
288,298,59174,2,0,P|293:330|295:362,1,65,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
213,249,59574,1,0,0:0:0:0:
297,211,59774,6,0,P|328:219|356:235,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
422,298,60174,2,0,P|430:267|446:239,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
510,173,60574,2,0,P|479:165|451:149,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,85,60974,2,0,P|376:116|360:144,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
297,211,61374,6,0,L|167:208,1,130,4|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
90,257,61974,1,0,0:0:0:0:
26,191,62174,2,0,B|52:168|90:162|90:162|109:138|115:110,1,130,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
86,22,62774,6,0,P|150:32|214:30,1,130,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
305,14,63374,2,0,P|317:43|327:74,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
413,103,63774,2,0,P|400:132|390:163,1,65,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
299,163,64174,1,8,0:0:0:0:
299,163,64374,6,0,P|324:222|343:284,1,130,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
434,290,64974,2,0,P|425:321|412:350,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
313,372,65374,6,0,B|291:369|271:353|271:353|233:365|189:369,1,130,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,333,65974,2,0,B|102:269|112:233|112:233|127:256,1,130,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
25,230,66574,1,8,0:0:0:0:
25,229,66774,2,0,P|49:171|108:148,1,130,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
191,188,67374,2,0,P|223:192|255:191,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,131,67774,6,0,B|323:98|306:73|306:73|265:69|239:56,2,130,4|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
343,220,68774,1,4,0:0:0:0:
410,159,68974,2,0,P|415:126|413:94,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
473,226,69374,6,0,P|497:166|509:103,2,130,4|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
405,287,70374,1,4,0:0:0:0:
342,220,70574,2,0,P|310:221|279:229,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,297,70974,6,0,B|208:304|231:302|231:302|266:324|312:311,2,130,4|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
106,251,71974,1,4,0:0:0:0:
157,175,72174,2,0,P|188:166|220:165,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
305,93,72574,6,0,P|366:113|431:115,2,130,4|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
243,26,73574,1,8,0:0:0:0:
179,90,73774,1,8,0:0:0:0:
179,90,73874,1,8,0:0:0:0:
179,90,73974,1,8,0:0:0:0:
179,90,74074,1,8,0:0:0:0:
179,90,74174,6,0,P|114:91|52:111,1,130,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
22,197,74774,1,0,0:0:0:0:
113,202,74974,2,0,P|136:262|144:326,1,130,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,361,75574,6,0,P|287:336|351:329,1,130
436,362,76174,1,8,0:0:0:0:
436,362,76374,2,0,B|445:331|439:298|439:298|432:265|439:232,1,130,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,145,76974,1,8,0:0:0:0:
354,184,77174,6,0,P|290:194|230:171,1,130,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,113,77774,1,8,0:0:0:0:
75,145,77974,1,0,0:0:0:0:
47,231,78174,2,0,P|36:294|54:356,1,130,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
201,315,78774,6,0,P|188:251|150:199,1,130,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
75,145,79374,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,56,79574,2,0,P|149:28|213:42,1,130,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
286,93,80174,2,0,L|351:93,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
443,170,80574,6,0,B|444:142|433:118|433:118|444:84|427:44,2,130,4|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,244,81574,1,4,0:0:0:0:
313,183,81774,2,0,P|281:186|250:193,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,271,82174,6,0,L|317:271,2,130,4|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,328,83174,1,4,0:0:0:0:
33,224,83374,2,0,L|97:213,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
177,139,83774,6,0,L|48:117,2,130,4|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
245,77,84774,1,4,0:0:0:0:
292,184,84974,2,0,L|356:173,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
447,171,85374,6,0,B|448:143|437:119|437:119|448:85|431:45,2,130,4|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,251,86374,1,4,0:0:0:0:
492,253,86574,2,0,P|486:285|469:312,1,65,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
382,342,86974,5,4,0:1:0:0:
382,342,87174,2,0,L|252:341,1,130,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,250,87774,2,0,P|220:258|191:273,1,65,0|2,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
129,339,88174,1,0,0:0:0:0:
51,291,88374,1,2,3:2:0:0:
Homura-
271 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Homura-

Haruru wrote:

[Normal]
  1. 00:27:774 (3) - ケツにwhistle?
    :arrow: soft-whistleはピアノの音をとったつもりです ここはいらにょ
  2. 00:27:774 (3) - ケツホイ?
    :arrow: ^
  3. 01:05:974 (4) - 頭にsoft-hitwhitsle
    :arrow: ピアノは鳴ってませんが寂しかったのでここだけ入れました　ZHIENDのほうには入れません
[ZHIEND]
  1. 00:38:974 (1) - whistle？
    :arrow: ，;'.･(ﾟεﾟ(O三(>_<`)o ﾝﾅﾓﾝﾈｰﾖ！

以上です！ 頑張ってください :)
Modありでーす
Meg
1,617 posts
Joined August 2012
Meg

Haruru wrote:

as you requested
[先生's 優しい]
  1. 00:06:974 (1) - 00:06:174 (3) に合わせるように置いてもいいかも http://i.imgur.com/ponMMPl.png
そのあとの的の配置に困っちゃったのでkeepしておきます

以上です！ 頑張ってください :)
:arrow: いやしねさん、all fixed

二人ともありがとう :)
http://puu.sh/jlkkb.zip
wring
596 posts
Joined February 2010
wring
何気に初めてですね！！！！！１

[iMeg's Easy]
・00:03:774 (1) - 赤点入れてtickで角曲げしてほしい。00:02:174 (3) - とはタイプが違うことも、同系統のスライダーを使わないほうが音が分かりやすい。
・00:16:574 (1) - こんな感じにしない？
・00:56:574 (2) - 他のは視覚的にきっちり離しているけど、これだけ直前のに視覚的に近いのは気になる。スペースを意識するならもう少し左上に移動させるべき。


[Normal]
・00:07:374 (2) - naziもっと下の方を向けさせたい。00:08:574 (4) - と窮屈に見えるのは好ましくない。
・00:10:574 (2) - 次につなげるなら、）のような線のほうが合ってる。個人としては下に凸の曲線がいいかな。
・00:43:774 (3) - 全体的にスペースをしっかり取っているのに、00:42:174 (1,3) - のスペースが変わってるのが気になる。これなら00:42:174 (1) - にスタックさせても？
・01:08:574 (2,3) - Hardとのgapを指摘するかしないか非常に危ういところだと思うので、ここら辺を普通に3ノーツにしてもいいかもしれない。

　簡単すぎてNormalじゃないよって言われる可能性が結構ある。オブジェクトを足す方向で考えてもいいかもしれない。何か思うなら気軽に聞いてください。


[Shirakai's Hard]
・00:09:574 (4,5) - 5をctrl+gして、その始点に4をスタックさせない？
・01:16:974 (4) - 特にジャンプさせるようなところでもないから、DS通りでもいいのでは。


[KIRANAGAMATU's Insane]
-AR8でいいと思います。
・00:22:574 (5) - キックにしないで、3ノーツにしたほうがInsaneらしいと思います。ここまでのところで叩いてるところが少ないのもあって、Hardとの違いを出してみてもいいのではないでしょうか。
・00:26:174 (1) - ctrl+gはいかがですか。
・01:00:974 (4) - ＾　仮に連打にしたくなくても、キックよりも1/4スライダー2つにした方が無難です。
・01:27:774 (5) - NC？確かに一連ですが、ここだけNC間隔を変える必要もないと思います。

　オブジェクトが少ないです。マップセットで見た場合、Extraと比べてかなりの差があると思います。スペーシングの広さでカバーできるかどうか私には判断できず、どうしても指摘要素ではあると思うので気に留めておいてもらえれば幸いです。譜面自体に問題はないです。


[Alyce's Extra]
・00:03:774 (1) - 00:00:574 (1,2) - みたいにした方がいいです。
・00:15:374 (2,3) - ctrl+gしましょう。
・00:28:574 (5,1) - NC入れ替えてもいいかな、どうかなってところです。
・00:33:174 (2) - 終点スタックさせるよりは、x443 y252あたりで見える所に置いてある方がいいと思います。
・00:33:974 (4) - 00:34:574 (2) - の終点スタックさせませんか？
・00:41:374 (5,1) - ＾
・01:01:674 (2) - いらないです。
・01:10:974 (1,2) - 01:09:374 (1,2,3) - のように3連打にしてほしいです。


[ZHIEND]
・00:04:974 (7) - 2にスタックさせていいと思う。視覚目的なら00:05:174 (1) - の頭を3角形の考慮にしたほうがいい。
・00:19:774 (1) - 00:16:574 (1,2) - みたいな音取りにしよう。
・00:25:774 (6) - 1/4スライダーにしない？
・00:31:774 (3,4) - 4を消して3をそこまで伸ばしましょう。無理やり感がちょっと強い。残したいなら00:30:974 (1) - も同じ音取りにしましょう。
・00:44:574 (3,4) - もう少し曲げよう。
・01:01:674 (2) - いらないです。
・01:04:374 (1) - 3/4+ノートみたいにしない？
・01:17:174 (1) - ＾
・01:26:174 (3) - 組み合わせ的にあんまり曲げない方向にしたくなりませんか？


遅れちゃってすまん
yoshi
5hiki
5hiki

wring wrote:

何気に初めてですね！！！！！１

[Alyce's Extra]
・00:03:774 (1) - 00:00:574 (1,2) - みたいにした方がいいです。
・00:15:374 (2,3) - ctrl+gしましょう。
・00:28:574 (5,1) - NC入れ替えてもいいかな、どうかなってところです。
・00:33:174 (2) - 終点スタックさせるよりは、x443 y252あたりで見える所に置いてある方がいいと思います。
・00:33:974 (4) - 00:34:574 (2) - の終点スタックさせませんか？　させません！
・00:41:374 (5,1) - ＾
・01:01:674 (2) - いらないです。いる
・01:10:974 (1,2) - 01:09:374 (1,2,3) - のように3連打にしてほしいです。　後ろに音がないので３連打にはしません


遅れちゃってすまん
yoshi
thank you for mod ;)

https://www.dropbox.com/s/80cjakxc9kc1q ... D.osu?dl=0
N a s y a
510 posts
Joined March 2012
N a s y a
いいね
KIRANAGAMATU
KIRANAGAMATU
thank you all

http://puu.sh/jrpd2/c0374f5dc4.zip
Homura-
271 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Homura-

wring wrote:

何気に初めてですね！！！！！１

[Normal]
・00:07:374 (2) - naziもっと下の方を向けさせたい。00:08:574 (4) - と窮屈に見えるのは好ましくない。
:arrow: たしかに窮屈かもしれないけど斜め45度の直線スライダーが嫌いなのと、00:05:374 (4) - のスライダーに平行に置いてるのでkepp
・00:10:574 (2) - 次につなげるなら、）のような線のほうが合ってる。個人としては下に凸の曲線がいいかな。
:arrow: fixed
・00:43:774 (3) - 全体的にスペースをしっかり取っているのに、00:42:174 (1,3) - のスペースが変わってるのが気になる。これなら00:42:174 (1) - にスタックさせても？
:arrow: スライダーの向き変えました
・01:08:574 (2,3) - Hardとのgapを指摘するかしないか非常に危ういところだと思うので、ここら辺を普通に3ノーツにしてもいいかもしれない。
:arrow: いろんな人に聞いてみます　とりあえずkeep
　簡単すぎてNormalじゃないよって言われる可能性が結構ある。オブジェクトを足す方向で考えてもいいかもしれない。何か思うなら気軽に聞いてください。
:arrow: たしかに でも赤線に置いたらQATにもさててにもしばかれまくってトラウマになっててなかなか置けない・・・


[ZHIEND]
・00:04:974 (7) - 2にスタックさせていいと思う。視覚目的なら00:05:174 (1) - の頭を3角形の考慮にしたほうがいい。
:arrow: 2にスタックさせて全体的にずらしました　ただスライダーの頭を正三角形にするのは なし　流れが嫌いです
・00:19:774 (1) - 00:16:574 (1,2) - みたいな音取りにしよう。
:arrow: OJT優勝
・00:25:774 (6) - 1/4スライダーにしない？
:arrow: しません
・00:31:774 (3,4) - 4を消して3をそこまで伸ばしましょう。無理やり感がちょっと強い。残したいなら00:30:974 (1) - も同じ音取りにしましょう。
:arrow: OJT一回戦敗退
そもそも00:30:974 (1) - と00:31:774 (3,4) - とでは曲のパターンが全く違います　絶対に変えません
・00:44:574 (3,4) - もう少し曲げよう。
:arrow: ここも考慮しておきます　とりあえずkeepで
・01:01:674 (2) - いらないです。
:arrow: 思いっきりバスの音鳴ってます
・01:04:374 (1) - 3/4+ノートみたいにしない？
:arrow: しません
・01:17:174 (1) - ＾
:arrow: しません
・01:26:174 (3) - 組み合わせ的にあんまり曲げない方向にしたくなりませんか？
:arrow: 別にいいと思うのでkeepで

遅れちゃってすまん
yoshi
modありがとうございます　いろいろ書いてもらって参考になりました
いやほんとにほんとに
変えてないとこ多いかもしれないけどいろいろ考えさせられたのでかなり良いmod貰ったなと思ってます！
Satellite
3,683 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite
OJT一回戦敗退mod

irc
01:06 *Homura- is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/746800 Lia - Bravely You (TV Size)]
01:08 Satellite: 00:03:574 - 
01:08 Satellite: add note
01:08 Satellite: 00:04:974 (3) - slider 1/4
01:09 Satellite: 00:08:174 (3) - 1/4
01:09 Satellite: 00:11:374 (3) - 1/4
01:09 Satellite: 00:13:174 - add note or 00:12:974 (6) - 1/4
01:10 Satellite: 00:19:374 (5) - 1/4 or 00:19:574 - add note
01:10 Satellite: 00:22:974 (1,2) - 
01:11 Satellite: http://puu.sh/ju1JH/05ff6392f9.jpg
01:11 Satellite: 00:26:174 (1,2) - ^
01:11 Satellite: 00:29:174 - add note or 00:28:974 (5) - 1/4
01:12 Satellite: 00:29:374 (1,2) - 
01:12 Satellite: http://puu.sh/ju1Pk/17f094e514.jpg
01:12 Satellite: 00:35:774 (1,2) - ^
01:12 Satellite: 00:38:974 (1,2) - 
01:13 Satellite: 00:40:574 (3,4,5) - 
01:13 Satellite: http://puu.sh/ju1SM/9ae1274b5b.jpg
01:14 Satellite: 00:54:774 - add note
01:14 Satellite: 00:51:574 - add note
01:14 Satellite: 00:57:974 - add note
01:14 Satellite: 01:01:174 - add note
01:15 Satellite: 01:06:974 (6) - 
01:15 Satellite: http://puu.sh/ju1Zo/4de1cb5841.jpg
01:16 Satellite: http://puu.sh/ju20K/4346440d39.jpg
01:16 Satellite: 01:08:574 (2,3) - 
01:16 Satellite: ctrl+g
01:16 Satellite: 01:10:174 (5,6) - ^
01:17 Satellite: http://puu.sh/ju24z/7e51804e11.jpg
01:17 Satellite: 01:13:974 - add note
01:18 Satellite: 01:19:774 (6) - mae
01:18 Satellite: 01:26:974 (3,4,5) - 
01:19 Satellite: http://puu.sh/ju29A/84a5abda75.jpg
Homura-
271 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Homura-

Satellite wrote:

OJT一回戦敗退mod

irc
01:06 *Homura- is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/746800 Lia - Bravely You (TV Size)]
01:08 Satellite: 00:03:574 - 
01:08 Satellite: add note
01:08 Satellite: 00:04:974 (3) - slider 1/4
01:09 Satellite: 00:08:174 (3) - 1/4
01:09 Satellite: 00:11:374 (3) - 1/4
01:09 Satellite: 00:13:174 - add note or 00:12:974 (6) - 1/4
01:10 Satellite: 00:19:374 (5) - 1/4 or 00:19:574 - add note
01:10 Satellite: 00:22:974 (1,2) - 
01:11 Satellite: http://puu.sh/ju1JH/05ff6392f9.jpg
01:11 Satellite: 00:26:174 (1,2) - ^
01:11 Satellite: 00:29:174 - add note or 00:28:974 (5) - 1/4
01:12 Satellite: 00:29:374 (1,2) - 
01:12 Satellite: http://puu.sh/ju1Pk/17f094e514.jpg
01:12 Satellite: 00:35:774 (1,2) - ^
01:12 Satellite: 00:38:974 (1,2) - 
01:13 Satellite: 00:40:574 (3,4,5) - 
01:13 Satellite: http://puu.sh/ju1SM/9ae1274b5b.jpg
01:14 Satellite: 00:54:774 - add note
01:14 Satellite: 00:51:574 - add note
01:14 Satellite: 00:57:974 - add note
01:14 Satellite: 01:01:174 - add note
01:15 Satellite: 01:06:974 (6) - 
01:15 Satellite: http://puu.sh/ju1Zo/4de1cb5841.jpg
01:16 Satellite: http://puu.sh/ju20K/4346440d39.jpg
01:16 Satellite: 01:08:574 (2,3) - 
01:16 Satellite: ctrl+g
01:16 Satellite: 01:10:174 (5,6) - ^
01:17 Satellite: http://puu.sh/ju24z/7e51804e11.jpg
01:17 Satellite: 01:13:974 - add note
01:18 Satellite: 01:19:774 (6) - mae
01:18 Satellite: 01:26:974 (3,4,5) - 
01:19 Satellite: http://puu.sh/ju29A/84a5abda75.jpg

さんきゅーさってってー all fixed
Meg
1,617 posts
Joined August 2012
Meg
輪(wring)殿全部直しました神

http://puu.sh/jE8Ve.zip
ShiraKai
534 posts
Joined September 2010
ShiraKai

wring wrote:

何気に初めてですね！！！！！１

[Shirakai's Hard]
・00:09:574 (4,5) - 5をctrl+gして、その始点に4をスタックさせない？
・01:16:974 (4) - 特にジャンプさせるようなところでもないから、DS通りでもいいのでは。

遅れちゃってすまん
yoshi
りんぐさんさんきゅ :)
SPOILER
osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 500
PreviewTime: 61074
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.7

[Metadata]
Title:Bravely You (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Bravely You (TV Size)
Artist:Lia
ArtistUnicode:Lia
Creator:Homura-
Version:ShiraKai's Hard
Source:Charlotte
Tags:シャーロット key 麻枝准 opening image-- meg shirakai kacha kiranagamatu alyce
BeatmapID:749002
BeatmapSetID:337527

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OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
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SliderTickRate:1

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N a s y a
510 posts
Joined March 2012
N a s y a
m4m desu
[Meg]
・00:21:774 (2,3,4,1) - 少し斜めにしたほうが綺麗に見えるかもしれない
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[Normal]
・00:04:374 (2) - ピアノの音とってみたらどうでしょうか？
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[Shirakai]
・01:14:174 (1) - additions Normal？
[KIRANAGAMATU]
・00:28:174 (2) -clap付け忘れ
[Alyce]
・01:02:774 (4,1) - NC入れ替え？
・01:15:574 (5,1) - ^
[ZIEND]
・01:13:774 (4,5,6,7) - 連打丸くしたくない？
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3連打が多い

全然書けませんでしたすいません
ShiraKai
534 posts
Joined September 2010
ShiraKai

N a s y a wrote:

m4m desu

[Shirakai]
・01:14:174 (1) - additions Normal？

全然書けませんでしたすいません
なしゃちゃんありがと :) 付けたわよ :)
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Homura-
271 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Homura-

N a s y a wrote:

m4m desu

[Normal]
・00:04:374 (2) - ピアノの音とってみたらどうでしょうか？
image

[ZIEND]
・01:13:774 (4,5,6,7) - 連打丸くしたくない？
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3連打が多い
:arrow: Alyce's Extraとの違いはソコってことで許して (人´ωﾟ*)

全然書けませんでしたすいません
:arrow: 俺も大したこと書いてないし全然イイゾ
all fixed

modアリです
KIRANAGAMATU
KIRANAGAMATU

N a s y a wrote:

m4m desu

[KIRANAGAMATU]
・00:28:174 (2) -clap付け忘れ

全然書けませんでしたすいません
thank you!
http://puu.sh/jLAJl/860cbb9f50.zip
Mint
1,607 posts
Joined February 2013
Mint
Hello Homura! As your request =w=

:idea: General


* The OD and HP of the Insane and two Extra diffs are identical to each other. While it's not unrankable, I highly recommend to have some form of progression between them... or else it's not really a challenge, especially with this low BPM ;w;

iMage's Easy


* Meg =w=

Normal


* 00:39:774 (3,4) - Keep 1.1x

ShiraKai's Hard


* No video?
* 00:25:174 (2) - I hope you don't ignore the vocal + bass... there are no strings or something like 00:27:774 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/jPA85/49a334f4b6.jpg

KIRANAGAMATU's Insane


Even though I haven't seen any of your maps before, I'm impressed! The patterns overall might be a bit simple sometimes, but really good work.

Alyce's Extra


* 01:09:374 (1) - I find it quite misleading to start a triplet here on the downbeat, while there's a more noticeable 1/4 beat at 01:10:074 (5) - . Would rather have this for rhythm, tho yours isn't too bad. http://puu.sh/jPyYB/a1f8407326.jpg
* 01:22:174 (1) - Same here... but I guess it's your thing lol.
* 01:26:474 (4) - Quite surprising that you skip such a loud sound, considering your 1/4 usage throughout the whole diff - I find that this sound could easily be mapped.

Good work as always Alyce!

ZHIEND


* Same settings as Alyce's difficulty? I see it's the same star difficulty, but note density in your diff is much higher, and I'd say this difficulty is indeed harder than Alyce's diff. Consider boosting OD and HP a bit? Won't enforce this.
* 00:20:374 (3,4,5) - I notice that you don't care about aesthetics as much as I do, but this weird overlap with (1) really put me off during gameplay. Move upwards to avoid the overlap?
* 00:28:374 (4,5,6) - This chunk of 1/4 here is rather confusing. Look closely at (4,5) and (5,6). They are spaced the same, but they are different in snaps, one has a 1/4 gap, the other one has a 1/2 gap. This comes totally unexpected and didn't play that comfortable to me. Would rather move 00:28:774 (6,7,8) - away, or move (5) much closer to (4).
* 00:41:174 (4,5,6) - Same here again, this one is even more complicated, and does effect gameplay quite a bit. The main reason why this plays even worse, is that (6,7) are placed in the same area as (3,4) making it even more confusing combined with the inconsistent DS. I hope you can keep your spacing with most of the kickslider patterns like this one.
* 00:48:574 (1) - My main 'problem' with this difficulty in particular is that the spacing and shape is completely random from this note 'till 00:59:574 (8) - . Most patterns will play fine in-game, tho I've noticed that 00:52:374 (4,5,6,7,8) - in particular is really large in terms of spacing. I can see why, the extra piano notes are indeed louder then usual, however at an identical part of the song @ 00:55:974 (6,7,8) - you just kept your spacing reasonable. I hope you can reduce the distance a bit at the first part to make it consistent, and overall play more nicely.

Well, I must say that people are either going to like or hate this difficulty. Sometimes few things seemed quite random to me, while I also saw some creative patterns. Tho, I must say I kinda enjoyed this difficulty lol, I support you c:

Hmm.. since the actual mod count isn't that high - mind getting one more mod before calling me back?

Have a nice day /w\
Meg
1,617 posts
Joined August 2012
Meg

N a s y a wrote:

m4m desu
[Meg]
・00:21:774 (2,3,4,1) - 少し斜めにしたほうが綺麗に見えるかもしれない
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いいね

全然書けませんでしたすいません

appleeaterx wrote:

Hello Homura! As your request =w=

iMage's Easy


* Meg =w=　Meg desu =w=

Hmm.. since the actual mod count isn't that high - mind getting one more mod before calling me back?

Have a nice day /w\
thank you!
http://puu.sh/jQloh.zip
alacat
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3,872 posts
Joined May 2011
alacat
[Normal]
  1. 00:18:174 (4) - ここだけいきなり歌詞だけとるのは不自然なのでしっかりと後ろの00:18:574 - この音も取ったほうがより叩きやすいと思います。
  2. 00:45:974 - このあたり00:42:174 (1,2) - ,00:36:374 (2) - ,00:39:574 (2) - 見てると00:45:974 - ここに音がないと違和感ある
  3. 00:49:374 (2) - (1)とあわせて直角スライダーだとかっこいいなぁ
  4. 01:16:174 (5) - ここから1/2のスライダーにして01:16:374 - ここの音取ったほうがいいと思う

[ZHIEND]
  1. 00:34:574 (1,1) - スライダー速度0.1しかかわってないから、もし速度変更のためにnew combo入れてるならいらないかな
  2. 01:04:374 (1) - 始点にdrum sound or soft whistle ?かなりここさびしい
  3. 01:17:174 (1) - ^
    ランダムジャンプがかなり目立つのでジャンプさせたいところはキメて普通の音のところは控えたほうが抑揚ができバランスのいい難易度ができると思います。特に気合タイムなんかはジャンプさせたいところが明確になってなかったかなって感じました。例えば強いボーカルの音01:07:374 (7,1) - この間のジャンプと01:09:374 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - この辺のジャンプ比べてみたらわかると思う。
がんばって :D
Homura-
271 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Homura-

alacat wrote:

[Normal]
  1. 00:18:174 (4) - ここだけいきなり歌詞だけとるのは不自然なのでしっかりと後ろの00:18:574 - この音も取ったほうがより叩きやすいと思います。
    :arrow: fixed
  2. 00:45:974 - このあたり00:42:174 (1,2) - ,00:36:374 (2) - ,00:39:574 (2) - 見てると00:45:974 - ここに音がないと違和感ある
    :arrow: fixed
  3. 00:49:374 (2) - (1)とあわせて直角スライダーだとかっこいいなぁ
    :arrow: fixed
  4. 01:16:174 (5) - ここから1/2のスライダーにして01:16:374 - ここの音取ったほうがいいと思う
    :arrow: 01:03:774 - ここと同じ音取りしたいのと　別に問題ないかなと思ったのでkeep


[ZHIEND]
  1. 00:34:574 (1,1) - スライダー速度0.1しかかわってないから、もし速度変更のためにnew combo入れてるならいらないかな
    :arrow: 00:34:974 (1) - このスライダーが3/4スライダーの長さにかなり似ていて混乱するかもしれないということでNCを入れたけど　ここだけNCあるのも変かなって思って全部にNC入れたんだけどどうなんだろう　続きはVCで　とりあえずkeep
  2. 01:04:374 (1) - 始点にdrum sound or soft whistle ?かなりここさびしい
    :arrow: ずっとハイハットもピアノもないと思ってたのに ピアノが聴こえる・・・ soft whistleで
  3. 01:17:174 (1) - ^
    :arrow: ^
    ランダムジャンプがかなり目立つのでジャンプさせたいところはキメて普通の音のところは控えたほうが抑揚ができバランスのいい難易度ができると思います。特に気合タイムなんかはジャンプさせたいところが明確になってなかったかなって感じました。例えば強いボーカルの音01:07:374 (7,1) - この間のジャンプと01:09:374 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - この辺のジャンプ比べてみたらわかると思う。
    :arrow: ちょこちょこ調整していきます
がんばって :D
modありです
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