Keada wrote:

Hey tharrrr o3o/ M4M
Really nice map <3

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  General

1. You can uncheck letterbox during break, unless you want to make a storyboard
   
   lol, what you meant is 'Widescreen Support' it's fine, trust me
   

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  Another

1. 00:07:147 (1,2,3) - the overlaps looks abit ugly tbh D: try to do something like this
   is it overlap? I don't see it
   
2. 00:14:814 (1) - could move this to x:186 y:206 so it stacks with 00:13:314 (2) - and that also makes a nice diamond pattern
   nice point, but the previous one is fine too
   
3. 00:20:480 (4) - could move sliderend so it stacks with 00:19:147 (4) -
   no, I was on purpose to make this symmetrical
   
4. 00:32:980 (3,4,5) - doesnt really fit with a triple here tbh there is not triple rhythm in the song ;w;
   ok, I have to admit it's overmapped, but I don't think it would lead to something risky
   
5. 00:37:814 (1) - move this to x:92 y:344 and 00:37:980 (2) - to x:184 y:376 to correct the pattern
   Fixed but litte adjustment
   
6. 00:41:147 (3,4,5,1,2) - wouldve looked so much better if you moved them like this
   Fixed
   
7. 00:42:480 (1) - stack with 00:40:814 (2) -
   Fixed
   
8. 00:46:647 (4) - sliderend stack with 00:45:480 (3) -
   no, that's not so obvious
   
9. 00:47:147 (1) - move a bit to the right so it doesnt overlap 00:46:480 (3) -
   well, that overlap can't be unrankable right?
   
10. 00:58:980 (4) - moving this to x:156 y:192 would be much better
    no, it doesn't look good
    
11. 01:27:814 (1) - stack with 01:26:480 (3) -
    same reason, it's not obvious during playing
    
12. 01:28:980 (3,4,5) - could place these three so the (4) stacks with 01:28:147 (2) -
    I don't like stack in this part. sorry
    
13. 01:30:314 (3,4,5) - same as ^ just stack (5) with 01:31:814 (5) -
    random things would be more fun
    
14. 01:39:980 (1) - move a bit to the side, pattern fix xD around x;260 y:140 should work
    Fixed
    
15. 01:41:064 - I hear a note here , would be fun to
    OK, but I need more suggestions to make sure
    
16. 01:47:147 (1) - move this to x:512 y:204 and then after move this pattern 01:47:814 (1,2,3,4) - to x:268 y:80
    the same, you can't notice the stack in actual gaming
    
17. 01:53:814 (4) - make this slider more symmetrical
    that's picky, you can't notice this in gaming ;w;

Rest of the diffs looks good for me

Good luck~

Thanks for your modding!

• Translation for things above, Epic-chan notice this plz

  
  [Hyper]
  
  00:09:564 (4,6) - remove the whistle or lower the volume
  
  00:33:147 (4,1) - using a slider like 02:01:147 (5) -would be better
  
  00:34:480 (1) - Lower the SV? you can try sv about 0.75x
  
  00:42:314 (2,1) - 01:32:814 (2,4) - blanket
  
  00:44:147 (4) - ctrl+G？
  
  01:34:314 (2,3) - weird place, I think people would think it's 1/2, not 1/4

tm1209 wrote:

[General]


蓝线可以都删了 意义不大

Letterbox during breaks可以关掉 应该没必要，黑框没有挡到背景的妹子


[Another]

4.4左右的难度的话个人倾向于OD7.5或者7 现在的玩家不是都喜欢OD8的刷分图吗

全程1.0x的滑条和80%的音量我觉得可以稍微做点变化出来 我懒，你知道我基本上图都没有自定义音效和绿线的。

00:17:147 (5) - 这里我觉得可以把滑条加速一下，1.2x应该不错，这种flow的话我就觉得挺有意思
事实上不得不说的是整个曲子似乎就是这么一个地方跟了人声，感觉那个1/1滑条也是可以改成一个1/2滑条和一个圈的，并不影响节奏
如果是drumstep还好，这种平平淡淡的曲子还是不要加速为好

02:01:480 (1) - 这个滑条可以加点速 在这里我用了1.25x的滑条，感觉应该还行 音乐没什么声音了，应该没有必要

02:02:814 (1) - 和之前一样的建议，这个滑条我感觉可以比之前那个更快一点比如1.5x的速度，另外建议滑条尾消音 消音这个我记下来了，待定，因为不是很确定

[Hard]

OD5.5？5的话感觉还是太低了点 OD5挺好的。照顾了Spread

00:52:314 (5,1) - 间距，只有这个是1.4其他的全是1.3 Fixed

01:11:480 (2) - blanket可以微调一下，建议是移到325 149 Fixed

01:28:980 (2,3,4) - 间距有点问题，同样建议微调 Fixed

01:56:480 (3,1) - blanket，不过看上去似乎没有放blanket 的意思。。 是的

02:02:814 (1) - 同样建议滑条尾消音 同上，待定

[Normal]

AR5？不太喜欢AR和OD是一样的 Fixed

02:02:814 (1) - 滑条尾消音 待定

就这样祝rank

谢谢你的MOD！

Epic wrote:

;w;

please fix my diff instead of me. I can't turn on my computer cause school exam has been started

Keada wrote:

[Epic's hyper]

01:17:397 (3,4) - could make them look nicer, for example http://puu.sh/imcTT/2d72eaabf2.jpg
01:49:064 (3,4) - have equal spacing
01:49:814 (1) - move this to x:124 y:200 to correct star pattern

fixed

tm1209 wrote:

[Hyper]

01:32:814 (2,4) - blanket

Fixed

Thanks for your modding!

Crystal wrote:

[Another]
00:18:480 - 这个音给个打击比较好吧 你其他所有这种音都是有打击的
有clap啊..?

00:45:647 (4) - 152|56? 00:45:064 (1,2,3) - 这种后面的一般给个跳会比较舒服的感觉
我觉得遮挡也不错

01:45:064 - 漏音了
我本来打算就是跟的电音而不是鼓点。而且应该这个不算是违规..危险系数不高、

02:02:814 (1) - 这样? 照应02:01:480 (1,2)
后面没有明显的鼓点，应该没有必要。

[Epic's Hyper]
00:21:647 (4,1) - Swap NC?
Fixed

01:54:480 (4,5) - Try this? Please avoid stacking.
Fixed

02:00:480 (1,2,3,4) - I think this can easily lead to a misreading, try something similar to 02:01:980 (1,2,3,4) - .

感觉剩下3个难度都没啥问题orz orz orz orz
take a star!

1. 00:13:814 (1,2) - 这1/4距离跟这个00:15:480 (2,3) - 1/2差不多了，建议overlap.
2. 00:37:147 (3,4) - 这距离会不会太大了，前后都没这样的
3. 00:44:814 (3,1) - 应该是我个人偏好，我觉得这种东西overlap更好玩

Frey wrote:

No, every song is rankable. As long as the owner doesn't claim its copyright, the download link will stay available.

uNable wrote:

Frey wrote:

No, every song is rankable. As long as the owner doesn't claim its copyright, the download link will stay available.

that's what i mean, beatmania maps are claimed as copyrighted as far as i know, maybe im wrong

DahplA wrote:

You have to realise a LOT of beatmania maps are ranked. Also, there's something like a copyright report that companies can file to peppy and then they have the maps/songs deleted or something like that.

Karen wrote:

Another

1. 00:13:814 (1,2) - 这1/4距离跟这个00:15:480 (2,3) - 1/2差不多了，建议overlap. Fixed, 但是我是完全重叠起来了
2. 00:37:147 (3,4) - 这距离会不会太大了，前后都没这样的 Fixed，已经改到较近的位置
3. 00:44:814 (3,1) - 应该是我个人偏好，我觉得这种东西overlap更好玩 这里我觉得还是保持原样比较好读。更何况整张图几乎没有overlap，基本都是完全重叠，单一有一两个感觉有点违和。

顺便把hyper的宽屏支持关了，弄完喊我

谢谢你的Mod！

Priti wrote:

Woops I was away for a few days, Back now!
I'll qualify once the count resets.

Priti wrote:

FREYking FINALLY