4k shazaaaaaaaaam!!!!!!!!
[EZ]
-In the intro, You could have tried something much fun for the beginners to play such as mixing notes and lns , in the intro we have many potential on where to place lns such as the music is being played by a violin you could try something like >
http://puu.sh/hGQ5H/d442a8d369.jpg For an example only. You could tweak the intro a little bit more you could try something like that on the picture to prevent monotone movement or flow of your diff cause your just placing NOTES NOTES NOTES NOTES NOTES and the thing is they're 1/1 so its a little boring to play however by adding lns as what i said could do something very fun, now you were thinking that only notes fits better here? cause its a EZ diff which is the LNS should be less? and focus on notes instead? well i dont really like that if thats what your thinking. I dont really like your monotoneous intro.
00:08:625 (8625|1) - would consider adding another note here cause the sound is too catchy and is already loud enough.
00:07:875 (7875|2,8250|0) - would like you to try this because the ln catches the roll sound which is a better idea to follow
http://puu.sh/hGQh0/3f5b09342e.jpg00:25:500 (25500|3,25500|0) - you started placing lns . 00:30:000 (30000|0,30000|3) - you stopped placing lns which has the same sound 00:41:250 (41250|1,41250|0) - you started placing lns again. I DONT THINK THIS IS A GOOD IDEA where there are the same sound but the lns isnt consistent on where should they be placed should they be places continously or should they placed by this part and this part. IDK make up your mind try to be alittle imaginative, " Oh i heard this sound again better place a ln here like i did in the last one " " oh this part is the same i should definitely add another one here"
Things like that.
00:18:750 (18750|0,19125|1) - are like 00:16:875 (16875|2,16875|1,17250|2,17250|3) - better fix them.
00:19:875 (19875|0,20250|1) - maybe make this a ln instead as the note in here now is not actually working, or it plays bland/bad/not fitting etc.
00:43:875 (43875|1,44062|0) - better turn this into ln instead i guess [?]
01:14:625 (74625|1) - add another note cause of the loud sound.
01:09:000 (69000|0,69000|2) - in this part gets a little boring, try to add another note or double the parts where it has a clap sound such as 01:09:375 (69375|1,70125|2) - etc.
[NM]
-I personally didnt liked that 1/4 so much idea of yours but anyways
00:03:375 (3375|0,3562|1) - move them 1 column right for flow
00:08:062 (8062|2) - i prefer if youd have something like an ln here to cover those rolls or something. it plays better.
00:10:687 (10687|2,10781|1) - i would totally delete these lns if your not going to use it continously such as 00:12:187 (12187|1) -
i dont know why but you keep doing that lmao but anyways its a bad idea its inconsistent it makes the chart bland and so on x.x
00:20:437 (20437|1) - would add another note because of that sound
00:22:312 (22312|3,22406|2) - -> 00:23:812 (23812|2) - x__________________________X
00:26:062 (26062|1,26062|2) - since youve doubled here i would like to suggest that youd make 00:25:875 (25875|3) - also a double in which part they re the same sound and so on
00:48:000 (48000|2,48000|3) - you stopped your ln and youve stopped youre triples at 00:49:500 (49500|0,49500|3) - which has the same triples the there should be oh noes i dont know.
02:00:187 (120187|0) - would like to move to 4 th cause this note have no sense following 02:00:375 (120375|1,120375|2) - 's pattern
[HD]
00:04:500 (4500|0) - would suggest that you would have a double here as to show consistency with 00:03:000 (3000|2,3000|3) - and so on and so forth.
00:09:656 (9656|2) - doesnt really have a sound even if it has its so small you couldnt hear anything.
00:22:781 (22781|2) - ghostnote pamur
00:25:875 (25875|2,26062|2) - since were in hd now lets move on with placing single note on a part where it is already loud ok? make these doubles.
00:44:625 (44625|1,44625|2,44625|0) - OKAY.PNGJPGMP3MP4WAV
00:51:375 (51375|0,51375|3) - - 00:56:250 (56250|1,56250|3) - SOOKAY.PNGJPGMP3MP4AUDIOWAVFLV
01:00:093 (60093|3,60281|0) - ghostnote pamur well idk lol
01:08:062 (68062|2,68250|2) - these part have already deep and loud sound and yet you insist placing only a note? PLEASESHAPPY
[MX]
00:20:437 (20437|2) - double plis were in mx already .,_.
MX and SC seems fine for me wont touch anything further between these two.
[SHD]
Personal opinion is about to be insert.
In your diff i wouldnt suggest that youll map silent parts with 1/4 even tho its too obvious that "that" part cannot have 1/4 such as the sound itself is really low. I know youre a good mapper but if you are really a mapper you wouldnt put 1/4 in everything just to make it harder. There's always a way to make things harder without spamming the diff for example here i know you would have already played my mastication, thats the hardest diff tho i didnt insist to spam and spam and spam. I know that this is the hardest diff and it should be that hard to be called as a SHD but this wont work i know it, But idk its up to you if you would change it or not and so on and so forth.
Henti