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Depths

Joined January 2014

Depths 2015-04-10T02:02:00+00:00

from my queue

Hard

01:19:570 why not map this?

01:36:090 (1) - ctl+g flows better, having this pattern 01:35:331 (1,2,3,4) - makes it feel a little unexpected

01:39:888 (1) - ctl+g

Insane

01:28:116 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I feel like you're over stressing this part with the spacing decrease it a little

01:34:381 (4,5,6) - maybe remove the slider and make a small pattern here to emphasis vocal

such a short mod, hope it helps cool set~

Shadren

Featured Artist

531 posts

Joined March 2011

Shadren 2015-04-10T13:28:11+00:00

[Veyron's Normal]
imo, AR 5 will better
00:13:115 (3) - here must start slider
00:14:634 (3) - same
00:27:355 (2) - try to make it higher (Y:44 for example)
what about spinner at the end of song?

[Insane]
00:10:266 (5) - try to remove one of repeat and place at white tick note http://puu.sh/h8yDv/ce62748f5a.jpg
00:22:418 (1,2) - slider will be better (1/2), imo, also it fits vocal
00:23:178 (5) -wierd 3/4 slider. Maybe just 1/2 will better?
00:35:330 (4) - here you can use 3/4 slider, up to you
00:44:823 (6,7) - I here there triplet
00:45:203 (1) - and here too
01:03:431 - try to not use spinner in kiai

Cerulean Veyron

2,090 posts

Joined August 2012

Cerulean Veyron 2015-04-10T14:20:05+00:00

Forgot to check this omg D:

nadapan wrote:
[Veyron's Normal]
00:16:342 - 00:28:494 - Why is Norml the only diff with no Kiai mode between those two points? I guess it's fine a GD has a different kiai than the mapper has, still probably rankable.
00:26:596 - 00:28:304 - I can't hear th hitsounds here. Please raise the Hitsound volume a bit Well, song track is likely calm, so the hitsounds should be too.
01:41:406 (4) - I can't hear the hitsound here. ^

I'm really sorry if i haven't apply any of your mod, but i hope you understand soon enough. Thanks for reviewing my diff.

Shadren wrote:
[Veyron's Normal]
imo, AR 5 will better It'd be a bit harsh for players, imo.
00:13:115 (3) - here must start slider Okay
00:14:634 (3) - same I guess this one is fine, song track is quite enough of it, so i'll keep this.
00:27:355 (2) - try to make it higher (Y:44 for example) Okay, dragged it nearby.
what about spinner at the end of song? I don't think a spinner fit there. So i've just added a circle.

Thanks for modding my diff. Although fixed only a few.

Updated diff http://puu.sh/h8Br9/7d5612e6b6.rar

Skyhmer

372 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Skyhmer 2015-04-10T17:55:06+00:00

nadapan's mod

nadapan wrote:
M4M (Thank you for the mod)

[Easy]
00:06:089 (2) - blanket is off Fixed
01:36:849 (2) - ^ Fixed
[Veyron's Normal]
00:16:342 - 00:28:494 - Why is Norml the only diff with no Kiai mode between those two points?
00:26:596 - 00:28:304 - I can't hear th hitsounds here. Please raise the Hitsound volume a bit
01:41:406 (4) - I can't hear the hitsound here.
[Hard]
00:29:254 (3) - curve this a bit Gave me a nice idea, changed.
01:18:431 (3) - ^ I like the simplicity
01:30:583 (1) - blanket is a bit off Fixed

It ended up being a small mod (I hope this mod was useful >-<)
Caught some obvious mistakes so it was worth it~
Good luck ranking this map

Its Depth's mod

Its Depths wrote:
from my queue

Hard

01:19:570 why not map this? No real reason. It's easily mappable but since is a soft part and the localist stop, I thought it would be nice.

01:36:090 (1) - ctl+g flows better, having this pattern 01:35:331 (1,2,3,4) - makes it feel a little unexpected Done

01:39:888 (1) - ctl+g Done

Insane

01:28:116 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I feel like you're over stressing this part with the spacing decrease it a little For now I think it works but I'll remember it if its mentioned again in the future.

01:34:381 (4,5,6) - maybe remove the slider and make a small pattern here to emphasis vocal Agreed. Changed

such a short mod, hope it helps cool set~
Helped me changed one of the uglier parts of the map so this was very valued.

Shadren's mod

Shadren wrote:
[Veyron's Normal]
imo, AR 5 will better
00:13:115 (3) - here must start slider
00:14:634 (3) - same
00:27:355 (2) - try to make it higher (Y:44 for example)
what about spinner at the end of song?

[Insane]
00:10:266 (5) - try to remove one of repeat and place at white tick note http://puu.sh/h8yDv/ce62748f5a.jpg Done, I think someone mentioned this earlier and I read it wrong >.<
00:22:418 (1,2) - slider will be better (1/2), imo, also it fits vocal Done
00:23:178 (5) -wierd 3/4 slider. Maybe just 1/2 will better? I think it will do for now
00:35:330 (4) - here you can use 3/4 slider, up to you I only use the 3/4 slider at specific parts of the song.
00:44:823 (6,7) - I here there triplet I prefer it as it is
00:45:203 (1) - and here too I can't really hear anything that would be a triplet
01:03:431 - try to not use spinner in kiai Done

Ty all for the mods!
And thanks for the stars DahplA!

_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 2015-04-10T20:38:38+00:00

HI from my M4M queue

After looking over it I thought you could use a finish at these times in all 4 diff's. 00:22:418 (1), 00:58:875 (1) and 01:35:330 (1)

Easy
Cant find any faults

Normal
00:21:660 (3) - I know you were mapping the drum but I feel like this is a great opportunity to map the vocals and turn this into a reverse slider. Just my opinion though
00:22:418 (1) - If you plan on doing the above start this at 00:22:798 and take out the reverse

Hard
01:25:836 (5) - Placing this on the tail takes a bit away from the flow for me

Insane
00:10:266 (1) -I thought it would be better to have this placed above (5) around the coordiantes (304x , 280y). Then adjust all the other notes afterwards
00:21:850 (5) - Try this section without this note and see if you like it.

It was a very small mod from me but only because this map is near enough perfect. Deserves a star imo. GL getting this ranked

Shiro

Global Moderator

4,984 posts

Joined May 2009

Shiro 2015-04-12T10:17:17+00:00

I'm about half done with my diff (Extra). You'll like it =P It's a lot like mirai button

Cerulean Veyron

2,090 posts

Joined August 2012

Cerulean Veyron 2015-04-12T12:52:01+00:00

Hi Im Nathan wrote:
Normal
00:21:660 (3) - I know you were mapping the drum but I feel like this is a great opportunity to map the vocals and turn this into a reverse slider. Just my opinion though I was following the vocals here either, but i don't think it needs it 1/2 reverse slider, it might ruin my rhythm. But thanks for your opinion.
00:22:418 (1) - If you plan on doing the above start this at 00:22:798 and take out the reverse Almost the same reason as above

I'm really sorry if i haven't changed anything throughout your mod :c but thanks for your opinions and reviewing over my diff.

Skyhmer

372 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Skyhmer 2015-04-13T01:25:04+00:00

Hi Im Nathan's mod

Hi Im Nathan wrote:
HI from my M4M queue

After looking over it I thought you could use a finish at these times in all 4 diff's. 00:22:418 (1), 00:58:875 (1) and 01:35:330 (1)
Sure, I added most of them.
Easy
Cant find any faults
Nice~

Normal
00:21:660 (3) - I know you were mapping the drum but I feel like this is a great opportunity to map the vocals and turn this into a reverse slider. Just my opinion though
00:22:418 (1) - If you plan on doing the above start this at 00:22:798 and take out the reverse

Hard
01:25:836 (5) - Placing this on the tail takes a bit away from the flow for me I might move it later but I really want the movement to start again when that insturment that I don't know the name of comes in at 01:26:406

Insane
00:10:266 (1) -I thought it would be better to have this placed above (5) around the coordiantes (304x , 280y). Then adjust all the other notes afterwards I see no reason to. Maybe deep down my mind doesn't want me to change this section but I really think that the cleanest placement would be to keep it on top of the slider at 00:09:887 (5)
00:21:850 (5) - Try this section without this note and see if you like it. That does fit more to the vocals but I know people would not like the empty feeling there.

It was a very small mod from me but only because this map is near enough perfect. Deserves a star imo. GL getting this ranked

Ty vm for the mod and star!
I'll be modding your map within 24 hours from this post hopefully.

Shiro wrote:
I'm about half done with my diff (Extra). You'll like it =P It's a lot like mirai button

Looking forward to it, I was hoping it would be jumpy as well.

Shiro

Global Moderator

4,984 posts

Joined May 2009

Shiro 2015-04-13T07:58:03+00:00

if you want jumps you're going to be happy

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363,324,40077,1,2,0:0:0:0:
495,127,40266,1,2,3:2:0:0:
257,111,40456,1,2,0:0:0:0:
125,308,40646,6,0,P|69:277|35:171,1,180.000006866455
151,193,41216,2,0,P|221:240|234:350,2,180.000006866455
125,308,42165,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,70,42735,1,0,0:0:0:0:
423,135,43115,2,0,P|372:207|282:251,1,180.000006866455
256,70,43684,6,0,P|133:88|76:211,1,270.000010299683
119,289,44444,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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301,151,45013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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39,245,47861,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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220,138,48811,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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213,328,52797,5,4,1:1:0:0:
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387,325,53368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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283,333,96469,1,8,1:1:0:0:
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256,192,102640,12,0,107482,0:0:0:0:

Don't forget to add Shiro and Odaril to the tags of all difficulties.

Spaghetti

1,118 posts

Joined August 2014

Spaghetti 2015-04-15T02:30:52+00:00

This map doesn't really need anymore mods but oh well, deny the KD if you want cuz I don't point out much.

comment, might just be my preference.
Recommended.
Highly Recommended.
Unrankable.

[Easy]

01:26:406 (1) - This slider is late a 4th, stretch it back.
Try to map more to the vocals, the lower difficulty, the more to the vocals you stick.

[Veyron's Normal]

00:35:900 (3) - This is a bit hard for a normal, try to avoid stacking on easier maps, especially with that slider behind it.
01:00:394 (1) - This slider would play better for newer players if it was pushed back a 4th and stretched to leave the end where it is now to match the vocals. (easier maps=map the vocals more, it's easier on the newer players and most of them will end up hitting the slider you have now early).
01:24:698 (1) - ^

[Hard]

00:09:887 - I'd place a note here and scoot the slider further in a 4th so you compliment the synth arpeggios better and lean into the straight beats after.
00:46:912 - Place a note here? It helps with the flow of the map.
00:48:052 (4) - Repeat this slider one time to compliment the vocals better and to help the flow.
00:58:495 (4) - One more repeat there would complete the drum fill.

[Insane]

00:39:318 (1,2) - This stack doesn't really serve a purpose, I'd space it out with a very short DS.

[Shiro's Extra]

00:26:596 (7,8,9,10,11) - Is something like this really neccesary? It just seems like a perfect way to shitmiss, especially since it's part of a shape. I reccomend you pace a straight stream that starts where those notes are and streams towards 00:26:406 (6) -

Great map! I hope you reach whatever goals you're aiming for!

Last edited by Spaghetti 2015-04-16T01:19:59+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Shiro

Global Moderator

4,984 posts

Joined May 2009

Shiro 2015-04-15T08:20:46+00:00

Spaghetti wrote:
[Shiro's Extra]
00:26:596 (7,8,9,10,11) - Is something like this really neccesary? It just seems like a perfect way to shitmiss, especially since it's part of a shape. I reccomend you pace a straight stream that starts where those notes are and streams towards 00:26:406 (6) - This shape goes with the sounds you can hear. I reduced the spacing so this is easily playable (and it is even with HR). This is easily playable by placing the cursor in the centre!
Great map! I hope you reach whatever goals you're aiming for!

Skyhmer

372 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Skyhmer 2015-04-15T20:28:27+00:00

Spaghetti's mod

Spaghetti wrote:

This map doesn't really need anymore mods but oh well, deny the KD if you want cuz I don't point out much.

comment, might just be my preference.
Recommended.
Highly Recommended.
Unrankable.

[Easy]
This slider is late a 4th, stretch it back. Which slider?!?
Try to map more to the vocals, the lower difficulty, the more to the vocals you stick. I debated about this when I finished making the easy. Ill keep this in mind when people give further suggestions.
[Veyron's Normal]
00:35:900 (3) - This is a bit hard for a normal, try to avoid stacking on easier maps, especially with that slider behind it.
01:00:394 (1) - This slider would play better for newer players if it was pushed back a 4th and stretched to leave the end where it is now to match the vocals. (easier maps=map the vocals more, it's easier on the newer players and most of them will end up hitting the slider you have now early).
01:24:698 (1) - ^
[Hard]
00:09:887 - I'd place a note here and scoot the slider further in a 4th so you compliment the synth arpeggios better and lean into the straight beats after. If this means the slider would be a 3/4th, then I think its kinda unnecessary for a hard diff, and doesn't sound exactly on point anyway.
00:46:912 - Place a note here? It helps with the flow of the map. This was mentioned before. Added
00:48:052 (4) - Repeat this slider one time to compliment the vocals better and to help the flow. Not really needed seeing as it would just fill up 00:48:621 and end on 00:48:812 (5) - which is already taken. This would just require me to remap this entire section or find an ugly design to flow back into the rest of the map
00:58:495 (4) - One more repeat there would complete the drum fill. Added
[Insane]
00:39:318 (1,2) - This stack doesn't really serve a purpose, I'd space it out with a very short DS. Maybe, but its just single 1/1 notes so stacking them imo looks the best. If someone brings this up again ill change it though.
[Shiro's Extra]
00:26:596 (7,8,9,10,11) - Is something like this really neccesary? It just seems like a perfect way to shitmiss, especially since it's part of a shape. I reccomend you pace a straight stream that starts where those notes are and streams towards 00:26:406 (6) -
Great map! I hope you reach whatever goals you're aiming for!

Ty for taking the time with out me even requesting, It's really appreciated~

Verlaren

Verlaren 2015-04-17T11:47:21+00:00

From my queue.

Easy
00:06:089 (3,1) - why here 0.75 DS? Please use "Distance snap" tool in this diff.

hidden pics

00:09:127 (2) - pls make a more symmetrical pattern
00:41:975 (2,3) - here it would be better to use 1/1 sliders
01:26:406 (1) - use here 1/1 slider.

Normal
00:54:128 (3) - remove circle
01:19:571 (4) - ^
01:22:609 (2,3) - change on slider

Hard
All difficulty should begin and end at the same time intervals. 00:00:013 (1) - remove spinner
01:31:818 (5) - remove circle
01:37:609 (5,1) - unstack these notes

Insane
00:00:013 (1) - same as in hard diff, remove spinner

Shiro's extra
00:00:013 (1) - same as in hard diff, remove spinner
map must be ended in 01:42:545

Skyhmer

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Skyhmer 2015-04-17T19:53:30+00:00

Verlaren wrote:
From my queue.

Easy
00:06:089 (3,1) - why here 0.75 DS? Please use "Distance snap" tool in this diff. Fixed earlier
hidden pics

00:09:127 (2) - pls make a more symmetrical pattern Fixed earlier
00:41:975 (2,3) - here it would be better to use 1/1 sliders It currently goes better with the vocals
01:26:406 (1) - use here 1/1 slider. I'd prefer it how it is for the sake of it being the easiest diff

Normal
00:54:128 (3) - remove circle
01:19:571 (4) - ^
01:22:609 (2,3) - change on slider

Hard
All difficulty should begin and end at the same time intervals. 00:00:013 (1) - remove spinner There's no rule against this as a far as I know especially if its only a spinner, and its quite clear that a spinner is appropriate due to the build up. I'll remove based on what the other GD mapper's say I guess
01:31:818 (5) - remove circle Removed
01:37:609 (5,1) - unstack these notes Done

Insane
00:00:013 (1) - same as in hard diff, remove spinner Same reason

Shiro's extra
00:00:013 (1) - same as in hard diff, remove spinner
map must be ended in 01:42:545

Ty for the mod~

Shiro

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Shiro 2015-04-18T11:15:19+00:00

Verlaren wrote:
Shiro's extra
00:00:013 (1) - same as in hard diff, remove spinner I find this spinner fitting, which is rare, because of the woosh sound in the beginning. I'd rather keep it.
map must be ended in 01:42:545 -

Although it is true that all diffs should start and end at the same spot, this is mostly about the mapper's own diffs. This being a guest difficulty, I have different views of where to start and end, so I'd rather keep them.

@mapper: 01:42:640 (1) - please extend this spinner by 1/4 and make it start on 01:42:545 - (and end at 01:47:482 - ) please, I'm not sure what happened with this spinner.
Also can you make 00:00:203 (1) - start 1/2 later and finish at the same spot ?
thanks :3

Cerulean Veyron

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Cerulean Veyron 2015-04-18T16:13:57+00:00

Sorry for a late reply, forgive me.

Spaghetti wrote:
[Veyron's Normal]
00:35:900 (3) - This is a bit hard for a normal, try to avoid stacking on easier maps, especially with that slider behind it. Okay
01:00:394 (1) - This slider would play better for newer players if it was pushed back a 4th and stretched to leave the end where it is now to match the vocals. (easier maps=map the vocals more, it's easier on the newer players and most of them will end up hitting the slider you have now early). I don't think it's THAT hard, since it's a normal diff and song is quite a little fast. I think it's still noticeable for players.
01:24:698 (1) - ^ ^

Verlaren wrote:
Normal
00:54:128 (3) - remove circle Why remove this circle? i was following a bit of vocals here.
01:19:571 (4) - ^ I'm following the little pianos.. idk.. on the song track, it can probably be heard.
01:22:609 (2,3) - change on slider Okay

Thanks both of you! Just some minor issues fixed.

Updated diff http://puu.sh/hiihQ/1b519897c9.rar

Skyhmer

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Skyhmer 2015-04-18T23:58:02+00:00

Shiro wrote:
@mapper: 01:42:640 (1) - please extend this spinner by 1/4 and make it start on 01:42:545 - (and end at 01:47:482 - ) please, I'm not sure what happened with this spinner.
Also can you make 00:00:203 (1) - start 1/2 later and finish at the same spot ?
thanks :3

Fixed for you

Shiro

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Shiro 2015-04-19T23:13:59+00:00

I wrote please twice = = anyway thanks

Nathan

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Nathan 2015-04-22T04:35:37+00:00

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Skyhmer

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Skyhmer 2015-04-24T01:28:52+00:00

sukiNathan wrote:
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Wow thats unexpected, I didn't even ask

Akitoshi

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Akitoshi 2015-04-24T17:46:34+00:00

random pick from #modreqs
Just ignore and Don't kds if my mod is bad.

[Easy]
-Unbalanced Distance spacing. I think use x1.0~x1.2
-Insufficient notes. kinda empty in some part.

00:48:051 (2) - not symmetrical with 00:46:722 (1) - Just copy first one and CTRL + H then CTRL + G. the fastest way.
01:20:140 - It's better to map this part since you used long break before.

Like This I guess

Sorry if my placing is too near, It's only an example and I used distance spacing = x1.0

01:25:836 - Add note here
01:33:431 - ^
01:26:406 (1) - Slider starts with 01:26:216 - and another suggestion.

01:36:469 - Add note.
01:37:988 - ^ Because we're on the kiai zone and it feels empty.
01:41:026 - Add note/make slider the 01:40:646 (3) -

[Veyron's Normal]
00:27:925 (3) - Let's move to 00:27:735 - So the "New Day" will exactly match with this slider.
Soo other part seems fine =w=)b

[Hard]
00:27:355 - 00:27:735 - Add some notes here. it feels empty.
01:11:027 (1) - Add clap in Slider's tail?
01:12:926 (2) - ^
01:14:445 (2) - ^

[Insane]
Recommended AR = 9
00:09:887 (5,1) - How about make them into stream?
00:27:355 - 00:27:735 - same with hard.
00:52:040 (3) - New Combo
01:15:584 (1) - wow. I recommend you'll map like:

01:24:888 (5) - New combo here

[Shiro's Extra]
-HP drain is pretty low. make them at least 6

00:26:596 (7,8,9,10,11) - Try to make stream here
01:21:849 (7) - New combo here.
01:24:507 (5) - ^
01:27:735 (9) - New combo here. It's pretty long

Well mapped. Goodluck!

Skyhmer

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Skyhmer 2015-04-24T20:09:24+00:00

[-AKiTOSHi-] wrote:
random pick from #modreqs
Just ignore and Don't kds if my mod is bad.

[Easy]
-Unbalanced Distance spacing. I think use x1.0~x1.2 Only DS 1.2 is used.
-Insufficient notes. kinda empty in some part.

00:48:051 (2) - not symmetrical with 00:46:722 (1) - Just copy first one and CTRL + H then CTRL + G. the fastest way. fixed
01:20:140 - It's better to map this part since you used long break before. All my other diffs don't map this part either. I find it fitting.
Like This I guess

Sorry if my placing is too near, It's only an example and I used distance spacing = x1.0
01:25:836 - Add note here Sure
01:33:431 - ^ ^
01:26:406 (1) - Slider starts with 01:26:216 - and another suggestion. I feel this is too much for easy

01:36:469 - Add note. Not enough emphasis in the song for easy imo
01:37:988 - ^ Because we're on the kiai zone and it feels empty. This one works.
01:41:026 - Add note/make slider the 01:40:646 (3) - I'd rather have enough space for the spinner

[Veyron's Normal]
00:27:925 (3) - Let's move to 00:27:735 - So the "New Day" will exactly match with this slider.
Soo other part seems fine =w=)b

[Hard]
00:27:355 - 00:27:735 - Add some notes here. it feels empty. Sounds really odd in the part of the music with only 2 notes, so I already choose to keep it empty(unless I did what shiro did but I believe that's too much for hard
01:11:027 (1) - Add clap in Slider's tail? Alright
01:12:926 (2) - ^ ^
01:14:445 (2) - ^ ^

[Insane]
Recommended AR = 9 Insane is already completely made with AR 8 in mind. If I change it I would definitely feel the need to change many patterns, which I'd rather not do.
00:09:887 (5,1) - How about make them into stream? . Either works, but for a relatively calm part I believe it would make more sense for a reverse slider then stream
00:27:355 - 00:27:735 - same with hard. Same reason. If its brought up again then I may try to work out something since its more then one person but my opinion still stands for now.
00:52:040 (3) - New Combo Done
01:15:584 (1) - wow. I recommend you'll map like: Sorry but I really like the way I did this

01:24:888 (5) - New combo here Done

[Shiro's Extra]
-HP drain is pretty low. make them at least 6
00:26:596 (7,8,9,10,11) - Try to make stream here
01:21:849 (7) - New combo here.
01:24:507 (5) - ^
01:27:735 (9) - New combo here. It's pretty long

Well mapped. Goodluck!

Thanks for the mod~

Nerova Riuz GX

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Nerova Riuz GX 2015-04-25T10:40:36+00:00

Shiro's Extra

00:10:077 (8,1) - Maybe you can increase their distance to emphasize note 1?
00:40:646 - to 00:49:760 - Follow the vocal line? Like add some notes on 00:41:406 - 00:42:355 - ......etc. Because I think it's the loudest sound here.
01:19:950 (1) - strange NC. you did NC here, but you didn't do NC on 01:25:646 (10) - . Why?

Insane

00:04:380 - missing note?
00:27:165 - a spinner here? you did a spinner when the vocal says "Now a new day" on 01:03:431 - .
00:38:748 (4) - replace this with two circles?
00:56:785 - missing note. this map have notes on 00:20:330 - and 01:33:241 - , so I suggest to add note here.
01:19:570 - a spinner here? you break here, but you didn't add a break between 01:25:646 - and 01:27:735 - .

That's it. Hard to find problems.
GL

Skyhmer

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Skyhmer 2015-04-25T13:23:57+00:00

Nerova Riuz GX's Mod

Nerova Riuz GX wrote:

Shiro's Extra
00:10:077 (8,1) - Maybe you can increase their distance to emphasize note 1?
00:40:646 - to 00:49:760 - Follow the vocal line? Like add some notes on 00:41:406 - 00:42:355 - ......etc. Because I think it's the loudest sound here.
01:19:950 (1) - strange NC. you did NC here, but you didn't do NC on 01:25:646 (10) - . Why?

Insane
00:04:380 - missing note? Thats in the middle of a slider. You may have selected the wrong spot D:
00:27:165 - a spinner here? you did a spinner when the vocal says "Now a new day" on 01:03:431 - . There would notes immediately after the spinner ending
00:38:748 (4) - replace this with two circles? Slider looks better imo.
00:56:785 - missing note. this map have notes on 00:20:330 - and 01:33:241 - , so I suggest to add note here. That makes sense, added
01:19:570 - a spinner here? you break here, but you didn't add a break between 01:25:646 - and 01:27:735 - . That's because the second part builds into the chorus so it would make sense to add notes. I'm going to add notes here anyway because everyone clearly wants this part to be filled no matter what

That's it. Hard to find problems.
GL

Ty for the mod!

Last edited by Skyhmer 2015-04-25T18:55:05+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Shiro

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Shiro 2015-04-25T18:26:24+00:00

[-AKiTOSHi-] wrote:
[Shiro's Extra]
-HP drain is pretty low. make them at least 6 I was worried about the passability of this on HR. Early testplays showed that failing this was stupidly easy, so I set HP to be fairly low.
00:26:596 (7,8,9,10,11) - Try to make stream here I'm not sure I understand this. It already is a stream ?_?
01:21:849 (7) - New combo here.
01:24:507 (5) - ^
01:27:735 (9) - New combo here. It's pretty long I'll just ignore those. People need to learn how to combo. <_<

Thanks for the mod!

Nerova Riuz GX wrote:
Shiro's Extra
00:10:077 (8,1) - Maybe you can increase their distance to emphasize note 1? That is actually a good idea.
00:40:646 - to 00:49:760 - Follow the vocal line? Like add some notes on 00:41:406 - 00:42:355 - ......etc. Because I think it's the loudest sound here. The point of this part not following vocals was to offer a sharp contrast with the rest of the map that does. The density becomes much lower at this point and offers some sort of "break time" in the map from the big jumps. Following vocals would offer only a small change in density, which wouldn't go with what I wanted !
01:19:950 (1) - strange NC. you did NC here, but you didn't do NC on 01:25:646 (10) - . Why? VERY GOOD CATCH wow I'm impressed O_o

Thanks for the mod ! I'm baffled you caught that comboing error. Really nice.

As a side-note:

Spaghetti wrote:
[Shiro's Extra]
00:26:596 (7,8,9,10,11) - Is something like this really neccesary? It just seems like a perfect way to shitmiss, especially since it's part of a shape. I reccomend you pace a straight stream that starts where those notes are and streams towards 00:26:406 (6) -

After numerous testplays (yes I repeatedly play my own maps), I decided to change this. It did appear confusing to several of the players who tried it, even people who are good at reading.

fluffy tail

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 16153
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

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DistanceSpacing: 2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
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TitleUnicode:Now a New Day
Artist:Sui.Jay
ArtistUnicode:Sui.Jay
Creator:Gleipnir
Version:Shiro's Extra
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
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Nathan

2,161 posts

Joined August 2014

Nathan 2015-04-29T23:24:34+00:00

small mod
late

[General]

The video has audio
Drum-hitclap3, and Drum-hitwhistle3 have over 5 ms of delay, well, all your hitsounds have delays so might as well fix the others too
Where's gray veyron in the tags!? D:

[Shiro's Extra]
Inconsistent combo colors with other difficulties

00:09:887 (7,8) - I wish this had more of a directional change. It carries a lot of flow from the previous pentagon making the movement feel more like an acceleration in momentum over a jump.
clean

[Insane]

00:18:242 (2,3,4) - This flows too smoothly, despite the high pitch vocal on 00:18:622 (4), I would ctrl + g 00:18:622 (4) which would also emphasize 00:19:192 (1) more, due to less leniency
00:24:698 (5) - Also lacking emphasis, carries pretty much all circular flow possible from 00:23:938 (1,2,3,4)
00:46:912 - This beat definitely shouldn't be ignored
00:53:369 (2,3) - Lessen the curve on the repeat for a blanket, it just looks nicer ;w;
01:39:888 (1,2,3,4) - What's with the sudden decrease in spacing, I almost thought these were 3/4s

[Hard]

00:53:179 (1,2) - This spacing is just too much compared to the rest of the difficulty
01:31:532 (3,4) - ^, especially with these being circles, they also carry so much flow from 01:31:154 (2), making it play out more like an acceleration in speed than an actual jump

The spread between hard and insane is too much, hard literally has 0 1/4 (besides repeats which don't really count) while insane instantly goes to streams, quite spaced ones too.

Skyhmer

372 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Skyhmer 2015-04-30T15:58:38+00:00

sukiNathan's

sukiNathan wrote:
small mod
late

[General]
The video has audio Removed, kept coming across several endless issues
Drum-hitclap3, and Drum-hitwhistle3 have over 5 ms of delay, well, all your hitsounds have delays so might as well fix the others too Fix'd what I could fixed. the drums should be in a acceptable range I think.
Where's gray veyron in the tags!? D: wtf
[Shiro's Extra]
Inconsistent combo colors with other difficulties
00:09:887 (7,8) - I wish this had more of a directional change. It carries a lot of flow from the previous pentagon making the movement feel more like an acceleration in momentum over a jump.
clean
[Insane]
00:18:242 (2,3,4) - This flows too smoothly, despite the high pitch vocal on 00:18:622 (4), I would ctrl + g 00:18:622 (4) which would also emphasize 00:19:192 (1) more, due to less leniency
00:24:698 (5) - Also lacking emphasis, carries pretty much all circular flow possible from 00:23:938 (1,2,3,4)
00:46:912 - This beat definitely shouldn't be ignored
00:53:369 (2,3) - Lessen the curve on the repeat for a blanket, it just looks nicer ;w;
01:39:888 (1,2,3,4) - What's with the sudden decrease in spacing, I almost thought these were 3/4s
Fixed all or did something diffrent
[Hard]
00:53:179 (1,2) - This spacing is just too much compared to the rest of the difficulty
01:31:532 (3,4) - ^, especially with these being circles, they also carry so much flow from 01:31:154 (2), making it play out more like an acceleration in speed than an actual jump
The spread between hard and insane is too much, hard literally has 0 1/4 (besides repeats which don't really count) while insane instantly goes to streams, quite spaced ones too. I did my best in adding 1/4 notes where they belong and making some notes a bit more of a jump when needed.

Thank you for the mod~

Shiro

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4,984 posts

Joined May 2009

Shiro 2015-05-02T07:18:38+00:00

I did what I could but I'm limited because I need 00:10:077 (8,1) - to be a bigger jump

fluffy tail

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Now a New Day.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 16153
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1.7

[Metadata]
Title:Now a New Day
TitleUnicode:Now a New Day
Artist:Sui.Jay
ArtistUnicode:Sui.Jay
Creator:Gleipnir
Version:Shiro's Extra
Source:DJMAX TECHNIKA 3
Tags:Gray Veyron Neowiz Games Pentavision TAK Arcade Electric Pop RAY Shiro Odaril
BeatmapID:679435
BeatmapSetID:228778

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
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Cerulean Veyron

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Joined August 2012

Cerulean Veyron 2015-05-02T12:51:46+00:00

Sorry if i'm a little late

[-AKiTOSHi-] wrote:
[Veyron's Normal]
00:27:925 (3) - Let's move to 00:27:735 - So the "New Day" will exactly match with this slider. Since some modders before you mentioned this slider for some times, i guess i'll change the rhythm here.
So other part seems fine =w=)b

Ehh kinda minor, updated lel http://puu.sh/hyDay/b62f6b9ffc.rar

Lumael

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Joined December 2014

Lumael 2015-05-04T02:15:06+00:00

Just some little details I found in your beatmap important to be changed:

Easy:

00:49:760 (1) - Spinner need four snaps of recovery time or unrankeable. It could end at 00:52:039 - but it doesn't make too much sense
01:15:583 (1) - Same
The rest is fine

Hard:

00:46:343 (6) - This slider is a bit odd

Shiro's Extra:

00:05:899 (2) - This circle could be removed and making the slider 1/1 on the red snap
00:07:418 (2) - Same
00:08:558 (1) - ^

SUPER IMPORTANT
I loved the hitsounding of the Extra :3

Shiro

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Joined May 2009

Shiro 2015-05-05T00:55:03+00:00

LucaSA4 wrote:
Shiro's Extra:

00:05:899 (2) - This circle could be removed and making the slider 1/1 on the red snap
00:07:418 (2) - Same
00:08:558 (1) - ^

No. Sliders and circles are not equivalent. A sliderend is not equivalent to a circle or sliderhead. The reason why the sliders are extended is because the vocal is held, but it's not a 1/1 slider because there is an emphasized beat on both white ticks (ie, the vocals). So no, the 3/4 fits perfectly, while a 1/1 would not.

SUPER IMPORTANT
I loved the hitsounding of the Extra :3 thanks

annika69

184 posts

Joined October 2014

annika69 2015-05-07T18:12:13+00:00

Heey

[Easy]
00:58:115 (4) - Such curved doesn't look good imo
01:41:406 (1) - I think that the spinner might be a little too short? Personally I would have maybe added a 1/1 slider at 01:41:026 and a hitcircle at 01:42:545 or maybe have ended it on 01:43:874 ??

Leorda

4,416 posts

Joined June 2009

Leorda 2015-05-12T06:46:31+00:00

Hi there

[Easy]
* Add more hitsounds please

00:14:823 (2) - Move 3 grid right for make parallel (nazi)
01:20:140 - I don't think this break is unmappable... please fill with notes in this area
01:41:406 (1) - This spinner is too short for easy diff. Please extend it as possible or replace it with slider

[Veyron's Normal]
* I think this diff was bit too hard for normal diff... maybe just me

01:19:571 (4) - Remove this note? I don't think this one would follow to music
01:41:407 (4) - Please make this note more audible... silencing the notes is awkward

[Hard]
00:33:432 (2,3,4) - Please make a jump with consistent spacing. I mean, use a same distance spacing between all this note to make comfortable while moving the mouse
00:40:647 (1) - Make this slider more wavy. Having like this was like semi-parallel imo
00:52:798 - I feel that all spacing in area was inconsistent... please make it consistent through this kiai area, unless if you have a reason
01:11:976 (4) - Spacing too close
01:20:140 - I don't think this break is unmappable... please fill with notes in this area
01:34:192 (2) - Spacing too far

[Insane]
00:24:698 (5) - Awkward flow. Flip horizontally for fix an awkward flow
00:29:255 (4) - Spacing too far
00:30:394 (3) - ^
00:58:685 (4) - Spacing too close
01:30:014 (3) - Flip horizontally for making a circular flow

[Shiro's Extra]
01:21:849 (7) - Add NC for shorten the long combo
01:27:735 (10) - Add NC for shorten the long combo

Good luck~

Skyhmer

372 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Skyhmer 2015-05-12T14:54:26+00:00

Leorda's Mod

Leorda wrote:
Hi there

[Easy]
* Add more hitsounds please Done

00:14:823 (2) - Move 3 grid right for make parallel (nazi) Fixed
01:20:140 - I don't think this break is unmappable... please fill with notes in this area It is mappable but for easy I'd rather not
01:41:406 (1) - This spinner is too short for easy diff. Please extend it as possible or replace it with slider Used a slider instead

[Veyron's Normal]
* I think this diff was bit too hard for normal diff... maybe just me

01:19:571 (4) - Remove this note? I don't think this one would follow to music
01:41:407 (4) - Please make this note more audible... silencing the notes is awkward

[Hard]
00:33:432 (2,3,4) - Please make a jump with consistent spacing. I mean, use a same distance spacing between all this note to make comfortable while moving the mouse I know what that is. fixed
00:40:647 (1) - Make this slider more wavy. Having like this was like semi-parallel imo done
00:52:798 - I feel that all spacing in area was inconsistent... please make it consistent through this kiai area, unless if you have a reason I fixed what I felt necessary
01:11:976 (4) - Spacing too close done
01:20:140 - I don't think this break is unmappable... please fill with notes in this area Alright I did it.
01:34:192 (2) - Spacing too far Its already equal?

[Insane]
00:24:698 (5) - Awkward flow. Flip horizontally for fix an awkward flow
00:29:255 (4) - Spacing too far
00:30:394 (3) - ^
00:58:685 (4) - Spacing too close
01:30:014 (3) - Flip horizontally for making a circular flow I believe this will ruin the flow for what comes after.
Fixed all excepted for the last.
[Shiro's Extra]
01:21:849 (7) - Add NC for shorten the long combo
01:27:735 (10) - Add NC for shorten the long combo

Good luck~

Thanks for the mod

Shiro

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Shiro 2015-05-14T13:44:14+00:00

Adding new combos to shorten combos is not proper comboing and would be inconsistent, sorry.

Cerulean Veyron

2,090 posts

Joined August 2012

Cerulean Veyron 2015-05-14T14:36:08+00:00

Leorda wrote:
[Veyron's Normal]
* I think this diff was bit too hard for normal diff... maybe just me Well, the song was a little fast... so I've done what i do ;p

01:19:571 (4) - Remove this note? I don't think this one would follow to music But there's this little piano that hit here, i feel that this part should need a click.
01:41:407 (4) - Please make this note more audible... silencing the notes is awkward Raised the volume here, hopefully it's audible now.

Thanks, Leorda!

http://puu.sh/hN0Bp/798d65e05a.rar

sheela

2,651 posts

Joined October 2011

sheela 2015-05-17T22:59:48+00:00

Hi Gleipnir, Gray Veyron, and Shiro!

Easy

According to AiBat, some green points are unsnapped:

SPOILER

00:07:608 (1) - Not a big issue, but the distance between 00:06:089 (3,1) is inconsistent.
00:09:127 (2) - The shape could be more polished. To me the curves look like in the old maps. I did a random shape if you like to use it:
SPOILER
```
79,263,9127,2,0,B|101:250|130:258|130:258|155:247|155:247|213:324|298:282,1,240
```
00:26:975 (1,2) - I would skip the gap there if you had 00:26:216 (4,1) before. It feels awkward to me. Try maybe a slider on 00:26:975 that ends on 00:28:115 . I think it would be much better.
00:45:013 - Similar to the previous point, the polarization seems bad there when 00:40:646 (1,2,3) have a gap of 3/2 between them. What you can do is starting a slider, and you can end it on 00:45:583 .
00:45:963 (5,1) - The distance is inconsistent,
00:59:634 (2) - This slider looks old. Try redoing the curve.

Veyron's Normal

You also have unsnapped green points:

SPOILER

01:19:950 - I would start a slider here when the beat gets notable. The current rhythm doesn't feel right to me.
Try this?
SPOILER
If you apply this, you might consider 01:24:697 (1,2,3) be changed to keep the consistency in the rhythm.

Hard

Still unsnapped green points:

SPOILER

00:26:597 (1) - Like in Easy, the curve needs a redo.
00:32:293 (3,4) - The gap looks quite big. Consider reducing it?
00:48:052 (5) - 00:54:128 (4) - Add a new combo due to the new combo consistency.
01:17:103 (3,1) - New combo should be switched because of the strong beat and finish hitsound on the first downbeat.
01:17:483 (1,2) - 01:23:179 (1,2) - I suggest you increase a little the spacing. In my opinion it would avoid any kind of confusion and uncomfortable movements.
01:34:192 (2,4) - These sliders are old-school. Loose the curves?
01:39:888 (1,2) - The distance should be increase in order to have the consistency.

Insane

Unsnapped green points

00:10:266 (1) - This circle must be on the other end since it is the slider's tail. If you apply this, 00:11:027 (3) should also be moved.
00:25:266 (7) - Add a new combo because of consistency.
00:54:128 (4,1) - 00:57:166 (6,1) - Need a switch in the new combo.
00:57:736 (1,2) - The pattern looks ugly to be honest. Try this maybe:
SPOILER
01:15:584 (1,1) - A bigger distance would avoid confusion and awkward transition because it looks like a 1/2 rhythm.
01:17:483 (1,2,3,4,5) - The spacing between them isn't consistent than what's in the following. Use a constant distance for the section.
01:23:938 (3,4) - That is an awkward gap there. Try maybe a 1/1 slider on 01:23:937 so it could hold the vocal.
01:25:836 (3,4) - I don't know what you are following here. In the last section it follows the instruments with the sliders. Yet this time two circles don't do the job. Try doing the same as 01:19:380 or try this:
SPOILER

Shiro's Extra

00:44:634 (3) - I personally dislike those type of slider, looks old and ugly. Try maybe a slight curve, like this:
SPOILER

This should be it. If you have any questions, don't hesitate to ask them! You can poke me back if you want a recheck.

Cerulean Veyron

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Joined August 2012

Cerulean Veyron 2015-05-19T12:21:46+00:00

sheela901 wrote:
Veyron's Normal
You also have unsnapped green points: Well, uhhmm... I've checked my diff, i haven't seen anything unsnapped, perhaps you might not have the latest version of it ._.
SPOILER
01:19:950 - I would start a slider here when the beat gets notable. The current rhythm doesn't feel right to me.
Try this? I'm trying to follow the some-like piano on the song track, which can be heard very clear on this part. So i guess i'll keep this.
SPOILER
If you apply this, you might consider 01:24:697 (1,2,3) be changed to keep the consistency in the rhythm. Probably the same reason, but yeah, changed some related stuffs.

Thanks for the mod~

A star icon! Let's do this!! \8D/ http://puu.sh/hSTHh/674bc61380.rar

Shiro

Global Moderator

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Joined May 2009

Shiro 2015-05-19T21:37:09+00:00

sheela901 wrote:
Shiro's Extra
00:44:634 (3) - I personally dislike those type of slider, looks old and ugly. Try maybe a slight curve, like this: it blankets 00:43:684 (1) -

Skyhmer

372 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Skyhmer 2015-05-19T23:35:50+00:00

sheela901 wrote:

Hi Gleipnir, Gray Veyron, and Shiro!
Easy
According to AiBat, some green points are unsnapped:
SPOILER
00:07:608 (1) - Not a big issue, but the distance between 00:06:089 (3,1) is inconsistent.
00:09:127 (2) - The shape could be more polished. To me the curves look like in the old maps. I did a random shape if you like to use it:
SPOILER
79,263,9127,2,0,B|101:250|130:258|130:258|155:247|155:247|213:324|298:282,1,240
00:26:975 (1,2) - I would skip the gap there if you had 00:26:216 (4,1) before. It feels awkward to me. Try maybe a slider on 00:26:975 that ends on 00:28:115 . I think it would be much better.
00:45:013 - Similar to the previous point, the polarization seems bad there when 00:40:646 (1,2,3) have a gap of 3/2 between them. What you can do is starting a slider, and you can end it on 00:45:583 .
00:45:963 (5,1) - The distance is inconsistent,
00:59:634 (2) - This slider looks old. Try redoing the curve.
Applied all. The polarization problems made sense so I did something different.
Hard
Still unsnapped green points:
SPOILER
00:26:597 (1) - Like in Easy, the curve needs a redo.
00:32:293 (3,4) - The gap looks quite big. Consider reducing it?
00:48:052 (5) - 00:54:128 (4) - Add a new combo due to the new combo consistency.
01:17:103 (3,1) - New combo should be switched because of the strong beat and finish hitsound on the first downbeat.
01:17:483 (1,2) - 01:23:179 (1,2) - I suggest you increase a little the spacing. In my opinion it would avoid any kind of confusion and uncomfortable movements.
01:34:192 (2,4) - These sliders are old-school. Loose the curves?
01:39:888 (1,2) - The distance should be increase in order to have the consistency.
Applied all

Insane
Unsnapped green points
00:10:266 (1) - This circle must be on the other end since it is the slider's tail. If you apply this, 00:11:027 (3) should also be moved.
00:25:266 (7) - Add a new combo because of consistency.
00:54:128 (4,1) - 00:57:166 (6,1) - Need a switch in the new combo.
00:57:736 (1,2) - The pattern looks ugly to be honest. Try this maybe:
SPOILER
01:15:584 (1,1) - A bigger distance would avoid confusion and awkward transition because it looks like a 1/2 rhythm.
01:17:483 (1,2,3,4,5) - The spacing between them isn't consistent than what's in the following. Use a constant distance for the section.
01:23:938 (3,4) - That is an awkward gap there. Try maybe a 1/1 slider on 01:23:937 so it could hold the vocal.
01:25:836 (3,4) - I don't know what you are following here. In the last section it follows the instruments with the sliders. Yet this time two circles don't do the job. Try doing the same as 01:19:380 or try this:
SPOILER
Nobody, even me likes this small segment so I changed this part
Applied all

This should be it. If you have any questions, don't hesitate to ask them! You can poke me back if you want a recheck.

I ended up actually applying everything mentioned ._.
Thanks for the mod!

Battle

2,865 posts

Joined February 2014

Battle 2015-06-07T18:27:11+00:00

[Hard]
00:08:559 (1) - Maybe curve downwards instead for flow?
00:09:128 (2) - If you do curve ^ downward, you can blanket this into that

[Insane]
00:39:698 (2) - imo I would say it would be better on the 3

I thought Shiro's Extra was pretty good .3.

Sorry this mod wasn't very helpful, you have a lot of mods already .3.

Skyhmer

372 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Skyhmer 2015-06-10T01:36:14+00:00

[-Deemo-] wrote:
[Hard]
00:08:559 (1) - Maybe curve downwards instead for flow? I definitly think it more appealing as it is and there is very little in cost in flow to do this.
00:09:128 (2) - If you do curve ^ downward, you can blanket this into that

[Insane]
00:39:698 (2) - imo I would say it would be better on the 3 Switched it up a bit, I realized It looked kinda bad.

I thought Shiro's Extra was pretty good .3.

Sorry this mod wasn't very helpful, you have a lot of mods already .3.

Thanks for the mod!

sheela

2,651 posts

Joined October 2011

sheela 2015-06-21T14:46:02+00:00

Recheck.

Insane

00:10:266 (1) - I suggest you unstack it from the tail of the previous slider. I thought the circle was on the head which made me fail.

Call me back again!

EDIT: Bubbled!

Skyhmer

372 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Skyhmer 2015-06-21T14:59:14+00:00

sheela901's mod

sheela901 wrote:
Recheck.

Insane
00:10:266 (1) - I suggest you unstack it from the tail of the previous slider. I thought the circle was on the head which made me fail. Moved it back to the head

Call me back again!

Thanks for the second check!

Cerulean Veyron

2,090 posts

Joined August 2012

Cerulean Veyron 2015-06-22T09:49:25+00:00

I just saw this map got bubbled lool

Let's qualify this! \8D/

Aka

1,777 posts

Joined January 2012

Aka 2015-07-15T03:30:53+00:00

01:26:973 - in insane, says the end is unsnapped lel

・00:18:622 (4,1) - pretty messy overlap
・also overall spacing is inconsistent in this map, it jumps from 1.20 to 1.0 in some places, for eх 01:01:533 (1,2) - 00:39:698 (2,3) - 00:23:938 (1,2,3,4) - . i'd recommend to pay a little bit more attention to it
・00:27:165 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i'd put some whistles here, just soft set would feel like clicking an emptiness, and considering that here appears sudden doubles, having here some hitsounds would help players to feel the rhythm here better
・00:33:906 - why did you skip this sound, but made a triplet here 00:32:577 - based on actually nothing, if you listen carefully with 25%

in normal
・00:26:596 - the section is pretty quiet, i cant really hear any feedback from notes here \: also greenline should be snapped to 593ms
・raise OD to 4? ~~or 3.5~~
・the comboing catched my eye. its pretty short and parts like these 00:22:418 (1,2) - 00:11:785 (1,2) - 01:20:140 (1,2) - 01:21:659 (1,2) - make me ask whywouldyoudothis. i'd recommend you to reconsider your comboing, make it longer. even easy diff has longer comboing

in easy
・00:49:760 (1,1) - i thought a rule about recovery time after spinners is still in use..? you should have at least one measure of recovery time for easy difficulties around ~160bpm. 01:15:583 (1,1) - same..?
・01:17:292 - 00:40:646 - 01:28:115 - 01:29:349 - wronly snapped greenlines. they are earlier so it shouldnt be a huge issue,~~but as a perfectionist..~~

hard
・pretty random spacing changes are happening often here. for eх 00:16:913 (2,3,1) - 00:36:850 (3,4,1) - (also 00:35:900 (1,3) - not that neat overlap appeared here) 00:22:609 (2,3,4,5,1) - . if you had more spacing before sliders like these 00:23:747 - 00:17:673 (1) - 00:41:976 (1) - 00:19:192 (1) - , it would be more logical, as you have sorta stronger sound/vocal here. just like you did here 00:59:635 (3,4,1) - but a biiiit less of spacing, like 1.6 or so. overall please pay more attention to your spacing here, the consistency. spacing varies from one part to another pretty often, it isnt very good and doesnt give the diff a neat look
・00:35:900 (1) - i am not sure if thats the shape you were aiming for, maybe you would like to make it more symmetrical?

SPOILER

・01:21:849 (5) - combo is pretty long, maybe add a nc here?
・01:28:116 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - ~~same about greenlines~~
・i would also recommend you to get rid of some of those ~creative~ slider shapes in here 01:33:052 (3,1,2) - . when you gather various shapes in one short place, it makes it ook overall messy or awkward or ..unpolished, dunno which word to use ):

and i will stop here, mentioned just some general stuff. would recommend you to look for some nazi mods and mods based on aesthetics in general, as this is a visible issue atm.
you are free to ask sheela for rebubble if you think these actions are not necessary but i believe that at its current state, the map isnt ready to go yet >:
goooood luck

Last edited by Aka 2015-07-15T18:06:36+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Skyhmer

372 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Skyhmer 2015-07-15T03:35:23+00:00

Aka wrote:
01:26:973 - in insane, says the end is unsnapped lel

Where doe these come from

Fixed, thanks

Skyhmer

372 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Skyhmer 2015-07-16T03:41:48+00:00

Aka's Mod

Aka wrote:
01:26:973 - in insane, says the end is unsnapped lel

・00:18:622 (4,1) - pretty messy overlap
・also overall spacing is inconsistent in this map, it jumps from 1.20 to 1.0 in some places, for eх 01:01:533 (1,2) - 00:39:698 (2,3) - 00:23:938 (1,2,3,4) - . i'd recommend to pay a little bit more attention to it
・00:27:165 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i'd put some whistles here, just soft set would feel like clicking an emptiness, and considering that here appears sudden doubles, having here some hitsounds would help players to feel the rhythm here better
・00:33:906 - why did you skip this sound, but made a triplet here 00:32:577 - based on actually nothing, if you listen carefully with 25%

in normal
・00:26:596 - the section is pretty quiet, i cant really hear any feedback from notes here \: also greenline should be snapped to 593ms
・raise OD to 4? ~~or 3.5~~
・the comboing catched my eye. its pretty short and parts like these 00:22:418 (1,2) - 00:11:785 (1,2) - 01:20:140 (1,2) - 01:21:659 (1,2) - make me ask whywouldyoudothis. i'd recommend you to reconsider your comboing, make it longer. even easy diff has longer comboing

in easy
・00:49:760 (1,1) - i thought a rule about recovery time after spinners is still in use..? you should have at least one measure of recovery time for easy difficulties around ~160bpm. 01:15:583 (1,1) - same..?
・01:17:292 - 00:40:646 - 01:28:115 - 01:29:349 - wronly snapped greenlines. they are earlier so it shouldnt be a huge issue,~~but as a perfectionist..~~

hard
・pretty random spacing changes are happening often here. for eх 00:16:913 (2,3,1) - 00:36:850 (3,4,1) - (also 00:35:900 (1,3) - not that neat overlap appeared here) 00:22:609 (2,3,4,5,1) - . if you had more spacing before sliders like these 00:23:747 - 00:17:673 (1) - 00:41:976 (1) - 00:19:192 (1) - , it would be more logical, as you have sorta stronger sound/vocal here. just like you did here 00:59:635 (3,4,1) - but a biiiit less of spacing, like 1.6 or so. overall please pay more attention to your spacing here, the consistency. spacing varies from one part to another pretty often, it isnt very good and doesnt give the diff a neat look
・00:35:900 (1) - i am not sure if thats the shape you were aiming for, maybe you would like to make it more symmetrical?
SPOILER
・01:21:849 (5) - combo is pretty long, maybe add a nc here?
・01:28:116 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - ~~same about greenlines~~
・i would also recommend you to get rid of some of those ~creative~ slider shapes in here 01:33:052 (3,1,2) - . when you gather various shapes in one short place, it makes it ook overall messy or awkward or ..unpolished, dunno which word to use ):

and i will stop here, mentioned just some general stuff. would recommend you to look for some nazi mods and mods based on aesthetics in general, as this is a visible issue atm.
you are free to ask sheela for rebubble if you think these actions are not necessary but i believe that at its current state, the map isnt ready to go yet >:
goooood luck

Damn, not gonna reply to every single thing but yeah I see what you mean, ill figure stuff out.
You have my thanks for checking this on your own accord
Thanks for the mod

Cerulean Veyron

2,090 posts

Joined August 2012

Cerulean Veyron 2015-07-16T09:38:19+00:00

Aka wrote:
in normal
・00:26:596 - the section is pretty quiet, i cant really hear any feedback from notes here \: also greenline should be snapped to 593ms Okay
・raise OD to 4? ~~or 3.5~~ ~~OD3.5 looool~~
・the comboing catched my eye. its pretty short and parts like these 00:22:418 (1,2) - 00:11:785 (1,2) - 01:20:140 (1,2) - 01:21:659 (1,2) - make me ask whywouldyoudothis. i'd recommend you to reconsider your comboing, make it longer. even easy diff has longer comboing Okay, lemme try. If I see some people after you mod, complains about my NCs again, I'll find you ò_ó

Okay nvm, Thanks for the little mod!

http://puu.sh/j1ah5/04783aedd2.rar

Mortem

695 posts

Joined July 2013

Mortem 2015-07-25T09:02:33+00:00

hi.

General:
• In almost every difficulty there are unsnapped green lines. Probably you've changed the timing and stuff. I'll write here every single unsnapped green line.

Easy:
• Unsnapped green lines: 00:40:643 - ; 01:17:289 - ; 01:28:112 - ; 01:29:346 - ; Snap them 3ms forward.
• What about using AR3 instead of 2? It would fit better to the spread and would be more enjoyable.
• 00:04:570 (2,3) - You can hear some strong stuff in the background but you used these long sliders. How about placement likethis?
• 00:11:026 (1,2,1,2) - This flow is really strange. What about use the pattern like this?
• 00:12:545 (1) - Remove the new combo here, it feels so inconsistent.
• 00:17:482 (2,3) - Blanket is way off at the end of the slider.
• 00:33:431 (4,5) - Blanket seems little bit off.
• 00:45:013 (4) - This note is hard to catch for Easy players. How about instead of this slider use the pattern likethis?
• 01:17:861 (1) - This looks really weird. I mean after break, there is just one slider and after that a break. What about making this slider with reverse arrow and add some another note (slider) at 01:21:659 - ? Example.
• 01:23:937 (2) - You are ignoring vocal + the music with this slider. Instead of a note (01:23:178 (1) - ) make a slider that would end at 01:24:317 - and put a note at downbeat.
• 01:26:406 (1) - Move the slider at 01:26:216 - and extend it to 01:27:355 - (same like you did here: 01:28:115 (3) - )
• 01:41:406 (1) - Instead of this slider, what about spinner and end it at 01:43:874 - ?

Normal:
• Unsnapped green lines: 00:26:593 - ; Snap it 3ms forward. (to 00:26:596)
• 00:28:874 (2,1) - What about improving the blanket like this?
• 00:31:532 (1,1) - This blanket seems little bit off. What about curving the slider likethis?
• 00:57:735 (2,3) - Another blanket that seems little bit off.

Hard:
• Unsnapped green lines: 00:40:643 ; 01:15:580 ; 01:17:289 - ; 01:28:112 - ; 01:28:301 - ; 01:28:491 ; 01:28:681 - ; 01:28:871 - ; 01:29:061 ; 01:29:346 - Again +3ms.
• 00:14:823 - Why are you ignoring such a strong beat. Insert here a note for better flow.
• 00:17:293 (3,1) - This slider can be blanketed better. Example.
• 00:32:482 (4,5,6,1) - Not blanketed properly.
• 00:35:900 (1) - Improve the design of the slider and rearrange 00:35:900 (1,2,3) - like this.
• 01:12:166 (5,1) - Blanket seems off...
• 01:19:002 (5) - This design of the slider isn't symmetric. Example.
• 01:28:116 (1,2,3,4,5) - Also these notes aren't symmetric. It looks like splatted star. Consider rearranging them and making them more symmetric.
• 01:28:875 (5,6,1) - How about this?
• 01:30:014 (3) - I think there's no need to have a middle point at this slider.
• 01:30:394 (4,1) - This blanket looks off.
• 01:35:521 (2,3) - This isn't good. It breaks the flow. Use Ctrl+G here. (If you do, change the hitsounds too).
• 01:36:660 (3,4) - The (3) can be designed better and can be perfectly blanketed with (4). [url=Example]http://puu.sh/jc7KA.jpg[/url]
• 01:37:609 (5,2) - Move the (2) little bit down to reduce the overlap.

Insane:
• Unsnapped green lines: Same as Hard.
• 00:09:887 (5,1) - I don't like stacking of these two. What about moving the (1) little bit further from (5)?
• 00:17:673 (1,2) - If this supposed to be blanket, then it's slightly off.
• 00:21:280 (2,3,4,5) - How about rearranging them like this? - If you do, move also these notes (00:22:040 (6,7,8,9,1) - ) little bit closer to 00:21:850 (5) - .
• 00:32:861 (6) - Add a new combo here because of inconsistency.
• 00:33:432 (7,8,9,10,11) - Redesign it to a star pattern. Example. (I know, it feels squashed but I hope you get the point.)
• 01:00:014 (6) - Ctrl+J for better flow?
• 01:33:812 (1,3) - How about stack the end of the slider with (1) and move 01:34:760 (4) - little bit higher due to DS?

I took a look at Shiro's Extra and seems fine to me.
Hope that helps.
Good Luck!

Skyhmer

372 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Skyhmer 2015-07-26T01:09:02+00:00

Mortem's mod

Mortem wrote:
hi.

General:
• In almost every difficulty there are unsnapped green lines. Probably you've changed the timing and stuff. I'll write here every single unsnapped green line.

Easy:
• Unsnapped green lines: 00:40:643 - ; 01:17:289 - ; 01:28:112 - ; 01:29:346 - ; Snap them 3ms forward.
• What about using AR3 instead of 2? It would fit better to the spread and would be more enjoyable.
• 00:04:570 (2,3) - You can hear some strong stuff in the background but you used these long sliders. How about placement likethis?
• 00:11:026 (1,2,1,2) - This flow is really strange. What about use the pattern like this?
• 00:12:545 (1) - Remove the new combo here, it feels so inconsistent.
• 00:17:482 (2,3) - Blanket is way off at the end of the slider.
• 00:33:431 (4,5) - Blanket seems little bit off.
• 00:45:013 (4) - This note is hard to catch for Easy players. How about instead of this slider use the pattern likethis?
• 01:17:861 (1) - This looks really weird. I mean after break, there is just one slider and after that a break. What about making this slider with reverse arrow and add some another note (slider) at 01:21:659 - ? Example.
• 01:23:937 (2) - You are ignoring vocal + the music with this slider. Instead of a note (01:23:178 (1) - ) make a slider that would end at 01:24:317 - and put a note at downbeat.
• 01:26:406 (1) - Move the slider at 01:26:216 - and extend it to 01:27:355 - (same like you did here: 01:28:115 (3) - )
• 01:41:406 (1) - Instead of this slider, what about spinner and end it at 01:43:874 - ?

Normal:
• Unsnapped green lines: 00:26:593 - ; Snap it 3ms forward. (to 00:26:596)
• 00:28:874 (2,1) - What about improving the blanket like this?
• 00:31:532 (1,1) - This blanket seems little bit off. What about curving the slider likethis?
• 00:57:735 (2,3) - Another blanket that seems little bit off.

Hard:
• Unsnapped green lines: 00:40:643 ; 01:15:580 ; 01:17:289 - ; 01:28:112 - ; 01:28:301 - ; 01:28:491 ; 01:28:681 - ; 01:28:871 - ; 01:29:061 ; 01:29:346 - Again +3ms.
• 00:14:823 - Why are you ignoring such a strong beat. Insert here a note for better flow.
• 00:17:293 (3,1) - This slider can be blanketed better. Example.
• 00:32:482 (4,5,6,1) - Not blanketed properly.
• 00:35:900 (1) - Improve the design of the slider and rearrange 00:35:900 (1,2,3) - like this.
• 01:12:166 (5,1) - Blanket seems off...
• 01:19:002 (5) - This design of the slider isn't symmetric. Example.
• 01:28:116 (1,2,3,4,5) - Also these notes aren't symmetric. It looks like splatted star. Consider rearranging them and making them more symmetric.
• 01:28:875 (5,6,1) - How about this?
• 01:30:014 (3) - I think there's no need to have a middle point at this slider.
• 01:30:394 (4,1) - This blanket looks off.
• 01:35:521 (2,3) - This isn't good. It breaks the flow. Use Ctrl+G here. (If you do, change the hitsounds too).
• 01:36:660 (3,4) - The (3) can be designed better and can be perfectly blanketed with (4). [url=Example]http://puu.sh/jc7KA.jpg[/url]
• 01:37:609 (5,2) - Move the (2) little bit down to reduce the overlap.

Insane:
• Unsnapped green lines: Same as Hard.
• 00:09:887 (5,1) - I don't like stacking of these two. What about moving the (1) little bit further from (5)?
• 00:17:673 (1,2) - If this supposed to be blanket, then it's slightly off.
• 00:21:280 (2,3,4,5) - How about rearranging them like this? - If you do, move also these notes (00:22:040 (6,7,8,9,1) - ) little bit closer to 00:21:850 (5) - .
• 00:32:861 (6) - Add a new combo here because of inconsistency.
• 00:33:432 (7,8,9,10,11) - Redesign it to a star pattern. Example. (I know, it feels squashed but I hope you get the point.)
• 01:00:014 (6) - Ctrl+J for better flow?
• 01:33:812 (1,3) - How about stack the end of the slider with (1) and move 01:34:760 (4) - little bit higher due to DS?

I took a look at Shiro's Extra and seems fine to me.
Hope that helps.
Good Luck!

Thanks for the mod, applied nearly everything so I wont write "fixed" or "applied" for every line.

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