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Yuka Tsujiyoko - Beauty Is A Mad Mistress

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Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, June 12, 2010 at 1:50:30 PM

Artist: Yuka Tsujiyoko
Title: Beauty Is A Mad Mistress
Source: Fire Emblem: Radiant Dawn
Tags: Krisom Dusty
BPM: 125
Filesize: 4792kb
Play Time: 01:16
Difficulties Available:
  1. Dusty's Sexy Knight Zelgius (4.44 stars, 130 notes)
  2. Fabulous (5 stars, 247 notes)
  3. Krisom's Miraculous (3.13 stars, 111 notes)
  4. Marvelous (1.95 stars, 73 notes)
Download: Yuka Tsujiyoko - Beauty Is A Mad Mistress
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Yeah 14th map.

Yeah no good backgrounds of Oliver so just random CGs~.
Last edited by Shohei Ohtani , edited 19 times in total.
Sakura
osu! Alumni
7,979 posts
Joined March 2010
Sakura
[General]
No tags?
Different offsets
2 empty .osb files.
Source = Fire Emblem?

[Marvelous]
Preview Point is not set
00:19:240 (4) - New combo and also center: 00:19:240 (4,5,6) more after (centering 6 would look nicer) or you can also use a new combo on (3), (4) and (6). [Suggestion]

[Fabulous]
Waah streams
Preview point is not set.
00:16:350 (1) - Try turning this into a slider, the next note is way too close!
00:21:150 (1,1,1) - Theese are hell, try either using longer spinners or replace them with sliders. (for every one of theese in the map)

That is all, nice map, decide fix or not fix, i'll remod after
Sakura
osu! Alumni
7,979 posts
Joined March 2010
Sakura
00:21:150 (1,1,1) - Theese are hell, try either using longer spinners or replace them with sliders. (for every one of theese in the map)

I still think you should fix this, however the map is good enough already. +
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
You could just make the offset 30.

Source is Fire Emblem: Radiant Dawn?

Also, make/have someone guest diff something in between easy and ridiculous please

[General]
EAR RAPE
Normal hitsounds suck, especially whistles and (oh god D:) sliderwhistles, don't do that, even just switching sets to Soft makes it 10000x better X_x

[Marvelous]
needs more OD

[Fabulous]
00:42:750 (3,4) - what's slider (4) doing there, it's so ugly, just copy+paste (1,2) and use 0.0x snap and it looks better
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
;~;.

Krisom said he'd do a guest diff, either Normal or Hard, so that should be added later today or tomorrow.
Krisom
osu! Alumni
2,867 posts
Joined April 2009
Krisom

CDFA wrote:

;~;.

Krisom said he'd do a guest diff, either Normal or Hard, so that should be added later today or tomorrow.
Are you talking 'bout me D:?! I KILL U >w<!

Guess what, It's a Normal! It's a Normal! If you don't like the name or the combocolours do what you want (I like them as they are, though)
If you can find a Lyn/Erika Background for that one It'd be great, if not, do what you want too :3

EDIT: Add me to the tags on every diff, and when you FUllSubmit, deletle the osb. file ;D

Download: Yuka Tsujiyoko - Beauty Is A Mad Mistress (CDFA) [Krisom's Miraculous].osu
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Sexy~.
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
[Krisom's Miraculous]
Symmetrical sliders :D, wooh nice. * just for that :p

I think OD+1 would be better, right now there seem to be too many notes onscreen at once o_o
just me though

01:11:070 (5) - Might be better Ctrl+H'd so it flows smoother, not a big deal though

soo can I make Hard or do you already have someone on that?
Louis Cyphre
2,684 posts
Joined October 2009
Louis Cyphre
Oh. CDFA, the man who ignored my map one time. hm... very interesting :evil:
Ah, never mind man : )
Must
Should
Strange

[Marvelous]
00:05:790 - distance
00:09:630 - ^
00:21:150 - ^
00:36:510 - ^
00:42:270 - ^
00:48:030 - ^
00:59:550 - ^
01:00:990 - ^
01:01:470 - ^
01:03:390 - ^

[Marculous]
00:00:030 - how you manage to hit this? ><
00:08:190 - distance
00:09:150 - ^
00:17:070 - ^
00:19:230 - remove new combo
00:40:350 - ^

[Fabulous]
This is motherfucking awesome :D
Very good
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Krisom
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Krisom

Louis Cyphre wrote:

[Marculous]
00:00:030 - how you manage to hit this? >< Just as you manage to hit 00:00:030 (1) In Fabulous
00:08:190 - distance Distance? Where? It's distance snapped alredy :/
00:09:150 - ^ No, Symmetry
00:17:070 - ^ No, Symmetry
00:19:230 - remove new combo No thanks
00:40:350 - ^ Do this please CDFA

Dusty wrote:

[Krisom's Miraculous]
Symmetrical sliders :D, wooh nice. * just for that :p Thank you ^^

I think OD+1 would be better, right now there seem to be too many notes onscreen at once o_o
just me though Do that CDFA, please

01:11:070 (5) - Might be better Ctrl+H'd so it flows smoother, not a big deal though Hmmm. Maybe you're right. CDFA, can you please ctr-H that one AND 01:03:390 (5)?

soo can I make Hard or do you already have someone on that?
I'm asking you to make those changes so that I don't have to upload those minor changes, I hope you don't mind CDFA :3, When someone suggests mayor changes I'll do them >w<!
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
ilu~

I'll add the changes when I get home.

Just as a note, guys, I'm not going to be here starting wednesday. I'll still (maybe) have access to the internet, but I won't have access to osu! until...sometime this week or so.
kino77
909 posts
Joined March 2009
kino77
Cool map~

[Marvelous]
Disable countdown?

[Krisom's Miraculous]
Note color 1 and 2 are too close to distinguish,try to make color 1 daker?

[Hard]
00:10:950 (10) - Remove?
00:11:070 (x) - Add a note here and switch new combo with next 1?
00:21:030 (6) - Remove?
00:58:830 (10) - Remove 1 repeat?

Have a star~
aRiskOfRain
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1,367 posts
Joined June 2009
aRiskOfRain
Marvelous;
00:09:630 (5) - New combo.
00:24:990 (3) - ^
00:32:190 (3) - ^
00:34:110 (5) - ^
01:03:390 (5) - ^
01:11:070 (5,1) - Switch the new combos.

Miraculous;
01:03:390 (5) - New combo.
01:11:070 (5) - ^

ugiguuig;
00:57:630 (6,7,8,9,10) - What just no
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
What's wrong with you guys saying FABULOUS ~? ;~;.

I'll add these in when I'm able to access a computer that can play osu (Monday or Tuesday)
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
enjoy

Download: Yuka Tsujiyoko - Beauty Is A Mad Mistress (CDFA) [Dusty's Fat Bishop].osu
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
ilu dusty <3~.

Yeah I'm going to get back hopefuly by monday, so all of these changes should be added in either Monday or Tuesday.
Frill
514 posts
Joined March 2010
Frill
[Marvelous]

Fun.

[Krisom's Miraculous]

Fun.

[Dusty's Fat Bishop]

00:40:110 (6) - 1 grid left

[Fabulous]

00:53:790 (3) - New combo?



This is Fun map.
It wishes to be ranked.


+Star
NoHitter
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3,785 posts
Joined June 2009
NoHitter
General
Tags per diff must be the same.
[Marvelous] and [Fabulous] has no Tags, [Krisom's] has lacks "Dusty" in Tags

Marvelous
00:02:910 (2) - Spacing
00:30:750 (2) - Not so good looking slider
00:32:190 (1,2) - Note overlapping slider doesn't look good either
00:57:630 (4) - New combo for consistency [00:19:230 (1,2,3)]

Dusty's
Slider Tick rate = 4 is way too high. It doesn't as sound good too. Edit: Nevermind 2 or 4 both sound ok.
00:36:990 (1) - Very sudden jump. Maybe make it face outwards from the center instead? (But that means change the next combo too)

Fabulous
00:05:310 (11,12) - You can't tell which goes first if you disable Snaking Sliders.
00:39:870 (13,14) - ^
NotShinta
1,021 posts
Joined September 2009
NotShinta
Sorry for the wait

General
Make tick rate 2 on all diffs
Different backgrounds wah
Consider using like Normal hitsounds on like less softer parts

Marvelous
All of these are slider nazi's BTW.
00:30:750 (2) - Ewwwwww. Rough suggestion.
00:34:590 (1) - Doesn't look that bootiful. Try aligning start and end.
00:44:190 (1) -Yeah, I suggest changing the tick rate to 2 to make the ticks better placed. Mentioned in General
01:05:310 (1) - Blah
01:07:230 (1) - Also facking disgusting. Symmetry might save it.

Krisom's Miraculous
This uses 1/6. The other difficulties use 1/2 or 1/4. WTF.
00:01:470 (5) - Tick rate of 2 to make this (and other sliders) look more symmetrical. Mentioned in General
01:05:310 (1,2,3,4) - Turn this upside down so 1 doesn't overlap with 01:03:390 (1).

Dusty's Fat Bishop
4 tick rate what etc. etc.
I must compliment this diff even if just for the BG
00:58:830 (5) - Spacing. Remember to fix notes after.

Fabulous
00:26:910 (2) - Change this so it goes through (1). Repeat with (3).
01:05:310 (2) - Symmetry plz.

Most are suggestions starred.
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
oh hoh I like the BG you put on my diff~

very sexy~

Download: Yuka Tsujiyoko - Beauty Is A Mad Mistress (CDFA) [Dusty's Fat Bishop].osu
Krisom
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Joined April 2009
Krisom
Fix'd to what I felt like fixing.

Download: Yuka Tsujiyoko - Beauty Is A Mad Mistress (CDFA) [Krisom's Miraculous].osu
AngelHoney
2,155 posts
Joined May 2009
AngelHoney
All

use same Tags for all diffs
remove Countdown for all diffs

Fabulous

01:05:310 (2) - symmetry

Fat Bishop

this BG is ...hmm...strange?
00:58:110 (2,3,4) - move farther ?

Miraculous

fine

Marvelous

fine <3

nice map :3
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
:3~.

Ok so Fabulous mode has a lower HP Drain rate than Dusty's move and Krisom's mode is that bad?
thekillerhjkhjk
259 posts
Joined October 2008
thekillerhjkhjk
marvelous

nothing

kristom's miraculous

nothing

Dusty's fat bishop

01:02:910 (3) - move this between the one before and after it, the jump is confuzing

Fabulous

00:18:510 (1) - move left one square

00:34:590 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make the sounds start soft and get louder throughout these notes

01:05:310 (2) - snap the second slider point to the top right corner of the grid section its currently inside of

I love the streams... but the bats might not... just soemthing to consider

STAR :3~
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty

thekillerhjkhjk wrote:

Dusty's fat bishop

01:02:910 (3) - move this between the one before and after it, the jump is confuzing
oh fine

Download: Yuka Tsujiyoko - Beauty Is A Mad Mistress (CDFA) [Dusty's Sexy Knight Zelgius].osu
Sekuyi
181 posts
Joined December 2009
Sekuyi
Nice. All fine with me ^^
Cookie~*
Xgor
Elite Mapper
2,534 posts
Joined April 2009
Xgor
[Backgrounds]
09.png and and 40.png has pretty bad proportions and give off black borders <.<
crop 09.png to 757x568 and 40.png to 597x448.

[Marvelous]
00:04:830 (4) - Move down one grid? (Level 3)

[Kirsom]
Doesn't have Dusty in tags!

[Sexy Dusty]
00:21:150 (1) - Ugh, I hate sliders touching the HP bar like this :/
00:24:990 (1) - ^
00:36:510 (1,2) - (Minor suggestion) Move both circles one grid further from each other so they not touch each other (That grid size you have)

[Fabulous]
00:18:870 (4) - Move one grid right (Level 3)
00:39:870 (13,14) - I wish that those sliders were pointing in the opposite direction instead of somewhat pointing in the opposite direction.

Fire Emblem :>
*star*
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
I'll fix the backgrounds when I feel like it (although I do like the black borders >:3~.), and I'll wait for Dusty to make his changes.
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
stupid HP bar

Download: Yuka Tsujiyoko - Beauty Is A Mad Mistress (CDFA) [Dusty's Sexy Knight Zelgius].osu
eee
692 posts
Joined January 2008
eee
I'm sorry I couldn't mod it earlier... it's just school is close to an end ya know :/

so, here's what's what...
Easy/Normal maps don't really appeal to me, so I'll just skip those. Krisom's is pretty good though

Dusty's is pretty sexy. The map, of course.

Fabulous is too hard for me, I like some parts, good job on that.

I can't find anything, I'll just shoot a star.
Mafiamaster
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3,460 posts
Joined July 2008
Mafiamaster
37.png <--- Why so big. (File size)

[Fabulous]
00:56:910 (5) - Hidden!
00:58:830 (10) - ^!
vytalibus
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870 posts
Joined May 2008
vytalibus
There's nothing needed to be fixed around here. Except for the BG, which CDFA asked specifically for. I say, make the BG into a smaller resolution.

Starred, though.
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Made some other background changes, along with the one Mafia and vyt talked about.

also deleted .osb
Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
bubbleD
Andrea
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Andrea
Good.

Ranked~
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
Shohei Ohtani
Scores for Fabulous:

S
C
C
C
C

I'm not sure weather to feel happy or sad :D~
Cuddlebun
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Joined August 2008
Cuddlebun
moar Fire Emblem plz
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