A star for you <3
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[Simple]
00:37:900 (3) - isso ta mt fora. n tem problema, n faz diferença ingame
00:44:493 (3) - ^^ ^
[Advanced]
Ta d boa.
[Pure]
CS 4.5 n ta mt exagerado??????? nops, é a dificuldade mais dificil, pra não ficar MUITO fácil, eu deixei o cs um pouquinho menor, n mudou muita coisa mas pelo menos equilibrou o star rating
00:23:395 (2,3,1) - gira isso um pouco pra ficar com o flow parecido com o disso 00:22:076 (1) - . Ou então puxa o fim do dele pra baixo prefiro assim
00:56:362 (1,2) - move isso um pouco mais pra direita 1 ou 2x ta bom. n faz muita diferença
Obrigado, dinada.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~MkGuh wrote:
Oiee <3Simple
00:44:493 (3,1) - melhore esse blanket xD tente fazer isso , talvez http://puu.sh/iOjlB/d887c3ac3d.jpg ta
Essa dificuldade tambem está muito boa, nada de errado com ela , parabéns xD obgAdvanced
Essa dificuldade está realmente muita boa, não encontrei nada de errado nela, só que eu acho que você utilizou poucos blankets nela, talvez você poderia tentar fazer um blanket com esses dois sliders 00:37:900 (3,1) - por ex http://puu.sh/iOj3W/ab727eaaa9.jpg quantidade de blanket n importa ):Pure
00:19:438 (1,2) - tenta fazer um blanket parecido com esse http://puu.sh/iOhtF/b3a1a3bd8a.jpg fica bem mais bonito, na minha opinião :3 vou evitar ficar arrumando blanket, é algo que quase não faz diferença ingame,
00:34:603 (4) - mova esse slider para x:284 e y:108, assim você pode consertar o blanket com 00:33:944 (3), e caso vc queira, mova essa nota 00:33:614 (2) para o mesmo do lugar do slider para consertar a stack (lógico que para isso você tera que ajustar as notas anteriores e seguintes) ^
01:00:318 (4,5) - que tal tambem melhorar esse blanket? Movendo um pouco o final do slider, esse blanket pode ser bem melhorado xD ^
01:03:614 (4) - eu entendi esse jump aqui, mas que tal mover esse slider um pouco mais para baixo e mais para o lado direito? ele está quase tocando na hp bar, e isso não é muito legal, mova por ex para x:180 e y:36 (ajuste as notas seguintes caso for aplicar isso) estragou a estética do meu pattern, eu arrumaria se estivesse literalmente tocando na hp bar
É só isso xD Espero que tenha sido útil meu mod, tchau <3
thank you very much <3[ Space ] wrote:
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[General][Simple]
- BPM: Looks good to me
- Offset: Fine
- Folder: Good
- AiMod: Perfect
00:28:669 (3) - Curve the end of this more to create a consistent blanket. sure
00:40:537 (1) - As much as I love these sliders, it is a little inconsistent having it here when all other notes following this type of music are the same in themselves. it's ok for me
00:51:087 (1) - Bring the middle anchor to these points: X:188 Y:140 ok
Bring the end anchor to these points: X:232 Y:46
00:55:043 (3,1) - The curve on slider 3 is hardly what it should be. Moving slider 3 - 2 ticks forward we see this: ok
01:06:911 (1) - I think flow would be better if you put it here: X:292 Y:112 yes
[Advanced]
00:20:757 (2) - You can see the bump in this slider, I don't know if it was intentional. If it was: I would make it more of a scythe look. If it wasn't why not try this?: I like my slider style, but yours is nice too
I prefer this one:
EDIT: I didn't actually show the anchor points, it goes something like this:
00:37:900 (3) - ^ same
00:47:131 (2) - This slider skips over a beat in the song, heard here 00:47:790 It isn't a big problem, I believe. I prefer to keep my slider style
00:51:087 (1) - ^^ same
00:52:406 (2) - Move this to blanket better like so: sure
01:12:186 (1) - I would make this note quieter. I want to keep consistency with the other difficulties
[Pure]
00:19:438 (1) - Being nit-picky but move the anchor in the 2nd curve to the right a bit the slider seems fine to me
00:23:395 (2) - This to these co-ords: X:44 Y:168 done
01:00:977 (5) - Move this down a touch for a more consistent blanket yep
Beautiful mapset, really hope you get this ranked.
thank u shadrenShadren wrote:
[Simple]
00:33:944 (2,1) - blanket fixed, I think
00:56:362 (1,2) - what about blanket here? sure
01:06:911 (1) - what about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3411942 ok
01:16:142 - 5% of hitsounds is unrankable when you use it with spinner, imo. Change it to 10%. Also, fix at another diffs fixed all
[Advanced]
00:47:131 (2) - I prefer to use 1/2 slider + 1/2 slider + circle http://puu.sh/j52g8/b222ccf0a8.jpg done
00:53:724 (3) - what about to change it to 1/1 slider? I want to keep consistency with other parts
[Pure]
01:04:933 (2,3) - wrong DS? this is like this just because of the star (purposely)
I am really don't know what to mod here. Only if blankets, and that's all. Nice beatmap, so calm and smooth. gl to rank it c:
Nhawak wrote:
thank you very muchhhhhh *_*
Nhawak wrote:
thank you very muchhhhhh *_*
22:48 Nhawak: hellou :3
22:54 appleeaterx: hii
22:56 Nhawak: are you accepting check requests? :_: if yes, can you check it? I got a bubble
22:56 *Nhawak is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/728979 Raujika - Lost Imagination [Pure]]
22:57 appleeaterx: oh i heard this song before
22:57 appleeaterx: uhmm
22:57 appleeaterx: ill check it when i have some time left
22:57 Nhawak: sure
22:57 Nhawak: thank you
23:11 appleeaterx: ok im done, irc okay?
23:11 Nhawak: sure
23:12 appleeaterx: Disable widescreen/countdown/letterbox in all diffs. They are not needed.
23:12 Nhawak: oh true
23:12 Nhawak: I forgot about it xD
23:13 appleeaterx: lol
23:13 appleeaterx: what
23:14 Nhawak: I closed my game unintentionally
23:14 Nhawak: sorry
23:14 appleeaterx: yea i noticed xd
23:14 appleeaterx: in pure diff: 00:23:395 (2,3) - I understand this is more meant to be a Hard diff, but any reason why DS is inconsistent here?
23:15 Nhawak: I'll fix it
23:17 appleeaterx: 00:34:603 (4,1) - I don't really like to be nazi and mention blankets, but this one is particular is quite off. For simple maps like these it's better to have everything perfect imo.
23:17 appleeaterx: lol thats all
23:17 appleeaterx: sorry for the last suggestion, bit nazi - but everything else is perfect, love the slider creativity c:
23:17 appleeaterx: tell me when u updated
23:18 Nhawak: sure
23:18 Nhawak: :3
23:19 Nhawak: http://puu.sh/j5goP/2387d3146e.jpg
23:19 Nhawak: is it ok?
23:20 appleeaterx: lol ofc xd
23:21 Nhawak: updated