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Chaoslitz

Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Chaoslitz 2015-07-21T11:22:31+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年8月17日 at 下午 06:20:11

Artist: Savoir Adore
Title: Dreamers
Tags: Our Nature PES2013 StarrStyx Pro Evolution Soccer Soundtrack
BPM: 102.5
Filesize: 4614kb
Play Time: 03:47
Difficulties Available:

Awake (2.58 stars, 365 notes)
Starr's Normal (1.66 stars, 231 notes)

Download: Savoir Adore - Dreamers
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Gaia__

Karen

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#15

Starr's Normal by StarrStyx

Awake by Chaoslitz

Last edited by Chaoslitz 2019-09-25T07:04:06+00:00, edited 25 times in total.

Starfy

1,046 posts

Joined November 2012

Starfy 2015-07-21T11:26:25+00:00

As your request

[General]
-Offset should be +7032
-Close Widescreens Support
-Close Enable countdown

[Starr's Normal]
-HP=4 is more appropriate
-The rhythm density of the map seems..too low actually
-00:27:529 (4) - Try to make a more symmetric slider
-00:29:285 (6) - Placed more left can improve the flow
-00:29:285 (6) - NC
-00:30:163 (8) - This slider skipped some important beat such as 00:30:456, 00:31:042
-00:33:383 (6,1) - Switch their combo
-00:36:310 (4) - The slider is too straight here. Maybe try this=>http://puu.sh/j7dWT/1742b16fb4.jpg It can improve the flow
-00:39:822 (9) - The flow here is really strange, why not ctrl+H the slider to make a good flow to connect 00:38:651 (8,1) -
-00:42:163 (3) - Symmetric slider can make the direction become clearer and tidier
-00:45:676 (1,2,3) - The flow is too straight, it makes a bit of weird
-00:48:602 (6) - Try => http://puu.sh/j7ei3/32516b77b3.jpg It looks much more tidier
-00:58:554 (6) - Place upper seems better
-00:58:554 (6,7,8) - I only can say the flow is weird, but anyway this is quite optional for you to consider
-01:00:895 (1) - Normal difficulty should not contain any SV change
-01:10:261 (1,2,3,4) - This kind of straight flow is not appropriate to be placed
-01:12:602 (5,6) - Why not make the same rhythm of 01:10:261 (1,2,3,4) - ?
-01:16:115 Add a note to connect the rhythm
-01:19:627 (1) - Useless timing point should be deleted
-01:20:798 (2,3) - Consider to make a curve slider to increase the flow
-01:23:139 (5,6,7,1) - Same as above, this kind of straight flow is not really appropriate to be placed
-01:26:359 Add a note here can connect the rhythm effectively
-01:31:042 (4) - It touches 01:30:163 (3) - , try to avoid this because this is quite ugly
-01:35:432 (5,6) - Why suddenly stacked?
-01:40:700 (3) - This is quite ugly since there is a different orientation and curved slider before this slider
-01:43:042 (6) - As well
-01:46:554 (5) - The slider makes a weird flow
-01:47:724 (7) - Try => http://puu.sh/j7ggT/22937a9b43.jpg It looks more comfortable IO believe
-01:47:724 (7,8,1) - This stack is weird actually...
-01:48:895 (1) - This slider is too curved imo
-01:53:285 (7,8) - So hard to read for newbie, and also not good-looking
-01:54:749 (1) - I believe this slider can be more symmetric
-01:57:090 (4) - The blanket is too tight, and the blanket isn't good
-02:01:773 (7) - The blanket is too tight
-02:04:115 (1) - Normal difficulty should not contain any SV change
-02:04:115 (1,2,3) - Opinion, this is quite weird...Not the flow, but the shape
-02:06:456 (4) - This slider is too curved imo
-02:07:627 (6,7,1) - The flow is too straight as well, look not comfortable
-02:49:481 (5,6) - Switch these two notes to slider will make the pattern look a bit more better
-03:12:017 (1) - The curve of the slider is not really good... Try => http://puu.sh/j7ijw/409afc05b4.jpg
-03:14:359 (5) - The blanket can be improved
-03:16:115 (8,9,1) - The flow is too straight. Try => http://puu.sh/j7ioB/f083da2399.jpg
-03:17:871 (3,4) - Are you serious ._.? This is too hard for newbie to read and play the map
-03:31:920 (3,4) - This kind of pattern always appear in this map...A bit of boring maybe
-03:33:676 (2,3) - Why not blanket them?
-03:34:261 (3,4) - As well
-03:36:602 (1) - NC
-03:36:602 (7,8,9) - A bit of strange Try => http://puu.sh/j7iIF/7d9a9cccc0.jpg
03:44:798 (1) - Why so pro

[Awake]
-00:33:675 (3,4,5,6,7) - The stream can be curved a bit due to the better flow
-00:34:845 (8,1) - Make a better blanket
-00:51:090 (4) - Although this is not overmapped, this note is still a bit weird for me
-00:52:700 (4,5,6) - Make a prettier triangle please
-00:59:139 (2,3) - The blanket can be improved
-01:03:237 (1) - The slider can be more symmetric
-01:04:993 (4) - Why not make an alternate shape of 01:04:407 (3) -
-01:13:773 (3) - Place it lower can match more the circular which you are keeping
-01:14:944 (1) - Why not add a note before the spinner
-01:30:749 (6,7,1) - The triangle isn't perfect
-01:39:529 (3,4,5,6) - Square here is weird, at least for me
-01:45:383 (1) - Place the red control point left a bit to match the slider tail of 01:44:212 (4) -
-01:49:481 (5) - The note makes the flow become less smooth
-01:50:651 (2,3) -Captious mod, the blanket can be improved
-01:52:993 (2) - Try to move the red control point to the middle as near as possible, it will make the flow become more smooth
-01:54:311 (4) - Same as above, although this is not overmapped, this note is still a bit weird for me
-02:18:163 (1) - Same as above, why not add a note before the spinner
-02:25:188 (4) - Cool slider, but I think this slider is not really appropriate in the slow and soft vocal
-02:48:602 (1) - You know my meaning
-02:48:602 (1) - Totally opinion, the spinner can end at 02:50:944
-03:26:066 (1) - Yea
-03:28:846 (1,2) - This is quite easy to mislead the player since the note start at blue line
-03:33:822 (3) - Place lower can match more the flow

Gook luck

Last edited by Starfy 2015-07-21T14:48:54+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Nakano Itsuki

1,218 posts

Joined July 2014

Nakano Itsuki 2015-07-21T11:35:12+00:00

ww

StarFY

00:29:285 (6) - Keep consistent with the next combo color
00:33:383 (6,1) - 00:33:968 (1) - This seems to be the first beat of a new section more clearly.
00:36:310 (4) - No change since I don't really like the slider being tilted, plus it seems fine
00:48:602 (6) - seems good and tidy enough for me
00:58:554 (6,7,8) - should be fine actually
01:31:042 (4) - I don't see a problem with this, plus ppl won't really notice the overlapping anyway
01:40:700 (3) - no I gotta BE FANCY !!11!1!!1!!!!1!!11!!
01:43:042 (6) - same
01:46:554 (5) - Not really, as the velocity of the playing is rather slow, the player wont really feel any weirdness, plus it flows into the next slider perfectly
01:47:724 (7) - The antiflow is intentional
01:47:724 (7,8,1) - Well I see some maps have a similar look, so...
01:48:895 (1) - Well not much of a problem imo
01:57:090 (4) - I see no problem, though I adjusted the blanket a bit
02:01:773 (7) - same
03:14:359 (5) - too lazy too ;w; looks fine anyway
03:31:920 (3,4) - pls you're just stating the obvious - normal diffs ARE boring
03:36:602 (1) - I dont see the need for NC, plus I need to keep the consistency
03:36:602 (7,8,9) - I like this pattern, so no

Didn't apply any mods did between 01:00:895 to 01:28:407 (7) - and 02:04:115 (1) - to 03:10:846 due to removal of sv change and huge tweaks. You can recheck that part of you like ww

others changed
thanks 95

SPOILER

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Artist:Savoir Adore
ArtistUnicode:Savoir Adore
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Source:Our Nature
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Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Karen 2015-07-22T07:15:59+00:00

As your req

Normal

00:48:602 (6,7) - 避免这样的逆flow，让滑条尾巴方向指向note
01:00:310 (8,1) - 这可以blanket。。
01:16:407 (3,4) - 单独的两个就用滑条好了，用圈感觉不合适
01:30:163 (3,4) - 这overlap很不好看
01:47:724 (7,8) - ^
01:52:407 (6,8) - ^
01:56:505 (3,4) - ^
03:23:139 (4,5) - ^
01:48:895 (1,2) - 为什么突然变成1.4距离了
03:44:798 (1) - 这滑条肯定不行，必须要可以一眼看出轨迹
另外stack用的太多了，因为这是最低难度，不能太难，stack会增加难度，建议去掉些

Awake

03:34:700 (5,6) - 这跟前面一样overlap？保持一致好点
做的很好，找不出什么问题了:D

Normal还需要再改改

Nakano Itsuki

1,218 posts

Joined July 2014

Nakano Itsuki 2015-07-22T10:18:02+00:00

早知我等到有多點mod才開始改.-.

Kencho

952 posts

Joined August 2013

Kencho 2015-07-22T10:36:54+00:00

[General]

沒什麼好說的

[Starr's Normal]

每隔兩條大白線NC一次，現在這樣的NC太亂了
00:31:042 - 不建議漏，可以和後面00:31:334 (9) - 組成1/1滑條

00:48:602 (6,7,1) - 這樣的逆flow不太好

00:52:700 (3,4,5) - 這裡DS為何突然變成1.0x了，最低難度DS建議保持一致

01:00:310 (8) - DS

01:16:407 (3,4) - DS

後面還有一些DS問題，建議全部用1.2x DS重新放一次

01:52:407 (6,7,8) - 這種不建議在低難度用

03:44:798 (1) - 需要改一改，因為看不出軌跡，然後滑條可以延長到03:49:481 - ，這樣你就有空間重新拉一次了

[Awake]

01:04:407 (3) - ctrl+G

01:45:968 (2,3,4,5) - 這樣放flow會好點
SPOILER

02:01:773 (1,2,3) -
SPOILER

03:13:188 (3,4) - 這種3疊到4可能會好點

03:15:529 (3,4) - 03:18:017 (4) - 03:20:212 (3,4) - 03:22:554 (4,5) - 03:24:895 (3,4) - ^後面還有的也可以改

03:44:798 (1) - 轉盤建議拉到03:49:481 - 會好點

Good Luck~

Chaoslitz

Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder

2,307 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Chaoslitz 2015-07-22T16:37:32+00:00

StarForYou wrote:
As your request

[General]
-Offset should be +7032
-Close Widescreens Support
-Close Enable countdown

[Starr's Normal]
[Awake]
-00:33:675 (3,4,5,6,7) - The stream can be curved a bit due to the better flow
-00:34:845 (8,1) - Make a better blanket
-00:51:090 (4) - Although this is not overmapped, this note is still a bit weird for me i think it is fine
-00:52:700 (4,5,6) - Make a prettier triangle please
-00:59:139 (2,3) - The blanket can be improved
-01:03:237 (1) - The slider can be more symmetric um no need
-01:04:993 (4) - Why not make an alternate shape of 01:04:407 (3) - ?
-01:13:773 (3) - Place it lower can match more the circular which you are keeping
-01:14:944 (1) - Why not add a note before the spinner this is fine i think
-01:30:749 (6,7,1) - The triangle isn't perfect
-01:39:529 (3,4,5,6) - Square here is weird, at least for me no problem i believe
-01:45:383 (1) - Place the red control point left a bit to match the slider tail of 01:44:212 (4) -
-01:49:481 (5) - The note makes the flow become less smooth why?
-01:50:651 (2,3) -Captious mod, the blanket can be improved
-01:52:993 (2) - Try to move the red control point to the middle as near as possible, it will make the flow become more smooth
-01:54:311 (4) - Same as above, although this is not overmapped, this note is still a bit weird for me ^
-02:18:163 (1) - Same as above, why not add a note before the spinner ^
-02:25:188 (4) - Cool slider, but I think this slider is not really appropriate in the slow and soft vocal lol why
-02:48:602 (1) - You know my meaning ^
-02:48:602 (1) - Totally opinion, the spinner can end at 02:50:944 let people relax in the best preview point \:D/
-03:26:066 (1) - Yea
-03:28:846 (1,2) - This is quite easy to mislead the player since the note start at blue line so I am placing it near centre, and it is following the music
-03:33:822 (3) - Place lower can match more the flow

Gook luck

Karen wrote:
Awake
03:34:700 (5,6) - 这跟前面一样overlap？保持一致好点
做的很好，找不出什么问题了:D
Normal还需要再改改

Kencho wrote:
[Awake]
01:04:407 (3) - ctrl+G

01:45:968 (2,3,4,5) - 這樣放flow會好點不想有跳ww
SPOILER

02:01:773 (1,2,3) -
SPOILER

03:13:188 (3,4) - 這種3疊到4可能會好點現在的我覺得還好

03:15:529 (3,4) - 03:18:017 (4) - 03:20:212 (3,4) - 03:22:554 (4,5) - 03:24:895 (3,4) - ^後面還有的也可以改不了我覺得現在不錯

03:44:798 (1) - 轉盤建議拉到03:49:481 - 會好點也太長;w;
Good Luck~

no comment=fixed
thanks !!

sjoy

1,025 posts

Joined April 2012

sjoy 2015-07-23T13:18:31+00:00

[Starr's Normal]
00:25:178 (1) - 其实这种节奏滑条不是很好用，重要在尾巴大白线上，一般来说滑条的用法都是重音在前的
00:28:690 (5) - NC
00:43:617 漏音，这里567都是一致的
00:59:714 (7) - 这个位置给我感觉很莫名吧
01:14:934 (1,2) - 合成滑条
01:23:129 (5,6) - ^
01:27:812 (5,6) - 这里没有必要强调单点
01:45:373 (3) - 这里NC
02:13:471 (1) - FIN
02:18:153 (1) - 改成滑条
03:14:349 (5) - 其实这种重音滑条都能加WHIS的
[Awake]
00:33:957 (5) - 去掉会不会更带感点
01:37:178 (5) - 同上
01:51:228 (3) - 头WHIS
01:52:397 (1) - ^
01:58:251 (4) - ^
02:13:471 (1) - FIN
02:28:105 (2) - WHIS
03:12:592 (2,3) - 这种距离给人感觉是连起来的
03:14:349 (1) - WHIS
03:16:690 (1) - WHIS
03:17:275 (2,3) - 03:12:592 (2,3)
03:19:032 (1) - WHIS
03:23:714 (1) - WHIS
03:33:666 (2,3) - 这里2连感觉不太合适
好像没什么问题祝飞

Nakano Itsuki

1,218 posts

Joined July 2014

Nakano Itsuki 2015-07-23T14:16:05+00:00

Karen

01:16:407 (3,4) - 我哪裡有圈子.-. 可能是舊版本吧
01:56:505 (3,4) - 其實是Blanket太緊 w 已經放遠一點
01:48:895 (1,2) - 我想新版本應該沒有了

Kencho

00:48:602 (6,7,1) - 我覺得沒什麼問題，不過把slider ctrl+j了
01:52:407 (6,7,8) - 在Karen mod裡fix了
另外already fix ds

候補:

sjoy

00:59:714 (7) - 剛剛把整個map ds從頭做過，所以這個應該也改了

01:14:934 (1,2) - 但合成的話怪怪的，而且也太長了吧
01:23:129 (5,6) - 01:23:129 和 01:23:714 有重音
01:27:812 (5,6) - 我還是覺得強調好點

others fixed
thx

asdf

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 171080
Countdown: 0
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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.3

[Metadata]
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ArtistUnicode:Savoir Adore
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Chaoslitz

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Chaoslitz 2015-07-23T15:31:04+00:00

sjoy wrote:
[Awake]
00:33:957 (5) - 去掉会不会更带感点 5連我覺得沒問題
01:37:178 (5) - 同上
01:51:228 (3) - 头WHIS
01:52:397 (1) - ^
01:58:251 (4) - ^
02:13:471 (1) - FIN
02:28:105 (2) - WHIS
03:12:592 (2,3) - 这种距离给人感觉是连起来的整張diff都統一ds owo
03:14:349 (1) - WHIS
03:16:690 (1) - WHIS
03:17:275 (2,3) - 03:12:592 (2,3)
03:19:032 (1) - WHIS
03:23:714 (1) - WHIS
03:33:666 (2,3) - 这里2连感觉不太合适跟drum
好像没什么问题祝飞

other fixed
我盡快會摸你圖;w;

RVMathew

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RVMathew 2015-07-23T18:09:42+00:00

Nice Background!

Chaoslitz

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Topic Starter

Chaoslitz 2015-07-24T08:16:31+00:00

RVMathew wrote:
Nice Background!

thanks!

and thanks for your stars <3

RVMathew

985 posts

Joined December 2013

RVMathew 2015-07-24T14:13:44+00:00

Chaoslitz wrote:
RVMathew wrote:
Nice Background!
thanks!

and thanks for your stars <3

That's exactly why I gave the stars. I had that as my desktop bg a few months before, so you needed stars for that lel.

By the way, are you accepting guest diffs?

Chaoslitz

Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder

2,307 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Chaoslitz 2015-07-25T04:39:49+00:00

RVMathew wrote:
That's exactly why I gave the stars. I had that as my desktop bg a few months before, so you needed stars for that lel.

By the way, are you accepting guest diffs?

uwu I think two diffs is enough for this

RVMathew

985 posts

Joined December 2013

RVMathew 2015-07-25T06:56:47+00:00

Chaoslitz wrote:
RVMathew wrote:
That's exactly why I gave the stars. I had that as my desktop bg a few months before, so you needed stars for that lel.

By the way, are you accepting guest diffs?
uwu I think two diffs is enough for this

I see. Good luck.

Nakano Itsuki

1,218 posts

Joined July 2014

Nakano Itsuki 2015-07-25T07:16:03+00:00

uwu

-Mo-

Nomination Assessment Team

953 posts

Joined December 2012

-Mo- 2015-07-26T15:20:54+00:00

Hello, slightly late;

Starr's Normal
- 00:25:178 (1,2) - In my opinion, this anacrusis doesn't feel very intuitive to play on a Normal difficulty, since it uses a red tick pattern straight out, although there isn't much choice to change it to, so leaving it should be fine.
- 00:27:519 (5) - I noticed you used these sliders a lot, where they go over 1/1 and finish on the downbeat. I would personally recommend that you add a hard note on the downbeat (i.e. a circle or new slider at 00:28:105 (1)) since I think that beat should have more emphasis.
- 00:36:300 (4,5,6,7) - This rhythm is a bit more advanced compared to what you've mapped so far, and it seems to come out of nowhere. Perhaps change it to a rhythm that's a bit more intuitive to play?

Example

- 00:42:153 (3) - I think the new combo should be on this note, since this note is where the downbeat is, and is where you placed the finish.
- 00:46:836 (3) - Make this a slider to match the vocals of the song.
- 01:26:641 (3,4,5,6) - I personally wouldn't recommend using stacks in a Normal difficulty, especially since this is going to be the easiest difficulty in the mapset.
- 01:31:032 (4,5) - As above. If you are going to use stacks, I would rather you use them to highlight something. I won't mention it again since it comes up again a couple of times.
- 03:37:763 (9) - New combo since the current one spans over too many measures.

Awake
- 00:25:178 (1) - I would have the first note in the map be a 1/2 so that the rhythm is easier to pick up right off, since an extended slider can be confusing to start with. I understand that the extended matches the vocals more accurately though.
- 00:48:007 (3,4) - Minor: These seem to be very slightly divergent. Not sure if it's intended, but I think having them be parallel would look better.

Example

This diff. seems fairly clean to me.

Good luck

GIDZ

1,002 posts

Joined January 2013

GIDZ 2015-07-27T06:23:14+00:00

General:
I agree with this but no.

Starr's normal:
Not much to say here.... Errr, I think you can utilise more curved sliders than straight sliders and fix some overlapping notes.

Awake:
01:40:397 (6,7,1) - Abit of overlap with previous note.
03:10:836 - I dun feel the difference between Kiai and no Kiai. I think you can space notes abit further?
03:47:422 - Add spinner here since the vocal increases volume until 03:49:471 .

._. I dun think this is helpful but that's all I can find.

Starfy

1,046 posts

Joined November 2012

Starfy 2015-07-27T06:57:24+00:00

- G I D Z - wrote:
General:
I agree with this but no.

"I agree with this but no" Gallery confirmed

Starfall9908

663 posts

Joined November 2013

Starfall9908 2015-07-27T15:09:38+00:00

As Chaosmoe requested :3

[Normal]

00:43:910 (6,7) - this overlap isn't beautiful ;_;
02:46:836 (2) - this slider is curved too much

[Awake]

00:28:983 (3,4) - Blanket

Sorry for such a short mod ;__; The map is nearly perfect. I still think it needs some work in some parts but I'm pretty unsure about it so I'll leave it to future modders.

Good luck~

pishifat

osu! Paragon

3,802 posts

Joined August 2013

pishifat 2015-07-28T19:14:47+00:00

slidertick4 is unused

[hard]

01:19:617 - 02:53:275 - your break extensions aren't snapped
01:40:106 (5,6,7,1) - 00:55:617 (6,7,8,1) - 01:58:836 (5,6,7,1) - and a few other places -- spacing is screwed up because of the stack. super weird to see since your distance snapping makes these couple instances almost overlap, yet adjusting them to be more properly spaced is really easy
03:23:568 (7) - unsnapped by 4ms lol.
01:12:592 (1) - tail whistle tho
01:49:471 (5) - 01:56:495 (6) - normalsamplesetz

good stuff

[normal]

00:29:861 (3) - 00:43:910 (6) - 01:49:471 (2) - 01:54:153 (8) - 03:16:105 (8) - 03:26:056 (1) - normalsampleset
02:18:739 (2) - whistle
02:39:227 (5,6) - claps on tails
01:52:397 (6) - for whatever reason the map is full of catmull sliders, which make any curves that are supposed to be exact (like every blanket) gross
01:41:861 (4,5) - 00:52:983 (4,5) - 03:14:349 (5,6) - etc. because of super compact spacing, any slight inconsistencies can cause minor overlaps between objects. lowering the circle size to 3.5 or something would be the easiest solution, or you could go through and adjust any superclosespacings which is a pain
01:36:007 (6,7,1) - 03:23:714 (5,6,7) - related to the previous point; because of giant circles + low spacing, there's some stuff like this that overlaps when it's not supposed to. spacing them out with the stack in mind would be a good idea
00:57:373 (5,6) - this sort of object arrangement is way too confusing, since it could easily be interpreted as the tail being the next object 1/2 away from (5). can't really find another solution other than finding some more appropriate placement
01:44:788 (9,1) - overlaps over sliderbodies usually work fine, like 03:27:812 (4,5) - , but this one not so much. would be a lot better to avoid overlapping 9's tail with 1's tail
01:48:885 (1,3) - 01:54:739 (1,3) - etc. there's a lot of places where you've got objects on top of each other when not overlapping them is easily an option that appears much cleaner.
01:00:300 (8) - 02:03:519 (9) - adding a circle on the following white tick or converting these to 1/2 sliders would better express the dense percussion than just a single circle on the start of a drumroll.

from a design perspective, i'm not really a fan of the difficulty. it's probably my dislike of sliders curved beyond the point where you can see their bodies clearly, like 02:46:836 (2) - 01:33:666 (3) - , which is just an aesthetic choice that i can't really try to convince you to change.

drgdg fgdsgfsd gfsaf

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,225 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2015-07-29T03:39:16+00:00

really basic stupid bad mod from me because I suck at modding and you both are better mappers than me.

[General]

[All .osu Files]

Tags
MOAR TAGS, too boring

[Awake]

Breaks
02:53:285 - The break here is 16651 ms long, which is longer than the recommended 15000 ms. (nazi mod but no one listens to this anyways ufufu)

Snapping
03:23:572 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
AIMod pls ;w;

[Starr's Normal]

Breaks
02:53:475 - The break here is 16041 ms long, which is longer than the recommended 15000 ms.
Consider adding a break before 01:55:178. (uwu don't listen to this)

Notes
00:32:202 (5,6) - Would consider changing the shape of the slider for better flow, but then again, what do I know about flow =w=.
01:26:641 (3,4,5,6) - would try to find a way to make this better without stacking the notes. I dunno really, it just feels too slow to be stacked. Again, don't feel like you have to change this, because I suck and this is simply opinion ;w;
03:42:446 (1,2) - ^

Severe lack of deathstreams, I am disappoint.

Again, sorry for really bad mod, probably not kds worthy. 3/4 of it is my own shitmapper opinion. \o/

sorry for bad englando pls no copi pastarino my story

Nakano Itsuki

1,218 posts

Joined July 2014

Nakano Itsuki 2015-07-29T03:44:16+00:00

Uh ok
Reserved for all replies

(I feel like my normal is shit...)

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,225 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2015-07-29T03:50:02+00:00

StarrStyx wrote:
Uh ok
Reserved for all replies

(I feel like my normal is shit...)

if you want to feel better just look at my maps ;w;

Nickoloui

60 posts

Joined August 2013

Nickoloui 2015-08-03T06:59:52+00:00

Hello, from your modding team queue (M4M)

[General]
Really nice mapset and tune, Awake diff barely had anything I could notice in fixing D:

[Starr's Normal]
00:26:349 (3,5) - Invisible overlap but maybe you can blanket these?
00:53:275 (5) - Curve upwards maybe?
00:57:373 (5,6) - Sliderends kinda stack here I don't know if you wanted that
01:18:446 (5,6) - Just an idea Ctrl + G these and re-locate them? Listen to the tune at this part and do what you think is best ~
02:36:885 (1) - I'm not sure but I wouldn't suggest starting with a circle after a break in Normal diff's, kinda hard for rookies to sync in. Maybe the music allows a slider here give it a try
02:42:446 You can add a circle here

[Awake]
00:37:470 (1,2) - Switch slider curve for better flow? Like this and maybe move the first slider a bit away from the note 00:36:884 (5) - because it overlaps just a bit
01:58:251 (4,5) - Stack note on sliderend?
02:36:007 (5) - Make this a reverse slider instead and delete 02:36:592 (6) - ? Feels better imho
03:23:572 (7) - This isn't snapped! Aimod it :3

That's all from me hope I've helped, good luck!

Loony

226 posts

Joined October 2014

Loony 2015-08-03T13:51:18+00:00

[Starr's Normal]

00:46:836 (3,6) - Overlap, I would stack them, or generally fix this. It will look better imo.
00:48:592 (6,1) - I would also fix this blanket. It's an estethical fix.
00:57:373 (5,6) - They should be exactly the same, so just copy the 5th slider and paste it in a place where 6th is. Then rotate, etc. The 6th slider just needs fixing, because it's shape isn't perfect.
01:07:910 (4,1) - Blanket fix in need.
01:19:032 (6,1) - This blanket could be improved. I mean, more milder curve.
01:52:397 (6) - This slider also needs improving. It's irregularly curved.
01:54:739 (1,3) - I don't like this overlapp. Maybe fix it?
01:58:251 (1) - Also problem with the slider.
02:36:885 (1,3) - Overlapp that could be avoided again.
02:39:227 (5,6) - DS PROBLEM! Necessary to fix!
02:43:910 (4) - Slider could be improved again.

That's all. Good luck!

Chaoslitz

Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder

2,307 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Chaoslitz 2015-08-03T15:10:46+00:00

-Mo- wrote:
Awake
- 00:25:178 (1) - I would have the first note in the map be a 1/2 so that the rhythm is easier to pick up right off, since an extended slider can be confusing to start with. I understand that the extended matches the vocals more accurately though. I think it is fine since it is following vocal
- 00:48:007 (3,4) - Minor: These seem to be very slightly divergent. Not sure if it's intended, but I think having them be parallel would look better.
Example
fixed

This diff. seems fairly clean to me.

Good luck

- G I D Z - wrote:
Awake:
01:40:397 (6,7,1) - Abit of overlap with previous note. fixed
03:10:836 - I dun feel the difference between Kiai and no Kiai. I think you can space notes abit further? i use ds in the whole map :3
03:47:422 - Add spinner here since the vocal increases volume until 03:49:471 . nah it should be fine

._. I dun think this is helpful but that's all I can find.

nadapan wrote:
[Awake]
00:28:983 (3,4) - Blanket fixed
[/notice]

Sorry for such a short mod ;__; The map is nearly perfect. I still think it needs some work in some parts but I'm pretty unsure about it so I'll leave it to future modders.

Good luck~

pishifat wrote:
slidertick4 is unused fixed

[hard]
01:19:617 - 02:53:275 - your break extensions aren't snapped fixed
01:40:106 (5,6,7,1) - 00:55:617 (6,7,8,1) - 01:58:836 (5,6,7,1) - and a few other places -- spacing is screwed up because of the stack. super weird to see since your distance snapping makes these couple instances almost overlap, yet adjusting them to be more properly spaced is really easy hmm i still prefer stacking triplets, will consider about it
03:23:568 (7) - unsnapped by 4ms lol. oops lol fixed
01:12:592 (1) - tail whistle tho fixed
01:49:471 (5) - 01:56:495 (6) - normalsamplesetz fixed
good stuff

Ascendance wrote:
really basic stupid bad mod from me because I suck at modding and you both are better mappers than me.

[General]

[All .osu Files]
Tags
MOAR TAGS, too boring lol i want to, but i cant find anything to add :/

[Awake]
Breaks
02:53:285 - The break here is 16651 ms long, which is longer than the recommended 15000 ms. (nazi mod but no one listens to this anyways ufufu) ayy should be fine

Snapping
03:23:572 (7) - Unsnapped circle. fixed
AIMod pls ;w;

Severe lack of deathstreams, I am disappoint.[/notice]

[ Shark ] wrote:
Hello, from your modding team queue (M4M)

[General]
Really nice mapset and tune, Awake diff barely had anything I could notice in fixing D:

[Awake]
00:37:470 (1,2) - Switch slider curve for better flow? Like this and maybe move the first slider a bit away from the note 00:36:884 (5) - because it overlaps just a bit hmm i think the current flow is fine
01:58:251 (4,5) - Stack note on sliderend? why? D:
02:36:007 (5) - Make this a reverse slider instead and delete 02:36:592 (6) - ? Feels better imho I don't feel like adding a reverse slider after a long slider
03:23:572 (7) - This isn't snapped! Aimod it :3 fixed

That's all from me hope I've helped, good luck!

Thanks you all for mod!

@pishi
Sorry that i still havent mod you map, I will mod it asap uwu

Giralda

1,008 posts

Joined August 2012

Giralda 2015-08-07T23:48:26+00:00

Hey~

[Starr's Normal]

00:37:763 (7) - Might want to double check your combos here.
02:40:397 (6) - Inconsistent spacing here (0.61x)
00:36:300 (4,5,6) - Hmm I'd like to suggest to change the rhythm here since I don't particularly agree with a sudden increase in object density, especially due to the fact this rhythm repeats itself three times, so changing it to this would be more appropriate: http://puu.sh/jtkKV/9d0ae85be8.jpg
00:57:373 (5,6) - Minor overlap on the sliderends here that doesn't look too pleasant.
01:00:300 (8) - Missed a clap here.
01:17:275 (4) - The finish on the head doesn't sound too great here. Probably resulted from the finish at the end of the spinner in the Awake difficulty through hitsound copier. I'd recommend removing it as it doesn't seem fitting, but it makes more sense at the end of the spinner on the other diff.
01:36:885 (7,1) - Default stack leniency causes the placement of 01:36:885 (7) to be offset slightly upwards, which causes a minor overlap while playing: http://puu.sh/jtkqY/c86bd57451.jpg Would be best to unstack the two objects.
01:10:251 (1) - You had a finish at 02:13:471 (1) but you didn't have one here, so adding one would be most appropriate.

Good luck~ ^^

Nakano Itsuki

1,218 posts

Joined July 2014

Nakano Itsuki 2015-08-13T00:20:48+00:00

Mo

regarding stacks, I adjusted all the stacks to be only 1/2 apart from next note

nadapan

00:43:910 (6,7) - maybe I fixed it already since I can't see the overlap

pishimoe

00:29:861 (3) - 00:43:910 (6) - 01:49:471 (2) - 01:54:153 (8) - 03:16:105 (8) - 03:26:056 (1) - sound weird .-.
02:18:739 (2) - ^same
01:52:397 (6) - Fixed them, had no idea why they existed lol
00:57:373 (5,6) - Fixed in previous mod
01:00:300 (8) - 02:03:519 (9) - imo these are okay; doing a 1/2 feels weird somehow

Shark

00:26:349 (3,5) - Edited this in previous mod
00:53:275 (5) - Pointing upwards already
01:18:446 (5,6) - edited the whole part into another slider instead.
02:42:446 I dont feel the need to

Loony

00:57:373 (5,6) - Fixed this in a previous mod in another way
01:07:910 (4,1) - I think it's okay Im too lazy to do it
01:19:032 (6,1) - ^same
01:54:739 (1,3) - Not really visible and notable while playing
02:36:885 (1,3) - Fixed in previous mod
02:43:910 (4) - Might have been fixed in previous mod, don't remember

Giralda

00:37:763 (7) - NC at 00:37:471 (1) - instead
02:40:397 (6) - Fixed in previous mod
00:57:373 (5,6) - Changed this in previous mod
01:36:885 (7,1) - I intended for that to be stacked lol

so I stopped being lazy and added these mods =w=
btw others are fixed
thx for them ^o^

asdf

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Dreamers.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 171080
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 25178
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.3

[Metadata]
Title:Dreamers
TitleUnicode:Dreamers
Artist:Savoir Adore
ArtistUnicode:Savoir Adore
Creator:Chaoslitz
Version:Starr's Normal
Source:Our Nature
Tags:PES2013 StarrStyx
BeatmapID:745231
BeatmapSetID:336770

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.3
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Karen 2015-08-16T05:58:31+00:00

[Normal]

很多滑條彎的太過頭了，比如00:40:983 (4) - 00:43:910 (4) -
00:30:446 - 這里為什麼加clap，00:31:032 - 這裡應該加
00:36:885 - 漏clap
00:38:056 - ^
00:43:910 - ^
00:47:422 - ^
00:46:836 (3) - 這個滑條尾巴彎一下沒有任何意義。。光標又不會移到尾巴上，而且這一點都不好看，弄成00:56:202 (3) - 還比較好看
00:58:544 (6,7,8) - 換成這樣吧，
SPOILER
01:13:178 - 漏whistle
01:14:349 - 01:15:519 - 01:16:690 - ^
01:27:227 - 01:28:397 - clap
01:49:471 - clap
01:54:153 - ^
02:18:739 - whistle
02:19:910 - ^
03:16:105 - clap
03:26:641 - clap
03:33:373 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - 這一大堆全是圍在一個地方放，太擠了，這次就算了，下次注意好了;w;

@jiang 要bubble的話我來qua

Nakano Itsuki

1,218 posts

Joined July 2014

Nakano Itsuki 2015-08-17T02:27:38+00:00

All fixed thx ;w;
chaos的圖果然是我試做ENH一個好的實驗場

asdf

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