Yoges wrote:

General
Only 1366x768 or 1080x768 backgrounds are accepted. Yours is 800x600 Fixed

Polaris
00:19:755(1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -Don't do that. those kind of notes don't suit the music for this song. A suggestion would be to turn them into jumps I think i'll keep it until someone suggest it ,I like the sliders, thus, jumps will increase difficulty which i don't want to
00:21:126(1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -Again the notes don't suit the music. You should delete them & make a stream. It would work better ^
00:23:869(1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -Turn those into jumps ^
00:28:326(2,3,4) -Sv's a bit too much here But then the slider will look ugly XD
00:29:355(1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -Turn those into jumps same as 00:19:755
00:30:726(1,2,3) Same problem as 00:28:326 I think i'll twitch it a little bit here

It's the same problems reoccurring through out the entire map really. I'd remap it if I were you. I don't know will i remap, i liked some part

1. well about the combo colours, i found something confusing for other players. change them
2. Disable Letterbox During Breaks

1. i'd highly recommend you to find a custom hitsound for this map
2. seriously? slider speed change? make them into same. you have to use that if you need
3. lack of hitsounds. white tick for clap is really highly recommend for this (some parts). and please recheck the hitsounds again
4. some notes are not fitable from the song and some notes are in wrong timing to set
5. 00:11:527 (1) - finish
6. 00:14:270 (1) - ^
7. 00:19:756 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i don't feel like this one is ok for me
8. 00:22:498 (1) - finish
9. 00:23:870 (1,2,3,4) - not highly recommend for stack
10. 00:23:870 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - excuse me? slider speed change? make the speed into 1x (all of them)
11. 00:29:356 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
12. 00:38:012 (2) - wrong timing set for this note
13. 00:41:697 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - the slider speed, hello?
14. 00:43:926 (8) - wrong timing set for note
15. 00:44:440 (1) - finish
16. 00:46:326 (3) - remove clap (head)
17. 00:46:840 (4) - clap
18. 00:47:012 (5) - remove clap
19. 00:47:526 (2) - clap
20. 00:50:612 (4) - wrong timing note
21. 00:55:240 (7) - finish (tail)
22. 00:55:926 (3,4,5) - stack with 00:55:583 (1) -
23. 00:58:155 (5,6) - (5) finish, (6) remove note
24. 01:00:897 (1) - replace from whistle to finish
25. 01:00:897 - whistle? change that into clap
26. 01:02:269 (1) - finish
27. 01:03:640 (1,1,2) - ^ (2 for head)
28. 01:06:383 (1) - finish
29. 01:11:440 (7) - wrong timing to set note
30. 01:11:869 to 01:20:012 - wrong timing
31. 01:25:583 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - slider speed, hello?
32. 01:35:697 (3) - wrong timing for the tail

-Hakurei- wrote:

[General]

1. well about the combo colours, i found something confusing for other players. change them Changed to Green
2. Disable Letterbox During Breaks fixed

[Polaris]

1. i'd highly recommend you to find a custom hitsound for this map I'll do it later in further updates EDIT: I don't think it's necessary
2. seriously? slider speed change? make them into same. you have to use that if you need Sure, I'll use less slider speed changes as possible
3. lack of hitsounds. white tick for clap is really highly recommend for this (some parts). and please recheck the hitsounds again
4. some notes are not fitable from the song and some notes are in wrong timing to set I don't get it
5. 00:11:527 (1) - finish
6. 00:14:270 (1) - ^
7. 00:19:756 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i don't feel like this one is ok for me
8. 00:22:498 (1) - finish
9. 00:23:870 (1,2,3,4) - not highly recommend for stack
10. 00:23:870 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - excuse me? slider speed change? make the speed into 1x (all of them)
11. 00:29:356 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
12. 00:38:012 (2) - wrong timing set for this note
13. 00:41:697 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - the slider speed, hello?
14. 00:43:926 (8) - wrong timing set for note
15. 00:44:440 (1) - finish
16. 00:46:326 (3) - remove clap (head)
17. 00:46:840 (4) - clap
18. 00:47:012 (5) - remove clap
19. 00:47:526 (2) - clap
20. 00:50:612 (4) - wrong timing note
21. 00:55:240 (7) - finish (tail)
22. 00:55:926 (3,4,5) - stack with 00:55:583 (1) -
23. 00:58:155 (5,6) - (5) finish, (6) remove note
24. 01:00:897 (1) - replace from whistle to finish
25. 01:00:897 - whistle? change that into clap
26. 01:02:269 (1) - finish
27. 01:03:640 (1,1,2) - ^ (2 for head)
28. 01:06:383 (1) - finish
29. 01:11:440 (7) - wrong timing to set note
30. 01:11:869 to 01:20:012 - wrong timing
31. 01:25:583 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - slider speed, hello?
32. 01:35:697 (3) - wrong timing for the tail

can't mod that much. found more unrankable stuff. GL!

kunkakunkakunkakunka wrote:

hi～
I came in return for mod (m4m)

Polaris
※From AImod : An error of "Stack leniency" is displayed (Present 0.2 ,Default 0.7).In the case of complete stack,it becomes the unrankble.I recommend a change.


※Does this .png use it?Please delete it if unnecessary.


※AudioLeadIn : I want 1500～2000.


- About NC -
I saw it all and thought that it was considerably irregular.I recommend that I set it to rhythm of 4/4 again once.
(Such a point)
Though it is a part of the same rhythm, 2/4 and 4/4 are mixed.00:01:239 (1) - 2/4 and 00:02:612 (3) - There is not NC.

00:51:126 (1,2) - NC is reverse.

00:47:869 (1) - I don't feel the need of the NC.

01:07:755 (6) - NC is necessary.

etc...Anyway, there is many it.Please set NC of 4/4 of mention mentioned above.

- About stack -
There is much unclear placement whether that it is stack or It is not so.You should move it a little more definitely if you shift it on purpose.
(Such a point)
00:03:984 (3,1,1) - 00:05:012 (2,2) - 00:18:726 (2,1) - etc.

There are many mistakes of stack, too.
(Such a point)
00:18:726 (2,1) - 01:21:297 (6,7) - 02:22:669 (4,5) - etc.

- About overlap -
There is the placement that it is hard to see very much. Please move.
(Such a point)
00:31:926 (1,2) - 00:55:240 (7) - 01:32:269 (2,1) - etc.

- About stream -
Please position it using "Convert slider to stream".you can position it neatly.
(Such a point)
00:21:812 (1,2,3,4,5) -

- About blanket -
Please do blanket neatly.
(Such a point)
00:56:783 (8,1) - 01:09:812 (1,2) - 01:44:440 (3,4) - etc.

- About hitsound -
It is not a difficult sound (electronic drums).I hope for a custom.


GL

1. First of all, Custom Hitsound is not a part of Ranking Criteria, so i don't think it's "mandatory" for doing it
2. Second, There's tons of Custom Hitsounds which it will be hard to make a decision, yet it also hard to find some

KuranteMelodii wrote:

I also decline for Audio lead-in because i don't know how to do it, plz kill me

DahplA wrote:

Hi, DahplA here posting from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding Team. This is a response in regards to this request. Please be sure to vote here on how helpful our mod was.

KuranteMelodii wrote:

I also decline for Audio lead-in because i don't know how to do it, plz kill me

Here, hopefully it's not confusing. Step 1 is on the right, step 2 on the left. PM me or ask in-game if you need to ask further questions. Fixed

General

1. I think tags are wrong (Google) Fixed

Polaris

1. 00:00:555 (1,2,1,2) - (If you want to change the spacing you can, but it occurs a lot in this part so skip if you want, just read the last bit about sliderends). This part is confusing slightly, since it implies a 1/1 gap from 00:01:240 (1,2) - because of the 1/1 spacing of 00:00:555 (1,2) - I recommend having the spacing of these two differ. Also I recommend Ctrl+G these two 00:01:240 (1,2) - so you have a clickable object on 00:01:583 clap instead of sliderend I used Genryuu Kaiko as reference, and i used 1.0x Distance snap so i think it's fine for that, it's also can mislead some plays if i use Ctrl+G
2. 00:14:269 (1,2,1,2) - Stack pattern?
3. 00:17:013 (1) - That overlap
4. 00:23:697 (6,1,2,3,4) - If you want to use this creative (sorry) pattern then you can, but why is 6 on it, when the sound starts at 1 Removed 6
   00:27:127 (2,3) - Stack sliderends? (somehow)
5. 00:31:412 (3,4,5) - Why stack, then move?
6. 00:33:812 (2) - Slightly confusing to read
7. 00:34:840 (1,2,3,4) - Might be hard to read, since so many stacks on top of each other. Move 1,2,3,4 away
8. 00:36:212 (1) - I hear cymbal sound, so add finish. Also space further away to emphasise
9. 00:42:897 (4) - Overlap...I know it's intentional but it's very hard to read. Heck, the one 00:43:069 (1) - which is right after is is odd as well
10. 00:45:297 (5) - Not sure if this pattern is unrankable, because I used something similar before. It just looks likes it's longer than 00:44:783 (2) - because it's under
11. 00:45:126 (3,4,5,3) - Strange, you've used a triple pattern on 3,4,5 which may be to emphasise that little beep sound, but then you've mapped lyrics on 00:46:326 (3) - try and keep it consistent
12. 00:49:926 (1) - Emphasise by moving further away
13. 00:50:440 (3) - Not stacked perfectly
14. 00:55:240 (7) - Ehh...not feeling it here. Why not a clickable finish?
15. 00:55:926 (3,4,5,10) - Same note as before. Also, You're missing NC here somewhere. I think on 00:56:783 (8) -
16. 00:58:669 (5) - Not stacked perfectly (this one, turn off grid snap, move 1 left, to unstack, then 2 right)
17. 01:11:355 (5) - Not stacked perfectly
18. 01:20:012 (1) - Umm...I know there is a sound on the blue, but the 3/4 just doesn't make sense. Instead, opt for either a double or a triple like so
    
    SPOILER

    
19. 01:30:383 (3) - Unrankable, it manipulates the slider speed
20. 01:32:097 (1,2,1,2) - Strange, first pattern is circle into slider, and then second is the other way around. I'd go for slider into circle for both, since you want to be able to hit the clap here 01:32:440. Might not get bubble with that. Here 03:46:497 (1,2,1,2) - is the pattern you want.
21. 01:33:469 (1,2,3) - Don't hear a particularly huge sound on the blue tick
22. 01:35:183 (1) - Emphasise more since it's a finish? No finish were find in there
23. 01:35:697 (3) - Unrankable, here you should just map to the beat.
24. 01:41:012 (1,2,3) - Don't hear a sound on the blue
25. 01:43:069 (1,2,1,2) - Same note as 01:32:097 (1,2,1,2) -
26. 02:07:926 (3,4,5) - Change these up. You want hittable objects on the white, since the beat is placed on them
27. 02:09:297 (3,4,5,6) - ^
28. 02:10:669 (1) - I think you should lead in with a triple and not a 1/4, since you want to start this 1/4 slider pattern on a downbeat
29. 02:26:955 (6) - Not stacked properly
30. 03:01:240 (1,2,1,2) - Same as before
31. 03:04:840 (4) - Very long, could be mapped to the beat. However, if you want to keep it like this, just remember that the lyrics are on the white, while this ends on a blue
32. 03:12:212 (1,2,1,2) - Same as before
33. 03:21:983 (2) - Slight overlap here, since it appears while 03:20:783 (1) - is still going
34. Kind of curios as to why you've downed the slider velocity 03:26:269 but not at the start of this calm bit
35. 03:44:097 (1) - Fix stack Maybe turn off stacking on Editor?
36. 03:49:412 (1) - Why NC on a red?
37. 03:49:583 (2) - Space further for emphasis on downbeat
38. 03:50:097 (4) - Unrankable, same note about slider manipulation
39. 03:52:326 (1) - Space further for emphasis on downbeat
40. 03:56:783 (3,4) - Not sure if there is meant to be clap on red? If that's the case make a clickable object on the clap for better feedback
41. 03:57:469 (1,2,1,2) - Same note
42. 03:58:840 (1,2,3) - Don't really hear the triple sound.
43. 03:59:012 (3,4,5,6) - Why not place the sliders on the whites, so you can click to the beat I actually map vocals on this part
44. 04:07:412 (1,2) - Same note about the clickable object on clap (here you can Ctrl+G them both)
45. 04:08:440 (1,2,1,2) - Same note
46. 04:09:983 (3,4,5,6) - ^ Can't find any problem here,but i'll fix the stack
47. 04:12:040 (4) - Unrankable, I think you know what's up with this one
48. 04:19:412 (1,2,1,2) - Same as before
49. 04:20:783 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think I've explained it enough times before Can't find any problem here
50. 04:27:640 (5) - I think just one circle here is fine
51. 04:39:126 (2,1) - Confusing, since previous patterns imply this is a 1/4 gap
52. 04:42:555 (1,2,3,1,2) - You've used 3 circle pattern on first part, why not keep consistency?
53. 04:44:269 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Again
54. 04:54:040 (2) - Slight overlap
55. 05:07:755 (2) - Overlap

Yeah...pretty big list. You're going to have a very hard time getting this ranked unless you fix some major problems, especially the red tick sliders. You're going to need to do a lot of work. I like the song and the DnB re-iteration is nice but right now, it lacks quality (not hating). If you want further help (because I want to see this ranked, great song Ask Skystar because he made ranked map of this) just PM me or message me in-game. I'll be sure to help you anytime.

EDIT: Oh, just a minor thing. I feel higher OD works, since this acts as a sort of "extra" difficulty (Fixed), and the AR is high as well. Something like 7.5 or 8 will do great.(I gonna stick with AR 9 because it's my preference

1. I think good

1. 00:42:897 (4) - add Finish at head point
   and 00:43:069 (1) - remove Finish at head point
   I listen Cymbals sound is here 00:42:897 -
2. 00:45:126 (3) - I think fitting Whistle
3. 00:55:240 (7) - remove Finish at head point
4. 01:00:040 (3,4) - I think fitting Finish
   cuz these are same sound as 00:59:526 (1,2) -
5. 01:18:726 (7) - add NC
6. 02:00:383 (3,4) - try this
   vocal flow
   
7. 02:06:983 (5,6) - umm realy fitting blue line ?
   I think fitting this
   
8. 02:36:726 (6) - or 02:37:069 (7) - add NC
9. 02:39:640 (7) - add NC
10. 02:43:755 (11) - add NC
11. 02:47:697 (5) - add NC
12. 02:50:612 (6) - add NC
13. 02:58:840 (1) - add Finish at head point
14. 03:09:812 (1) - same as above
15. 03:21:983 (2) - I think end at 03:23:183 -
    not fitting at least end at blue line
16. 03:44:097 (1) - add Finish at head point
17. 04:06:040 (1) - same as above
18. 04:17:012 (1) - same as above

litoluna wrote:

hi~KuranteMelodii
from My Queue

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Bold : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.
[General]

1. I think good

[Polaris]

1. 00:42:897 (4) - add Finish at head point
   and 00:43:069 (1) - remove Finish at head point
   I listen Cymbals sound is here 00:42:897 - That might ruin the rhythm, but i'll give it a go
2. 00:45:126 (3) - I think fitting Whistle Fixed
3. 00:55:240 (7) - remove Finish at head point
4. 01:00:040 (3,4) - I think fitting Finish
   cuz these are same sound as 00:59:526 (1,2) - No, 00:59:526 (1,2) - Were sightly faster than 01:00:040 (3,4) -
5. 01:18:726 (7) - add NC
6. 02:00:383 (3,4) - try this
   vocal flow
   
7. 02:06:983 (5,6) - umm realy fitting blue line ?
   I think fitting this
   
8. 02:36:726 (6) - or 02:37:069 (7) - add NC It's pretty unnecessary since they're in red line
9. 02:39:640 (7) - add NC
10. 02:43:755 (11) - add NC
11. 02:47:697 (5) - add NC Same as 02:36:726 (6) -
12. 02:50:612 (6) - add NC
13. 02:58:840 (1) - add Finish at head point
14. 03:09:812 (1) - same as above
15. 03:21:983 (2) - I think end at 03:23:183 -
    not fitting at least end at blue line Darn you Kurante, How you supposed to put that on blue line
16. 03:44:097 (1) - add Finish at head point
17. 04:06:040 (1) - same as above
18. 04:17:012 (1) - same as above

GL~!!
mawaru~mawaru~

Hinsvar wrote:

the diff name

pls