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MAKI - I~jan! Yuujou (TV Size)

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Kurai
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on lundi 7 juin 2010 at 17:53:00

Artist: MAKI
Title: I~jan! Yuujou (TV Size)
Source: Doujin Work
Tags: kuroneko-sherald
BPM: 185
Filesize: 7604kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,43 stars, 145 notes)
  2. HardWorking (4,92 stars, 222 notes)
  3. Kuro Easy (2,75 stars, 109 notes)
  4. Normal (3,06 stars, 96 notes)
  5. Taiko~ (4,92 stars, 292 notes)
Download: MAKI - I~jan! Yuujou (TV Size)
Download: MAKI - I~jan! Yuujou (TV Size) (no video)
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3rd Map. From Doujin Work ^o^
Easy Guest diff by Kuroneko-sHerald !
Last edited by Kurai , edited 2 times in total.
Scar
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Scar
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Kuroneko-sHerald
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Kuroneko-sHerald
I think that these diffs should be:
Easy --> Normal
Normal --> Hard
Hard --> Insane
but it's just an opinion.

[Easy]
00:41:813 (1) - Too long. Try to divide it or do something else.
00:49:759 (1) - Maybe a break after this spinner?
01:11:975 (5) - New combo?
01:12:299 (1) - Remove new combo?

[Normal]
  • 00:41:813 (1) - Remove 1 repeat.
    00:43:759 (1) - Move to 00:43:434 (1) -
    00:45:056 (1) - Move to 00:44:732 (1) - and remove 1 repeat.
    00:46:678 (1) - Move to 00:46:029 (1) - and remove 2 repeat.
    00:47:326 (x) - Add another slider (like that 00:46:029 (1) - )
    In that way it should follow more the song.
01:23:813 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:24:299 (2) - New combo.

[Hard]
00:41:813 (5,6,7,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Not sure that you can do this thing.

P.S. Can I do a diff? :D
Kuroneko-sHerald
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Kuroneko-sHerald
Sorry for double post.

Here is my diff :D

Download: MAKI - I~jan! Yuujou (TV Size) (Kurai_) [Kuro Easy].osu

P.S. Yes, there are a lot of spinner <.<
Kurai
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Hum... Why not :O
I'll do a mod later.
Scar
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Scar
[Kuro Easy]
Too many finish :/
Hitsounds need work imo
Some suggestions for HS
If you don't like it, ignore it~

00:08:407 (1,2) - Whistle
00:08:894 (3) - Whistle in the end
00:09:867 (5) - Whistle in begin
00:11:002 (1) - Clap
00:11:326 (2) - Begin = Whistle, Reverse = clap, End = Nothing
00:13:596 (1) - Clap
00:13:920 (2) - Begin = Whistle, Reverse = clap, End = Nothing
00:16:191 (1) - Clap
00:16:515 (2) - Nothing
00:16:840 (3) - Clap
00:17:164 (4) - Whistle
00:17:813 (5) - Clap in reverse
00:18:786 (1) - Clap
00:19:110 (2) - Nothing
00:19:434 (3) - Clap
00:19:759 (4) - Begin = Whistle, End = Clap
00:21:380 (1) - Clap
00:21:542 (2) - Nothing
00:21:705 (3) - Whistle
00:21:867 (4) - Clap
00:22:678 (1) - Clap
00:22:840 (2) - Nothing
00:23:002 (3) - Whistle
00:23:164 (4) - Clap
00:23:975 (1) - First Reverse = nothing, Second Reverse = Whistle
00:25:272 (2) - ^
00:26:569 (1) - Begin = Clap, End = Whistle
00:27:867 (2) - ^
00:29:164 (1,2) - Whistle
00:29:651 (3) - First Reverse = Whistle, Third Reverse = clap
00:30:786 (4) - Clap
00:31:110 (5) - Whistle
00:31:434 (6) - Clap
00:31:759 (1) - Begin = Whistle, End = Finish
00:34:353 (2) - Nothing
00:35:164 (1) - Nothing
00:36:623 (1) - Clap in begin
00:37:272 (2) - Clap
00:37:921 (4) - Clap
00:38:569 (6) - Clap
00:40:353 (1) - Whistle
00:40:678 (2) - Whistle in the end
00:48:623 (1) - Begin = Whistle, End = Clap
00:49:596 (3) - Clap
00:49:759 (4) - Whistle
00:53:813 (1) - Clap
00:54:461 (3) - Clap in begin
00:55:110 (4) - Clap
00:55:759 (6) - Clap in begin
00:56:407 (1) - ^
00:59:002 (1) - Clap at three points
01:00:948 (2) - Clap
01:01:272 (3) - Nothing
01:01:596 (1) - Clap in begin
01:04:191 (1) - Clap
01:04:191 (1,2,3,4) - Clap
01:06:786 (5) - Begin = Clap, End = Nothing
01:09:380 (1) - Begin = Clap, End = Clap
01:11:975 (3) - Begin = Clap, End = Nothing
01:19:110 (1) - Only Finish
01:19:759 (2) - Begin = Clap, End = Nothing
01:21:056 (2) - Clap
01:21:380 (3) - Nothing
01:21:705 (1) - Clap
01:22:029 (2) - Whistle
01:22:353 (3) - Begin = Clap, End = Nothing
01:24:299 (1) - Begin = Clap, End = Whistle
01:25:921 (2) - Whistle

Sorry for my poor english~
Kuroneko-sHerald
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scar1410 wrote:

[Kuro Easy]
Too many finish :/
Hitsounds need work imo
Some suggestions for HS
If you don't like it, ignore it~

00:08:407 (1,2) - Whistle Done.
00:08:894 (3) - Whistle in the end Done.
00:09:867 (5) - Whistle in begin Done.
00:11:002 (1) - Clap Done.
00:11:326 (2) - Begin = Whistle, No. Reverse = clap, Yes. End = Nothing Yes.
00:13:596 (1) - Clap Done.
00:13:920 (2) - Begin = Whistle, No. Reverse = clap, Yes. End = Nothing Yes.
00:16:191 (1) - Clap Done.
00:16:515 (2) - Nothing Done.
00:16:840 (3) - Clap Done.
00:17:164 (4) - Whistle No.
00:17:813 (5) - Clap in reverse Done.
00:18:786 (1) - Clap Done.
00:19:110 (2) - Nothing Done.
00:19:434 (3) - Clap Done.
00:19:759 (4) - Begin = Whistle, End = Clap No.
00:21:380 (1) - Clap Done.
00:21:542 (2) - Nothing Done.
00:21:705 (3) - Whistle Done.
00:21:867 (4) - Clap Done.
00:22:678 (1) - Clap Done.
00:22:840 (2) - Nothing Done.
00:23:002 (3) - Whistle Done.
00:23:164 (4) - Clap Done.
00:23:975 (1) - First Reverse = nothing, Second Reverse = Whistle Done.
00:25:272 (2) - ^ Done but with clap+ whistle on second reverse.
00:26:569 (1) - Begin = Clap, End = Whistle No.
00:27:867 (2) - ^ No.
00:29:164 (1,2) - Whistle Done.
00:29:651 (3) - First Reverse = Whistle, Third Reverse = clap Done.
00:30:786 (4) - Clap Done.
00:31:110 (5) - Whistle No.
00:31:434 (6) - Clap No.
00:31:759 (1) - Begin = Whistle, End = Finish Done.
00:34:353 (2) - Nothing Done.
00:35:164 (1) - Nothing Done.
00:36:623 (1) - Clap in begin Done.
00:37:272 (2) - Clap Done.
00:37:921 (4) - Clap Done.
00:38:569 (6) - Clap Done.
00:40:353 (1) - Whistle Done.
00:40:678 (2) - Whistle in the end Done.
00:48:623 (1) - Begin = Whistle, End = Clap Done.
00:49:596 (3) - Clap Done.
00:49:759 (4) - Whistle Done.
00:53:813 (1) - Clap No.
00:54:461 (3) - Clap in begin No.
00:55:110 (4) - Clap No.
00:55:759 (6) - Clap in begin No.
00:56:407 (1) - ^ No.
00:59:002 (1) - Clap at three points No.
01:00:948 (2) - Clap No.
01:01:272 (3) - Nothing Done.
01:01:596 (1) - Clap in begin Done.
01:04:191 (1) - Clap No.
01:04:191 (1,2,3,4) - Clap No.
01:06:786 (5) - Begin = Clap, End = Nothing Done.
01:09:380 (1) - Begin = Clap, End = Clap No.
01:11:975 (3) - Begin = Clap, End = Nothing No.
01:19:110 (1) - Only Finish Done.
01:19:759 (2) - Begin = Clap, End = Nothing Done.
01:21:056 (2) - Clap No.
01:21:380 (3) - Nothing No.
01:21:705 (1) - Clap Done.
01:22:029 (2) - Whistle Done.
01:22:353 (3) - Begin = Clap, Done. End = Nothing No.
01:24:299 (1) - Begin = Clap, End = Whistle No.
01:25:921 (2) - Whistle There is already this HS.
Download: MAKI - I~jan! Yuujou (TV Size) (Kurai_) [Kuro Easy].osu
AgentYous
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D'apres moi ca serait super si tu l'ameloreait un peu plus
+1 star.
Fight69
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~StaaaaaaaaaaAAAAAaaaAAAAAAAAR !
AngelHoney
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AngelHoney
Max dimensions for the background should be 1024x768. Yours is 1137x768 :'(

HardWorking

00:41:813 (5,6,7,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - no good ..for Insane D:
hard to mod D:

Hard

00:14:894 (1,2,3) - spacing?

Normal

01:01:596 (1,2,3,4) - hard to read for Normal :<

Easy

Tags:kuroneko-sherald

Star~ :)
Yuji Tokaji
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:O

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abalee
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Normal:
00:35:975 (2) - try not to place it upon 00:37:272 (2) - coz hit300 will block the reverse arrow.
00:49:759 (1,1) - Errr... IMO it is meaningless to place two spinners here...use only one, or extend the first spinner to 00:51:705 and the second start at 00:51:867

Edit: changed. Bubbled.
Gens
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[Easy]

00:14:894 (1) - This spinner doesn't fit...
00:44:732 (1) - Definitely too long. Makes more sense if it finishes at 00:47:002.

[Normal]

00:21:380 - A bit lame that all these notes are in the center.

[HardWorking]

00:11:002 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent with 00:13:596 (1,2,3) and the rest... to put it simply, there should be a beat at 00:11:488 and 00:11:651 (2) should be a beat.

Audio is a bit low-quality... though I guess it's acceptable.
Overall, I'd like to see more finishes...

And that's it.

EDIT: Oh yeah, forgot: offset works better at 632.
Kurai
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All Done :3

Thanks Abalee and Gens >.<
Kuroneko-sHerald
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Please don't modify my diff without aking me first :o

Gens wrote:

[Easy]

00:14:894 (1) - This spinner doesn't fit... Changed.
00:44:732 (1) - Definitely too long. Makes more sense if it finishes at 00:47:002. Done.
Download: MAKI - I~jan! Yuujou (TV Size) (Kurai_) [Kuro Easy].osu
Kurai
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Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

Please don't modify my diff without aking me first :o

Gens wrote:

[Easy]

00:14:894 (1) - This spinner doesn't fit... Changed.
00:44:732 (1) - Definitely too long. Makes more sense if it finishes at 00:47:002. Done.
[attachment=0:6f2e2]MAKI - I~jan! Yuujou (TV Size) (Kurai_) [Kuro Easy].osu[/attachment:6f2e2]
:) Changed~
Gens
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Well, I'd have thought that you would add notes after that shortened spinner so it's less awkward... but now that I look at it it's kinda messy. Try this:

1st spinner: 00:42:145 - 00:44:091
2nd spinner: 00:44:740 - 00:46:686

And then you add beats at 00:47:334.

On easy of course.
Kurai
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Gens wrote:

Well, I'd have thought that you would add notes after that shortened spinner so it's less awkward... but now that I look at it it's kinda messy. Try this:

1st spinner: 00:42:145 - 00:44:091 Done
2nd spinner: 00:44:740 - 00:46:686 Done

And then you add beats at 00:47:334. I wait for Kuroneko for this change.

On easy of course.
Kuroneko-sHerald
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I hope that this time it will be ok :o

Download: MAKI - I~jan! Yuujou (TV Size) (Kurai_) [Kuro Easy].osu
Gens
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Rebubbled!
Andrea
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I can't find any problem. Well done.

Ranked~
Kurai
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Thanks :)
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